Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Chancellory
Physical description: Lucifer is a decently tall man coming up to about 6 feet and 2 inches. He is constanly wearing this big bulky black armor so few people actually know what he looks like.
Biography:
Lucifer was born into a fairly small mining settlement. He was raised by his mother and father. Lucifer took an early interest in swords and since his father was a bladesman, he quickly learned the basics. By the time he was a teenager, he could almost beat his father. Even though his father tried to stop him from boasting, Lucifer's ego was too large. When he was not training, he was walking around the settlement saying he could beat almost anyone there with a sword. Eventually, all the other kids had enough of his boasting so they told his father what had been going on. Lucifer's father was very upset about this, so he decided to teach Lucifer a lesson. He took Lucifer out in the middle of town and challenged him to a fight, using practice swords. Lucifer quickly realized his mistakes, but his father would not let him back out of this challenge.
It was a short fight. Many did not even call it a fight. Lucifer was struck down by his father very quickly. After the fight, Lucifer's father dragged him back to the house and told him to think about what he did. That day changed Lucifer. He barely spoke any words after that fight. Silence became his closest friend as he continued to train. Only one thing was on his mind during this time, which was becoming greater than anyone else. This drive had a negative effect on Lucifer, but he managed to keep it under control. After deciding that he would get no better living in the settlement, he boarded a ship heading to the Captial.
What is your character’s main goal?: To become the strongest
Strengths: Lucifer is a very strong man and very good with a blade. His silent ways make him more unknown than the average man
Weaknesses: While Lucifer has become a good bladesman, his bulky armor and power have caused him to be slower than most. Lucifer's skill is important to him, so when other challenge it, he becomes angry
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted?: No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Lucifer: *walks up to the men and draws his blade*
Guard: Oi, you here to save the girl?
Luficer *shakes his head* I'm here to beat both of you, I need some practice *then procceds to take a fighting stance*
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Lucifer walks straight past the man, he has no need to bother himself with tasks such as that
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Beggar: Please, give me some food
Lucifer: *ignores the man and says to himself* The weak only bring the strong down
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Lucifer: *stands up and walks away* I would not waste my time with him
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Lucifer *walks right up to the woman, blocking her path* Give. Me. The. Necklace.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Nope
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): No skype
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is making a situation in role-play that is impossible to respond to because it is overpowered, an example being "chops legs off" instead of "swings axe at legs".
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using out of character information in character.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplay is acting as someone else.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one can hack.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: You can murder when the play is ok with it in out of character chat.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: In the out of character chat, or with brakets in front and behind the chat.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: People who have taken their degrees in magicry at the acadamy.
Who are the Fallen?: A group of loners who deal with problems peacefully, believe in story telling, and live in tents.
When and how did our current government come to be?: When the former government fell, a new one was formed.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: A group of people formed to protect citizens from supernatural evils. But it doesnt matter because mullraugh shut them down.
What are the Net and Essence? The net keeps people from falling for eternity when they fall of the islands, essence is energy within a person for doing things like spellcasting.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: None
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Character Information
Name: Ulysses
Age: 40
Class: Craftsman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellory
Physical description: 1.6 meters tall, scrawny.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): To begin his life with the beginning of his life; Ulysses was born on a Tuesday, forty years ago. It was said by his parents, that when he was born he cried more than the other children. That was dismissed as something of unimportance, but it may have been a sign of his life to come. Also, when he was born, the local mage concluded that because he cried an oddly large amount, he would be destined to grow up as a very peculiar person. When he was a child his parents, being so busy with their trade, spent very little time with Ulysses. So, as a result, he was cared for by the very same local mage, Grant, that had professed him to be abnormal. Because Grant was often very busy, Ulysses had been given a dog to help stave off the lonliness when Grant was not there. As Ulysses grew up, he was exposed to all sorts of magics from the mage, some legal, and some not so much... One of these evil magic forms was necromancy; Grant killed the pet dog that Ulysses loved so much, and then attempted to bring it back to life. This was an unsuccesful attempt, and the dog was forever dead. Ulysses, being the sensitive young boy that he was, was deeply scarred by his dog's death. Grant advised Ulysses to never tell anyone about what actually happened the day his dog died (no doubt to elude the authorites). So, Ulysses remained silent about the event for the rest of his life. This was not the only time that Grant's magic had disheartened Ulysses. When Ulysses was crafting, which he often did because he wanted to follow in his parents trade, Grant narrated that the objects of Ulysses's creation were so mechanically complicated, that they could come to life. Grant often performed ceremonies to bring these inanimate objects to life, but almost always destroyed the item. Grant had once destroyed a fishing rod that Ulysses had spent many hours crafting. These events left deep gashes on his spirit. However, life always went on for Ulysses. As Ulysses grew into his early teens, Grant stopped coming to care for Ulysses, who had kept Grant's secret for all of those years. He quickly grew a deep hatred towards magic, and did his best to carry on with his parent's craft through his teen years. His parents had taught him how to build, repair, or improve almost anything in the little free time that they had with him. As a result, Ulysses grew incredibly skilled in his profession of crafting. However, his hatred towards magic always stayed with him, and thus caused him to reject anything to do with magic, including the religions that people follow. He even rejected the healing magics performed by the church, and therefore hated everything about it. He always thought and still thinks that the magic used is harming people, and tricking them into paying into the church, so they profit. His experiences with Grant have made him aspire to be a good person because he knows what it is like to be a victim, and does not want to put that on anyone else. Until now, Ulysses has kept quiet, nomadicly living in many houses, surviving by selling many crafts. Since he crafted so many things, his hand to eye coordination is very good. Also because of his small weight, he is light on his feet, and therefore can sneak very well.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To carry on his parents craft, and deny all magic by convincing others to not use it because he thinks it is all destructive, and evil.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He is an extremely skilled crafter, and can keep a secret as a result of his practice. He is light on his feet so he can sneak, and has good coordination.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): He is sensitive, weak, and rejects all magic so he is paranoid, and does not trust people who use or support magic. He also fears magic.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
*Sees people beating up the girl, and feels bad for the girl*
*Goes to get the nearest guard or police officer*
"There is two men beating on a girl over there" Says Ulysses to the guards.
"Okay, I will do something about that" replies the guard.
*Thinks to himself that he should leave before he gets injured*
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"Go to Bloodstone" says the man.
"No, its magic will obviously kill me before I even get close."
"You will regret not going, you could have been generously rewarded."
"It is not worth dyeing over."
*Walks away*
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
"Give me food" says the old man.
"I will be back" says Ulysses
*Crafts a fishing rod, and some bread"
*Gives fishing rod, and bread to old man*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
"Your mother is so fat, not even Dora could explore her!" says the man.
"I beg your pardon?" says Ulysses
*Feels insulted, and sad because of the man*
*stands up, and leaves before the man can respond, disheartend by the event*
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
*ignores necklace, and keeps walking*
*She would probably kill me with some magic*
*The church would also probebly find, and kill me if I stole this*
*I do not want to be as bad as Grant was*
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? No
Other notes: In chancellory lore under major locations, the outpost has an unfinished sentence at the end of the paragraph.
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): yes, my name is odsta22
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: I do
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Forcing your Rp on another with out giving them any notice, or any time to defend themselves
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using ooc knowledge to say know someones name, or know if someone is evil because they just said so in ooc chat.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Taking on a character either made by you or someone else, and acting out their actions, and interacting with other characters around you.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: no one
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: If they agree to it
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: anytime using [[]] or (()) not sure which one this server uses
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: Anyone that attends the academy and is not on the villain blacklist
Who are the Fallen?: The Medori, an old superstitious group of people who tend to avoid the Chancellory
When and how did our current government come to be?: 169 A.R after the defeat of Linyera monarchy 167 A.R
Who are the Order of Aradin?: The Chancellors body guards
What are the Net and Essence? The net is the barrier that saves life forces from falling to the world below, Essence is the substance you get from smelting, killing monsters and performing other tasks, it can save you and your gear from falling if you hit the net
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Ive been on this server when it was on God of Kings. Also ive been on another server which wasn't as good.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: Daemons Rp server, i left becuase there was a shift in ownership, and it wasn't an rp server anymore
Character Information
Name: Elruab
Age: 23
Class: Ranger
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Medori
Physical description: Medium height, Dark brown hair, Cold looking face, Bushy eyebrows,
Screen capture of your skin: (cant seem to post it, but if you send me your email ill send you the picture)
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Growing up Elruab loved to hear the stories of the body snatcher, even thought it scared him he still found it interesting. Elruabs father was a very superstitious man, and he didn't like Elruab to play outside too much with all the other children, so instead Elruab stayed inside most of the time and imagined, and thought, and created little scenarios in his head, about what the body snatcher would be like, what meeting different people would be like. Elruab had heard of the air ships, and only saw one, his father never got one, nor used one because he was scared of what might happen.
When Elruab was 21 his father passed away from natural causes. Even though his father didn't let him do much outside, up until the time he died, he taught Elruab how to defend himself. When Elruab was 12 he began teaching him to do light blocks, and to punch; with little success. When he turned 13 his father gave him an old bone knife, he set up some hay bales and tried to teach him to use it properly, Elruab was decent at stabbing, but had no technique. So his father began teaching him to stay strong, by going out at night; going on runs or pulling himself up on trees (pull ups). after he was strong enough, his father explained and showed him how to make a bow, it wasn't very fancy, or strong, but it would do for now. At 14 Elruab was getting used to his bow, he practiced making arrows nightly, when permitted by his father. some times his father and him would go on hunting trips at night, just to get him used to firing it. After a kill was secured his father would show Elruab how to skin the animal using the bone knife he gave him.
At 16, Elruab it was time to make his own Bow and knife, so he went out and found a sturdy oak tree, he marked it a returned at night to retrieve it, when he came back he found the tree, but the marker was gone. He didn't think much of it as that thing happened a lot with all the animals around. After a long night Elruab had cut out the shape of the bow, but had to keep it from his father, he wanted to surprise him. So he would work on the bow after his training with his dad, and then after one long year he finished the bow, compared to his old one, it was in a word, magnificent. He showed his father, his father was, to Elruab's dismay, angry. His father was mad that he had kept a secret from him. Later on in the week, Elruab's father told him that he was proud of the time and workmanship put into the bow.
With his new bow, and his new found respect from his father, his curiosity peaked. At the age of 18, Elruab finally asked his father why he was so superstitious and why he wouldn't let him interact with the other children. His father had him sit down, he told Elruab of his mother, she was a story teller, he told him of the stories she used to tell, more elaborate than body snatcher [[which is Elruab's favorite story]]. His father also told Elruab of how his mother, while on a hunting trip, got lost because the local huntsman didn't teach her navigation very well. Erlaubs father almost broke down into tears trying to tell Elruab that he could have taught her, but he had delayed it because he thought she was ready. Next he told Elruab that the only reason he didn't let Elruab out much, or to interact with others, is because he didn't want to have to rely on the villagers and get let down again, and lose another. Elurab and his father didn't believe that Elruab's mother was dead, after all she trained with Elruabs father. After the story Elruab wasn't mad at his father, but he still wished he had spent more time outside as a kid, at least with others. His father said he didn't want to interfere with his life anymore, he may be superstitious, but he still knew when enough was enough.
For the first time, Elruab was going around to shops, saying hi to people he had never met before, still new to social life he wasn't very good at starting conversations. When Elruab turned 21 and his father passed away, he receded back to his anti social life for a while. While depression almost consumed him, he held onto one glimpse of hope, his mother. He went back to imagine what it would be like meeting her, flying an airship with her, hunting with her. Soon, he realized his new purpose, he had to find his mother. With a new goal, Elruab grabbed his bow, his arrows, and what food he had left, and began his search.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To find his mother, and to make friends.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He is good with a bow, very creative, used to being on his own, so hes used to traveling alone.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Not very sociably strong, very shy, just getting used to talking to people again. Elruab is fast and good with a bow, but hes not strong enough to fight with swords or block very well, so he just sticks to daggers and dodging.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No, but ill rp it if someone arrives that fits the mother role, and if they accept of course.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl. Elruab notices what is going on, never having fought another person before he decides to try to talk to the two armored men, and have them leave the girl alone. But the men mock him, and continue as if he is not there, when he persists one of them turns towards him ''Alright you, you want her so bad!?" "prove it!" *the armored man unsheathes sword and swings at Elruab* *startled but not suprised, Elruab ducks out of the way and unsheathes his knife and stabs upward at the armored mans arm* *the man's sword is heavy, so he is too slow to dodge* "Oy! that's it!" screams the other armored man *as the other man prepares to strike Elruab lunges at him in attempt to knock him into the wall* *the man is busy getting his sword out and is caught off guard* *Elruab quickly motions the girl to come with him, to get her away from the two armored men*
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded. *Elruab is not used to men just proposing things to him, but he inquires, slightly interested* "what would you have me retrieve?" "and whats the reward?" *the man proceeds to tell him about the item, and the reward he will be payed for the task* *Elruab has no idea who this man is or what he wants, so he is worried about what accepting the task might do to him* *he decides to go anyways* "Alright you've got your man" You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food. *having little food of his own, Elruab knows what it is like* *taking pity on the man he opens his bag and pulls out some fresh meat he just caught* "If you'll come with me, we can get this cooked, and i can get you a meal" *Elruab says to the man showing him the meat* *the old man gets up and walks with him* In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother. *Elruab is a little sensitive about his mother, as she is his purpose for living, but he can see that the man is a little tipsy* *Elruab turns all the way toward the man, he stares him in the eyes* "what did you just say?" *the man responds with another insult* *Elruab knows that this is not the place, nor time, so he clenches his fists and walks out of the door*
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears. *Elruab notices the necklace, he thinks it would be a nice greeting gift to his mother* "Hello miss, *he turns toward her* might I ask where you got that beautiful necklace?" *she responds with a hello and proceeds to thank him for the compliment* *she then tells him that if he gets her a package from a nearby town its his* *Elruab eagerly accepts and heads towards the town.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Not at all
Other notes: Thank you for your time, I know you've been busy and responding to all of these takes time I know, just thought I'd say thanks
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
8/18/2011
Posts:
104
Minecraft:
WholeGrainWheat
Member Details
Deferred:
Cheddar7 - There were quite a few things wrong with your app, so let's go over them. First of all, your bio is rather bland and short, so a bit of spicing up couldn't hurt there. Also, your character doesn't seem to have any actual weaknesses, as of COURSE being in heavy armor slows someone down, but when they get out of it, they'd actually be faster, and reacting badly after being challenged about something that they know they're good at is just a normal reaction, not a weakness. Lastly, the ICRs could use quite a bit more fleshing out and showing of your character's personality, because from what I've seen, he doesn't seem to have one. Good luck!
KinderSuprise456 - It was a pretty good app, but I have a few issues, none of which should be a huge deal. First, the grammar just isn't very good. It's not a major problem, but we appreciate proper grammar on the server. Secondly, your character is surprisingly a bit UNDERpowered. Another strength or two actually couldn't hurt. Fix those things up and it should be a pretty good app. Good luck!
EDIT: Sorry for not mentioning this in the original post dedoralive, but zymph (the whitelister who deferred you) should get on your re-app ASAP.
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): Yes, it’s Socfuz
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:
Sir, yes, sir!
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: RP'ing something happened without leading up to it with other RP messages so the other person can't respond to it. Example: I punched Sarfu in the stomach. The other player must be allowed to react. Correct example: I swing my fist towards Sarfu's stomach
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using OOC knowledge in character, like crafting recipes.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Pretending to be a made up character and acting out your character's moves, thoughts, and actions.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When the other player accepts it.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: If you seriously need to ask a question out of game, like: Wait my stuff didn't respawn with me, why? or state something (like incorrect grammar) that won't hinder the RP.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Only those who have learned it at the Academy.
Who are the Fallen?: The Fallen were separated from the rest of the humans in the beginning time. They are a somewhat peaceful and superstitious people.
When and how did our current government come to be?: In 169 A.R. by the Chancellor who formed three advisory positions under him. The three positions are: Master of Blades, Master of Words, Master of Coins. Which I'm guessing means these are the leaders of specific branches like Defense, Schooling/Learning, and Economy
Who are the Order of Aradin?: A group of people who patrol the skies, in blimps and hot air balloons, to protect the villagers from aerial assaults.
