Well, here's my attempt at making a novel...
Feedback, please.
Stranded
Chapter One: The Beginning
I woke up on a rather sandy beach. I can't remember anything. All I know are things that I need to live, like breathing, and my name. Steve. I can at least remember that much. It looks like it's just after sunrise, so I should have plenty of time to find shelter.
I found a small little cave. It should be enough shelter for now. I'm starting to get hungry though. Which is when I noticed it seems I'm the only living animate object. I should get some wood. I went over to a tree, and I just has this strange though that I could punch down the tree. Apparently, I could. I fashioned some wooden planks out of these logs. I made a little bench to help me create stuff. I was able to make a basic wood door out of these planks. I made a wall with holes in it to act as windows, covering the entrance of the cave. Of course, I added the door. The cave is just a small dead end.
I stood and looked out of my little windows. I saw a few animals in the distance... I think. Nightfall came, and my little cave got DARK. I was still able to see outside, though... I saw a strange armless green creature. There also seemed to be strange red dots glowing in the distance, as well as purple dots. It was very weird. I was in deep thought and hardly noticed strange sounds from nearby. A strange, rotten looking green head was just on the other side of the window. I yelped in surprise, which was a bad idea, because more came.
Zombies. I tried punching through my little window, and managed to knock down a few. They hit me a few times, though. I ignored the remain zombies until the next sunrise. They started burning, but they didn't burn down my wall. I can see a large skinny black figure far away, which is also burning. I can see shapes that look like giant spiders. I see some of those green creatures, too. There also seems to be a few skeletons, which are also burning. Then I noticed something that looked like houses made of cobblestone...
Feedback, please.
I woke up on a rather sandy beach. I can't remember anything. All I know are things that I need to live, like breathing, and my name. Steve. I can at least remember that much. It looks like it's just after sunrise, so I should have plenty of time to find shelter.
I found a small little cave. It should be enough shelter for now. I'm starting to get hungry though. Which is when I noticed it seems I'm the only living animate object. I should get some wood. I went over to a tree, and I just has this strange though that I could punch down the tree. Apparently, I could. I fashioned some wooden planks out of these logs. I made a little bench to help me create stuff. I was able to make a basic wood door out of these planks. I made a wall with holes in it to act as windows, covering the entrance of the cave. Of course, I added the door. The cave is just a small dead end.
I stood and looked out of my little windows. I saw a few animals in the distance... I think. Nightfall came, and my little cave got DARK. I was still able to see outside, though... I saw a strange armless green creature. There also seemed to be strange red dots glowing in the distance, as well as purple dots. It was very weird. I was in deep thought and hardly noticed strange sounds from nearby. A strange, rotten looking green head was just on the other side of the window. I yelped in surprise, which was a bad idea, because more came.
Zombies. I tried punching through my little window, and managed to knock down a few. They hit me a few times, though. I ignored the remain zombies until the next sunrise. They started burning, but they didn't burn down my wall. I can see a large skinny black figure far away, which is also burning. I can see shapes that look like giant spiders. I see some of those green creatures, too. There also seems to be a few skeletons, which are also burning. Then I noticed something that looked like houses made of cobblestone...