OOC -
IGN: stev_med
Gender: male
Age: 20
Have you read the rules: yes frugal stuff and whatnot
Have you read the lore: yes
RP Expierence: been on a bunch of fallour rp servers such as sins of the father and the vault rp to name a few, i also rped in the mmos swtor and swg
Fallout Expierence: fallout 3 and new vegas
Define Meta Gaming: using ooc knowledge in character
Define Power Gaming: useing overpowers abilities to force rp onto other. IE trying to kill someone off without their concent.
IC -
Name: Tresk
Gender: m
Age: 20
Race: human
Appearence: white tattered jacket jeans with kneepads black undershirt
Signifying Traits: stutters while talking, kind, tattered white jacket
Signifying Skills: scavenging, pistols, lockpicking (good with his hands basically)
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
(40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10) Strength- 4 Perception- 5 Endurance- 5 Charisma- 8 Intelligence- 7 Agility- 5 Luck- 6
RP example
The location is an old world highway road with Tresk Bolt-Eye the caravan guard and Canon the Caravan owner. They are traveling north to trade their wares to towns that are along this highway. Tresk is tending to the wagon checking the supplies while he is traveling and tinkering with a small puzzle box with a small lock keeping it shut that is supposed to have a treasure inside of it. He starts shaking the box to his ear when Canon starts talking to him.
"Son if you keep shaking it like that you will break whatever is inside that thing. If you really wanted to open that you need a bobby pin." He hands Tresk a bobby pin saying "try this might help you." "T-thank you Canon but d-do you even think whatever is in t-this little thing is even w-worth the effort I-I mean what if it is j-just a little rock or s-something lame." Tresk replies. "Well it is not really about getting what is inside that is interesting, it is about knowing that nothing will stop you at achieving your goal be it opening a small box or making your fortune in this world isn't that right Bolt." Bolt grumbles and states "if it was me trying to open that stupid piece of junk I would just use a hammer and smash it open." Canon chuckles while replying "Well if you did that you would just destroy whatever was inside and lose out of what could be worth a fortune that is why Tresk is going to open that box right son." "I-I’m trying but this thing just will not op..." a click is heard in the box as Tresk finally opens the box. The other two group together and look inside. Canon grabs the box looking inside stating "Tresk you might have just giving us a unique opportunity to earn a lot of caps." "W-what do you p-plan to d-do?" he says. Canon looks at the two and says "Boys we are going south, very south..."
New setting is in an old worn out prewar building in central Florida. While walking through the building Canon, Bolt-eye, and Tresk stumble upon a locked door and try to find a way inside.
"Hey son this doors locked try to pick its lock." Canon says. "Ok b-but this w-will takes some t-time." Tresk tries to pick the lock but then trips a failsafe mechanism. "Oh c-crap." Alarms start to ring in the whole area and protectrons appears from nowhere in the room and start attacking. Canon runs for cover with Tresk shouting "Bolt cover us!" "W-what should w-we do Canon!" "Keep your head down and aim for their backs or their heads!" Bolt surprisingly calm and in his element begins to laugh like a madman going "HA HA HA THAT ALL YOU GOT YOU ROBOT SOBS YOU CAN'T KIL ME!" "B-bolts insane isn't he?" says Tresk. "Yes he is but one thing is that he is good at what he does and nothing stops him." They finish off all the protectrons but one and Bolt runs up to it with his brass knuckles "This one’s going out the old fashion way!" When the dust settles from the battle the door clicks open by it revealing a brand new top of the line weapon. Upon seeing it Canon and Bolt look each other in the eye and state at the same time "Mine!"
Biography
Background
Life story
Early life
Tresk was born in a small farming community near the florida coastline. He was a middle son of 7 brothers and sisters. Due to being the youngest he endured hardships from his older sibleings who played jokes on him. His older brothers and sisters always working with his parents on the families ranch. He helped worked growing crops that had minimal exposure to radition useing local purified water. While doing his chores he learned basic farming skills and how to recognized good crops for deadly ones. His family made caps and a living by selling and trading their crops to caravanas traveling along the coastline. While young he always loved it when the traders came by to his area where they would tell stories of the travels they have made and the sights they have seen. One evening he heard a tale from a trader who spoke of an island way to the north. This land was old and had buildings that reached the heavens. He spoke of longlost treasures from a forgoten time and the secret dangers that lurked in the shadows. He knew that one day he would venture out and find these secrets.