What are the Net and Essence? The Net is barrier under the islands that catches people who fall and are transported to the nearest island, however if you don’t have enough Essence (XP), which can be acquired by killing monsters, the Net will only save you and not your items.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Not much, but I do have a great imagination.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Character Information
Name: Shawn Hallert
Age: 17
Class: Ranger, but I would like to train to become a Engineer.
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellory.
Physical description: 5' 11" (5 Foot 11 Inches) 165 Pounds Somewhat muscular arms and legs. Black hair and black eyes. Light tan skin, one large scar on his stomach from a hot air balloon crash. He tried to pilot it at 13. (There's a reason for the goggles, keep reading.)
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliché manner.):
Childhood:
Shawn was born in a small village as the son of Robert Hallert, a Ranger for the Order of Aradin, and Esther Hallert, a tavern maid. Shawn was taught everything (his father knew) by his father. Shawn learned how to fire a bow and swing a sword correctly by the age of 8. By the age of 10, due to his father and his friendly nature, Shawn had lot's of friends including a blonde girl with jade green eyes, by the name of Guisella Vanfal, who he secretly loved. Most of his friends went to the Academy, while he stayed home and learned from his father. (His father always hated the Academy.)
The Falling from Grace:
Shawn had everything! A loving mother and father, friends, a good knowledge of the world, a great attitude towards life, and a plenty of money for clothing and food. But that was all about to change, Shawn just turned 13 that fateful day, the day his life would change forever. His father was sent to help escort a royal from another land one day. His father wouldn't be back for three weeks and told Shawn to: "Stay strong and be brave for me." With those final words his dad placed his piloting goggles on Shawn's head and kissed him goodbye. A strange thing since his father loved those goggles. Three weeks later when his father’s ship returned Shawn and his mother waited eagerly for him to step off the ship, but he didn’t! Shawn’s mother asked the crew captain where her husband was, the crew captain just shrugged and said “He was never on my ship, I know that much.” Shawn and his mother returned home awestruck. They were both thinking the same thing, “Where is he?” Soon after “missing person” signs went up for him then went away along with the money from his job. They now had to survive on the small amount of pay and tips from Esther working as a tavern maid. Shawn lost most of his friends except for Guisella, who felt sorry for him.
The Map:
Shawn got a job at the local farm at 16 which brought in some extra money, but still not enough for eating well. One night, when his mother had stayed late at the tavern, Shawn decided to look through his father’s stuff, he found some coins in his dad’s trousers and an old, wrinkled piece of paper. Shawn unraveled it and saw it was a map of one of the islands, he thought it must be a drawing he made when he was younger. But upon closer inspection he noticed he had never seen this island before. Where was this island and is this where his father went? At the bottom of the page were three sets of numbers, numbers he knew to be coordinates. Shawn shoved the piece of paper and coins in his pocket grabbed his stone sword and snuck away to find his father.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To find his father, figure out why he left, and what this strange island has to do with it all.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He has a strong sword swinging arm and a strategic mind (thanks to his father), yet struggles to get hold of a good thought when in tight situations.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): His left arm is weak (so when aiming a bow he's not very good), due to the hot air balloon accident and has a slight limp. His anger can get the better of him, causing him to get into bad situations. He has a short fuse and can snap at the smallest thing. Sometimes he think's he's stronger than he is.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No only the ones I made up for his story. Maybe someone for Guisella though she probably wouldn't take part in much, so it may not be worth it. I could also play his father or find someone for him, maybe. What do you think?
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armored men harassing a young girl. The girl reminds me of Guisella so I run towards the men. " Hey! Leave her alone!" *Pulls out sword* The one man laughs and swiftly kicks my legs out from under me. My sword fly's off into an alley. Oh yeah? says the bigger man. I lift myself back up and say "It's okay. I don't need it.” *Waves hand at them as if to say "bring it"* The one man lunges forward. I swiftly move to the side and trip the man. The man falls and hit's his head on a stone block and is knocked unconscious. I grab his sword and block the second mans stab. He lunges again. I block, but he punches me square in the face. I stumble back, seeing stars. I hardly get my vision back before the second fist comes. I wake up bleeding from my nose and the girl cleaning a cut on my forehead. That was brave of you to help me. the girl says. "Yeah, brave that's what they call that."
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded. “Rewarded how?” I have gold. Says the man as he opens his hand and shows me a dozen gold coins. Here take it and you’ll get more IF you return. He says grinning, shoving the coins towards me. I quickly grab the coins and ask “What must I retrieve?” The man leans forward and whispers in my ear: Ten blocks of obsidian. “Are you crazy? That stuff is nearly impossible to mine. And how could I fend off the monsters while mining it?” Just take this diamond pickaxe and get ten blocks of obsidian, don’t worry about the monsters. He growls. “I’ll need a ship to get there.” Use mine right there, just go or the deals off! He shouts pointing to a hot air balloon. I glance at the ship then look at the gold in my hand, I notice something wrong with the gold. It almost appears to be glowing and…. BREATHING! “No thanks, take it back. Get some other sap to do it for you.” I start to walk away then run as I hear the man hollering: No! Just take the gold! Take it, I don’t need it! Please! PLEASE, TAKE THIS DEMON GOLD OFF MY HANDS!!!
(If you didn’t get that I was insinuating the gold was from the Nether.)
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food. I toss him a silver coin and give him my ham sandwich. Thank you, young man. he says. I smile and walk on. Suddenly I think to myself he looked familiar, somewhat like my dad. I turn around to say something, but he's gone.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother. "Oh, really?" The fellow get's a little too close to my face. She was nice, though, if you know what I mean. he says with rancid breath. I knock him to the ground by hitting him in the head with my mug and leave. I hear the man scrambling to stand up, cussing at me, and the bartender laugh as I close the door.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears. The jade green emeralds remind me of Guisella's eyes, perhaps I should get something for her? "Good day, my lady. Say where did you get that necklace?" Oh, my boyfriend got this for me from the jeweler down the street. she answers. I go to the jewelry store and see a similar one to the necklace the lady was wearing which is very expensive. I decide to buy a cheaper, yet similar one for Guisella.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Other notes: I finally, FINALLY got a premium Minecraft account!!!!
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
8/18/2011
Posts:
104
Minecraft:
WholeGrainWheat
Member Details
Accepted-
Socfuz - The previous whitelister who handled you, that dashing fellow who posted just above me, had to dash out before he could read your app for himself. Glad to say, it was really quite good, though your definition of the Order of Aradin was a bit incorrect. I found that too small of a problem to defer you for, so just reread the OP and you should be fine. Welcome to the community, and check out our forums at http://aneria.enjin.com. Hope to see you there!
I tried joining the server, as i was clearly accepted show by the post two above this one, yet i am not white listed? did i get the ip wrong? i accessed rp.aneria.us to no avail, any ideas?
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
6/12/2012
Posts:
229
Minecraft:
Don_rosa
Member Details
Out of Character Information
IGN: Don_rosa
Real-Life Age:
14
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot):
Don_rosa2 (how could Don_rosa be taken?!)
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:
Yes.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is if you make your character overpowered in game, like if you meet someone and agree to have a battle, and the first thing you do is type "Runs up the wall, takes a backflip, lands on example's neck and strangle him" in chat, then giving no chance for the opponent to respond.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?:
Metagaming is when you use out of character information you may have in game. For example if you are a swordsman, you teach a noob how to make a pickaxe.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?:
Roleplay is playing someone you're not. In minecraft this means probably change your skin, create a backstory, live with that backstory and meet up with people, and in this case keep building the lore.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?:
Noone.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?:
When you have a CvC.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When a problem that can't be solved IC comes up.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:
Yes. (Alot of reading right there, you should congratulate me on getting through)
Who is allowed to use magic?:
Priests, Mages and Paladins.
Who are the Fallen?:
The fallen are one of the main races in the roleplay ,also known as Medori.
When and how did our current government come to be?:
After a battle with the former monarchy, the government was created with a Chancellor on top, who can choose three characters to be his loremasters. This all happened 169 A.R.
Who are the Order of Aradin?:
A group that are supposed to protect the Chancellery.
What are the Net and Essence?
The net is magic beneath the islands that catches the ones that falls off and teleports them to the closest island. The net can only catch living creatures, but at the cost of 3 levels of essence it will bring you back with your stuff. Essence is magic you get from killing mobs, mining, taking food out of the oven and things like that.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:
A long time ago i played on a server i think was called Oblivion, i also tried a couple of others which i can't exactly remember the names of.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Oblivion and i think it was called The hobbit. I quit both of them because they closed down.
Character Information
Name: Tazec Demelyc
Age:
21
Class:
Bladesman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?:
Citizen of the Chancellory
Physical description:
Blonde hair, blue eyes, dark clothes and always ready for a fight.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Too late. The village was burned down to the last bit. His parents had dissapeared long ago, and now he had no money, no place to live, he had nothing. He never took a big note of his parents dissapearing, they didn't even want him, so he survived on his own. Still, he would really like some money from them right now. He just stood there and stared into the ruins of his home for 10 years. When the night started sneaking up on him, he got out of this trance. He had to leave before the monsters came for him. He was an excellent swordsman, but there was no way he could fight off all the monsters that came at night. Luckily, he knew this place as good as his own pockets, so he started running towards the pier where all the airships hopefully was. When he got there, it was almost mid-night, but he was lucky it was only a creeper there. They were feared by every man, but he knew how to fight it. He ran over to it, and before it noticed him punched it off the pier and down into the net. He had to be quick before the net brung it up again, so he ran towards the closest airship. He suddenly remembered there was no way he could fly that thing, luckily, there was a sailor sleeping in the cabin. "Hey wake up, we gotta get out of here!" he screamed. "Hmf...hmmf....gah...oh hello there!" the sailor finally woke up. "Come on, help me get this ship off the pier before something blows it up!" Tazec said. "Okay, i'll help you, seems like it's something serious", the sailor answered and ran up to the deck. Together they managed to loosen the ship and fly it out from the pier. (That means Tazec loosened it and the sailor did everything else). After that Tazec must've fell asleep because the next thing he remembered was a big crash. Another ship had crashed into them, and now they were heading straight into a tower. The other boat's sailor got scared and flew away in fright of getting caught. There was a big crash into the tower, and everything went black. He woke up in a room with four white walls and immediately recognized it as a hospital. "Oh crap, what happened?" he said and tried to sit up. "Ouch!" he said and gently got back down. The next thing a nurse gets into the room and says "Oh you're awake, that's good! Don't try to sit up or do anything really, it will hurt." "Yeah i noticed", Tazec answered. "What about the sailor?" he said. The nurse got an uncomfortable and said expression in her face. "He didn't make it, he was much further at the front of the boat than you were, and got thrown off when you crashed", she said almost whispering. "Oh", he answered, and suddenly everything got back to him, the burned village, the airship, the crash. It took a couple of weeks for him to get better, but he got out with it alot better than he would expect after a bad crash like that. He only got a broken leg, which meant he could never run again which kind of sucked, but he could live with it. Atleast he could still fight.
That was a long time ago now. He was only 16 that time, and now he had settled in the big town and learned their story. He never told anyone about his story, or the village that burned down, but noone ever seemed to ask either, so he was okay with it. His 21'th birthday was coming closer and closer, and he was excited because he loved parties. Every year since he got here, the people of the city used to throw him a suprise party, and he loved it. All these nice gifts he got was amazing. Not long ago, these people started showing up in the city. They called themselves the Medori. It didn't seem like everyone liked the fact that they started settling in our town too much, but he didn't take too much note of it. He thought that if they needed a place to stay, why not here? When his 21'th birthday got there, he didn't feel like going to a party for once, so he didn't. Instead he went over to the pier. He looked out on the airships and started thinking the day all those years ago, the sailor, the crash. He hadn't put a foot in another airship since that day. "I'm just being silly," he said to himself and got onboard on one of them. He didn't know where it was going, he just went into it, not knowing where it was going.
It was a bad idea. It went to the Medori island, where there were no Citizens. The Medori looked on him, it looked like they were deciding wethever to eat him or kill him, but they didn't. They just gave him those nasty looks. After a while of walking around the island when nothing happened, he decided to go back. There was no reason for him to be here. Still, he didn't feel like going back, he felt like exploring. So that's what he did. He started travelling to all the different islands he could find.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
Exploring the world for oppertunities and finding out what he's meant to do.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):
Really good with a sword, doesn't really care what strangers thing about him or whetever they think he's weird. He explores everywhere he can.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):
Really scared of the net, he fell down there as a kid and hated the feeling when he got transported back up. Can never run again because of a broken leg after the crash.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl "Hey, what are you doing?" Tazec said. One of the men responded "What does it look like, get away you Frak!" "Stop harassing her!" Tazec responded. "What did you say? Are you challenging us?" He made a sign for the girl to run while they had their backs turned on her, and so she did. Then, he started running. The two men followed after, but they were big so they couldn't get through all the holes that Tazec could, so it was easy to shake them off for him.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"Bloodstone?" Isn't that the place full of monsters where noone goes to?" Tazec said. "Yeah," said the man. "Cool, of course i'll do it!"
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Tazec remembered the days when he got to the town. He didn't have anything, but he was lucky that he had a golden coin that sold for quite alot of money. Apperantly, this man hadn't been as lucky. "Here you go, god bless you", Tazec said and handed him a loaf of bread.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Tazec's mother is long gone.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
"No!" "Tazec stop thinking those thoughts, you are a good guy, good guy!" He tried to pull himselves together, but the necklace was so beautiful. He got control over himself and stood as still as he could until the woman was out of his eyesight.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
No. Other notes: This is my second try.
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot):Yes, ManaTheDragon
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:I have and do agree to abide by them.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?:Not giving someone the chance to retaliate.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?:Breaking the established rules.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?:The simplest def. is acting. Acting in a role. Playing a character
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?:No one
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?:When they decide
When are you allowed to speak out of character?:In OOC channel
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?:Mages, Priests, Palidins
Who are the Fallen?:The nomadic Medori
When and how did our current government come to be?:169 A.R. after the fall of the old monarchy
Who are the Order of Aradin?:The once great protectors of the citizens
What are the Net and Essence?The Net catches the fools who fall off the islands, and The Essence is experience basically
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:None really
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:None
Character Information
Name:Mana
Age:19
Class:Ranger
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?:Citizen
Physical description:Physically Fit
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):A traveler born to roam the lands an, help those in need. A schollar at heart full of knowledge. He also has a strong liking of animals, and has been aided by wolves, horses, and cats in the past. He likes to avoid battles when possible. Long ago a bandit(maybe) killed his horse. Nothing special about the bandit or the horse. Just info.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):He dosen't need a reason to help people, He just does it.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):A crack shot with his Trusty bow. Knows a good deal about mapping writng, and misc. knowledge.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):Not good at close range combat. Very blunt and truthful, will tell you what he thinks of you, no matter who you are.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Mana approaches with Bow drawn and calls out. They turn and tell him to bugger off. Mana reponds by saying, "I will when I know whether or not I should send this arrow through your skull, you macho fool." The fight begins and Mana quickly dispatches one of the men, while the other charges with sword in hand. Mana sees the sword and grudgingly draws his own blade. The man with his shotty sword work loses the duel quickly enough. The girl asks "why did you save me?" Mana responds with "Because you needed help. He turns and walks off as he sheathes his blade.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"If I am to go that place then tell me at least, how badly this needs to be done and what my reward will be."
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
As he passes Mana sees the desparation of the old man. He checks his bag and finds a Spare loaf of bread. "Here old man, I wish you the best of luck in the coming times." He say this as he hands the bread to the old man.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Mana Replies with "If that were the case she probably would have lived longer, but regardless have this bit of gold and get yourself another round. I only ask that you refrain from bothering me any further.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
"Excuse me madam, but that necklace is absolutely lovely. Why it looks just like the one my little sister has been wanting."
"Oh that's nice."
"Yes, I wish I could get one, but there expensive, only I am running ot of time, she's dying you see."
"Oh how awful. Tell you what dear, take this and give it to your sister."
