since the forums are not allowing my friend to upload the application on his account (no idea why) im uploading him for me, (note that everything is his so i just used copy and paste)
IGN:
oric8520
Real-Life Age:
15
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot):
I ineed have skype and my skype name is devidini
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:
Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?:
powergamming is a kind of a term that is usually used to describe a situetion where a player get to much out of his charecter abillitys and alike playing. For example infinty health or powers.
Powerming is a way where a player uses items
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?:
Metagaming is a term used to let people know outside charecter knowledge as such as the charecter name, skills, possesion and anything that you dont know in the game itself like the charecter name in minecraft that you can see above the player is a Metagaming if you use it to know the charecter name.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?:
Roleplaying is taking the role of a caracter or a hero and acting accordingly, the roleplay should be realistic an fitting into the character, that means that a simple old man cant have the power of flght or any unhuman physical abillities.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?:
No one in the world
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?:
You are allowed to cause the death of another charecter only in a demending situation while playing in RP. as such you cant go around killing people in towns just like that but you have to be in a situesion that demands the death.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?:
You are allowed to speak out of charecter only whenever you want to add side notes like helpful information, charecter adding, command helping or in a global chat if there is one in the game.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:
Yep
Who is allowed to use magic?:
At the start no one is allowed to use magic. magic is a skill that you can get only in time playing the game.
Who are the Fallen?:
The fallen is an old race of people living in an isolation away from the other human race while they there the live in peace. The fallen have a very ancient cultere that passed to people through father to child. The humans are releated to magic but the fallen are evan closer to it then the human race. The idea of a community takes a big part in the fallen culture as such as storytelling.
When and how did our current government come to be?:
The first form of the goverment had been created in 0 AR in the summer when the Linyera family captured and bought land with their welth forcing people to join their kindom. 4 AR the church started developing and growing that was led by a man named Reginauld that later joined the Linyera famaly ancestors that were controlling their land under total monarchy. The Linyear ancestors declared Reginald as the first waren of the east. after some time the new prophet came up to the church. Kaldun organised an assasination of the monarch and those who were given the church its bad reputation. Bennet Tybalt the warden from the East in that time orginized a rebellion against the linyera family. He won the rebelion and seted up his own goverment with the three Masters of the sword, coin and word in 169 AR
Who are the Order of Aradin?:
The Order of Aradin is a weak group that was created to protect the Chancellor and to adress the threat of the Bloodstone island.
What are the Net and Essence?:
The Net is a magical force that keeps the charecter from falling from the island since the island are in the sky and a way to keep your belonings safe from falling. That allows all the creatures and people on the islands keep theirself safe and preventing them to fall down to the next world.
The Essence is kind of mana that can be used for magic and spells. It can also be used to charge the emeralds to be used as a currency.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:
I have played on your early server book of Halegron by the name Oirc8520 and from then till now i had earned even more roleplaying expirience.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
I have played to many RP server to count. Some were my freinds and my own and the most known server i played is abridell the skyrim server. I quit most of those servers because i just wanted to see more and more servers. The reason i quit the abridell is because it started costing real money in the open beta. i play there as oric8520
Character Information:
David has strong legs and arms so he runs fast he is right handed both legs and hands but when he uses a bow he uses a bow he uses his left hand more. he has brown hair with a bit bangs. David knows how to write and read but he isnt the smartest person there is. David is tall about1.9 meters.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
The story of David begins at his childhood where he always used to follow his father around since he lived at a small village he didnt meet people often and always followed his father around since he thought that he was the smartest person in the world and followed his father in his work as a farmer.
David as in every story aged with time so i am going to tell you about his life when he was 22.
i was just coming from the closest city back home since i needed to get some food home i came across a gang of people beating up few people. I dont know why but i just jumped in there to help those people like i am some kind of a hero. But in the end i got beat up and i was left there bleeding painfully in the street.
I had a nice welcoming at my home my mom panicked and started shouting at me and so did my ex-lovly father, i always was different then my parents, i always looked for an exiting adventure like in the books i read such as dovahkin. I never understood how i used to adore my father when now the only conversation we have is only in shouthing so i bever really got my great adventure and i was tired of this life. I remember my parents talking to me but i wasnt really paying attension and i remember they asked me "got it?" and i said yes to something i didnt listen to. At the end it was my parents asking me to go to the forst and direct my mother's freind into our farm. I walked peacfully down the forest where the trees were so high that you couldnt see even the sun it also was kind of foggy so i made it thougher to me to see. after few hours walk i stamped into something and fell, it was my motherl's freind body i was freaked out i never saw a body before in my life, i started running back nt knowing how it happened or who did it. I ran and ran and ran until i saw my farm. The farm looked really normal and it was like always.I ran into the house and started calling my parents but then i didnt get an answear, they are probably down at the room under the kitchen so i went there, but the floor was on fire and my parents are still inside that underhouse room, i didnt know what to do, i looked for water but the fire was too strong, and then i looked for the source it was the oven.Did my mom forgot to stop the fire after the food i didnt know. The house was starting to go on fire i couldnt do a thing i ran upstairs and took my father's sword and i got out of the burning house. I cried alot my parents were dead but i didnt know who did this was it the person who killed my mom's freind or was it something else. It took me few days when i was only me and my sword on the road that i remembered what my mom asked me to do few days ago. (flashback)"son be sure tommorow to close the oven tommorow since i will be with your father at the room under the house we need to find the gift to my freind. Then i relized it was me who didnt close the oven, it was me who my parents asked, it was me who set the farm on fire.... It was me who burned my parents.
I didnt know what to do i was freaked out and i was lost in the world when suddenly i looked down at my sword and saw a note on it. The note said "Hello brother i know i didnt come to your 20 birthay i know you have this cute son now and i really want to meet my nefew, so take this sword as a gift, from your brother Ellard".
I got still some family left, i never knew abou Ellard. Now i know what i am seeking i am seeking my uncale Ellard and my dream the adventure.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
My charecter main goal is to find his ultimate adventer while looking for his uncale Ellard.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):
David is young so he has pleanty of strenght, he runs alot and he always wants to be the best.
David is carefree and doesnt care what anybody thinks of him while he always trying to be a hero.
He doesnt think alot so he does more that he thinks but he got brains somewhere for sure.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is
David isnt a person to think alot he does stuff without thinking and always gets into trouble because of that,
he never really listen to people so he doesnt pay attetion to people and then he has missing details.
David is afraid of fire not a bit like when it is coming from a torch but when he sees fire he gets scared and weak.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
Yes, the only family he has left is his uncle Ellard he seeks for him while he desnt know where he is.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
David would scream at the people while running toward them telling them "leave the girl alone".
David would start telling them to back off.
If the people wont David will attack them with his fists and punch the people in their stomach,
David will kick their knees to slow them down
David will take the girl and run for it while the guys are recovering.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"sir. tell me where it is, the place sounds like an adventure so sure i will go there for a nice little reward"."where is it?". the man will show me where it is while David is barely listening so David goes to the place and then he took everything with a value with him since he didnt listen to what he was suposed to retrive.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
If David had food on the moment with him he would give a bit to the old man and then go away. While David doesnt have food on him he would just keep going since he doesnt care much for a stranger.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
David will turn his head toword the person who insulted his mother and say "say it one more time and..."
the person insolted David mother again that made David put his beer on the table and jump on the person no matter who he is and punch him in the face making him fall and then David will punch him more till he sees that the man regreats that and only then David will go somewhere else.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
David will stop whatever he was doing and start staring at the necklace and say to the woman "this is one of a hell of a neclace my lady". The lady says "thanks" and i will just ask her where did she got it while trying to pay attension to what she says so he could one day buy to himself something nice.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Not really the server sounds awsome.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
8/18/2011
Posts:
104
Minecraft:
WholeGrainWheat
Member Details
Deferred:
Xtreme_Prodigy - Sorry to defer one of the only people from Europe who's ever applied, but your character is rather bland. I don't get a feel for his traits, I get more of a shell. Also, I don't think being truthful and well-spoken is a weakness. He's just overpowered and dull as a whole. Also, you don't need to capitalize nearly every word, and it'd be rather annoying if you did so in the server, if and when you are accepted. Last thing I'm going to say is that you should really get a skin that isn't Haytham Kenway. We don't really like characters as skins unless they're not immediately recognizable. Feel free to borrow from pre-existing character design, but an original skin is required. Feel free to apply again, and good luck.
Yhittazz/Arrrgasm- Let's go over these again then, shall we?
- Your grammar is going to make it difficult for some people to RP with you on the server if you are accepted. I atleast ask that you use spell check when writing your app to correct things. And, if it's because you type too fast.. Just slow down and chill, bud. The application isn't going anywhere.
- The skin is now fine, so there's a small improvement, good job.
- The ICRs feel a bit unrealistic. They're causing me to question your character and your RPing abilities.
- You can NOT start knowing magic or start out having once used magic. There is also no 'time vortex' in our lore, so this could not have happened to your character.. Not to mention, it's kinda cliche.. This isn't up for discussion. Change it, or find another RP server.
- Your character needs more of a personality. You can still be the 'mysterious old man' if you really want.. But you NEED to show more personality in your application for your character. I'm sorry, but Ellard is boring.
Also, next time you post your app, just make a new post. Do NOT edit your previous one. It isn't spamming, but thank you for being considerate. It makes it easier for me and the other Whitelisters to review your app.
Your character may also write books no matter what class he is (Though it'd make sense for him to do so as a scholar, but you'd need to become one through the academy to get a degree and whatnot - But, a craftsman can certainly write books) so long as he is literate.
You have one more chance to get accepted, this means you can only post your app ONE more time before you are denied.
Please try again, and good luck!
Denied:
Yhitazzz's friend/oric8520- I apologize, but your app was very bland, cliche, and poorly written. Also, you included the Dovahkin in your app..?
Also.. "I have played on your early server book of Halegron by the name Oirc8520 and from then till now i had earned even more roleplaying expirience." You both wrote this in your sections of the app.. You couldn't have both been Oirc8520 (I thought it was oric8520..?) back in BoH.
Do not apply again. Thanks for taking the time to fill out the app though (unless you and Arrrgasm are just the same person. :l ).
Yhittazz/Arrrgasm- Let's go over these again then, shall we?
- Your grammar is going to make it difficult for some people to RP with you on the server if you are accepted. I atleast ask that you use spell check when writing your app to correct things. And, if it's because you type too fast.. Just slow down and chill, bud. The application isn't going anywhere.
- The skin is now fine, so there's a small improvement, good job.
- The ICRs feel a bit unrealistic. They're causing me to question your character and your RPing abilities.
- You can NOT start knowing magic or start out having once used magic. There is also no 'time vortex' in our lore, so this could not have happened to your character.. Not to mention, it's kinda cliche.. This isn't up for discussion. Change it, or find another RP server.
