Accepted:
Lord_Sythis:
Nice application. The ICRs are a bit short but they represented your character well, as long as the ICRs detail your character then they are fine . Also you will not be able to play on the server until you get a skin, I trust that you can get a good skin hm?. The skin mustn't have jeans or look unrealistic. We also don't like modern type skins. Anyway, can't wait to see you on the server!
You can visit the website at www.aneria.enjin.com here you can get update on news and events .
~Jaeden
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Chancellory
Physical description: Kristal has blond hair as bright as the sun. and Emerald green eyes. She 6’1 and is 110 lbs. She has somewhat tan skin. She wears a green shirt and brown pants. She wears brown leather gloves. She has black leather boots as well.
Screen capture of your skin: Currently Working on my skin.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Kristal was born into a happy family, who loved her very much and couldn’t live without her. She had only one sibling, and that was her little brother, Griffin. Kristal had always loved Griffin, since the day he was born and would do anything to protect him. She also had a very special connection with her cousin, Julius. She would always play with him when he came to visit, and they always told each other everything.
One day, Julius went to the Capital without telling Kristal why. He only said that he would write her every week no matter what. Kristal used her fascination of archery to forget about Julius leaving. She would always pretend that she was an archer and try to shoot animals with a slingshot. On Kristal’s 18th birthday, her parents had given her a bow because they knew how much she loved archery. Kristal couldn’t stop using her bow for one second and she would use it all day. She would go hunting animals and shoot targets that her father had set up for her. She began selling the hides of the animals she had killed because she was trying to save enough money up so that she could visit Julius, who lived in the Capital. She had been trying to go see Julius for years but, she never could because she would always have to stay and take care of her family.
One day, the letters from Julius stopped and Kristal feared for the worst. She knew that something was wrong because Julius wouldn’t have just stopped writing all of a sudden. She got so worried, she couldn’t sleep at night and she would stay up all night thinking what could have happened to him.One day she told her family that she would be going to the capital to see if Julius was alright. Her parents were very sad that they would be losing their little girl. But the person who was the saddest of them all was her brother, Griffin. She told him to take care and gave him the bow that she had gotten on her birthday. She told him that if anyone tried to hurt him that he should use the bow to protect himself. She also told him that as long as he had the bow that she would always be with him in spirit. She said her regards and filled her bag with everything that needed. She then went to the docks and boarded the earliest airship to the Capital and now her next step is to find out what happened to her cousin Julius.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To find out what happened to her cousin Julius and make sure he isn’t in danger.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Kristal’s strengths are that she is good with ranged weapons and she is very wise. She can think on her feet and can make fast, smart decisions. She also is very nice so she doesn’t have that many enemies.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Kristal’s weaknesses are that she can’t run fast because she has asthma. Also she can’t handle death of people and she will most likely break down. She is also very shy and doesn’t like talking to people she doesn’t know.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):Nope
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Kristal sees the girl being harassed and she yells “Leave her alone you scumbags!” The men quickly turn around and start to gather around Kristal. Kristal then sees the girl run away and she smiles knowing she did the right thing. Then, one of the men yells “The Hell do you think you’re doing?” Kristal then says back “I was only helping that little girl from you monsters.” The man starts to laugh and says “Oh, You think funny. I’ll show you what happens to girls who think they’re funny.” He then slowly lifts his hand and says “Funny girls get beat.” Kristal then gets worried and tries to think of how she can get out of this. She then comes up with an idea and says “You wouldn’t hit a girl who is pregnant would you?” She then makes a smug face. The guard then lowers his hand and says “This is last warning. Do this again and we’ll make sure you lose that baby.” She walks away feeling like she has done the right thing.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
Kristal looks at the man andreplies “I’m sorry. I have to decline your offer.” The man looks confused and then says “Come on i’ll give you anything you want.” Kristal then looks at the man with disgust and gets up and heads for the door. The man then stands in front of the door and says “You really need to reconsider my offer I can give you anything you want and more.” Kristal then tries to go past the man but is unable to get past him. Kristal then looks more disgusted and says “Sir please move.” The man doesn’t budge and Kristal becomes flustered. She then kicks the man in the groin and the man falls to the ground in pain. She walks away feeling disgusted and angry.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Kristal sees the man and feels bad for him and gives him a coin. She walks away feeling happy. She goes by the man every day and keeps giving him more and more everyday. She then starts to notice that the old man is no longer there. She then sees a man at a stand and asks “Do you know what happened to the old beggar over there?” He then smiles and says “I heard that he got enough money to open up his own stand. It looked something like mine.” Kristal then thinks a bit and then smiles back at the old man and gives him a hug. Kristal then says joyfully “I’m glad you're doing awesome.” The old man then replies “Yes, I’m glad you didn’t forget about me.” He then pulls away from the hug and says “How about I give you something from my stand for free.” Kristal looks around the stand and then her eyes get locked on his oak wood bow. She then says without any hesitation “I’ll have the bow please.” He then takes the bow down from the shelf and gives it to Kristal. Kristal then thanks the man and walks away.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Kristal doesn’t respond to the man. The man then comes closer and says “You’re mother was a wench. She probably the ugliest person in the world.” Kristal then yells back “Hey! Don’t you call my mother a wench.” She then slaps the man and give him a disgusted look. The man then turns to Kristal and punches her to the face. She then falls to the ground holding her eye. Another man gets up and confront the man. Kristal cannot hear what they are saying because she has a horrible ringing in her ear. She then sees a group of men get up and fight the man. She gets up and walks out of the Tavern hurt and crying. She then sees the man who helped in front of her and he says “I’m sorry what he did to you. He is just a very horrid person.” Kristal then replies to the man “Thanks i could have been seriously hurt if you didn’t do something. Is there some way i can repay you?” The man think for a bit and then says “No. Not that i can think of.” Kristal then thinks as well and then kisses the man on the cheek and walks away.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Kristal sees the necklace and then taps the women on the shoulder. The women then turns around and asks “You need something?” Kristal then smiles and then replies “I just noticed you beautiful necklace and wondered where you obtained it.” The women thinks for a bit and then points to a shop 9 feet away. Kristal then smiles and says “Thank you. I’ll be on my way now.” She then waves to the women and walks towards the Shop. She sees that there is a big bulky man at the stand. Kristal then asks the man if she get the necklace that the women was wearing. He then looks at his inventory and then looks back at Kristal. The man then says “I have 1 more in stock.The price will be 20 coin.” Kristal then looks in her bag and pulls out the 20 coins. She then hands the coins to the man and the man exchanges the coins for the necklace. Kristal smile then smiles and walks away with her new necklace.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?No
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Accepted:
Slime_Warrior- Interesting character Bio. (A bit more detail would've been nice to have... C: ) Glad to have you back up with a new character for some roleplay. Hope to see you online soon!
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): Yes, Henrymoray1
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Unfair roleplay such as cutting someone in half.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using OOC information as your character
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Acting as a fictional character.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When you have the players consent.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When you are in the OOC channel or if you use parentheses.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes.
Who is allowed to use magic?: A player that has a Magery degree from the Academy.
Who are the Fallen?: A nomadic group that lived apart from the majority of the islands for some time until their island drifted towards the Capitol allowing them to interact with other people.
When and how did our current government come to be?: The current government was established in 169 AR after overthrowing the previous government.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: The order is a group of men and women dedicated to dispelling the waves of evil creatures flooding the islands. The Order was disbanded by the previous Chancellor and might be reinstated by the current.
