therefore after they were betrayed they created something to hunt the creepers down, ocelots. the ocelots stopped directly attacking creepers long after the pigmen left, finding easier prey elsewhere. the creepers still see the ocelots as dangerous predators after being hunted for so long.
I like it. Really. No plot holes. Everything fits. Well, except chickens, but they're just... chickens. Being a person who loves writing and story-telling, I think this could be amazing as a full story. You should check out my Logbook. Minecraft. With a story :D. Anyway, do you mind if I incorporate some of it? (I'll credit you, of course) And I'll probably make an intertwined custom map. I'll put up several signs for you. *grins*Although I agree with that other guy. About the ghasts anyway. You could come up with somethinhg truly epic about why they're always crying, and maybe why zombie pigmen are fireproof.
I like it. Really. No plot holes. Everything fits. Well, except chickens, but they're just... chickens. Being a person who loves writing and story-telling, I think this could be amazing as a full story. You should check out my Logbook. Minecraft. With a story . Anyway, do you mind if I incorporate some of it? (I'll credit you, of course) And I'll probably make an intertwined custom map. I'll put up several signs for you. *grins*
Sorry, I'm going to use my ideas for future work that I'm going to sell, I ask you not to use any of them. But I really appreciate that you like my story enough to want to use it
Great story, I love it! My suggestion is to add something about the Enchantemnt Tables and Brewing stands, maybe the pigmen made those too, then told the humans about it. For the brewing stand it's like they got a bunch of stuff from killing all the blazes in the nether invasion, then found a use for it.
Maybe crafting could have been invented by the humans too, you might want to say that.
Also, maybe explain a sort of magical story behind Redstone. Maybe the Creepers used it as an attempted powering device that they made, then during the Nether invasion the rocks absorbed it from the creepers, just an idea.
I'm sorry I didn't yet update the ocelots thing, guys. Been very busy in real life. But I promise you it'll come.
Do we even need to mention them? They're just ocelots that live in the jungle, like wolves or sheep or cows, they don't need a backstory I think. Except for the Creeper part. Maybe rthe ocelots killed one of the great leaders of the creepers, and the creepers are now afraid of them.
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Great story, I love it! My suggestion is to add something about the Enchantemnt Tables and Brewing stands, maybe the pigmen made those too, then told the humans about it. For the brewing stand it's like they got a bunch of stuff from killing all the blazes in the nether invasion, then found a use for it.
Maybe crafting could have been invented by the humans too, you might want to say that.
Also, maybe explain a sort of magical story behind Redstone. Maybe the Creepers used it as an attempted powering device that they made, then during the Nether invasion the rocks absorbed it from the creepers, just an idea.
Please add more, I love it!
Do we even need to mention them? They're just ocelots that live in the jungle, like wolves or sheep or cows, they don't need a backstory I think. Except for the Creeper part. Maybe rthe ocelots killed one of the great leaders of the creepers, and the creepers are now afraid of them.
Thanks dude. I've already come up with something for brewing and enchantment, just didn't edit it in yet, haha.
That used to be my story... I ****ing love Half Life.
Well thanks. In my language it's different :smile.gif:
The only thing they do differently now is to enter their houses at night. Still dumb.
therefore after they were betrayed they created something to hunt the creepers down, ocelots. the ocelots stopped directly attacking creepers long after the pigmen left, finding easier prey elsewhere. the creepers still see the ocelots as dangerous predators after being hunted for so long.
Sorry, I'm going to use my ideas for future work that I'm going to sell, I ask you not to use any of them. But I really appreciate that you like my story enough to want to use it
Hmmm. maybe its a time to go make a new thread.
Maybe crafting could have been invented by the humans too, you might want to say that.
Also, maybe explain a sort of magical story behind Redstone. Maybe the Creepers used it as an attempted powering device that they made, then during the Nether invasion the rocks absorbed it from the creepers, just an idea.
Please add more, I love it!
Do we even need to mention them? They're just ocelots that live in the jungle, like wolves or sheep or cows, they don't need a backstory I think. Except for the Creeper part. Maybe rthe ocelots killed one of the great leaders of the creepers, and the creepers are now afraid of them.
HARDCORE BOSSES.
Thanks dude. I've already come up with something for brewing and enchantment, just didn't edit it in yet, haha.
Win.