- Your character needs more of a personality. You can still be the 'mysterious old man' if you really want.. But you NEED to show more personality in your application for your character. I'm sorry, but Ellard is boring.
Also, next time you post your app, just make a new post. Do NOT edit your previous one. It isn't spamming, but thank you for being considerate. It makes it easier for me and the other Whitelisters to review your app.
Your character may also write books no matter what class he is (Though it'd make sense for him to do so as a scholar, but you'd need to become one through the academy to get a degree and whatnot - But, a craftsman can certainly write books) so long as he is literate.
You have one more chance to get accepted, this means you can only post your app ONE more time before you are denied.
Please try again, and good luck!
Denied:
Yhitazzz's friend/oric8520- I apologize, but your app was very bland, cliche, and poorly written. Also, you included the Dovahkin in your app..?
Also.. "I have played on your early server book of Halegron by the name Oirc8520 and from then till now i had earned even more roleplaying expirience." You both wrote this in your sections of the app.. You couldn't have both been Oirc8520 (I thought it was oric8520..?) back in BoH.
Do not apply again. Thanks for taking the time to fill out the app though (unless you and Arrrgasm are just the same person. :l ).
Well, that makes me sad, i did my best to make an old man character type but i guess im just not into it, i give up on this character and use my last attempt on another character if possible, i will use all your notes to make my next application as good as possible and it will be written below, i am sorry for wasting your time twice and i hope it wont happen the third time, i really do.
Also, i have to clear that me and oric are not the same person, i have NO idea why he wrote that he played on the server before, but just for you to know, i wont be looking for sneaky ways to come to the server like that, if i dont get accepted guess i deserve it, joining your server last time was easier than now and i tough i could get in as easy as before, that probably made me to relaxed and unfocused on my character writing.
Im making my last attempt, and i hope it works.
Out of Character Information
IGN:
Arrrgasm
Real-Life Age:
15
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot):
I do have skype but i dont usually use it.
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:
Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?:
Powerming is a term that is used to describe a roleplaying situation where a player would roleplay his character without any seen borders, such as having unlimited power and unrealistic abbilities thus not fitting his role into the character he is playing.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?:
Metagaming is a term used to describe a situation when a player uses imformation that he knows in real life to his own benefit in the roleplaying life even if the character in the roleplay does not know any of the info.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?:
Roleplaying is taking the role of a caracter or a hero and acting accordingly, the roleplay should be realistic an fitting into the character, that means that a simple old man cant have the power of flght or any unhuman physical abillities.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?:
No-one
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?:
You are allowed to cause death only when the RP situation is providing the reason to do so, you cant just go on a killing spree an slaughter all the townsfolk, you must use RP and make the townsfolk be co-operative with your roleplay.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?:
Whenever you want to add side notes, describe a person, an action or to ask general questions and give more information of a purpose that is not neceserealy needs to be mentioned in the RP.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:
Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?:
At the beggining of a character roleplay, nobody, troughout the time the character could however learn magic and spells.
Who are the Fallen?:
The Fallen is a peacefull race of old people living in an isolation far away from the human race, the fallen have a deep and ancient culture and most of it is passed orally from parent to child, the fallen are closer to magic the the regular humans.This practice of storytelling is what keeps their community together, and the idea of the community is a very big part of Fallen culture.
When and how did our current government come to be?:
the first form of the goverment was created in 0 A.R Summer when the Linyera family used their wealth to buy and capture land leaving some no choice but to join the small kingdom. at 4 A.R the church started growing, lead by a man named Reginauld which afterwards was joined by the Linyera family ancestors which were controlling the land under total monarchy. Linyera declared Reginald as the first Waren of the East. after long time a new prophet came up to the church - Kaldun who organised an assasination of the monarch and thus giving the church a bad reputation. Tybalt Bennet, the Warden of the East at the time, organized a rebellion against the linyera family, after winning Bennet sets up his own government with the three Masters of Sword, Coin and Word in 169 A.R.
Who are the Order of Aradin?:
A weak group of people formed to protect the Chancellor and address the threat of Bloodstone Island.
What are the Net and Essence?:
The net is a magical force that prevents falling from the island and keeps the belongings of the falling being to the bing itself therefore keeping all the living beings on the islands safe from falling to their doom. Essence is a sort of mana which is used for spells and magic, it can also be stored in emeralds an used as a currency.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:
I have played on your early server book of Halegron by the name Oirc8520 and from then till now i had earned even more roleplaying expirience.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
I have played to many RP server to count. I was moving from server to server to find a decent strict RP server but i didnt manage to stumble across one since all of them were more focused on raids than Roleplaying, untill i remember a server i played long time ago, the book of halegron.
Character Information
Name:
Talon
Age:
21
Class:
Ranger
Race:
Human
Physical description:
A fine, brown-haired looking guy, dark brown eyes, has decent strenght, a very fast and agile guy, his small body frame gives him more sneakyness but also makes him more vulnerable.
Screen capture of your skin:
As i am roleplaying an assassin, i probably should change cloths from time to time, so illbe altering thoese skin (not to much, if i cant do that, tell me which is is more appealing)
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Talon was the only child in his family, he grew up as regular kid, he had friends and buddies and he hanged out with them, he used to stay late on the streets for the good breeze that went trough the city after dawn.
Talon was a thin boy and was not the strongest kid in the neighborhood, his strenght was in his agillity however, Talon started practicing gymnastic at an early age, he racticed everyday, he was one of the fastest runners in town and sometimes one of the sneakiest little brats too.
Unfortunately, Talon's family wasn't the richest family, so it was hard for them to get food and come around living, as a response, Talon used to sneak around the back of the shops an taverns and snatch a couple of loafs and bottles for his family, he wasn't seen at the act of the crime often, but when he was, he managed to escape with his quick feet, Talon got a bad reputation from doing so and so did his family, Talon tought that what he did was for his familys' good but it ended up slaping him in the face.
Talon's family got banned from the community and was constantly teased by kids from the neighborhood, Talon's mother Helda had some anger management issues, Helda lost her last piece of sanity after the ban, she blamed it all on Talon and his little tricks, she screamed at him about how much of a disgrace he is and hos mad she is, Talon, as a young kid, was insulted by what his mother said and ran away from home the same night, he never saw his family afterwards.
As he was not welcome to his city because he had a bad reputation, he had to drift from village to village to survive, the roads were dangerous and soon enough Talonn was forced to learn how to andle a blade, he snatched a steel dagger from a little villages' blacksmith and practiced for whole days and nigts, it was hard for him to get used to the blade as it was pretty heavy for a guy like him and he ended up with a lot of bruises after every training.
Soon enough, Talon started mastering the art of the blade and was finally able to defend himself properly. As he was drifting from town to town he went to bigger towns every time, soon he ended up and huge cities with a lot of population and the most important thing - a lot of guards, Talon found it difficult to stay alive in thoese cities since he could not steal food that easily and was caught a lot of times. Talon knew that he would have to learn to be more sneaky to outsmart the guards. And so he did.
Talon's earliest memories are the darkness of his citys' underground passages and the reassuring steel of a blade. He remembers no family, warmth, or kindness. Instead, the clink of stolen gold and the security of a wall at his back are all the kinship he has ever craved. Kept alive only by his quick wits and deft thievery, Talon scraped out a living in the seedy underbelly of the city. His mastery of the blade quickly marked him as a threat, and city guards were dispatched to hunt him down for good.
The assassination attempts of the guards grew increasingly dangerous until one assailant met Talon blade-for-blade in a match of strength. To his surprise, Talon was disarmed and facing down his executioner's sword. The guard introduced himself as Sergeant Anders and he provided Talon with two options : To die by his sword, or to get away from the city for good. Talon was shocked from being defeated and was barely able to speak, but after a few moments of silence, Talon crawled away from the guy, stood up, and ran as fast and as far away from the city as he could. After hours of running Talon got lost in a thick spruce forest, he set up a little camp in the midle of nowhere from supplies he found in the wild. He will soon dispatch to find another city and to start a new life there, the life of the hired assassin.
And so, the story begins...
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
To survive and to get more expirienced with his skills, his main goal is to get his name as the city's assassin for hire.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):
He has a small body frame which makes him more agile than a regular person.