What are the Net and Essence? The Net is a web of energy that surrounds the bottom of the islands. If you are unlucky enough to fall off the islands the Net will harness essence to send you back. If you gain 3 levels of essence you will keep your items. Essence is gained by killing evil creatures and minig ores.
Who is/was Jensen? Jensen was the husband of the goddess who raised the flying islands in the first place. He was the ability to jump from body to body when his current one deteriorates. As he jumped from body to body he lost his mind and began a search for 5 artifacts that would bring his wife back and force her to grant him a wish. As of current he is contained in a diamond shovel.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Most of my experience comes from Cortex maps on the Starcraft 2 Arcade. I have also played on a few other minecraft servers.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: I played on a few servers quite a long time ago, of which I can only remember the name of one called the Realm of Gwomath. All the servers I left were for most of the same reasons, either the server got shut down or it started to go downhill.
Character Information
Name: Isaac Black
Age: 25
Class: Laborer
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Chancellery
Physical description: Isaac is about 6 feet tall with shaggy brown hair and beard. He is usually seen wearing a slightly dirty white shirt, brown pants, and suspenders.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Isaac was born into a small hunting village deep in the woods, when he was 10 years old the people of his village were killed by wolves while he was hunting. He was been living alone in the village for many years surviving on wild game and his own farming efforts. For things he couldn't do himself like clothes, he traded food and supplies with anyone he might find in the woods. Becoming lonely with his life he finally grew bold enough to leave his hunting village and set out for the Capitol. Once there he will try to seek any work he can find. One day he hopes to rebuild his ruined home town for others to inhabit. He wants to rebuild his home, but will not go to extreme lengths. His family raised him well with a good moral compass and a strong sense of right and wrong, because of which he has a hard time understanding how people can be so cruel to one another. He also has a very hard time walking away from those in need. He hopes that his basic knowledge of life and his set of skills will be enough to get a job in the Capitol.When he was young he heard stories of the Order of Aradin, and their deeds of valor, bravery, and honor. Although they were disbanded he hopes that one day they will be reborn so that he may help them in their mission. Until that time he instead will try his luck finding a job. As long as he can stay alive and out of jail Isaac hopes he can rebuild his ruined home.. With the surfacing of the Medori, Isaac hopes he can connect with them as they live in a way similar to they way he has for many years. Their basic form of living appeals to Isaac in a very large way. He wishes to one day live within their society, regardless of many peoples disliking of them. He thinks that maybe by integrating with them he can reduce tension between the Medori and the people of the Chancellery. With his list of ambitions set, Isaac begins the long and dangerous trek from his small middle-of-nowhere village to the Capitol City to make a life for himself. All he has to his name are the clothes on his back and the meager amount food he brought with him. Hopefully this will be enough to see him through his journey to change his life forever. What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To rebuild his ruined home town.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Having lived in the wild alone for many years, Isaac is very skilled at hunting and tracking.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Lack of human interaction makes it hard for Isaac to interact with others.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl. *Drawing his crude sword Isaac steps in to defend the girl* "If you kind gentlemen could leave this young lady alone, that would be fantastic." "Is that all you have to fight us tiny?" asks one of the men. *The other laughs and swings at Isaac who blocks it, but breaks his sword in the process. Taking both pieces Isaac tries his best to fight them off, getting fairly battered in the process.*** *After helping Isaac to her home, the girl tends to his wounds.* "What did they take?" He asks her. "Just some change, thanks anyway." *Isaac reaches into his coat pocket and hands her most of his money* "Will this help?" "Thank you!"
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why? "I'd love to join, but I can't leave my current job, I promised I would work for at least 3 weeks." "Your loss Kid."
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food. Helping the man up Isaac takes the man back to the inn where he is staying, buys him a meal, and gives him his room. Upon leaving the inn the man asks, "Why are you being so kind to me young man?" In response Isaac asks, "Why not?"
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother. "Say it again, I dare you." *As the man begins to repeat it Isaac smashes his glass against the mans head* "That settles that."
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears. "Excuse me ma'am, but may I ask where you got your necklace, its very beautiful." "Why thank you, my son made it for me."
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? No, thank you for asking.
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Deferred:
Henrymoray1- Everything in your App is fine in regards to your OOC questions and IC ones, yet you are missing one IC question: "Strengths (Both physical and personality):" I noticed you had "Weaknesses", which is good, but you also need a strength. Perhaps he's swift with his hands, as he's hunted for his own food (and probably built traps of sorts to help him)? If you could fill that out (and possibly make your ICR's longer) you'll have no problem making it in!
Deferred:
Henrymoray1- Everything in your App is fine in regards to your OOC questions and IC ones, yet you are missing one IC question: "Strengths (Both physical and personality):" I noticed you had "Weaknesses", which is good, but you also need a strength. Perhaps he's swift with his hands, as he's hunted for his own food (and probably built traps of sorts to help him)? If you could fill that out (and possibly make your ICR's longer) you'll have no problem making it in!
Sorry about that, I edited it, should be fine now.
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Henrymoray1- Welcome to the Anerian Chronicles! Thank you for editing your post, and with that, you've been accepted! Here; join up on the server forums and have a glance around at the community. http://aneria.enjin.com/ I'm sure you'll enjoy it. Hop on the server as soon as you can to see what it's like, and start up some roleplay! (Though it may be empty around this time of day).
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name?: I do, but I'd prefer to not give it out.
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: I have read the rules and I agree to them.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is when you roleplay unfairly, an Example would be always hitting your enemy but never being hit.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using knowledge that you've learned outside of the roleplay during roleplay.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Acting as a character that you have made up.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: You are only allowed to kill another character when the other player allows you to.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: I believe you can anytime as long as you are using parentheses or the OOC Chat channel.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: I have read it and I agree to roleplay on accordance with it.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Only Mages, Priests and Paladins can use magic.
Who are the Fallen?: The Fallen are the Medori, They have only recently been in contact with the Chancellery and the citizens.
When and how did our current government come to be?: The Chancellery has been in power since they defeated the old government in 169 A.R.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: The order of Aradin is a faction that came into power around 37 A.R to protect the people of the islands but they have grown into disarray and are now just a fraction of what they used to be. It was disbanded but it may be recreated by the new chancellor.
What are the Net and Essence?: The Net is a barrier that teleports living matter back to the islands if for some reason someone would fall off. Essence is basically mana that can't be used for anything other than having your items restored with you when you hit the net.
Who is/was Jensen?: Jensen is the husband of the goddess Aneria who she made immortal. He is only able to transfer his soul to another body, he doesn't actually die. He was behind the Jensen Crisis and only wished to die. He is now trapped inside a diamond shovel.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: I do have previous roleplay experience on a few other servers, it wasn't anything as professional as this is though, It was more of just a gathering of me and my friends. We had a set lore but it wasn't anything big just the basics and we would just roleplay about anything that seemed relevant.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: I can't say really. It's not that I'm not allowed to or anything it's more like I can't because it's not "Offical"
Character Information
Name: Kiros Kosinski
Age: 24
Class: Bladesman
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellery
Physical description: 182 cm. 163 lbs. Not particularly muscly or strong. Dark green eyes, Dark black hair. Takes a liking to black clothing and wears a mask.