Teens
Tresk always loved exploreing the area around his home but one day he ventured too far off his families property. While searching an abandoned ranch house out in the wastes. He was too busy being distracted trying to pick the lock in home to hear more people enter the house. The poeple who came in were slavers. Tresk finally finished picking the lock as the slavers entered the room he was in. Once the spotted him they attacked and even though he fought back trying to defend himself one slaver struck a large blow to his head causing him to pass out. He was tossed into a cart and was brought northward to the slavers base.
When he awake he was in a slave pen in an unknown region of the wastes. He found that his head was wrapped in old clothing and that a colar was placed around his neck. Scared and frightened he tried to escape but failed due to the surrounding fense. The others in the pen attempted to calm him down cause the slavers would beat anyone who tried anything funny. When he was finally calm and tried to speak he realized he could no longer speak normally and stuttered over his words. He continues this habit to today. Latter on he was finally sold to a caravan trader who took pity in this young lad and could use a hand with his caravan. The trader who bought his treated him with respect, kindness, and tought him how to be a successful caravan worker. The collar was removed shortly after the purchase with the option for him to leave but he decided to stay with the trader. He learned much from the trader and was trained in ways to defend himself by the guard the trader employed.
One day after a few years the trader traveled with his caravan back to Tresks hometown and he was finally reunited with his family. He Spent a good while working back on the farm and enjoying his families company and his time home. During a harse winter food and money was growing scarse and his family had to try to think of ways to earn some more caps. Tresk came up with an idea to travel north to the land that the trader told him of in his youth. He set out to head north along the coast to find this strange land and send back riches for his family to live off of.
Young adult
Today he has ventured north from his coastal family home in Florida along the coast out to find treasures to send home to his town. Along his journy he has seen many unique places and people living near the waters. He saw small wandering tribes who craft unique weapons, clothing and untilities. He spent time and told stories with the tribels who lead him to see new places. One of his favorite stops was a newly recovered and operational nuka cola factory that sold carbinated nuka to caravans. The further north he traveled the more he heard stories of the island filled with large buildings and treaures and lost technologies from the past and where to keep heading. Knowing of the grand potential to find new wonders he kept following the coast until he could finally see the tall buildings on the horizon. He finally reached the land he heard as a child and now he has his sights set at fortune. Who and what did he find on the island well i do not want to spoil the suprise so please stay tuned to find out!
Denied.Your bio still doesn't make sense. If your character is 31 and lived before the bombs dropped, that doesn't conform to the lore of this server and the actual game as well. You can make him a ghoul, or you can have him be born AFTER the war.
Denied. Your RP isn't RP! It's a story! Also you have no last name. Your grammar is messed up as well.
I must be confused then you said look at what others did for their rp example i did what Echinda_uno did in their app like you said i should. Have you ever read a book that is how doulogue works in novels. Can you tell me how you expect rp example to be? also why do i need a last name that was never a requirement?
I must be confused then you said look at what others did for their rp example i did what Echinda_uno did in their app like you said i should. Have you ever read a book that is how doulogue works in novels. Can you tell me how you expect rp example to be? also why do i need a last name that was never a requirement?
Also i tried fixeing some of the grammer
Try writing your application in Microsoft Word, then use spell check on it. Copy and paste it into the reply box.
Also, if you read my application, I put in a letter. Try doing that in your rp or bio. It makes it much more appealing and interesting.
Try adding my on skype stev. I might be able to help you a bit. But I will NOT write it for you.
Thanks!
-Katie Park
Try writing your application in Microsoft Word, then use spell check on it. Copy and paste it into the reply box.
Also, if you read my application, I put in a letter. Try doing that in your rp or bio. It makes it much more appealing and interesting.
Try adding my on skype stev. I might be able to help you a bit. But I will NOT write it for you.
Thanks!
-Katie Park
lol i did do that and we were talking about rp examples not bio. I appreciate the offer what is your skype?
Denied. However, thank you for getting the RP correct XD. Your bio is a little to short and you missed some of the rules. Your power-gaming def is a little of as well.
is (- Tell me how frugal you really are in your application) the rule i missed because i didn't really get that one
and ya geas my bio is a little short ill try to fix that up tomarrow, it's hard coming up with that stuff at 3 am :3
and it's been awile since i heard power gaming mind telling me what it is so i can fix it?
and really you have got to be kidding me no one started spamming me hate measages, well .... it has only been one day :3
and btw when you say you missed a rule can you please say wich one?