He is a sneaky little guy who always looks for a smart and comedic way to answer a question, he is able to stay cool even at the most depressing or dangerous situations and doesnt really talk that much. He is confident and knows how to handle with ladies. Altough he killed many people in the past and has no feelings towards his target when he is killing him.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):
He has a small body frame which makes him more vulnerable and will probably get his bones broken if he would fight a big guy in a direct fist fight, altough he is a ladies man he is afraid of a broken heart, so he never gets into serious relationships and usually leaves the girls himself but he still has a hard time getting around in public places with a lot of people from the fear that someone would notice him. Talon has no feelings towards his target when he is killing him.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
I posted a "wanted" topic on the forums, i am looking for a hirer which could give me a steady amount of work flowing.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
*Talon walks in the streets late at night and notices two men torturing a girl, Talon grabs a nearby stone and proceeds to whistle to the direction of the men, the men stop whatever they were doing to the girl and look at the whistle's direction. They notice Talon leaning on the wall throwing the stone in his hand up and down, they see talon as a no threat and keep torturing the girl, another whistle comes from Talon's direction and this time the menleave the girl and stand up giving angry faces to the guy, the men proceed to scream* "Leave now or get your face crushed!" *After a moment of silence the men notice a slight grin on talon's face. Talon stands up an after a second of aiming he throws the stone into one of the guys' head, the man get his head struck by a rock and get furious, he releases a loud, mad scream and begins charging at Talon, as the charging guy is to big and clumsy for Talon's agillity, Talons menages to get out of the way from the men's charging and punch, Talon than proceeds to run away from the men as they chase him making enough distraction for the girl to get out of there. As the men get to tired from chasing Talon, Talon is able to run away from the men. After a short period of panting an breathing Talon procees with his deeds*
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
*As the men approaches Talon who is sitting on a lone bench in the midle of a small street, the man sits nearby Talon and proposes him the proposition* "Hey there mate, aint it a beatiful day?" "-Sure is..." "-You sound like a straight to the point guy, so let me get right into it" *Talon listen to the men's request and than roceeds with a-* "and how much will it cost to you?" *the man shows Talon 3 Emeralds full of essence and than asks* "is that enough for a guy like you?" *Talon stands up looking at the emeralds and says* "Consider it done, meet me at this same place tomorrow evening" *without further redue Talons runs away to the direction of Bloodstone. After a long trip of running Talon reaches Bloodstone, He notices an incredibly large amount of monsters walking around the place, he decides to wait for night so he could use the dark to get around the monsters without being noticed. After night comes and after a lot of sneaking Talon reaches to where the treasure was supposed to be, he find an old used map which has an X on a location which he cant recognize, he puts the map in his belt and carefully goes back to the city. Next day evening Talon and the man meet again at the same spot and the deal commerces, the man gives Talon 3 emeralds while Talons gives the man the ma, the man proceeds to thank Talon, Talon respondes with "My Pleasure" and walk away*
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
*The same evening after making the deal with the man Talon wanders around the streets of the city, he notices an old dying beggar laying on the side of a street, he approaches the man and helps him stand up and than tells him to wait here. Talon runs to a nearby Tavern, at the tavern he notices few guy drinking beer and the shop keeper greeting the customers, Talon approaches the shopkeeper and asks for a beer, the shopkeeper goes to fetch the beer, Talon look's around and when nobody is looking he snatches a few loafs of bread from the counter. The shopkeeper soon arrives with a big cup of beer* "That'll be 2 gold coins mate" *Talons gets an Essence emerald out of his pocket and puts it on the counter, the shopkeeper opens his eyes widely from the surprise* "keep the change, Ill be right back, save the beer for me" *Talon than proceeds to walk back to the old man which was standing there all that time, he gives the man the bread he stole and tells him that it should be enough for a while, the thin old man gives a "thank you" movement with his head while chewing on the bread* "Take care" *said Talon and than proceeded to go back to the tavern*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
*Talon was sitting in the bar slowly drinking his beer when he got interrupte by a drunk guy* "Oi! You there! the guy with the hood!" *Talon turns to the guy as he speaks* "Send this message to your mother!" *The guy proceeds to move his waist and pretends kissing Talon's mom. Altough Talon has no memory of his mom he wont take such an insult, Talon stands up and puches the guy to the face with his right arm, the guy stands back and after a moment charges at Talon, Talon was to close to the guy so he could not avoid the charge and gets pinned down to the floor and so begins a bar fight, Talon gets hit by a few punches from the guy but in response spins around and kick the guy from the ground, all this happens while the crowd that gathered around is cheering, Talon than stands up, gives a few more kicks to the guy and the guy finaly falls like a log of wood on the floor, Talon than proceeds to take whatever is left from his beer and pours it slowly on the guys face, after finishing, he gives the cup back to the shopkeeper and leaves the bar*
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
*Talon, being exhausted from the fight at the bar slowly roams the streets, after a while of walking he encounters a fine girl his age wearing a beatiful necklace, he cannot choose wheter he wants the necklace or the lady, Talon than stops, bows to the lady and speaks with a charming voice* "Good evening madam" *the girl answers Talon with a susicious voice* "-Good Evening" "-Say, what a fine lady like you is doing on the streets? that late, it is angerous around this time" *the girl grabs her purse wth her both hands since she's afraid from Talon stealing it" *talon gently takes the girls' hand and kisses it in a gentle manner* "Im Mark, pleasure to meet you" "Im Maria, it's nice seeing a nice gentlemen like you" *Talon gets closer to Maria while speaking* "Say, woul you allow a guy like me to order a drink for madam?" *Maria's cheecks begins to blush for shyness, Talon gets to a whisper distance and whispers to Maria* "And than maybe we could go to your place" *while Talon talk he slightly removes the safety pin from behind the necklace's chain, Maria doesnt notice that and says* "Well for a start we can go for a dri-" *Talon doesnt let Maria finish speaking and runs off with the necklace in his hands, Maria is surprsed and does not understand what he is doing for the first couple of seconds, she sees Talon with a necklace in his hand, she reaches to her neck to check for her necklace and realises it's gone* "HEY! COME BACK HERE! GIVE ME BACK MY NECKLACE! GUARDS!" *until the guards arrive it is too late because Talon menaged to run away with the treausure in his hands*
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Not anymore
Other notes: Good luck reading , i hope i get accepted this time. Note that i will be roleplay all my assassinations and will do thoese said assassinatons only when asked or hired, no random people killing so no rp getting ruined.
I just went through the process of fixing the Lore section, so as to not frighten small children. The giant unnecessary timelines have been removed, and other bits shifted about. There's also been a slight alteration to the whitelist application form, where applicants are asked to state whether their character will be a Citizen or a Medori(Fallen), as it seems that people haven't realized that they can play as a Medori.
All the old timeline stuff is available in the lore section of our forums for those interested in reading it. With any luck this'll make us a little more approachable to potential applicants.
Meanwhile, a new version of Bukkit has been released at last, which hopefully will allow the plugin developers to get back to work on updating so we can release!
Arrrgasm- I'm sorry, but you've been denied. There were many things wrong with your app, but this is the big one and the only one I'm going to take the time to point out.
The Anerian Chronicles Whitelisting Team has NO TOLERANCE for plagiarism. We WILL find out if you do plagiarize. It's a big no-no.
Is it okay if I post my app without skin screenshot yet? Still making the skin
If your app is good it is possible for a WL to overlook the lack of a skin, plus you played on SoTA, right? We mainly ask for skin shots so everybody isn't coming in as troll face or assassins creed..... *shudder* However, I would at least get the basics of a skin down, you can always make edits later! For me personally, I wouldn't risk a deferral just because I lacked a skin. Best of luck to you!
Wheatley originally reviewed your app, so your second app is also his job. I can guarantee you he will be on it tomorrow, at the very latest. Thanks for your patience!
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
8/18/2011
Posts:
104
Minecraft:
WholeGrainWheat
Member Details
Deferred:
Xtreme_Prodigy - I'm sorry, but your character cannot start off with the knowledge of how to fly an airship. Possibly rework him so that it's simply his ambition to learn to fly? Also, your grammar and capitalization are once again a bit sub-par. All-in-all, your character feels a bit bland and generic. I would spice him up a bit with little quirks, and perhaps more flaws than being rash sometimes. This next one is your last shot; make it count.IMPORTANT: ALL FUTURE APPLICANTS PLEASE READ.
It appears to be a trend (at least in the last two or three applicants) to try and review our reviews. Simply pointing out why you think we're wrong isn't going to change the verdict. Just take what we say into account and try to fix it. Us whitelisters don't just post these on a whim; we think out our opinions and often confer with the other whitelisters before posting our verdict. So please know this: posting a review of a review is pointless. It won't get you anything, and it's a waste of time for everyone involved.
Wheatley, if you wish a note to be "To All Future Applicants", please let me know so - Usually new applicants will not read back too far back if at all, and thus will not see notes like that, however I can modify the OP to include such notes, as I have done so in the past.
Though honestly, one of the parts of the app is saying that you agree to abide by the decisions of our staff, so that shouldn't be necessary... If it becomes a serious problem, I'll make a note of it in the OP.
IGN: Norradjer99 (It's riversgame, couldn't change skin on my old one so I got this xD)
Real-Life Age: 13
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): Yep, you guys already got it
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yup
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is forcing an action upon another character such as: *Chris chops off Drake's head* Or it could be doing something your character can't do, like shooting lazors out of your eyes or dodging an attack from behind, when you never knew the person was there.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using ooc knowledge ic
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplaying is taking the role of a character and acting it out.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: Nobody
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: With their ooc consent, or if their character would have no chance of surviving that battle, like if they were surrounded by people or tied up in a room, etc.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When you're in double brackets or ooc chat
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yep
Who is allowed to use magic?: Those who learn it at the academy, or if they have special permissions from Welk to start with it.
Who are the Fallen?: A group of humans who were seperated from them rest of the human race when the islands were made.
When and how did our current government come to be?: In the year of 169 A.R. after the monarchy system got out of hand, and revolts started.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: The order of Aradin are a group of knights made to protect the chancelor against threats such as the creatures in bloodmoon forest
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Sota, the land of olivin, and a few others
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: All the ones I posted got shut down, and a few others I just quit because they were terrible
Character Information
Name: Billy (after billy the mining turtle)
Age: 25
Class: Laborer
Physical description: Hank is around 6 feet in height, and quite strong due to working in the mines. He has dark hair which he got from his father, and his face is shaped more like his moms at least that's what his father tells him.
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Medori, ftw
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):"Goodbye Billy, hope your fever fever clears up soon so you can come to the mines with me!" Were the last words that my father ever said to me. But hey, I'm getting way ahead of myself. I grew up on the Medori island, my mom died in childbirth so it was up to my father to raise me. He made an ok living as a miner, and it was destined that I would become one. I was always pretty independant, even at a young age. I had a cousin named Cosak (dere), but I didn't get to know him much until later in my life, and we'll get to that eventually. However, back on track I grew up with my father and we got by easily enough we weren't rich, but we got by. he had to sell his minerals at shops around town to afford food, and I had to do most the house work. My favorite holiday was Dimeor day as it had such an odd backround, but it helped bond me and my father it was always fun and I know I'll never go through another one without missing him.
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Learning To Mine
Around the time that I turned 16, my father decided it was time to mine. First he got me properly holding the pickaxe, then for the next week or so he got me just to go out my a pile of stones and beat them with the pickaxe, this got up my stamina. Eventually, after what seemed like many lifetimes he took me down to the mines where I had to get through the dirt, gravel and stone. When I found my first thing of iron, I was so proud. My father taught me how to properly harvest it, then how to properly smelt it into a bar so it is in sellable condition. Just learning how to smelt stuff without burning myself took nearly a month itself, and I still never mastered it. After 2 years, I was an average miner and my father seemed to not have as much iron coming in as usual. I learned why the next dimeor day, me and my father usually had to use old rusty iron pickaxes. However, as a gift my father gave me a brand new iron pickaxe!
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My father's Death and the Sight of the Capital Island
Our lives went with ease for the next 6 years, not much going on. i did find out that my cousin Cosak was stranded on Bloodstone island. The news was not too much to me as I didn't know him that well, however I still was saddened by the news. At the end of this peaceful period, I was hit by a fever it wasn't too major, but it kept me from mining and saved my life. During the time that I had my back injury, my father went into the mines, and the section he was in collapsed. I never found the body, and some part of me silently wonders if he made it out or made a life down there somehow as only the entrance to the shaft he was in collapsed. A few months later my cousin Cosak returned - miracurously, and we actually started talking some. He helped me obtain some of the essence so I could keep my pickaxe if I ever fell off the islands, which I keep to this day. Not too long after this, I'm in the mines and a rockslide occurs off the walls, a giant rock hits my leg and screws it up pretty badly I end up having to drag myself out of the cave, luckily I wasn't too far underground. It never fully heals, and I spend the rest of my life with a bad leg, I can walk and stuff fine, just no running for me. After some few months of adjusting, when I finally got used to my father being gone and my bum leg, news got out that we were drifting towards a new group of islands, with people on them. I was rather frightened at this news as they could be hostile, however it was exciting at the same time.
You asked to hear my story, now you heard it.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): His current goal is to hope and avoid conflict with the capital's citizens and his general goal is to keep on mining and supporting himself.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): His physical strength is in fact his strength.He looks intimidating, as long as the person doesn't know about his leg. On top of that, it helps him during his job. His personality strength is that he is very kind unless (refer to weaknesses), and can make friends easily enough which will help him in his goal to avoid conflict with the people of the capital city.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality): Billy's physical weakness is his bum leg, with it he cannot run. His personality weakness is that if anyone makes any bad mention of his dead father, or mother he will go into a rage at them, not bad enough to kill them or harm them severely but he still might punch them or something similar.
