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NICE! But one thing: I think it would need a little more detail.

EX:

The creeper exploded violently. I fell back in fear and felt nothing but pain as the pieces of rock fell on my back. I felt a cold, peircing wind as my eyes were closing. I then could not breathe. It peirced my head, making it so dry it split and started bleeding.

I awoke the next morning. Still feeling blood on my head. I put my hand to the cut softly. I lifted it checking for blood on my fingers. I saw none. As the sun was above the horizon I started gathering wood ... and so on.

Yes, this is quite different from my writing at times. I normally include enough detail to fill a book (as I am a writer, I do want to have a book published, and thin books are not that interesting to read) but because this is a fanfiction, I cannot drag it out with all of the descriptions, especially because this new forum has a character limit on posts.

When my webnovella comes out, though, I think you will enjoy seeing my true method of writing.

Idea; Make into (printed) comic and get good artist? U MAKE GOOD MONEYS

No one with any talent is ever interested in making a comic with me when I ask, so that is nto an option unfortunately.

I'd do it... If I actually, you know, had talent. :tongue.gif:

awesome simply awesome red till chapter 27

WAHOLY SNAP THAT'S LONG,
I'll have to read this in the course of a few days.

EDIT: Never mind, just read everything :smile.gif:.

This is definitley the best story i've ever read in any genre

New chapter by Saturday!

wow this is amazing ,you should like make it into a real novel or something with pictures and all in it.

New chapter's done.

dragon can you maybe add me somewhere in the story? =D
i love reading this story and can't wait for the next chapter XD

Good as always. I'm looking forward to my characters inevitable slow and painful death. :biggrin.gif:

why dont books in real life be as good as this?

New chapter by Sunday!

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New chapter by Sunday!

I can't wait till the next chapter.
Great work man, keep it up.
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Chapter 8, and im still loving it, awesome story dude.
!!!!!

Simple fantastic.
Keep on writing. It's great.

Sorry guys, but some unexpected things (Laziness and inability to watch the time) has caused me to not be able to post tonight. I will do my very best to post tomorrow.

Family might be moving soon, won;t be able to do this week's chapter after all. I should be able to do next Saturday's though, don't worry.