Interesting. Personally, I prefer this story by floppy_gunk that he called "History of the Ancients":
The mine shafts and strongholds were made by a very ancient civilisation. The portals had to be in just the right place for them to work, so they would sometimes have to build over their mineshafts. These people later discovered the nether, and some decided to live there. However, after these men stayed in this world, the cruelty spilled into their hearts, and they became corrupted and pig-like. They allowed evil to spill into the overworld, and take the form of a terrible dragon. It killed most of the people, burned down their homes, destroyed their civilisation. It shook the world, forming giant crevasses. Only a few on the suface survived, but some men managed to escape through the portal that led to the End of reality. They stored their treasures in dungeons guarded by monsters, in the hope that one day they may return.
Those who survived on the surface rebuilt villages, but most of their technology was gone, their civilisation extinguished in flames. The structures that they once made were slowly buried under the sands of time, passed from the memory of those few survivors.
But the dragon followed those who went through to the end, and stole the return portal. Under it's rule, it made sure that no-one could return. The men spend eons on a piece of rock, suspended in an endless, gloomy void, under the rule of the mighty dragon. The fire in their hearts was extinguished, and the light in their souls died out. They became mere shadows, mournfully walking on the dead surface of an empty world, remembering all that had been lost.
Sometimes these Endermen manage to appear in the overworld. They pick up blocks as an attempt to regain some part of themself, but their humanity has been lost forever. When you look at them, they kill you with a passionate fury, because in you they see all that they once stood for.
Yours is pretty good too, but it doesn't take the form of a story.
Interesting. Personally, I prefer this story by floppy_gunk that he called "History of the Ancients":
The mine shafts and strongholds were made by a very ancient civilisation. The portals had to be in just the right place for them to work, so they would sometimes have to build over their mineshafts. These people later discovered the nether, and some decided to live there. However, after these men stayed in this world, the cruelty spilled into their hearts, and they became corrupted and pig-like. They allowed evil to spill into the overworld, and take the form of a terrible dragon. It killed most of the people, burned down their homes, destroyed their civilisation. It shook the world, forming giant crevasses. Only a few on the suface survived, but some men managed to escape through the portal that led to the End of reality. They stored their treasures in dungeons guarded by monsters, in the hope that one day they may return.
Those who survived on the surface rebuilt villages, but most of their technology was gone, their civilisation extinguished in flames. The structures that they once made were slowly buried under the sands of time, passed from the memory of those few survivors.
But the dragon followed those who went through to the end, and stole the return portal. Under it's rule, it made sure that no-one could return. The men spend eons on a piece of rock, suspended in an endless, gloomy void, under the rule of the mighty dragon. The fire in their hearts was extinguished, and the light in their souls died out. They became mere shadows, mournfully walking on the dead surface of an empty world, remembering all that had been lost.
Sometimes these Endermen manage to appear in the overworld. They pick up blocks as an attempt to regain some part of themself, but their humanity has been lost forever. When you look at them, they kill you with a passionate fury, because in you they see all that they once stood for.
Yours is pretty good too, but it doesn't take the form of a story.
No offense, but this seems really unoriginal, every other story is just like it.
Now that 1.1's come out, are you going to add the spawner eggs in? Perhaps the creepers could have made them and hidden them underground, or they could be a pigman experiment that was never completed.
Now that 1.1's come out, are you going to add the spawner eggs in? Perhaps the creepers could have made them and hidden them underground, or they could be a pigman experiment that was never completed.
They're creative mode only, so they technically don't exist on lore.
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I had to get rid of the super crazy mega fun happy creeper boom time :sad.gif:
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Another spoiler :biggrin.gif:
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I could actually have as much lines as i want here, spoilers don't count on the two line limit :biggrin.gif:
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Think i'm awesome? don't click the green plus cuz it's not awesome to ask people to click it.
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Did you konw taht it deosn't mtaetr waht odrer lteters are in a wrod? the mnid jsut raeds the wrod as a wohle.
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iumop-ap!sdn
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<--Why they call me rh27un
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My avatar isn't a zombie, it is a half-zombie. altough seemingly brainless, i do have a brain, even though i don't use it much.
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Don't hate the game, hate the trolls.