Will your character likely join an existing faction? If so, which? If not, why not?: Nope, none currently available
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): Yep, linked up with Deremotive
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl. (Gonna change this to the medori capital, would make more sense) Billy would sneak away, and look for help when he found help he would direct them to the girl and the men, telling them the situation. He would find the men the next day and see how the encounter went, and would make sure the little girl is alright and that the men were properly dealth with. He would make sure they were in jail and weren't getting out anytime soon, if they were he'd talk to the whoever decided when they got out about them.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded. Billy would outright refuse to go to bloodstone as he does not have any combat experience and he has a bum leg and he would most certainly die. He would re-direct the person to his cousin though who has been at bloodstone and survived.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Billy would hand the man some food and money, then try to find the man a job. After he found the man a job he would make sure he was on the right track and getting all the necessities he needed to survive.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Billy would tense up and tell the man to take it back, after the man refused Billy would punch him in the nose then get up and leave. He would be depressed at home, with thoughts of his father who he loved dearly, and his mother who he never got the chance to meet. He would try to avoid the man whenever he saw him.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears. Billy wouldn't pay any mind to the necklace as it would be useless to him as he has nobody to give it to, and he certainly wouldn't wear it himself. He might ask the woman where she bought it incase if he ever does meet a woman and would like to give her a necklace as nice as that.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Nope
Other notes: Remember when SUMF went here? I sure do.
Wow, I would not have guessed that the Hard Won Dreams in-character thread would be so popular, what exactly is going on there? ._.
It started out as a casual talk between Issies char and Skull's char but then Icarus decided to test out a machine that generated heat and nearly burned down a park
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): Deremotive
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: YES What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Forcing a action upon a person, Like *Dimwit cuts dukes head, cleanoff* What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Knowing something out of rp in rp *Dimwit learns about a secret event on the site, then tells everybody about it in rp What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Taking a persona upon yourself and acting it as the persona Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: With that persons content When are you allowed to speak out of character?: ((when you use these)) Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes Who is allowed to use magic?: Mages, People with staff permission and people with primary and magic degrees from the acadamy Who are the Fallen?: a Group of people who were separated from the main population and formed there own history, beliefs and society. They are adapt at magic. When and how did our current government come to be?: 169 A.R. After a civil war, the monarchy was replaced by the chancellery and the masters. Who are the Order of Aradin?: A group of knights who are sworn to protect and upheld the chancellery, and protect the skys. They are currently a shade of their former glory What are the Net and Essence? a Mystical barrier that has been there since the raising and protects people from falling forever. Essence is our planes form of mana, but is no where near as potent, only useful for keeping items safe from being lost in the net What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Mutiple Minecraft Rp, Thread Rp, And Sc2 Rp games If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: They all have either ended or began to bore me
Character Information
Name: Cosak Sangero
Age: 28
Class: Bladesman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?:
Medori Physical description:
Cosak is 6'1 and eye color is a darkish hazel. He typically wears his black coat, but on occasion will wear other things. He is some what slender, but he makes up this by his constant working out and exercising. Screen capture of your skin: http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/1149826/kirito/ Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Born to typical family of Medori, his early life was a fairly average one, being born to two Medori farmers. Being raised as a farm boy, Cosak labored with his family day and night to till the lands and grow their crop. From his and his family's hard work, they began to become well known in their surrounding community, becoming known for their hard work and their , Until, a murder occurred. The man, Elrick Dozner, was the main competitor of the Sangero family and their only obstacle against them having control over the areas food supply. With this knowledge the Head family members of the Sangero family were prosecuted for the crime and were told to pick one of their family members banished, along with having all of their possessions taken and given to the Dozner family as compensation for Elrick's death. The Sangero family took votes on who would receive the banishment and were locked in stalemate until finally, Cosak's father volunteered himself for the Banishment. As he gathered his things to leave, Cosak's father, Danoth, talked to him on his last night Cosak stood in the door way, while his father was putting his meager possessions into his bag. “Why?” questioned Cosak, voice trembling. “Why did you volunteer? Why not one of the elders? Why not my uncle?” Asked Cosak, his tone firming and turning angry. His father took a deep breath and turned to face him, putting his hand on his sons shoulder. “You could not understand my reason for doing this at such a young age, but one day you will learn. But before I leave, I must impart some of my knowledge to you. A single person can only do so much in his life before their time runs out, but during that time, that person must achieve one thing to die without remorse and meet our father. That one achievement is To surpass their elders. When I am dead and gone and have met the father, you will live on and continue my line. I give you this knowledge in good faith.” And with that, his father walked out of the room and out of Cosaks life.
With his father gone, Cosak and his siblings began to work to the best of their ability to keep his family afloat, but even then they could not entirely support their families. With their options running out, they were approached by a strange man with golden eyes and , who offered him along with a few other men a large reward if they simply accompany him to a far off island. The group agreed and boarded the ship, and began their journey to the island. For months, the ship was rocked by storms and forced them below deck. The journey was difficult and treacherous, causing what would be a week long journey to be a month long hellish experience. With the island in sight, they thought their troubles would be over. They were horribly mistaken. When the ship landed, the group was rushed outside and sent to scout the area, then set up a base camp to stay at for the time on the island. After spliting up and looking about they came upon a horrible discovery: The island was infested with the unholy and undead, seeking to kill them at every turn. Most of the party was killed while scouting and the few that made it back to the land area found the man and the ship gone, the only evidence that they had been there was a scrap of paper that read: “Welcome to bloodstone island. This will be your grave”
Using their meager supplies, they set up a rudimentary base camp, where Cosak met Desmond. Desmond was a professional mercenary and a ex-people's guard. The old man had signed up on the expedition under the impression that the man was rich and influential politician who could possibly get some favors done for him. Together they held the camp with the remaining band of men, hoping for rescue. During this time Desmond trained Cosak in the art of the blade and how to be a warrior with out relent.
The clash of the blades rang out across the camp, as Desmond and Cosak once again had another one of their training matches. In the beginning, there were only a few quick clangs before Cosak admitted defeat, but after much practicing in their make shift dueling arena, the fights got longer and longer, but they still ended in the same outcome: Cosak eventually gave in to Desmond. But one day the duel went on longer then usual. “Your getting better, my student, but you still haven't beat me yet!” said Desmond as he blocked another one of Cosak's strikes. “Well, I guess im going to have to change that, won't I?” Responded Cosak along with another lunge of his blade towards his abdomen, but as Desmond tried to parry the low strike, Casok raised the point of attack from the stomach to the chin. Desmond smiled as he dropped his sword. “Well done, my protege. I concede” Said Desmond as Cosak dropped down in exhaustion, smile on his face. One of the few he had while stuck on the living hell that was Bloodstone island.
As his training continued and intensified, it seemed as though the monsters were edged on by their presence as more and more attacked the camp. In the beginning, only small raids of zombies would attack, which were easily taken care of and stripped of foods and valuables to aid the battalion of warriors, but before long, mobs of spiders, skeletons and even creepers began to the assault the base day after day and month after month. The constant battling began to wear the numbers thin when, finally, a sky ship was spotted. They burned any flammables they could find and tried to make as much sound as possible. As the skyship turned directions they began to cheer, until they heard the howls of the monsters. The creatures began to swarm the camp in the hundreds, tearing down any fortification in their way, demolishing the camp and any men foolish enough to try and stop them. As the group was pushed closer and closer to the edge of the camp, the skyship finally was above them. They lowered their ladder for the men to climb up on, and the few surviving men climbed aboard. Out of the forty men who joined the expedition, only 5 remained.
The ship was privateer vessel who was looking for iron deposits when they saw them. The men joined the crew and began to work for the captain, Stukov Crosento, as warriors and sailors. As time passed, Cosak and Desmond grew to be close friends with Stukov, participating in many jobs and missions under his command, adding even more polish to Cosaks considerable skills. As their wealth grew and grew, Cosak began to worry for his family, So Stukov brought him and Desmond back to their home. When he reached there, he saw his family still lived in poverty and were surprised to see him alive. He had been gone for nine years. He offered his all his wealth to them and they gladly took it, allowing them to finally live as they had so many years ago. Cosak was entirely content with his life at this point when one day he was walking on road near his house and saw a notice. It read,”Looking for men to join expedition to far away island, and the reward is a fortune. As he read it, he looked down the road to see a man walking down it”.He knew him as the man who left him on the hell known as bloodstone island.
He raced to desmond and told him what he saw. The two prepared and left for the meeting place of that the man had set, the exact same one they had gone to the day Cosak left home. As the man looked over the men he had gathered, seemingly happy with the selection, Cosak and Desmond unsheathed their blades and charged. The man had seemingly prepared for this and quickly took action, pulling out his blade as well. As the three dueled, the rest of the men scattered, hoping not to get caught in the cross fire.
Their blades all clashed at once, like a wave crashing into the beach. Even with his training and Desmond's mastery of the weapon, they could be barely keep up with him. As Cosak lunged close to the mans chest, the man moved like lightning and sidestepped. As he readied to slash his him,A shriek cried out, almost in human. Desmond had stabbed him in the back and punctured his side. He turned as fast as he could and slashed downwards, across Desmond's chest, then quickly fled to hi ship, leaving Desmond bleeding on the ground and Cosak dazed. As the ship flew away, Cosak staggered over to his master, and knelt down to him. Desmond whispered into his ear as he slowly died”My student, my time has come. You must do these two things for me. Kill that man that betrayed us and live in my place. Will you honor my wishes?” Cosak with a stern and cold face looked into his masters eyes. “I will.”
After Desmond died, Cosak began to train him self rigorously, almost fanatically, in hoping that one day he could defeat the man who had tried to kill him while also growing closer to his family, by preforming jobs and tasks for them so they could live above poverty. He also began to make more friends and reconect with ones he had lost long ago, but beneath his happiness, there lies a hunger that will only be satisfied when the man who killed his master dies by his hands.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): He wants to help his family and protect them and also kill the strange man who murdered Desmond at any lengths necessary. He actively looks for the man and has been training even more to combat the mans high swordsmanship ability.
strengths(Both physical and personality): He is a very strong willed and calm person, able to continuously work on one objective years at a time and can keep himself stable overpressure. He can also tune out other things such as emotion or mercy when he feels like it is needed, per say if he needs to murder a person for a job, so he will not be bothered by the guilt that he might bring.
He is a accomplished swordsman, who knows his way around a fight and can preform amazing feats if able to get his hands on a sword. He is also extremely fast when it comes to swordplay.
