Age doesn't really matter to me. I have some young friends, I have some adult friends, I have some old teenage friends...Whatever. I'm 14. On the other hand: I have the whole plot for the sequel! The only problem is that my computer is having a few problems right now. I think that it'll get fixed by tomorrow. If not, the day after that. I also have a passion for writing! (Holy crap, the sentences don't even relate with the next one...Am I going hyper? Nah.)
LOL i couldnt continue my story cuz i fell asleep typing o-o''
Lol! I listen to music if I write into the night. It might help. Or maybe I'm just addicted to writing. Well. Anyway. My computer got fixed. Took the whole day. I had to get all the stuff I wanted onto another hard drive cause the system wouldn't start. Hard drive got completely wiped so that Windows 7 could be installed again. I'm copying stuff onto it right now. 41.7 GB out of the original 2xx GB. XD Expect a story tomorrow! Not the sequel. I'm almost finished WRITING that. I had better let the computer copy now. I made the time estimated go from 20 mins to 9 hours. Just cause I came here. XD
Edit: Whoops! I meant today. Since it's 2:35 AM. :biggrin.gif:
A Wuv Story? Nice...... But i think i prefer you doing action stories.
Overall its 5/5. But shouldnt you tell why they fell in love?
Meh. A Hero's Sadness isn't quite action. And I got inspired by ChibiMariChan. :biggrin.gif:
And they fell in love because...Hm...It just happened. Like...
We were partners when we first met. Eventually, we began to trust each other with our lives and became friends. Now, we are lovers. We are both a bit shy, yes, but are still lovers.
I view it as, they met and were partners, helping each other out. Then they began to build a bond between each other. Friends that trusted their life with the other. And then grief strengthened the bond because they needed each other for support. And thats basically how they became lovers. I suppose I COULD write a view from Teresa that begins when they met first but I doubt it would have the romance. I gotta finish the sequel first. It might be almost as long as The Mine's Reality. It shows the love but doesn't quite have the kissing for a bit. -GASP- A spoiler. Check tomorrow. Hopefully, I'll have it typed and refined by then.
Ok. Well the sequel should be good!
And Hero's Sadness was basically action/ drama. Spawn. Find friend. Gets killed. RAGE! Name. Myth. Cookie. Waffle. TIS ACTION! Well im just exited for sequel :D3
Ok. Well the sequel should be good!
And Hero's Sadness was basically action/ drama. Spawn. Find friend. Gets killed. RAGE! Name. Myth. Cookie. Waffle. TIS ACTION! Well im just exited for sequel :D3
Lol. More drama than action. Anyway. Come back later. I'll post the sequel here. Don't want to clog up the forums!
Double Posting! Sorry. SEQUEL IS OUT. BE MESMERIZED BY THE GIANT WALL OF TEXT. IT TOOK 7 PAGES IN WORD AND HAS 4618 WORDS. WHICH IS ONLY 339 WORDS SHORTER THAN THE MINE'S REALITY! -GASP-
Edit: I say. 2 pages! A perfect time.
I read the sequel in a few minutes. Yup, I read that fast.
Yup. I read fast too. Course, if you're checking for mistakes, it takes a while. It took forever to write it though. -Typity Typity Typity..."DAMMIT A MISTAKE!"...Typity Typity Typity..."Cursed! I need a synonym."...Typity......."Dam. This part...needs a lot of improvement."- It was fun overall though. :biggrin.gif:
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that was amazing.. write another one!!! (if you want to, your choice. :/ )
This story has kinda stolen my attention so I WANT to write more...but have no clue as what to write. I really want to avoid mature stuff as that would probably...do something bad that I don't know...and I really have no inspiration as of now. I'm thinking of them having kids...but...I really can't think of anything that would go along with that. Another kidnapping? Preferably not. Some more drama...enough of that. Love? I'm running out of ideas.
Slightly Off Topic: Has anyone noticed the book references? (The Hunger Games Series - Suzanne Collins, False Memory - Dean Koontz, The Olympians Series[Percy Jackson] - Rick Riordan) Anyone even read these stories? I use some alterations of their lines. Hunger Games gives awesome romance lines, False Memory gave a small conversation that you probably didn't care about anyway, Percy Jackson gave some swordplay. All in all, a whole bunch of crap contributed to this story. And viewers like you. Thank you. (I had to do that. :biggrin.gif:)
:smile.gif: maybe they could adopt lol it would be okay ya know? like chibi (lol wut?) just sitting somewhere crying (as a child) and like you adopt them because they're lonely? IDK (lol idk why i said my name but whatever lol, its your choice rlly) and maybe you could add some new characters (like possibly a couple?) idk lol just tryin to help :3
I REALLY WANT TO DRAW A COUPLE DRAWING OF MARK AND TERESA!! I FREAKING NEED COLORS!!
Ha ha. Could you tell me some physical traits of Teresa and Mark? That would be nice. :smile.gif:
All I know is that Teresa has a Green shirt and black pants. And that she has brown hair. LOL
Alright. I'll think on their appearances. Strangely enough, I don't think of that when imagining the story. My mind is always on the plot and I just put a guy for Mark. I don't even know anything about his looks. Just that he's a guy. Appearances will be coming soon! The sequel...may take a bit more. :biggrin.gif:
Edit: Huzzah! Green shirt, black pants and brown hair was kinda all there was I needed. Then a few changes here and there on a girl skin I downloaded earlier as a template and done! Now I just need to refresh my memory on posting images...
