Glad to see a few more Medori! While I would've like the ICRs to be a bit beefier, they were fine as is. Welcome to TAC and the Silver Gaming Community! Here's the link to the forums, come hang out, chat, and stay updated about news concerning the server. http://aneria.enjin.com/
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): dominatorguy123
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Aye
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Committing an action on another player that doesn't give them a chance to respond i.e.: *Grabs his sword and runs away*.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using OOC information while playing as your character, such discussing what is the best Minecraft mod.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplaying is when you create a fictional character and live out a fantasy as said character.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: Nobody.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When said character is willing to die.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When speaking in parentheses (), talking in private chat, or when talking in an OOC channel.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yep
Who is allowed to use magic?: Character who have learned it in the Academy or have special permissions.
Who are the Fallen?: The Fallen are a group of people who were isolated from the others when the islands were lifted into the sky by Aneria.
When and how did our current government come to be?: In 169 A.R., when the Linyera Monarchy was overthrown by revolts.
Who are the Order of Aradian?: They are a group of knights that were created to protect the Chancellory, although they now are mere icons.
What are the Net and Essence?: The Net is an unknown source that transports those that fall off the islands safely back, although a certain amount of essence is required for the items of said person to stay with them. Essence is a strange energy that people accumulate while doing mundane tasks, such as mining and cooking, it can also be stored in Emeralds to be traded or for personal use.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: None.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Character Information
Name: Daniel
Age: 18
Class: Ranger
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellory
Physical description: A tall, lanky youth (6'0) with a mess of unkempt black hair. Prefers to wear a green T-shirt underneath his usual light leather armour. Carries a bow and a quiver full of arrows, along with a concealed dagger with him at all times unless the situation demands that he doesn't.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner: Daniel was raised in the capitol city with a hardworking father and a loving mother. Both parents showered Daniel with love, and he too. His father worked as a craftsmen and secretly hoped that Daniel would follow in his footsteps, but he knew if his son were to take another path, he would approve (as long as it was ethical). Daniel grew up to be a bright boy, and his teachers never had enough compliments for him. In his spare time, he often played with his friends and whenever he could, practiced with a short sword his father crafted for him, as long as a bow that his uncle, a Ranger, had given him for his 7th birthday. By the age of 10, he proved himself competent in swordsmanship, and to a greater extent, archery. All of his friends were often amazed at his lightning-fast reflexes and his uncanny accuracy, but Daniel never let all the praise get to his head, and always practiced when he could. Kids were attracted to his cheerful and kind attitude, and he made sure that no kids were left out of an activity. Then, one day, that all changed. Daniel, at the age of 12, was taking a stroll around the edge of the island, when he noticed a young kid, Michael, surrounded by Will and his two friends, Anthony and Sloan, two thick-headed brutes. Will was born into nobility, and the years spent ordering servants around had made him snooty and unbearable. Michael seemed to be on the verge of tears, while Will was laughing, obviously making fun of Michael's plain and unadorned blade while he held it in his hand ( Michael wished to become a Bladesman when he grew up). Daniel felt rage boil up in him and he stiffly stalked over to Will, where he promptly plucked the sword out of his hand. Will gave a start of surprise and turned over to face Daniel. His face paled slightly and stuttered: "W-what are you doing here?". "It seems you are picking on my friend over here" Daniel said coldly. Will, regaining his confidence after recovering from his initial shock, retorted "Why does it concern you, peasant? Maybe you should have a talk with my friends, Anthony and Sl-", his sentence unfinished as Daniel slammed his fast into Anthony's gut, the air leaving his lungs in a woosh, he then pivoted on his heel and jabbed his elbow backward, catching Sloan in a rib. Sloan promptly collapsed in a heap, leaving Michael with a look of wonder on his face and Will confused, but with a look of fury slowly coming onto his face. With a yell, he tackled Daniel with the strength of the desperate, carrying them both back, back back...straight off the edge of the island. After a minute, they both appeared back onto the island, Daniel with all of his equipment, his Essence gathered from years of hard work saving his items, while Will sat on the ground with a look of shock on his face, his richly adorned jacket and coin bag gone, due to the fat that he hadn't participated in any chores sine he was born, having servants do all the work for him. After that day, Daniel's renown grew even more, but his close friends could detect a slight change in his actions, now, he carried his bow, quiver, and short sword with him whenever he went, and he was a bit more wary and less open. After the incident, none of the kids saw Will again, and they certainly didn't want to see him again. What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To train and become one of the best Rangers, and to eventually settle down to live a peaceful life.
Strengths (Both physical and personality: Has an open, caring personality to a majority of the people. He is slow to anger, but when he is angry, he is an opponent to be reckoned with. He is extremely athletic, agile, swift, and is quite muscular.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman):Often has a hard time forgiving those that he has lost trust in, is extremely cranky when not having a proper amount of sleep, and is prone to sickness. Another thing that he doesn't like to mention is a long scar that runs down his right shoulder, a result of an accident when he fell down a tree when he was about 15. Although not life threatening, Daniel could never find himself to be able to swing a sword with the agility he used to be able to, nor shoot his bow with his previous accuracy. Furthermore, after his fight with Will, Daniel found himself with an innate fear of heights, the reason he fell off the tree was a sudden flashback of the sensation of free-falling off of the edge of the Islands with no idea if he would live or die.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): Nop
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Daniel felt a boiling rage in himself, and he quickly scanned the area, running into a nearby alley. Within a few moments, both men cried out, the smaller one yelping out in pain while the older one let out a string of curses, both clutching their heels where an arrow protruded. Without wasting a moment, Daniel slung his bow back on his back and sprinted forward, grabbing the young girl and bringing her to the guards, who thanked him and immediately began searching for the girl's parents.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Daniel considers the offer for a few seconds and accepts the offer, asking what he is to retrieve and where it is, along with the reward he would receive.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Daniel passes by the emaciated man, who sat in a street corner holding a worn, wooden bowl and begging for food or money. Without a second glance, Daniel sweeps by, leaving the the old man to exclaim in surprise at the 10 copper coins that suddenly appeared in his empty bowl.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Daniel walks over to the intoxicated fellow and slams his palm into his face, leaving a nasty bruise on his nose. Returning to his table, where his dinner lay, he called over his shoulder saying in a calm voice, "Go home, you're drunk."