He is also phyisically strong from many years of training, working in the fields,helping sail a skyship and fighting. He also considers him self a expert survivalist, capable of living in harsh places with little to no supplies given to him before hand. He also has rudimentary knowledge of skyship upkeep and sailing
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):
Cosak at times can be described as being horribly obsessed at times when he gets him self into something deeply, like figuring out a mystery or some other event. He is also very over confident against other bladesman who challenge him, considering only a few people at his level and sometimes giving a bounty a chance to run if he thinks there is no way for them to escape him. He can also be very paranoid of other people, especially if they have the chance to back stab him and he makes people work to get his trust
He is nearly defenseless when he does not have some sort of blade to fight back with since he was not taught as nearly as much on how to fight in hand to hand combat. He also has no skill with throwing knives.
He also very protective of his family and friends, willing to risk many things to save them.
your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
River-game's character is a cousin of His
n-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
C:*Hears the shrieks of the young girl and instantly unsheathes his sword and rushes to men and girl. He quickly analyzes the situation and lunges his sword at a common weak point in armor, the shoulder joint*
M1: Blighter! He tries to move but the blade hits it point
M2: turns away from the girl and begins to raise his sword to preform a overhead strike
C: pulls his sword out of the first mans chest and slashes at the mans extended arms, knocking the sword out of his hand
G: Runs off while Cosak is fighting. C: Seeing that the girl is gone, kicks the second man in the chest and and stabs him in the arm and twists it while it is embedded.
M2: Shrieks from the pain and passes out.
C: Walks over to the first man, lying on the floor with blood running out of his puncture wound and kicks him in the head
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
C: Looks at the man and pulls out a dagger “let me see your eyes.” The man complies and lets him take good long look at them. They are a dark green color. “Fine. But if you double cross me, I Will hunt you down and murder every one you know and love. I will slaughter them with out mercy and paint each home of theirs in their blood and then I will find you.”
Man: Gulps and looks at Cosak “Well, Y-you can trust me not to do that. It seems as if you've had previous experience with bloodstone island?”
C: looks at him hard. “I guess that's a reasonable way to say being stranded on a hell hole and watching other people die because of a sociopath leaving us there to die. So yeah, I’ve been there before.”
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
C: Looks at the man with contempt, remembering the years he once had to work so hard to provide for his family. He tosses the main a slice of bread and continues on his way
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
C; Sighs and tells him to go jump off the edge of the island and takes another drink.
Drunkard: “Wh-WHAT did yoush say to mesh?” He says while getting up drunken
C: Sweeps his foot under the mans legs making him fall on his face, then kicks him once before leaving.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
C: He looks at it for a while before losing interest.”Why would I wear a woman necklace” he Jokes to him selfbefore returning to his daily activity’s
Other notes Sorry for the random bolding. Its been rather wonkey with my writer program lately
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): lol_turtle
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is forcing roleplay on to someone else. By doing this you are ruining roleplay for them because it doesn't give that person an opportunity to roleplay. For example
*Stabs in throat* Where it should be *Swipes with throat with sword*
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using OOC information for RP use. For example if someone tells you about stuff in the forums or something, you can't know it in roleplay.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplay is where you play a specific role in a scene(s). Roleplay is also used on games as well as acts/plays and other related stuff. Roleplay can also be defined as playing a role in a society to help it.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: You can only cause the death of another character with special permission from that character's player.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: If you need help from players / admins.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes, I do.
Who is allowed to use magic?: You cannot start with magic, but you have to learn it from the Academy. Mages
Who are the Fallen?: The Fallen (Or the Medori) are people who have been seperated from other civilisations for awhile, although their island started moving towards another civilisation.
When and how did our current government come to be?: The Government came to power in 169 A.R. They have a branched system with 3 different Masters, Master of the Coin, Master of the Sword and Master of Words. They also have a leader.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: The Order of Aradin are protectors of the Government who are decreasing in numbers over time. They are also a religious group and follow a church.
What are the Net and Essence? The Essence and the Net are if you fall off, you are caught by a magical Net which will place you back on one of the islands. If you have 3 levels on you, you keep your items.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: I have played on one of your previous servers and I have played a lot of other RP servers. I know roleplay pretty well and I was introduced to Minecraft roleplay by my friend (Skyeti/Jaeden111).
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: I played in BoH as I was told about it by Jaeden (Skyeti) so I joined it, although you guys switched to Shrines of the Ancients which I decided to stop roleplaying and focus on school. I have also played a really popular roleplay server which has died now, it was called Warstorm. There are also a lot of other ones but I forgot now.
Character Information
Name: Zachery Hyde (Zac for short)
Age: 20
Class: swordsman (but later wants to become a mage, he will ditch using swords and stuff as he would pledge to not as he would become a mage, to prevent being too op.)
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: chancellory
Physical description: Brown hair with a clean shaven beard. He has a fairly clean face, not too many scars and other facial features. He also has a red scarf with a brown shirt and a slightly lighter vest and brown brown pants.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Zachery lived in the Capitol for most of his life. He lived with a slightly poor family, only trying to focus on his education, but couldn't do a lot. Although Zachery's father tried to teach him to be a fighter, as at the time, more guards were being needed. His father tried to teach him with the sword. Zachery did excel but not a fast rate that his father was happy with. Then his mother tried to teach him to be a gentlemen. Zachery didn't really excel at that either. When he was about 15, he set out to find his own home and get his own job. He got a job as a guard at the time, just barely. Although 3 years after he started settling in with his job, at 18, Zachery found out about magic, reading about it in novels. He thought it looked interesting and wanted to try it. But he found out it was no easy task, so it was either take it, or leave it. He was sure he would get another oppoturnity at this, but he would stay a guard at the moment. At 20, he found out about the Academy's reopening, he had read that it taught about magic and such. Which was what he wanted to pursue. ((I read about the Academy's reopening on the forums))
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): He wishes to finally become a mage and pledge to not use swords once and if he becomes a mage.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Zachery is a strong guy, both physically and mentally. He also knows how to keep the place nice and tidy.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): He doesn't know about helping people that much, such as, he would help himself over others, he is ignorant. He also is afraid of falling off, even if he is caught by the net.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): Not at the moment.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Zachery passes the men, being a guard himself, he questions them in his mind about what they are doing.
Although Zachery doesn't really care and keeps patrolling.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"I already have enough riches, I don't need your petty little quest".
"It will reward you".
"I told you, I am fine, now get out of my way".
Zachery pushes the man aside and keeps walking.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Zachery, being ignorant as he is. Passes the man without noticing. But later passing him again, noticing but trying to ignore him as Zachery doesn't want to pass out any change at the moment.
"Change sir?"
*Zachery keeps walking*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
*Zachery stands up from the chair, trying to look as big as he can for intimidation*
Zachery says to the man with a booming voice "What did you say, can you repeat that?" he continues "I didn't hear it over your petty little mumbling."
The man decides to back off, but Zachery walks over, holds him by the collar and chucks him across the table, smashing some glasses. Leaving him there.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
"That's a nice necklace miss, you might want to hold on to it, there are bad people around here." Zachery says as he patrols the streets.
*Zachery keeps walking*
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Not at the moment thank you
Other notes:
Umm, I hope I did good :D. Also Skyeti (Jaeden111) told me to join, so I did, apparently you guys needed more players.
IGN:
oric8520
Real-Life Age:
15
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot):
I ineed have skype and my skype name is devidini
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:
Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?:
powergamming is a kind of a term that is usually used to describe a situetion where a player get to much out of his charecter abillitys and alike playing. For example infinty health or powers.
Powerming is a way where a player uses items
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?:
Metagaming is a term used to let people know outside charecter knowledge as such as the charecter name, skills, possesion and anything that you dont know in the game itself like the charecter name in minecraft that you can see above the player is a Metagaming if you use it to know the charecter name.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?:
Roleplaying is taking the role of a caracter or a hero and acting accordingly, the roleplay should be realistic an fitting into the character, that means that a simple old man cant have the power of flght or any unhuman physical abillities.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?:
No one in the world
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?:
You are allowed to cause the death of another charecter only in a demending situation while playing in RP. as such you cant go around killing people in towns just like that but you have to be in a situesion that demands the death.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?:
You are allowed to speak out of charecter only whenever you want to add side notes like helpful information, charecter adding, command helping or in a global chat if there is one in the game.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:
Yep
Who is allowed to use magic?:
At the start no one is allowed to use magic. magic is a skill that you can get only in time playing the game.
Who are the Fallen?:
The fallen is an old race of people living in an isolation away from the other human race while they there the live in peace. The fallen have a very ancient cultere that passed to people through father to child. The humans are releated to magic but the fallen are evan closer to it then the human race. The idea of a community takes a big part in the fallen culture as such as storytelling.
When and how did our current government come to be?:
The first form of the goverment had been created in 0 AR in the summer when the Linyera family captured and bought land with their welth forcing people to join their kindom. 4 AR the church started developing and growing that was led by a man named Reginauld that later joined the Linyera famaly ancestors that were controlling their land under total monarchy. The Linyear ancestors declared Reginald as the first waren of the east. after some time the new prophet came up to the church. Kaldun organised an assasination of the monarch and those who were given the church its bad reputation. Bennet Tybalt the warden from the East in that time orginized a rebellion against the linyera family. He won the rebelion and seted up his own goverment with the three Masters of the sword, coin and word in 169 AR
Who are the Order of Aradin?:
The Order of Aradin is a weak group that was created to protect the Chancellor and to adress the threat of the Bloodstone island.
What are the Net and Essence?:
The Net is a magical force that keeps the charecter from falling from the island since the island are in the sky and a way to keep your belonings safe from falling. That allows all the creatures and people on the islands keep theirself safe and preventing them to fall down to the next world.
The Essence is kind of mana that can be used for magic and spells. It can also be used to charge the emeralds to be used as a currency.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:
I have played on your early server book of Halegron by the name Oirc8520 and from then till now i had earned even more roleplaying expirience.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
I have played to many RP server to count. Some were my freinds and my own and the most known server i played is abridell the skyrim server. I quit most of those servers because i just wanted to see more and more servers. The reason i quit the abridell is because it started costing real money in the open beta. i play there as oric8520
Character Information:
David has strong legs and arms so he runs fast he is right handed both legs and hands but when he uses a bow he uses a bow he uses his left hand more. he has brown hair with a bit bangs. David knows how to write and read but he isnt the smartest person there is. David is tall about1.9 meters.
Name: David
Age:22 was born in october
Class:
Bladesman
Screen capture of your skin:
http://imgur.com/JzsUK0m
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
The story of David begins at his childhood where he always used to follow his father around since he lived at a small village he didnt meet people often and always followed his father around since he thought that he was the smartest person in the world and followed his father in his work as a farmer.
David as in every story aged with time so i am going to tell you about his life when he was 22.
i was just coming from the closest city back home since i needed to get some food home i came across a gang of people beating up few people. I dont know why but i just jumped in there to help those people like i am some kind of a hero. But in the end i got beat up and i was left there bleeding painfully in the street.
