Hello! My name is Jack Elliott, I am 14. I am currently about to up a large high tech Role Play server.
I am interested in helping you.
I can supply multiple actors and a server to film on as well as filming if you need a camera man. I can help with anything you need.
I am also told I am a talented writer and would be glad to help write any scenes you may need help with if you do.
I would like to help because I love this story! You are an extremely creative individual and I'm glad to see that being used in Minecraft.
I actually have some ideas to enter that might make the story even more complex... please respond for details. You don't have to use them, but I think you might want to hear them.
Also, the server will be private for a long time while I work on websites, my own videos, and programming so you can have the server to yourself for a long time. Please contact me!
That's all I can really say, it's just iffy. It seems like you're just throwing together random pieces of information, hoping it will make a coherent statement.
That's all I can really say, it's just iffy. It seems like you're just throwing together random pieces of information, hoping it will make a coherent statement.
I'm getting this whole Genesis 1 vibe on it, too.
It would help if you actually gave constructive cricticism on this.
- First guy: No steves because I wanted an original story.
- Second guy: If you read it better, information is coherent. And at least I didn't use the 3 clichés all stories apparently use.
Thank you for giving us this wonderful story. It's very original. However, I have an idea. Make it so that some humans discovered how to manipulate the fabric of reality (java) and made their own creatures, dimensions and matter. That way you can explain mods. P.S. Could you please explain potions and enchanting?
Thank you for giving us this wonderful story. It's very original. However, I have an idea. Make it so that some humans discovered how to manipulate the fabric of reality (java) and made their own creatures, dimensions and matter. That way you can explain mods.
That doesn't seem to make a lot of sense (if anything it would be pigmen not humans)... plus mods aren't part of the game story, they're just hacks.
Wow, this is awesome! I like how you've tied everything together with it and that (most of it) actually makes sense. You didn't really explain why the 'twisted physics' of the End don't affect players that go there. And will you be including the poem thing at the end of the game somehow? Also, I heartily agree with your decision to leave Herobrine out. He just bugs me to no end.
Edit: One other thing. You seem to contradict yourself between the "Pigmen's solution" section and the section that explains villagers:
They were affected by the plague, but their high intellect saved them from most effects, only having physical changes.
those who preferred to become very dumb, since the plague only affected intelligent species.
First you say that their high intellect protected them from the plague, then you say that plague only affects smarter species.
Wow, this is awesome! I like how you've tied everything together with it and that (most of it) actually makes sense. You didn't really explain why the 'twisted physics' of the End don't affect players that go there. And will you be including the poem thing at the end of the game somehow? Also, I heartily agree with your decision to leave Herobrine out. He just bugs me to no end.
Edit: One other thing. You seem to contradict yourself between the "Pigmen's solution" section and the section that explains villagers:
First you say that their high intellect protected them from the plague, then you say that plague only affects smarter species.
Thank you, I didn't notice those. Let's see:
- The physics of the End don't affect players because a long time must be spent there for consequences to appear.
- I'll change it to "the Pigmen invented a device to make the plague only affect them physically, however it was too late to save the humans sice they were already on the Nether".
The Ender Dragon needs to play a bigger role in this, since a ghast is relatively weak, and has nothing to do with a dragon, the Ender Dragon needs its own story. I always imagined it as a malevolent god/demon and the Endermen as its followers. The Ender Dragon egg is its soul when destroyed, after his mortal body has been eliminated, leaving the immortal soul. It would send its followers (Endermen) down to the Overworld to destroy any humans, as he was taunted by their ablity to be creative rather then destructive, but he was cursed to live in the End for eternity by an unnamed benevolent god, due to his destructive and vengeful nature. He may have taken the pigmen opening portals and the Nether being destroyed to create a gateway into his dimension, sending his followers to destroy anyone who apposes him.
If you do use this idea, tweak it as you wish. I just thought a mob as big, dangerous, and important as the Ender Dragon would need a bit of a better explanation rather then a "Mutated Ghast"
I'd like to join the actors and may even be a help with building sets, my friend has a server and may be able to support this vid series but I don't know A) if he can or B ) if he'd want to... MC name is MCNerdism, skype is Spikeyblur11
I am interested in helping you.
I can supply multiple actors and a server to film on as well as filming if you need a camera man. I can help with anything you need.
I am also told I am a talented writer and would be glad to help write any scenes you may need help with if you do.
I would like to help because I love this story! You are an extremely creative individual and I'm glad to see that being used in Minecraft.
I actually have some ideas to enter that might make the story even more complex... please respond for details. You don't have to use them, but I think you might want to hear them.
Also, the server will be private for a long time while I work on websites, my own videos, and programming so you can have the server to yourself for a long time. Please contact me!
That's all I can really say, it's just iffy. It seems like you're just throwing together random pieces of information, hoping it will make a coherent statement.
I'm getting this whole Genesis 1 vibe on it, too.
It would help if you actually gave constructive cricticism on this.
- First guy: No steves because I wanted an original story.
- Second guy: If you read it better, information is coherent. And at least I didn't use the 3 clichés all stories apparently use.
Any suggestion on that? I'll be glad to add it.
That doesn't seem to make a lot of sense (if anything it would be pigmen not humans)... plus mods aren't part of the game story, they're just hacks.
Edit: One other thing. You seem to contradict yourself between the "Pigmen's solution" section and the section that explains villagers:
First you say that their high intellect protected them from the plague, then you say that plague only affects smarter species.
Thank you, I didn't notice those. Let's see:
- The physics of the End don't affect players because a long time must be spent there for consequences to appear.
- I'll change it to "the Pigmen invented a device to make the plague only affect them physically, however it was too late to save the humans sice they were already on the Nether".
These are just game mechanics, not really part of the plot.
Notch had a magic face and banged his face on the keyboard and minecraft was magically created. The End
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Really funny!
u should consider becoming a author! :cool.gif:
If you do use this idea, tweak it as you wish. I just thought a mob as big, dangerous, and important as the Ender Dragon would need a bit of a better explanation rather then a "Mutated Ghast"