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Daniel quickly stops the women and asks her as to where the woman got her necklace, it would make a great present for his mom.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Nope
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
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Member Details
Deferred:
dominatorguy99 - Quite good for a first-timer, and a young one at that, but I'm afraid your character is pretty darned OP and rather bland. Other than being in great physical shape and an amazing marksman, he appears to have no defining personality traits. The weaknesses you state are more just natural human behaviors rather than things that balance out your character. Maybe flesh your character out more and add a few weaknesses, and you'll be golden.
IGN: Orionisy
Real-Life Age: 15
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): fade.zigglehorn33 (i would like to be told gin if added)
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: forcing an rp into someone else without giving them a chance to do anything
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: using out of character knowledge to aid you in RP
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: when i can be a character that i can be, and explore different life choices
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: NO ONE
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: if it your character has reason in rp to
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: when talking about an issue in an rp
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: mage
Who are the Fallen?: an isolated nomadic race
When and how did our current government come to be?: in 169 a.r the chancellory rose to power because the linyera monarchy was defeated in 167 a.r
Who are the Order of Aradin?: brought to creation around 170 A.R to protect the chancellery from any type of attack
What are the Net and Essence? Net=a type of barrier that has been there since the raising, that catches someone who may fall from an island and transports them back to the nearest island…….Essence= an energy you can obtain by overcoming basic things like…defeating monsters, mining ores, cooking foods…(prevents losing items from net
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: the land of yalin…rise of the elders…. akavir
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: the land of yalin=owner left…Rise of the elders=redoing lore and map…akavir= i want to find a different experience of role-play because all are the same, and this one has many features that intrigue me
Character Information
Name: Arianna "Ari" Fletcher
Age:20
Class: ranger
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: citizen of the chancellory
Physical description: 5'6, 115 lb, thin body ((not super thin, like kind of)) green eyes, with dark red hair
Screen capture of your skin: my skin is still being made, i will update the post with the screen shot when i make it.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Arianna Fletcher was born into a richer upscale family, who did not appreciate her birth because they wanted a boy to live up the families legacy. they didn't appreciate her so much that, she didn't even have a name. her parent raised her till she was about 5 calling her child and then left her on the street. as an infant with no idea why her parents left her, she wandered through the streets looking for her next meal.
for about 2 years, every day would be the same, she would do anything she could for money, then spend it for food and in some rare occasions, a room in an inn. on one odd night a group of men approached her from behind and hit her in the back of the head which knocked her out. she woke up a few hours later in a dark room where a man stood at the door with a hood covering his eyes, and a sword in his hands.
the man told her that she belonged to their group as a work slave and gave her the name arianna. at first, the Bandits made her do chores in their facility such as clean their weapons and tend to their every needs and as the stubborn young girl she was, She hated every bit of it trying several times to escape. every time she tried, she failed and was whipped and beaten severely.
As she got older and older, the chores she did got more difficult, and she was still always trying to find a way out, and her punishments got worse. as a result of all the whippings, she has many scars and bruises from lashings and being beat.
Arianna as well as all of the other slaves, were under fed and dieting of starvation and sickness from the bad quality of the little food they had. Arianna was done with the treatment, she wanted out as soon as possible. when she was 18 she heard that some that a young slave girl named Kayla was grouping together a rebellion against the bandits, and she gladly joined. She began to construct a small dagger with some broken chains which were used to hold her still when she was whipped. after a year of preparing for the rebellion she was told one day in advanced that the next day, they would free themselves form their bondage. the next day, they split into small groups of 3 to 4 and began to move out.
all of the children began to move a the same time through the forest in silence. not after long scream to the sides of Arianna were heard and she turned to see her whole group had been captured, she was grabbed in the hand. Arianna turned to the man grabbing her arm, and stabbed him in the neck, grabbing the aviation goggles on his head as a token. she then sprinted as fast as her legs could take her and after a while of running, was free.
She was finally free, she was tired and thirsty, but happy it was all over. she then though of all the children who may have died, she was a lucky one and she was grateful (to be continued)
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): to become a respected person in her community
Strengths (Both physical and personality): she is very confident in herself, and is very fit
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): she is to clingy
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):yes, kayla (tiffosaur) she introduced me to this server
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Arianna noticed a group of armored men harassing a young girl and she approaches them with caution "excuse me, what are you doing to her?!?"
one of the men turns to arianna "this girl stole from a vendor"
Arianna takes out a rather large amount of money and throws it at the men, then goes over to the girl and takes her hand "Are you okay?"
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Arianna: I'm sorry sir, I'm not sure i want to risk my life for a reward, and if you are asking me, i think you could do it yourself
the man continues to look for some one to do the deed for him
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
arianna looks over to the man begging, then takes out some money and runs to the nearest market and buys some food. she returns to the man and kneels next to him and reaches out her hand with the food. "sir, i hope this helps you"
the man smiles at arianna with an immense joy as he takes the food "thank you miss"
arianna continues with her day
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
arianna looks over to the man as he says the joke and smiles at the man "sir, i think you have had 1 to many drinks, its time for you to get yourself home" she goes back to her drink ignoring the mans comments
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Arianna walks through a local market looking for food to buy for her next meal, as she notices a young woman wearing a very expensive looking necklace, and accidentally bumps into her. "oh I'm so sorry miss"
woman: no need to apologize i wasn't paying attention
Arianna focuses back on her necklace "miss that is a very nice necklace, may i ask where you purchased it"
the woman points down the street "i bought at a rare jewel salesmen over that way"
Arianna "thank you" walks down the street towards the shop
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?no
Hello, here is my application, I hope you will see me as a decent roleplayer!
