Bunny and I met at this mountain, where I am writing a journal. Since then, we have been building a house. So far, all we really need is a decent living room, and a fire place. Here’s a little secret. I’m so deeply in love with Bunny, but she doesn’t know that. But, the thing is, I don’t know if I should tell her!
Real quick, I’ll tell you the design of the house. Bunny and I have separate rooms, we have a kitchen and dining room, and we also have comfy beds!
Well, I’ll be right back- I have to strengthen Bunny real fast. Oh, If you’re wondering why... She can’t pick up a pick-axe. She can almost do it! Just a couple more days…
Okay, her training is over so I’m going to finish today’s entry. During the training, I found out that she’s hiding something from me. I also told her that I have something that I’m hiding also, and that we should continue hiding our secrets. She nodded in agreement.
I make Bunny do all the girly chores since she isn’t very strong. She complains.
“Come on, Alex!” Oh, ‘Alex’ is my nick name, my real name is Alexander. “I want to do grown up chores!” She says, with a bit of anger.
“What do you mean? Kids can’t do theses chores!” I said kind of laughing inside.
“Well, whatever! Can I do harder more fun chores?” She says, and inside I question why.
“Fine, suit yourself. We will switch every day.” I tell her. She smiles at me. A smile so warm, anyone could fall in love.
Day 2
Oh my gosh! I’m still laughing because Bunny tells me that she wants to keep her old chores.
“Can I have my old chores?” She asks, as if I were the one that asked.
“It was your choice, Bunny, get to work.” I said, watching her stomp off to do her chores.
Later that day, I see Bunny attempting to kill a pig. I hand her a bow. She’s good with bows- so I’m not sure why she can’t pick up a diamond pick-axe. She shoots the pig with perfect aim, and I cook it later in our furnace. We both watch it patiently. We haven’t eaten for days!
After eating, Bunny and I started making a mining shaft. After a while of mining, Bunny and I fall into a cave and Bunny lands on me. I realize that she has a purple bruise on her head, and that she has a bleeding leg. So I start mining in stair form so we can get out of the shaft, but my tools break.
“Snap, everything is broken!” I look at her, and she looks awfully tired. So I sit next to her. After a while, she tells me that she has tools. Yeah, thanks for telling me in advance, Bunny. Damn, you’re dumb but adorable. But suddenly, we see a skeleton, and it tries to hurt Bunny. So, I shoot it dead.
After a while of mining, Bunny’s tools break. Nice, now we’re stuck a little while longer. Since we reached the surface, I climb on the ledge and reach for Bunny’s hand. But she falls.
“Damn it!” I said. “Reach farther.” So she listens to me. When our hands touch, I feel a little strange. And I think Bunny felt the same way because her cheeks were pink.
When Bunny got up, she thanked me by gently placing a kiss on my cheek. I look at the ground with hot cheeks, and an embarrassed smile. I straighten my hair.
When we got home, Bunny and I made two furnaces and placed raw pork in each one. When it’s done, we eat it happily. We also make a jukebox, since we found records awkwardly lying on the ground.
I created a computer, which was much easier than I thought it would be. While I was on the computer, images of Bunny popped in to my head. Oh, she was wonderful. And I don’t only admire her looks. She’s so sweet. She’s so... everything to me.
So, I go in her room and sit on her bed.
“’Sup?” I ask her.
“Why are you in here? I’m trying to sleep…” She says, yawning.
“Good night, Bunny…” I say, and pat her head, then playing with her hair.
“Oh, I see Alex… Good… Night…” She says, each pause filled with a cute yawn. My face wears a sleepy smile.
Day 3
In the morning, instead of eating like usual, we made more tools, because all of ours were broken. After doing the chores, and making tools, Bunny and I place flowers around the house.
Later, we go back to the cave and patch it up. Suddenly, Bunny says she’s feeling light headed. I walk behind her and she falls back, into my arms. Her eyes are closed. I sit down and hold her like a baby, and then I place my hand on her forehead. Her forehead was burning. She had a fever. I stroke her hair a little.
Eventually, she wakes up slowly, and says my name.
“Alexander…” She says, with sleepy eyes.
“Yes?” I ask her.
“I…I…” After saying that, she faints again.
I continue holding her in the shaft for a while. And mess with her hair a bit. But it keeps its good-looking style.
