I know you are all pretty tired of hearing (or reading) this by now, but...you guys have no idea how sorry I am...It's just one thing after another. Homework, the more homework, then a weekend free but I'm gone, then some free time but I get writer's block, then more homework, then I get sick...But I promise, nay I VOW, that before October 4th the new chapter(s) will be up! And they will be...refreshing. ..that's a promise.
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So there's this thingy I wrote, and it even has a sequel in progress! But instead of writing like a good little boy I just play Minecraft, or whatever games on my Steam library I haven't finished yet. Oh, and Borderlands 2 is the greatest thing to grace the human race (Mechromancer ftw).
Chapter 30 is finally up! REALLY sorry for the long wait...I kinda feel like Notch, taking so long to release an update.
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So there's this thingy I wrote, and it even has a sequel in progress! But instead of writing like a good little boy I just play Minecraft, or whatever games on my Steam library I haven't finished yet. Oh, and Borderlands 2 is the greatest thing to grace the human race (Mechromancer ftw).
I'm gonna level with you guys. I'm busy. But I have SOME free time to write. I just have writer's block. I've lost the intense urge to write that I had when I started, so I have not been "inspired" as easily lately. It'll take a while for new chapters from here on out. When I get a break from school, like a long weekend or a week, I will get a lot out, and I will update you guys on these times.
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So there's this thingy I wrote, and it even has a sequel in progress! But instead of writing like a good little boy I just play Minecraft, or whatever games on my Steam library I haven't finished yet. Oh, and Borderlands 2 is the greatest thing to grace the human race (Mechromancer ftw).
Sir i just read all of your story and may i say that, if i had children you would be my favorite. That was a fantastic story do keep up the good work. My only critisim is that well i honestly have none.
So I decided to read my book over again for some inspiration on the roots of my writing, and realized. This book is not good. I know many people like it, but when I read back the first few chapters I am disgusted with myself, honestly. I would like to start over with a little more organization, planning, and unfortunately a new plot. I started a poll, because I would never in my life make any decisions about this novel without you guys' addition. So should I make a new book and cancel this, or just keep going with what I have here? Answer in the poll, I'm gonna leave it for a while since I know people are busy nowadays with school and all.
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So there's this thingy I wrote, and it even has a sequel in progress! But instead of writing like a good little boy I just play Minecraft, or whatever games on my Steam library I haven't finished yet. Oh, and Borderlands 2 is the greatest thing to grace the human race (Mechromancer ftw).
Yeah, I've been thinking that. But I have a lot to wrap up, and I think waiting for a GOOD rest of this story to surface would be better than having a crappy book then a slight better one. I guess I'll just wait for school to calm the f*ck down. I'll most likely be entirely done by Christmas. New chapters should be around early or mid-November.
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So there's this thingy I wrote, and it even has a sequel in progress! But instead of writing like a good little boy I just play Minecraft, or whatever games on my Steam library I haven't finished yet. Oh, and Borderlands 2 is the greatest thing to grace the human race (Mechromancer ftw).
GOOD NEWS: The mighty god of Inspiration has stricken thine mighty blow, and the next few (or lot of) chapters' ideas are in a Word document. I am still busy, but once I get some time (this weekend, maybe) I can transfer them to a physical form, crush them through a meat grinder, and spice them up for maximum deliciousness.
In other words, I'm close to writing the next few chapters.
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So there's this thingy I wrote, and it even has a sequel in progress! But instead of writing like a good little boy I just play Minecraft, or whatever games on my Steam library I haven't finished yet. Oh, and Borderlands 2 is the greatest thing to grace the human race (Mechromancer ftw).
So there's this thingy I wrote, and it even has a sequel in progress! But instead of writing like a good little boy I just play Minecraft, or whatever games on my Steam library I haven't finished yet. Oh, and Borderlands 2 is the greatest thing to grace the human race (Mechromancer ftw).
Yeah, I've been thinking that. But I have a lot to wrap up, and I think waiting for a GOOD rest of this story to surface would be better than having a crappy book then a slight better one. I guess I'll just wait for school to calm the f*ck down. I'll most likely be entirely done by Christmas. New chapters should be around early or mid-November.
It's been three weeks... where are the new chapters? I'm getting bored...
EDIT: Meant to quote this:
GOOD NEWS: The mighty god of Inspiration has stricken thine mighty blow, and the next few (or lot of) chapters' ideas are in a Word document. I am still busy, but once I get some time (this weekend, maybe) I can transfer them to a physical form, crush them through a meat grinder, and spice them up for maximum deliciousness.
In other words, I'm close to writing the next few chapters.