Out of Character Information
IGN: lionlord123 (Don't make fun of me )
Real-Life Age: 17
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): Sorry, I do not own a Skype account.
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: An action that a character does which by no means the character can actually accomplish. Power-gaming also can mean that the character uses an action which another character can not respond to. For example, *James stabs his sword into Fredericks chest, killing him instantly*
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using knowledge you know to change the actions of your character. Saying or thinking something that you know about, but your character shouldn't know about (If that makes any sense). For example, you are looking for someone, and you see their nameplate. You would find them due to their nameplate.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Playing the role of another character and another life. Kind of like LARPing but I find it more fun online.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one is allowed to use the mods/hacks that have been listed.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When you are CvC'ing and the character that you are fighting, allows the death of his/her character. Otherwise, you may injure the opponent.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: In local chat, you may speak OOC but you must put brackets around the sentence you have just spoke. For example, (One second, brb). There is also a global OOC channel that you are allowed to speak in.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: Any member of the academy who is permitted to use magic, or has his/her second degree.
Who are the Fallen?: The Medori (Fallen) are people who have lived peacefully on another island and prefer to be isolated. They do not like violence and have their own dates of celebration. Recently, they have realised that their island is on a collision course with the Chancellory island.
When and how did our current government come to be?: The Chancellory started at 167 A.R after the other monarchy had been destroyed. They used to own many large islands but after the war and famine, the only popularized city is the capitol. The Chancellor is the one in charge and he has 3 masters who are in charge of 3 different professions.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: They are an old order who used to protect the land, but recently they have broken apart and they are nothing but an old shadow of their former self, just a story left to be read out.
What are the Net and Essence?:The "Essence" is a power that is in everybody but there is no current use for the power except saving your items when you fall off the island in the large "Net". Three levels of Essence is used to make sure your items do not fall through the net. Essence has the ability to be stored in emeralds.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: I have played on many role play servers and not just Minecraft. I have been role-playing for around 4 years and have thoroughly enjoyed it much. Recently, the role-play server I used to play on got shut down so I am going to try and find another one that I can stay on for a long time!
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: I have played on an RP server called "Midlands" and also some lesser known role-playing servers because I rather enjoyed it with a small community. I have never left a server before purposefully, the servers I had played on shut down. This time I wanted to try out one of the larger types of role-playing servers and I believe that this might just be one after checking the forums.
Character Information
Name: Alan Bleak
Age: 32
Class: Bladesman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Chacellory
Physical description: Dark brown hair with a thick beard. His eyes are a rather dark shade of green. He wears a brown coat over a white shirt and uses a small belt to keep up his grey pants and black shoes. Alan is rather strong and has quite a bit of muscle from training with a sword for a long time, he usually keeps his hint of kindness under his stern face. His hair is usually combed to the side, but sometimes it depends on the situation. Blind in the left eye, and left arm is very damaged.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Hmm, let's see, where shall we start on the story of Alan Bleak? He was born in 254 AR as a healthy baby. His days as a kid might be more interesting as you would have thought, and his days as a kid changed his path in life. As a child, his favourite thing was reading, writing and learning, and would have thought it was the most important goal in life. But his father thought otherwise. At the age of 11, Alan's dad, as a member of the guard, started teaching young Alan all about swordsmanship and training him in the art. Although Alan disliked violence, he did what his father said and became rather decent with the blade. He still read quite a bit of books in his spare time, and his mother liked that. But his father was rather against it, he would say that it would "Blind him from what was important". Alan's favourite stories were about "The Order of Aradin" and the knightly deeds that they committed. Most say that they are no more, but oh, stubborn ole' Alan, just wouldn't believe it.
When he had reached 20, Alan's father commanded him to join the guard, but Alan had to think of it quite a bit, since recently he had an accident. He got into a fight with a dangerous assassin, who had a strange choice of weapon. Very skilled with the mace. The man had splashed powder into Alan's eyes and his left one was blinded. He had struck Alan's left arm with so much might, that it was left very damaged and weak. Although he got the assassin a few times, the killer had slipped away.
He still studied at night, and trained by day. He went to the tavern often, not to drink, but to tell and listen to stories. Often Alan would search around and look for certain traces or clues related to the "Order of Aradin", as you can clearly see, he still has passion for "The Order". You may think that Alan might be interested in magic? Although he studies often, has no interest in magic or anything of the sort and doesn't care of it. At 23, Alan was interested in the new invention that The Inventor claims to have made. "Airships" The Inventor called them, Alan wondered if they were made to hurt or help people.
Alan was quite interested in researching about the airships quite a bit and thought of a few strange ideas. Alan would like to join an airship crew soon, but he also wanted to stay with his family on the island, and find out about the "Order of Aradin". After a hard decision, Alan decided to stay on the island. And that's where he was for the last 10 years. But Alan knew that he will go on the airships some day, he had to.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): Learn about the Order of Aradin, find older members (If alive). Join an airship crew. Search for peace.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Good with the blade, reflexes are rather quick, intelligent, kind, violence as the second last resort.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): It is too hard for him to decide on something. Cares for his friends too much. Trusts people easily. Blind in the left eye, left arm is damaged.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
*walks down the road in a beautiful afternoon, was interuppted by some screaming and slapping* *Walks around the corner and sees two large men harrassing a young girl, approaches the men harrassing the girl, and attempt to make a small diversion for a chance for the girl to escape* "Hey troll wives, I've got a ton of money in my pocket, if you really want it, then get it!" * the girl escaped but I had to find a way to get out of the situation, I wouldn't attack the men. Not now. I ran across alleyways and streets and used the landscape to my advantage, spilling over junk and throwing down slippery objects. I finally got out of the alleyways and escaped from the men*. "Phew, that was a close one".
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
*walks down the road in a beautiful morning, interuppted by a man who approached me with a strange request*.
