Wait, he get's knocked unconscious after he screams at the sun, waking up on a bench? Oh, so now you've admitted that he fell asleep on a bench and dreamed about Minecraft. How cute .
*Facepalm*
He screamed at the sun, and as he looked up, his boat hit the beach, and he fell over onto it.
Who said anything about a beach?
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My primal scream was interrupted, however, as my boat came to a sudden halt and I was jolted
backwards onto a bench, knocking me unconscious.
The hell?!?!?!?!?!?
on a boat. a bench. you don't sit on the floor. Maybe I wasn't explicite enough.
Come to think of it I should get to work on the next part.
EDIT: made that part less ambiguous.
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Wait, so it was a dream? The boat stops and he is thrusted backwards onto a bench. Which means he was on something before he was on the bench, which means the boat was in front of a bench?!?! I am so confused now. /brainhurt
Wait, so it was a dream? The boat stops and he is thrusted backwards onto a bench. Which means he was on something before he was on the bench, which means the boat was in front of a bench?!?! I am so confused now. /brainhurt
I was actually referring to the part on the rowboat where you sit, but I've changed that. Not obvious enough I guess.
EDIT: added the sixth part, just a short intermission sadly. Still, go ahead and read it :wink.gif:
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I've got the last part all done, but I'm not sure if I'm gonna post it up tonight. Maybe I'll wait for tommorrow :smile.gif:
EDIT: First post updated with the last part. This one's particularly long, so go ahead and enjoy :smile.gif:
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It's a shame, I had so many ideas I just couldn't fit into the story. Well, I'm satisfied with the result :biggrin.gif:
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It's a shame, I had so many ideas I just couldn't fit into the story. Well, I'm satisfied with the result :biggrin.gif:
Heh, yeah, you forgot to add a skeleton. This is a LOT less rare than slimes. ;D
Holy crap you're right. Ah well skeletons are assholes anyway.
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Retired StaffWho said anything about a beach?
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The hell?!?!?!?!?!?
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Retired Staffon a boat. a bench. you don't sit on the floor. Maybe I wasn't explicite enough.
Come to think of it I should get to work on the next part.
EDIT: made that part less ambiguous.
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Retired StaffI was actually referring to the part on the rowboat where you sit, but I've changed that. Not obvious enough I guess.
EDIT: added the sixth part, just a short intermission sadly. Still, go ahead and read it :wink.gif:
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But none will seem more lavished
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Like Minecraft? Then you'll like this!
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Retired StaffEDIT: First post updated with the last part. This one's particularly long, so go ahead and enjoy :smile.gif:
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Heh, yeah, you forgot to add a skeleton. This is a LOT less rare than slimes. ;D
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Retired StaffHoly crap you're right. Ah well skeletons are assholes anyway.
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Epic
truly the most epic thing evar
EVAR
You, my friend, have a gift.