After a while, I carry her up the shaft stairs. She’s really light and petite, so it was easy to carry her up the stairs. Once we got into the house, I place her in bed and tuck her in.
So, I give her a sleepy hug and go off to my own bed. I have a feeling that Bunny wanted to say something important. I hoped it was a love confession. I could have died and gone to heaven!
With sleepy eyes, I thought I saw her peeking into my room, with a tired, shy smile. That’s the smile I fell in love with. I pretend to sleep. She walks up to me in bed, and gives me a sweet hug.
When she leaves, she leaves quietly, and very adorably. I hear her back slide down the door.
Day 4
This morning, it was a little hard to open the door. It was Bunny. Once I opened the door, and her sleepy eyes open. I smile and bend over to gently kiss her forehead. We are sitting together in the hallway. I’m not sure if that’s romantic or not, considering I probably know nothing about love and romance.
After a while of sitting there, she falls into my arms while sitting with me. And we start another wonderful, but typical day.
END
Special Thanks to Jesonomi and hilarious ChibiMariChan!
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LOLZ. YOU REALLY PUT THE COMPUTER THERE?! ROFLCOPTERZ.
Well anyway, it was short, lacked a bit detail, but it had very good grammar and organization, compared to some stories around here. >_> -Mumbles about people posting giant, unpunctuated walls of text.-
Really, for a start, it's pretty good. Nice job!
Thanks Guys!
@Jesonomi: LOL yeah I really like computers! uh what do you mean by details? TT^TT
@ ChibiMariChan: You are a stalker ._.
@ everyone else: LOL Chibi; My story is a bit slower through their love than the love between Matt and Pepper
I think I will make a sequel >V<
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Very cheesy but the cliché love story with the Minecraft twist. Keep it up, I wanna read the sequel! :smile.gif:
Overall... I give it a 41.8/50
Scores:
1) Creativity
7.3/10
2) Cuteness
8.4/10
3) Plot
7.6/10
4) Grammer
9.7/10
5) Interest
8.8/10
Day 4
This morning, it was a little hard to open the door. It was Bunny. Once I opened the door, and her sleepy eyes open. I smile and bend over to gently kiss her forehead. We are sitting together in the hallway. I’m not sure if that’s romantic or not, considering I probably noknow nothing about love and romance.
After a while of sitting there, she falls into my arms while sitting with me. And we start another wonderful, but typical day.
Oh LOL my mistake. I'm really used to typing no all the time, thanks
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ah, sankya!
i mean thank you lol mi accent is bothering me
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Bunny and I met at this mountain, where I am writing a journal. Since then, we have been building a house. So far, all we really need is a decent living room, and a fire place. Here’s a little secret. I’m so deeply in love with Bunny, but she doesn’t know that. But, the thing is, I don’t know if I should tell her!
Real quick, I’ll tell you the design of the house. Bunny and I have separate rooms, we have a kitchen and dining room, and we also have comfy beds!
Well, I’ll be right back- I have to strengthen Bunny real fast. Oh, If you’re wondering why... She can’t pick up a pick-axe. She can almost do it! Just a couple more days…
Okay, her training is over so I’m going to finish today’s entry. During the training, I found out that she’s hiding something from me. I also told her that I have something that I’m hiding also, and that we should continue hiding our secrets. She nodded in agreement.
I make Bunny do all the girly chores since she isn’t very strong. She complains.
“Come on, Alex!” Oh, ‘Alex’ is my nick name, my real name is Alexander. “I want to do grown up chores!” She says, with a bit of anger.
“What do you mean? Kids can’t do theses chores!” I said kind of laughing inside.
“Well, whatever! Can I do harder more fun chores?” She says, and inside I question why.
“Fine, suit yourself. We will switch every day.” I tell her. She smiles at me. A smile so warm, anyone could fall in love.
Day 2
Oh my gosh! I’m still laughing because Bunny tells me that she wants to keep her old chores.
“Can I have my old chores?” She asks, as if I were the one that asked.
“It was your choice, Bunny, get to work.” I said, watching her stomp off to do her chores.
Later that day, I see Bunny attempting to kill a pig. I hand her a bow. She’s good with bows- so I’m not sure why she can’t pick up a diamond pick-axe. She shoots the pig with perfect aim, and I cook it later in our furnace. We both watch it patiently. We haven’t eaten for days!