"Can you go to Bloodstone for me please? I need you to get me something from there, I will reward you well!".
*stares at him, Bloodstone was a dangerous place, and wasn't sure if I was ready to go there just yet*.
"Sorry, but I am rather busy today, please, be on your way".
*Walks away from the strange man*
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
*Walks down the road in a beautiful evening interuppted by an old feeble man, begging for some food*
"I feel lots of pity for those who have little, and more who have none"
*gives him some bread that I had not finished at the Tavern, and also passed down to him, a few coins*
"Do not spend it too fast, use it to slowly get back to your feet".
*The old man thanks me and I went on my way*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
*It was a beautiful night in the Tavern when suddenly, a man who had just won a drinking contest, insulted my mother*.
"I best be going now, and you should aswell. Also, my mother is an amazing woman".
*leaves the Tavern*
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
*I was walking down the road in a beautiful sunset when I was interuppted by the sight of a beautiful necklace *
"That is quite a beauty you've got around your neck" I said to the woman who looked at me
"Oh, why thank you!" *The woman blushes*
"I must be going, I will be sure to get one of those necklaces for mother later!"
*The woman looks angry and walks away*
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? I was wondering if it was possible for The Order of Aradin to rise up again, or will it stay the way it is?
Other notes: The ICR's aren't in the best quality, but I promise that I can do better! I hope you consider accepting me.
I was wondering if it was possible for The Order of Aradin to rise up again, or will it stay the way it is?
Of course it is possible! We here at Silver Gaming strive to provide players with the initial world and politics, complete with deep and complex lore. However, we always go for player driven plot, so where the server goes next is largely dependent on where the players take the story! It keeps it fun and fresh for everyone, and makes the overall plot of the server not feel so forced. Of course, we have a "main plot" of sorts, but we promise it is not like your typically cookIe-cutter RP server!
Of course it is possible! We here at Silver Gaming strive to provide players with the initial world and politics, complete with deep and complex lore. However, we always go for player driven plot, so where the server goes next is largely dependent on where the players take the story! It keeps it fun and fresh for everyone, and makes the overall plot of the server not feel so forced. Of course, we have a "main plot" of sorts, but we promise it is not like your typically cookIe-cutter RP server!
Thank you for answering my questions, I know that this will be an amazing server.
Some incredibly interesting RP just went down in our Academy Reopening IC thread, If you haven't already come by our forums and check out the thread and get to know the community at http://aneria.enjin.com/ !
Biggy33/Orionisy- There were a few things wrong with your app. First off, she has no real weaknesses. Make it so she isn't strong/but is fast, or visce versa. Cripple a body part. Etc. Your bio and ICRs were also poorly written and your grammar/spelling is a bit untidy. Please fix this up and repost your app.
lionlord123- Your application was very well written, but there were a few problems. Your character doesn't seem to have any real weaknesses either. Make him strong but decrease his stamina - He cannot be both. Maybe cripple a body part. I'm sure you'll think of something. There was also a problem in your character's bio. The people of the chancellory do not know about the Medori/Fallen. Please remove this from your app, and you ought to be fine. Anyway, fix up those two small problems and you'll be accepted straight away.
Again, sorry it took us so long to get these reviewed, guys. *sigh* The other staff kidnapped me and wouldn't allow me to look at your apps until now.
lionlord123- Your application was very well written, but there were a few problems. Your character doesn't seem to have any real weaknesses either. Make him strong but decrease his stamina - He cannot be both. Maybe cripple a body part. I'm sure you'll think of something. There was also a problem in your character's bio. The people of the chancellory do not know about the Medori/Fallen. Please remove this from your app, and you ought to be fine. Anyway, fix up those two small problems and you'll be accepted straight away.
I hope I've fixed my application in a proper manner and, thanks for your time!
Physical description: Dark brown hair with a thick beard. His eyes are a rather dark shade of green. He wears a brown coat over a white shirt and uses a small belt to keep up his grey pants and black shoes. Alan is rather strong and has quite a bit of muscle from training with a sword for a long time, he usually keeps his hint of kindness under his stern face. His hair is usually combed to the side, but sometimes it depends on the situation. Blind in the left eye, and left arm is very damaged.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Hmm, let's see, where shall we start on the story of Alan Bleak? He was born in 254 AR as a healthy baby. His days as a kid might be more interesting as you would have thought, and his days as a kid changed his path in life. As a child, his favourite thing was reading, writing and learning, and would have thought it was the most important goal in life. But his father thought otherwise. At the age of 11, Alan's dad, as a member of the guard, started teaching young Alan all about swordsmanship and training him in the art. Although Alan disliked violence, he did what his father said and became rather decent with the blade. He still read quite a bit of books in his spare time, and his mother liked that. But his father was rather against it, he would say that it would "Blind him from what was important". Alan's favourite stories were about "The Order of Aradin" and the knightly deeds that they committed. Most say that they are no more, but oh, stubborn ole' Alan, just wouldn't believe it.
When he had reached 20, Alan's father commanded him to join the guard, but Alan had to think of it quite a bit, since recently he had an accident. He got into a fight with a dangerous assassin, who had a strange choice of weapon. Very skilled with the mace. The man had splashed powder into Alan's eyes and his left one was blinded. He had struck Alan's left arm with so much might, that it was left very damaged and weak. Although he got the assassin a few times, the killer had slipped away.
He still studied at night, and trained by day. He went to the tavern often, not to drink, but to tell and listen to stories. Often Alan would search around and look for certain traces or clues related to the "Order of Aradin", as you can clearly see, he still has passion for "The Order". You may think that Alan might be interested in magic? Although he studies often, has no interest in magic or anything of the sort and doesn't care of it. At 23, Alan was interested in the new invention that The Inventor claims to have made. "Airships" The Inventor called them, Alan wondered if they were made to hurt or help people.
