ugh, Wish I had as good as luck as you, my computer can't connect to the Wi-Fi.
I'm going to get my friend to fix it next week, so I won't be on for a while. extra
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"I'll cry till' the tears turn to blood then cry till' it's all drained out of me."
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Chancellery
Physical description: Amelia has light brown hair, slightly curly with bangs over her eyes. Her hair is also very long as she doesn't cut it much, it is silky and smooth. Her eyes are a deep-ish and light brown. She also usually has black bags under her eyes from lack of sleep. Her physical structure is weak and her height is quite small. Her skin is also gentle and soft, no scars or wounds. She generally wears a large brown vest with a white gold-trimmed under shirt. She also wears a large red skirt that goes down to her ankles.
Screen capture of your skin:
(Btw sorry that I used the same hairstyle as Lassara, I just can't seem to make anything better then what Mira made lol) I CHANGED HER EYES TO BROWN BTW!
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Amelia sits in the corner of the room, trying to shield her face with her book, as the only light that remains in the room is where she is standing. The torch slowly starts to dim, running out of cloth to keep it alight.
Amelia hesitantly reads the book, trying to avoid the dark corners of the room as she reads. Her mind playing tricks with her, movements coming from the shadows. Her dark thoughts running through her head, trying to trick her...
"You're weak..."
"Pathetic..."
"Worthless..."
Amelia tries to shake off these thoughts. She puts this book down and pulls out another, the book seems old but she cherishes it.
She opens it slowly, dust trickling down the spine.
The first page, with handwriting of a younger child, reading...
"Amelia's Diary."
She reads the first few pages which hold some basic pages of just feelings...
As she delves deeper into the book, it holds longer articles, the handwriting showing changes. She skims over some of the pages, slowly reading some...
*Flashback to when she was 16*
Amelia sat by the tree, frowning as the voices tormented her.
She had her legs up to her chest, with her arms wrapped around her legs.
Warm, glistening tears rolled down her face as she looked down upon the swaying green grass... The blades of grass moving in motion with the wind. Her warm, transparent tears dropping and sliding onto her legs and littering the green blades of grass, splashing on impact.
As the sun shone onto the blades, showing the litters of tears around her... A shadow is casted upon them. She doesn't want to look up at the shadow, afraid of what might be waiting for her. She looked down into her lap, covering her face, hoping the shadow would go away and reveal the light once again for her.
Instead the shadow spoke to her...
It was unlike her normal terrors; this one spoke with grace, beauty and joy... It spoke softly to her.
"Hey... You'll be alright..."
The shadow seemed to understand her.
She felt the breeze rush past her again, as the shadow subsides a little, kneeling down in front of her, going into a less tormenting and less fearful size.
Amelia looked up at the shadow, her eyes widening as a person, a woman, stands in front of her.
She never really liked talking to people, even looking at them she found terrifying.
The figure had bright red hair, shining in the sun and swaying in the wind.
Amelia just looked up at the woman, her eyes widened. The woman rested her hand on Amelia's head, gliding it through her hair to comfort her.
The woman seemed to know Amelia was in some sort of pain, not physical; but emotional.
Amelia stares at the woman for a while, the glistening, warm tears slowly subsiding; her eyes still red from crying.
The woman pulled out a little red book, she gave it to Amelia...
"Take it... For your feelings and thoughts..."
Amelia nodded a hesitant thank you, unable to speak. The woman understood her pain and tried to calm her.
"It's okay... I'm not here to harm you... My name is Roselie Nightray."
Amelia looked at her, tilting her head. She wondered about her, remembering the name Roselie.
The woman continues speaking...
"If you ever find my daughter... Please tell her I'm sorry, and that I love her..."
Amelia looks confused at her, but remembers the words.
The woman smiled at her, stroking Amelia's hair once more before she walked away, waving and smiling. Amelia was confused at the woman...
Why did she help her?
Why did she give her this book?
Why did she tell her those words?
These thoughts ran through Amelia's mind, over and over as she passed through the day, eventually writing down the woman's name in her book as well as her words that she said.
She then to wrote in the book, her feelings and thoughts... her emotions; whether good or bad... *End of Flashback*
Amelia finally realizes that she had tears dripping down her face as she went through the flashback. She wipes away the tears and flips to a new page, with slightly more developed handwriting. She skims over it, making sure it's the right one, then she reads it thoroughly, to bring back memories. Memories she will always cherish...
*Flashback to when she was 17*
Amelia enjoyed time with her brother. Her brother, Darian, was the closest person she had to a friend. Although she didn't know whether to consider him one, as she only got to see him sometimes... But she still cherished the moments with him.
Amelia was outside, with her brother. Since Darian just finished doing some more home schooling to Amelia, he decided to take her for a walk. Darian was much older than her, he was in his mid 20s while she was still only 17. She loved having him around though, she felt safe with him, knowing the creatures that torment and haunt her would be afraid. Darian was part of the priest hood after all, and occasionally showed off his magic to Amelia, which she found fun. Although, while on their walk they encountered a pond, one they haven't noticed before. Darian, being brave and wanting to show off, decided to go for a swim. He tried to get Amelia to join him; she refused at first, but eventually decided to hop in.
Darian and Amelia jumped in together, they played in the pond, having fun.
The time she spent with Darian was the most fun she had ever had, in her whole life...
Although people saw them, knowing who they were and sent in complaints.
Once Darian and Amelia arrived home, they had the most ruthless scolding they have had.
Their mother was terminally ill, so their father had to deal with it.
Their father, being extremely busy, was never really in a good mood, especially to now have to deal with all that.
As much as she was scolded at, Amelia loved that day, and always cherished it... *End Flashback*
Amelia sits there, staring down at the page.
She has a happy expression across her face as she remembers the flashback, the tears dripping down from her face...
She remembers her brother, he was her closest thing to a friend.
Amelia sighs, flipping to one last page, skimming over it with a disgusted look...
It was the day before she moved...
*Flashback to the day before she moved*
Amelia stumbled as she walked, her hair moving in motions with the wind and bouncing as she walked.
She looked down as she stumbled over the ragged road towards her house.
The sun shone bright towards her direction, the breeze washed over her.
As she arrived to her gate for her home, the sun in her direction was blocked out three large shadows... The breeze she once felt... Gone.
...Something was wrong...
As Amelia looked up at the source of the three shadows, it was three bulky armoured guards.
The guards looked down upon her, moving closer as Amelia backed up a little.
They formed a neat triangle in front of her, she was extremely scared...
Not knowing what to do.
The guards started harassing her, pushing her around and threatening her.
Amelia just stood there and took it, crying from the pain, mentally and physically.
They then tried to take advantage of her, tricking her into believing things.
Amelia started to close her eyes, hoping they would just leave her alone, she got ready to brace for some more beatings, as she hurt the clang of metal and the guards groaning.
She kept her eyes closed, not wanting to look, but curiosity got the better of her and she opened her eyes.
She looked in horror, her face going pale as Matthew cupped his bleeding eye, blood rushing from his hand as he is pulled away and rushed off. Amelia's father and Matthew's father are left there, fending off the guards with their swords.
She is then picked up by her older brother, she closed her eyes and dug her face into Darian's shoulder, crying.
...
When she woke up from blacking out in Darian's arms, she was in her home. She could hear her mother, father and brother talking...
She couldn't hear them, so she stayed in her room, crying.
After some while of her sitting in her room, absolutely quiet, her parents and brother came in.
She was told the news...
She was being sent away...
For the rest of the day, people were saying their goodbyes and she was packing.
She didn't speak much to anyone, she just tried to be alone, to avoid everyone, to reflect on herself...
Once the next day arrived and they were packing on to the airship, she could see everyone saying more goodbyes to her, she didn't care this time, she thought they didn't care about her.
She listened to her thoughts this time...
"They don't care about you..."
"They hate you..."
"Why even try to act nice..."
She didn't dismiss these thoughts, she instead reflected on them for the most of the journey, not knowing where she would end up... *End flashback*
Amelia looks down at the book, slowly closing it...
She looked into the darkness, quivering in fear as she rests her head against the floor, crying and sniffling.
She could hear footsteps, growing louder as she looks into the darkness.
Out stepped a large monster, shooting towards her. She screamed as she closed her eyes briefly, then opened them...
Looking into nothing but darkness again...
Looking into nothing but the rest of her life...
Being devoured by shadows...
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): What motivates Amelia is her learning more about the real world. Since, most of her life, she was stuck in a bubble of her own imagination and such she never really knew much about the real world. She also aspires to be something big, possibly famous, but she only knows that from reading fictional books.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Amelia was educated while with her family. Her older brother taught her, she felt comfortable with him as he pretended to believe in her imaginary friends as well, Amelia didn't know he pretended though. Her brother taught her reading and writing, also other educational. Amelia knows how to control some of her emotions VERY well. She never gets angry unless something has hurt her deeply. Although some emotions she can't control. She also seems crazy or evil to some people, but inside she is strongly innocent, she is very nice and wouldn't hurt someone unless provoked. She is very sweet and cute, she hates everything to do relating to mean and harmful things. Although she doesn't know what many harmful things are, but she tries her best to avoid them if she knows they are bad. She also has SOME medical knowledge due to her brother being a priest and spending a lot of time with him.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):
Amelia is generally weak, she is unable to lift heavy things and is easily hurt. Her physical structure is fragile and she has absolutely no fighting skill. Amelia is scared of a lot of things, spiders, blood, ghosts and undead, the dark, etc. She is scared of most things, being small and weak she never really wants to try and face her fears. Amelia also has a lot phobias/disorders such as claustrophobia, insomnia and nightmare disorder (Night Terrors). Her nightmare disorder brings her to have extreme nightmares that she often finds real, such as death and such. Her imagination and her nightmare disorder also bring her to often believe that what she thinks is fake, is real (Schizophrenia). If she thought of a monster under her bed, she would believe it and often see it through her imagination. Amelia is also extremely gullible. Since she didn't have any friends growing up, besides her imaginary ones. She was taught that everything is true, even the things in her head. Amelia also has dark thoughts that run through her head, she tries to avoid them as she doesn't want them at all, but they haunt her. Since Amelia didn't socialize that much during her childhood, she has trouble talking to people for the first time and is often scared of them, even if they may be younger than her. She also hates drawing attention to herself.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
Yes,
Matthew Cardonell (Dedoralive / Shawn) is from the same hometown as Amelia.
Eleonore Nightray (Tiffosaur / TIFFANY). Amelia has met Eleonore's mother and will pass on a message.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation. Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Amelia looks at the girl, studying her. Amelia's thoughts would trace through her "Let her die..." "She is worthless..." "Look at how pathetic she is". Amelia tries to escape these thoughts, then seeing what she could /do/ to help the girl.
She attempts many things, throwing rocks at them (which only landed about 2 meters from her) or trying to get Guards' attention (who just laughed at her).
Amelia eventually decides that there isn't really anything she can do, she just hopes that someone will notice. She looks around at the various crowds around, trying to get their attention without causing disturbance or even remotely communicating with them. After a while Amelia gives up, she feels sorry and guilty that she couldn't help the girl, not that she would've done much anyway if she tried to take on any of them.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
Amelia just stares at the man for a while, until he questions her. Amelia is extremely scared and talks in stutters.
"I..I..Airship? ...no-no-I can..can't fly..."
Amelia then looks around for someone to help her, without success, she turns back to the man who is still staring at her. She tries to cover her face hoping he would go away. He still stands there looking at her, she can smell the rotting and alcoholic smell his mouth emits.
The man tries to convince her to join, as gullible as she is, she obeys, scared as she is. Although while he isn't looking she runs off, scared.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Amelia would try to ignore him, and as the man keeps begging her she would just stare at him for a fair bit. Thoughts go through her head, "Help yourself, you don't need this guy" and "Let him starve, watch him suffer". She would try to avoid these thoughts, but also avoid him. Eventually her strong emotion of guilt and sympathy would fall in and she would try to give him any food she can, instead giving him a rock, thinking it's an apple through her imagination. The man yells and threatens her and she runs away crying thinking those thoughts were right.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Amelia covers her face, hoping he would go away as she cries a bit into her hands. She remembers her mother, regretting leaving her.