"Thank you." Mana pockets the necklace and walks away with a sly smile.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): sario100
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Doing things that your are over-powered, i.e. saying "Grows 50 feet and breaks island in half"
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Saying or doing things with your character that your character wouldn't know/ wouldn't know how to do. I.e. A guard telling a mage some cool spells he learned that he didn't learn in the roleplay
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Pretending you are someone else, sometimes something supernatural or just something regular, but when you roleplay you act completely like the person, not like your real self.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one is allowed to use these cheaty mods.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: If both of the characters agree to have a RP fight and one person kills the other one.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: Always speak in character but if you have to you can type in parentheses (this would be OOC), and there are also chat channels for speaking OOC
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes I do, it is the reason I decided to apply for the server, it seems very fun because of the extensive lore.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Only people who have learned magic in the roleplay, the mages, or people who are learning to be a mage
Who are the Fallen?: They are a simple culture who live secluded from the rest of society, they have a greater magic aptitude and there island have started to drift towards the other humans, making tension in the fallen society.
When and how did our current government come to be?: It took over in 169 A.R., after the defeat of the old Linyera Monarchy, who were defeated in 167 A.R., and The Chancellory has been in power ever since.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: It is an order established in 37 A.R. to protect the people of the island from supernatural evils, specifically monsters that were sweeping across the land, but since the monsters are gone now, the order has fallen in disarray.
What are the Net and Essence? The net is beneath the islands to save people from falling, it teleports people back to islands if they fall onto but it cant teleport non-living things, so you will lose all of your items. But you can keep your items with something called the essence. You can get the essence from going on adventures, from killing mobs, smelting things, and breaking ores. If you fall onto the net with essence it will save all of your armor and items.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: I have played on a few other RP servers and applied to more, but I have yet to find a very good server where I can have many good experiences for years to come.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: I have played on a few I can't remember and applied to more, the only one I can really remember is a modern city RP called "Sherlock City", and the app I submitted for that is pretty good in my opinion, I stopped playing because the server shut down.
Character Information
Name: Kalis Brakenburg
Age: 24
Class: I can't start with Mage since it's a scholar class, so do I start with one and then switch? If so then I will start with laborer and then become a mage, but if I just choose one, then mage.
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: A Citizen of the Chancellory
Physical description: A thin man for his age, but he is fast on his feet, he's around 5' 8", and while he is not ugly, he's not exactly handsome either.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Kalis Brakenburg was seen by the world as a bad egg, nothing more and nothing less. His parents seemed nice enough of course, almost too nice. But Kalis was just a very bad kid. Everywhere he went he spoiled days and ruined peoples look of him. Finally, when he was almost 14, his parents had to make an intervention. His dad pulled him aside one day and just had a simple conversation, telling him that he was truly a bad kid and he had to grow up and act his age. Like always Kalis had a fit about it and his father just got into a rage. We hit Kalis and yelled at him: “You are no son of mine! Leave this house and don’t come back until you are mature and courteous to everyone around you!” Kalis instantly stopped throwing a tantrum and ran off into the night. His father would always remember that day as the day he lost Kalis.
Meanwhile…
Kalis ran outside the house, scared and unsure. He ran around the city, unsure where to go. Eventually he ended up in a place called The Slums. There were bums and muggers everywhere and finally he just collapsed in an alley and cried himself to sleep. The next morning he woke up with a new perspective on his situation, he thought about going home but he knew he could never face the humiliation from his parents. He thought for a bit and decided that this place would be his home. He would become the King of this place of bums and thieves. Soon everyone would bow down to him “It would be easy really” He said to himself. “With my attitude and hard work I will surely become a King.
6 years later
Wow, two decades I’ve been on this world and I have hated every single bit of it. I can remember so vividly the day when my wretched father kicked me out of the house, with not a care for my feelings. Now I know that I should have turned back around and said sorry to him but it’s too late now, isn’t it? I could have made it big, but look at me now. A horrible bum, just like the bums I thought I would have been a king of 6 years ago. What a joke, it hadn’t been a minute before I was robbed of everything I had and left for dead. My life since then has been theft and living at the very bottom of society, well no more! I now swear that I will never steal again. I will get a job, a house, and someday go to the academy and become the job I have admired since I was a child. The Mage.
The Mage always seemed so… well, magical to me when I was a child, they still do. They could control the elements of the worlds and cast amazing spells and all I wish is that I could learn just one tiny spell. But mark my words, world. I will learn more than one, two, or three spells. I will learn them all! I will go to the academy and become the very best mage of them all! Hopefully me being not the strongest won’t matter, I’m fast on my feet and why would I need strength in magic anyway. Right now I will head into the main capitol, learn all I can, go to the academy and start my life. Maybe even my parents that I have forsaken so, so, long ago. Here goes nothing.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): He wants to go to The Academy, become the very best mage, and maybe find his parents one day.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He is very fast, and he will flee from a fight if it is not in his favor, and he is very determined to do whatever he sets his mind to.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): He is very sensitive if anyone says something about his family, and he is kind of weak.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): I might have one with my brother, however I doubt his application will be accepted, as he is even younger than me. But if he makes an application I will edit this post and put a link to a topic.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Kalis sees the young girl and stops, shocked for a moment. She was a dead ringer for his long lost mother! Kalis sees what the men are doing and shouts, "Hey, do you two think you're doing!" They snicker and answer "What does it look like, mate? Keep moving and make no trouble" Then one of the men pull out a knife and Kalis runs away and gets the nearest guard and tells the guard what happened.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"Oy! You there!" A man approaches Kalis. "What?" Kalis responds. "How about you go down to Bloodstone and pick up a little.. package of mine, you will be generously rewarded"
Kalis considers this offer, if this man is telling the truth then I could really use the reward, but I know about bloodstone, it is crawling with monsters. I could easily be killed, and then where would I be?
Kalis quickly says "No thank you" and runs away from the man.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Kalis sees the man, and he thinks about what he could have been if he hadn't decided to come back to the capitol. An old beggar, asking for money and food. Just like this old man here. Because of this, Kalis stops right away and gives the old man a whole sandwich, which was going to be his lunch but he could see that the old man needs it more.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Kalis justs looks in the tavern, almost hoping to find his father, who drank with his friends occasionally, Kalis couldn't see him so he decided to leave, while he was leaving an obviously drunk man says to him "Where ya goin'? Scared ye ol' mum is goin' to catch ya in here when she comes here ta drink!"
Kalis stops, thinks about what the man said and starts crying a tiny bit. "WHAT DID YOU SAY!" Kalis shouts! The bar goes quiet and al eyes turn to Kalis.
"Hey, hey, I didn't mean ta.." He is interrupted by Kalis running into him and knocking the breath out of him. The people in the bar crowd around the man and one of them says "I think he might be dead..." All eyes turn to Kalis but he is already gone, lost in the night.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Kalis sees the beautiful necklace the young women is wearing and almost can't stop himself from just reaching out his hands and yanking it off her neck out of habit, but no, he can't do, he promised to himself that he would never steal again. Kalis starts walking faster and the woman is quickly out of sight, along with the necklace.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Nope
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): lobstahninja
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes, I abide.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Essentially, it is when a player attempts to control everything; Pretty much being that annoying kid from your childhood that refused all aspects of the game (I.E. "Oh, I had a forcefield up that blahblahblah.)
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: When you know something that your character doesn't. (I.E. You overheared in the ooc chat that some people are going to attack Base A, and you abuse that information by your character magically becoming paranoid of an attack on Base A)
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Playing in an imaginary setting and assuming a role regardless of who/what you are in real life.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No-one
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When both parties have consent in fair combat, or in a realistic situation that isn't survivable (I.E. One person going against an Army).
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: You're allowed to speak OoC so long as you use parentheses around the OoC text.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes, I have read the lore and agree to it.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Anyone that has learned magic via Roleplay, or being a Mage.
Who are the Fallen?: A race of isolated Humans that are nomadic.
When and how did our current government come to be?: In the year 169 A.R. when the monarchy system wasn't preferable and revolts occurred.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: An order of Knights who are to protect the Chancellor from various threats.
What are the Net and Essence?
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Not too much really, whenever I joined a role-playing server I never really got into the community at all. For example, on one of the servers I had played one person had controlled all of the money flow and never spent any of it. This made the economy horrible and un-moving.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: Poor economic systems, a community that had no interest in newer players, low interaction.
Character Information
Name: Jake Smith
Age: 21
Class: Engineer
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Medori
Physical description: Short Brown Hair, Deep Blue Eyes, Tall and Skinny, Well-Built Legs, Average Muscle Tone.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Jake Smith was a normal Medori boy that was enveloped in the culture as per the usual. Jake was born into the world with a loving family and two siblings who were much older than Jake. His siblings are what made him the person today, from being chased by much strong siblings he was very capable of running away to avoid a roughening from his siblings. Jake was a very skinny boy who came to learn of redstone and the capabilities that it held. Jake saw something in redstone that could guide his people into a brighter future, where the Medori could settle down from their nomadic ways and enjoy the simple pleasures in life that could be amplified through redstone. Because of his sparked interest in redstone Jake spent much of his years tinkering and creating simple machines that could make life easier, although many of these creations had failed Jake was only that much more motivated to create. Jake had a hard time with other kids growing up. Kids called him “Red-Head” from all the dust that would get into his hair from tinkering and creating circuits. Jake wasn’t that social at all, and had considered suicide several times. At one point Jake had a death machine planned for him to go out in style. However one thing kept him from going through with it. A girl in his dreams. Every night Jake would see this girl when he slept. The girl’s face couldn’t be seen at all, but Jake knew she was out there, and thusly he left his Medori life to seek knowledge of redstone, and the girl in his dreams. Initially, Jake went to the Capitol on an airship in search of what he strived for. The airship’s right engine had blown out and caused the ship to begin to tilt. Jake knew that he should check the engine out and see what was up, but the danger was immense. It was either to have everyone on the ship go to a certain death, or have a chance through Jake’s knowledge of redstone. Jake climbed out to the engine on the airship, the smoke was nearly blinding and the air caused him to give a heavy wheezing gag. Jake knew that the people on the airship were depending on him to save their lives, so he drove through the pain and looked at the faulty engine. A simple fix was all that could save the people on the airship. Jake made the fix, and through what seemed like an hour was really over in the course of 10 minutes. The airships crewmen went out to fetch him before Jake passed out, and before Jake was even conscious the airship arrived at the capital’s harbor.
(Copied and pasted from Word)
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): Achieving a mastery of redstone, and finding the girl in his dreams.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Being ambitious allows Jake to always keep a good outlook and continue his work.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Fairly weak in terms of lifting, not the greatest social skills, has a one track mind.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): None.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Jake, approaches the men and without asking for the circumstances of the harassment he quickly throws redstone dust into the faces of the men, blurring their vision. Jake yells at the girl to run. Jake thinks to himself to do the same, but not to follow the path the girl went as per the chance of the men catching up to him and additionally catching the girl. A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Mister, you must be fairly crazy to ask for someone to go to that place, but luckily for you I think I might be able to get whatever you're looking for, but only if you have information that I want. You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
*Tosses a small amount of money to the man* Go on and grab some food, and the best of luck to you sir. In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Jake ignores the comment and moves elsewhere into the tavern. The man doesn't even know my mother and as to how much of a kind lady she is. You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
The girl in my dreams may have been wearing that necklace, I think I better get a better look at this woman and go from there.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? I do not.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
8/18/2011
Posts:
104
Minecraft:
WholeGrainWheat
Member Details
Deferred:
lobsterninja - Not a bad app, but there's one big, big problem; your class. Engineer is a scholar class, and can only be attained IC. Also, for a Medori, "Jake Smith" is a very bland name. They're much more exotic and Eastern culture-inspired, so I would try to find a more exotic name. Lastly, your ICRs could use a lot more fleshing out. Fix these, and you should be rarin' to go.
Double-Deferred:
ManaTheDragon - Okay, this...was a tough one for me. I wanted to reject, but I figured you should be given a second chance, but unlike other applicants, this second chance is your LAST chance. I do this because you app was just so very, very short. Your bio especially was just god-awful. Everything just needs to be lengthened, and your character also needs better weaknesses. I just don't get a feel for your character at all. Good luck in trying again, and if you have any further questions, feel free to PM me.
Sario and Don_rosa, zymph should get to your apps as soon as he gets online. If he doesn't today, I will handle your apps later.
Don_rosa - Welcome to TAC. Here's the link to our enjin forum: http://aneria.enjin.com/ ; Thanks for clearing up those things I listed.
Sario - Welcome to TAC. Thanks for making those changes, your backstory was much better. I would've liked to have seen some lengthier ICRs, but meh, no worries. The only thing that bugged me is that you switched from 3rd person to 1st person in the middle of your bio. Anyway, here's the link to the enjin forum: http://aneria.enjin.com/
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): No skype
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is making a situation in role-play that is impossible to respond to because it is overpowered, an example being "chops legs off" instead of "swings axe at legs".
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using out of character information in character.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplay is acting as someone else.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one can hack.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: You can murder when the play is ok with it in out of character chat.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: In the out of character chat, or with brakets in front and behind the chat.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: People who have taken their degrees in magicry at the acadamy.
Who are the Fallen?: A group of loners who deal with problems peacefully, believe in story telling, and live in tents.
When and how did our current government come to be?: When the former government fell, a new one was formed.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: A group of people formed to protect citizens from supernatural evils. But it doesnt matter because mullraugh shut them down.
What are the Net and Essence? The net keeps people from falling for eternity when they fall of the islands, essence is energy within a person for doing things like spellcasting.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: None
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Character Information
Name: Ulysses
Age: 40
Class: Craftsman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellory
Physical description: 1.6 meters tall, scrawny.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): To begin his life with the beginning of his life; Ulysses was born on a Tuesday, forty years ago. It was said by his parents, that when he was born he cried more than the other children. That was dismissed as something of unimportance, but it may have been a sign of his life to come. Also, when he was born, the local mage concluded that because he cried an oddly large amount, he would be destined to grow up as a very peculiar person. When he was a child his parents, being so busy with their trade, spent very little time with Ulysses. So, as a result, he was cared for by the very same local mage, Grant, that had professed him to be abnormal. Because Grant was often very busy, Ulysses had been given a dog to help stave off the lonliness when Grant was not there. As Ulysses grew up, he was exposed to all sorts of magics from the mage, some legal, and some not so much... One of these evil magic forms was necromancy; Grant killed the pet dog that Ulysses loved so much, and then attempted to bring it back to life. This was an unsuccesful attempt, and the dog was forever dead. Ulysses, being the sensitive young boy that he was, was deeply scarred by his dog's death. Grant advised Ulysses to never tell anyone about what actually happened the day his dog died (no doubt to elude the authorites). So, Ulysses remained silent about the event for the rest of his life. This was not the only time that Grant's magic had disheartened Ulysses. When Ulysses was crafting, which he often did because he wanted to follow in his parents trade, Grant narrated that the objects of Ulysses's creation were so mechanically complicated, that they could come to life. Grant often performed ceremonies to bring these inanimate objects to life, but almost always destroyed the item. Grant had once destroyed a fishing rod that Ulysses had spent many hours crafting. These events left deep gashes on his spirit. However, life always went on for Ulysses. As Ulysses grew into his early teens, Grant stopped coming to care for Ulysses, who had kept Grant's secret for all of those years. He quickly grew a deep hatred towards magic, and did his best to carry on with his parent's craft through his teen years. His parents had taught him how to build, repair, or improve almost anything in the little free time that they had with him. As a result, Ulysses grew incredibly skilled in his profession of crafting. However, his hatred towards magic always stayed with him, and thus caused him to reject anything to do with magic, including the religions that people follow. He even rejected the healing magics performed by the church, and therefore hated everything about it. He always thought and still thinks that the magic used is harming people, and tricking them into paying into the church, so they profit. His experiences with Grant have made him aspire to be a good person because he knows what it is like to be a victim, and does not want to put that on anyone else. Until now, Ulysses has kept quiet, nomadicly living in many houses, surviving by selling many crafts. Since he crafted so many things, his hand to eye coordination is very good. Also because of his small weight, he is light on his feet, and therefore can sneak very well.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To carry on his parents craft, and deny all magic by convincing others to not use it because he thinks it is all destructive, and evil.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He is an extremely skilled crafter, and can keep a secret as a result of his practice. He is light on his feet so he can sneak, and has good coordination.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): He is sensitive, weak, and rejects all magic so he is paranoid, and does not trust people who use or support magic. He also fears magic.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
*Sees people beating up the girl, and feels bad for the girl*
*Goes to get the nearest guard or police officer*
"There is two men beating on a girl over there" Says Ulysses to the guards.