Alan was quite interested in researching about the airships quite a bit and thought of a few strange ideas. Alan would like to join an airship crew soon, but he also wanted to stay with his family on the island, and find out about the "Order of Aradin". After a hard decision, Alan decided to stay on the island. And that's where he was for the last 10 years. But Alan knew that he will go on the airships some day, he had to.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): It is too hard for him to decide on something. Cares for his friends too much. Trusts people easily. Blind in the left eye, left arm is damaged.
Diamond_Daisy-
Glad to see a few more Medori! While I would've like the ICRs to be a bit beefier, they were fine as is. Welcome to TAC and the Silver Gaming Community! Here's the link to the forums, come hang out, chat, and stay updated about news concerning the server. http://aneria.enjin.com/
Out of Character Information
IGN: dominatorguy99
Real-Life Age: 12
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): dominatorguy123
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Aye
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Committing an action on another player that doesn't give them a chance to respond i.e.: *Grabs his sword and runs away*.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using OOC information while playing as your character, such discussing what is the best Minecraft mod.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplaying is when you create a fictional character and live out a fantasy as said character.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: Nobody.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When said character is willing to die.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When speaking in parentheses (), talking in private chat, or when talking in an OOC channel.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yep
Who is allowed to use magic?: Character who have learned it in the Academy or have special permissions.
Who are the Fallen?: The Fallen are a group of people who were isolated from the others when the islands were lifted into the sky by Aneria.
When and how did our current government come to be?: In 169 A.R., when the Linyera Monarchy was overthrown by revolts.
Who are the Order of Aradian?: They are a group of knights that were created to protect the Chancellory, although they now are mere icons.
What are the Net and Essence?: The Net is an unknown source that transports those that fall off the islands safely back, although a certain amount of essence is required for the items of said person to stay with them. Essence is a strange energy that people accumulate while doing mundane tasks, such as mining and cooking, it can also be stored in Emeralds to be traded or for personal use.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: None.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Character Information
Name: Daniel
Age: 18
Class: Ranger
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellory
Physical description: A tall, lanky youth (6'0) with a mess of unkempt black hair. Prefers to wear a green T-shirt underneath his usual light leather armour. Carries a bow and a quiver full of arrows, along with a concealed dagger with him at all times unless the situation demands that he doesn't.
Screen capture of your skin: http://www.minecraft...1303507/ranger/
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner: Daniel was raised in the capitol city with a hardworking father and a loving mother. Both parents showered Daniel with love, and he too. His father worked as a craftsmen and secretly hoped that Daniel would follow in his footsteps, but he knew if his son were to take another path, he would approve (as long as it was ethical). Daniel grew up to be a bright boy, and his teachers never had enough compliments for him. In his spare time, he often played with his friends and whenever he could, practiced with a short sword his father crafted for him, as long as a bow that his uncle, a Ranger, had given him for his 7th birthday. By the age of 10, he proved himself competent in swordsmanship, and to a greater extent, archery. All of his friends were often amazed at his lightning-fast reflexes and his uncanny accuracy, but Daniel never let all the praise get to his head, and always practiced when he could. Kids were attracted to his cheerful and kind attitude, and he made sure that no kids were left out of an activity. Then, one day, that all changed. Daniel, at the age of 12, was taking a stroll around the edge of the island, when he noticed a young kid, Michael, surrounded by Will and his two friends, Anthony and Sloan, two thick-headed brutes. Will was born into nobility, and the years spent ordering servants around had made him snooty and unbearable. Michael seemed to be on the verge of tears, while Will was laughing, obviously making fun of Michael's plain and unadorned blade while he held it in his hand ( Michael wished to become a Bladesman when he grew up). Daniel felt rage boil up in him and he stiffly stalked over to Will, where he promptly plucked the sword out of his hand. Will gave a start of surprise and turned over to face Daniel. His face paled slightly and stuttered: "W-what are you doing here?". "It seems you are picking on my friend over here" Daniel said coldly. Will, regaining his confidence after recovering from his initial shock, retorted "Why does it concern you, peasant? Maybe you should have a talk with my friends, Anthony and Sl-", his sentence unfinished as Daniel slammed his fast into Anthony's gut, the air leaving his lungs in a woosh, he then pivoted on his heel and jabbed his elbow backward, catching Sloan in a rib. Sloan promptly collapsed in a heap, leaving Michael with a look of wonder on his face and Will confused, but with a look of fury slowly coming onto his face. With a yell, he tackled Daniel with the strength of the desperate, carrying them both back, back back...straight off the edge of the island. After a minute, they both appeared back onto the island, Daniel with all of his equipment, his Essence gathered from years of hard work saving his items, while Will sat on the ground with a look of shock on his face, his richly adorned jacket and coin bag gone, due to the fat that he hadn't participated in any chores sine he was born, having servants do all the work for him. After that day, Daniel's renown grew even more, but his close friends could detect a slight change in his actions, now, he carried his bow, quiver, and short sword with him whenever he went, and he was a bit more wary and less open. After the incident, none of the kids saw Will again, and they certainly didn't want to see him again.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To train and become one of the best Rangers, and to eventually settle down to live a peaceful life.
Strengths (Both physical and personality: Has an open, caring personality to a majority of the people. He is slow to anger, but when he is angry, he is an opponent to be reckoned with. He is extremely athletic, agile, swift, and is quite muscular.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman):Often has a hard time forgiving those that he has lost trust in, is extremely cranky when not having a proper amount of sleep, and is prone to sickness. Another thing that he doesn't like to mention is a long scar that runs down his right shoulder, a result of an accident when he fell down a tree when he was about 15. Although not life threatening, Daniel could never find himself to be able to swing a sword with the agility he used to be able to, nor shoot his bow with his previous accuracy. Furthermore, after his fight with Will, Daniel found himself with an innate fear of heights, the reason he fell off the tree was a sudden flashback of the sensation of free-falling off of the edge of the Islands with no idea if he would live or die.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): Nop
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Daniel felt a boiling rage in himself, and he quickly scanned the area, running into a nearby alley. Within a few moments, both men cried out, the smaller one yelping out in pain while the older one let out a string of curses, both clutching their heels where an arrow protruded. Without wasting a moment, Daniel slung his bow back on his back and sprinted forward, grabbing the young girl and bringing her to the guards, who thanked him and immediately began searching for the girl's parents.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Daniel considers the offer for a few seconds and accepts the offer, asking what he is to retrieve and where it is, along with the reward he would receive.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Daniel passes by the emaciated man, who sat in a street corner holding a worn, wooden bowl and begging for food or money. Without a second glance, Daniel sweeps by, leaving the the old man to exclaim in surprise at the 10 copper coins that suddenly appeared in his empty bowl.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Daniel walks over to the intoxicated fellow and slams his palm into his face, leaving a nasty bruise on his nose. Returning to his table, where his dinner lay, he called over his shoulder saying in a calm voice, "Go home, you're drunk."