Dark thoughts run through her head, "Get him back", "You're stronger then this... you underestimate yourself...".
She cries a bit more, trying to hide herself from the man by covering her face again. Since he doesn't go away and just laughs pathetically at her, she gets up and tries to leave, walking over to the door slowly still cupping her face with her hands.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Amelia passes by the street, stumbling over the cracks in the road. She sees the passing woman, the shining blue and gold necklace. It shows some significance as it seems to be a diamond necklace. Amelia shows some interest, but doesn't know how to go about it. Her thoughts tell her to steal it, to make money from it, but she refuses and decides to just look at the lady's necklace in awe. The lady eventually starts to get a bit awkward and she walks along, Amelia shakes her head and keeps walking as well, embarrassed.
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Other notes: Amelia may seem evil, but she truly isn't, she is just innocent Ps. I hope this was better than my first app!
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Chancellery
Physical description: He is around normal height at 5"10, rather muscular, defined features, black hair, Handsome lad all around, except for a scar over his left eye, he dresses well.
Screen capture of your skin: Unavailable atm.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliché manner.): Matthew steps onto the docks, his pockets jingling with the money he was given, he knows it isn't safe to have it cling and clang around, but no one seems to be around. He cups his hands and breathes into them, warming them up. He looks around at the docks, frowning a bit. "Is this the place she were wanted to go to?" he thinks to himself. He sighs and walks forward, and stops dead in his tracks, he hears armor clanging, guards. Matthew hated all guards, not because he broke the law, but because of what they did to him at his home town, or Amelia rather.
(Flashback time)After a long day of picking up scraps at his father's smith. Matthew's step-father's name was 'Henry Cardonell'. His true father's name was 'Lucas Nightray', and Matthew knew it, but he decided to take on Henry's last name since he had been with him since birth. He decided to stop by and see Amelia, after all, it had been a while since they had seen each other; and Matthew does have a rather large crush on her. As he walks towards her house. He notices three guards, all in a triangle, one in the middle, the other two at his side, they seem to be fixated on something, or someone. As he looks closer, his eyes flare with anger, they are trying to take advantage of Amelia (This was when he had two eyes). He quickly draws his sword that his father gave him for his birthday, which wasn't too long ago. "Off her you PIGS" He shouts at the guards. One of them turns, and scoffs at him, "Go on home kid! Dis be guards business onleh." Said the guard who turned. At this point Matthew didn't care that that they were armored. He didn't care that they outnumbered him, he only wanted Amelia safe, and them dead.
He swung at the guards chest with his sword, the guard jumped back and drew his own sword. "Dat yer bes move boy!?" The guard yelled at him. Enraged Matthew lunged again, but the guard swung at him before he was close, as his sword was longer than Matthews. It hit him on the eyebrow, slicing downwards into his eye, causing him tremendous pain. Matthew clutches his eye with one hand, the blood trickling between his fingers, he looks at them with his other, even angrier.
Matthew wouldn't give up, Amelia was his friend, and even though she may not feel the same way, she was his whole world, and if they messed with her, they might as well mess with him too. He holds his eye still, and takes his sword in his hand and with all his might swings at the guards chest. Unprepared, as the guard was focused on the blood, his chest is struck, and a deafening screech can be heard as the sword cuts through the metal, causing the guard to hunch over in pain, by this time the other two have turned to him, they are angry, and ready to fight, swords drawn. They both lunge at him, from each side, he is cut on his arm, and dodges the sweep for his legs, and then they both attack again, he blocks one, they cut his side, he is angry, but not even his rage can beat skill like this. After a while Matthew is cut up, he is bleeding profusely. His vision is blanking in and out, he is moving by instinct, dodging some, but not nearly enough of the attacks.
Matthew's and Amelia's fathers rushed up, wielding swords Matthews father had made, and they protected Matthew, sending the guards away. They got him to the town doctor as quickly as possible, during the whole time all he asked was if Amelia was okay, and where she was, how she felt. After a few months the doctor had him healed, and back to normal, well; almost normal. His left eye is cut in two pieces, the doctor gave him a bandage to wear, which he did to help it heal, but after a while, he got used to it, and didn't hide it, it gave him a sense of purpose, reminding him everyday why he gets up, why he practices with the sword, and why he followed her. After the incident, Amelia's parents decided to send her away, to the "Capital", Matthew begged his parents endlessly to go, he worked, and saved up money, just so he could go with her. Until Finally, he had enough to pay for the trip, before he left his father gave him his blessing, some spare coins, and a sword, one of his finest.(End flashback time). He watched as the guards passed, holding his breath. As soon as they pass he takes a breathe, pats on his shirt for a moment, then walks into the Capital.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): He wants to win Amelia's heart, and he will follow her to ends of the earth to protect her.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He is very strong, he is skilled with swords and daggers, he is very loyal, He is very brave as well, He isn't tricked too easily. He has a slightly above average intelligence. When he is enraged, he blocks out pain, he doesn't know when to stop, this can be bad too, but it is also helpful.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Over his left eye is a scar given to him by from the guards of his home town. He cannot see out of it, and hitting it would cause him much pain. And because he is very strong, he isn't very fast when it comes to running. He is over protective of Amelia, and I guess if being anti-social is a weakness, then put that here too.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
Yes,
(Jaeden111) Amelia. She is his reason for moving.
(Tiffosaur) Eleonore. She is his half sister.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation. Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armored men harassing a young girl. Instantly Matthew is reminded of the incident with Amelia, no girl should have to go through that. "And just /what/ in the name of Aneria, are you two oafs doing to that young lady!?" He shouts at them. Instead of waiting for one to turn like he made the mistake of doing, he pushes one to the side roughly and draws his sword. "Are these men giving you trouble miss?" *The young lady nods* Matthew draws his attention to the one nearest the girl. He kicks at his knee cap with full force. The armored man was expecting an attack from the upper body and his knee cap is kicked at, disabling his leg for enough time to beat him on the forehead with the hilt of Matthews sword. At this point the other man is back on his feet, glaring at Matthew. The man steps forward and Matthew reaches down and flings a small pile of dirt towards his eyes then goes to tackle him. The armored man swats the dirt away but doesn't see him rushing at him, he is tackled and his head hits the stone behind him. Matthew stands up looking down at him, and looks back at the girl. "Please, get out of here, they won't hurt you anymore." she nods and asks as she leaves "Wh-what is your name?" He replies to her hesitantly. "Matthew Cardonell.."
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why? "Ello young man! If ya join me crew I ken promise ya riches beyond ya dreams!" Ever since the incident, Matthew has been skeptical about peoples true intentions, and besides, he isn't here to go adventuring, he is here to win Amelia's heart, and that's what he intends to do. "No sir, I won't be joining. I have much more important matters to attend to." The man frowns, then disregards him and goes to the next man on the street.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Matthew looks down at the man, his family wasn't exceptionally rich, but he was never without food. "S-sonny.. can you spare some bread for me please? I-I haven't eaten in days.." The old man says in a frail voice. Matthew then reaches into his bag and pulls out a loaf of bread wrapped in some paper. "Here you go sir." He takes half of the loaf and hands it to the man. Then man looks up at him, eyes widening. "Bless you lad! May Aneria bless you for many years to come!" He says happily, nomming on the bread as Matthew walks away.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Matthew doesn't take kindly to insults about his family, or anyone close to him, especially /not/ his mother. "What did you just say to me? You good for nothing drunkard?" The man repeats the insult to him, louder so more people can here. Matthew nods. "Thought so." He quickly sends a fist at his face, connecting quickly, knocking the man onto the ground, as he was already tipsy enough. "I hope you wake up with more of a brain than you have now. Cause you are just pathetic." He walks for the door, not looking back at the man.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Matthew walks by a very wealthy looking lady, and a gleaming necklace around her neck catches his eye. He thinks of how good that would look on Amelia, and how happy she could be with it. "Excuse me ma'am?" The lady turns to him. "Yes?" he motions to her necklace. "Might I ask where you got such beautiful jewelry?" She looks at him strangely. "Whyy..." He looks at her eyes. "I've got this girl.. and I think she might look good in that." *He smiles a bit* The lady smiles too. "I understand where you're coming from. I have about 12 more at home anyways." She shrugs and takes off the necklace, offering it to him with one hand. His eyes widen and he looks at her, his hand hovering under it. "What's the catch?" She giggles. "Just treat her nicely." He smiles. "I wouldn't have it any other way Ma'am." He grasps the bottom of the necklace carefully, and puts it in his bag for later.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? I do not.
Accepted:
Dedoralive / Shawn:
I liked it, some well detail and the strengths and weaknesses matched well. :D. Can't wait for the RP!
Btw remember to get that skin ASAP
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Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Chancellory
Physical description: Jesse is 5’10.Jesse has light blue eyes and short blond hair. He wears a green shirt and brown pants. He also has gloves from his mother.
Screen capture of your skin:Currently working on it.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Jesse was raised in an orphanage because he had been abandoned when he was a baby. Growing up in the orphanage was not a good experience for Jesse because all the other boys would make fun of him. He would always run up to his room and cry his eyes out and he started to believe the boys because they were so persistent on making fun of him. He even started to hurt himself always thinking that hurting himself would drown away the emotional pain. He decided one day that he had enough he marched down from his room and confronted the boys and harsh words were exchanged. He decided that words weren’t enough and he punched one of the boys straight in the nose. He saw what she had done and ran up to her room. He had started to pack her bag franticly because he thought he would be arrested if the owners of the orphanage. He left as fast as he could and didn’t let anyone know where he was going. He wandered and wandered until he was in the middle of a forest he did not recognize. He kept on walking and the forest became very dark and the animals looked less friendly. He started to run over a small sound that spooked him. He ran to a small clearing with a brick house that had a woman working on her garden in the front. He tapped the women on the shoulder and asked her with tears running down his face where he was. She said he was a whole mile in the woods and she offered Jesse a place to stay. Jesse gladly accepted that offer because for the first time in Jesse’s life he felt loved. The next day the women made her breakfast and combed his hair. But she didn’t mention once about him leaving. He finally asked the woman why she had not kicked him out and the women replied “Don’t call me miss. Call me Mom.” Jesse’s eyes lit up and he hugged his new mom. The women taught him and loved him till he was 19 and on her 19th birthday he told him that he should go to a place called the capital and start to follow his dreams. Jesse thought about it and hugged her mom and told his mom that she was a wonderful mom. He accepted her mom’s offer and left the next day. He then boarded the next Airship to the capital.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To make his mom proud andfollow his dreams.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Jesse is a very smart so he can’t get through any problem with ease.He is also very handsome so looks are not a problem for him .He is a very nice person and will never start a fight and will probably make a lot of friends.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Jesse is very quiet so he doesn’t like to speak up and will probably never interact with fights. He also has asthma so he can’t that long without getting an asthma attack.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Jesse sees the men and keeps walking. As he looks at he sees a group of people gathering around the men and he starts to walk toward them. He sees the men kicking the girl and he starts to tear up. With every kick he feels worse and worse. He suddenly burst into tears and walks away from the crowd. He hears from a distance “The Guards are coming!” The crowd starts to disperse quickly and the girl is on the ground crying. Jesse runs up to her and kneels down in front of the girl. He sees that she has a bloody nose and black eye. The girl is crying and is bruised up. Jesse then helps her up without a single word. The girl then hugs her and starts to cry in her shoulder as if Jesse was her dad. Jesse whispers into the girl’s ear “It’s okay.”
