WOAH this is an amazing story (: I'm sure your packed with comments!
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http://www.sheezyart.com/art/view/2359512/ The hilarious Pre-write! By Me and oh so amazing ChibiMariChan~! I <3 you CHIBI! by chibi! ARIGATO! I mean thanks. sorry my accent keeps kickin in
http://www.sheezyart.com/art/view/2359512/ The hilarious Pre-write! By Me and oh so amazing ChibiMariChan~! I <3 you CHIBI! by chibi! ARIGATO! I mean thanks. sorry my accent keeps kickin in
http://www.sheezyart.com/art/view/2359512/ The hilarious Pre-write! By Me and oh so amazing ChibiMariChan~! I <3 you CHIBI! by chibi! ARIGATO! I mean thanks. sorry my accent keeps kickin in
am i the only one who saw the secret writing? either that or im on :RedShroom:s it said this story has sexual stuff in it
Both. ;D Yeah. There is some sexual stuff but I don't straight out say it because apparently, "There are kids". I'm not saying they are stupid but, you know. You're not supposed to tell em for some crazy assed reason. -shrug-
Okay then she listened to me :biggrin.gif:
Iknow her in real life, she's my best friend lol one of them she knows EVERY THING about me
aparently she listened to me when i said
"talk to Jesonomi He's awesome"
Looks like you have more supporters then, eh? Well. I was like, what???, cause her comments are up there. ^^^ But then again, I would know since I look through EVERY SINGLE COMMENT. :biggrin.gif: I hope her story turns out well!
I stole her laptop away :333 and im writing my story write now lol the prewrite looks funny >-O i think she wants her laptop back now ... lololololol im putting myself in my story and chibi looks mad so bye byue
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http://www.sheezyart.com/art/view/2359512/ The hilarious Pre-write! By Me and oh so amazing ChibiMariChan~! I <3 you CHIBI! by chibi! ARIGATO! I mean thanks. sorry my accent keeps kickin in
I stole her laptop away :333 and im writing my story write now lol the prewrite looks funny >-O i think she wants her laptop back now ... lololololol im putting myself in my story and chibi looks mad so bye byue
Lol! Personally, I don't put myself in my stories, but that's something that differs between all people. (If you're wondering about The Mine's Reality, you haven't read the ending, which I sorta advise against if you want to wait forever, but advise if you don't. I doubt I'll ever finish it.) Well anyway, good luck! Attention!
I'm writing another sequel. It'll take longer because I'm getting a bit bored and winter break is a less than a week from ending so...yeah.
sorry bunnys being retarted right now lol yeah good luck with your story man! good bye, winter break agg i will miss you winter break lol
so what do you think of bunny?
Well, I can't really come up with an attitude right now but so far, she's funny like you. No wonder why you guys are friends. And yes, winter break will be missed. Greatly.
yes, yes it will be :3 youll get to know bunny later.. right bunny?
Bunny: i think so? :3
your weirdd bunny
lol were typing her story draft lol
mine craft
mine draft
mine shaft lol http://sheezyart.com/art/view/2359512/
LOVE THIS. Oh my god. For some reason, I imagined the characters as Katniss and Peeta from The Hunger Games. It seems to fit perfectly.
Your posts in this forum are very intelligent, and you definitely know what makes a great story. This is the first one I've read from you, and I'll now read the others.
Oh, and thank you ChibiMariChan, as this wouldn't have been made without your inspiration. Thank you both!
HELL YES. HIGH FIVE DUDE!(I'll assume your gender.) FINALLY SOMEONE WHO KNOWS! :biggrin.gif: As I had mentioned earlier:
Slightly Off Topic: Has anyone noticed the book references?
(The Hunger Games Series - Suzanne Collins,
False Memory - Dean Koontz,
The Olympians Series[Percy Jackson] - Rick Riordan)
Anyone even read these stories? I use some alterations of their lines. Hunger Games gives awesome romance lines, False Memory gave a small conversation that you probably didn't care about anyway, Percy Jackson gave some swordplay. All in all, a whole bunch of crap contributed to this story. And viewers like you. Thank you. (I had to do that. :biggrin.gif:)
Yes. I quoted and referenced a few times to those books. FTW. And thanks, I try to post good comments.
Off Topic: You're on 42 posts! Congratz! (I guess.)
I LOVED The Hunger Games, so I guess I can spot anything that is similar to it. I'll definitely read the other books, it seems you have a good taste in books. XD
Don't worry, my post count will increase now. Got back into Minecraft, thanks to all these stories. If you make a new story, or update a current one, PM me, I'll be sure to read it and give feedback.