Screen capture of your skin:
I'm not sure how to set it so the picture would show up, so I'll just set the picture as my profile picture if that's okay.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Kiros was a loner. He never really had anyone he could call friends and would spend the majority of his time taking walks or some other activity that didn't involve other people. He was never talented at anything in particular but he would fantasize about being a hero and swinging a sword around however he'd never do more than dream about it. People started to avoid him because he had a strange aura around him, it was almost like you could sense his hate. Later on in life he turned into a delinquent, he would get into fights that he would win using his mind more than his brawns. Although he would never kill anyone he would go as close as he could to it during fights. Attacking the enemy while he is down and pushing them over the edge into the net, still being not of age the adults dismissed this as just children fighting. Kiros, being a loner could normally overhear about certain events and rumors and could gather information about things easily.
After he moved away from home at the age of nineteen, the reason being that he felt his parents were nothing more than strangers to him, he slowly quieted down, but when he did get into fights, he would always anger the wrong people.
During that time, he met a beautiful young girl. Kiros was walking down a not so popular street in the market area when he noticed two rather big thugs cornering the girl, he recognized the thugs who he had a score to settle with. “Come on little lady!” “We promise it won’t hurt!” Kiros thought about it and walked past the two as they were reaching over to touch the girl. He stopped in between them and the girl. As the girl was quite a bit shorter than Kiros, the thugs looked upwards and saw his face as he sent a piercing stare there way. Remembering who he is they backed off. Normally the thugs would get their way in the parts where they were at. After the thugs had retreated and the people had stopped staring, he put his hands back into the pockets of his winter jacket and walked off. He felt someone behind him that was following him. Expecting it to be one of the thugs he walked off into an alleyway and hid, what he saw next disturbed him. He saw the young girl who he has unconsciously saved. After letting out a sigh of relief he got out of his hiding place and asked why she followed him. Her answer was to ‘Thank him’. While Kiros thought he would never see her again after that, the very next day as he was walking the same route, he was waiting in the same spot where the thugs cornered her at and went to speak with Kiros. After a while they got to know each other, Kiros enjoyed having someone to talk to and he loved listening to her talk about her interests.
Kiros then went to work for those people who he had angered, to ‘pay back his debts’ even though in the process he angered some other people he shouldn’t have without knowing it. After believing he had cleaned up his act and was now a free man again, he lived for two more years without much happening he grew into a deep relationship with the girl and had fallen in love with her. However he couldn’t muster up the courage to tell her until another year had passed. The day before he was planning to tell her how he felt, he found a note, it told him a location of an old warehouse near the docks and that the people there had kidnapped the girl, there was the possibility that she was already dead. Kiros ran there, full speed. After he got there, he found the doors unlocked and walked right in. He overheard one of them saying “Hah, it looks like she’s already dead!” and the sound of a body being kicked, but with no reaction from the body. He lost it.
Kiros tortured the unfortunate thugs that were given this job with a sword he picked up from a crate. He ripped out their eyes, cut off their arms and legs, he then cut off bits of their skin around their body. He then watched them bleed to death. After that he finally turned around and saw that her eyes were open and that she saw all of it and was alive. Tears flooding to his eyes in happiness and relief he untied her and hugged her with his blood covered hands. She pushed him away and took up the sword he dropped and with tears in her eyes shouted “Y-you monster, what kind of sick psychopath would do this kind of thing?” She pointed the sword at Kiros as he stood up. “Stay away from me!” she shouted. Kiros has a blank look in his eyes and an expressionless face. “B- but I… I love you!” “How could I love you?!” the girl shouted horrified at what she saw. Kiros started to cry again as he stepped closer to her. “You don’t love me? Bu-but what about all that we did together? I thought we’d be together forever!” Kiros whispered as she replied “We were just friends! I was already getting married!” Kiros took another step and she warned him to stay back but he continued and she swung the sword at him, his instincts got in the way and he disarmed her and pushed her on the floor. He placed the sword at the tip of her neck and spoke “I guess I Loved you!” as his tears dropped off his face onto the floor, he swung the sword.
The next thing he knew crowds were screaming and the city was ablaze, he was one of the lucky ones seeing as how he was near the docks during the time of the Jensen Crisis. He kept the sword he used on that day and was released into the new world after the Jensen Crisis, He is now 24 and looking for a new purpose in life. Being a traumatic experience for him, Kiros has subconsciously locked away his memory from that night. All he remembers is that there was someone he loved but now they’re gone. He is now looking for a new purpose, Kiros is a normal person on the outside but with a tad of cruelty. On the inside, if you end up breaking the shell, you'll find the psychopath that Kiros really is!
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To look for a new purpose in life.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Intelligent, Doesn't get attached to people,
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality): Emotionless and has mental problems that pop up every now and again.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No, he doesn't.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation. Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Walking down the street, he sees the girl, then his eyes hover over to the men. "Tch. It doesn't matter, happens all the time" Kiros states trying to convince himself while he is unconsciously crying behind the mask.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
"Hoy! You there in the black!" You look like ya can handle yourself, how about you join ma crew? Eh? Lots o good money abroad!"
"I'm fine." Kiros says as he walks along ignoring the man.
"But but but! You can also lead a life of adventure!"
"Leave me alone, or maybe one of the gunpowder reserves on your ship might accidently get lit on fire."
The man backs away with a strange look on his face but doesn't ask anymore.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Looking at the old man Kiros bends down and asks him "Are you begging for food or begging for someone to end your miserable life for you?"
"What?!" "Gwaah!" The man yells as Kiros reaches for his neck.
"Guess you do want to live." Kiros makes a depressed noise from his throat as the man slaps his hand away.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
"My mother? Hmm, just mixed in with all the other strange ******** I've met."
"Wh-what, you freak!" shouts the fellow as he backs away from Kiros a little.
"That reminds me of something she once said." Kiros stands up and slowly but dramatically walks over to the other man, he leans in and whispers "If you don't have anything nice to say, Be careful on your way home tonight." Kiros then lets out a loud cackle.
"Alright you two, go back to your tables or get out!" the bartender shouts at them.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Kiros walks by the woman after carefully inspecting the necklace from a distance.
"It's not my style anyway."
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?: No thanks.
Other notes:
Haha, I hope that my bio actually fits in, I think I focused too much on the actual story rather than having it fit in with the lore and what not. I also hope that it isn't cliché, seeing as I kind of broke a few of the guidelines on that. Haha. Thanks for reading as well!
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Kight_Sharpie -Just wanted to point out that your Bio was fine though it may have been slightly cliché.. but you could edit it so that it isn't. (Say, perhaps, he was always interested in things other weren't, so that's why he was neglected and set out to try to find people with the same interest as him.Without any slaughtering and all.) You don't have to though, that's not the reason I deferred you. The reason I deferred you is because I found the length of your ICRs lacking. If you could add to that, so that they're about a paragraph long (it can be a short one) and not just a few sentences, you'll make it right through. Thanks!
Deferred:
Knight_Sharpie -Just wanted to point out that your Bio was fine though it may have been slightly cliché.. but you could edit it so that it isn't. (Say, perhaps, he was always interested in things other weren't, so that's why he was neglected and set out to try to find people with the same interest as him.Without any slaughtering and all.) You don't have to though, that's not the reason I deferred you. The reason I deferred you is because I found the length of you ICRs lacking. If you could add to that, so that they're about a paragraph long (it can be a short one) and not just a few sentences, you'll make it right through. Thanks!
Okay, thank you! I've edited the ICRs, I hope that they're good enough now. But the main point of my bio was that I wanted my character to be a psychopath, the loner part comes in second. Anyway, Thanks though!