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
Jesse looks over at the man and says “No thank you. It sounds like a good offer though” The man then looks a little disappointed and then starts to think to himself. Jesse then gets up and walk out of the tavern. As he is about the leave the man then stops him and says “Come on. All the riches and treasure you want, you’ll get if you just say yes.” Jesse then looks at the man and just shakes his head and keeps walking. The man then starts trailing her and grabs his arm and his grip is tight. The man then turns Jesse around and then says “You really need to reconsider me offer.” He looks very serious. Jesse looks very frightened and unable to speak. He doesn’t even reply to the man but instead he lets out a blood curdling cry. The man then starts to shake Jesse. Suddenly a man walks up to Jesse and the man. He says with a serious tone “What are you doing to him?” Then man then pushes Jesse away and turns to the man. Jesse then regains his balance and starts to run off.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Jesse stops in front of the man and checks his pockets to see if he has any money for the beggar. He tells the man with a sad voice “I’m sorry. I don’t have any cash on me.” The beggar then looks up at Jesse and says “It’s okay at least you tried” Jesse looks very displeased with himself and then remembers that he can give something to the beggar. He then takes off his necklace and holds it in front of the man. Jesse then tells the man “Here take this it’s the least I could do” The man then takes the necklace and smiles. He then tell Jesse “Thank you and let Aneria watch down on you.” Jesse smiles and walks away. He smiles to himself and knows that if his mom had seen him now she would be very proud.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Jesse tries to ignore the man but he just keeps saying more and more. Jesse then puts his head on the counter and his fingers in his ears to try and drown out the sound. The man then slaps the back of Jesse’s head and Jesse looks up. He looks back at the man says “Excuse me sir can please not do that.” The man looks angered when Jesse says this and The man replies “I can do what I want and i can also say that mom was a filthy wench.” Jesse hears this and begins to tear up. The man sees that Jesse is about to cry and he says “You better cry you little *****.” When Jesse hears this he runs out of the tavern crying. He then sits on the ground outside crying and he thinks to himself that maybe there is no hope for him. He cries for hours before he goes to to his room in the tavern.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Jessie sees the necklace and stops the lady. He says to her “Where did you get that ravishing necklace?” She then looks down at the necklace and replies “Oh this old thing it was a present from my grandma.” Jesse looks impressed and replies “Well it is a mighty fine necklace and it goes well with your eyes.” The lady then smiles and says “Well thank you. I must be on my way now and it was nice talking to you.” Jesse then smiles and doesn’t reply. As the lady walks off Jesse looks mighty impressed.
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Mrice881:
There were multiple things that will need improving.
First off, being more enthusiasm in your bio and ICRs.
Such as, more emotions, more thought and such. Also, with your strengths, some of it didn't really match your bio as much.
I won't give details as to which, because I will leave that up to you, you should be able to find out.
But also, there were a lot of typos in your app, which will need to be fixed.
I would also like some more detail in the strengths and weaknesses.
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When I play Minecraft, it feels like a game... You dont say?
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Chancellery
Physical description: Cosimo has light brown hair, and he has green eyes, he is around normal height, 5"10 or so, he is rather slim looking, he does have quite a bit of muscle, but it is nothing too significant looking. His face is very serious looking, and he doesn't smile often at all. He is handsome, but not easy to get along with.
Screen capture of your skin: N/a atm
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliché manner.): Cosimo's parents, Angela and Ermes Arundiel, wanted their son to know all he could of the way his family had been treated before he was born, of the persecution of the Arundiels, and the reasons they had been in hiding for so long. His mother taught him about the history of the Chancellery, and of the Arundiel's nobility during the Linyerian Era. valued his family's history, and developed an overall hate for the citizens of the Chancellery, for the way they treated his family for so many years; as he believed that they had done nothing to deserve it. He doesn't let it get in the way of the way he acts though, but he often speaks what he is thinking, if he thinks someone is acting unintelligent he will most likely tell them.
His father taught him to be wary of all people who are not family, he also taught him how to defend himself. And because Cosimo wasn't very big, he mostly worked on disarms, and pressure points, he learned just where to strike and just how to strike. But even though he learned pressure points, against armored opponents he can't do too much. He excels in unarmed and in disarming weapons. His father also told him a saying that he keeps close to heart, "The less you say, the more meaningful your words will seem." Cosimo Besides teaching him history, and how to defend himself, his parents also had high expectations for Cosimo, they wanted him to be very intelligent, and most of all, they wanted him to honor the family.
Cosimo was never an emotional child, and never cried when he didn't get what he wanted, he didn't throw fits, and he didn't even get happy very often, even on his birthday. He only seemed to stay serious during everything. There was only one time he cried. His younger sister Gianna (Now past) was a sweet hearted little girl, she was always nice to him, and would try to make him smile all the time. He loved his sister with all his heart, even if he didn't show it most of the time. But one day his sister had stayed out too long in the cold, and grew very sick. The local doctors didn't know what she had or how to treat it, so they just tried to feed her and keep her well hydrated.
Up until she passed she was always optimistic. One day he remember specifically, because of what she told him. Cosimo walked into Gianna's room, and silently walked over to her, looking at her pale skin and frail looking frame. When she opened her eyes she smiled a little bit, and tried to get up to hug him, but he gently bent over to hug her so she wouldn't waste valuable energy. She softly told him about her day, and what the doctors had said. His eyes were fixed on nothing, as if he were watching something very carefully. When she finished he nodded softly, still staring at nothing. Gianna Reached her hand to his cheek and said softly "Promise me you'll smile for me one day..?" At that point a single tear came from the corner of his eye, he knew she didn't have much time, and how could he smile knowing that? He stood up abruptly, wiping the tear away as he walked out. Gianna passed away the next day, a piece of him died that day, as if when she passed, a part of him did too.
Ever since then Cosimo hasn't been the same, as if he wasn't emotionless enough before, now he showed absolutely no emotion towards anything. Nothing could fill the void that she had covered called his heart. Cosimo wasn't very social either. Other than his mother and his father, Cosimo didn't meet too many family members growing up, except for Araesis, and his parents as well. But he didn't see them too much as the families did not want to draw too much attention to themselves or their children. Everyday Cosimo searches for that happiness, that feeling he got when she talked to him, but now that was gone, along with her.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To bring honor to his family, and search for happiness to fill the void his little sisters death left behind.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Cosimo isn't exceptionally strong, but he is strong enough to get what he needs done. He knows several disabling pressure points and can easily take out an un armored opponent. He is also quite quick.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): If an enemy Cosimo is fighting has armor, he will have a tough time beating them, as he is only used to un armored combat. Cosimo's Emotions are almost nonexistent, he can't express himself easily, as he doesn't feel happiness, or at least he believes he cannot. He is very anti-social, unless they are family, close, or he genuinely trusts them. (HOWEVER, he will help those he deems worthy of his help, heck he will even go out of his way if he thinks they are worth the time).
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): Araesis Arundiel (gamer9726) Cosimo's relative.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation. Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armored men harassing a young girl. Cosimo walks up quietly, and past the guards, he stops mid step when he notices the young girl in the middle. He turns slowly towards them, his feet moving the gravel around them, his emotionless face and eyes examining each of them. He quickly notes the armor, and plans to go about this peacefully if he can. "Ah, there you are." Cosimo steps forward and the pair turns awkwardly to face him. "Didn't I tell you to stay by me..?" He reaches his hand for the girl, and one of the guards shoots his arm out in front to stop him. Cosimo notices the underside of the arm is not covered in armor, and is accessible easily. The man grumbles at him. "Jus' whaddya think yer doin?" Cosimo sighs. "Picking up my daughter of course." The armored man looks at his emotionless face, then at the other guard, then steps aside to let him grab the girl. Cosimo replies almost sincerely. "Thank you for looking after her..." And walks away, setting the girl down not too far and figuring out where to send her.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why? "You sir! I ken get ya lotsa gold! All ya gotta do is join ma crew! And go on an adventure to mystical islands, Never before seen!" Cosimo has no interest in leaving to go on this man's adventure, or whatever he called it, so he sighs and holds up his hand to the man. "No, I will not join your 'crew' ..."
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food. And old man looks up at Cosimo walks by, noticing his rather fancy coat, and asks for a few coins. "Scuse me sir.. Might you spare some change for the less fortunate..?" Less fortunate!? Cosimo thought. This man didn't know unfortunate, not until he and his family have been persecuted for EIGHTY years. He holds up his hand and shakes his head slightly, then keeps on his way.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother. "Oi!" Says a drunk fellow. Cosimo ignores the man. "AM Talkin te YU Mr. Redcoat!" Cosimo turns to him slowly, then says in a low voice. "What." The man shouts an insult about his mothers weight or something of the like, Cosimo didn't care to remember, and turned back to his food. "Dats et! You Look at me when am Talkin to ya! You no good piece of-" In an instant Cosimo launched his fist into the man's ribcage, knocking the wind out of him, then going back to his meal.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears. A very wealthy looking woman walks by, when a certain gleaming gem around her neck catches Cosimo's eye, Cyan, Gianna's favorite color. He cringes inside a little bit, the memories returning, all of the sadness, and the pain. Cosimo decides having it would only make him remember the pain more, so he continues on down the path, suppressing his feelings again.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Nupity Nupe :3
Accepted:
Dedoralive:
I liked it, just gotta get that skin and you're good to go!
You know everything you need to know :3. Just ask an admin ingame to change your class.
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When I play Minecraft, it feels like a game... You dont say?
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
7/7/2011
Posts:
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Minecraft:
Tiffosaur
Member Details
I CLAIM THIS PAGE IN THE NAME OF TIFFOSAURUS REX
This is my third character application. My previous character, Eleonore, is leaving the capital, along with her brother, Matthew. My apologies if the application isn’t as filled as my previous applications. Creating an application for a young character is quite difficult.
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?:Medori
Physical description:Ava is a small girl, standing 3’8”. She has long blonde colored hair, and bright blue eyes. She likes to wear light colored type of clothing. Her hair is rather curly/wavy. She’s small, due to the fact that she’s a simply 6 year old.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography:
Ava was born to Lillian and Alexander Cecile. She had a sister, who was about 10 years older than her. Her sister disliked her, and was jealous of the attention she got from their parents. Ava’s family was a moderately rich one, at least for the area she lived in. She was born on a moderate sized island, which consisted of a village, at where Ava’s family and herself resided. The people in the village were kind, and Ava heavily inherited this trait from them. Growing up, for Ava, was a wonderful experience. She had time to spend with the sister that she loved, her parents that gave her life and the animals in the woods she adored.
Ava was a spoiled child, a child spoiled with love. Everyone adored the small child, and she somewhat enjoyed it. Ava’s parents always believed that Katherine was the same as everyone else. Someone who adored and loved Ava, but Katie wasn’t. Katherine would always try to avoid Ava, and whenever their parents thought Katherine was watching Ava, Ava would sneak off to the woods to watch the animals. Katherine was also at the woods, but Kat was at the southern part. Ava spent a lot of her time in the woods, going there at least 2-3 times a day. There were no dangerous animals in the part that Ava explored, so Ava always came home safe.
Ava’s life was great until she turned four and a half. Her mother had gotten extremely sick with a disease, unknown to the village. The Cecile family was a rather known family in the village, so everyone prayed that Lillian would be fine. Alexander would always be at Lillian’s side, so Ava was left in Katherine’s care. As time passed, Lillian spent a lot of her sick time simply sewing things. During this time, Lillian stitched together a teddy bear for Ava, calling the bear ‘Alex’. Half a year later, Lillian passed away. Ava was young, and didn’t understand the concept of death yet, so she was told that her mother was sleeping. Ava was a very gullible child, so she believed it. Alexander became extremely depressed at their mother’s death. Alex wasn’t the loving parent he use to be. He would always yell at Ava’s older sister, and Ava could do nothing about it. She would sit there and cry as she watched her father yell at Katherine.
Ava watched as Alex beat Katherine, feeling horrid as she couldn’t do anything. Although, Katherine always appeared to not be hurt by the beatings. The family’s reputation was tarnished as rumors began to spread about Alex’s beating. Ava, one day, decided she’d had enough of simply Katherine getting hit. As Alex raised his hand to hit Katie, Ava jumped in front of it, and was hit by Alex for the first time. Katherine, enraged, began to fight back. Their father nearly died that night. Katherine, along with Ava, decided to leave their home island, and head off to the Capital, in which Katie had heard rumors about.