I'm not sure about reading the books I do. I have quite a big range of interests when it comes to fiction. Dean Koontz does a sort of creepy thing like Stephen King (Who's books I do read as well.), and the Percy Jackson is about the whole Greek Gods sort of thing.
Off Topic (As if it wasn't already. Pft): Have you read all 3 books of the Hunger Games?
Even more off topic: You are male, correct? I googled to make sure. I don't want to post something kinda weird like...brofist? I dunno what would be weird if you weren't a guy...Oh! No homo would be one....w/e. Just tell me your gender so nothing weird comes out of it.
I love creepy things. I used to be confined to just action, but then I started reading books recommended by friends and began to like horror and romance. Romance was something I thought I'd never enjoy, but I grew to like it. I'll check the books out anyway, I need to buy more.
I have read all 3 books, a friend let me borrow them, so I only read them once. Brilliant trilogy, quite surprising in some places, and I believe it ended rather well. The relationship between Peeta and Katniss was a good one, though it was awkward at times. I loved the cave part in The Arena, which is highly similar to the part where Mark and Teresa are in the mountain.
I am male, I should have cleared that up. And I'm guessing you're male too?
Actually, the mountain part simply sparked from my own head. It could have been influenced by The Hunger Games.
Actual References/ Quotes in TA: 4...I think. Maybe more.
JTTA(Wut.): 3 of them. Hump and dump came from a minor part of False Memory.
I dare you to find them with your memory. DARE. Of course, you don't have to. No pressure.
And yes, I am a male. Shark. With a pipe. Male. Yes. Random.
I go to sleep and less than 12 hours later, my thread sinks halfway down the page.
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Well, I guess I'll be bumping a few key topics, not necessarily mine. Just this one. Bump.
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Retired StaffNot as much as you think. Most are just conversations. Anyway, thanks!
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Retired StaffBoth. ;D Yeah. There is some sexual stuff but I don't straight out say it because apparently, "There are kids". I'm not saying they are stupid but, you know. You're not supposed to tell em for some crazy assed reason. -shrug-
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Retired StaffMet? I responded to one of her comments and then the forums screwed up and put her other response above mine. So um...yea, we met.
Iknow her in real life, she's my best friend lol one of them she knows EVERY THING about me
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Retired StaffLooks like you have more supporters then, eh? Well. I was like, what???, cause her comments are up there. ^^^ But then again, I would know since I look through EVERY SINGLE COMMENT. :biggrin.gif: I hope her story turns out well!
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Retired StaffLol! Personally, I don't put myself in my stories, but that's something that differs between all people. (If you're wondering about The Mine's Reality, you haven't read the ending, which I sorta advise against if you want to wait forever, but advise if you don't. I doubt I'll ever finish it.) Well anyway, good luck!
Attention!
I'm writing another sequel. It'll take longer because I'm getting a bit bored and winter break is a less than a week from ending so...yeah.
so what do you think of bunny?
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Retired StaffWell, I can't really come up with an attitude right now but so far, she's funny like you. No wonder why you guys are friends. And yes, winter break will be missed. Greatly.
Bunny: i think so? :3
your weirdd bunny
lol were typing her story draft lol
mine craft
mine draft
mine shaft lol
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Retired StaffHELL YES. HIGH FIVE DUDE!(I'll assume your gender.) FINALLY SOMEONE WHO KNOWS! :biggrin.gif: As I had mentioned earlier:
Yes. I quoted and referenced a few times to those books. FTW. And thanks, I try to post good comments.
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Retired StaffI'm not sure about reading the books I do. I have quite a big range of interests when it comes to fiction. Dean Koontz does a sort of creepy thing like Stephen King (Who's books I do read as well.), and the Percy Jackson is about the whole Greek Gods sort of thing.
Off Topic (As if it wasn't already. Pft): Have you read all 3 books of the Hunger Games?
Even more off topic: You are male, correct? I googled to make sure. I don't want to post something kinda weird like...brofist? I dunno what would be weird if you weren't a guy...Oh! No homo would be one....w/e. Just tell me your gender so nothing weird comes out of it.
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Retired StaffActually, the mountain part simply sparked from my own head. It could have been influenced by The Hunger Games.
Actual References/ Quotes in TA: 4...I think. Maybe more.
JTTA(Wut.): 3 of them. Hump and dump came from a minor part of False Memory.
I dare you to find them with your memory. DARE. Of course, you don't have to. No pressure.
And yes, I am a male. Shark. With a pipe. Male. Yes. Random.
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Retired StaffI'm writing another sequel. AGAIN. Prologue is done and I'll probably write more before sleeping....in 2 1/2 hours.
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Well, I guess I'll be bumping a few key topics, not necessarily mine. Just this one.
Bump.