Edited Biography: early life:
russell was boren in the year 2056, boston, massachusetts.it was a hard time to live as gas prices sky rocketed and most of the middle class citicens could not aford to own a car. with all the talk of a nuclear war russell's family bought a spot in a vault and hoped that they will never have to use it. when russell was 4 he moved to california and vault tech was able to move their bought out room to CA.
russell lived a fairly normal life but the fact of people not liking him because he was a furry. russell's family didn't worie about the war that much just keapt an eye on the news to see if they should more to their vault.At the age of 16 russell felt that he should join the army and help defend the same country that he had lived in for the last 16 years. once done with high school russell moved back to massachusetts to attend collage. at the age of 21 he enrolled in the army he traveled back home to say bye to his family if anthing bad happens to him in war.
in the army:
as a soldier in the United States army he was deployed at the alasken front to defend the US borders from the chines. the conditions in alaska were horibal to the soldiers. secretly the US govenment were working on a way to make people more able to withstand the bitter cold. Russell the only soldier that was able to stand the cold and still fight, was asked to volunteer for the expearament, Russell accepted to help his fellow soldiers and to repell the chineas off US soil. the expearament was to be seacret, only Russell and the government knew about the expearament. The way they planed to create a soldier able to stand the cold was to mix human DNA and the DNA from a fox. most of the time russell was in a cryo-sleep pod to not take any risk of his body rejecting the changed parts. before they were able to finish testing and deploy the new soldier to the front line, the great war begain russell was the only one in the testing facilite the scieticte evacuated and went in hidding in other vaults but the vaults weren't sealed and they all died. due to the shifting of the earth's crust the cryo-pod russell was in broke and freezed russell to the part of not being able to even dream. over 200 years the reactor in the testing facility was shifted by under ground quakes and started a meltdown. during the melt down hight levels of radiation started to leak out and trigered the emergency system in the cryo-pod and woke russell up. bairly making it out russell finds him self unconscious out in the middle of the wastes exposed to any creature that might dewll out side. this is where his story of life in the wastes starts out.
then agean it's 1 am so miss spells are do to tiredness and i just remembered i have CSTs tomarrow and didnt study 0_o
well thats one part to fixing up my app. please let this be good :/
is (- Tell me how frugal you really are in your application) the rule i missed because i didn't really get that one
and ya geas my bio is a little short ill try to fix that up tomarrow, it's hard coming up with that stuff at 3 am :3
and it's been awile since i heard power gaming mind telling me what it is so i can fix it?
and really you have got to be kidding me no one started spamming me hate measages, well .... it has only been one day :3
k nvm ill try to fix it now
power gaming- when to set a specific goal to make your char. very powerful in specific spot. or when you force another person in to a rp part where the don't have say
First, I will not tell you the rule you missed.
Second, improve your grammar in your application.
Third, how the heck did you miss the lore? READ THE POST.
Fourth, powergaming definition was fixed.
Fifth, denied. Your bio is still short and contains grammatical errors, and quite a few of them too.
First, I will not tell you the rule you missed.
Second, improve your grammar in your application.
Third, how the heck did you miss the lore? READ THE POST.
Fourth, powergaming definition was fixed.
Fifth, denied. Your bio is still short and contains grammatical errors, and quite a few of them too.
k hope i have time after school and fix all of the errors
wait is "server information" the lore?
and how many paragraphs do you recomend for the bio?
Also by the way, if anyone wants me to make a skin for them, I'll be happy to do it. :3
Just add me on skype and say
"Skin Request" in your contact request.
Skype - katieparkmccreeper
I feel for ya, this is my first time RPing as well lol.
Unfortunately, denied. You missed part of the rules. Also, your character description isn't detailed enough, add more. Traits and skills are too short as well. Bio's very short too.
Good RP though!
A small part of the lore is listed in the server information section.
The rest can be found under the different factions, just click the spoiler button to read them.
As for your Bio, it should have at least two paragraphs, if you are still unsure of how long it has to be, try reading other people's accepted applications, or read dualmitten's example which can be found under the format of the Beta application.