What is your character’s main goal?:Ava doesn’t have a real goal, besides staying with her sister, Katherine.
Strengths:Ava has no real physical advantages, but she has a positive personality. She’ll always try to enlighten the mood, and keep things going. She can be a rather hyper person when she’s in a comfortable place. When Ava is nervous or scared, she tends to talk in third person, which will sometimes make people laugh. Ava can be a polite girl, as she uses ‘miss,’ ‘mister,’ and the like.
Weaknesses:Ava can’t do much as a 6 year old. Ava, often, will remain quiet, unless she’s in a comfortable place. She gets very attached to people, and is very gullible. She’s a very small and weak girl, and she doesn’t understand the true horrors of reality. She’s a very innocent girl, that is very prone to being tainted. Ava is easily frightened by things, and has a specific fear of the Bodychanger. She has a weakness for animals, and refuses to eat any meat. Ava treasures her teddy bear, Alex, and will do anything to keep him safe.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which?:
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Ava looks around, hugging her teddy bear tightly. The girl was older than herself, so what could she possibly do to help...? As she begins to panic, Ava can feel tears forming in the corner of her eyes. Spotting a guard, she runs over, grabbing his hand and trying to pull him over. Confused, the guard reluctantly follows the girl. “Hey kid, what are you doing?” The guard asks in his gruff voice, not noticing the scene yet. “Over there!” Ava cries out, pointing towards the two men and young girl. As the guard finally notices, he readies his sword and begins to take action.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
Ava stares up at the tall man. She looks around her, wondering where her sister has wandered off to. “Uhm...” Ava takes a step back as she stares at the man. “N-No, uhm, no thank you... Sire...” She stutters, before turning away and running off, afraid of the man.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Ava is walking along the street with her older sister, Katherine. Ava is holding onto the side of Katherine’s shirt. As she sees the man, she tugs on Katie’s shirt. “Katie, can we give him food? He looks really really hungry...” Ava asks. Katie sighs, setting a hand on her head, then says, “Ava, we barely have any food ourselves...” Ava pouts, crossing her arms. Looking up at Katherine, she tries to make the saddest face she can. “Pleeaasee?” Ava asks again. Katie then sighs, and says, “Fine...” Ava smiles as Katherine gives in, and goes to give the man the food with her sister.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Ava tilts her head at the man, grabbing onto Katherine’s shirt in slight fear. “Uhm, mister, I-I don’t know what that means...” Ava says quietly, taking a step behind Katherine, as to hide herself. “Tch, stupid kid.” The man insults Ava this time, instead of her mother. Ava hides behind Katie, whimpering quietly. Katherine sighs and takes Ava’s hand, saying quietly, “Let’s go...” As they turn to leave, she pulls out a small iron shiv and throws it at the man’s glass of beer. Ava doesn’t notice, as she’s already nearly skipping out of the building. The glass shatters all over the man and Katherine calmly walks out, following Ava.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Ava stares in awe at the necklace. Letting go of Katie’s hand, she approaches the lady, tugging on her shirt. The lady looks down at Ava, kneeling down. “Hey there, can I help you?” The lady ask with a smile. Pointing to the necklace, Ava exclaims, “It's pretty!” The lady’s smile grows, and Ava runs back to Katherine, giggling.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?:no.
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Medori.
Physical description: Katherine looks like an older version of Ava, standing at 5’4’’ with long dark blonde hair and navy blue eyes. She prefers to wear dark colored clothing as it makes her less noticeable. She has a small petite slender build that helps her get around when it comes to stealing or sneaking about.
Screen capture of your skin: Tiffdenosaur is making me one.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
I was born to two parents, a mother named Lillian Cecile and a father named Alexander Cecile. We were a moderately rich family, which didn’t play a big role in my life as I was the kind of kid who hated being spoiled. Well to be honest, I was actually pretty spoiled with everything until the age of ten, when my little sister Ava was born. She received all the attention from my parents and I felt jealous of her. Then again, what else would a spoiled ten year old girl have thought? I began to spend my time in the woods, alone, not wanting to see my sister. Slowly over the years, I began to pull myself away from my parents, not wanting to be spoiled anymore. I did small things like skip dinner and hunt for my own food. Luckily, my parents never noticed as they were too absorbed in Ava. I trained myself to fight, wandering off into the southern parts of the forest, the dangerous part of it. I would fight against the monsters there, using my makeshift weapons to fend them off the best I could. I always came home bruised and battered, but I wore a leather cloak to hide my wounds and my parents would be worried about Ava more, so no one noticed.
Everyone in the village had forgotten about me and I think that my parents kind of forgot about me as well so life was good until the age of 14. That was when my mother became ill and I had to take care of my little sister Ava. I didn’t mind it at all really, I had put the jealousy behind years ago. After half a year of struggling against the illness, my mother passed away so I was forced to tell Ava about her death. Not wanting to see my little sister sad and upset, I told her that our mother had fallen deep asleep. Our father became depressed and he took his frustration out on me. He blamed me for not being there for our mother and not being a good enough child. He would beat me all the time even in front of Ava, calling me a worthless piece of trash. I took the beating and stopped myself from fighting back, I didn’t want to hurt our father in front of Ava so I stayed silent throughout the beating, hiding all indications of pain. One day, while I was getting beat, Ava jumped in front of me and took a blow to the face. Something triggered inside of me as I saw Ava get hit and I immediately started fighting back, beating my stupid father mercilessly. He fell unconscious and I rushed out of our house, taking Ava with me. I realized I didn’t bring any money with me and I didn’t want to go back to our village, so we went to the forest to hide. Whenever I felt it was safe to leave Ava alone, I sneak back to the village and eavesdrop. Through those eavesdropping sessions, I heard of an airship that was taking people to an island called the Capitol. I brought Ava with me back to the village and we snuck onto the airship, heading to this ‘Capitol’ place.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To protect Ava by all means necessary and keep her safe.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): She is strong and quick on her feet, capable of adapting to any combat situation. In combat, she likes to use daggers or her bare hands, staying away from heavy weapons like swords, axes, or maces. She has excellent hearing and is an innovative eavesdropper, being able to hide anywhere in perfect stealth. She also can be a loyal friend to those she chooses to open up to.
Weaknesses: She tends to be reckless and irresponsible with herself, getting hurt often. She puts Ava in front of herself in terms of importance, meaning that she’ll do almost anything for Ava. She has a hard time trusting others and tries her best to stop herself from making any friends. Although she may seem fearless in the face of others, she becomes vulnerable when she feels safe and is all alone. Sometimes the stress of taking care of Ava takes its toll on her and she gets terrible nightmares.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
Tiffosaur; Ava Cecile - Katherine’s Younger Sister
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl. She watches as the pair of heavily armed and armoured men harass the young girl. She pulls out two metal daggers, cursing under her breath as she aims one at an armoured man. Her mind screams to just run and not be involved but she pictures Ava in the position of the young girl. In one swift motion, she quickly sends the two metal daggers flying towards the armoured man. They ricochet between the two armoured men, creating a loud noise that attracts all the guards to the area. Using the confusion, the young girl scrambles to her feet and takes off. Katherine gives a sigh of relief as her plan works and she silently leaves the scene as the guards come.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why? Katherine thinks about the man’s promises and sighs. Not finding any trust in this man, she just simply ignores the man and turns around, walking away.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
She walks down the street, looking around for any food to steal. Ava had fallen asleep so she had decided to go off and scavenge for more food. As she glances at the man and rolls her eyes, continuing to walk back down the street. Food is hard enough to find, She thinks to herself. If he wants food so bad then he’ll earn it instead of begging.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Katherine quietly sips some water as she sits down at the crowded tavern. It was some nice relaxation time for herself as Ava was asleep, sitting next to her. The man points at her and begins babbling random insults about her parents. Maybe this wasn’t the best place to grab a bite to eat and relax. She lets out a deep sigh and ignores the man, as she puts down her water and carries Ava on her back, walking out of the inn.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
She looks at the beautiful necklace and sighs. No time for nice things… We can barely afford any food to get for ourselves… As she walks off, an idea pops in her mind. Maybe Ava would like it too… Katherine turns around and walks up to the woman, saying, “Excuse me there… That’s a really nice necklace you have there. Do you know where I could get one like it…?” The woman smiles and looks down at Katie, saying, “Oh why thank you… I think I got it over at that shop down there.” She points to the shop and Katie nods, saying, “Thanks…” She walks over to the shop, saying to herself, “What am I even doing…?”
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Accepted:
Tiffosaur AND HydraliskJohn:
I liked the characters. Can't wait to rp with the both of them!
You two always seem to be together with every character heheh.
Anyway you two both know the website, so enjoy!
Just ask an admin / staff in-game to change your name and classes.
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When I play Minecraft, it feels like a game... You dont say?
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Chancellory
Physical description: Jessica 5’6 and she is 120 lbs. She has red hair and diamond colored eyes. She wears a white top and brown shorts. She also wears leather boots and a necklace she received from her mom. She is skinny girl and is very attractive.