I had a nice welcoming at my home my mom panicked and started shouting at me and so did my ex-lovly father, i always was different then my parents, i always looked for an exiting adventure like in the books i read such as dovahkin. I never understood how i used to adore my father when now the only conversation we have is only in shouthing so i bever really got my great adventure and i was tired of this life. I remember my parents talking to me but i wasnt really paying attension and i remember they asked me "got it?" and i said yes to something i didnt listen to. At the end it was my parents asking me to go to the forst and direct my mother's freind into our farm. I walked peacfully down the forest where the trees were so high that you couldnt see even the sun it also was kind of foggy so i made it thougher to me to see. after few hours walk i stamped into something and fell, it was my motherl's freind body i was freaked out i never saw a body before in my life, i started running back nt knowing how it happened or who did it. I ran and ran and ran until i saw my farm. The farm looked really normal and it was like always.I ran into the house and started calling my parents but then i didnt get an answear, they are probably down at the room under the kitchen so i went there, but the floor was on fire and my parents are still inside that underhouse room, i didnt know what to do, i looked for water but the fire was too strong, and then i looked for the source it was the oven.Did my mom forgot to stop the fire after the food i didnt know. The house was starting to go on fire i couldnt do a thing i ran upstairs and took my father's sword and i got out of the burning house. I cried alot my parents were dead but i didnt know who did this was it the person who killed my mom's freind or was it something else. It took me few days when i was only me and my sword on the road that i remembered what my mom asked me to do few days ago. (flashback)"son be sure tommorow to close the oven tommorow since i will be with your father at the room under the house we need to find the gift to my freind. Then i relized it was me who didnt close the oven, it was me who my parents asked, it was me who set the farm on fire.... It was me who burned my parents.
I didnt know what to do i was freaked out and i was lost in the world when suddenly i looked down at my sword and saw a note on it. The note said "Hello brother i know i didnt come to your 20 birthay i know you have this cute son now and i really want to meet my nefew, so take this sword as a gift, from your brother Ellard".
I got still some family left, i never knew abou Ellard. Now i know what i am seeking i am seeking my uncale Ellard and my dream the adventure.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
My charecter main goal is to find his ultimate adventer while looking for his uncale Ellard.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):
David is young so he has pleanty of strenght, he runs alot and he always wants to be the best.
David is carefree and doesnt care what anybody thinks of him while he always trying to be a hero.
He doesnt think alot so he does more that he thinks but he got brains somewhere for sure.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is
David isnt a person to think alot he does stuff without thinking and always gets into trouble because of that,
he never really listen to people so he doesnt pay attetion to people and then he has missing details.
David is afraid of fire not a bit like when it is coming from a torch but when he sees fire he gets scared and weak.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
Yes, the only family he has left is his uncle Ellard he seeks for him while he desnt know where he is.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
David would scream at the people while running toward them telling them "leave the girl alone".
David would start telling them to back off.
If the people wont David will attack them with his fists and punch the people in their stomach,
David will kick their knees to slow them down
David will take the girl and run for it while the guys are recovering.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"sir. tell me where it is, the place sounds like an adventure so sure i will go there for a nice little reward"."where is it?". the man will show me where it is while David is barely listening so David goes to the place and then he took everything with a value with him since he didnt listen to what he was suposed to retrive.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
If David had food on the moment with him he would give a bit to the old man and then go away. While David doesnt have food on him he would just keep going since he doesnt care much for a stranger.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
David will turn his head toword the person who insulted his mother and say "say it one more time and..."
the person insolted David mother again that made David put his beer on the table and jump on the person no matter who he is and punch him in the face making him fall and then David will punch him more till he sees that the man regreats that and only then David will go somewhere else.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
David will stop whatever he was doing and start staring at the necklace and say to the woman "this is one of a hell of a neclace my lady". The lady says "thanks" and i will just ask her where did she got it while trying to pay attension to what she says so he could one day buy to himself something nice.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Not really the server sounds awsome.
Xtreme_Prodigy - Sorry to defer one of the only people from Europe who's ever applied, but your character is rather bland. I don't get a feel for his traits, I get more of a shell. Also, I don't think being truthful and well-spoken is a weakness. He's just overpowered and dull as a whole. Also, you don't need to capitalize nearly every word, and it'd be rather annoying if you did so in the server, if and when you are accepted. Last thing I'm going to say is that you should really get a skin that isn't Haytham Kenway. We don't really like characters as skins unless they're not immediately recognizable. Feel free to borrow from pre-existing character design, but an original skin is required. Feel free to apply again, and good luck.
I'm a man of few words and many voices.
Yhittazz/Arrrgasm- Let's go over these again then, shall we?
- Your grammar is going to make it difficult for some people to RP with you on the server if you are accepted. I atleast ask that you use spell check when writing your app to correct things. And, if it's because you type too fast.. Just slow down and chill, bud. The application isn't going anywhere.
- The skin is now fine, so there's a small improvement, good job.
- The ICRs feel a bit unrealistic. They're causing me to question your character and your RPing abilities.
- You can NOT start knowing magic or start out having once used magic. There is also no 'time vortex' in our lore, so this could not have happened to your character.. Not to mention, it's kinda cliche.. This isn't up for discussion. Change it, or find another RP server.
- Your character needs more of a personality. You can still be the 'mysterious old man' if you really want.. But you NEED to show more personality in your application for your character. I'm sorry, but Ellard is boring.
Also, next time you post your app, just make a new post. Do NOT edit your previous one. It isn't spamming, but thank you for being considerate. It makes it easier for me and the other Whitelisters to review your app.
Your character may also write books no matter what class he is (Though it'd make sense for him to do so as a scholar, but you'd need to become one through the academy to get a degree and whatnot - But, a craftsman can certainly write books) so long as he is literate.
You have one more chance to get accepted, this means you can only post your app ONE more time before you are denied.
Please try again, and good luck!
Denied:
Yhitazzz's friend/oric8520- I apologize, but your app was very bland, cliche, and poorly written. Also, you included the Dovahkin in your app..?
Also.. "I have played on your early server book of Halegron by the name Oirc8520 and from then till now i had earned even more roleplaying expirience." You both wrote this in your sections of the app.. You couldn't have both been Oirc8520 (I thought it was oric8520..?) back in BoH.
Do not apply again. Thanks for taking the time to fill out the app though (unless you and Arrrgasm are just the same person. :l ).
The cross is just an accessory it as it shows that he would like to enter the academy as a priest.Keep in mind he is a bladesman.
Well, that makes me sad, i did my best to make an old man character type but i guess im just not into it, i give up on this character and use my last attempt on another character if possible, i will use all your notes to make my next application as good as possible and it will be written below, i am sorry for wasting your time twice and i hope it wont happen the third time, i really do.
Also, i have to clear that me and oric are not the same person, i have NO idea why he wrote that he played on the server before, but just for you to know, i wont be looking for sneaky ways to come to the server like that, if i dont get accepted guess i deserve it, joining your server last time was easier than now and i tough i could get in as easy as before, that probably made me to relaxed and unfocused on my character writing.
Im making my last attempt, and i hope it works.
IGN:
Real-Life Age:
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot):
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?:
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?:
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?:
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?:
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?:
When are you allowed to speak out of character?:
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:
Who is allowed to use magic?:
Who are the Fallen?:
When and how did our current government come to be?:
Who are the Order of Aradin?:
What are the Net and Essence?:
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Character Information
Name:
Age:
Class:
Physical description:
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
Strengths (Both physical and personality):
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Other notes: Good luck reading , i hope i get accepted this time. Note that i will be roleplay all my assassinations and will do thoese said assassinatons only when asked or hired, no random people killing so no rp getting ruined.
All the old timeline stuff is available in the lore section of our forums for those interested in reading it. With any luck this'll make us a little more approachable to potential applicants.
Meanwhile, a new version of Bukkit has been released at last, which hopefully will allow the plugin developers to get back to work on updating so we can release!
Arrrgasm- I'm sorry, but you've been denied. There were many things wrong with your app, but this is the big one and the only one I'm going to take the time to point out.
The Anerian Chronicles Whitelisting Team has NO TOLERANCE for plagiarism. We WILL find out if you do plagiarize. It's a big no-no.
The source you stole from: http://na.leagueoflegends.com/champions/91/talon_the_blade_s_shadow
Changing a few words in the paragraph does not make it yours. Heck, you didn't even bother to change the character's name! :L
I wish you luck in finding another RP server.
If your app is good it is possible for a WL to overlook the lack of a skin, plus you played on SoTA, right? We mainly ask for skin shots so everybody isn't coming in as troll face or assassins creed..... *shudder* However, I would at least get the basics of a skin down, you can always make edits later! For me personally, I wouldn't risk a deferral just because I lacked a skin. Best of luck to you!
Wheatley originally reviewed your app, so your second app is also his job. I can guarantee you he will be on it tomorrow, at the very latest. Thanks for your patience!
Xtreme_Prodigy - I'm sorry, but your character cannot start off with the knowledge of how to fly an airship. Possibly rework him so that it's simply his ambition to learn to fly? Also, your grammar and capitalization are once again a bit sub-par. All-in-all, your character feels a bit bland and generic. I would spice him up a bit with little quirks, and perhaps more flaws than being rash sometimes. This next one is your last shot; make it count.IMPORTANT: ALL FUTURE APPLICANTS PLEASE READ.
It appears to be a trend (at least in the last two or three applicants) to try and review our reviews. Simply pointing out why you think we're wrong isn't going to change the verdict. Just take what we say into account and try to fix it. Us whitelisters don't just post these on a whim; we think out our opinions and often confer with the other whitelisters before posting our verdict. So please know this: posting a review of a review is pointless. It won't get you anything, and it's a waste of time for everyone involved.
I'm a man of few words and many voices.
Though honestly, one of the parts of the app is saying that you agree to abide by the decisions of our staff, so that shouldn't be necessary... If it becomes a serious problem, I'll make a note of it in the OP.
Real-Life Age: 13
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): Yep, you guys already got it
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yup
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is forcing an action upon another character such as: *Chris chops off Drake's head* Or it could be doing something your character can't do, like shooting lazors out of your eyes or dodging an attack from behind, when you never knew the person was there.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using ooc knowledge ic
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplaying is taking the role of a character and acting it out.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: Nobody
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: With their ooc consent, or if their character would have no chance of surviving that battle, like if they were surrounded by people or tied up in a room, etc.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When you're in double brackets or ooc chat
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yep
Who is allowed to use magic?: Those who learn it at the academy, or if they have special permissions from Welk to start with it.
Who are the Fallen?: A group of humans who were seperated from them rest of the human race when the islands were made.