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Daniel quickly stops the women and asks her as to where the woman got her necklace, it would make a great present for his mom.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Nope
Other notes: Do re mi fa so la ti?
dominatorguy99 - Quite good for a first-timer, and a young one at that, but I'm afraid your character is pretty darned OP and rather bland. Other than being in great physical shape and an amazing marksman, he appears to have no defining personality traits. The weaknesses you state are more just natural human behaviors rather than things that balance out your character. Maybe flesh your character out more and add a few weaknesses, and you'll be golden.
I'm a man of few words and many voices.
IGN: Orionisy
Real-Life Age: 15
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): fade.zigglehorn33 (i would like to be told gin if added)
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: forcing an rp into someone else without giving them a chance to do anything
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: using out of character knowledge to aid you in RP
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: when i can be a character that i can be, and explore different life choices
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: NO ONE
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: if it your character has reason in rp to
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: when talking about an issue in an rp
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: mage
Who are the Fallen?: an isolated nomadic race
When and how did our current government come to be?: in 169 a.r the chancellory rose to power because the linyera monarchy was defeated in 167 a.r
Who are the Order of Aradin?: brought to creation around 170 A.R to protect the chancellery from any type of attack
What are the Net and Essence? Net=a type of barrier that has been there since the raising, that catches someone who may fall from an island and transports them back to the nearest island…….Essence= an energy you can obtain by overcoming basic things like…defeating monsters, mining ores, cooking foods…(prevents losing items from net
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: the land of yalin…rise of the elders…. akavir
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: the land of yalin=owner left…Rise of the elders=redoing lore and map…akavir= i want to find a different experience of role-play because all are the same, and this one has many features that intrigue me
Character Information
Name: Arianna "Ari" Fletcher
Age:20
Class: ranger
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: citizen of the chancellory
Physical description: 5'6, 115 lb, thin body ((not super thin, like kind of)) green eyes, with dark red hair
Screen capture of your skin: my skin is still being made, i will update the post with the screen shot when i make it.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Arianna Fletcher was born into a richer upscale family, who did not appreciate her birth because they wanted a boy to live up the families legacy. they didn't appreciate her so much that, she didn't even have a name. her parent raised her till she was about 5 calling her child and then left her on the street. as an infant with no idea why her parents left her, she wandered through the streets looking for her next meal.
for about 2 years, every day would be the same, she would do anything she could for money, then spend it for food and in some rare occasions, a room in an inn. on one odd night a group of men approached her from behind and hit her in the back of the head which knocked her out. she woke up a few hours later in a dark room where a man stood at the door with a hood covering his eyes, and a sword in his hands.
the man told her that she belonged to their group as a work slave and gave her the name arianna. at first, the Bandits made her do chores in their facility such as clean their weapons and tend to their every needs and as the stubborn young girl she was, She hated every bit of it trying several times to escape. every time she tried, she failed and was whipped and beaten severely.
As she got older and older, the chores she did got more difficult, and she was still always trying to find a way out, and her punishments got worse. as a result of all the whippings, she has many scars and bruises from lashings and being beat.
Arianna as well as all of the other slaves, were under fed and dieting of starvation and sickness from the bad quality of the little food they had. Arianna was done with the treatment, she wanted out as soon as possible. when she was 18 she heard that some that a young slave girl named Kayla was grouping together a rebellion against the bandits, and she gladly joined. She began to construct a small dagger with some broken chains which were used to hold her still when she was whipped. after a year of preparing for the rebellion she was told one day in advanced that the next day, they would free themselves form their bondage. the next day, they split into small groups of 3 to 4 and began to move out.
all of the children began to move a the same time through the forest in silence. not after long scream to the sides of Arianna were heard and she turned to see her whole group had been captured, she was grabbed in the hand. Arianna turned to the man grabbing her arm, and stabbed him in the neck, grabbing the aviation goggles on his head as a token. she then sprinted as fast as her legs could take her and after a while of running, was free.
She was finally free, she was tired and thirsty, but happy it was all over. she then though of all the children who may have died, she was a lucky one and she was grateful (to be continued)
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): to become a respected person in her community
Strengths (Both physical and personality): she is very confident in herself, and is very fit
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): she is to clingy
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):yes, kayla (tiffosaur) she introduced me to this server
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Arianna noticed a group of armored men harassing a young girl and she approaches them with caution "excuse me, what are you doing to her?!?"
one of the men turns to arianna "this girl stole from a vendor"
Arianna takes out a rather large amount of money and throws it at the men, then goes over to the girl and takes her hand "Are you okay?"
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Arianna: I'm sorry sir, I'm not sure i want to risk my life for a reward, and if you are asking me, i think you could do it yourself
the man continues to look for some one to do the deed for him
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
arianna looks over to the man begging, then takes out some money and runs to the nearest market and buys some food. she returns to the man and kneels next to him and reaches out her hand with the food. "sir, i hope this helps you"
the man smiles at arianna with an immense joy as he takes the food "thank you miss"
arianna continues with her day
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
arianna looks over to the man as he says the joke and smiles at the man "sir, i think you have had 1 to many drinks, its time for you to get yourself home" she goes back to her drink ignoring the mans comments
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Arianna walks through a local market looking for food to buy for her next meal, as she notices a young woman wearing a very expensive looking necklace, and accidentally bumps into her. "oh I'm so sorry miss"
woman: no need to apologize i wasn't paying attention
Arianna focuses back on her necklace "miss that is a very nice necklace, may i ask where you purchased it"
the woman points down the street "i bought at a rare jewel salesmen over that way"
Arianna "thank you" walks down the street towards the shop
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?no
What is the current year in the story?