Screen capture of your skin:Currently working on it.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Jessica was abandoned as a baby by a mother she has never met. She was left on the steps in front of the Orphanage as a little infant. But growing up in the orphanage was not a good experience for Jessica because all the other girls would make fun of her because she was weird. She would always run up to her room and cry her eyes out. They made her feel so unwanted that she started to believe the girls because they were so persistent on making fun of here. She hated it so much to the point where she even started to hurt herself always thinking that hurting herself would drown away the mental pain. She decided one day that she had enough she marched down from her room and confronted the girls and harsh words were exchanged. She decided that words weren’t enough and she punched one of the girls straight in the nose. She saw what she had done and ran up to her room. She had started to pack her bag franticly because she thought she would be arrested if the owners of the orphanage found out. She left as fast as she could and didn’t let anyone know where she was going. She wandered and wandered until she was in the middle of a forest she did not recognize. Her feet hurt but she kept on walking and the forest became very dark and the animals looked less friendly. She started to run over a small sound that spooked her. She ran to a small clearing in the middle of the woods with a brick house that had a woman working on her garden in the front. She tapped the women on the shoulder and asked her with tears running down his face where she was. She said she was a whole mile in the woods and she offered Jessica a place to stay for the night. Jessica gladly accepted that offer because she was very tired of walking through the woods. The next day the women made her breakfast. But she didn’t mention once about her leaving. Jessica was very skeptical about the women but she seemed nice and she seemed like someone Jessica could relate to. After a couple days she finally asked the woman why she had not kicked her out and the women replied “I haven’t kicked you out because I see a little bit of me in you” Jessica looked confused after the women said this and she said “Why is that?” The women smirk and said “Because I was a girl like you had no one to protect me and care for me. So i want to know if you would stay here and I would be your protector” Jessica’s eyes lit up and she hugged her new mom. Throughout the years Jessica mother had taught her and loved her and on her 19th birthday she told her that she should go to a place called the Capital and start to follow his dreams. Jessica thought about it and hugged her mom and told her that she was a wonderful mom. She accepted her mom’s offer and left the next day. She then boarded the next Airship to the Capital with the money her mom had gave her the day before.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To make her mom proud andfollow her dreams.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Jessica is a very friendly and kind girl. She also is very fast and probably can outrun most people. She also is a very good cook and could make a very delicious dish. She also is very pretty so looks aren’t a problem for her.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Jessica is very shy and doesn’t like to speak up so she might not be heard a lot . She is also Dyslexic so she can’t really read and write that well. She also is very weak so she can’t really handle fights that well.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Jessica sees the girl being harassed and she approaches the guards. She taps one on the shoulder and says in a soft ,quiet tone “Sir, What are you doing to her?” The man turns around and all his friends face Jessica. The man Jessica had tapped then says “Little lady I don’t think that’s any of ye’ business.” Jessica looks intimidated and backs up one step. She then replies to the man “If you don’t leave her alone i’ll get the guards.” The men hear this and look very angry. The man then says to Jessica “If you even try to call those guards I will rip your throat out and feed it to my dog!” Jessica puts a frightened expression on her and face as she backs up slowly. Jessica runs away from the men because she doesn’t want to know what would happen if she sticks around for much longer. She goes around the corner and sees a guard walking down the road. Jessica then, quickly bolts to the man and tells him with a cautious, soft tone “Come Quick! There is a girl being hurt!” The guards looks serious now and says “Okay show me the way.” Jessica then starts to guide the guard as fast as she can without losing him where the girl is being hurt. She points at the men and the guards starts running at them yelling “Stop where you are! If you try to leave I will use force!” The men then start to bolt away hoping that they won’t get caught. As the men leave Jessica runs to the girl and kneels down in front of her. The girl has a bloody nose and a black eye. Jessica then tell the girl “It’s Okay they can’t hurt you anymore.” The girl begins to cry and a puddle of tears begin to form around her. Jessica strokes her hair and helps her up. She puts her arm on the girls shoulder and takes her back to her apartment.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
Jessica looks at the man puzzled and says with a soft, kind tone “I’m sorry but i don’t think i can be apart of your crew.” The man looks at Jessica disappointed and replies “How about I double the offer and I add in another 20 coins?” Jessica thinks to herself that she can’t accept his offer,but he won’t go away until she gives him a good enough reason to decline. Jessica then replies in an irritated tone “To be honest with you Sir, I really don’t want this job. Could please not ask me again.” The man looks irritated and says to Jessica “Please i really need someone to work on my crew. Please I really need you to.” Jessica starts to feel bad for the man and needs to figure out an excuse to get out of this. She thinks for a while and replies to the man “I can’t accept your offer because I am pregnant and I don’t want the baby to be harmed.” The man then looks at Jessica sympathetically and say “Oh. I understand. I hope your baby turns out to be very healthy.” The man then gets up from his seat and walks out. Jessica puts her head on the counter and say quietly to herself “Thank Aneria he’s gone.” Jessica then begins to feel a sense of guilt and feels like she should apologize to the man. The next day she tries to find the man but, no one knows where she is. She later finds out that he and his crew had set out on an adventure. She feels guilty and knows her mother wouldn’t be proud of her.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Jessica sees the man and throws 2 coins in his cup. Jessica then tells the man “Here have this. Go and buy yourself a nice delicious meal.” The man then smiles at her and get ups. He then give her a big hug and Jessica and holds her breathe because of the foul stench coming from the man is horrid. She then pats him on the back and she pulls away from the hug because she cannot take the smell any longer. The man then says “May Aneria guide you, child!” He then runs off as if he had to go save someone’s life. She then smiles and turns to go walk to her house and get the foul stench off the old man off of her.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Jessica tries to ignore the blabbering ******* as he is insulting her. Jessica then gets up and go over to another spot in the Tavern. She sits down and starts to sip a glass of water. Then drunk man then walks over to table where Jessica is sitting and says “You are a *******. I hope you rot in the pits of hell.” Jessica looks a little more aggravated and pays no attention to the man. The men slaps the back of Jessica head to make her look at him. Another man notices this and walks over to the drunk man and pushes him. The man says to the drunk “Don’t treat women with such disrespect.” The drunk man doesn’t reply he just staggers out of the Tavern looking mighty ed. The man walks up to Jessica and say “I’m sorry about him. He just doesn’t act like himself when he’s drunk.” She smiles and keeps on drinking her water.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Jessica sees the necklace and is amazed by it’s color and detail. She is so amazed that she bumps into a stranger. Jessica falls on her bum and the stranger falls on his head. He then gets up and says “What was that for?” Jessica looks embarrassed as she replies “I’m so sorry. I was all my fault.” The man voice become more soft and kind as he says “It’s okay. Accidents are accidents.” He then helps Jessica up and she smiles and says “Well it was nice meeting you like i did.” The man chuckles and says “Yes it was indeed. Well good bye.” Jessica then waves good bye and walks off. She realized that she has developed a crush.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?no
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): TehAlphaGamer
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Essentially overpowering your character. Using blunt and unfair actions in things such as a fight. In a CvC battle, perhaps you should state "Swings sword at X's neck," rather than, "Decapitates X."
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Fighting or acting out-of-character in a strictly in-character situation, or any situation for that matter. Having outside knowledge that your character generally should not is an example of this.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Essentially, being something you're not. But not in that sense. Roleplaying is acting out the life of an entirely self-generated character, giving them their own myriad of traits, looks, fears, etc.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: Nobody. They ruin both the charm and flow of the game as they make it scores more unfair than others who don't have the mods.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: By having it agreed to in a CvC battle, usually if the other wants to change their character.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When you really need to. Always parenthesize your words as you speak them when OOC.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Nobody at the start. You must go to the magery academy and earn a magery degree before you can use magic.
Who are the Fallen?: Also known as the "Medori," the fallen are old and superstitious folk, who often turn their heads to peace to resolve certain situations.
When and how did our current government come to be?: 168 A.R., Following defeat of the old Linyera Monarchy; much of the previous empire's land was taken and now much of it is held by the Chancellery.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: A group who works to protect the islands and its inhabitants from monsters throughout the area.
What are the Net and Essence?: The Net is a network residing under the islands. If you are to fall, you are bounced back up at the cost of all held items. However, if you have Essence, your items can be recovered at the cost of three levels. Essence is a power that is earned from achieving certain obstacles. It shows a mark of experience to those who have much of it.
Who is/was Jensen?: A man who actually is Aneria's husband, set out to find five ancient artifacts, hidden under five temples under the islands. He had the power of jumping from body-to-body and otherwise possessed fathomless magical power.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Yes, much over an extended period of times. Having been on many Medieval-themed and nuclear wasteland/Fallout-type servers.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: I just get bored, or have to reset my Minecraft client. I look at other servers and other places to enjoy myself.
Character Information
Name: Manfred "Manny" Sorben
Age: 35
Class: Laborer
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellery
Physical description: Tall and regularly built. Wears a white shirt with brown coveralls and black boots. With copper-framed glasses. Skin is a darker shade. Manfred has a very bad case of a receding hairline, making him mostly-bald even at an age like thirty.
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Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Manfred was born and descends from a long line of engineers in his family. His father, Anton Sorben, was a naval architect well known for designing a few airships in an expeditionary scout fleet. His mother, Judi, was a redstone engineer also known for making weapons systems for those said ships. Unfortunately, they also wanted to keep all family members within that legacy, so, even after all the resistance they put up, they made their son Manfred want to be part of that. Of course, after some time, he got used to it, but regardless.
Manfred was raised in the Capital in a decently wealthy household. Socially, he was known to not flower that much. He often preferred the accompaniment of contraptions he built to amuse himself rather than many friends. And teachers who looked at his work noticed he often drew; but it wasn't just scribbles and doodles, he often drew somewhat complicated schematics. He excelled arithmetically, and often impressed his teachers with impressive calculations. But, he was still shown to be reckless and cocky, and his headstrong actions often resulted badly, in the workplace or not.
Manfred's parents eventually left. Not even with a notice. They just...left. They ventured off for more work on islands elsewhere, and had not communicated much with Manfred. He was heartbroken, and had no choice but to move on in life. With his skills, he tried to get a job in construction, and that was mildly successful, but couldn't hold onto a position for long. However, with the jobs he had, he was noted to be quick and efficient, but also for having obsessive-compulsive tendencies, and sometimes bothered colleagues his over-encumbering desire for perfection.
Manfred himself was always fascinated when he saw the airships, though. Seeing the air-faring vessels always fascinated him, and he began studying to go to a naval academy when he was about 25 years old. Unfortunately, he was not admitted to the school due to overfill at the time. But he continued to go around various islands for construction contractors, doing that for roughly 8 years. But, of all places, he had never considered the Capital. He came there and began to hunker down, and continued to try to find work. He still remains there today, as a citizen of the Chancellery. While work is always abundant, sometimes finding the credentials for it can be a chore, and those credentials are something Manfred hopes he has.[
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): Necessity is the mother of invention, isn't it? Manfred's intention is to build what is necessary to make life both efficient and easier for the people of the land. To help apply his skills both civilly and militarily.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Physically, he is well known to be skilled with his hands. He can work quickly and with ease, but being in a fight and similar situations are not things he's very fond of. Personally, he is able to instill direct judgement thanks to a rather calculating personality. He is shown to be direct and explains things to people how they are; no need to sugar-coat it.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Physically, Manfred's major weakness is his poor eyesight. He must wear glasses to help him see better, and is still somewhat nearsighted. Personally, he is shown to be somewhat of a scaredy-cat of sorts and fears a few things; most notably insects, arachnids, etc.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
**Walks up, quite nervously.** "H-hello, gentleman...may I ask you to please leave that young voman alone?" **One of the men pulls away, beaming down upon Manfred.** "What're ya' gonna do 'bout it?" he asks, spitting to the side. Manfred stutters slightly, "I-I...ah...um..." **Looks towards girl, who looks at him with moist eyes and mouths, "help."** "Sir, may you please direct, me to the...to the nearest constabulary?" **The same man glares at Manfred.** "Oh no, friend, I know what you're tryin' to do." **Balls up fist.**
**Manfred looks towards the girl again, mouthing "I'm so sorry."** He turns to the man. "I'm...I'm so very sorry, I must be on my vay!" **Runs off in the opposite direction.**
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
"M-me? That sounds...Wunderbar! Sailing the skies vould be fantastic! To explore those great distances, encounter new places! I must finish up my vork here, first. Also, I vould need to go through some time with resigning my position. But, after that, it vould be lovely to be part of your crew!"
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
**Old beggar sits at a bench, pleading.** "Hello, sir, could you please spare some food?" **Manfred looks at the man, where he notices he has a deep, teary look in his eyes.** "Oh my...I am so sorry you have to live a life like...like this." **Pulls out a small amount of currency.** "Here, take this, it vill get you some food from the nearby market." **Turns around, waving.** "I must be going, now." In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
**Turns around, with a slight smile on his face.** "Sir, I understand if you are a little...vell...intoxicated, but I'd wish that you vouldn't insult my mother like this. So please, be off!" You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
**Approaches girl, smiling.** "Gutentag, my fair miss. I just must let you know that this necklace of yours is stunning! Is that centerpiece crafted from real lapis lazuli? It looks marvelous!"
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?: No, not necessarily.
Other notes: For starters, I just want to keep the Germanic accent, as I feel like it adds some variety. Secondly, I just wanted to note that I'm sorry if it's not too great, the bio. I mean, most write and elaborate on it later. Unfortunately, completely overhauling a character and the fact that the bio is the length of most standard essays makes it a bit difficult.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
12/19/2011
Posts:
52
Minecraft:
MiraMuru
Member Details
Accepted:
MrIce881- I was content with the amount of words you had for your Biography and ICRs, so good job with that. Good job with getting your new character accepted as well. Deferred:
TehAlphaGamer- Even though I can tell that you're quite familiar with RP and creating unique characters, this one isn't suitable for the server. There is no known life on the land below the islands, and the only known groups of people are the Chancellory and the Medori. If you are a citizen of the Chancellory, then you were raised/you reside in the Capital. A similar situation for the Medori. There is no possibility for your character to have come from a place named "Avdolia" as that place doesn't exist. I do apologize, but your biography needs to be changed for you to be accepted. Perhaps you should change your character as well, as it might be easier to do so. I don't know. Your character would have to have come from either the Medori island, Constance, or the Capital as a citizen of the Chancellory. Unless there's a somewhat unique case that staff has approved of before-hand. (Which this is not.)
Also, your character can't be an engineer. Just start with something simple, and work your way up once your character has been accepted on the server.
Deferred:
TehAlphaGamer- Even though I can tell that you're quite familiar with RP and creating unique characters, this one isn't suitable for the server. There is no known life on the land below the islands, and the only known groups of people are the Chancellory and the Medori. If you are a citizen of the Chancellory, then you were raised/you reside in the Capital. A similar situation for the Medori. There is no possibility for your character to have come from a place named "Avdolia" as that place doesn't exist. I do apologize, but your biography needs to be changed for you to be accepted. Perhaps you should change your character as well, as it might be easier to do so. I don't know. Your character would have to have come from either the Medori island, Constance, or the Capital as a citizen of the Chancellory. Unless there's a somewhat unique case that staff has approved of before-hand. (Which this is not.)