Hope that helped, if you have any more questions, feel free to ask.
what does - Tell me how frugal you really are in your application mean looks like the rule i missed because i have no idea what it means
OOC -
IGN: stev_med
Gender: male
Age: 20
Have you read the rules: yes frugal stuff and whatnot
Have you read the lore: yes
RP Expierence: been on a bunch of fallour rp servers such as sins of the father and the vault rp to name a few, i also rped in the mmos swtor and swg
Fallout Expierence: fallout 3 and new vegas
Define Meta Gaming: using ooc knowledge in character
Define Power Gaming: useing overpowers abilities to force rp onto other. IE trying to kill someone off without their concent.
IC -
Name: Tresk
Gender: m
Age: 20
Race: human
Appearence: white tattered jacket jeans with kneepads black undershirt
Signifying Traits: stutters while talking, kind, tattered white jacket
Signifying Skills: scavenging, pistols, lockpicking (good with his hands basically)
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
(40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10) Strength- 4 Perception- 5 Endurance- 5 Charisma- 8 Intelligence- 7 Agility- 5 Luck- 6
RP example
Setting: scavenging a gas station
Tresk: Hums a tune he heard on radio while picking a lock to a lockbox
Banging heard outside and soft chatter
Tresk: (worried) d-don't move i-i will sh-shoot!
Stranger: Ha like hell you will (turns out to be a raider)
Tresk: (thinks to himself) I am so screwed (sets up landmindes near door)
Tresk: Y-you w-want me c-come get me! (hides behind counter)
Raider number 1: Hey noobie go open the door this guy is so scaried he can't even talk (one raider open door and BOOM raider parts everywhere)
Raider number 1: ! lets toast this ass! (throws grenade through window) (grenade blows up other landmine filling room with smoke)
Tresk (couphing) I-i c-can't see anything (raiders walk in and fires randomly at the two)
Raider: (blood scream) aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh (shot in chest twice)
Tresk: S-surrender and y-you will live (raider laughes and pulls out flamethrower) (flamethrower fires over desk but hits gas pipe and backfires incinerating raider)
Tresk: T-that was interesting...
Rp example style 2 The location is an old world highway road with Tresk Bolt-Eye the caravan guard and Canon the Caravan owner. They are traveling north to trade their wares to towns that are along this highway. Tresk is tending to the wagon checking the supplies while he is traveling and tinkering with a small puzzle box with a small lock keeping it shut that is supposed to have a treasure inside of it. He starts shaking the box to his ear when Canon starts talking to him.
"Son if you keep shaking it like that you will break whatever is inside that thing. If you really wanted to open that you need a bobby pin." He hands Tresk a bobby pin saying "try this might help you." "T-thank you Canon but d-do you even think whatever is in t-this little thing is even w-worth the effort I-I mean what if it is j-just a little rock or s-something lame." Tresk replies. "Well it is not really about getting what is inside that is interesting, it is about knowing that nothing will stop you at achieving your goal be it opening a small box or making your fortune in this world isn't that right Bolt." Bolt grumbles and states "if it was me trying to open that stupid piece of junk I would just use a hammer and smash it open." Canon chuckles while replying "Well if you did that you would just destroy whatever was inside and lose out of what could be worth a fortune that is why Tresk is going to open that box right son." "I-I’m trying but this thing just will not op..." a click is heard in the box as Tresk finally opens the box. The other two group together and look inside. Canon grabs the box looking inside stating "Tresk you might have just giving us a unique opportunity to earn a lot of caps." "W-what do you p-plan to d-do?" he says. Canon looks at the two and says "Boys we are going south, very south..."
New setting is in an old worn out prewar building in central Florida. While walking through the building Canon, Bolt-eye, and Tresk stumble upon a locked door and try to find a way inside.
"Hey son this doors locked try to pick its lock." Canon says. "Ok b-but this w-will takes some t-time." Tresk tries to pick the lock but then trips a failsafe mechanism. "Oh c-crap." Alarms start to ring in the whole area and protectrons appears from nowhere in the room and start attacking. Canon runs for cover with Tresk shouting "Bolt cover us!" "W-what should w-we do Canon!" "Keep your head down and aim for their backs or their heads!" Bolt surprisingly calm and in his element begins to laugh like a madman going "HA HA HA THAT ALL YOU GOT YOU ROBOT SOBS YOU CAN'T KIL ME!" "B-bolts insane isn't he?" says Tresk. "Yes he is but one thing is that he is good at what he does and nothing stops him." They finish off all the protectrons but one and Bolt runs up to it with his brass knuckles "This one’s going out the old fashion way!" When the dust settles from the battle the door clicks open by it revealing a brand new top of the line weapon. Upon seeing it Canon and Bolt look each other in the eye and state at the same time "Mine!"