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Empty spolier. Note to self: remove this spoiler
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I had to get rid of the super crazy mega fun happy creeper boom time :sad.gif:
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Another spoiler :biggrin.gif:
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I could actually have as much lines as i want here, spoilers don't count on the two line limit :biggrin.gif:
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Think i'm awesome? don't click the green plus cuz it's not awesome to ask people to click it.
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Did you konw taht it deosn't mtaetr waht odrer lteters are in a wrod? the mnid jsut raeds the wrod as a wohle.
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iumop-ap!sdn
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<--Why they call me rh27un
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My avatar isn't a zombie, it is a half-zombie. altough seemingly brainless, i do have a brain, even though i don't use it much.
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Don't hate the game, hate the trolls.
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Empty spolier. Note to self: remove this spoiler
What about the ending of minecraft where you get drugged and think that the universe is speaking to you?
lolololololol
That ending was not part of Minecraft.
It was some crap about how real life is a dream and the player is "love and the universe". Completely unrelated to the game, not even mentioning anything about Minecraft. (read)
It was some crap about how real life is a dream and the player is "love and the universe". Completely unrelated to the game, not even mentioning anything about Minecraft. (read)
Shall make another one soon.
The mine shafts and strongholds were made by a very ancient civilisation. The portals had to be in just the right place for them to work, so they would sometimes have to build over their mineshafts. These people later discovered the nether, and some decided to live there. However, after these men stayed in this world, the cruelty spilled into their hearts, and they became corrupted and pig-like. They allowed evil to spill into the overworld, and take the form of a terrible dragon. It killed most of the people, burned down their homes, destroyed their civilisation. It shook the world, forming giant crevasses. Only a few on the suface survived, but some men managed to escape through the portal that led to the End of reality. They stored their treasures in dungeons guarded by monsters, in the hope that one day they may return.
Those who survived on the surface rebuilt villages, but most of their technology was gone, their civilisation extinguished in flames. The structures that they once made were slowly buried under the sands of time, passed from the memory of those few survivors.
But the dragon followed those who went through to the end, and stole the return portal. Under it's rule, it made sure that no-one could return. The men spend eons on a piece of rock, suspended in an endless, gloomy void, under the rule of the mighty dragon. The fire in their hearts was extinguished, and the light in their souls died out. They became mere shadows, mournfully walking on the dead surface of an empty world, remembering all that had been lost.
Sometimes these Endermen manage to appear in the overworld. They pick up blocks as an attempt to regain some part of themself, but their humanity has been lost forever. When you look at them, they kill you with a passionate fury, because in you they see all that they once stood for.
Yours is pretty good too, but it doesn't take the form of a story.
No offense, but this seems really unoriginal, every other story is just like it.
They're creative mode only, so they technically don't exist on lore.
I had to get rid of the super crazy mega fun happy creeper boom time :sad.gif:
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Another spoiler :biggrin.gif:
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I could actually have as much lines as i want here, spoilers don't count on the two line limit :biggrin.gif:
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Think i'm awesome? don't click the green plus cuz it's not awesome to ask people to click it.
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Did you konw taht it deosn't mtaetr waht odrer lteters are in a wrod? the mnid jsut raeds the wrod as a wohle.
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iumop-ap!sdn
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<--Why they call me rh27un
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My avatar isn't a zombie, it is a half-zombie. altough seemingly brainless, i do have a brain, even though i don't use it much.
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Don't hate the game, hate the trolls.
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Empty spolier. Note to self: remove this spoiler
Is this supposed to mean anything?
or is it a placeholder?
Nah, I was trying to post in that "Herobrine and Steve" thread.
Sorry, some of my ideas are copyrighted by me and I will use them in the future. Doing that wouldn't be a good idea :sad.gif:
But thanks a lot for liking it :smile.gif:
non-existent, got it?
lolololololol
That ending was not part of Minecraft.
It was some crap about how real life is a dream and the player is "love and the universe". Completely unrelated to the game, not even mentioning anything about Minecraft. (read)
it was the removal of the forth wall
Clever.
Not a one word post
you know that is the problem when you cannot see or hear the one responding, sarcasm and complements sound so similar.
because i love having to ask