Also, your character can't be an engineer. Just start with something simple, and work your way up once your character has been accepted on the server.
Edited. Hopefully it's a tad better.
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I'm going to get my friend to fix it next week, so I won't be on for a while. extra
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Character Information
Name: Amelia Swann
Age: 18 (Soon to turn 19 IG)
Class: Crafts(wo)man
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Chancellery
Physical description: Amelia has light brown hair, slightly curly with bangs over her eyes. Her hair is also very long as she doesn't cut it much, it is silky and smooth. Her eyes are a deep-ish and light brown. She also usually has black bags under her eyes from lack of sleep. Her physical structure is weak and her height is quite small. Her skin is also gentle and soft, no scars or wounds. She generally wears a large brown vest with a white gold-trimmed under shirt. She also wears a large red skirt that goes down to her ankles.
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(Btw sorry that I used the same hairstyle as Lassara, I just can't seem to make anything better then what Mira made lol) I CHANGED HER EYES TO BROWN BTW!
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Amelia sits in the corner of the room, trying to shield her face with her book, as the only light that remains in the room is where she is standing. The torch slowly starts to dim, running out of cloth to keep it alight.
Amelia hesitantly reads the book, trying to avoid the dark corners of the room as she reads. Her mind playing tricks with her, movements coming from the shadows. Her dark thoughts running through her head, trying to trick her...
"You're weak..."
"Pathetic..."
"Worthless..."
Amelia tries to shake off these thoughts. She puts this book down and pulls out another, the book seems old but she cherishes it.
She opens it slowly, dust trickling down the spine.
The first page, with handwriting of a younger child, reading...
"Amelia's Diary."
She reads the first few pages which hold some basic pages of just feelings...
As she delves deeper into the book, it holds longer articles, the handwriting showing changes. She skims over some of the pages, slowly reading some...
*Flashback to when she was 16*
Amelia sat by the tree, frowning as the voices tormented her.
She had her legs up to her chest, with her arms wrapped around her legs.
Warm, glistening tears rolled down her face as she looked down upon the swaying green grass... The blades of grass moving in motion with the wind. Her warm, transparent tears dropping and sliding onto her legs and littering the green blades of grass, splashing on impact.
As the sun shone onto the blades, showing the litters of tears around her... A shadow is casted upon them. She doesn't want to look up at the shadow, afraid of what might be waiting for her. She looked down into her lap, covering her face, hoping the shadow would go away and reveal the light once again for her.
Instead the shadow spoke to her...
It was unlike her normal terrors; this one spoke with grace, beauty and joy... It spoke softly to her.
"Hey... You'll be alright..."
The shadow seemed to understand her.
She felt the breeze rush past her again, as the shadow subsides a little, kneeling down in front of her, going into a less tormenting and less fearful size.
Amelia looked up at the shadow, her eyes widening as a person, a woman, stands in front of her.
She never really liked talking to people, even looking at them she found terrifying.
The figure had bright red hair, shining in the sun and swaying in the wind.
Amelia just looked up at the woman, her eyes widened. The woman rested her hand on Amelia's head, gliding it through her hair to comfort her.
The woman seemed to know Amelia was in some sort of pain, not physical; but emotional.
Amelia stares at the woman for a while, the glistening, warm tears slowly subsiding; her eyes still red from crying.
The woman pulled out a little red book, she gave it to Amelia...
"Take it... For your feelings and thoughts..."
Amelia nodded a hesitant thank you, unable to speak. The woman understood her pain and tried to calm her.
"It's okay... I'm not here to harm you... My name is Roselie Nightray."
Amelia looked at her, tilting her head. She wondered about her, remembering the name Roselie.
The woman continues speaking...
"If you ever find my daughter... Please tell her I'm sorry, and that I love her..."
Amelia looks confused at her, but remembers the words.
The woman smiled at her, stroking Amelia's hair once more before she walked away, waving and smiling. Amelia was confused at the woman...
Why did she help her?
Why did she give her this book?
Why did she tell her those words?
These thoughts ran through Amelia's mind, over and over as she passed through the day, eventually writing down the woman's name in her book as well as her words that she said.
She then to wrote in the book, her feelings and thoughts... her emotions; whether good or bad...
*End of Flashback*
Amelia finally realizes that she had tears dripping down her face as she went through the flashback. She wipes away the tears and flips to a new page, with slightly more developed handwriting. She skims over it, making sure it's the right one, then she reads it thoroughly, to bring back memories. Memories she will always cherish...
*Flashback to when she was 17*
Amelia enjoyed time with her brother. Her brother, Darian, was the closest person she had to a friend. Although she didn't know whether to consider him one, as she only got to see him sometimes... But she still cherished the moments with him.
Amelia was outside, with her brother. Since Darian just finished doing some more home schooling to Amelia, he decided to take her for a walk. Darian was much older than her, he was in his mid 20s while she was still only 17. She loved having him around though, she felt safe with him, knowing the creatures that torment and haunt her would be afraid. Darian was part of the priest hood after all, and occasionally showed off his magic to Amelia, which she found fun. Although, while on their walk they encountered a pond, one they haven't noticed before. Darian, being brave and wanting to show off, decided to go for a swim. He tried to get Amelia to join him; she refused at first, but eventually decided to hop in.
Darian and Amelia jumped in together, they played in the pond, having fun.
The time she spent with Darian was the most fun she had ever had, in her whole life...
Although people saw them, knowing who they were and sent in complaints.
Once Darian and Amelia arrived home, they had the most ruthless scolding they have had.
Their mother was terminally ill, so their father had to deal with it.
Their father, being extremely busy, was never really in a good mood, especially to now have to deal with all that.
As much as she was scolded at, Amelia loved that day, and always cherished it...
*End Flashback*
Amelia sits there, staring down at the page.
She has a happy expression across her face as she remembers the flashback, the tears dripping down from her face...
She remembers her brother, he was her closest thing to a friend.
Amelia sighs, flipping to one last page, skimming over it with a disgusted look...
It was the day before she moved...
*Flashback to the day before she moved*
Amelia stumbled as she walked, her hair moving in motions with the wind and bouncing as she walked.
She looked down as she stumbled over the ragged road towards her house.
The sun shone bright towards her direction, the breeze washed over her.
As she arrived to her gate for her home, the sun in her direction was blocked out three large shadows... The breeze she once felt... Gone.
...Something was wrong...
As Amelia looked up at the source of the three shadows, it was three bulky armoured guards.
The guards looked down upon her, moving closer as Amelia backed up a little.
They formed a neat triangle in front of her, she was extremely scared...
Not knowing what to do.
The guards started harassing her, pushing her around and threatening her.
Amelia just stood there and took it, crying from the pain, mentally and physically.
They then tried to take advantage of her, tricking her into believing things.
Amelia started to close her eyes, hoping they would just leave her alone, she got ready to brace for some more beatings, as she hurt the clang of metal and the guards groaning.
She kept her eyes closed, not wanting to look, but curiosity got the better of her and she opened her eyes.
She looked in horror, her face going pale as Matthew cupped his bleeding eye, blood rushing from his hand as he is pulled away and rushed off. Amelia's father and Matthew's father are left there, fending off the guards with their swords.
She is then picked up by her older brother, she closed her eyes and dug her face into Darian's shoulder, crying.
...
When she woke up from blacking out in Darian's arms, she was in her home. She could hear her mother, father and brother talking...
She couldn't hear them, so she stayed in her room, crying.
After some while of her sitting in her room, absolutely quiet, her parents and brother came in.
She was told the news...
She was being sent away...
For the rest of the day, people were saying their goodbyes and she was packing.
She didn't speak much to anyone, she just tried to be alone, to avoid everyone, to reflect on herself...
Once the next day arrived and they were packing on to the airship, she could see everyone saying more goodbyes to her, she didn't care this time, she thought they didn't care about her.
She listened to her thoughts this time...
"They don't care about you..."
"They hate you..."
"Why even try to act nice..."
She didn't dismiss these thoughts, she instead reflected on them for the most of the journey, not knowing where she would end up...
*End flashback*
Amelia looks down at the book, slowly closing it...
She looked into the darkness, quivering in fear as she rests her head against the floor, crying and sniffling.
She could hear footsteps, growing louder as she looks into the darkness.
Out stepped a large monster, shooting towards her. She screamed as she closed her eyes briefly, then opened them...
Looking into nothing but darkness again...
Looking into nothing but the rest of her life...
Being devoured by shadows...
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): What motivates Amelia is her learning more about the real world. Since, most of her life, she was stuck in a bubble of her own imagination and such she never really knew much about the real world. She also aspires to be something big, possibly famous, but she only knows that from reading fictional books.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Amelia was educated while with her family. Her older brother taught her, she felt comfortable with him as he pretended to believe in her imaginary friends as well, Amelia didn't know he pretended though. Her brother taught her reading and writing, also other educational. Amelia knows how to control some of her emotions VERY well. She never gets angry unless something has hurt her deeply. Although some emotions she can't control. She also seems crazy or evil to some people, but inside she is strongly innocent, she is very nice and wouldn't hurt someone unless provoked. She is very sweet and cute, she hates everything to do relating to mean and harmful things. Although she doesn't know what many harmful things are, but she tries her best to avoid them if she knows they are bad. She also has SOME medical knowledge due to her brother being a priest and spending a lot of time with him.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):
Amelia is generally weak, she is unable to lift heavy things and is easily hurt. Her physical structure is fragile and she has absolutely no fighting skill. Amelia is scared of a lot of things, spiders, blood, ghosts and undead, the dark, etc. She is scared of most things, being small and weak she never really wants to try and face her fears. Amelia also has a lot phobias/disorders such as claustrophobia, insomnia and nightmare disorder (Night Terrors). Her nightmare disorder brings her to have extreme nightmares that she often finds real, such as death and such. Her imagination and her nightmare disorder also bring her to often believe that what she thinks is fake, is real (Schizophrenia). If she thought of a monster under her bed, she would believe it and often see it through her imagination. Amelia is also extremely gullible. Since she didn't have any friends growing up, besides her imaginary ones. She was taught that everything is true, even the things in her head. Amelia also has dark thoughts that run through her head, she tries to avoid them as she doesn't want them at all, but they haunt her. Since Amelia didn't socialize that much during her childhood, she has trouble talking to people for the first time and is often scared of them, even if they may be younger than her. She also hates drawing attention to herself.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
Yes,
Matthew Cardonell (Dedoralive / Shawn) is from the same hometown as Amelia.
Eleonore Nightray (Tiffosaur / TIFFANY). Amelia has met Eleonore's mother and will pass on a message.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation. Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Amelia looks at the girl, studying her. Amelia's thoughts would trace through her "Let her die..." "She is worthless..." "Look at how pathetic she is". Amelia tries to escape these thoughts, then seeing what she could /do/ to help the girl.
She attempts many things, throwing rocks at them (which only landed about 2 meters from her) or trying to get Guards' attention (who just laughed at her).
Amelia eventually decides that there isn't really anything she can do, she just hopes that someone will notice. She looks around at the various crowds around, trying to get their attention without causing disturbance or even remotely communicating with them. After a while Amelia gives up, she feels sorry and guilty that she couldn't help the girl, not that she would've done much anyway if she tried to take on any of them.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
Amelia just stares at the man for a while, until he questions her. Amelia is extremely scared and talks in stutters.
"I..I..Airship? ...no-no-I can..can't fly..."
Amelia then looks around for someone to help her, without success, she turns back to the man who is still staring at her. She tries to cover her face hoping he would go away. He still stands there looking at her, she can smell the rotting and alcoholic smell his mouth emits.