"Okay, I will do something about that" replies the guard.
*Thinks to himself that he should leave before he gets injured*
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"Go to Bloodstone" says the man.
"No, its magic will obviously kill me before I even get close."
"You will regret not going, you could have been generously rewarded."
"It is not worth dyeing over."
*Walks away*
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
"Give me food" says the old man.
"I will be back" says Ulysses
*Crafts a fishing rod, and some bread"
*Gives fishing rod, and bread to old man*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
"Your mother is so fat, not even Dora could explore her!" says the man.
"I beg your pardon?" says Ulysses
*Feels insulted, and sad because of the man*
*stands up, and leaves before the man can respond, disheartend by the event*
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
*Ignores necklace, and keeps walking*
*She would probably kill me with some magic*
*The church would also probebly find, and kill me if I stole this*
*I do not want to be as bad as Grant was*
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? No
Other notes: In chancellory lore under major locations, the outpost has an unfinished sentence at the end of the paragraph.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
8/18/2011
Posts:
104
Minecraft:
WholeGrainWheat
Member Details
Accepted:
KinderSuprise456 - Well, you fixed the things that I asked you to, so welcome to the community! Feel free to check out our forums at http://aneria.enjin.com/ and say hi!
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): OlympicCoves :3
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yep!
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is when a person/player forces an action/emote onto another. Ex: *Mola Ram takes out the man’s heart and holds onto it as he throws him into a pit of fire.* It can also mean the character is overpowered. What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is when a person uses knowledge they gained OOC and use it IC for their benefits.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplay means to act out another ‘person’s’ life.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: People who want to get banned forever and ever and ever. (Nobody)
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When the other character is in a position where they cannot get out without dying or both parties agrees on it.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: In the OOC chat or with double brackets on both ends of the sentence/phrase. ((Hello.))
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Of course!
Who is allowed to use magic?: People who have gone through the necessary procedure IC. Mages, priests and paladins.
Who are the Fallen?: The Fallen are a race of people that have been isolated from the others for more than three centuries. They are peaceful and very superstitious.
When and how did our current government come to be?: The Chancellery was founded in 169 A.R. It was founded because the people wanted a new form of government after they have overthrown the Linyera Monarchy two years prior.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: The Order of Aradin is a group of knights that were created to protect the civilians from beasts.
What are the Net and Essence?
The net is a phenomenon that is essentially a barrier beneath the islands for living matter so they don’t fall for eternity. Nonliving matter will not be saved unless you have a minimum amount of Essence.
Essence is a sort of mana that is gained when an individual finishes a task. If you have enough Essence, you will not lose any items when caught by the Net. It can also be stored in emeralds for later use.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:
I’ve done a couple forum RPs with my friends but this if my first ever minecraft RP server.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: Zippy doo-dah.
Character Information
Name: Emi Skitsferg
Age: 20
Class: Craftsman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Medori
Physical description: Grace has a slim frame; she is 5’9, 100lbs. She has red hair and dark blue eyes. She’s usually wearing a small, white dress with stripes of pink. Her skin isn’t as tanned as her fellow Medori, but she’s not pale either.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
The only think Emi has ever known was family. She devoted her entire life to the Medori community, helping prepare food, crafting arrows for hunts and farming. She thought of everyone there as a family and the thought of them splitting up never crossed her mind. What could ever go wrong? She was raised by loving parents, had great adult role-models, and her friends were always… well… friendly. As she grew up, Emi took on more responsibilities such as cooking the meat over the fire, fishing, setting up and taking down tents, and more. She didn’t mind it one bit; in fact, I might go on and say she enjoyed it. The more of a factor she was in the family, the better. That was her belief for a several more years.
At the age of 16, Emi’s father decided it was time to pass down the secrets of the Skitsferg family. She was told about the secret cult that worshipped the Bodychanger and was in charge of the Medori folk who have gone missing over the years. Emi, still knowing nothing other than to help her family, hid the shock and emotions she felt when she was told this. Her father told her to go on a trip with him to see the bodies of the dead. As much as she hated the fact her family worshipped the Bodychanger himself, she followed her father. She followed because loyalty to the family was the only thing she was ever taught. Betrayal was out of the picture. Whether she wanted this or not, it was what she was going to become.
She felt nauseous. Why? Why would my family do such disturbing deeds? She questioned, tears rolled down her face as she looked at the bodies of what once were loving people.
“
Do you see, darling? These are sacrifices we need to make in order to bring back the Bodychanger.” Her father said, one hand leaning on her shoulder. Emi couldn’t bare look at her father. Her father, the person she’s idolised all her life, was a murderer. She had to do something, but what? She couldn’t hurt her own father. Yes, he was a Bodychanger worshipping murderer, but he was still family. But if she didn’t stop him, she would be stuck in a life of a criminal. As soon as she heard her father turn away, she pulled out a knife. With tears running down her face, she thrust her knife into the man that was no longer her father.
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She stepped off the airship onto Chancellery soil. She took a deep breath and sighed. Perhaps things could be better here. I could start a new life, a life without secrets, a life without lies and a life without death. It’s going to be different. I’m going to take some time off here, and come back to the Medori Island when I feel ready. She thought, a smile creeping across her face as she saw her airship fly back to the Medori.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
To settle down and grow old knowing the Skitsberg name will be rid of bloodshed.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):
She’s a great cook, can craft weapons fairly well, and is fast on her legs. She’s compassionate, friendly and enjoys herself and the world around her.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):
Physically, she is very weak and cannot hold her own in a fight. Her trust towards others has gone down after the incident with her father. She’s also not very bright in an academic sense, since she’s only learned how to read and write.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
No but Ploops referred me to this server.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Emi sees the situation and runs off to find a Guard. She leads the Guards to the men harassing the girl hoping it wasn’t too late.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Emi laughs. “I’m sorry, sir. I’m a twenty year old lady. Bloodstone isn’t somewhere I’m going to want to go for vacation.” She then gestures the man to leave, not wanting to hear any more of his proposals.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
She looks at the beggar with compassion. She takes out a loaf of bread from her bag and hands it to him. “Keep on hanging, sir. You have so much to live for.” She goes on her way, not thinking twice about what she did.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Being a little intoxicated herself, she laughs with him. “So was my father!” She then asks the barkeep for another drink to wash away any memories that might creep up on her.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
“By the Father, that is beautiful!” Emi exclaims, her eyes seemingly enchanted by the woman’s necklace. “You should be careful, a necklace like that might attract some bad attention.” She smiles at the woman and goes on her way.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Nope.
Other notes: First server, haha. *Cringes as she posts her app*
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): Tayl.Gunner
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yup
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Being overpowered in roleplay by not giving the character the option to respond or doing impossible feats.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: using information obtained OOC and applying it to roleplaying
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: acting out a foreign role and reacting just as the character you are portraying would
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: With their permission
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: Nope
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to Roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: Mages and priests
Who are the Fallen?: Nomadic, superstitious people
When and how did our current government come to be?:The Defeat of the Linyera Monarchy in 167 A.R.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: Monster hunters
What are the Net and Essence?: The Net is the barrier that catches anyone who happens to fall and places them on the nearest island. However, material items are lost in the process. Thus, the use of Essence is drawn to allow one to keep their possessions. Essence is supposedly the First Plane's iteration of mana, but doesn't have any other function besides saving items. It is gained by overcoming obstacles in the world.
What previous Roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Two years worth on multiple servers.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Battle of Eldaran - Owner was kind of a jerk
Era of the Vanguard - Shut down
FellsGlow - temporarily off
A few more I can't remember, but I left because they were just low in quality.
Character Information
Name: Collin
Age: 23
Class: Laborer
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellory
Physical description: Tall, thin, averagely built. Black, short hair, bearded. Wears a black jacket with the sleeves rolled to the elbows and a green undershirt.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Collin was always interested in skyships. Throughout his childhood, the highlight of his day would be watching the titanic fliers at the docks. He would chat with the dockworkers and crew of the incoming flights to learn more about them. His favorite crew members to talk to were the engineers, who could explain much of the internal working of the ships. However, most things the engineers explained to him Collin couldn’t understand. Frustrated with his inability to grasp what the crew members told him, Collin, aged thirteen, turned to books for answers. Every night, Collin would read books on steam engines and their operations. However, as time grew on, Collin became more interested in more subjects than just steam engines. His collection grew to history, fiction, philosophy, and theories of magic. At sixteen years of age, Collin was a very well read boy. At this point, Collin was ready to start working. Collin felt the only fitting play for him to work was the docks, being that he spent much of his time there. He already knew the basics from conversing with the dockworkers, too. He was friendly with most of them, and participated in their gambling games they would play during break. Even with the not-so-well pay that he was offered at the docks, he enjoyed his job because it was one way that he could work with airships without pursuing a career as an engineer or joining a crew as a simple deck hand. Even so, as time grew on, his desire to work on an airship grew as well. When he turned twenty-two, he quit his job at the docks and enlisted in a crew. The crew he joined with was a small freighter company that flew to many different islands to deliver goods. During his time on the ship, he learned many different aspects about skyships and how they work. His job mostly consisted of odds and ends that experienced or specialized members of the crew didn’t have the time to deal with, such as cleaning. Nonetheless, it was a very important learning experience for him. After several months of being a member of the crew, one position stood out remarkably in Collin’s eyes: the engineer. The engineer kept the thing aloft and was, for all intents and purposes, the most important member of the crew. A year after enlisting with the freighter, Collin left to pursue training in being and engineer.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To become an engineer
Strengths (Both physical and personality): His greatest asset is his mind. He is witty in speech and has a wide plethora of general knowledge. He is also friendly, for the most part. Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman): He is quick to anger if he feels he’s been wronged. If he is treated wrong, he’ll never forget and he’ll rarely forgive. His anger also clouds his judgment, and he may do stupid things in a fit of rage. Physically, he is not the most built. He has an acute form of Autism.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
Brother, http://aneria.enjin....-brother/page/1
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation. Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
“Hey, come on, stop it,” said Collin.
The big brute of a man nearest to him said in a deep voice, “How ‘bout you stop pokin’ yer head in business ya don’ know anything ‘bout?”
“How ‘bout I not? Listen, she’s just an innocent girl, just stop heckling her!”
Quick as a whip, the man brandished a wooden club and swung it at Collin. Collin attempted to block it with his forearm, but was merely knocked off of his feet by the force of the club. Wielding the club with both hands, the brute brought it down over Collin’s head. When he came to, he woke in a hospital bed.
“Just what I get for doing the right thing,” he said bitterly.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
“Bloodstone? Are you kidding me? That place is dangerous!” exclaimed Collin.
The Scholar nodded rapidly, “Yes, it is, but I need it for my research! It is very important!”
“Forget it, I’m not risking my neck like that, no matter how much you give me.”
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
“Please, sir, I need the food! I’ll die out here!” said the older beggar.
Collin took pity on the man. He was dressed in rags and sitting in a filthy alley. He took out his coin purse and handed the old man ten coins.
“I’m sorry I can’t spare any more,” said Collin, sincerely.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
“A *****! That’s just what she is!” said the drunkard.
“Right, my mother is the *****, here,” replied Collin, “My mother is the good-for-nothing scum of society that raised a whelp of a son who drinks all his damn money away in a damn tavern!”
The insult took a moment to process through his intoxicated mind.
“You son of a !” cried the drunken man, who charged at him.
Collin was prepared for this. His sober body and mind was faster than his. When the man went to swing, he casually stepped to the left, grabbed his free arm, and twisted it. Then, he took his right leg and forcefully shoved the man to his knees.
“My mother is the *****?” whispered Collin into the man’s ear.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Collin casually strode down the street. He was lost in his own thoughts, when a flashing of light brought him back to reality. It came from a beautifully gleaming silver necklace with a sapphire in the center of it.
"My, what a beautiful necklace!” Collin cried to her.
The woman gave him a snotty expression that said “I have better things to do then talk to lowly commoners.”
“What a *****”
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?: Is there a Navy? Other notes: Where do you go to become an engineer? I may be missing something obvious, but I couldn’t find anything on that.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Lucifer was born into a simple mining community. He was raised by his mother and father in his simple home. When he was young, he idolized his father, who was a bladesman. His father taught him many things about swords, and by the time he was 10, Lucifer was practicing with a sword every day. Lucifer trained for five more years until one day, a mysterious ship came into town. This ship turned out to be a band of bandits and thieves who started to ransack the town. Lucifer instinctively picked up his sword and tried to fight the attackers. He held his ground for a while, but he was eventually knocked out. When he awoke, he was on the mysterious ship. The bandits saw how good he was with a sword, so they took him aboard to train him for their own uses. Lucifer was very reluctant to help, until they reached the next town. When they got there, he tried to escape. He ran straight to the people of the town, trying to explain his story, but they did not listen. Instead, one of the townspeople stabbed him, and yet again, Lucifer lost his consciousness. He proceeded to wake back up on the ship once more.
It was at this point Lucifer realized his fate. He was cursed to stay on this ship of bandits, for if he went anywhere else, he would just be considered a bandit. The next seven years of Lucifer’s life were generally the same thing. They would reach a new town, kill most of the townsfolk and take their things. Eventually, Lucifer got a thrill out of it. Soon enough, he was leading the men ransacking the towns. His life was changed once again when their ship ran into a military ship. It was a fierce battle. Cannons were firing rounds constantly and arrows flew across the gap between the two ships. Then, once the other ship was close enough, Lucifer and a few other bandits jumped across and started to fight the soldiers hand to hand. No one on that ship could best Lucifer. He continued to make his way through the soliders until he reached the helm of the ship, by that time, most were dead. The only man still alive was slowly bleeding out on the side of the ship. He stared right at Lucifer and said “You monster….I hope you burn….” And then he died.
Lucifer couldn’t believe how long it took him to realize this. He had so much blood on his hands, and it was all because of the bandits. As soon as this idea set in, he quickly started the ship and turned it away from the bandits. After sending it forward, he walked down and killed any bandits remaining on the ship. Lucifer decided he needed a new start, some way to clean the blood from his hands. Lucifer decided to head to a new area, where no one would hear of his deeds. He went under the deck and grabbed a large suit of armor to hide himself, and set a course for the Captial. A place where the bandits would not dare to sail. A place where he could start anew.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To do more right and good things to counter act all the wrong he has done
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Lucifer is strong and can use a sword very well. He keeps to himself mainly which at times is good and bad
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Lucifer is constantly worried someone will learn of his past, also, from his days of raiding and pillaging, he was stabbed in the leg a few times so his movement is slower than most.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Lucifer: Stop
Guard: What are you going to do about it? *laughs*
Lucifer: *draws his sword*
Guard: Alright then *draws his sword*
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Man: If you go to Bloodstone and get something for me, you will be rewarded *waves a pouch of coins*
Lucifer: *remains silent and walks past*
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Beggar: Please, some food!
Lucifer: *without saying a word pulls out some of his food and gives it to the beggar*
Beggar: Thank you so much!
Lucifer: *walks off*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Fellow: Oi! Your mother was a pig!
Lucifer: *remains silent and ignores the man*
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Lucifer: *looks at the necklace, and considers taking it, but quickly looks away* That was the old you *he says to himself*
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Nope
Other notes: I hope this new char app is better than my first one XD
Link to old app: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1739510-the-anerian-chronicles-rpairshipsclassesplayer-driven-storyextensive-lore/page__st__220
Character Information
Name: Lucifer
Age: 25
Class: Bladesman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Chancellory
Physical description: Lucifer is a decently tall man coming up to about 6 feet and 2 inches. He is constanly wearing this big bulky black armor so few people actually know what he looks like.