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MiraMuru
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Kight_Sharpie -Welcome to the Anerian Chronicles! Well done with the edits, and with your biography over all! You can join the server whenever you want, and do join us on our website as well: http://aneria.enjin.com/
Enjoy your experience with our server and community!
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
David is descended from the Starr family, a family of would-be famous architects if it wasn’t for their terrible luck. Supposedly one of his ancestors was the project manager on one of the Warden Castles…and subsequently killed upon its completion to keep its secrets from being divulged. Supposedly another one of his ancestors participated in building the sewer system for the Capital…but also was killed to conceal secrets. Following the overthrow of the Linyeran Dynasty, the Starr family was reduced to a small but wealthy clan of architects. They were scattered throughout the isles and many remained active in the arts up to recent times.
This is where David comes into play. Originally David was born to his mother and father, Loretta and Paul in the Capital City but moved to the west to practice his craft in the other cities with his uncles. He apprenticed in carpentry under his uncle Michael and in masonry under his uncle Angelo. When building, he was taught the value of geometrics and opulence in design. His projects were always meant to “wow” and “frighten” the viewer with it’s greatness. He highly coveted works of rare woods and marble yet his budget frequently prevented him from using these materials. This made him cynical as he felt he wasn’t achieving his maximum potential.
Over the years, his skills at design improved and he independently led a firm that constructed houses and barns for private contractors, yet he always wanted more. While he built spacious, beautiful and opulent villas for plantation owners, he wanted to move away from rural construction projects and into more urban ones. He became more anti-social as he delved deeper into his studies and soon began to shun most of his friends and family. His attitude was always a negative one, he always criticized others and Aneria help whoever got in the way of his building. People have expressed concern for him, thinking him to be a mad artist yet when in public he would only be snide and arrogant to his workers rather than outright insane.. He had become utterly absorbed in not only his craft but himself.
When he heard of Jensen’s rampage at the Capital, he packed up his tools and sketch books and hopped on the next ship to the Capital. To Starr, a destroyed capital city was a great potential market for architectural works and he fully believes he’ll be able to accomplish great things there.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): David longs to build a world wonder; he wishes to justify all the work he put into becoming an architect by creating something beautiful.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He is a master of geometry, masonry and carpentry. His mind is shrewd and mathematical with a keen intellect.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): David is completely 100% arrogant and blind to everything around him. He lacks the social skills to be friendly and while he is decently strong physically, he has no fighting skills.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
None at all.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
“Terrible. Disgusting, uncouth!” Starr thought as he looked through the portfolio a student turned into him earlier. He despised the work, if it could even be called that. He had a mind to fail the student when he noticed a young woman surrounded by a group of thugs.
“Why don’t yeh come back with us and ‘ave a little fun?” The thug leader sneered. His face terrified and disgusted Starr. It was missing teeth, it was completely un-proportional and clearly he had been in combat so many times any symmetry that was once there was gone. It sickened him.
Starr groaned and opened his mouth. “You there! Did your mother beat you upside the head a few dozen times with a shovel whenever you misbehaved or do you hit your head on a bunk bed post often when you come home intoxicated after a long day of shoveling cow dung?”
“The ‘ell did you just say to me!” he roared and turned around.
“I said did your mother beat you upside the head a few dozen times with a shovel. Good Aneria, are you deaf too? How much head trauma did you suffer as a child?” Starr replied.
The thug just stared at him with a facial expression that was a mixture of “I can’t believe the words coming out of your mouth” and “I’m going to stab you.” Luckily the girl took this an as opportunity to dart away unnoticed while the thugs surrounded Starr. “Good.” Starr thought. “She has more intelligence then my students. She just might make it in the world”
Starr then turned and began to trot away while looking at his student’s works. Surprisingly the thugs tried to follow but as soon as he turned the corner onto a busy street with guard, they retreated.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
“Absolutely not, get out of my face I’m trying to wash down the disgusting drawings I had to suffer today.” Starr stated.
The wealthy sailor pleaded to him. “But, but, you’re famous, surely you recognize the importance of ancient architecture that could exist on these islands!”
“No. I’m not famous. I’m well regarded. Read a dictionary and learn the difference. Now get out of my face. Adventures and expeditions to long dead civilizations are a silly thing.” He said and with a “plop” sound as his mug returned to the table, he stood up, pushed his chair in and walked away.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
“Please.” The old beggar pleaded and he laid on the side on the street. “Food, I need food. I lost everything in the fire.”
His hand touched Starr’s hip as dirt and grime swiped onto his pants from the beggar. “You just got dirt on my pants.” He growled back. With a flip of his thumb, the coin was shot in front of the beggar and spun as it landed. “Go take that coin, buy a bucket of water and wash yourself for Aneria’s sake. Now get out of my face.”
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
“Shut it.” Starr replied to the initial insult.
“Shut it? Shut it! I’ll show you who to shut---Hey, where do you think yer going!?” The drunkard wailed.
No reply came. Starr had just walked away without a single reply to the man.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
The necklace beamed in the sunlight. A white-gold chain lace attached to an amulet in the shape of the Church of Aneria’s symbol emblazoned with blue and yellow gems. Most likely the gems were some kind of sapphire or topaz while the white gold must have been created by an expert alchemist. The geometry of the necklace’s hang wasn’t too low nor was it too high and it was perfectly tightened to maximize both stability and style to it’s owner.
Oh and the woman wearing it was pretty too but Starr wasn’t paying attention to her.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Nope
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
8/18/2011
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WholeGrainWheat
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Accepted:
nV_Vanity - You already play Oliver incredibly well, and this character doesn't look to deviate from that level of quality. You may start playing him whenever you choose.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
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Posts:
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MiraMuru
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Hi all!
Just wanted to inform anyone glancing at the server with interest that we have quite the amount of interesting things in store for you! If you want to join up, go ahead and post an application right away! We would be glad to introduce you to the community and server, and have you be a part of the events and stories that are to unfold in the nearby future!
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
6/12/2012
Posts:
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Don_rosa
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This is a mini-app, link to first app:
Err it's starting to be a while...type in "Tazec" In the search bar, and it'll come up after Joanna's.
Character Information
Name:
Steaz Quad
Age:
27
Class:
Ranger
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?:
Member of the Medori
Physical description:
Steaz is a strong man with brown hair, some stubbles, and dark clothes. He always has his bow with him, and his face isn't "the cleanest".
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
From he was very small, Steaz was taught the magic of the bow and sword. He was trained up for fighting his whole childhood, because there was a big war commencing between their island and another. Soon, he became the most skilled archer and swordsman on their island, and he started teaching the little ones himself. After 26 years, the war finally started. That day, he woke up, took a glance at the sun, breathed heavily in and knew. He knew this had to be the day it started. The day he had trained for his whole life. He was wrong. It didn't happen until the day after.
It happened at night, he heard footsteps in the hallway. His dad was never up at night, and his mother moved away a long time ago. His father said that if you didn't sleep all night, you'd perform bad next day, and next day might be the war day. He curiously got up, silently, and took his bow which was laying next to his bed. He silently opened the door, and saw a man's back. He couldn't tell who it was, but it was their armour, so he assumed there was someone going to talk to him about something. He went out and said, with his strong, commanding voice; "Is something wrong?" The man turned, and looked at him. Then he silently handed him a paper and ran away. Steaz shrugged at this, and opened the letter. His dad had been killed. The battle had started without him knowing, on the other island. They didn't bring him, their master ranger, because he had to sleep all night. He was so mad. So mad at his father for not bringing him, and so mad at the person that did. He grabbed his bow in his right hand, put his sword in his sheath and ran out to get on the next airship there. He reached the next one, and they flew over to the other island. He shot the enemies from a distance, before they even got there, without hitting any of his allies. The fight lasted for days, he couldn't count how many, and eventually, he fainted of exhaustion. At that moment, when he fainted, he thought he was going to die.