The man tries to convince her to join, as gullible as she is, she obeys, scared as she is. Although while he isn't looking she runs off, scared.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Amelia would try to ignore him, and as the man keeps begging her she would just stare at him for a fair bit. Thoughts go through her head, "Help yourself, you don't need this guy" and "Let him starve, watch him suffer". She would try to avoid these thoughts, but also avoid him. Eventually her strong emotion of guilt and sympathy would fall in and she would try to give him any food she can, instead giving him a rock, thinking it's an apple through her imagination. The man yells and threatens her and she runs away crying thinking those thoughts were right.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Amelia covers her face, hoping he would go away as she cries a bit into her hands. She remembers her mother, regretting leaving her.
Dark thoughts run through her head, "Get him back", "You're stronger then this... you underestimate yourself...".
She cries a bit more, trying to hide herself from the man by covering her face again. Since he doesn't go away and just laughs pathetically at her, she gets up and tries to leave, walking over to the door slowly still cupping her face with her hands.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Amelia passes by the street, stumbling over the cracks in the road. She sees the passing woman, the shining blue and gold necklace. It shows some significance as it seems to be a diamond necklace. Amelia shows some interest, but doesn't know how to go about it. Her thoughts tell her to steal it, to make money from it, but she refuses and decides to just look at the lady's necklace in awe. The lady eventually starts to get a bit awkward and she walks along, Amelia shakes her head and keeps walking as well, embarrassed.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Noooope.
Other notes: Amelia may seem evil, but she truly isn't, she is just innocent
Name: Matthew Cardonell
Age:19
Class: Swordsman
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Chancellery
Physical description: He is around normal height at 5"10, rather muscular, defined features, black hair, Handsome lad all around, except for a scar over his left eye, he dresses well.
Screen capture of your skin: Unavailable atm.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliché manner.): Matthew steps onto the docks, his pockets jingling with the money he was given, he knows it isn't safe to have it cling and clang around, but no one seems to be around. He cups his hands and breathes into them, warming them up. He looks around at the docks, frowning a bit. "Is this the place she were wanted to go to?" he thinks to himself. He sighs and walks forward, and stops dead in his tracks, he hears armor clanging, guards. Matthew hated all guards, not because he broke the law, but because of what they did to him at his home town, or Amelia rather.
(Flashback time)After a long day of picking up scraps at his father's smith. Matthew's step-father's name was 'Henry Cardonell'. His true father's name was 'Lucas Nightray', and Matthew knew it, but he decided to take on Henry's last name since he had been with him since birth. He decided to stop by and see Amelia, after all, it had been a while since they had seen each other; and Matthew does have a rather large crush on her. As he walks towards her house. He notices three guards, all in a triangle, one in the middle, the other two at his side, they seem to be fixated on something, or someone. As he looks closer, his eyes flare with anger, they are trying to take advantage of Amelia (This was when he had two eyes). He quickly draws his sword that his father gave him for his birthday, which wasn't too long ago. "Off her you PIGS" He shouts at the guards. One of them turns, and scoffs at him, "Go on home kid! Dis be guards business onleh." Said the guard who turned. At this point Matthew didn't care that that they were armored. He didn't care that they outnumbered him, he only wanted Amelia safe, and them dead.
He swung at the guards chest with his sword, the guard jumped back and drew his own sword. "Dat yer bes move boy!?" The guard yelled at him. Enraged Matthew lunged again, but the guard swung at him before he was close, as his sword was longer than Matthews. It hit him on the eyebrow, slicing downwards into his eye, causing him tremendous pain. Matthew clutches his eye with one hand, the blood trickling between his fingers, he looks at them with his other, even angrier.
Matthew wouldn't give up, Amelia was his friend, and even though she may not feel the same way, she was his whole world, and if they messed with her, they might as well mess with him too. He holds his eye still, and takes his sword in his hand and with all his might swings at the guards chest. Unprepared, as the guard was focused on the blood, his chest is struck, and a deafening screech can be heard as the sword cuts through the metal, causing the guard to hunch over in pain, by this time the other two have turned to him, they are angry, and ready to fight, swords drawn. They both lunge at him, from each side, he is cut on his arm, and dodges the sweep for his legs, and then they both attack again, he blocks one, they cut his side, he is angry, but not even his rage can beat skill like this. After a while Matthew is cut up, he is bleeding profusely. His vision is blanking in and out, he is moving by instinct, dodging some, but not nearly enough of the attacks.
Matthew's and Amelia's fathers rushed up, wielding swords Matthews father had made, and they protected Matthew, sending the guards away. They got him to the town doctor as quickly as possible, during the whole time all he asked was if Amelia was okay, and where she was, how she felt. After a few months the doctor had him healed, and back to normal, well; almost normal. His left eye is cut in two pieces, the doctor gave him a bandage to wear, which he did to help it heal, but after a while, he got used to it, and didn't hide it, it gave him a sense of purpose, reminding him everyday why he gets up, why he practices with the sword, and why he followed her. After the incident, Amelia's parents decided to send her away, to the "Capital", Matthew begged his parents endlessly to go, he worked, and saved up money, just so he could go with her. Until Finally, he had enough to pay for the trip, before he left his father gave him his blessing, some spare coins, and a sword, one of his finest.(End flashback time). He watched as the guards passed, holding his breath. As soon as they pass he takes a breathe, pats on his shirt for a moment, then walks into the Capital.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): He wants to win Amelia's heart, and he will follow her to ends of the earth to protect her.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He is very strong, he is skilled with swords and daggers, he is very loyal, He is very brave as well, He isn't tricked too easily. He has a slightly above average intelligence. When he is enraged, he blocks out pain, he doesn't know when to stop, this can be bad too, but it is also helpful.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Over his left eye is a scar given to him by from the guards of his home town. He cannot see out of it, and hitting it would cause him much pain. And because he is very strong, he isn't very fast when it comes to running. He is over protective of Amelia, and I guess if being anti-social is a weakness, then put that here too.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
Yes,
(Jaeden111) Amelia. She is his reason for moving.
(Tiffosaur) Eleonore. She is his half sister.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation. Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armored men harassing a young girl. Instantly Matthew is reminded of the incident with Amelia, no girl should have to go through that. "And just /what/ in the name of Aneria, are you two oafs doing to that young lady!?" He shouts at them. Instead of waiting for one to turn like he made the mistake of doing, he pushes one to the side roughly and draws his sword. "Are these men giving you trouble miss?" *The young lady nods* Matthew draws his attention to the one nearest the girl. He kicks at his knee cap with full force. The armored man was expecting an attack from the upper body and his knee cap is kicked at, disabling his leg for enough time to beat him on the forehead with the hilt of Matthews sword. At this point the other man is back on his feet, glaring at Matthew. The man steps forward and Matthew reaches down and flings a small pile of dirt towards his eyes then goes to tackle him. The armored man swats the dirt away but doesn't see him rushing at him, he is tackled and his head hits the stone behind him. Matthew stands up looking down at him, and looks back at the girl. "Please, get out of here, they won't hurt you anymore." she nods and asks as she leaves "Wh-what is your name?" He replies to her hesitantly. "Matthew Cardonell.."
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why? "Ello young man! If ya join me crew I ken promise ya riches beyond ya dreams!" Ever since the incident, Matthew has been skeptical about peoples true intentions, and besides, he isn't here to go adventuring, he is here to win Amelia's heart, and that's what he intends to do. "No sir, I won't be joining. I have much more important matters to attend to." The man frowns, then disregards him and goes to the next man on the street.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Matthew looks down at the man, his family wasn't exceptionally rich, but he was never without food. "S-sonny.. can you spare some bread for me please? I-I haven't eaten in days.." The old man says in a frail voice. Matthew then reaches into his bag and pulls out a loaf of bread wrapped in some paper. "Here you go sir." He takes half of the loaf and hands it to the man. Then man looks up at him, eyes widening. "Bless you lad! May Aneria bless you for many years to come!" He says happily, nomming on the bread as Matthew walks away.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Matthew doesn't take kindly to insults about his family, or anyone close to him, especially /not/ his mother. "What did you just say to me? You good for nothing drunkard?" The man repeats the insult to him, louder so more people can here. Matthew nods. "Thought so." He quickly sends a fist at his face, connecting quickly, knocking the man onto the ground, as he was already tipsy enough. "I hope you wake up with more of a brain than you have now. Cause you are just pathetic." He walks for the door, not looking back at the man.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Matthew walks by a very wealthy looking lady, and a gleaming necklace around her neck catches his eye. He thinks of how good that would look on Amelia, and how happy she could be with it. "Excuse me ma'am?" The lady turns to him. "Yes?" he motions to her necklace. "Might I ask where you got such beautiful jewelry?" She looks at him strangely. "Whyy..." He looks at her eyes. "I've got this girl.. and I think she might look good in that." *He smiles a bit* The lady smiles too. "I understand where you're coming from. I have about 12 more at home anyways." She shrugs and takes off the necklace, offering it to him with one hand. His eyes widen and he looks at her, his hand hovering under it. "What's the catch?" She giggles. "Just treat her nicely." He smiles. "I wouldn't have it any other way Ma'am." He grasps the bottom of the necklace carefully, and puts it in his bag for later.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? I do not.
Other notes: http://www.minecraft...e/page__st__680 (Link to my first app, as this is a new character :3)
Jaeden111- Good app, your character seems interesting and you've thought about her quite a bit.
Dedoralive / Shawn:
I liked it, some well detail and the strengths and weaknesses matched well. :D. Can't wait for the RP!
Btw remember to get that skin ASAP
Other notes:no
Mrice881:
There were multiple things that will need improving.
First off, being more enthusiasm in your bio and ICRs.
Such as, more emotions, more thought and such. Also, with your strengths, some of it didn't really match your bio as much.
I won't give details as to which, because I will leave that up to you, you should be able to find out.
But also, there were a lot of typos in your app, which will need to be fixed.
I would also like some more detail in the strengths and weaknesses.
Character Information
Name: Cosimo Arundiel
Age: 26
Class: Laborer
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Chancellery
Physical description: Cosimo has light brown hair, and he has green eyes, he is around normal height, 5"10 or so, he is rather slim looking, he does have quite a bit of muscle, but it is nothing too significant looking. His face is very serious looking, and he doesn't smile often at all. He is handsome, but not easy to get along with.
Screen capture of your skin: N/a atm
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliché manner.): Cosimo's parents, Angela and Ermes Arundiel, wanted their son to know all he could of the way his family had been treated before he was born, of the persecution of the Arundiels, and the reasons they had been in hiding for so long. His mother taught him about the history of the Chancellery, and of the Arundiel's nobility during the Linyerian Era. valued his family's history, and developed an overall hate for the citizens of the Chancellery, for the way they treated his family for so many years; as he believed that they had done nothing to deserve it. He doesn't let it get in the way of the way he acts though, but he often speaks what he is thinking, if he thinks someone is acting unintelligent he will most likely tell them.
His father taught him to be wary of all people who are not family, he also taught him how to defend himself. And because Cosimo wasn't very big, he mostly worked on disarms, and pressure points, he learned just where to strike and just how to strike. But even though he learned pressure points, against armored opponents he can't do too much. He excels in unarmed and in disarming weapons. His father also told him a saying that he keeps close to heart, "The less you say, the more meaningful your words will seem." Cosimo Besides teaching him history, and how to defend himself, his parents also had high expectations for Cosimo, they wanted him to be very intelligent, and most of all, they wanted him to honor the family.
Cosimo was never an emotional child, and never cried when he didn't get what he wanted, he didn't throw fits, and he didn't even get happy very often, even on his birthday. He only seemed to stay serious during everything. There was only one time he cried. His younger sister Gianna (Now past) was a sweet hearted little girl, she was always nice to him, and would try to make him smile all the time. He loved his sister with all his heart, even if he didn't show it most of the time. But one day his sister had stayed out too long in the cold, and grew very sick. The local doctors didn't know what she had or how to treat it, so they just tried to feed her and keep her well hydrated.
