Afew plot holes:
1. What was with the Infadist and the mutate wolf things?
2. What exactly happened during the fight between Mark and the Infasist?
3. What happened to the rose?
4. What did that to Joseph?
5. Where did Rachel and Joseph go afterwards?
And most importantly...
WHY WAZ THERE NO CAKE!!
Just joking on that last one. Or was I?
But seriously, idea for a part 4: Joseph Comes back and warns Mark and Teresa that Rachel has joined with the Infadist
(who survived). I don't care what happened next and if it's AWESOME, as long as Mark and Teresa finally have a child, or if Teresa becomes pregnant.
Afew plot holes:
1. What was with the Infadist and the mutate wolf things?
2. What exactly happened during the fight between Mark and the Infasist?
3. What happened to the rose?
4. What did that to Joseph?
5. Where did Rachel and Joseph go afterwards?
And most importantly...
WHY WAZ THERE NO CAKE!!
Just joking on that last one. Or was I?
But seriously, idea for a part 4: Joseph Comes back and warns Mark and Teresa that Rachel has joined with the Infadist
(who survived). I don't care what happened next and if it's AWESOME, as long as Mark and Teresa finally have a child, or if Teresa becomes pregnant.
Correct! I'm glad you noticed!
So, I'm afraid that I have no real answer. To most of them. They are...kinda spoilers?
2. Mark randomly had ice powers while Infadist (I'm really regretting his name) had fire powers. They had an epic battle and finally, Infadist was smashed out the window. Mark, like the crazy guy he is, jumped out and pushed off him to make sure he would fall.
5. I never really established this with myself, but...I have this idea that Teresa went back to the mountain, cause she's a bad ass girl, and found both of them still there. They got killed. So...They respawned VERY far away. I think.
*Cough* But seriously, idea for a part 4: Joseph Comes back and warns Mark and Teresa that Rachel has joined with the Infadist
(who survived). I don't care what happened next and if it's AWESOME, as long as Mark and Teresa finally have a child, or if Teresa becomes pregnant. *Cough*
I don't care what happened next and if it's AWESOME, as long as Mark and Teresa finally have a child, or if Teresa becomes pregnant.
What the hell?
This is the opposite of what romance is suppose to be. As I said in my thread, romance is suppose give you a TOUCHING and ROMANTIC feeling of love, not all the... other details (wink).
You disgust me.
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This is the opposite of what romance is suppose to be. As I said in my thread, romance is suppose give you a TOUCHING and ROMANTIC feeling of love, not all the... other details (wink).
You disgust me.
Having a kid can be romantic. Cause you need to care for the mother and the kid.
...I actually had the idea for a sequel to go from the kid's perspective, maybe when he's 10 or 15.
Maybe a female kid.
...Not like I have the determination to write it.
This is the opposite of what romance is suppose to be. As I said in my thread, romance is suppose give you a TOUCHING and ROMANTIC feeling of love, not all the... other details (wink).
You disgust me.
Having a kid can be romantic. Cause you need to care for the mother and the kid.
...I actually had the idea for a sequel to go from the kid's perspective, maybe when he's 10 or 15.
Maybe a female kid.
...Not like I have the determination to write it.
No no, but I mean, he said basically said
"I do not care WHAT THE HELL HAPPENS in your story, as long as MARK IMPREGNATES TERESA!"
He put that into a priority.
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nice job, 5/5, my favorite part was when the creeper ran up and it was like "SSSS" then mark was like "NO!!!" then the creeper was all "..." and ran away.
P.S I am thinking about writing a back story for minecraft or a mobcyclopedia.
nice job, 5/5, my favorite part was when the creeper ran up and it was like "SSSS" then mark was like "NO!!!" then the creeper was all "..." and ran away.
P.S I am thinking about writing a back story for minecraft or a mobcyclopedia.
Mark cannot be powerful enough to withstand a creeper.
Only Notch can do that.
Therefore, I give this story 0.01/1000000000
Spike(I forgot his real name) can not traverse deserts and then miraculously recover from near death and hallucinations. I give you -1000000000000000/ Infinity.
1. What was with the Infadist and the mutate wolf things?
2. What exactly happened during the fight between Mark and the Infasist?
3. What happened to the rose?
4. What did that to Joseph?
5. Where did Rachel and Joseph go afterwards?
And most importantly...
WHY WAZ THERE NO CAKE!!
Just joking on that last one. Or was I?
But seriously, idea for a part 4: Joseph Comes back and warns Mark and Teresa that Rachel has joined with the Infadist
(who survived). I don't care what happened next and if it's AWESOME, as long as Mark and Teresa finally have a child, or if Teresa becomes pregnant.
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Retired StaffCorrect! I'm glad you noticed!
So, I'm afraid that I have no real answer. To most of them. They are...kinda spoilers?
5. I never really established this with myself, but...I have this idea that Teresa went back to the mountain, cause she's a bad ass girl, and found both of them still there. They got killed. So...They respawned VERY far away. I think.
As for the cake...THE CREEPERZ ATE IT.
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Retired StaffLol, better late than never, eh? Thanks.
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(who survived). I don't care what happened next and if it's AWESOME, as long as Mark and Teresa finally have a child, or if Teresa becomes pregnant. *Cough*
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Retired StaffI've had this idea since I finished writing this.
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I will probably never get around to it though. DX
What the hell?
This is the opposite of what romance is suppose to be. As I said in my thread, romance is suppose give you a TOUCHING and ROMANTIC feeling of love, not all the... other details (wink).
You disgust me.
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Retired StaffHaving a kid can be romantic. Cause you need to care for the mother and the kid.
...I actually had the idea for a sequel to go from the kid's perspective, maybe when he's 10 or 15.
Maybe a female kid.
...Not like I have the determination to write it.
No no, but I mean, he said basically said
"I do not care WHAT THE HELL HAPPENS in your story, as long as MARK IMPREGNATES TERESA!"
He put that into a priority.
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Retired StaffWhen you put it that way...
But then, you put it that way.
Different much? I think not.
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Retired StaffI hope.
P.S I am thinking about writing a back story for minecraft or a mobcyclopedia.
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Retired StaffOh, really? Well, good luck.
Thanks for the compliment!
Only Notch can do that.
Therefore, I give this story 0.01/1000000000
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Retired StaffSpike(I forgot his real name) can not traverse deserts and then miraculously recover from near death and hallucinations. I give you -1000000000000000/ Infinity.
Notch and Spike are both just as badass.
Your point sucks.
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Retired StaffWell...I'm still beating you in posts.