I really hope you'll un-lazify yourself soon. This book is great! And I would not want you to stop writing this, we've gone too far to stop! Keep it up.
So...yeah.....sorry about the wait. I've been...unable to post for a while. There was an incident.....I...I got my Xbox back from Microsoft. So I was...incapacitated for a while. In a coma. of laziness. yep.
So yeah. I've been pretty preoccupied with school, then writer's block, then my Xbox. And now I'm waiting for a MASSIVE download, so I came to check up on you guys, and...wow. I was really starting to give up on this novel, what with me unable to come up with anything and you guys' silence, telling me that you were pretty angry at me...but then I check again today and see you guys still eager to read more, and it inspired me to keep on going.
And it couldn't have come a moment too soon, because I finally got a week off of school for Eid (Arab holiday). So look out, because James and Sarah are coming back! And I've been recording some plot ideas. It's getting crazy :wink.gif:
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So there's this thingy I wrote, and it even has a sequel in progress! But instead of writing like a good little boy I just play Minecraft, or whatever games on my Steam library I haven't finished yet. Oh, and Borderlands 2 is the greatest thing to grace the human race (Mechromancer ftw).
Completely off topic, I found a small error with your signature:
"When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Make life take the lemons back! Get mad! I don't want your damn lemons! What am I supposed to do with these? Demand to see life's manager! Make life rue the day it thought it could give Cave Johnson lemons! Do you know who I am? I'm the man who's gonna burn your house down! With the lemons! I'm gonna get my engineers to invent a combustible lemon that burns your house down!" -Cave Johnson
'Get mad!' is supposed to be before 'Make life take the lemons back!', I'm pretty sure. So, it would be like this:
"When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Get mad! Make life take the lemons back! I don't want your damn lemons! What am I supposed to do with these? Demand to see life's manager! Make life rue the day it thought it could give Cave Johnson lemons! Do you know who I am? I'm the man who's gonna burn your house down! With the lemons! I'm gonna get my engineers to invent a combustible lemon that burns your house down!" -Cave Johnson
Nice reading this story makes me want to change it up a bit, and start a new minecraft story with dialogue and other people included. Feels more interesting when there are more than one main character.
Nice reading this story makes me want to change it up a bit, and start a new minecraft story with dialogue and other people included. Feels more interesting when there are more than one main character.
Yeah, that's kind of a general rule of writing. You need more than one personalities to spice up a book. Unless it's one really interesting person...
And Scatmaster, I'm pretty sure it's after, but I'll beat the game again soon to clarify :tongue.gif:
Although you are clearly a Portal and Kingdom Hearts fan, which makes you awesome :biggrin.gif:
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So there's this thingy I wrote, and it even has a sequel in progress! But instead of writing like a good little boy I just play Minecraft, or whatever games on my Steam library I haven't finished yet. Oh, and Borderlands 2 is the greatest thing to grace the human race (Mechromancer ftw).
In other words, I'm close to writing the next few chapters.
http://strt.cc/?ref=ZGVhdGhseWFuZ2VsNDdAZ21haWwuY29t
It's been three weeks... where are the new chapters? I'm getting bored...
EDIT: Meant to quote this:
Here's a story I'm writing. So yeah.
Silent Raven
So...yeah.....sorry about the wait. I've been...unable to post for a while. There was an incident.....I...I got my Xbox back from Microsoft. So I was...incapacitated for a while. In a coma. of laziness. yep.
So yeah. I've been pretty preoccupied with school, then writer's block, then my Xbox. And now I'm waiting for a MASSIVE download, so I came to check up on you guys, and...wow. I was really starting to give up on this novel, what with me unable to come up with anything and you guys' silence, telling me that you were pretty angry at me...but then I check again today and see you guys still eager to read more, and it inspired me to keep on going.
And it couldn't have come a moment too soon, because I finally got a week off of school for Eid (Arab holiday). So look out, because James and Sarah are coming back! And I've been recording some plot ideas. It's getting crazy :wink.gif:
'Get mad!' is supposed to be before 'Make life take the lemons back!', I'm pretty sure. So, it would be like this:
Here's a story I'm writing. So yeah.
Silent Raven
Yeah, that's kind of a general rule of writing. You need more than one personalities to spice up a book. Unless it's one really interesting person...
And Scatmaster, I'm pretty sure it's after, but I'll beat the game again soon to clarify :tongue.gif:
Although you are clearly a Portal and Kingdom Hearts fan, which makes you awesome :biggrin.gif:
EDIT: I just looked at the quote and you're right, 'Get mad!' is after.
Here's a story I'm writing. So yeah.
Silent Raven