When and how did our current government come to be?: In the year of 169 A.R. after the monarchy system got out of hand, and revolts started.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: The order of Aradin are a group of knights made to protect the chancelor against threats such as the creatures in bloodmoon forest
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Sota, the land of olivin, and a few others
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: All the ones I posted got shut down, and a few others I just quit because they were terrible
Character Information
Name: Billy (after billy the mining turtle)
Age: 25
Class: Laborer
Physical description: Hank is around 6 feet in height, and quite strong due to working in the mines. He has dark hair which he got from his father, and his face is shaped more like his moms at least that's what his father tells him.
Screen capture of your skin: http://www.planetmin.../miner-1755959/
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Medori, ftw
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): "Goodbye Billy, hope your fever fever clears up soon so you can come to the mines with me!" Were the last words that my father ever said to me. But hey, I'm getting way ahead of myself. I grew up on the Medori island, my mom died in childbirth so it was up to my father to raise me. He made an ok living as a miner, and it was destined that I would become one. I was always pretty independant, even at a young age. I had a cousin named Cosak (dere), but I didn't get to know him much until later in my life, and we'll get to that eventually. However, back on track I grew up with my father and we got by easily enough we weren't rich, but we got by. he had to sell his minerals at shops around town to afford food, and I had to do most the house work. My favorite holiday was Dimeor day as it had such an odd backround, but it helped bond me and my father it was always fun and I know I'll never go through another one without missing him.
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Learning To Mine
Around the time that I turned 16, my father decided it was time to mine. First he got me properly holding the pickaxe, then for the next week or so he got me just to go out my a pile of stones and beat them with the pickaxe, this got up my stamina. Eventually, after what seemed like many lifetimes he took me down to the mines where I had to get through the dirt, gravel and stone. When I found my first thing of iron, I was so proud. My father taught me how to properly harvest it, then how to properly smelt it into a bar so it is in sellable condition. Just learning how to smelt stuff without burning myself took nearly a month itself, and I still never mastered it. After 2 years, I was an average miner and my father seemed to not have as much iron coming in as usual. I learned why the next dimeor day, me and my father usually had to use old rusty iron pickaxes. However, as a gift my father gave me a brand new iron pickaxe!
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My father's Death and the Sight of the Capital Island
Our lives went with ease for the next 6 years, not much going on. i did find out that my cousin Cosak was stranded on Bloodstone island. The news was not too much to me as I didn't know him that well, however I still was saddened by the news. At the end of this peaceful period, I was hit by a fever it wasn't too major, but it kept me from mining and saved my life. During the time that I had my back injury, my father went into the mines, and the section he was in collapsed. I never found the body, and some part of me silently wonders if he made it out or made a life down there somehow as only the entrance to the shaft he was in collapsed. A few months later my cousin Cosak returned - miracurously, and we actually started talking some. He helped me obtain some of the essence so I could keep my pickaxe if I ever fell off the islands, which I keep to this day. Not too long after this, I'm in the mines and a rockslide occurs off the walls, a giant rock hits my leg and screws it up pretty badly I end up having to drag myself out of the cave, luckily I wasn't too far underground. It never fully heals, and I spend the rest of my life with a bad leg, I can walk and stuff fine, just no running for me. After some few months of adjusting, when I finally got used to my father being gone and my bum leg, news got out that we were drifting towards a new group of islands, with people on them. I was rather frightened at this news as they could be hostile, however it was exciting at the same time.
You asked to hear my story, now you heard it.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): His current goal is to hope and avoid conflict with the capital's citizens and his general goal is to keep on mining and supporting himself.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): His physical strength is in fact his strength.He looks intimidating, as long as the person doesn't know about his leg. On top of that, it helps him during his job. His personality strength is that he is very kind unless (refer to weaknesses), and can make friends easily enough which will help him in his goal to avoid conflict with the people of the capital city.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality): Billy's physical weakness is his bum leg, with it he cannot run. His personality weakness is that if anyone makes any bad mention of his dead father, or mother he will go into a rage at them, not bad enough to kill them or harm them severely but he still might punch them or something similar.
Will your character likely join an existing faction? If so, which? If not, why not?: Nope, none currently available
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): Yep, linked up with Deremotive
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
(Gonna change this to the medori capital, would make more sense)
Billy would sneak away, and look for help when he found help he would direct them to the girl and the men, telling them the situation. He would find the men the next day and see how the encounter went, and would make sure the little girl is alright and that the men were properly dealth with. He would make sure they were in jail and weren't getting out anytime soon, if they were he'd talk to the whoever decided when they got out about them.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Billy would outright refuse to go to bloodstone as he does not have any combat experience and he has a bum leg and he would most certainly die. He would re-direct the person to his cousin though who has been at bloodstone and survived.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Billy would hand the man some food and money, then try to find the man a job. After he found the man a job he would make sure he was on the right track and getting all the necessities he needed to survive.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Billy would tense up and tell the man to take it back, after the man refused Billy would punch him in the nose then get up and leave. He would be depressed at home, with thoughts of his father who he loved dearly, and his mother who he never got the chance to meet. He would try to avoid the man whenever he saw him.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Billy wouldn't pay any mind to the necklace as it would be useless to him as he has nobody to give it to, and he certainly wouldn't wear it himself. He might ask the woman where she bought it incase if he ever does meet a woman and would like to give her a necklace as nice as that.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Nope
Other notes: Remember when SUMF went here? I sure do.
Haloreach- Deferred at staff discretion.
It started out as a casual talk between Issies char and Skull's char but then Icarus decided to test out a machine that generated heat and nearly burned down a park
Real-Life Age: its a secret to every body
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): Deremotive
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:
YES
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?:
Forcing a action upon a person, Like *Dimwit cuts dukes head, cleanoff*
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?:
Knowing something out of rp in rp *Dimwit learns about a secret event on the site, then tells everybody about it in rp
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?:
Taking a persona upon yourself and acting it as the persona
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?:
No one
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?:
With that persons content
When are you allowed to speak out of character?:
((when you use these))
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:
Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?:
Mages, People with staff permission and people with primary and magic degrees from the acadamy
Who are the Fallen?:
a Group of people who were separated from the main population and formed there own history, beliefs and society. They are adapt at magic.
When and how did our current government come to be?:
169 A.R. After a civil war, the monarchy was replaced by the chancellery and the masters.
Who are the Order of Aradin?:
A group of knights who are sworn to protect and upheld the chancellery, and protect the skys. They are currently a shade of their former glory
What are the Net and Essence?
a Mystical barrier that has been there since the raising and protects people from falling forever. Essence is our planes form of mana, but is no where near as potent, only useful for keeping items safe from being lost in the net
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:
Mutiple Minecraft Rp, Thread Rp, And Sc2 Rp games
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: They all have either ended or began to bore me
Character Information
Name: Cosak Sangero
Age: 28
Class: Bladesman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?:
Medori
Physical description:
Cosak is 6'1 and eye color is a darkish hazel. He typically wears his black coat, but on occasion will wear other things. He is some what slender, but he makes up this by his constant working out and exercising.
Screen capture of your skin:
http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/1149826/kirito/
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Born to typical family of Medori, his early life was a fairly average one, being born to two Medori farmers. Being raised as a farm boy, Cosak labored with his family day and night to till the lands and grow their crop. From his and his family's hard work, they began to become well known in their surrounding community, becoming known for their hard work and their , Until, a murder occurred. The man, Elrick Dozner, was the main competitor of the Sangero family and their only obstacle against them having control over the areas food supply. With this knowledge the Head family members of the Sangero family were prosecuted for the crime and were told to pick one of their family members banished, along with having all of their possessions taken and given to the Dozner family as compensation for Elrick's death. The Sangero family took votes on who would receive the banishment and were locked in stalemate until finally, Cosak's father volunteered himself for the Banishment. As he gathered his things to leave, Cosak's father, Danoth, talked to him on his last night
Cosak stood in the door way, while his father was putting his meager possessions into his bag. “Why?” questioned Cosak, voice trembling. “Why did you volunteer? Why not one of the elders? Why not my uncle?” Asked Cosak, his tone firming and turning angry. His father took a deep breath and turned to face him, putting his hand on his sons shoulder. “You could not understand my reason for doing this at such a young age, but one day you will learn. But before I leave, I must impart some of my knowledge to you. A single person can only do so much in his life before their time runs out, but during that time, that person must achieve one thing to die without remorse and meet our father. That one achievement is To surpass their elders. When I am dead and gone and have met the father, you will live on and continue my line. I give you this knowledge in good faith.” And with that, his father walked out of the room and out of Cosaks life.
With his father gone, Cosak and his siblings began to work to the best of their ability to keep his family afloat, but even then they could not entirely support their families. With their options running out, they were approached by a strange man with golden eyes and , who offered him along with a few other men a large reward if they simply accompany him to a far off island. The group agreed and boarded the ship, and began their journey to the island. For months, the ship was rocked by storms and forced them below deck. The journey was difficult and treacherous, causing what would be a week long journey to be a month long hellish experience. With the island in sight, they thought their troubles would be over. They were horribly mistaken. When the ship landed, the group was rushed outside and sent to scout the area, then set up a base camp to stay at for the time on the island. After spliting up and looking about they came upon a horrible discovery: The island was infested with the unholy and undead, seeking to kill them at every turn. Most of the party was killed while scouting and the few that made it back to the land area found the man and the ship gone, the only evidence that they had been there was a scrap of paper that read: “Welcome to bloodstone island. This will be your grave”
Using their meager supplies, they set up a rudimentary base camp, where Cosak met Desmond. Desmond was a professional mercenary and a ex-people's guard. The old man had signed up on the expedition under the impression that the man was rich and influential politician who could possibly get some favors done for him. Together they held the camp with the remaining band of men, hoping for rescue. During this time Desmond trained Cosak in the art of the blade and how to be a warrior with out relent.
The clash of the blades rang out across the camp, as Desmond and Cosak once again had another one of their training matches. In the beginning, there were only a few quick clangs before Cosak admitted defeat, but after much practicing in their make shift dueling arena, the fights got longer and longer, but they still ended in the same outcome: Cosak eventually gave in to Desmond. But one day the duel went on longer then usual. “Your getting better, my student, but you still haven't beat me yet!” said Desmond as he blocked another one of Cosak's strikes. “Well, I guess im going to have to change that, won't I?” Responded Cosak along with another lunge of his blade towards his abdomen, but as Desmond tried to parry the low strike, Casok raised the point of attack from the stomach to the chin. Desmond smiled as he dropped his sword. “Well done, my protege. I concede” Said Desmond as Cosak dropped down in exhaustion, smile on his face. One of the few he had while stuck on the living hell that was Bloodstone island.