He could barely see a couple of strong feet running towards him, before his eyes closed. He woke up on his own island, in a house he had never been in before. He got up and ran out again to help the others with the fight yet again. A man was standing outside, training on a dummy with his sword. Steaz shouted at him they had to go help, and he stopped training. "No, it's over. We lost." It hit him right in his heart. "What?" "We lost Steaz, they would let me have this house until you recovered, and then we have to move away, away from this place. I know where I'm going. I'm going to live with my family, but you better find a place for yourself mate." He patted him on the back, and gestured for Steaz to follow him towards an airship. For the whole ride, he just thought about the same words. "We lost."
His saviour dissapeared about halfway through the ride, Steaz thought he said bye to him, but didn't respond to it. After more days at the airship, the pilot clapped in front of him. "Get off mate, this is the last stop." he said. Steaz looked at the island they had stopped by, and smiled. Nobody knew he had lost a fight there, and neither would they. He took a coin out of his pocket and tipped the pilot, something he seemed to find a bit strange, and then planted his feet at the new island. The pilot said something about "Constance" before the airship dissapeared in the distance. "Constance." he thought. "Home."
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
Well, to get friends, get a life, fight again, and never, never loose ever again.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):
He is very strong, and extremely good with the bow, aswell as pretty good at a sword.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your
class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):
He has a weak point behind his left foot, nobody knows about it, but he was shot there with an arrow many years ago. This doesn't affect him until someone kicks/beats, or does anything at that place, then he will be helpless.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
No.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Steaz takes out his bow and aims on one of the feet of the biggest guy. "No way." he mumbles to himself and lets the arrow go. The big man turns and looks down at his foot, seing the arrow sticking out of it and the blood pouring out. He gets furious and shouts at his friend to go get Steaz. This time, he shoots the arm of the guy, so he looses his sword. The girl ran away when they were both distracted, and Steaz whistles, walking away while putting his bow back on his back.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
Steaz looks at the man. "This is my home." he says. "And I have enough money, I do not intend to leave this place." The man looks kind of dissapointed. "Please?" Steaz looks kind of curiously at the man. "Why do you want me to join so bad?" he says. The man glares at him and walks away, not responding.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Steaz looks at the man, knowing he promised himself to help everyone as he best could within his power. He looked through his backpack, dissapointed when not finding any food. Then, he runs towards the nearest shop and buys a loaf of bread. He comes back and hands it to the man. "There you go." he says and walks away, whistling.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
"Hey you, your mother is so fat you can't even compare!" a fellow shouts at him as he is about to leave. Steaz turns, and slowly walks towards the fellow that said so. He draws his knife and looks at it. While stripping his finger at the knife, he says "I don't care what you say about my mother, but nobody is allowed to offend me." he says coldly and puts the knife up to his face. "Got it?" The man nods slowly, seemingly very scared. Steaz nods and leaves the tavern.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
"That's a beautiful neckless." Steaz thinks to himself. "Wish I had someone to buy something like that for.." he thinks and watches the woman pass by. "My mother would have suited that, I am sure." he thinks. "But she left a long time ago."
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Nope.
Lord_Sythis:
Nice application. The ICRs are a bit short but they represented your character well, as long as the ICRs detail your character then they are fine
You can visit the website at www.aneria.enjin.com here you can get update on news and events
~Jaeden
Other notes:Nope
Slime_Warrior- Interesting character Bio. (A bit more detail would've been nice to have... C: ) Glad to have you back up with a new character for some roleplay. Hope to see you online soon!
IGN: Henrymoray1
Real-Life Age: 16
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): Yes, Henrymoray1
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Unfair roleplay such as cutting someone in half.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using OOC information as your character
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Acting as a fictional character.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When you have the players consent.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When you are in the OOC channel or if you use parentheses.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes.
Who is allowed to use magic?: A player that has a Magery degree from the Academy.
Who are the Fallen?: A nomadic group that lived apart from the majority of the islands for some time until their island drifted towards the Capitol allowing them to interact with other people.
When and how did our current government come to be?: The current government was established in 169 AR after overthrowing the previous government.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: The order is a group of men and women dedicated to dispelling the waves of evil creatures flooding the islands. The Order was disbanded by the previous Chancellor and might be reinstated by the current.
What are the Net and Essence? The Net is a web of energy that surrounds the bottom of the islands. If you are unlucky enough to fall off the islands the Net will harness essence to send you back. If you gain 3 levels of essence you will keep your items. Essence is gained by killing evil creatures and minig ores.
Who is/was Jensen? Jensen was the husband of the goddess who raised the flying islands in the first place. He was the ability to jump from body to body when his current one deteriorates. As he jumped from body to body he lost his mind and began a search for 5 artifacts that would bring his wife back and force her to grant him a wish. As of current he is contained in a diamond shovel.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Most of my experience comes from Cortex maps on the Starcraft 2 Arcade. I have also played on a few other minecraft servers.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: I played on a few servers quite a long time ago, of which I can only remember the name of one called the Realm of Gwomath. All the servers I left were for most of the same reasons, either the server got shut down or it started to go downhill.
Character Information
Name: Isaac Black
Age: 25
Class: Laborer
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Chancellery
Physical description: Isaac is about 6 feet tall with shaggy brown hair and beard. He is usually seen wearing a slightly dirty white shirt, brown pants, and suspenders.
Screen capture of your skin: file:///C:/Users/User/Desktop/John_4517159%20(1).pnghttp://cdn2.planetmi...kin-4517159.jpg
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Isaac was born into a small hunting village deep in the woods, when he was 10 years old the people of his village were killed by wolves while he was hunting. He was been living alone in the village for many years surviving on wild game and his own farming efforts. For things he couldn't do himself like clothes, he traded food and supplies with anyone he might find in the woods. Becoming lonely with his life he finally grew bold enough to leave his hunting village and set out for the Capitol. Once there he will try to seek any work he can find. One day he hopes to rebuild his ruined home town for others to inhabit. He wants to rebuild his home, but will not go to extreme lengths. His family raised him well with a good moral compass and a strong sense of right and wrong, because of which he has a hard time understanding how people can be so cruel to one another. He also has a very hard time walking away from those in need. He hopes that his basic knowledge of life and his set of skills will be enough to get a job in the Capitol.When he was young he heard stories of the Order of Aradin, and their deeds of valor, bravery, and honor. Although they were disbanded he hopes that one day they will be reborn so that he may help them in their mission. Until that time he instead will try his luck finding a job. As long as he can stay alive and out of jail Isaac hopes he can rebuild his ruined home.. With the surfacing of the Medori, Isaac hopes he can connect with them as they live in a way similar to they way he has for many years. Their basic form of living appeals to Isaac in a very large way. He wishes to one day live within their society, regardless of many peoples disliking of them. He thinks that maybe by integrating with them he can reduce tension between the Medori and the people of the Chancellery. With his list of ambitions set, Isaac begins the long and dangerous trek from his small middle-of-nowhere village to the Capitol City to make a life for himself. All he has to his name are the clothes on his back and the meager amount food he brought with him. Hopefully this will be enough to see him through his journey to change his life forever.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To rebuild his ruined home town.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Having lived in the wild alone for many years, Isaac is very skilled at hunting and tracking.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Lack of human interaction makes it hard for Isaac to interact with others.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl. *Drawing his crude sword Isaac steps in to defend the girl* "If you kind gentlemen could leave this young lady alone, that would be fantastic."