Up until she passed she was always optimistic. One day he remember specifically, because of what she told him. Cosimo walked into Gianna's room, and silently walked over to her, looking at her pale skin and frail looking frame. When she opened her eyes she smiled a little bit, and tried to get up to hug him, but he gently bent over to hug her so she wouldn't waste valuable energy. She softly told him about her day, and what the doctors had said. His eyes were fixed on nothing, as if he were watching something very carefully. When she finished he nodded softly, still staring at nothing. Gianna Reached her hand to his cheek and said softly "Promise me you'll smile for me one day..?" At that point a single tear came from the corner of his eye, he knew she didn't have much time, and how could he smile knowing that? He stood up abruptly, wiping the tear away as he walked out. Gianna passed away the next day, a piece of him died that day, as if when she passed, a part of him did too.
Ever since then Cosimo hasn't been the same, as if he wasn't emotionless enough before, now he showed absolutely no emotion towards anything. Nothing could fill the void that she had covered called his heart. Cosimo wasn't very social either. Other than his mother and his father, Cosimo didn't meet too many family members growing up, except for Araesis, and his parents as well. But he didn't see them too much as the families did not want to draw too much attention to themselves or their children. Everyday Cosimo searches for that happiness, that feeling he got when she talked to him, but now that was gone, along with her.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To bring honor to his family, and search for happiness to fill the void his little sisters death left behind.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Cosimo isn't exceptionally strong, but he is strong enough to get what he needs done. He knows several disabling pressure points and can easily take out an un armored opponent. He is also quite quick.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): If an enemy Cosimo is fighting has armor, he will have a tough time beating them, as he is only used to un armored combat. Cosimo's Emotions are almost nonexistent, he can't express himself easily, as he doesn't feel happiness, or at least he believes he cannot. He is very anti-social, unless they are family, close, or he genuinely trusts them. (HOWEVER, he will help those he deems worthy of his help, heck he will even go out of his way if he thinks they are worth the time).
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): Araesis Arundiel (gamer9726) Cosimo's relative.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation. Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armored men harassing a young girl. Cosimo walks up quietly, and past the guards, he stops mid step when he notices the young girl in the middle. He turns slowly towards them, his feet moving the gravel around them, his emotionless face and eyes examining each of them. He quickly notes the armor, and plans to go about this peacefully if he can. "Ah, there you are." Cosimo steps forward and the pair turns awkwardly to face him. "Didn't I tell you to stay by me..?" He reaches his hand for the girl, and one of the guards shoots his arm out in front to stop him. Cosimo notices the underside of the arm is not covered in armor, and is accessible easily. The man grumbles at him. "Jus' whaddya think yer doin?" Cosimo sighs. "Picking up my daughter of course." The armored man looks at his emotionless face, then at the other guard, then steps aside to let him grab the girl. Cosimo replies almost sincerely. "Thank you for looking after her..." And walks away, setting the girl down not too far and figuring out where to send her.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why? "You sir! I ken get ya lotsa gold! All ya gotta do is join ma crew! And go on an adventure to mystical islands, Never before seen!" Cosimo has no interest in leaving to go on this man's adventure, or whatever he called it, so he sighs and holds up his hand to the man. "No, I will not join your 'crew' ..."
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food. And old man looks up at Cosimo walks by, noticing his rather fancy coat, and asks for a few coins. "Scuse me sir.. Might you spare some change for the less fortunate..?" Less fortunate!? Cosimo thought. This man didn't know unfortunate, not until he and his family have been persecuted for EIGHTY years. He holds up his hand and shakes his head slightly, then keeps on his way.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother. "Oi!" Says a drunk fellow. Cosimo ignores the man. "AM Talkin te YU Mr. Redcoat!" Cosimo turns to him slowly, then says in a low voice. "What." The man shouts an insult about his mothers weight or something of the like, Cosimo didn't care to remember, and turned back to his food. "Dats et! You Look at me when am Talkin to ya! You no good piece of-" In an instant Cosimo launched his fist into the man's ribcage, knocking the wind out of him, then going back to his meal.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears. A very wealthy looking woman walks by, when a certain gleaming gem around her neck catches Cosimo's eye, Cyan, Gianna's favorite color. He cringes inside a little bit, the memories returning, all of the sadness, and the pain. Cosimo decides having it would only make him remember the pain more, so he continues on down the path, suppressing his feelings again.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Nupity Nupe :3
Dedoralive:
I liked it, just gotta get that skin and you're good to go!
You know everything you need to know :3. Just ask an admin ingame to change your class.
I unclaim it and reclaim it in the name of Pepperones.
Tiffosaur AND HydraliskJohn:
I liked the characters. Can't wait to rp with the both of them!
You two always seem to be together with every character heheh.
Anyway you two both know the website, so enjoy!
Just ask an admin / staff in-game to change your name and classes.
IGN: TehAlphaGamer
Real-Life Age: 15
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): TehAlphaGamer
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Essentially overpowering your character. Using blunt and unfair actions in things such as a fight. In a CvC battle, perhaps you should state "Swings sword at X's neck," rather than, "Decapitates X."
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Fighting or acting out-of-character in a strictly in-character situation, or any situation for that matter. Having outside knowledge that your character generally should not is an example of this.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Essentially, being something you're not. But not in that sense. Roleplaying is acting out the life of an entirely self-generated character, giving them their own myriad of traits, looks, fears, etc.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: Nobody. They ruin both the charm and flow of the game as they make it scores more unfair than others who don't have the mods.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: By having it agreed to in a CvC battle, usually if the other wants to change their character.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When you really need to. Always parenthesize your words as you speak them when OOC.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Nobody at the start. You must go to the magery academy and earn a magery degree before you can use magic.
Who are the Fallen?: Also known as the "Medori," the fallen are old and superstitious folk, who often turn their heads to peace to resolve certain situations.
When and how did our current government come to be?: 168 A.R., Following defeat of the old Linyera Monarchy; much of the previous empire's land was taken and now much of it is held by the Chancellery.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: A group who works to protect the islands and its inhabitants from monsters throughout the area.
What are the Net and Essence?: The Net is a network residing under the islands. If you are to fall, you are bounced back up at the cost of all held items. However, if you have Essence, your items can be recovered at the cost of three levels. Essence is a power that is earned from achieving certain obstacles. It shows a mark of experience to those who have much of it.
Who is/was Jensen?: A man who actually is Aneria's husband, set out to find five ancient artifacts, hidden under five temples under the islands. He had the power of jumping from body-to-body and otherwise possessed fathomless magical power.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Yes, much over an extended period of times. Having been on many Medieval-themed and nuclear wasteland/Fallout-type servers.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: I just get bored, or have to reset my Minecraft client. I look at other servers and other places to enjoy myself.
Character Information
Name: Manfred "Manny" Sorben
Age: 35
Class: Laborer
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellery
Physical description: Tall and regularly built. Wears a white shirt with brown coveralls and black boots. With copper-framed glasses. Skin is a darker shade. Manfred has a very bad case of a receding hairline, making him mostly-bald even at an age like thirty.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Manfred was raised in the Capital in a decently wealthy household. Socially, he was known to not flower that much. He often preferred the accompaniment of contraptions he built to amuse himself rather than many friends. And teachers who looked at his work noticed he often drew; but it wasn't just scribbles and doodles, he often drew somewhat complicated schematics. He excelled arithmetically, and often impressed his teachers with impressive calculations. But, he was still shown to be reckless and cocky, and his headstrong actions often resulted badly, in the workplace or not.
Manfred's parents eventually left. Not even with a notice. They just...left. They ventured off for more work on islands elsewhere, and had not communicated much with Manfred. He was heartbroken, and had no choice but to move on in life. With his skills, he tried to get a job in construction, and that was mildly successful, but couldn't hold onto a position for long. However, with the jobs he had, he was noted to be quick and efficient, but also for having obsessive-compulsive tendencies, and sometimes bothered colleagues his over-encumbering desire for perfection.
Manfred himself was always fascinated when he saw the airships, though. Seeing the air-faring vessels always fascinated him, and he began studying to go to a naval academy when he was about 25 years old. Unfortunately, he was not admitted to the school due to overfill at the time. But he continued to go around various islands for construction contractors, doing that for roughly 8 years. But, of all places, he had never considered the Capital. He came there and began to hunker down, and continued to try to find work. He still remains there today, as a citizen of the Chancellery. While work is always abundant, sometimes finding the credentials for it can be a chore, and those credentials are something Manfred hopes he has.[
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): Necessity is the mother of invention, isn't it? Manfred's intention is to build what is necessary to make life both efficient and easier for the people of the land. To help apply his skills both civilly and militarily.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Physically, he is well known to be skilled with his hands. He can work quickly and with ease, but being in a fight and similar situations are not things he's very fond of. Personally, he is able to instill direct judgement thanks to a rather calculating personality. He is shown to be direct and explains things to people how they are; no need to sugar-coat it.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Physically, Manfred's major weakness is his poor eyesight. He must wear glasses to help him see better, and is still somewhat nearsighted. Personally, he is shown to be somewhat of a scaredy-cat of sorts and fears a few things; most notably insects, arachnids, etc.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
**Walks up, quite nervously.** "H-hello, gentleman...may I ask you to please leave that young voman alone?" **One of the men pulls away, beaming down upon Manfred.** "What're ya' gonna do 'bout it?" he asks, spitting to the side. Manfred stutters slightly, "I-I...ah...um..." **Looks towards girl, who looks at him with moist eyes and mouths, "help."** "Sir, may you please direct, me to the...to the nearest constabulary?" **The same man glares at Manfred.** "Oh no, friend, I know what you're tryin' to do." **Balls up fist.**
**Manfred looks towards the girl again, mouthing "I'm so sorry."** He turns to the man. "I'm...I'm so very sorry, I must be on my vay!" **Runs off in the opposite direction.**
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
"M-me? That sounds...Wunderbar! Sailing the skies vould be fantastic! To explore those great distances, encounter new places! I must finish up my vork here, first. Also, I vould need to go through some time with resigning my position. But, after that, it vould be lovely to be part of your crew!"
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
**Old beggar sits at a bench, pleading.** "Hello, sir, could you please spare some food?" **Manfred looks at the man, where he notices he has a deep, teary look in his eyes.** "Oh my...I am so sorry you have to live a life like...like this." **Pulls out a small amount of currency.** "Here, take this, it vill get you some food from the nearby market." **Turns around, waving.** "I must be going, now."
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
**Turns around, with a slight smile on his face.** "Sir, I understand if you are a little...vell...intoxicated, but I'd wish that you vouldn't insult my mother like this. So please, be off!"
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
**Approaches girl, smiling.** "Gutentag, my fair miss. I just must let you know that this necklace of yours is stunning! Is that centerpiece crafted from real lapis lazuli? It looks marvelous!"
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?: No, not necessarily.
Other notes: For starters, I just want to keep the Germanic accent, as I feel like it adds some variety. Secondly, I just wanted to note that I'm sorry if it's not too great, the bio. I mean, most write and elaborate on it later. Unfortunately, completely overhauling a character and the fact that the bio is the length of most standard essays makes it a bit difficult.
MrIce881- I was content with the amount of words you had for your Biography and ICRs, so good job with that. Good job with getting your new character accepted as well.
Deferred:
TehAlphaGamer- Even though I can tell that you're quite familiar with RP and creating unique characters, this one isn't suitable for the server. There is no known life on the land below the islands, and the only known groups of people are the Chancellory and the Medori. If you are a citizen of the Chancellory, then you were raised/you reside in the Capital. A similar situation for the Medori. There is no possibility for your character to have come from a place named "Avdolia" as that place doesn't exist. I do apologize, but your biography needs to be changed for you to be accepted. Perhaps you should change your character as well, as it might be easier to do so. I don't know. Your character would have to have come from either the Medori island, Constance, or the Capital as a citizen of the Chancellory. Unless there's a somewhat unique case that staff has approved of before-hand. (Which this is not.)
Also, your character can't be an engineer. Just start with something simple, and work your way up once your character has been accepted on the server.
Edited. Hopefully it's a tad better.