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IGN: lionlord123 (Don't make fun of me )
Real-Life Age: 17
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): Sorry, I do not own a Skype account.
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: An action that a character does which by no means the character can actually accomplish. Power-gaming also can mean that the character uses an action which another character can not respond to. For example, *James stabs his sword into Fredericks chest, killing him instantly*
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using knowledge you know to change the actions of your character. Saying or thinking something that you know about, but your character shouldn't know about (If that makes any sense). For example, you are looking for someone, and you see their nameplate. You would find them due to their nameplate.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Playing the role of another character and another life. Kind of like LARPing but I find it more fun online.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one is allowed to use the mods/hacks that have been listed.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When you are CvC'ing and the character that you are fighting, allows the death of his/her character. Otherwise, you may injure the opponent.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: In local chat, you may speak OOC but you must put brackets around the sentence you have just spoke. For example, (One second, brb). There is also a global OOC channel that you are allowed to speak in.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: Any member of the academy who is permitted to use magic, or has his/her second degree.
Who are the Fallen?: The Medori (Fallen) are people who have lived peacefully on another island and prefer to be isolated. They do not like violence and have their own dates of celebration. Recently, they have realised that their island is on a collision course with the Chancellory island.
When and how did our current government come to be?: The Chancellory started at 167 A.R after the other monarchy had been destroyed. They used to own many large islands but after the war and famine, the only popularized city is the capitol. The Chancellor is the one in charge and he has 3 masters who are in charge of 3 different professions.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: They are an old order who used to protect the land, but recently they have broken apart and they are nothing but an old shadow of their former self, just a story left to be read out.
What are the Net and Essence?:The "Essence" is a power that is in everybody but there is no current use for the power except saving your items when you fall off the island in the large "Net". Three levels of Essence is used to make sure your items do not fall through the net. Essence has the ability to be stored in emeralds.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: I have played on many role play servers and not just Minecraft. I have been role-playing for around 4 years and have thoroughly enjoyed it much. Recently, the role-play server I used to play on got shut down so I am going to try and find another one that I can stay on for a long time!
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: I have played on an RP server called "Midlands" and also some lesser known role-playing servers because I rather enjoyed it with a small community. I have never left a server before purposefully, the servers I had played on shut down. This time I wanted to try out one of the larger types of role-playing servers and I believe that this might just be one after checking the forums.
Character Information
Name: Alan Bleak
Age: 32
Class: Bladesman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Chacellory
Physical description: Dark brown hair with a thick beard. His eyes are a rather dark shade of green. He wears a brown coat over a white shirt and uses a small belt to keep up his grey pants and black shoes. Alan is rather strong and has quite a bit of muscle from training with a sword for a long time, he usually keeps his hint of kindness under his stern face. His hair is usually combed to the side, but sometimes it depends on the situation. Blind in the left eye, and left arm is very damaged.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Hmm, let's see, where shall we start on the story of Alan Bleak? He was born in 254 AR as a healthy baby. His days as a kid might be more interesting as you would have thought, and his days as a kid changed his path in life. As a child, his favourite thing was reading, writing and learning, and would have thought it was the most important goal in life. But his father thought otherwise. At the age of 11, Alan's dad, as a member of the guard, started teaching young Alan all about swordsmanship and training him in the art. Although Alan disliked violence, he did what his father said and became rather decent with the blade. He still read quite a bit of books in his spare time, and his mother liked that. But his father was rather against it, he would say that it would "Blind him from what was important". Alan's favourite stories were about "The Order of Aradin" and the knightly deeds that they committed. Most say that they are no more, but oh, stubborn ole' Alan, just wouldn't believe it.
When he had reached 20, Alan's father commanded him to join the guard, but Alan had to think of it quite a bit, since recently he had an accident. He got into a fight with a dangerous assassin, who had a strange choice of weapon. Very skilled with the mace. The man had splashed powder into Alan's eyes and his left one was blinded. He had struck Alan's left arm with so much might, that it was left very damaged and weak. Although he got the assassin a few times, the killer had slipped away.
He still studied at night, and trained by day. He went to the tavern often, not to drink, but to tell and listen to stories. Often Alan would search around and look for certain traces or clues related to the "Order of Aradin", as you can clearly see, he still has passion for "The Order". You may think that Alan might be interested in magic? Although he studies often, has no interest in magic or anything of the sort and doesn't care of it. At 23, Alan was interested in the new invention that The Inventor claims to have made. "Airships" The Inventor called them, Alan wondered if they were made to hurt or help people.
Alan was quite interested in researching about the airships quite a bit and thought of a few strange ideas. Alan would like to join an airship crew soon, but he also wanted to stay with his family on the island, and find out about the "Order of Aradin". After a hard decision, Alan decided to stay on the island. And that's where he was for the last 10 years. But Alan knew that he will go on the airships some day, he had to.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): Learn about the Order of Aradin, find older members (If alive). Join an airship crew. Search for peace.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Good with the blade, reflexes are rather quick, intelligent, kind, violence as the second last resort.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): It is too hard for him to decide on something. Cares for his friends too much. Trusts people easily. Blind in the left eye, left arm is damaged.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
*walks down the road in a beautiful afternoon, was interuppted by some screaming and slapping* *Walks around the corner and sees two large men harrassing a young girl, approaches the men harrassing the girl, and attempt to make a small diversion for a chance for the girl to escape* "Hey troll wives, I've got a ton of money in my pocket, if you really want it, then get it!" * the girl escaped but I had to find a way to get out of the situation, I wouldn't attack the men. Not now. I ran across alleyways and streets and used the landscape to my advantage, spilling over junk and throwing down slippery objects. I finally got out of the alleyways and escaped from the men*. "Phew, that was a close one".