Screen capture of your skin: http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4f600d65532326306259913503131352338
Biography:
Lucifer was born into a fairly small mining settlement. He was raised by his mother and father. Lucifer took an early interest in swords and since his father was a bladesman, he quickly learned the basics. By the time he was a teenager, he could almost beat his father. Even though his father tried to stop him from boasting, Lucifer's ego was too large. When he was not training, he was walking around the settlement saying he could beat almost anyone there with a sword. Eventually, all the other kids had enough of his boasting so they told his father what had been going on. Lucifer's father was very upset about this, so he decided to teach Lucifer a lesson. He took Lucifer out in the middle of town and challenged him to a fight, using practice swords. Lucifer quickly realized his mistakes, but his father would not let him back out of this challenge.
It was a short fight. Many did not even call it a fight. Lucifer was struck down by his father very quickly. After the fight, Lucifer's father dragged him back to the house and told him to think about what he did. That day changed Lucifer. He barely spoke any words after that fight. Silence became his closest friend as he continued to train. Only one thing was on his mind during this time, which was becoming greater than anyone else. This drive had a negative effect on Lucifer, but he managed to keep it under control. After deciding that he would get no better living in the settlement, he boarded a ship heading to the Captial.
What is your character’s main goal?: To become the strongest
Strengths: Lucifer is a very strong man and very good with a blade. His silent ways make him more unknown than the average man
Weaknesses: While Lucifer has become a good bladesman, his bulky armor and power have caused him to be slower than most. Lucifer's skill is important to him, so when other challenge it, he becomes angry
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted?: No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Lucifer: *walks up to the men and draws his blade*
Guard: Oi, you here to save the girl?
Luficer *shakes his head* I'm here to beat both of you, I need some practice *then procceds to take a fighting stance*
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Lucifer walks straight past the man, he has no need to bother himself with tasks such as that
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Beggar: Please, give me some food
Lucifer: *ignores the man and says to himself* The weak only bring the strong down
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Lucifer: *stands up and walks away* I would not waste my time with him
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Lucifer *walks right up to the woman, blocking her path* Give. Me. The. Necklace.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Nope
Other notes: N/a
Real-Life Age: 15
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): No skype
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is making a situation in role-play that is impossible to respond to because it is overpowered, an example being "chops legs off" instead of "swings axe at legs".
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using out of character information in character.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplay is acting as someone else.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one can hack.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: You can murder when the play is ok with it in out of character chat.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: In the out of character chat, or with brakets in front and behind the chat.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: People who have taken their degrees in magicry at the acadamy.
Who are the Fallen?: A group of loners who deal with problems peacefully, believe in story telling, and live in tents.
When and how did our current government come to be?: When the former government fell, a new one was formed.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: A group of people formed to protect citizens from supernatural evils. But it doesnt matter because mullraugh shut them down.
What are the Net and Essence? The net keeps people from falling for eternity when they fall of the islands, essence is energy within a person for doing things like spellcasting.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: None
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Character Information
Name: Ulysses
Age: 40
Class: Craftsman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellory
Physical description: 1.6 meters tall, scrawny.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): To begin his life with the beginning of his life; Ulysses was born on a Tuesday, forty years ago. It was said by his parents, that when he was born he cried more than the other children. That was dismissed as something of unimportance, but it may have been a sign of his life to come. Also, when he was born, the local mage concluded that because he cried an oddly large amount, he would be destined to grow up as a very peculiar person. When he was a child his parents, being so busy with their trade, spent very little time with Ulysses. So, as a result, he was cared for by the very same local mage, Grant, that had professed him to be abnormal. Because Grant was often very busy, Ulysses had been given a dog to help stave off the lonliness when Grant was not there. As Ulysses grew up, he was exposed to all sorts of magics from the mage, some legal, and some not so much... One of these evil magic forms was necromancy; Grant killed the pet dog that Ulysses loved so much, and then attempted to bring it back to life. This was an unsuccesful attempt, and the dog was forever dead. Ulysses, being the sensitive young boy that he was, was deeply scarred by his dog's death. Grant advised Ulysses to never tell anyone about what actually happened the day his dog died (no doubt to elude the authorites). So, Ulysses remained silent about the event for the rest of his life. This was not the only time that Grant's magic had disheartened Ulysses. When Ulysses was crafting, which he often did because he wanted to follow in his parents trade, Grant narrated that the objects of Ulysses's creation were so mechanically complicated, that they could come to life. Grant often performed ceremonies to bring these inanimate objects to life, but almost always destroyed the item. Grant had once destroyed a fishing rod that Ulysses had spent many hours crafting. These events left deep gashes on his spirit. However, life always went on for Ulysses. As Ulysses grew into his early teens, Grant stopped coming to care for Ulysses, who had kept Grant's secret for all of those years. He quickly grew a deep hatred towards magic, and did his best to carry on with his parent's craft through his teen years. His parents had taught him how to build, repair, or improve almost anything in the little free time that they had with him. As a result, Ulysses grew incredibly skilled in his profession of crafting. However, his hatred towards magic always stayed with him, and thus caused him to reject anything to do with magic, including the religions that people follow. He even rejected the healing magics performed by the church, and therefore hated everything about it. He always thought and still thinks that the magic used is harming people, and tricking them into paying into the church, so they profit. His experiences with Grant have made him aspire to be a good person because he knows what it is like to be a victim, and does not want to put that on anyone else. Until now, Ulysses has kept quiet, nomadicly living in many houses, surviving by selling many crafts. Since he crafted so many things, his hand to eye coordination is very good. Also because of his small weight, he is light on his feet, and therefore can sneak very well.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To carry on his parents craft, and deny all magic by convincing others to not use it because he thinks it is all destructive, and evil.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He is an extremely skilled crafter, and can keep a secret as a result of his practice. He is light on his feet so he can sneak, and has good coordination.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): He is sensitive, weak, and rejects all magic so he is paranoid, and does not trust people who use or support magic. He also fears magic.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
*Sees people beating up the girl, and feels bad for the girl*
*Goes to get the nearest guard or police officer*
"There is two men beating on a girl over there" Says Ulysses to the guards.
"Okay, I will do something about that" replies the guard.
*Thinks to himself that he should leave before he gets injured*
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"Go to Bloodstone" says the man.
"No, its magic will obviously kill me before I even get close."
"You will regret not going, you could have been generously rewarded."
"It is not worth dyeing over."
*Walks away*
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
"Give me food" says the old man.
"I will be back" says Ulysses
*Crafts a fishing rod, and some bread"
*Gives fishing rod, and bread to old man*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
"Your mother is so fat, not even Dora could explore her!" says the man.
"I beg your pardon?" says Ulysses
*Feels insulted, and sad because of the man*
*stands up, and leaves before the man can respond, disheartend by the event*
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
*ignores necklace, and keeps walking*
*She would probably kill me with some magic*
*The church would also probebly find, and kill me if I stole this*
*I do not want to be as bad as Grant was*
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? No
Other notes: In chancellory lore under major locations, the outpost has an unfinished sentence at the end of the paragraph.
IGN: dedoralive
Real-Life Age: 15
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): yes, my name is odsta22
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: I do
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Forcing your Rp on another with out giving them any notice, or any time to defend themselves
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using ooc knowledge to say know someones name, or know if someone is evil because they just said so in ooc chat.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Taking on a character either made by you or someone else, and acting out their actions, and interacting with other characters around you.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: no one
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: If they agree to it
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: anytime using [[]] or (()) not sure which one this server uses
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: Anyone that attends the academy and is not on the villain blacklist
Who are the Fallen?: The Medori, an old superstitious group of people who tend to avoid the Chancellory
When and how did our current government come to be?: 169 A.R after the defeat of Linyera monarchy 167 A.R
Who are the Order of Aradin?: The Chancellors body guards
What are the Net and Essence? The net is the barrier that saves life forces from falling to the world below, Essence is the substance you get from smelting, killing monsters and performing other tasks, it can save you and your gear from falling if you hit the net
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Ive been on this server when it was on God of Kings. Also ive been on another server which wasn't as good.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: Daemons Rp server, i left becuase there was a shift in ownership, and it wasn't an rp server anymore
Character Information
Name: Elruab
Age: 23
Class: Ranger
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Medori
Physical description: Medium height, Dark brown hair, Cold looking face, Bushy eyebrows,
Screen capture of your skin: (cant seem to post it, but if you send me your email ill send you the picture)
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Growing up Elruab loved to hear the stories of the body snatcher, even thought it scared him he still found it interesting. Elruabs father was a very superstitious man, and he didn't like Elruab to play outside too much with all the other children, so instead Elruab stayed inside most of the time and imagined, and thought, and created little scenarios in his head, about what the body snatcher would be like, what meeting different people would be like. Elruab had heard of the air ships, and only saw one, his father never got one, nor used one because he was scared of what might happen.
When Elruab was 21 his father passed away from natural causes. Even though his father didn't let him do much outside, up until the time he died, he taught Elruab how to defend himself. When Elruab was 12 he began teaching him to do light blocks, and to punch; with little success. When he turned 13 his father gave him an old bone knife, he set up some hay bales and tried to teach him to use it properly, Elruab was decent at stabbing, but had no technique. So his father began teaching him to stay strong, by going out at night; going on runs or pulling himself up on trees (pull ups). after he was strong enough, his father explained and showed him how to make a bow, it wasn't very fancy, or strong, but it would do for now. At 14 Elruab was getting used to his bow, he practiced making arrows nightly, when permitted by his father. some times his father and him would go on hunting trips at night, just to get him used to firing it. After a kill was secured his father would show Elruab how to skin the animal using the bone knife he gave him.
At 16, Elruab it was time to make his own Bow and knife, so he went out and found a sturdy oak tree, he marked it a returned at night to retrieve it, when he came back he found the tree, but the marker was gone. He didn't think much of it as that thing happened a lot with all the animals around. After a long night Elruab had cut out the shape of the bow, but had to keep it from his father, he wanted to surprise him. So he would work on the bow after his training with his dad, and then after one long year he finished the bow, compared to his old one, it was in a word, magnificent. He showed his father, his father was, to Elruab's dismay, angry. His father was mad that he had kept a secret from him. Later on in the week, Elruab's father told him that he was proud of the time and workmanship put into the bow.
With his new bow, and his new found respect from his father, his curiosity peaked. At the age of 18, Elruab finally asked his father why he was so superstitious and why he wouldn't let him interact with the other children. His father had him sit down, he told Elruab of his mother, she was a story teller, he told him of the stories she used to tell, more elaborate than body snatcher [[which is Elruab's favorite story]]. His father also told Elruab of how his mother, while on a hunting trip, got lost because the local huntsman didn't teach her navigation very well. Erlaubs father almost broke down into tears trying to tell Elruab that he could have taught her, but he had delayed it because he thought she was ready. Next he told Elruab that the only reason he didn't let Elruab out much, or to interact with others, is because he didn't want to have to rely on the villagers and get let down again, and lose another. Elurab and his father didn't believe that Elruab's mother was dead, after all she trained with Elruabs father. After the story Elruab wasn't mad at his father, but he still wished he had spent more time outside as a kid, at least with others. His father said he didn't want to interfere with his life anymore, he may be superstitious, but he still knew when enough was enough.
For the first time, Elruab was going around to shops, saying hi to people he had never met before, still new to social life he wasn't very good at starting conversations. When Elruab turned 21 and his father passed away, he receded back to his anti social life for a while. While depression almost consumed him, he held onto one glimpse of hope, his mother. He went back to imagine what it would be like meeting her, flying an airship with her, hunting with her. Soon, he realized his new purpose, he had to find his mother. With a new goal, Elruab grabbed his bow, his arrows, and what food he had left, and began his search.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To find his mother, and to make friends.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He is good with a bow, very creative, used to being on his own, so hes used to traveling alone.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Not very sociably strong, very shy, just getting used to talking to people again. Elruab is fast and good with a bow, but hes not strong enough to fight with swords or block very well, so he just sticks to daggers and dodging.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No, but ill rp it if someone arrives that fits the mother role, and if they accept of course.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Elruab notices what is going on, never having fought another person before he decides to try to talk to the two armored men, and have them leave the girl alone. But the men mock him, and continue as if he is not there, when he persists one of them turns towards him ''Alright you, you want her so bad!?" "prove it!" *the armored man unsheathes sword and swings at Elruab* *startled but not suprised, Elruab ducks out of the way and unsheathes his knife and stabs upward at the armored mans arm* *the man's sword is heavy, so he is too slow to dodge* "Oy! that's it!" screams the other armored man *as the other man prepares to strike Elruab lunges at him in attempt to knock him into the wall* *the man is busy getting his sword out and is caught off guard* *Elruab quickly motions the girl to come with him, to get her away from the two armored men*
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
*Elruab is not used to men just proposing things to him, but he inquires, slightly interested* "what would you have me retrieve?" "and whats the reward?" *the man proceeds to tell him about the item, and the reward he will be payed for the task* *Elruab has no idea who this man is or what he wants, so he is worried about what accepting the task might do to him* *he decides to go anyways* "Alright you've got your man"
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
*having little food of his own, Elruab knows what it is like* *taking pity on the man he opens his bag and pulls out some fresh meat he just caught* "If you'll come with me, we can get this cooked, and i can get you a meal" *Elruab says to the man showing him the meat* *the old man gets up and walks with him*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
*Elruab is a little sensitive about his mother, as she is his purpose for living, but he can see that the man is a little tipsy* *Elruab turns all the way toward the man, he stares him in the eyes* "what did you just say?" *the man responds with another insult* *Elruab knows that this is not the place, nor time, so he clenches his fists and walks out of the door*
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
*Elruab notices the necklace, he thinks it would be a nice greeting gift to his mother* "Hello miss, *he turns toward her* might I ask where you got that beautiful necklace?" *she responds with a hello and proceeds to thank him for the compliment* *she then tells him that if he gets her a package from a nearby town its his* *Elruab eagerly accepts and heads towards the town.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Not at all
Other notes: Thank you for your time, I know you've been busy and responding to all of these takes time I know, just thought I'd say thanks
Cheddar7 - There were quite a few things wrong with your app, so let's go over them. First of all, your bio is rather bland and short, so a bit of spicing up couldn't hurt there. Also, your character doesn't seem to have any actual weaknesses, as of COURSE being in heavy armor slows someone down, but when they get out of it, they'd actually be faster, and reacting badly after being challenged about something that they know they're good at is just a normal reaction, not a weakness. Lastly, the ICRs could use quite a bit more fleshing out and showing of your character's personality, because from what I've seen, he doesn't seem to have one. Good luck!
KinderSuprise456 - It was a pretty good app, but I have a few issues, none of which should be a huge deal. First, the grammar just isn't very good. It's not a major problem, but we appreciate proper grammar on the server. Secondly, your character is surprisingly a bit UNDERpowered. Another strength or two actually couldn't hurt. Fix those things up and it should be a pretty good app. Good luck!
EDIT: Sorry for not mentioning this in the original post dedoralive, but zymph (the whitelister who deferred you) should get on your re-app ASAP.
I'm a man of few words and many voices.
IGN: Socfuz
Real-Life Age: 16
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): Yes, it’s Socfuz
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:
Sir, yes, sir!
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: RP'ing something happened without leading up to it with other RP messages so the other person can't respond to it. Example: I punched Sarfu in the stomach. The other player must be allowed to react. Correct example: I swing my fist towards Sarfu's stomach
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using OOC knowledge in character, like crafting recipes.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Pretending to be a made up character and acting out your character's moves, thoughts, and actions.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When the other player accepts it.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: If you seriously need to ask a question out of game, like: Wait my stuff didn't respawn with me, why? or state something (like incorrect grammar) that won't hinder the RP.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Only those who have learned it at the Academy.
Who are the Fallen?: The Fallen were separated from the rest of the humans in the beginning time. They are a somewhat peaceful and superstitious people.
When and how did our current government come to be?: In 169 A.R. by the Chancellor who formed three advisory positions under him. The three positions are: Master of Blades, Master of Words, Master of Coins. Which I'm guessing means these are the leaders of specific branches like Defense, Schooling/Learning, and Economy
Who are the Order of Aradin?: A group of people who patrol the skies, in blimps and hot air balloons, to protect the villagers from aerial assaults.