Biography
Background
Life story
Early life
Tresk was born in a small farming community near the florida coastline. He was a middle son of 7 brothers and sisters. Due to being the youngest he endured hardships from his older sibleings who played jokes on him. His older brothers and sisters always working with his parents on the families ranch. He helped worked growing crops that had minimal exposure to radition useing local purified water. While doing his chores he learned basic farming skills and how to recognized good crops for deadly ones. His family made caps and a living by selling and trading their crops to caravanas traveling along the coastline. While young he always loved it when the traders came by to his area where they would tell stories of the travels they have made and the sights they have seen. One evening he heard a tale from a trader who spoke of an island way to the north. This land was old and had buildings that reached the heavens. He spoke of longlost treasures from a forgoten time and the secret dangers that lurked in the shadows. He knew that one day he would venture out and find these secrets.
Teens
Tresk always loved exploreing the area around his home but one day he ventured too far off his families property. While searching an abandoned ranch house out in the wastes. He was too busy being distracted trying to pick the lock in home to hear more people enter the house. The poeple who came in were slavers. Tresk finally finished picking the lock as the slavers entered the room he was in. Once the spotted him they attacked and even though he fought back trying to defend himself one slaver struck a large blow to his head causing him to pass out. He was tossed into a cart and was brought northward to the slavers base.
When he awake he was in a slave pen in an unknown region of the wastes. He found that his head was wrapped in old clothing and that a colar was placed around his neck. Scared and frightened he tried to escape but failed due to the surrounding fense. The others in the pen attempted to calm him down cause the slavers would beat anyone who tried anything funny. When he was finally calm and tried to speak he realized he could no longer speak normally and stuttered over his words. He continues this habit to today. Latter on he was finally sold to a caravan trader who took pity in this young lad and could use a hand with his caravan. The trader who bought his treated him with respect, kindness, and tought him how to be a successful caravan worker. The collar was removed shortly after the purchase with the option for him to leave but he decided to stay with the trader. He learned much from the trader and was trained in ways to defend himself by the guard the trader employed.
One day after a few years the trader traveled with his caravan back to Tresks hometown and he was finally reunited with his family. He Spent a good while working back on the farm and enjoying his families company and his time home. During a harse winter food and money was growing scarse and his family had to try to think of ways to earn some more caps. Tresk came up with an idea to travel north to the land that the trader told him of in his youth. He set out to head north along the coast to find this strange land and send back riches for his family to live off of.
Young adult
Today he has ventured north from his coastal family home in Florida along the coast out to find treasures to send home to his town. Along his journy he has seen many unique places and people living near the waters. He saw small wandering tribes who craft unique weapons, clothing and untilities. He spent time and told stories with the tribels who lead him to see new places. One of his favorite stops was a newly recovered and operational nuka cola factory that sold carbinated nuka to caravans. The further north he traveled the more he heard stories of the island filled with large buildings and treaures and lost technologies from the past and where to keep heading. Knowing of the grand potential to find new wonders he kept following the coast until he could finally see the tall buildings on the horizon. He finally reached the land he heard as a child and now he has his sights set at fortune. Who and what did he find on the island well i do not want to spoil the suprise so please stay tuned to find out!
IGN: stev_med
Gender: male
Age: 20
Have you read the rules: yes frugal stuff and whatnot
Have you read the lore: yes
RP Expierence: been on a bunch of fallour rp servers such as sins of the father and the vault rp to name a few, i also rped in the mmos swtor and swg
Fallout Expierence: fallout 3 and new vegas
Define Meta Gaming: using ooc knowledge in character
Define Power Gaming: useing overpowers abilities to force rp onto other. IE trying to kill someone off without their concent.