"Is that all you have to fight us tiny?" asks one of the men. *The other laughs and swings at Isaac who blocks it, but breaks his sword in the process. Taking both pieces Isaac tries his best to fight them off, getting fairly battered in the process.*** *After helping Isaac to her home, the girl tends to his wounds.* "What did they take?" He asks her. "Just some change, thanks anyway." *Isaac reaches into his coat pocket and hands her most of his money* "Will this help?" "Thank you!"
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why? "I'd love to join, but I can't leave my current job, I promised I would work for at least 3 weeks." "Your loss Kid."
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food. Helping the man up Isaac takes the man back to the inn where he is staying, buys him a meal, and gives him his room. Upon leaving the inn the man asks, "Why are you being so kind to me young man?" In response Isaac asks, "Why not?"
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother. "Say it again, I dare you." *As the man begins to repeat it Isaac smashes his glass against the mans head* "That settles that."
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears. "Excuse me ma'am, but may I ask where you got your necklace, its very beautiful." "Why thank you, my son made it for me."
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? No, thank you for asking.
Henrymoray1- Everything in your App is fine in regards to your OOC questions and IC ones, yet you are missing one IC question: "Strengths (Both physical and personality):" I noticed you had "Weaknesses", which is good, but you also need a strength. Perhaps he's swift with his hands, as he's hunted for his own food (and probably built traps of sorts to help him)? If you could fill that out (and possibly make your ICR's longer) you'll have no problem making it in!
Sorry about that, I edited it, should be fine now.
Henrymoray1- Welcome to the Anerian Chronicles! Thank you for editing your post, and with that, you've been accepted! Here; join up on the server forums and have a glance around at the community. http://aneria.enjin.com/ I'm sure you'll enjoy it. Hop on the server as soon as you can to see what it's like, and start up some roleplay! (Though it may be empty around this time of day).
IGN: Kight_Sharpie
Real-Life Age: 15
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name?: I do, but I'd prefer to not give it out.
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: I have read the rules and I agree to them.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is when you roleplay unfairly, an Example would be always hitting your enemy but never being hit.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using knowledge that you've learned outside of the roleplay during roleplay.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Acting as a character that you have made up.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: You are only allowed to kill another character when the other player allows you to.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: I believe you can anytime as long as you are using parentheses or the OOC Chat channel.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: I have read it and I agree to roleplay on accordance with it.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Only Mages, Priests and Paladins can use magic.
Who are the Fallen?: The Fallen are the Medori, They have only recently been in contact with the Chancellery and the citizens.
When and how did our current government come to be?: The Chancellery has been in power since they defeated the old government in 169 A.R.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: The order of Aradin is a faction that came into power around 37 A.R to protect the people of the islands but they have grown into disarray and are now just a fraction of what they used to be. It was disbanded but it may be recreated by the new chancellor.
What are the Net and Essence?: The Net is a barrier that teleports living matter back to the islands if for some reason someone would fall off. Essence is basically mana that can't be used for anything other than having your items restored with you when you hit the net.
Who is/was Jensen?: Jensen is the husband of the goddess Aneria who she made immortal. He is only able to transfer his soul to another body, he doesn't actually die. He was behind the Jensen Crisis and only wished to die. He is now trapped inside a diamond shovel.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: I do have previous roleplay experience on a few other servers, it wasn't anything as professional as this is though, It was more of just a gathering of me and my friends. We had a set lore but it wasn't anything big just the basics and we would just roleplay about anything that seemed relevant.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: I can't say really. It's not that I'm not allowed to or anything it's more like I can't because it's not "Offical"
Character Information
Name: Kiros Kosinski
Age: 24
Class: Bladesman
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellery
Physical description: 182 cm. 163 lbs. Not particularly muscly or strong. Dark green eyes, Dark black hair. Takes a liking to black clothing and wears a mask.
Screen capture of your skin:
I'm not sure how to set it so the picture would show up, so I'll just set the picture as my profile picture if that's okay.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Kiros was a loner. He never really had anyone he could call friends and would spend the majority of his time taking walks or some other activity that didn't involve other people. He was never talented at anything in particular but he would fantasize about being a hero and swinging a sword around however he'd never do more than dream about it. People started to avoid him because he had a strange aura around him, it was almost like you could sense his hate. Later on in life he turned into a delinquent, he would get into fights that he would win using his mind more than his brawns. Although he would never kill anyone he would go as close as he could to it during fights. Attacking the enemy while he is down and pushing them over the edge into the net, still being not of age the adults dismissed this as just children fighting. Kiros, being a loner could normally overhear about certain events and rumors and could gather information about things easily.
After he moved away from home at the age of nineteen, the reason being that he felt his parents were nothing more than strangers to him, he slowly quieted down, but when he did get into fights, he would always anger the wrong people.
During that time, he met a beautiful young girl. Kiros was walking down a not so popular street in the market area when he noticed two rather big thugs cornering the girl, he recognized the thugs who he had a score to settle with. “Come on little lady!” “We promise it won’t hurt!” Kiros thought about it and walked past the two as they were reaching over to touch the girl. He stopped in between them and the girl. As the girl was quite a bit shorter than Kiros, the thugs looked upwards and saw his face as he sent a piercing stare there way. Remembering who he is they backed off. Normally the thugs would get their way in the parts where they were at. After the thugs had retreated and the people had stopped staring, he put his hands back into the pockets of his winter jacket and walked off. He felt someone behind him that was following him. Expecting it to be one of the thugs he walked off into an alleyway and hid, what he saw next disturbed him. He saw the young girl who he has unconsciously saved. After letting out a sigh of relief he got out of his hiding place and asked why she followed him. Her answer was to ‘Thank him’. While Kiros thought he would never see her again after that, the very next day as he was walking the same route, he was waiting in the same spot where the thugs cornered her at and went to speak with Kiros. After a while they got to know each other, Kiros enjoyed having someone to talk to and he loved listening to her talk about her interests.
Kiros then went to work for those people who he had angered, to ‘pay back his debts’ even though in the process he angered some other people he shouldn’t have without knowing it. After believing he had cleaned up his act and was now a free man again, he lived for two more years without much happening he grew into a deep relationship with the girl and had fallen in love with her. However he couldn’t muster up the courage to tell her until another year had passed. The day before he was planning to tell her how he felt, he found a note, it told him a location of an old warehouse near the docks and that the people there had kidnapped the girl, there was the possibility that she was already dead. Kiros ran there, full speed. After he got there, he found the doors unlocked and walked right in. He overheard one of them saying “Hah, it looks like she’s already dead!” and the sound of a body being kicked, but with no reaction from the body. He lost it.
