Hi guys. I'm really sorry for not doing as I said. I had my family coming over, my dad which I haven't seen him for one year and a half, and more.
I will make the next chapter now...
When I came here I though it would be just "Argh yet another endermen story". Turns out it actually was a simple bland story. Try to improve a bit on the next chapter.
Note: not trying to be mean to you, just help you. It's by feedback stories get better.
When I came here I though it would be just "Argh yet another endermen story". Turns out it actually was a simple bland story. Try to improve a bit on the next chapter.
Note: not trying to be mean to you, just help you. It's by feedback stories get better.
Yeah, I get it, I also kinda think that way, but here at the minecraft fan art, there's not much else to do.
And thanks for the feedback! I know, you are trying to help out, that can always make stories better! Thanks for the feedback. Oh, love your "history of minecraft"
(Você fala portugues? So perguntando, por causa do seu username...)
Yeah, I get it, I also kinda think that way, but here at the minecraft fan art, there's not much else to do.
And thanks for the feedback! I know, you are trying to help out, that can always make stories better! Thanks for the feedback. Oh, love your "history of minecraft"
(Você fala portugues? So perguntando, por causa do seu username...)
I look forward to you improving this story. And thanks for the praise.
Just little suggestions to the story, why not make have them have like a little mob village? Or you find a Portal to the Nether that Steve has created and go threw it as well
Hope you like these suggestions but it does seem like you already have everything, can't wait for more chapters :biggrin.gif:
Just little suggestions to the story, why not make have them have like a little mob village? Or you find a Portal to the Nether that Steve has created and go threw it as well
Hope you like these suggestions but it does seem like you already have everything, can't wait for more chapters :biggrin.gif:
Well, I was thinking about they later on going to the Nether...
Thanks for the suggestions!
HMMM poor ender wender maby you should make it a bit make scary have misty scenes and maby betrail?? you need to make it more exciting i sure enjoyed it, also the grammar isnt all that well and i think it could use some editing.
HMMM poor ender wender maby you should make it a bit make scary have misty scenes and maby betrail?? you need to make it more exciting i sure enjoyed it, also the grammar isnt all that well and i think it could use some editing.
Well, that could be a nice thing to put on.
Well, I'll edit grammar later, Tommorow i'll make a new part. And English s not my native language, so that may explain a bit :smile.gif:
Would you like for me to spell check each paragraph before you release it? I noticed a few grammatical errors in there so would like to offer some help with that portion of it.
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I will make the next chapter now...
Note: not trying to be mean to you, just help you. It's by feedback stories get better.
Yeah, I get it, I also kinda think that way, but here at the minecraft fan art, there's not much else to do.
And thanks for the feedback! I know, you are trying to help out, that can always make stories better! Thanks for the feedback. Oh, love your "history of minecraft"
(Você fala portugues? So perguntando, por causa do seu username...)
I look forward to you improving this story. And thanks for the praise.
(Sim eu falo português :smile.gif: )
That's good to hear.
(Você mora em Protugal, ou Brasil? Ou nenhum dos 2, se você não se importa em eu estar perguntando)
I think adding a bit more on why the enderman is different from the others would help.
(Brasil e você?)
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Maybe you're right...
(Tambem! Mas não nasci aqui)
@Patroninja
Thanks! And yeah, I'll need to fix that later...
Hope you like these suggestions but it does seem like you already have everything, can't wait for more chapters :biggrin.gif:
Well, I was thinking about they later on going to the Nether...
Thanks for the suggestions!
Haha, Thanks! :laugh.gif:
Haha, thanks! (XD, I know) I think I'll make more tommorow, since everyone loves 'em. Happy to know you like them so much.
Well, that could be a nice thing to put on.
Well, I'll edit grammar later, Tommorow i'll make a new part. And English s not my native language, so that may explain a bit :smile.gif:
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