What are the Net and Essence? The Net is barrier under the islands that catches people who fall and are transported to the nearest island, however if you don’t have enough Essence (XP), which can be acquired by killing monsters, the Net will only save you and not your items.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Not much, but I do have a great imagination.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Character Information
Name: Shawn Hallert
Age: 17
Class: Ranger, but I would like to train to become a Engineer.
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellory.
Physical description: 5' 11" (5 Foot 11 Inches) 165 Pounds Somewhat muscular arms and legs. Black hair and black eyes. Light tan skin, one large scar on his stomach from a hot air balloon crash. He tried to pilot it at 13. (There's a reason for the goggles, keep reading.)
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliché manner.):
Childhood:
Shawn was born in a small village as the son of Robert Hallert, a Ranger for the Order of Aradin, and Esther Hallert, a tavern maid. Shawn was taught everything (his father knew) by his father. Shawn learned how to fire a bow and swing a sword correctly by the age of 8. By the age of 10, due to his father and his friendly nature, Shawn had lot's of friends including a blonde girl with jade green eyes, by the name of Guisella Vanfal, who he secretly loved. Most of his friends went to the Academy, while he stayed home and learned from his father. (His father always hated the Academy.)
The Falling from Grace:
Shawn had everything! A loving mother and father, friends, a good knowledge of the world, a great attitude towards life, and a plenty of money for clothing and food. But that was all about to change, Shawn just turned 13 that fateful day, the day his life would change forever. His father was sent to help escort a royal from another land one day. His father wouldn't be back for three weeks and told Shawn to: "Stay strong and be brave for me." With those final words his dad placed his piloting goggles on Shawn's head and kissed him goodbye. A strange thing since his father loved those goggles. Three weeks later when his father’s ship returned Shawn and his mother waited eagerly for him to step off the ship, but he didn’t! Shawn’s mother asked the crew captain where her husband was, the crew captain just shrugged and said “He was never on my ship, I know that much.” Shawn and his mother returned home awestruck. They were both thinking the same thing, “Where is he?” Soon after “missing person” signs went up for him then went away along with the money from his job. They now had to survive on the small amount of pay and tips from Esther working as a tavern maid. Shawn lost most of his friends except for Guisella, who felt sorry for him.
The Map:
Shawn got a job at the local farm at 16 which brought in some extra money, but still not enough for eating well. One night, when his mother had stayed late at the tavern, Shawn decided to look through his father’s stuff, he found some coins in his dad’s trousers and an old, wrinkled piece of paper. Shawn unraveled it and saw it was a map of one of the islands, he thought it must be a drawing he made when he was younger. But upon closer inspection he noticed he had never seen this island before. Where was this island and is this where his father went? At the bottom of the page were three sets of numbers, numbers he knew to be coordinates. Shawn shoved the piece of paper and coins in his pocket grabbed his stone sword and snuck away to find his father.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To find his father, figure out why he left, and what this strange island has to do with it all.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He has a strong sword swinging arm and a strategic mind (thanks to his father), yet struggles to get hold of a good thought when in tight situations.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): His left arm is weak (so when aiming a bow he's not very good), due to the hot air balloon accident and has a slight limp. His anger can get the better of him, causing him to get into bad situations. He has a short fuse and can snap at the smallest thing. Sometimes he think's he's stronger than he is.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No only the ones I made up for his story. Maybe someone for Guisella though she probably wouldn't take part in much, so it may not be worth it. I could also play his father or find someone for him, maybe. What do you think?
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armored men harassing a young girl. The girl reminds me of Guisella so I run towards the men. " Hey! Leave her alone!" *Pulls out sword* The one man laughs and swiftly kicks my legs out from under me. My sword fly's off into an alley. Oh yeah? says the bigger man. I lift myself back up and say "It's okay. I don't need it.” *Waves hand at them as if to say "bring it"* The one man lunges forward. I swiftly move to the side and trip the man. The man falls and hit's his head on a stone block and is knocked unconscious. I grab his sword and block the second mans stab. He lunges again. I block, but he punches me square in the face. I stumble back, seeing stars. I hardly get my vision back before the second fist comes. I wake up bleeding from my nose and the girl cleaning a cut on my forehead. That was brave of you to help me. the girl says. "Yeah, brave that's what they call that."
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded. “Rewarded how?” I have gold. Says the man as he opens his hand and shows me a dozen gold coins. Here take it and you’ll get more IF you return. He says grinning, shoving the coins towards me. I quickly grab the coins and ask “What must I retrieve?” The man leans forward and whispers in my ear: Ten blocks of obsidian. “Are you crazy? That stuff is nearly impossible to mine. And how could I fend off the monsters while mining it?” Just take this diamond pickaxe and get ten blocks of obsidian, don’t worry about the monsters. He growls. “I’ll need a ship to get there.” Use mine right there, just go or the deals off! He shouts pointing to a hot air balloon. I glance at the ship then look at the gold in my hand, I notice something wrong with the gold. It almost appears to be glowing and…. BREATHING! “No thanks, take it back. Get some other sap to do it for you.” I start to walk away then run as I hear the man hollering: No! Just take the gold! Take it, I don’t need it! Please! PLEASE, TAKE THIS DEMON GOLD OFF MY HANDS!!!
(If you didn’t get that I was insinuating the gold was from the Nether.)
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food. I toss him a silver coin and give him my ham sandwich. Thank you, young man. he says. I smile and walk on. Suddenly I think to myself he looked familiar, somewhat like my dad. I turn around to say something, but he's gone.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother. "Oh, really?" The fellow get's a little too close to my face. She was nice, though, if you know what I mean. he says with rancid breath. I knock him to the ground by hitting him in the head with my mug and leave. I hear the man scrambling to stand up, cussing at me, and the bartender laugh as I close the door.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears. The jade green emeralds remind me of Guisella's eyes, perhaps I should get something for her? "Good day, my lady. Say where did you get that necklace?" Oh, my boyfriend got this for me from the jeweler down the street. she answers. I go to the jewelry store and see a similar one to the necklace the lady was wearing which is very expensive. I decide to buy a cheaper, yet similar one for Guisella.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Other notes: I finally, FINALLY got a premium Minecraft account!!!!
dedoralive:
Thanks for clearing those things up. Welcome to TAC! Here's the link to our enjin forum. http://aneria.enjin.com/
Anyway, I hope to see you server-side!
Socfuz - The previous whitelister who handled you, that dashing fellow who posted just above me, had to dash out before he could read your app for himself. Glad to say, it was really quite good, though your definition of the Order of Aradin was a bit incorrect. I found that too small of a problem to defer you for, so just reread the OP and you should be fine. Welcome to the community, and check out our forums at http://aneria.enjin.com. Hope to see you there!
I'm a man of few words and many voices.
IGN:
Don_rosa
Real-Life Age:
14
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot):
Don_rosa2 (how could Don_rosa be taken?!)
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:
Yes.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?:
Powergaming is if you make your character overpowered in game, like if you meet someone and agree to have a battle, and the first thing you do is type "Runs up the wall, takes a backflip, lands on example's neck and strangle him" in chat, then giving no chance for the opponent to respond.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?:
Metagaming is when you use out of character information you may have in game. For example if you are a swordsman, you teach a noob how to make a pickaxe.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?:
Roleplay is playing someone you're not. In minecraft this means probably change your skin, create a backstory, live with that backstory and meet up with people, and in this case keep building the lore.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?:
Noone.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?:
When you have a CvC.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?:
When a problem that can't be solved IC comes up.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:
Yes. (Alot of reading right there, you should congratulate me on getting through)
Who is allowed to use magic?:
Priests, Mages and Paladins.
Who are the Fallen?:
The fallen are one of the main races in the roleplay ,also known as Medori.
When and how did our current government come to be?:
After a battle with the former monarchy, the government was created with a Chancellor on top, who can choose three characters to be his loremasters. This all happened 169 A.R.
Who are the Order of Aradin?:
A group that are supposed to protect the Chancellery.
What are the Net and Essence?
The net is magic beneath the islands that catches the ones that falls off and teleports them to the closest island. The net can only catch living creatures, but at the cost of 3 levels of essence it will bring you back with your stuff. Essence is magic you get from killing mobs, mining, taking food out of the oven and things like that.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:
A long time ago i played on a server i think was called Oblivion, i also tried a couple of others which i can't exactly remember the names of.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Oblivion and i think it was called The hobbit. I quit both of them because they closed down.
Character Information
Name:
Tazec Demelyc
Age:
21
Class:
Bladesman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?:
Citizen of the Chancellory
Physical description:
Blonde hair, blue eyes, dark clothes and always ready for a fight.
Screen capture of your skin:
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Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Too late. The village was burned down to the last bit. His parents had dissapeared long ago, and now he had no money, no place to live, he had nothing. He never took a big note of his parents dissapearing, they didn't even want him, so he survived on his own. Still, he would really like some money from them right now. He just stood there and stared into the ruins of his home for 10 years. When the night started sneaking up on him, he got out of this trance. He had to leave before the monsters came for him. He was an excellent swordsman, but there was no way he could fight off all the monsters that came at night. Luckily, he knew this place as good as his own pockets, so he started running towards the pier where all the airships hopefully was. When he got there, it was almost mid-night, but he was lucky it was only a creeper there. They were feared by every man, but he knew how to fight it. He ran over to it, and before it noticed him punched it off the pier and down into the net. He had to be quick before the net brung it up again, so he ran towards the closest airship. He suddenly remembered there was no way he could fly that thing, luckily, there was a sailor sleeping in the cabin. "Hey wake up, we gotta get out of here!" he screamed. "Hmf...hmmf....gah...oh hello there!" the sailor finally woke up. "Come on, help me get this ship off the pier before something blows it up!" Tazec said. "Okay, i'll help you, seems like it's something serious", the sailor answered and ran up to the deck. Together they managed to loosen the ship and fly it out from the pier. (That means Tazec loosened it and the sailor did everything else). After that Tazec must've fell asleep because the next thing he remembered was a big crash. Another ship had crashed into them, and now they were heading straight into a tower. The other boat's sailor got scared and flew away in fright of getting caught. There was a big crash into the tower, and everything went black. He woke up in a room with four white walls and immediately recognized it as a hospital. "Oh crap, what happened?" he said and tried to sit up. "Ouch!" he said and gently got back down. The next thing a nurse gets into the room and says "Oh you're awake, that's good! Don't try to sit up or do anything really, it will hurt." "Yeah i noticed", Tazec answered. "What about the sailor?" he said. The nurse got an uncomfortable and said expression in her face. "He didn't make it, he was much further at the front of the boat than you were, and got thrown off when you crashed", she said almost whispering. "Oh", he answered, and suddenly everything got back to him, the burned village, the airship, the crash. It took a couple of weeks for him to get better, but he got out with it alot better than he would expect after a bad crash like that. He only got a broken leg, which meant he could never run again which kind of sucked, but he could live with it. Atleast he could still fight.
That was a long time ago now. He was only 16 that time, and now he had settled in the big town and learned their story. He never told anyone about his story, or the village that burned down, but noone ever seemed to ask either, so he was okay with it. His 21'th birthday was coming closer and closer, and he was excited because he loved parties. Every year since he got here, the people of the city used to throw him a suprise party, and he loved it. All these nice gifts he got was amazing. Not long ago, these people started showing up in the city. They called themselves the Medori. It didn't seem like everyone liked the fact that they started settling in our town too much, but he didn't take too much note of it. He thought that if they needed a place to stay, why not here? When his 21'th birthday got there, he didn't feel like going to a party for once, so he didn't. Instead he went over to the pier. He looked out on the airships and started thinking the day all those years ago, the sailor, the crash. He hadn't put a foot in another airship since that day. "I'm just being silly," he said to himself and got onboard on one of them. He didn't know where it was going, he just went into it, not knowing where it was going.
It was a bad idea. It went to the Medori island, where there were no Citizens. The Medori looked on him, it looked like they were deciding wethever to eat him or kill him, but they didn't. They just gave him those nasty looks. After a while of walking around the island when nothing happened, he decided to go back. There was no reason for him to be here. Still, he didn't feel like going back, he felt like exploring. So that's what he did. He started travelling to all the different islands he could find.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
Exploring the world for oppertunities and finding out what he's meant to do.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):
Really good with a sword, doesn't really care what strangers thing about him or whetever they think he's weird. He explores everywhere he can.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):
Really scared of the net, he fell down there as a kid and hated the feeling when he got transported back up. Can never run again because of a broken leg after the crash.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl
"Hey, what are you doing?" Tazec said. One of the men responded "What does it look like, get away you Frak!" "Stop harassing her!" Tazec responded. "What did you say? Are you challenging us?" He made a sign for the girl to run while they had their backs turned on her, and so she did. Then, he started running. The two men followed after, but they were big so they couldn't get through all the holes that Tazec could, so it was easy to shake them off for him.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"Bloodstone?" Isn't that the place full of monsters where noone goes to?" Tazec said. "Yeah," said the man. "Cool, of course i'll do it!"
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Tazec remembered the days when he got to the town. He didn't have anything, but he was lucky that he had a golden coin that sold for quite alot of money. Apperantly, this man hadn't been as lucky. "Here you go, god bless you", Tazec said and handed him a loaf of bread.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Tazec's mother is long gone.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
"No!" "Tazec stop thinking those thoughts, you are a good guy, good guy!" He tried to pull himselves together, but the necklace was so beautiful. He got control over himself and stood as still as he could until the woman was out of his eyesight.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
No.
Other notes:
This is my second try.
IGN:ManaTheDragon
Real-Life Age:18
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot):Yes, ManaTheDragon
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:I have and do agree to abide by them.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?:Not giving someone the chance to retaliate.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?:Breaking the established rules.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?:The simplest def. is acting. Acting in a role. Playing a character
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?:No one
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?:When they decide
When are you allowed to speak out of character?:In OOC channel
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?:Mages, Priests, Palidins
Who are the Fallen?:The nomadic Medori
When and how did our current government come to be?:169 A.R. after the fall of the old monarchy
Who are the Order of Aradin?:The once great protectors of the citizens
What are the Net and Essence?The Net catches the fools who fall off the islands, and The Essence is experience basically
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:None really
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:None
Character Information
Name:Mana
Age:19
Class:Ranger
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?:Citizen
Physical description:Physically Fit
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):A traveler born to roam the lands an, help those in need. A schollar at heart full of knowledge. He also has a strong liking of animals, and has been aided by wolves, horses, and cats in the past. He likes to avoid battles when possible. Long ago a bandit(maybe) killed his horse. Nothing special about the bandit or the horse. Just info.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):He dosen't need a reason to help people, He just does it.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):A crack shot with his Trusty bow. Knows a good deal about mapping writng, and misc. knowledge.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):Not good at close range combat. Very blunt and truthful, will tell you what he thinks of you, no matter who you are.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Mana approaches with Bow drawn and calls out. They turn and tell him to bugger off. Mana reponds by saying, "I will when I know whether or not I should send this arrow through your skull, you macho fool." The fight begins and Mana quickly dispatches one of the men, while the other charges with sword in hand. Mana sees the sword and grudgingly draws his own blade. The man with his shotty sword work loses the duel quickly enough. The girl asks "why did you save me?" Mana responds with "Because you needed help. He turns and walks off as he sheathes his blade.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"If I am to go that place then tell me at least, how badly this needs to be done and what my reward will be."
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
As he passes Mana sees the desparation of the old man. He checks his bag and finds a Spare loaf of bread. "Here old man, I wish you the best of luck in the coming times." He say this as he hands the bread to the old man.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Mana Replies with "If that were the case she probably would have lived longer, but regardless have this bit of gold and get yourself another round. I only ask that you refrain from bothering me any further.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
"Excuse me madam, but that necklace is absolutely lovely. Why it looks just like the one my little sister has been wanting."
"Oh that's nice."
"Yes, I wish I could get one, but there expensive, only I am running ot of time, she's dying you see."
"Oh how awful. Tell you what dear, take this and give it to your sister."