Kiros tortured the unfortunate thugs that were given this job with a sword he picked up from a crate. He ripped out their eyes, cut off their arms and legs, he then cut off bits of their skin around their body. He then watched them bleed to death. After that he finally turned around and saw that her eyes were open and that she saw all of it and was alive. Tears flooding to his eyes in happiness and relief he untied her and hugged her with his blood covered hands. She pushed him away and took up the sword he dropped and with tears in her eyes shouted “Y-you monster, what kind of sick psychopath would do this kind of thing?” She pointed the sword at Kiros as he stood up. “Stay away from me!” she shouted. Kiros has a blank look in his eyes and an expressionless face. “B- but I… I love you!” “How could I love you?!” the girl shouted horrified at what she saw. Kiros started to cry again as he stepped closer to her. “You don’t love me? Bu-but what about all that we did together? I thought we’d be together forever!” Kiros whispered as she replied “We were just friends! I was already getting married!” Kiros took another step and she warned him to stay back but he continued and she swung the sword at him, his instincts got in the way and he disarmed her and pushed her on the floor. He placed the sword at the tip of her neck and spoke “I guess I Loved you!” as his tears dropped off his face onto the floor, he swung the sword.
The next thing he knew crowds were screaming and the city was ablaze, he was one of the lucky ones seeing as how he was near the docks during the time of the Jensen Crisis. He kept the sword he used on that day and was released into the new world after the Jensen Crisis, He is now 24 and looking for a new purpose in life. Being a traumatic experience for him, Kiros has subconsciously locked away his memory from that night. All he remembers is that there was someone he loved but now they’re gone. He is now looking for a new purpose, Kiros is a normal person on the outside but with a tad of cruelty. On the inside, if you end up breaking the shell, you'll find the psychopath that Kiros really is!
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To look for a new purpose in life.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Intelligent, Doesn't get attached to people,
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality): Emotionless and has mental problems that pop up every now and again.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No, he doesn't.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation. Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Walking down the street, he sees the girl, then his eyes hover over to the men. "Tch. It doesn't matter, happens all the time" Kiros states trying to convince himself while he is unconsciously crying behind the mask.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
"Hoy! You there in the black!" You look like ya can handle yourself, how about you join ma crew? Eh? Lots o good money abroad!"
"I'm fine." Kiros says as he walks along ignoring the man.
"But but but! You can also lead a life of adventure!"
"Leave me alone, or maybe one of the gunpowder reserves on your ship might accidently get lit on fire."
The man backs away with a strange look on his face but doesn't ask anymore.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Looking at the old man Kiros bends down and asks him "Are you begging for food or begging for someone to end your miserable life for you?"
"What?!" "Gwaah!" The man yells as Kiros reaches for his neck.
"Guess you do want to live." Kiros makes a depressed noise from his throat as the man slaps his hand away.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
"My mother? Hmm, just mixed in with all the other strange ******** I've met."
"Wh-what, you freak!" shouts the fellow as he backs away from Kiros a little.
"That reminds me of something she once said." Kiros stands up and slowly but dramatically walks over to the other man, he leans in and whispers "If you don't have anything nice to say, Be careful on your way home tonight." Kiros then lets out a loud cackle.
"Alright you two, go back to your tables or get out!" the bartender shouts at them.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Kiros walks by the woman after carefully inspecting the necklace from a distance.
"It's not my style anyway."
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Haha, I hope that my bio actually fits in, I think I focused too much on the actual story rather than having it fit in with the lore and what not. I also hope that it isn't cliché, seeing as I kind of broke a few of the guidelines on that. Haha. Thanks for reading as well!
Kight_Sharpie -Just wanted to point out that your Bio was fine though it may have been slightly cliché.. but you could edit it so that it isn't. (Say, perhaps, he was always interested in things other weren't, so that's why he was neglected and set out to try to find people with the same interest as him.Without any slaughtering and all.) You don't have to though, that's not the reason I deferred you. The reason I deferred you is because I found the length of your ICRs lacking. If you could add to that, so that they're about a paragraph long (it can be a short one) and not just a few sentences, you'll make it right through. Thanks!
Okay, thank you! I've edited the ICRs, I hope that they're good enough now. But the main point of my bio was that I wanted my character to be a psychopath, the loner part comes in second. Anyway, Thanks though!
Kight_Sharpie -Welcome to the Anerian Chronicles! Well done with the edits, and with your biography over all! You can join the server whenever you want, and do join us on our website as well: http://aneria.enjin.com/
Enjoy your experience with our server and community!
More Medori, HOORAH!
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Character Information
Name: David Raphael Starr
Age: 45
Class: Laborer
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Chancellery
Physical description: David is a middle aged, dark haired, olive skinned architect that’s rather muscular from construction projects.
Screen capture of your skin: http://i.imgur.com/aapyLGE.png
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
David is descended from the Starr family, a family of would-be famous architects if it wasn’t for their terrible luck. Supposedly one of his ancestors was the project manager on one of the Warden Castles…and subsequently killed upon its completion to keep its secrets from being divulged. Supposedly another one of his ancestors participated in building the sewer system for the Capital…but also was killed to conceal secrets. Following the overthrow of the Linyeran Dynasty, the Starr family was reduced to a small but wealthy clan of architects. They were scattered throughout the isles and many remained active in the arts up to recent times.
This is where David comes into play. Originally David was born to his mother and father, Loretta and Paul in the Capital City but moved to the west to practice his craft in the other cities with his uncles. He apprenticed in carpentry under his uncle Michael and in masonry under his uncle Angelo. When building, he was taught the value of geometrics and opulence in design. His projects were always meant to “wow” and “frighten” the viewer with it’s greatness. He highly coveted works of rare woods and marble yet his budget frequently prevented him from using these materials. This made him cynical as he felt he wasn’t achieving his maximum potential.
Over the years, his skills at design improved and he independently led a firm that constructed houses and barns for private contractors, yet he always wanted more. While he built spacious, beautiful and opulent villas for plantation owners, he wanted to move away from rural construction projects and into more urban ones. He became more anti-social as he delved deeper into his studies and soon began to shun most of his friends and family. His attitude was always a negative one, he always criticized others and Aneria help whoever got in the way of his building. People have expressed concern for him, thinking him to be a mad artist yet when in public he would only be snide and arrogant to his workers rather than outright insane.. He had become utterly absorbed in not only his craft but himself.
When he heard of Jensen’s rampage at the Capital, he packed up his tools and sketch books and hopped on the next ship to the Capital. To Starr, a destroyed capital city was a great potential market for architectural works and he fully believes he’ll be able to accomplish great things there.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): David longs to build a world wonder; he wishes to justify all the work he put into becoming an architect by creating something beautiful.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He is a master of geometry, masonry and carpentry. His mind is shrewd and mathematical with a keen intellect.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): David is completely 100% arrogant and blind to everything around him. He lacks the social skills to be friendly and while he is decently strong physically, he has no fighting skills.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
None at all.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
“Terrible. Disgusting, uncouth!” Starr thought as he looked through the portfolio a student turned into him earlier. He despised the work, if it could even be called that. He had a mind to fail the student when he noticed a young woman surrounded by a group of thugs.
“Why don’t yeh come back with us and ‘ave a little fun?” The thug leader sneered. His face terrified and disgusted Starr. It was missing teeth, it was completely un-proportional and clearly he had been in combat so many times any symmetry that was once there was gone. It sickened him.
Starr groaned and opened his mouth. “You there! Did your mother beat you upside the head a few dozen times with a shovel whenever you misbehaved or do you hit your head on a bunk bed post often when you come home intoxicated after a long day of shoveling cow dung?”
“The ‘ell did you just say to me!” he roared and turned around.
“I said did your mother beat you upside the head a few dozen times with a shovel. Good Aneria, are you deaf too? How much head trauma did you suffer as a child?” Starr replied.
