Day 1: Dear Journal Face this morning I woke up in a strange land. I had heard of it,they called it minecraft out of frustration I punched a tree and some of it broke! My strength seemed to have been enhanced. I punched down more trees and came across a green thing near a dark area. I didn't think it was safe so I hit it. It began hissing! Another one appeared and creeped up on me it exploded killing the other one but launching me away! I decided to build a shelter I tried to find sheep for wool to construct a bed. It became night and 2 skelatal archer appeared! I had never seen any before. I quickly got the wool made a bed and went to sleep. Until morning!
Day 1: Dear Journal Face this morning I woke up in a strange land. I had heard of it,they called it minecraft out of frustration I punched a tree and some of it broke! My strength seemed to have been enhanced. I punched down more trees and came across a green thing near a dark area. I didn't think it was safe so I hit it. It began hissing! Another one appeared and creeped up on me it exploded killing the other one but launching me away! I decided to build a shelter I tried to find sheep for wool to construct a bed. It became night and 2 skelatal archer appeared! I had never seen any before. I quickly got the wool made a bed and went to sleep. Until morning!
Oh, it's fine, you can just copy the other story. It's fine, they only have the same title and premise.
This isn't original at all and you're not very good at typing at all. Detail is what matters.
I have no idea what you're talking about. I had never heard of a different 100 Days of Minecraft before. I didn't copy the other story concidering I've never heard of it, this is what actually happened while I attempt to sound like I don't really know minecraft. Please figure out some things before you just say "COPY TROLOLOLO" I don't know how you decide "I'm not good at typing". It's supposed to be the journal of a minecraft survivor, when he's writing I doubt he'll go into every detail about his day.
You won't get any praise for no details. Some people want to go into detail. If I was a survivor I would. If you want to argue against facts you can, I'm sure Shadow, who is browsing this page right now, is agreeing.
I figured everything out, it's just I've seen almost 3 different 100 days of Minecraft things.
You won't get any praise for no details. Some people want to go into detail. If I was a survivor I would. If you want to argue against facts you can, I'm sure Shadow, who is browsing this page right now, is agreeing.
I figured everything out, it's just I've seen almost 3 different 100 days of Minecraft things.
WELL. I didn't know there were 3 others. I'm not sure who this Shadow guy is. The fact your would go into detail when you're a survivor suit yourself. The only thing you just stated is 1 fact I didn't know 1 opinion and 1 guess. I don't expect any praise OK? If you want to get detail look for something else. Some people don't give a crap.
Okay. I'm just saying, if you want to not be disrespected it'd be best to follow my criticism. Not hostility. Ideas.
But whatever. I don't care. Just don't spam the Fan Art page with this.
Okay. I'm just saying, if you want to not be disrespected it'd be best to follow my criticism. Not hostility. Ideas.
But whatever. I don't care. Just don't spam the Fan Art page with this.
I'll try to follow the criticism just be less hostile. If you call something a copy of somebody elses work without knowing that somebody else allready made it, they'll think that you're being hostile.
Well, I don't want to agree with Absolete, but he does have a point. Even though you wouldn't go into detail about your first day in a journal, there is really no detail to this. The most important thing about a story, at first, is the hooker. Honestly, there is none. You punched a tree, saw a creeper, made a house, and went to bed in a few sentences. That really could had been pulled out to a few paragraphs, giving in-depth things that happened, such as emotion, better surroundings, effects, opinions to the current world. Anyways, keep up the writing and good luck!
I have no idea what you're talking about. I had never heard of a different 100 Days of Minecraft before. I didn't copy the other story concidering I've never heard of it, this is what actually happened while I attempt to sound like I don't really know minecraft. Please figure out some things before you just say "COPY TROLOLOLO" I don't know how you decide "I'm not good at typing". It's supposed to be the journal of a minecraft survivor, when he's writing I doubt he'll go into every detail about his day.
It isn't 100 days of minecraft, it is 100 days to mine. it is very similar to this too. and very popular.
Cool Story Bro :biggrin.gif:
This isn't original at all and you're not very good at typing at all. Detail is what matters.
I have no idea what you're talking about. I had never heard of a different 100 Days of Minecraft before. I didn't copy the other story concidering I've never heard of it, this is what actually happened while I attempt to sound like I don't really know minecraft. Please figure out some things before you just say "COPY TROLOLOLO" I don't know how you decide "I'm not good at typing". It's supposed to be the journal of a minecraft survivor, when he's writing I doubt he'll go into every detail about his day.
I figured everything out, it's just I've seen almost 3 different 100 days of Minecraft things.
WELL. I didn't know there were 3 others. I'm not sure who this Shadow guy is. The fact your would go into detail when you're a survivor suit yourself. The only thing you just stated is 1 fact I didn't know 1 opinion and 1 guess. I don't expect any praise OK? If you want to get detail look for something else. Some people don't give a crap.
But whatever. I don't care. Just don't spam the Fan Art page with this.
I'll try to follow the criticism just be less hostile. If you call something a copy of somebody elses work without knowing that somebody else allready made it, they'll think that you're being hostile.
It isn't 100 days of minecraft, it is 100 days to mine. it is very similar to this too. and very popular.
Drivable mine carts support post <-- Here!
Winning.
EDIT: Here you go, for proof.
Original.
Branchoff, an alternative writing by a different person.
A movie? I don't know, it's a "major motion picture".