"Thank you." Mana pockets the necklace and walks away with a sly smile.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Other notes:
Real-Life Age: 11
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): sario100
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Doing things that your are over-powered, i.e. saying "Grows 50 feet and breaks island in half"
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Saying or doing things with your character that your character wouldn't know/ wouldn't know how to do. I.e. A guard telling a mage some cool spells he learned that he didn't learn in the roleplay
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Pretending you are someone else, sometimes something supernatural or just something regular, but when you roleplay you act completely like the person, not like your real self.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one is allowed to use these cheaty mods.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: If both of the characters agree to have a RP fight and one person kills the other one.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: Always speak in character but if you have to you can type in parentheses (this would be OOC), and there are also chat channels for speaking OOC
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes I do, it is the reason I decided to apply for the server, it seems very fun because of the extensive lore.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Only people who have learned magic in the roleplay, the mages, or people who are learning to be a mage
Who are the Fallen?: They are a simple culture who live secluded from the rest of society, they have a greater magic aptitude and there island have started to drift towards the other humans, making tension in the fallen society.
When and how did our current government come to be?: It took over in 169 A.R., after the defeat of the old Linyera Monarchy, who were defeated in 167 A.R., and The Chancellory has been in power ever since.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: It is an order established in 37 A.R. to protect the people of the island from supernatural evils, specifically monsters that were sweeping across the land, but since the monsters are gone now, the order has fallen in disarray.
What are the Net and Essence? The net is beneath the islands to save people from falling, it teleports people back to islands if they fall onto but it cant teleport non-living things, so you will lose all of your items. But you can keep your items with something called the essence. You can get the essence from going on adventures, from killing mobs, smelting things, and breaking ores. If you fall onto the net with essence it will save all of your armor and items.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: I have played on a few other RP servers and applied to more, but I have yet to find a very good server where I can have many good experiences for years to come.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: I have played on a few I can't remember and applied to more, the only one I can really remember is a modern city RP called "Sherlock City", and the app I submitted for that is pretty good in my opinion, I stopped playing because the server shut down.
Character Information
Name: Kalis Brakenburg
Age: 24
Class: I can't start with Mage since it's a scholar class, so do I start with one and then switch? If so then I will start with laborer and then become a mage, but if I just choose one, then mage.
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: A Citizen of the Chancellory
Physical description: A thin man for his age, but he is fast on his feet, he's around 5' 8", and while he is not ugly, he's not exactly handsome either.
Screen capture of your skin: http://imgur.com/a/XEnB3
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Kalis Brakenburg was seen by the world as a bad egg, nothing more and nothing less. His parents seemed nice enough of course, almost too nice. But Kalis was just a very bad kid. Everywhere he went he spoiled days and ruined peoples look of him. Finally, when he was almost 14, his parents had to make an intervention. His dad pulled him aside one day and just had a simple conversation, telling him that he was truly a bad kid and he had to grow up and act his age. Like always Kalis had a fit about it and his father just got into a rage. We hit Kalis and yelled at him: “You are no son of mine! Leave this house and don’t come back until you are mature and courteous to everyone around you!” Kalis instantly stopped throwing a tantrum and ran off into the night. His father would always remember that day as the day he lost Kalis.
Meanwhile…
Kalis ran outside the house, scared and unsure. He ran around the city, unsure where to go. Eventually he ended up in a place called The Slums. There were bums and muggers everywhere and finally he just collapsed in an alley and cried himself to sleep. The next morning he woke up with a new perspective on his situation, he thought about going home but he knew he could never face the humiliation from his parents. He thought for a bit and decided that this place would be his home. He would become the King of this place of bums and thieves. Soon everyone would bow down to him “It would be easy really” He said to himself. “With my attitude and hard work I will surely become a King.
6 years later
Wow, two decades I’ve been on this world and I have hated every single bit of it. I can remember so vividly the day when my wretched father kicked me out of the house, with not a care for my feelings. Now I know that I should have turned back around and said sorry to him but it’s too late now, isn’t it? I could have made it big, but look at me now. A horrible bum, just like the bums I thought I would have been a king of 6 years ago. What a joke, it hadn’t been a minute before I was robbed of everything I had and left for dead. My life since then has been theft and living at the very bottom of society, well no more! I now swear that I will never steal again. I will get a job, a house, and someday go to the academy and become the job I have admired since I was a child. The Mage.
The Mage always seemed so… well, magical to me when I was a child, they still do. They could control the elements of the worlds and cast amazing spells and all I wish is that I could learn just one tiny spell. But mark my words, world. I will learn more than one, two, or three spells. I will learn them all! I will go to the academy and become the very best mage of them all! Hopefully me being not the strongest won’t matter, I’m fast on my feet and why would I need strength in magic anyway. Right now I will head into the main capitol, learn all I can, go to the academy and start my life. Maybe even my parents that I have forsaken so, so, long ago. Here goes nothing.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): He wants to go to The Academy, become the very best mage, and maybe find his parents one day.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He is very fast, and he will flee from a fight if it is not in his favor, and he is very determined to do whatever he sets his mind to.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): He is very sensitive if anyone says something about his family, and he is kind of weak.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): I might have one with my brother, however I doubt his application will be accepted, as he is even younger than me. But if he makes an application I will edit this post and put a link to a topic.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Kalis sees the young girl and stops, shocked for a moment. She was a dead ringer for his long lost mother! Kalis sees what the men are doing and shouts, "Hey, do you two think you're doing!" They snicker and answer "What does it look like, mate? Keep moving and make no trouble" Then one of the men pull out a knife and Kalis runs away and gets the nearest guard and tells the guard what happened.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"Oy! You there!" A man approaches Kalis. "What?" Kalis responds. "How about you go down to Bloodstone and pick up a little.. package of mine, you will be generously rewarded"
Kalis considers this offer, if this man is telling the truth then I could really use the reward, but I know about bloodstone, it is crawling with monsters. I could easily be killed, and then where would I be?
Kalis quickly says "No thank you" and runs away from the man.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Kalis sees the man, and he thinks about what he could have been if he hadn't decided to come back to the capitol. An old beggar, asking for money and food. Just like this old man here. Because of this, Kalis stops right away and gives the old man a whole sandwich, which was going to be his lunch but he could see that the old man needs it more.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Kalis justs looks in the tavern, almost hoping to find his father, who drank with his friends occasionally, Kalis couldn't see him so he decided to leave, while he was leaving an obviously drunk man says to him "Where ya goin'? Scared ye ol' mum is goin' to catch ya in here when she comes here ta drink!"
Kalis stops, thinks about what the man said and starts crying a tiny bit. "WHAT DID YOU SAY!" Kalis shouts! The bar goes quiet and al eyes turn to Kalis.
"Hey, hey, I didn't mean ta.." He is interrupted by Kalis running into him and knocking the breath out of him. The people in the bar crowd around the man and one of them says "I think he might be dead..." All eyes turn to Kalis but he is already gone, lost in the night.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Kalis sees the beautiful necklace the young women is wearing and almost can't stop himself from just reaching out his hands and yanking it off her neck out of habit, but no, he can't do, he promised to himself that he would never steal again. Kalis starts walking faster and the woman is quickly out of sight, along with the necklace.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Nope
Other notes: None
IGN: lobsterninja
Real-Life Age: 16
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): lobstahninja
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes, I abide.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Essentially, it is when a player attempts to control everything; Pretty much being that annoying kid from your childhood that refused all aspects of the game (I.E. "Oh, I had a forcefield up that blahblahblah.)
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: When you know something that your character doesn't. (I.E. You overheared in the ooc chat that some people are going to attack Base A, and you abuse that information by your character magically becoming paranoid of an attack on Base A)
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Playing in an imaginary setting and assuming a role regardless of who/what you are in real life.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No-one
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When both parties have consent in fair combat, or in a realistic situation that isn't survivable (I.E. One person going against an Army).
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: You're allowed to speak OoC so long as you use parentheses around the OoC text.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes, I have read the lore and agree to it.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Anyone that has learned magic via Roleplay, or being a Mage.
Who are the Fallen?: A race of isolated Humans that are nomadic.
When and how did our current government come to be?: In the year 169 A.R. when the monarchy system wasn't preferable and revolts occurred.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: An order of Knights who are to protect the Chancellor from various threats.
What are the Net and Essence?
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Not too much really, whenever I joined a role-playing server I never really got into the community at all. For example, on one of the servers I had played one person had controlled all of the money flow and never spent any of it. This made the economy horrible and un-moving.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: Poor economic systems, a community that had no interest in newer players, low interaction.
Character Information
Name: Jake Smith
Age: 21
Class: Engineer
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Medori
Physical description: Short Brown Hair, Deep Blue Eyes, Tall and Skinny, Well-Built Legs, Average Muscle Tone.
Screen capture of your skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/steampunk-engineer-2113576/
(No, I didn't find a skin and then base the description off of that.)
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Jake Smith was a normal Medori boy that was enveloped in the culture as per the usual. Jake was born into the world with a loving family and two siblings who were much older than Jake. His siblings are what made him the person today, from being chased by much strong siblings he was very capable of running away to avoid a roughening from his siblings. Jake was a very skinny boy who came to learn of redstone and the capabilities that it held. Jake saw something in redstone that could guide his people into a brighter future, where the Medori could settle down from their nomadic ways and enjoy the simple pleasures in life that could be amplified through redstone. Because of his sparked interest in redstone Jake spent much of his years tinkering and creating simple machines that could make life easier, although many of these creations had failed Jake was only that much more motivated to create. Jake had a hard time with other kids growing up. Kids called him “Red-Head” from all the dust that would get into his hair from tinkering and creating circuits. Jake wasn’t that social at all, and had considered suicide several times. At one point Jake had a death machine planned for him to go out in style. However one thing kept him from going through with it. A girl in his dreams. Every night Jake would see this girl when he slept. The girl’s face couldn’t be seen at all, but Jake knew she was out there, and thusly he left his Medori life to seek knowledge of redstone, and the girl in his dreams. Initially, Jake went to the Capitol on an airship in search of what he strived for. The airship’s right engine had blown out and caused the ship to begin to tilt. Jake knew that he should check the engine out and see what was up, but the danger was immense. It was either to have everyone on the ship go to a certain death, or have a chance through Jake’s knowledge of redstone. Jake climbed out to the engine on the airship, the smoke was nearly blinding and the air caused him to give a heavy wheezing gag. Jake knew that the people on the airship were depending on him to save their lives, so he drove through the pain and looked at the faulty engine. A simple fix was all that could save the people on the airship. Jake made the fix, and through what seemed like an hour was really over in the course of 10 minutes. The airships crewmen went out to fetch him before Jake passed out, and before Jake was even conscious the airship arrived at the capital’s harbor.
(Copied and pasted from Word)
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): Achieving a mastery of redstone, and finding the girl in his dreams.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Being ambitious allows Jake to always keep a good outlook and continue his work.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Fairly weak in terms of lifting, not the greatest social skills, has a one track mind.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): None.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Jake, approaches the men and without asking for the circumstances of the harassment he quickly throws redstone dust into the faces of the men, blurring their vision. Jake yells at the girl to run. Jake thinks to himself to do the same, but not to follow the path the girl went as per the chance of the men catching up to him and additionally catching the girl.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Mister, you must be fairly crazy to ask for someone to go to that place, but luckily for you I think I might be able to get whatever you're looking for, but only if you have information that I want.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
*Tosses a small amount of money to the man* Go on and grab some food, and the best of luck to you sir.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Jake ignores the comment and moves elsewhere into the tavern. The man doesn't even know my mother and as to how much of a kind lady she is.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
The girl in my dreams may have been wearing that necklace, I think I better get a better look at this woman and go from there.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? I do not.
Other notes:
lobsterninja - Not a bad app, but there's one big, big problem; your class. Engineer is a scholar class, and can only be attained IC. Also, for a Medori, "Jake Smith" is a very bland name. They're much more exotic and Eastern culture-inspired, so I would try to find a more exotic name. Lastly, your ICRs could use a lot more fleshing out. Fix these, and you should be rarin' to go.
Double-Deferred:
ManaTheDragon - Okay, this...was a tough one for me. I wanted to reject, but I figured you should be given a second chance, but unlike other applicants, this second chance is your LAST chance. I do this because you app was just so very, very short. Your bio especially was just god-awful. Everything just needs to be lengthened, and your character also needs better weaknesses. I just don't get a feel for your character at all. Good luck in trying again, and if you have any further questions, feel free to PM me.
Sario and Don_rosa, zymph should get to your apps as soon as he gets online. If he doesn't today, I will handle your apps later.
I'm a man of few words and many voices.
Don_rosa - Welcome to TAC. Here's the link to our enjin forum: http://aneria.enjin.com/ ; Thanks for clearing up those things I listed.
Sario - Welcome to TAC. Thanks for making those changes, your backstory was much better. I would've liked to have seen some lengthier ICRs, but meh, no worries. The only thing that bugged me is that you switched from 3rd person to 1st person in the middle of your bio. Anyway, here's the link to the enjin forum: http://aneria.enjin.com/
Hope to see both of you fellas server-side!
Real-Life Age: 15
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): No skype
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is making a situation in role-play that is impossible to respond to because it is overpowered, an example being "chops legs off" instead of "swings axe at legs".
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using out of character information in character.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplay is acting as someone else.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one can hack.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: You can murder when the play is ok with it in out of character chat.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: In the out of character chat, or with brakets in front and behind the chat.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: People who have taken their degrees in magicry at the acadamy.
Who are the Fallen?: A group of loners who deal with problems peacefully, believe in story telling, and live in tents.
When and how did our current government come to be?: When the former government fell, a new one was formed.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: A group of people formed to protect citizens from supernatural evils. But it doesnt matter because mullraugh shut them down.
What are the Net and Essence? The net keeps people from falling for eternity when they fall of the islands, essence is energy within a person for doing things like spellcasting.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: None
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Character Information
Name: Ulysses
Age: 40
Class: Craftsman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellory
Physical description: 1.6 meters tall, scrawny.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): To begin his life with the beginning of his life; Ulysses was born on a Tuesday, forty years ago. It was said by his parents, that when he was born he cried more than the other children. That was dismissed as something of unimportance, but it may have been a sign of his life to come. Also, when he was born, the local mage concluded that because he cried an oddly large amount, he would be destined to grow up as a very peculiar person. When he was a child his parents, being so busy with their trade, spent very little time with Ulysses. So, as a result, he was cared for by the very same local mage, Grant, that had professed him to be abnormal. Because Grant was often very busy, Ulysses had been given a dog to help stave off the lonliness when Grant was not there. As Ulysses grew up, he was exposed to all sorts of magics from the mage, some legal, and some not so much... One of these evil magic forms was necromancy; Grant killed the pet dog that Ulysses loved so much, and then attempted to bring it back to life. This was an unsuccesful attempt, and the dog was forever dead. Ulysses, being the sensitive young boy that he was, was deeply scarred by his dog's death. Grant advised Ulysses to never tell anyone about what actually happened the day his dog died (no doubt to elude the authorites). So, Ulysses remained silent about the event for the rest of his life. This was not the only time that Grant's magic had disheartened Ulysses. When Ulysses was crafting, which he often did because he wanted to follow in his parents trade, Grant narrated that the objects of Ulysses's creation were so mechanically complicated, that they could come to life. Grant often performed ceremonies to bring these inanimate objects to life, but almost always destroyed the item. Grant had once destroyed a fishing rod that Ulysses had spent many hours crafting. These events left deep gashes on his spirit. However, life always went on for Ulysses. As Ulysses grew into his early teens, Grant stopped coming to care for Ulysses, who had kept Grant's secret for all of those years. He quickly grew a deep hatred towards magic, and did his best to carry on with his parent's craft through his teen years. His parents had taught him how to build, repair, or improve almost anything in the little free time that they had with him. As a result, Ulysses grew incredibly skilled in his profession of crafting. However, his hatred towards magic always stayed with him, and thus caused him to reject anything to do with magic, including the religions that people follow. He even rejected the healing magics performed by the church, and therefore hated everything about it. He always thought and still thinks that the magic used is harming people, and tricking them into paying into the church, so they profit. His experiences with Grant have made him aspire to be a good person because he knows what it is like to be a victim, and does not want to put that on anyone else. Until now, Ulysses has kept quiet, nomadicly living in many houses, surviving by selling many crafts. Since he crafted so many things, his hand to eye coordination is very good. Also because of his small weight, he is light on his feet, and therefore can sneak very well.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To carry on his parents craft, and deny all magic by convincing others to not use it because he thinks it is all destructive, and evil.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): He is an extremely skilled crafter, and can keep a secret as a result of his practice. He is light on his feet so he can sneak, and has good coordination.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): He is sensitive, weak, and rejects all magic so he is paranoid, and does not trust people who use or support magic. He also fears magic.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
*Sees people beating up the girl, and feels bad for the girl*
*Goes to get the nearest guard or police officer*
"There is two men beating on a girl over there" Says Ulysses to the guards.