As his training continued and intensified, it seemed as though the monsters were edged on by their presence as more and more attacked the camp. In the beginning, only small raids of zombies would attack, which were easily taken care of and stripped of foods and valuables to aid the battalion of warriors, but before long, mobs of spiders, skeletons and even creepers began to the assault the base day after day and month after month. The constant battling began to wear the numbers thin when, finally, a sky ship was spotted. They burned any flammables they could find and tried to make as much sound as possible. As the skyship turned directions they began to cheer, until they heard the howls of the monsters. The creatures began to swarm the camp in the hundreds, tearing down any fortification in their way, demolishing the camp and any men foolish enough to try and stop them. As the group was pushed closer and closer to the edge of the camp, the skyship finally was above them. They lowered their ladder for the men to climb up on, and the few surviving men climbed aboard. Out of the forty men who joined the expedition, only 5 remained.
The ship was privateer vessel who was looking for iron deposits when they saw them. The men joined the crew and began to work for the captain, Stukov Crosento, as warriors and sailors. As time passed, Cosak and Desmond grew to be close friends with Stukov, participating in many jobs and missions under his command, adding even more polish to Cosaks considerable skills. As their wealth grew and grew, Cosak began to worry for his family, So Stukov brought him and Desmond back to their home. When he reached there, he saw his family still lived in poverty and were surprised to see him alive. He had been gone for nine years. He offered his all his wealth to them and they gladly took it, allowing them to finally live as they had so many years ago. Cosak was entirely content with his life at this point when one day he was walking on road near his house and saw a notice. It read,”Looking for men to join expedition to far away island, and the reward is a fortune. As he read it, he looked down the road to see a man walking down it”.He knew him as the man who left him on the hell known as bloodstone island.
He raced to desmond and told him what he saw. The two prepared and left for the meeting place of that the man had set, the exact same one they had gone to the day Cosak left home. As the man looked over the men he had gathered, seemingly happy with the selection, Cosak and Desmond unsheathed their blades and charged. The man had seemingly prepared for this and quickly took action, pulling out his blade as well. As the three dueled, the rest of the men scattered, hoping not to get caught in the cross fire.
Their blades all clashed at once, like a wave crashing into the beach. Even with his training and Desmond's mastery of the weapon, they could be barely keep up with him. As Cosak lunged close to the mans chest, the man moved like lightning and sidestepped. As he readied to slash his him,A shriek cried out, almost in human. Desmond had stabbed him in the back and punctured his side. He turned as fast as he could and slashed downwards, across Desmond's chest, then quickly fled to hi ship, leaving Desmond bleeding on the ground and Cosak dazed. As the ship flew away, Cosak staggered over to his master, and knelt down to him. Desmond whispered into his ear as he slowly died”My student, my time has come. You must do these two things for me. Kill that man that betrayed us and live in my place. Will you honor my wishes?” Cosak with a stern and cold face looked into his masters eyes. “I will.”
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After Desmond died, Cosak began to train him self rigorously, almost fanatically, in hoping that one day he could defeat the man who had tried to kill him while also growing closer to his family, by preforming jobs and tasks for them so they could live above poverty. He also began to make more friends and reconect with ones he had lost long ago, but beneath his happiness, there lies a hunger that will only be satisfied when the man who killed his master dies by his hands.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): He wants to help his family and protect them and also kill the strange man who murdered Desmond at any lengths necessary. He actively looks for the man and has been training even more to combat the mans high swordsmanship ability.
strengths(Both physical and personality):
He is a very strong willed and calm person, able to continuously work on one objective years at a time and can keep himself stable overpressure. He can also tune out other things such as emotion or mercy when he feels like it is needed, per say if he needs to murder a person for a job, so he will not be bothered by the guilt that he might bring.
He is a accomplished swordsman, who knows his way around a fight and can preform amazing feats if able to get his hands on a sword. He is also extremely fast when it comes to swordplay.
He is also phyisically strong from many years of training, working in the fields,helping sail a skyship and fighting. He also considers him self a expert survivalist, capable of living in harsh places with little to no supplies given to him before hand. He also has rudimentary knowledge of skyship upkeep and sailing
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):
Cosak at times can be described as being horribly obsessed at times when he gets him self into something deeply, like figuring out a mystery or some other event. He is also very over confident against other bladesman who challenge him, considering only a few people at his level and sometimes giving a bounty a chance to run if he thinks there is no way for them to escape him. He can also be very paranoid of other people, especially if they have the chance to back stab him and he makes people work to get his trust
He is nearly defenseless when he does not have some sort of blade to fight back with since he was not taught as nearly as much on how to fight in hand to hand combat. He also has no skill with throwing knives.
He also very protective of his family and friends, willing to risk many things to save them.
your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
River-game's character is a cousin of His
n-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
C:*Hears the shrieks of the young girl and instantly unsheathes his sword and rushes to men and girl. He quickly analyzes the situation and lunges his sword at a common weak point in armor, the shoulder joint*
M1: Blighter! He tries to move but the blade hits it point
M2: turns away from the girl and begins to raise his sword to preform a overhead strike
C: pulls his sword out of the first mans chest and slashes at the mans extended arms, knocking the sword out of his hand
G: Runs off while Cosak is fighting.
C: Seeing that the girl is gone, kicks the second man in the chest and and stabs him in the arm and twists it while it is embedded.
M2: Shrieks from the pain and passes out.
C: Walks over to the first man, lying on the floor with blood running out of his puncture wound and kicks him in the head
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
C: Looks at the man and pulls out a dagger “let me see your eyes.” The man complies and lets him take good long look at them. They are a dark green color. “Fine. But if you double cross me, I Will hunt you down and murder every one you know and love. I will slaughter them with out mercy and paint each home of theirs in their blood and then I will find you.”
Man: Gulps and looks at Cosak “Well, Y-you can trust me not to do that. It seems as if you've had previous experience with bloodstone island?”
C: looks at him hard. “I guess that's a reasonable way to say being stranded on a hell hole and watching other people die because of a sociopath leaving us there to die. So yeah, I’ve been there before.”
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
C: Looks at the man with contempt, remembering the years he once had to work so hard to provide for his family. He tosses the main a slice of bread and continues on his way
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
C; Sighs and tells him to go jump off the edge of the island and takes another drink.
Drunkard: “Wh-WHAT did yoush say to mesh?” He says while getting up drunken
C: Sweeps his foot under the mans legs making him fall on his face, then kicks him once before leaving.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
C: He looks at it for a while before losing interest.”Why would I wear a woman necklace” he Jokes to him self before returning to his daily activity’s
Other notes Sorry for the random bolding. Its been rather wonkey with my writer program lately
IGN: brodiegray
Real-Life Age: 14
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): lol_turtle
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is forcing roleplay on to someone else. By doing this you are ruining roleplay for them because it doesn't give that person an opportunity to roleplay. For example
*Stabs in throat* Where it should be *Swipes with throat with sword*
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using OOC information for RP use. For example if someone tells you about stuff in the forums or something, you can't know it in roleplay.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplay is where you play a specific role in a scene(s). Roleplay is also used on games as well as acts/plays and other related stuff. Roleplay can also be defined as playing a role in a society to help it.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: You can only cause the death of another character with special permission from that character's player.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: If you need help from players / admins.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes, I do.
Who is allowed to use magic?: You cannot start with magic, but you have to learn it from the Academy. Mages
Who are the Fallen?: The Fallen (Or the Medori) are people who have been seperated from other civilisations for awhile, although their island started moving towards another civilisation.
When and how did our current government come to be?: The Government came to power in 169 A.R. They have a branched system with 3 different Masters, Master of the Coin, Master of the Sword and Master of Words. They also have a leader.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: The Order of Aradin are protectors of the Government who are decreasing in numbers over time. They are also a religious group and follow a church.
What are the Net and Essence? The Essence and the Net are if you fall off, you are caught by a magical Net which will place you back on one of the islands. If you have 3 levels on you, you keep your items.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: I have played on one of your previous servers and I have played a lot of other RP servers. I know roleplay pretty well and I was introduced to Minecraft roleplay by my friend (Skyeti/Jaeden111).
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: I played in BoH as I was told about it by Jaeden (Skyeti) so I joined it, although you guys switched to Shrines of the Ancients which I decided to stop roleplaying and focus on school. I have also played a really popular roleplay server which has died now, it was called Warstorm. There are also a lot of other ones but I forgot now.
Character Information
Name: Zachery Hyde (Zac for short)
Age: 20
Class: swordsman (but later wants to become a mage, he will ditch using swords and stuff as he would pledge to not as he would become a mage, to prevent being too op.)
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: chancellory
Physical description: Brown hair with a clean shaven beard. He has a fairly clean face, not too many scars and other facial features. He also has a red scarf with a brown shirt and a slightly lighter vest and brown brown pants.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.): Zachery lived in the Capitol for most of his life. He lived with a slightly poor family, only trying to focus on his education, but couldn't do a lot. Although Zachery's father tried to teach him to be a fighter, as at the time, more guards were being needed. His father tried to teach him with the sword. Zachery did excel but not a fast rate that his father was happy with. Then his mother tried to teach him to be a gentlemen. Zachery didn't really excel at that either. When he was about 15, he set out to find his own home and get his own job. He got a job as a guard at the time, just barely. Although 3 years after he started settling in with his job, at 18, Zachery found out about magic, reading about it in novels. He thought it looked interesting and wanted to try it. But he found out it was no easy task, so it was either take it, or leave it. He was sure he would get another oppoturnity at this, but he would stay a guard at the moment. At 20, he found out about the Academy's reopening, he had read that it taught about magic and such. Which was what he wanted to pursue. ((I read about the Academy's reopening on the forums))
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): He wishes to finally become a mage and pledge to not use swords once and if he becomes a mage.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Zachery is a strong guy, both physically and mentally. He also knows how to keep the place nice and tidy.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): He doesn't know about helping people that much, such as, he would help himself over others, he is ignorant. He also is afraid of falling off, even if he is caught by the net.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): Not at the moment.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Zachery passes the men, being a guard himself, he questions them in his mind about what they are doing.
Although Zachery doesn't really care and keeps patrolling.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
"I already have enough riches, I don't need your petty little quest".
"It will reward you".
"I told you, I am fine, now get out of my way".
Zachery pushes the man aside and keeps walking.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Zachery, being ignorant as he is. Passes the man without noticing. But later passing him again, noticing but trying to ignore him as Zachery doesn't want to pass out any change at the moment.
"Change sir?"
*Zachery keeps walking*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
*Zachery stands up from the chair, trying to look as big as he can for intimidation*
Zachery says to the man with a booming voice "What did you say, can you repeat that?" he continues "I didn't hear it over your petty little mumbling."
The man decides to back off, but Zachery walks over, holds him by the collar and chucks him across the table, smashing some glasses. Leaving him there.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
"That's a nice necklace miss, you might want to hold on to it, there are bad people around here." Zachery says as he patrols the streets.
*Zachery keeps walking*
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Not at the moment thank you
Other notes:
Umm, I hope I did good :D. Also Skyeti (Jaeden111) told me to join, so I did, apparently you guys needed more players.