IC -
Name: Tresk
Gender: m
Age: 20
Race: human
Appearence: white tattered jacket jeans with kneepads black undershirt
Signifying Traits: stutters while talking, kind, tattered white jacket
Signifying Skills: scavenging, pistols, lockpicking (good with his hands basically)
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
(40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10)
Strength- 4
Perception- 5
Endurance- 5
Charisma- 8
Intelligence- 7
Agility- 5
Luck- 6
RP example
The location is an old world highway road with Tresk Bolt-Eye the caravan guard and Canon the Caravan owner. They are traveling north to trade their wares to towns that are along this highway. Tresk is tending to the wagon checking the supplies while he is traveling and tinkering with a small puzzle box with a small lock keeping it shut that is supposed to have a treasure inside of it. He starts shaking the box to his ear when Canon starts talking to him.
"Son if you keep shaking it like that you will break whatever is inside that thing. If you really wanted to open that you need a bobby pin." He hands Tresk a bobby pin saying "try this might help you." "T-thank you Canon but d-do you even think whatever is in t-this little thing is even w-worth the effort I-I mean what if it is j-just a little rock or s-something lame." Tresk replies. "Well it is not really about getting what is inside that is interesting, it is about knowing that nothing will stop you at achieving your goal be it opening a small box or making your fortune in this world isn't that right Bolt." Bolt grumbles and states "if it was me trying to open that stupid piece of junk I would just use a hammer and smash it open." Canon chuckles while replying "Well if you did that you would just destroy whatever was inside and lose out of what could be worth a fortune that is why Tresk is going to open that box right son." "I-I’m trying but this thing just will not op..." a click is heard in the box as Tresk finally opens the box. The other two group together and look inside. Canon grabs the box looking inside stating "Tresk you might have just giving us a unique opportunity to earn a lot of caps." "W-what do you p-plan to d-do?" he says. Canon looks at the two and says "Boys we are going south, very south..."
New setting is in an old worn out prewar building in central Florida. While walking through the building Canon, Bolt-eye, and Tresk stumble upon a locked door and try to find a way inside.
"Hey son this doors locked try to pick its lock." Canon says. "Ok b-but this w-will takes some t-time." Tresk tries to pick the lock but then trips a failsafe mechanism. "Oh c-crap." Alarms start to ring in the whole area and protectrons appears from nowhere in the room and start attacking. Canon runs for cover with Tresk shouting "Bolt cover us!" "W-what should w-we do Canon!" "Keep your head down and aim for their backs or their heads!" Bolt surprisingly calm and in his element begins to laugh like a madman going "HA HA HA THAT ALL YOU GOT YOU ROBOT SOBS YOU CAN'T KIL ME!" "B-bolts insane isn't he?" says Tresk. "Yes he is but one thing is that he is good at what he does and nothing stops him." They finish off all the protectrons but one and Bolt runs up to it with his brass knuckles "This one’s going out the old fashion way!" When the dust settles from the battle the door clicks open by it revealing a brand new top of the line weapon. Upon seeing it Canon and Bolt look each other in the eye and state at the same time "Mine!"
Biography
Background
Life story
Early life
Tresk was born in a small farming community near the florida coastline. He was a middle son of 7 brothers and sisters. Due to being the youngest he endured hardships from his older sibleings who played jokes on him. His older brothers and sisters always working with his parents on the families ranch. He helped worked growing crops that had minimal exposure to radition useing local purified water. While doing his chores he learned basic farming skills and how to recognized good crops for deadly ones. His family made caps and a living by selling and trading their crops to caravanas traveling along the coastline. While young he always loved it when the traders came by to his area where they would tell stories of the travels they have made and the sights they have seen. One evening he heard a tale from a trader who spoke of an island way to the north. This land was old and had buildings that reached the heavens. He spoke of longlost treasures from a forgoten time and the secret dangers that lurked in the shadows. He knew that one day he would venture out and find these secrets.
Teens
Tresk always loved exploreing the area around his home but one day he ventured too far off his families property. While searching an abandoned ranch house out in the wastes. He was too busy being distracted trying to pick the lock in home to hear more people enter the house. The poeple who came in were slavers. Tresk finally finished picking the lock as the slavers entered the room he was in. Once the spotted him they attacked and even though he fought back trying to defend himself one slaver struck a large blow to his head causing him to pass out. He was tossed into a cart and was brought northward to the slavers base.