After eating, Bunny and I started making a mining shaft. After a while of mining, Bunny and I fall into a cave and Bunny lands on me. I realize that she has a purple bruise on her head, and that she has a bleeding leg. So I start mining in stair form so we can get out of the shaft, but my tools break.
“Snap, everything is broken!” I look at her, and she looks awfully tired. So I sit next to her. After a while, she tells me that she has tools. Yeah, thanks for telling me in advance, Bunny. Damn, you’re dumb but adorable. But suddenly, we see a skeleton, and it tries to hurt Bunny. So, I shoot it dead.
After a while of mining, Bunny’s tools break. Nice, now we’re stuck a little while longer. Since we reached the surface, I climb on the ledge and reach for Bunny’s hand. But she falls.
“Damn it!” I said. “Reach farther.” So she listens to me. When our hands touch, I feel a little strange. And I think Bunny felt the same way because her cheeks were pink.
When Bunny got up, she thanked me by gently placing a kiss on my cheek. I look at the ground with hot cheeks, and an embarrassed smile. I straighten my hair.
When we got home, Bunny and I made two furnaces and placed raw pork in each one. When it’s done, we eat it happily. We also make a jukebox, since we found records awkwardly lying on the ground.
I created a computer, which was much easier than I thought it would be. While I was on the computer, images of Bunny popped in to my head. Oh, she was wonderful. And I don’t only admire her looks. She’s so sweet. She’s so... everything to me.
So, I go in her room and sit on her bed.
“’Sup?” I ask her.
“Why are you in here? I’m trying to sleep…” She says, yawning.
“Good night, Bunny…” I say, and pat her head, then playing with her hair.
“Oh, I see Alex… Good… Night…” She says, each pause filled with a cute yawn. My face wears a sleepy smile.
Day 3
In the morning, instead of eating like usual, we made more tools, because all of ours were broken. After doing the chores, and making tools, Bunny and I place flowers around the house.
Later, we go back to the cave and patch it up. Suddenly, Bunny says she’s feeling light headed. I walk behind her and she falls back, into my arms. Her eyes are closed. I sit down and hold her like a baby, and then I place my hand on her forehead. Her forehead was burning. She had a fever. I stroke her hair a little.
Eventually, she wakes up slowly, and says my name.
“Alexander…” She says, with sleepy eyes.
“Yes?” I ask her.
“I…I…” After saying that, she faints again.
I continue holding her in the shaft for a while. And mess with her hair a bit. But it keeps its good-looking style.
After a while, I carry her up the shaft stairs. She’s really light and petite, so it was easy to carry her up the stairs. Once we got into the house, I place her in bed and tuck her in.
So, I give her a sleepy hug and go off to my own bed. I have a feeling that Bunny wanted to say something important. I hoped it was a love confession. I could have died and gone to heaven!
With sleepy eyes, I thought I saw her peeking into my room, with a tired, shy smile. That’s the smile I fell in love with. I pretend to sleep. She walks up to me in bed, and gives me a sweet hug.
When she leaves, she leaves quietly, and very adorably. I hear her back slide down the door.
Day 4
This morning, it was a little hard to open the door. It was Bunny. Once I opened the door, and her sleepy eyes open. I smile and bend over to gently kiss her forehead. We are sitting together in the hallway. I’m not sure if that’s romantic or not, considering I probably know nothing about love and romance.
After a while of sitting there, she falls into my arms while sitting with me. And we start another wonderful, but typical day.
END
Special Thanks to Jesonomi and hilarious ChibiMariChan!
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Retired StaffWell anyway, it was short, lacked a bit detail, but it had very good grammar and organization, compared to some stories around here. >_> -Mumbles about people posting giant, unpunctuated walls of text.-
Really, for a start, it's pretty good. Nice job!
Grammar: much too good :biggrin.gif:
Since I watched you type it I feel like a stalker ._. But whatev
@Jesonomi: LOL yeah I really like computers! uh what do you mean by details? TT^TT
@ ChibiMariChan: You are a stalker ._.
@ everyone else: LOL Chibi; My story is a bit slower through their love than the love between Matt and Pepper
I think I will make a sequel >V<
Overall... I give it a 41.8/50
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Retired Staff...Are they going to make another computer? O_O That would just be weird.
i mean thank you lol mi accent is bothering me