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
*walks down the road in a beautiful morning, interuppted by a man who approached me with a strange request*.
"Can you go to Bloodstone for me please? I need you to get me something from there, I will reward you well!".
*stares at him, Bloodstone was a dangerous place, and wasn't sure if I was ready to go there just yet*.
"Sorry, but I am rather busy today, please, be on your way".
*Walks away from the strange man*
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
*Walks down the road in a beautiful evening interuppted by an old feeble man, begging for some food*
"I feel lots of pity for those who have little, and more who have none"
*gives him some bread that I had not finished at the Tavern, and also passed down to him, a few coins*
"Do not spend it too fast, use it to slowly get back to your feet".
*The old man thanks me and I went on my way*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
*It was a beautiful night in the Tavern when suddenly, a man who had just won a drinking contest, insulted my mother*.
"I best be going now, and you should aswell. Also, my mother is an amazing woman".
*leaves the Tavern*
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
*I was walking down the road in a beautiful sunset when I was interuppted by the sight of a beautiful necklace *
"That is quite a beauty you've got around your neck" I said to the woman who looked at me
"Oh, why thank you!" *The woman blushes*
"I must be going, I will be sure to get one of those necklaces for mother later!"
*The woman looks angry and walks away*
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? I was wondering if it was possible for The Order of Aradin to rise up again, or will it stay the way it is?
Other notes: The ICR's aren't in the best quality, but I promise that I can do better! I hope you consider accepting me.
Thanks!
Please quote me if you mean to reply to me in any thread
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It is the end of 284 A.R
Of course it is possible! We here at Silver Gaming strive to provide players with the initial world and politics, complete with deep and complex lore. However, we always go for player driven plot, so where the server goes next is largely dependent on where the players take the story! It keeps it fun and fresh for everyone, and makes the overall plot of the server not feel so forced. Of course, we have a "main plot" of sorts, but we promise it is not like your typically cookIe-cutter RP server!
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The Whitelisting Team apologizes. Your apps will be reviewed by myself or another staff member sometime tomorrow. Thank you for your patience.
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Biggy33/Orionisy- There were a few things wrong with your app. First off, she has no real weaknesses. Make it so she isn't strong/but is fast, or visce versa. Cripple a body part. Etc. Your bio and ICRs were also poorly written and your grammar/spelling is a bit untidy. Please fix this up and repost your app.
lionlord123- Your application was very well written, but there were a few problems. Your character doesn't seem to have any real weaknesses either. Make him strong but decrease his stamina - He cannot be both. Maybe cripple a body part. I'm sure you'll think of something. There was also a problem in your character's bio. The people of the chancellory do not know about the Medori/Fallen. Please remove this from your app, and you ought to be fine. Anyway, fix up those two small problems and you'll be accepted straight away.
Again, sorry it took us so long to get these reviewed, guys. *sigh* The other staff kidnapped me and wouldn't allow me to look at your apps until now.
I hope I've fixed my application in a proper manner and, thanks for your time!
Physical description: Dark brown hair with a thick beard. His eyes are a rather dark shade of green. He wears a brown coat over a white shirt and uses a small belt to keep up his grey pants and black shoes. Alan is rather strong and has quite a bit of muscle from training with a sword for a long time, he usually keeps his hint of kindness under his stern face. His hair is usually combed to the side, but sometimes it depends on the situation. Blind in the left eye, and left arm is very damaged.
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Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Hmm, let's see, where shall we start on the story of Alan Bleak? He was born in 254 AR as a healthy baby. His days as a kid might be more interesting as you would have thought, and his days as a kid changed his path in life. As a child, his favourite thing was reading, writing and learning, and would have thought it was the most important goal in life. But his father thought otherwise. At the age of 11, Alan's dad, as a member of the guard, started teaching young Alan all about swordsmanship and training him in the art. Although Alan disliked violence, he did what his father said and became rather decent with the blade. He still read quite a bit of books in his spare time, and his mother liked that. But his father was rather against it, he would say that it would "Blind him from what was important". Alan's favourite stories were about "The Order of Aradin" and the knightly deeds that they committed. Most say that they are no more, but oh, stubborn ole' Alan, just wouldn't believe it.
When he had reached 20, Alan's father commanded him to join the guard, but Alan had to think of it quite a bit, since recently he had an accident. He got into a fight with a dangerous assassin, who had a strange choice of weapon. Very skilled with the mace. The man had splashed powder into Alan's eyes and his left one was blinded. He had struck Alan's left arm with so much might, that it was left very damaged and weak. Although he got the assassin a few times, the killer had slipped away.
He still studied at night, and trained by day. He went to the tavern often, not to drink, but to tell and listen to stories. Often Alan would search around and look for certain traces or clues related to the "Order of Aradin", as you can clearly see, he still has passion for "The Order". You may think that Alan might be interested in magic? Although he studies often, has no interest in magic or anything of the sort and doesn't care of it. At 23, Alan was interested in the new invention that The Inventor claims to have made. "Airships" The Inventor called them, Alan wondered if they were made to hurt or help people.
Alan was quite interested in researching about the airships quite a bit and thought of a few strange ideas. Alan would like to join an airship crew soon, but he also wanted to stay with his family on the island, and find out about the "Order of Aradin". After a hard decision, Alan decided to stay on the island. And that's where he was for the last 10 years. But Alan knew that he will go on the airships some day, he had to.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): It is too hard for him to decide on something. Cares for his friends too much. Trusts people easily. Blind in the left eye, left arm is damaged.
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lionlord123- Welcome to TAC! You're already on our forums so.. Come and hang out with us there, stay updated on news about the server, and have fun.