When he awake he was in a slave pen in an unknown region of the wastes. He found that his head was wrapped in old clothing and that a colar was placed around his neck. Scared and frightened he tried to escape but failed due to the surrounding fense. The others in the pen attempted to calm him down cause the slavers would beat anyone who tried anything funny. When he was finally calm and tried to speak he realized he could no longer speak normally and stuttered over his words. He continues this habit to today. Latter on he was finally sold to a caravan trader who took pity in this young lad and could use a hand with his caravan. The trader who bought his treated him with respect, kindness, and tought him how to be a successful caravan worker. The collar was removed shortly after the purchase with the option for him to leave but he decided to stay with the trader. He learned much from the trader and was trained in ways to defend himself by the guard the trader employed.
One day after a few years the trader traveled with his caravan back to Tresks hometown and he was finally reunited with his family. He Spent a good while working back on the farm and enjoying his families company and his time home. During a harse winter food and money was growing scarse and his family had to try to think of ways to earn some more caps. Tresk came up with an idea to travel north to the land that the trader told him of in his youth. He set out to head north along the coast to find this strange land and send back riches for his family to live off of.
Young adult
Today he has ventured north from his coastal family home in Florida along the coast out to find treasures to send home to his town. Along his journy he has seen many unique places and people living near the waters. He saw small wandering tribes who craft unique weapons, clothing and untilities. He spent time and told stories with the tribels who lead him to see new places. One of his favorite stops was a newly recovered and operational nuka cola factory that sold carbinated nuka to caravans. The further north he traveled the more he heard stories of the island filled with large buildings and treaures and lost technologies from the past and where to keep heading. Knowing of the grand potential to find new wonders he kept following the coast until he could finally see the tall buildings on the horizon. He finally reached the land he heard as a child and now he has his sights set at fortune. Who and what did he find on the island well i do not want to spoil the suprise so please stay tuned to find out!
Denied. Your RP isn't RP! It's a story! Also you have no last name. Your grammar is messed up as well.
Denied.Your bio still doesn't make sense. If your character is 31 and lived before the bombs dropped, that doesn't conform to the lore of this server and the actual game as well. You can make him a ghoul, or you can have him be born AFTER the war.
I must be confused then you said look at what others did for their rp example i did what Echinda_uno did in their app like you said i should. Have you ever read a book that is how doulogue works in novels. Can you tell me how you expect rp example to be? also why do i need a last name that was never a requirement?
Also i tried fixeing some of the grammer
Try writing your application in Microsoft Word, then use spell check on it. Copy and paste it into the reply box.
Also, if you read my application, I put in a letter. Try doing that in your rp or bio. It makes it much more appealing and interesting.
Try adding my on skype stev. I might be able to help you a bit. But I will NOT write it for you.
Thanks!
-Katie Park
lol i did do that and we were talking about rp examples not bio. I appreciate the offer what is your skype?
katieparkmccreeper
:3
is (- Tell me how frugal you really are in your application) the rule i missed because i didn't really get that one
and ya geas my bio is a little short ill try to fix that up tomarrow, it's hard coming up with that stuff at 3 am :3
and it's been awile since i heard power gaming mind telling me what it is so i can fix it?
and really you have got to be kidding me no one started spamming me hate measages, well .... it has only been one day :3
and btw when you say you missed a rule can you please say wich one?
Edited Biography:
early life:
russell was boren in the year 2056, boston, massachusetts.it was a hard time to live as gas prices sky rocketed and most of the middle class citicens could not aford to own a car. with all the talk of a nuclear war russell's family bought a spot in a vault and hoped that they will never have to use it. when russell was 4 he moved to california and vault tech was able to move their bought out room to CA.
russell lived a fairly normal life but the fact of people not liking him because he was a furry. russell's family didn't worie about the war that much just keapt an eye on the news to see if they should more to their vault.At the age of 16 russell felt that he should join the army and help defend the same country that he had lived in for the last 16 years. once done with high school russell moved back to massachusetts to attend collage. at the age of 21 he enrolled in the army he traveled back home to say bye to his family if anthing bad happens to him in war.
