Hello everybody! I am back! Now, depending on reception, I am planning to clean up Timid Affection and then rewrite the 3 sequels, since, as pointed out before, they really are poor in the plot and thought section. I'm specifically choosing this because it pretty much takes an extreme downhill turn after the first story and also because it's the most popular out of all of them.
Well, I'll pretty much rewrite them and several of my other stories anyway, but it would be nice and a bit of motivation if I did get some comments.
What do you think?
If you think it needs changing then feel free to do so, it's your story after all.
I think some changes here and there would be nice but I cannot speak fro the entire community about it so some other replies could help your decision.
Anyway my opinion: It was a nice story overall, the descriptions gave me a vivid image of the scene and the even though the plot is a little lacking it was still good, perhaps a little more background story?
Off topic: I remember you, you're the first person to reply to my story right? You didn't give any actual feedback though, I hope you can find the time to read my story and give me your opinion be it good or bad.
Ehm, sorry about that. I've kinda lost interest in reading most Minecraft fan fictions over the past few months. Apologies.
On a different note, the first part of Timid Affection (which is Timid Affection, go figure) has been edited. I was more content with this one than the others so there aren't TOO many changes. Anyway. Off to the other parts.
Double Posting! Sorry. SEQUEL IS OUT. BE MESMERIZED BY THE GIANT WALL OF TEXT. IT TOOK 7 PAGES IN WORD AND HAS 4618 WORDS. WHICH IS ONLY 339 WORDS SHORTER THAN THE MINE'S REALITY! -GASP-
Edit: I say. 2 pages! A perfect time.
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Retired StaffWell, I'll pretty much rewrite them and several of my other stories anyway, but it would be nice and a bit of motivation if I did get some comments.
What do you think?
I think some changes here and there would be nice but I cannot speak fro the entire community about it so some other replies could help your decision.
Anyway my opinion: It was a nice story overall, the descriptions gave me a vivid image of the scene and the even though the plot is a little lacking it was still good, perhaps a little more background story?
Off topic: I remember you, you're the first person to reply to my story right? You didn't give any actual feedback though, I hope you can find the time to read my story and give me your opinion be it good or bad.
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Retired StaffOn a different note, the first part of Timid Affection (which is Timid Affection, go figure) has been edited. I was more content with this one than the others so there aren't TOO many changes. Anyway. Off to the other parts.
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Retired StaffNow. Time for me to start reading the story.
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Retired StaffJust saw this. Thankee for actually reading, Danielle. :smile.gif: I tried my best for this story.
As for the sequel, most likely not.
Where is it :sleep.gif:
this was beautiful