Ahh, the connection with Minecraft wasnt that good, Beside the Creepers part, And the Diamond Sword, That was some what Akward that you had a Diamond Sword, Just laying around, I dont even think the Judges would let you bring a sword in court, Besides that, It was nice, Teh Beginning and Ending are proabably the best, You shoudl really comsider starting some more of your storys like you did with the beginning in this one, (Srry for the bad Spelling, Its jsut happening right now) The ending was quite fancy, (If I could say so myself) Anyways, Keep up the Good Work, Jesonomi. :smile.gif: :wink.gif:
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I wasn't always black... There was this freckle, and it got bigger, and bigger
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Ahh, the connection with Minecraft wasnt that good, Beside the Creepers part, And the Diamond Sword, That was some what Akward that you had a Diamond Sword, Just laying around, I dont even think the Judges would let you bring a sword in court, Besides that, It was nice, Teh Beginning and Ending are proabably the best, You shoudl really comsider starting some more of your storys like you did with the beginning in this one, (Srry for the bad Spelling, Its jsut happening right now) The ending was quite fancy, (If I could say so myself) Anyways, Keep up the Good Work, Jesonomi. :smile.gif: :wink.gif:
Yeah, my stories have started to stray a bit from Minecraft, and I should try and connect back to my roots.
Or something. XD
Uh, yeah, I'm afraid I'm not too good with piecing together scenes that make sense. Anyway, thanks. :biggrin.gif:
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*Sigh* Does every fanfic have to have feature the Nether in it?
Oh wait, yes it does!
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Retired StaffYeah, my stories have started to stray a bit from Minecraft, and I should try and connect back to my roots.
Or something. XD
Uh, yeah, I'm afraid I'm not too good with piecing together scenes that make sense. Anyway, thanks. :biggrin.gif: