I mean that I suck at updating. It's like, I try to write sometimes and I really don't feel like it so I stop and the next thing I know it is a few months later. It is a bit hard for me to just start writing sometimes, you know? I am also only twelve years old, so yeah... my childishness is still there I guess, along with all the things that go with it. And school... although it hasn't given me MUCH trouble lately. But yeah, did a lot of reworking of the next chapter. It is much less action-y that the one before it, and that might be why it felt like a physical force was stopping me from writing earlier. Lack of willpower, I have it, I guess. Although what constitutes of willpower is a bit iffy...
Buddy I know just how you feel. I'm in that same sort of position with a piece I'm working on right now. So, take a little time to flesh out your ideas. Creativity isn't exactly the same as a Spark of Magic. Sometimes it takes time to grow. But the desire will come. I say that from experience.
And I must say, you write quite well for a twelve year old.
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This is actually pretty nice, im studying how you write these stories as i am currently making one myself check it out its called Crisis on Infinite Worlds and give feedback. Anyways back to you, i really enjoy its descriptive paragraphs but i feel like some of the plot is being dragged too long and it kinda gets boring, so shorten some plots up. Oh and sometimes you describe too much that i get lost when reading which causes me to read it over twice-_- overall it is a good read and i hope you take these tips into consideration and i hope you will give us another great chapter
NEED MOORE CHAPTERS!!!!!! It's one h**l of a Story. Your grammar is awesome and your story has a feel and flow that only a few storyes and for that sake novel's. can't wait for your next update. when does it come!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?.
Mutt keep up the soul and character of the main character he's awesome and the continue the good work, lots for diamonds..... no,diamond-blocks for you
NEED MOORE CHAPTERS..... [choking-sounds]..... NEED MOORE CHAPT....... [sound of someone fainting due to excitement for the next chapters]
Don't give up! The story itself is great, even if i know a series by Trudi Canavan that has a very similar plot... ;P Even so, it's good enough that I would most certainly buy it if it were for sale, and finished! Yeah, it's that good. I would give it 11/10 points. Good job!
One tip for the "writer's block": Even if you don't want to write, take a pen(cil) and paper, and just write whatever comes to your mind, and don't stop writing, even if the text is a bit off of the original plot you had. That way you get new ideas and you can still edit parts of it that you don't like (once you're done writing, not before), and you don't have to worry about a blackout, either. Of course, if you get completely off topic, then start over. This process does take some time, but it certainly is worth it! But seriously, don't do this on a computer, write it by hand. And when it gets too painful to write any more (you'll understand what I mean if you do this), go do something else for a while, like play Minecraft, or do something else that is FUN, not homework. Then go back to writing. Once your relatively satisfied with the content, go ahead and get rid of parts that you don't want, and just do general editing. Don't change anything before you're done writing! Then type the end result into the computer, and it doesn't matter if you have a blackout or whatever, you have it all on paper. I used to write stuff like this, and that helped me alot. Always write the story out by hand first, that way you can't lose it. And you won't get distracted by facebook messages and whatnot.
Buddy I know just how you feel. I'm in that same sort of position with a piece I'm working on right now. So, take a little time to flesh out your ideas. Creativity isn't exactly the same as a Spark of Magic. Sometimes it takes time to grow. But the desire will come. I say that from experience.
And I must say, you write quite well for a twelve year old.
I'm thirteen and I probably can't write as good as you can :tongue.gif:
I enjoyed this story A LOT :biggrin.gif: Hope that you can keep writing, after the normal parts always come the better partss :smile.gif:
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Mutt keep up the soul and character of the main character he's awesome and the continue the good work, lots for diamonds..... no,diamond-blocks for you
NEED MOORE CHAPTERS..... [choking-sounds]..... NEED MOORE CHAPT....... [sound of someone fainting due to excitement for the next chapters]
One tip for the "writer's block": Even if you don't want to write, take a pen(cil) and paper, and just write whatever comes to your mind, and don't stop writing, even if the text is a bit off of the original plot you had. That way you get new ideas and you can still edit parts of it that you don't like (once you're done writing, not before), and you don't have to worry about a blackout, either. Of course, if you get completely off topic, then start over. This process does take some time, but it certainly is worth it! But seriously, don't do this on a computer, write it by hand. And when it gets too painful to write any more (you'll understand what I mean if you do this), go do something else for a while, like play Minecraft, or do something else that is FUN, not homework. Then go back to writing. Once your relatively satisfied with the content, go ahead and get rid of parts that you don't want, and just do general editing. Don't change anything before you're done writing! Then type the end result into the computer, and it doesn't matter if you have a blackout or whatever, you have it all on paper. I used to write stuff like this, and that helped me alot. Always write the story out by hand first, that way you can't lose it. And you won't get distracted by facebook messages and whatnot.
I hope this helps!