The thug just stared at him with a facial expression that was a mixture of “I can’t believe the words coming out of your mouth” and “I’m going to stab you.” Luckily the girl took this an as opportunity to dart away unnoticed while the thugs surrounded Starr. “Good.” Starr thought. “She has more intelligence then my students. She just might make it in the world”
Starr then turned and began to trot away while looking at his student’s works. Surprisingly the thugs tried to follow but as soon as he turned the corner onto a busy street with guard, they retreated.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
“Absolutely not, get out of my face I’m trying to wash down the disgusting drawings I had to suffer today.” Starr stated.
The wealthy sailor pleaded to him. “But, but, you’re famous, surely you recognize the importance of ancient architecture that could exist on these islands!”
“No. I’m not famous. I’m well regarded. Read a dictionary and learn the difference. Now get out of my face. Adventures and expeditions to long dead civilizations are a silly thing.” He said and with a “plop” sound as his mug returned to the table, he stood up, pushed his chair in and walked away.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
“Please.” The old beggar pleaded and he laid on the side on the street. “Food, I need food. I lost everything in the fire.”
His hand touched Starr’s hip as dirt and grime swiped onto his pants from the beggar. “You just got dirt on my pants.” He growled back. With a flip of his thumb, the coin was shot in front of the beggar and spun as it landed. “Go take that coin, buy a bucket of water and wash yourself for Aneria’s sake. Now get out of my face.”
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
“Shut it.” Starr replied to the initial insult.
“Shut it? Shut it! I’ll show you who to shut---Hey, where do you think yer going!?” The drunkard wailed.
No reply came. Starr had just walked away without a single reply to the man.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
The necklace beamed in the sunlight. A white-gold chain lace attached to an amulet in the shape of the Church of Aneria’s symbol emblazoned with blue and yellow gems. Most likely the gems were some kind of sapphire or topaz while the white gold must have been created by an expert alchemist. The geometry of the necklace’s hang wasn’t too low nor was it too high and it was perfectly tightened to maximize both stability and style to it’s owner.
Oh and the woman wearing it was pretty too but Starr wasn’t paying attention to her.
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Other notes:
nV_Vanity - You already play Oliver incredibly well, and this character doesn't look to deviate from that level of quality. You may start playing him whenever you choose.
I'm a man of few words and many voices.
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Character Information
Name:
Steaz Quad
Age:
27
Class:
Ranger
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?:
Member of the Medori
Physical description:
Steaz is a strong man with brown hair, some stubbles, and dark clothes. He always has his bow with him, and his face isn't "the cleanest".
Screen capture of your skin:
http://www.mcskins.o...-1125896691.png
Uh I hope you can tell by that it's appropriate..it's my 3rd char so it better be..
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
From he was very small, Steaz was taught the magic of the bow and sword. He was trained up for fighting his whole childhood, because there was a big war commencing between their island and another. Soon, he became the most skilled archer and swordsman on their island, and he started teaching the little ones himself. After 26 years, the war finally started. That day, he woke up, took a glance at the sun, breathed heavily in and knew. He knew this had to be the day it started. The day he had trained for his whole life. He was wrong. It didn't happen until the day after.
It happened at night, he heard footsteps in the hallway. His dad was never up at night, and his mother moved away a long time ago. His father said that if you didn't sleep all night, you'd perform bad next day, and next day might be the war day. He curiously got up, silently, and took his bow which was laying next to his bed. He silently opened the door, and saw a man's back. He couldn't tell who it was, but it was their armour, so he assumed there was someone going to talk to him about something. He went out and said, with his strong, commanding voice; "Is something wrong?" The man turned, and looked at him. Then he silently handed him a paper and ran away. Steaz shrugged at this, and opened the letter. His dad had been killed. The battle had started without him knowing, on the other island. They didn't bring him, their master ranger, because he had to sleep all night. He was so mad. So mad at his father for not bringing him, and so mad at the person that did. He grabbed his bow in his right hand, put his sword in his sheath and ran out to get on the next airship there. He reached the next one, and they flew over to the other island. He shot the enemies from a distance, before they even got there, without hitting any of his allies. The fight lasted for days, he couldn't count how many, and eventually, he fainted of exhaustion. At that moment, when he fainted, he thought he was going to die.
He could barely see a couple of strong feet running towards him, before his eyes closed. He woke up on his own island, in a house he had never been in before. He got up and ran out again to help the others with the fight yet again. A man was standing outside, training on a dummy with his sword. Steaz shouted at him they had to go help, and he stopped training. "No, it's over. We lost." It hit him right in his heart. "What?" "We lost Steaz, they would let me have this house until you recovered, and then we have to move away, away from this place. I know where I'm going. I'm going to live with my family, but you better find a place for yourself mate." He patted him on the back, and gestured for Steaz to follow him towards an airship. For the whole ride, he just thought about the same words. "We lost."
His saviour dissapeared about halfway through the ride, Steaz thought he said bye to him, but didn't respond to it. After more days at the airship, the pilot clapped in front of him. "Get off mate, this is the last stop." he said. Steaz looked at the island they had stopped by, and smiled. Nobody knew he had lost a fight there, and neither would they. He took a coin out of his pocket and tipped the pilot, something he seemed to find a bit strange, and then planted his feet at the new island. The pilot said something about "Constance" before the airship dissapeared in the distance. "Constance." he thought. "Home."
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
Well, to get friends, get a life, fight again, and never, never loose ever again.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):
He is very strong, and extremely good with the bow, aswell as pretty good at a sword.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your
class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):
He has a weak point behind his left foot, nobody knows about it, but he was shot there with an arrow many years ago. This doesn't affect him until someone kicks/beats, or does anything at that place, then he will be helpless.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
No.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capital, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Steaz takes out his bow and aims on one of the feet of the biggest guy. "No way." he mumbles to himself and lets the arrow go. The big man turns and looks down at his foot, seing the arrow sticking out of it and the blood pouring out. He gets furious and shouts at his friend to go get Steaz. This time, he shoots the arm of the guy, so he looses his sword. The girl ran away when they were both distracted, and Steaz whistles, walking away while putting his bow back on his back.
A man approaches you with promises of fortune abroad if you join the crew of his airships. How do you react, and why?
Steaz looks at the man. "This is my home." he says. "And I have enough money, I do not intend to leave this place." The man looks kind of dissapointed. "Please?" Steaz looks kind of curiously at the man. "Why do you want me to join so bad?" he says. The man glares at him and walks away, not responding.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Steaz looks at the man, knowing he promised himself to help everyone as he best could within his power. He looked through his backpack, dissapointed when not finding any food. Then, he runs towards the nearest shop and buys a loaf of bread. He comes back and hands it to the man. "There you go." he says and walks away, whistling.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
"Hey you, your mother is so fat you can't even compare!" a fellow shouts at him as he is about to leave. Steaz turns, and slowly walks towards the fellow that said so. He draws his knife and looks at it. While stripping his finger at the knife, he says "I don't care what you say about my mother, but nobody is allowed to offend me." he says coldly and puts the knife up to his face. "Got it?" The man nods slowly, seemingly very scared. Steaz nods and leaves the tavern.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
"That's a beautiful neckless." Steaz thinks to himself. "Wish I had someone to buy something like that for.." he thinks and watches the woman pass by. "My mother would have suited that, I am sure." he thinks. "But she left a long time ago."
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Nope.
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