Wallah! ...That's spelled really weird. And low quality makes her look like she's frowning. D:
Now on to Mark! What shall he look like? Cool? Crazy? Strikingly handsome like me? (Pft. I wish I was.) Or perhaps just a simple guy who fell in love. (Hell yeah. That's it.)
Edit: I hate it. It's okay but...I can't think of ANYTHING. And the mouth and hair is horrible. The good side is that I found out about adding noise! Yay for not having to go around brightening and darkening things for it to look better than a simple plain of one color.
I would improve it but have no idea or template. Had to edit the default Minecraft skin. I am very sad at Mark's skin. Course, I did spend more time on Teresa but at least I had my own details to go by.
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Retired StaffLol! I listen to music if I write into the night. It might help. Or maybe I'm just addicted to writing. Well. Anyway. My computer got fixed. Took the whole day. I had to get all the stuff I wanted onto another hard drive cause the system wouldn't start. Hard drive got completely wiped so that Windows 7 could be installed again. I'm copying stuff onto it right now. 41.7 GB out of the original 2xx GB. XD Expect a story tomorrow! Not the sequel. I'm almost finished WRITING that. I had better let the computer copy now. I made the time estimated go from 20 mins to 9 hours. Just cause I came here. XD
Edit: Whoops! I meant today. Since it's 2:35 AM. :biggrin.gif:
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Retired StaffCONFOUND IT! MORE ERRORS. Oh well. Thanks for pointing that out. It is tightly. I hurry too much. :biggrin.gif:
Overall its 5/5. But shouldnt you tell why they fell in love?
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Retired StaffMeh. A Hero's Sadness isn't quite action. And I got inspired by ChibiMariChan. :biggrin.gif:
And they fell in love because...Hm...It just happened. Like...
I view it as, they met and were partners, helping each other out. Then they began to build a bond between each other. Friends that trusted their life with the other. And then grief strengthened the bond because they needed each other for support. And thats basically how they became lovers. I suppose I COULD write a view from Teresa that begins when they met first but I doubt it would have the romance. I gotta finish the sequel first. It might be almost as long as The Mine's Reality. It shows the love but doesn't quite have the kissing for a bit. -GASP- A spoiler. Check tomorrow. Hopefully, I'll have it typed and refined by then.
And Hero's Sadness was basically action/ drama. Spawn. Find friend. Gets killed. RAGE! Name. Myth. Cookie. Waffle. TIS ACTION! Well im just exited for sequel :D3
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Retired StaffLol. More drama than action. Anyway. Come back later. I'll post the sequel here. Don't want to clog up the forums!
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Retired StaffYup. I read fast too. Course, if you're checking for mistakes, it takes a while. It took forever to write it though. -Typity Typity Typity..."DAMMIT A MISTAKE!"...Typity Typity Typity..."Cursed! I need a synonym."...Typity......."Dam. This part...needs a lot of improvement."- It was fun overall though. :biggrin.gif:
that was amazing.. write another one!!! (if you want to, your choice. :/ )
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Retired StaffThis story has kinda stolen my attention so I WANT to write more...but have no clue as what to write. I really want to avoid mature stuff as that would probably...do something bad that I don't know...and I really have no inspiration as of now. I'm thinking of them having kids...but...I really can't think of anything that would go along with that. Another kidnapping? Preferably not. Some more drama...enough of that. Love? I'm running out of ideas.
Slightly Off Topic: Has anyone noticed the book references? (The Hunger Games Series - Suzanne Collins, False Memory - Dean Koontz, The Olympians Series[Percy Jackson] - Rick Riordan) Anyone even read these stories? I use some alterations of their lines. Hunger Games gives awesome romance lines, False Memory gave a small conversation that you probably didn't care about anyway, Percy Jackson gave some swordplay. All in all, a whole bunch of crap contributed to this story. And viewers like you. Thank you. (I had to do that. :biggrin.gif:)
Ha ha. Could you tell me some physical traits of Teresa and Mark? That would be nice. :smile.gif:
All I know is that Teresa has a Green shirt and black pants. And that she has brown hair. LOL
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Retired StaffAlright. I'll think on their appearances. Strangely enough, I don't think of that when imagining the story. My mind is always on the plot and I just put a guy for Mark. I don't even know anything about his looks. Just that he's a guy. Appearances will be coming soon! The sequel...may take a bit more. :biggrin.gif:
Edit: Huzzah! Green shirt, black pants and brown hair was kinda all there was I needed. Then a few changes here and there on a girl skin I downloaded earlier as a template and done! Now I just need to refresh my memory on posting images...
Wallah! ...That's spelled really weird. And low quality makes her look like she's frowning. D:
Now on to Mark! What shall he look like? Cool? Crazy? Strikingly handsome like me? (Pft. I wish I was.) Or perhaps just a simple guy who fell in love. (Hell yeah. That's it.)
Edit: I hate it. It's okay but...I can't think of ANYTHING. And the mouth and hair is horrible. The good side is that I found out about adding noise! Yay for not having to go around brightening and darkening things for it to look better than a simple plain of one color.
I would improve it but have no idea or template. Had to edit the default Minecraft skin. I am very sad at Mark's skin. Course, I did spend more time on Teresa but at least I had my own details to go by.