"Okay, I will do something about that" replies the guard.
*Thinks to himself that he should leave before he gets injured*
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"Go to Bloodstone" says the man.
"No, its magic will obviously kill me before I even get close."
"You will regret not going, you could have been generously rewarded."
"It is not worth dyeing over."
*Walks away*
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
"Give me food" says the old man.
"I will be back" says Ulysses
*Crafts a fishing rod, and some bread"
*Gives fishing rod, and bread to old man*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
"Your mother is so fat, not even Dora could explore her!" says the man.
"I beg your pardon?" says Ulysses
*Feels insulted, and sad because of the man*
*stands up, and leaves before the man can respond, disheartend by the event*
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
*Ignores necklace, and keeps walking*
*She would probably kill me with some magic*
*The church would also probebly find, and kill me if I stole this*
*I do not want to be as bad as Grant was*
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? No
Other notes: In chancellory lore under major locations, the outpost has an unfinished sentence at the end of the paragraph.
PS: This is the edited version
KinderSuprise456 - Well, you fixed the things that I asked you to, so welcome to the community! Feel free to check out our forums at http://aneria.enjin.com/ and say hi!
I'm a man of few words and many voices.
IGN: OlympCoves
Real-Life Age: 16
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): OlympicCoves :3
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yep!
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is when a person/player forces an action/emote onto another. Ex: *Mola Ram takes out the man’s heart and holds onto it as he throws him into a pit of fire.* It can also mean the character is overpowered.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is when a person uses knowledge they gained OOC and use it IC for their benefits.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplay means to act out another ‘person’s’ life.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: People who want to get banned forever and ever and ever. (Nobody)
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When the other character is in a position where they cannot get out without dying or both parties agrees on it.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: In the OOC chat or with double brackets on both ends of the sentence/phrase. ((Hello.))
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Of course!
Who is allowed to use magic?: People who have gone through the necessary procedure IC. Mages, priests and paladins.
Who are the Fallen?: The Fallen are a race of people that have been isolated from the others for more than three centuries. They are peaceful and very superstitious.
When and how did our current government come to be?: The Chancellery was founded in 169 A.R. It was founded because the people wanted a new form of government after they have overthrown the Linyera Monarchy two years prior.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: The Order of Aradin is a group of knights that were created to protect the civilians from beasts.
What are the Net and Essence?
The net is a phenomenon that is essentially a barrier beneath the islands for living matter so they don’t fall for eternity. Nonliving matter will not be saved unless you have a minimum amount of Essence.
Essence is a sort of mana that is gained when an individual finishes a task. If you have enough Essence, you will not lose any items when caught by the Net. It can also be stored in emeralds for later use.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:
I’ve done a couple forum RPs with my friends but this if my first ever minecraft RP server.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: Zippy doo-dah.
Character Information
Name: Emi Skitsferg
Age: 20
Class: Craftsman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Medori
Physical description: Grace has a slim frame; she is 5’9, 100lbs. She has red hair and dark blue eyes. She’s usually wearing a small, white dress with stripes of pink. Her skin isn’t as tanned as her fellow Medori, but she’s not pale either.
Screen capture of your skin: http://imgur.com/M3NUEUB&6ZU41oS
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
The only think Emi has ever known was family. She devoted her entire life to the Medori community, helping prepare food, crafting arrows for hunts and farming. She thought of everyone there as a family and the thought of them splitting up never crossed her mind. What could ever go wrong? She was raised by loving parents, had great adult role-models, and her friends were always… well… friendly. As she grew up, Emi took on more responsibilities such as cooking the meat over the fire, fishing, setting up and taking down tents, and more. She didn’t mind it one bit; in fact, I might go on and say she enjoyed it. The more of a factor she was in the family, the better. That was her belief for a several more years.
At the age of 16, Emi’s father decided it was time to pass down the secrets of the Skitsferg family. She was told about the secret cult that worshipped the Bodychanger and was in charge of the Medori folk who have gone missing over the years. Emi, still knowing nothing other than to help her family, hid the shock and emotions she felt when she was told this. Her father told her to go on a trip with him to see the bodies of the dead. As much as she hated the fact her family worshipped the Bodychanger himself, she followed her father. She followed because loyalty to the family was the only thing she was ever taught. Betrayal was out of the picture. Whether she wanted this or not, it was what she was going to become.
She felt nauseous. Why? Why would my family do such disturbing deeds? She questioned, tears rolled down her face as she looked at the bodies of what once were loving people.
“
Do you see, darling? These are sacrifices we need to make in order to bring back the Bodychanger.” Her father said, one hand leaning on her shoulder. Emi couldn’t bare look at her father. Her father, the person she’s idolised all her life, was a murderer. She had to do something, but what? She couldn’t hurt her own father. Yes, he was a Bodychanger worshipping murderer, but he was still family. But if she didn’t stop him, she would be stuck in a life of a criminal. As soon as she heard her father turn away, she pulled out a knife. With tears running down her face, she thrust her knife into the man that was no longer her father.
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She stepped off the airship onto Chancellery soil. She took a deep breath and sighed. Perhaps things could be better here. I could start a new life, a life without secrets, a life without lies and a life without death. It’s going to be different. I’m going to take some time off here, and come back to the Medori Island when I feel ready. She thought, a smile creeping across her face as she saw her airship fly back to the Medori.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
To settle down and grow old knowing the Skitsberg name will be rid of bloodshed.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):
She’s a great cook, can craft weapons fairly well, and is fast on her legs. She’s compassionate, friendly and enjoys herself and the world around her.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):
Physically, she is very weak and cannot hold her own in a fight. Her trust towards others has gone down after the incident with her father. She’s also not very bright in an academic sense, since she’s only learned how to read and write.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
No but Ploops referred me to this server.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Emi sees the situation and runs off to find a Guard. She leads the Guards to the men harassing the girl hoping it wasn’t too late.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Emi laughs. “I’m sorry, sir. I’m a twenty year old lady. Bloodstone isn’t somewhere I’m going to want to go for vacation.” She then gestures the man to leave, not wanting to hear any more of his proposals.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
She looks at the beggar with compassion. She takes out a loaf of bread from her bag and hands it to him. “Keep on hanging, sir. You have so much to live for.” She goes on her way, not thinking twice about what she did.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Being a little intoxicated herself, she laughs with him. “So was my father!” She then asks the barkeep for another drink to wash away any memories that might creep up on her.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
“By the Father, that is beautiful!” Emi exclaims, her eyes seemingly enchanted by the woman’s necklace. “You should be careful, a necklace like that might attract some bad attention.” She smiles at the woman and goes on her way.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Nope.
Other notes: First server, haha. *Cringes as she posts her app*
IGN:
Real-Life Age: 15
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): Tayl.Gunner
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yup
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Being overpowered in roleplay by not giving the character the option to respond or doing impossible feats.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: using information obtained OOC and applying it to roleplaying
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: acting out a foreign role and reacting just as the character you are portraying would
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: With their permission
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: Nope
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to Roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: Mages and priests
Who are the Fallen?: Nomadic, superstitious people
When and how did our current government come to be?:The Defeat of the Linyera Monarchy in 167 A.R.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: Monster hunters
What are the Net and Essence?: The Net is the barrier that catches anyone who happens to fall and places them on the nearest island. However, material items are lost in the process. Thus, the use of Essence is drawn to allow one to keep their possessions. Essence is supposedly the First Plane's iteration of mana, but doesn't have any other function besides saving items. It is gained by overcoming obstacles in the world.
What previous Roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Two years worth on multiple servers.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Battle of Eldaran - Owner was kind of a jerk
Era of the Vanguard - Shut down
FellsGlow - temporarily off
A few more I can't remember, but I left because they were just low in quality.
Character Information
Name: Collin
Age: 23
Class: Laborer
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellory
Physical description: Tall, thin, averagely built. Black, short hair, bearded. Wears a black jacket with the sleeves rolled to the elbows and a green undershirt.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Collin was always interested in skyships. Throughout his childhood, the highlight of his day would be watching the titanic fliers at the docks. He would chat with the dockworkers and crew of the incoming flights to learn more about them. His favorite crew members to talk to were the engineers, who could explain much of the internal working of the ships. However, most things the engineers explained to him Collin couldn’t understand. Frustrated with his inability to grasp what the crew members told him, Collin, aged thirteen, turned to books for answers. Every night, Collin would read books on steam engines and their operations. However, as time grew on, Collin became more interested in more subjects than just steam engines. His collection grew to history, fiction, philosophy, and theories of magic. At sixteen years of age, Collin was a very well read boy.
At this point, Collin was ready to start working. Collin felt the only fitting play for him to work was the docks, being that he spent much of his time there. He already knew the basics from conversing with the dockworkers, too. He was friendly with most of them, and participated in their gambling games they would play during break. Even with the not-so-well pay that he was offered at the docks, he enjoyed his job because it was one way that he could work with airships without pursuing a career as an engineer or joining a crew as a simple deck hand. Even so, as time grew on, his desire to work on an airship grew as well. When he turned twenty-two, he quit his job at the docks and enlisted in a crew.
The crew he joined with was a small freighter company that flew to many different islands to deliver goods. During his time on the ship, he learned many different aspects about skyships and how they work. His job mostly consisted of odds and ends that experienced or specialized members of the crew didn’t have the time to deal with, such as cleaning. Nonetheless, it was a very important learning experience for him. After several months of being a member of the crew, one position stood out remarkably in Collin’s eyes: the engineer. The engineer kept the thing aloft and was, for all intents and purposes, the most important member of the crew.
A year after enlisting with the freighter, Collin left to pursue training in being and engineer.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To become an engineer
Strengths (Both physical and personality): His greatest asset is his mind. He is witty in speech and has a wide plethora of general knowledge. He is also friendly, for the most part.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman): He is quick to anger if he feels he’s been wronged. If he is treated wrong, he’ll never forget and he’ll rarely forgive. His anger also clouds his judgment, and he may do stupid things in a fit of rage. Physically, he is not the most built. He has an acute form of Autism.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
Brother, http://aneria.enjin....-brother/page/1
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation. Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
“Hey, come on, stop it,” said Collin.
The big brute of a man nearest to him said in a deep voice, “How ‘bout you stop pokin’ yer head in business ya don’ know anything ‘bout?”
“How ‘bout I not? Listen, she’s just an innocent girl, just stop heckling her!”
Quick as a whip, the man brandished a wooden club and swung it at Collin. Collin attempted to block it with his forearm, but was merely knocked off of his feet by the force of the club. Wielding the club with both hands, the brute brought it down over Collin’s head. When he came to, he woke in a hospital bed.
“Just what I get for doing the right thing,” he said bitterly.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
“Bloodstone? Are you kidding me? That place is dangerous!” exclaimed Collin.
The Scholar nodded rapidly, “Yes, it is, but I need it for my research! It is very important!”
“Forget it, I’m not risking my neck like that, no matter how much you give me.”
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
“Please, sir, I need the food! I’ll die out here!” said the older beggar.
Collin took pity on the man. He was dressed in rags and sitting in a filthy alley. He took out his coin purse and handed the old man ten coins.
“I’m sorry I can’t spare any more,” said Collin, sincerely.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
“A *****! That’s just what she is!” said the drunkard.
“Right, my mother is the *****, here,” replied Collin, “My mother is the good-for-nothing scum of society that raised a whelp of a son who drinks all his damn money away in a damn tavern!”
The insult took a moment to process through his intoxicated mind.
“You son of a !” cried the drunken man, who charged at him.
Collin was prepared for this. His sober body and mind was faster than his. When the man went to swing, he casually stepped to the left, grabbed his free arm, and twisted it. Then, he took his right leg and forcefully shoved the man to his knees.
“My mother is the *****?” whispered Collin into the man’s ear.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Collin casually strode down the street. He was lost in his own thoughts, when a flashing of light brought him back to reality. It came from a beautifully gleaming silver necklace with a sapphire in the center of it.
"My, what a beautiful necklace!” Collin cried to her.
The woman gave him a snotty expression that said “I have better things to do then talk to lowly commoners.”
“What a *****”
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?: Is there a Navy?
Other notes: Where do you go to become an engineer? I may be missing something obvious, but I couldn’t find anything on that.
http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1739510-the-anerian-chronicles-rpairshipsclassesplayer-driven-storyextensive-lore/page__st__220
Character Information
Name: Lucifer
Age: 21
Class: Bladesman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Chancellory
Physical description: Lucifer is 6 feet and 2 inches tall, and is constantly wearing a big suit of black armor.
Screen capture of your skin: http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4f600d65532326306259913503131352338
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Lucifer was born into a simple mining community. He was raised by his mother and father in his simple home. When he was young, he idolized his father, who was a bladesman. His father taught him many things about swords, and by the time he was 10, Lucifer was practicing with a sword every day. Lucifer trained for five more years until one day, a mysterious ship came into town. This ship turned out to be a band of bandits and thieves who started to ransack the town. Lucifer instinctively picked up his sword and tried to fight the attackers. He held his ground for a while, but he was eventually knocked out. When he awoke, he was on the mysterious ship. The bandits saw how good he was with a sword, so they took him aboard to train him for their own uses. Lucifer was very reluctant to help, until they reached the next town. When they got there, he tried to escape. He ran straight to the people of the town, trying to explain his story, but they did not listen. Instead, one of the townspeople stabbed him, and yet again, Lucifer lost his consciousness. He proceeded to wake back up on the ship once more.
It was at this point Lucifer realized his fate. He was cursed to stay on this ship of bandits, for if he went anywhere else, he would just be considered a bandit. The next seven years of Lucifer’s life were generally the same thing. They would reach a new town, kill most of the townsfolk and take their things. Eventually, Lucifer got a thrill out of it. Soon enough, he was leading the men ransacking the towns. His life was changed once again when their ship ran into a military ship. It was a fierce battle. Cannons were firing rounds constantly and arrows flew across the gap between the two ships. Then, once the other ship was close enough, Lucifer and a few other bandits jumped across and started to fight the soldiers hand to hand. No one on that ship could best Lucifer. He continued to make his way through the soliders until he reached the helm of the ship, by that time, most were dead. The only man still alive was slowly bleeding out on the side of the ship. He stared right at Lucifer and said “You monster….I hope you burn….” And then he died.
Lucifer couldn’t believe how long it took him to realize this. He had so much blood on his hands, and it was all because of the bandits. As soon as this idea set in, he quickly started the ship and turned it away from the bandits. After sending it forward, he walked down and killed any bandits remaining on the ship. Lucifer decided he needed a new start, some way to clean the blood from his hands. Lucifer decided to head to a new area, where no one would hear of his deeds. He went under the deck and grabbed a large suit of armor to hide himself, and set a course for the Captial. A place where the bandits would not dare to sail. A place where he could start anew.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To do more right and good things to counter act all the wrong he has done
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Lucifer is strong and can use a sword very well. He keeps to himself mainly which at times is good and bad
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Lucifer is constantly worried someone will learn of his past, also, from his days of raiding and pillaging, he was stabbed in the leg a few times so his movement is slower than most.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Lucifer: Stop
Guard: What are you going to do about it? *laughs*
Lucifer: *draws his sword*
Guard: Alright then *draws his sword*
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Man: If you go to Bloodstone and get something for me, you will be rewarded *waves a pouch of coins*
Lucifer: *remains silent and walks past*
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Beggar: Please, some food!
Lucifer: *without saying a word pulls out some of his food and gives it to the beggar*
Beggar: Thank you so much!
Lucifer: *walks off*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Fellow: Oi! Your mother was a pig!
Lucifer: *remains silent and ignores the man*
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Lucifer: *looks at the necklace, and considers taking it, but quickly looks away* That was the old you *he says to himself*
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Nope
Other notes: I hope this new char app is better than my first one XD