in the army:
as a soldier in the United States army he was deployed at the alasken front to defend the US borders from the chines. the conditions in alaska were horibal to the soldiers. secretly the US govenment were working on a way to make people more able to withstand the bitter cold. Russell the only soldier that was able to stand the cold and still fight, was asked to volunteer for the expearament, Russell accepted to help his fellow soldiers and to repell the chineas off US soil. the expearament was to be seacret, only Russell and the government knew about the expearament. The way they planed to create a soldier able to stand the cold was to mix human DNA and the DNA from a fox. most of the time russell was in a cryo-sleep pod to not take any risk of his body rejecting the changed parts. before they were able to finish testing and deploy the new soldier to the front line, the great war begain russell was the only one in the testing facilite the scieticte evacuated and went in hidding in other vaults but the vaults weren't sealed and they all died. due to the shifting of the earth's crust the cryo-pod russell was in broke and freezed russell to the part of not being able to even dream. over 200 years the reactor in the testing facility was shifted by under ground quakes and started a meltdown. during the melt down hight levels of radiation started to leak out and trigered the emergency system in the cryo-pod and woke russell up. bairly making it out russell finds him self unconscious out in the middle of the wastes exposed to any creature that might dewll out side. this is where his story of life in the wastes starts out.
then agean it's 1 am so miss spells are do to tiredness and i just remembered i have CSTs tomarrow and didnt study 0_o
well thats one part to fixing up my app. please let this be good :/
k nvm ill try to fix it now
power gaming- when to set a specific goal to make your char. very powerful in specific spot. or when you force another person in to a rp part where the don't have say
and now to see what rule i missed .....
First, I will not tell you the rule you missed.
Second, improve your grammar in your application.
Third, how the heck did you miss the lore? READ THE POST.
Fourth, powergaming definition was fixed.
Fifth, denied. Your bio is still short and contains grammatical errors, and quite a few of them too.
k hope i have time after school and fix all of the errors
wait is "server information" the lore?
and how many paragraphs do you recomend for the bio?
I think your the only Ghoul
Also, just finished this skin based on armor from stalker, can i use this on the server or is it out of context?
Just add me on skype and say
"Skin Request" in your contact request.
Skype - katieparkmccreeper
Thanks!
- Katie Park
I think we have more than one ghoul, not sure though. It'll be interesting to RP as them
Your character shouldn't have armor on, I don't think. They should also have a face XD
I feel for ya, this is my first time RPing as well lol.
Unfortunately, denied. You missed part of the rules. Also, your character description isn't detailed enough, add more. Traits and skills are too short as well. Bio's very short too.
Good RP though!
what does
- Tell me how frugal you really are in your application
mean looks like the rule i missed because i have no idea what it means
We can't tell you.
Look up the definition of frugal and answer the question.
Thank you for understanding
IGN: stev_med
Gender: male
Age: 20
Have you read the rules: yes frugal stuff and whatnot
Have you read the lore: yes
RP Expierence: been on a bunch of fallour rp servers such as sins of the father and the vault rp to name a few, i also rped in the mmos swtor and swg
Fallout Expierence: fallout 3 and new vegas
Define Meta Gaming: using ooc knowledge in character
Define Power Gaming: useing overpowers abilities to force rp onto other. IE trying to kill someone off without their concent.
IC -
Name: Tresk
Gender: m
Age: 20
Race: human
Appearence: white tattered jacket jeans with kneepads black undershirt
Signifying Traits: stutters while talking, kind, tattered white jacket
Signifying Skills: scavenging, pistols, lockpicking (good with his hands basically)
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
(40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10)
Strength- 4
Perception- 5
Endurance- 5
Charisma- 8
Intelligence- 7
Agility- 5
Luck- 6
RP example
Setting: scavenging a gas station
Tresk: Hums a tune he heard on radio while picking a lock to a lockbox
Banging heard outside and soft chatter
Tresk: (worried) d-don't move i-i will sh-shoot!
Stranger: Ha like hell you will (turns out to be a raider)
Tresk: (thinks to himself) I am so screwed (sets up landmindes near door)
Tresk: Y-you w-want me c-come get me! (hides behind counter)
Raider number 1: Hey noobie go open the door this guy is so scaried he can't even talk (one raider open door and BOOM raider parts everywhere)
Raider number 1: ! lets toast this ass! (throws grenade through window) (grenade blows up other landmine filling room with smoke)
Tresk (couphing) I-i c-can't see anything (raiders walk in and fires randomly at the two)
Raider: (blood scream) aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh (shot in chest twice)
Tresk: S-surrender and y-you will live (raider laughes and pulls out flamethrower) (flamethrower fires over desk but hits gas pipe and backfires incinerating raider)
Tresk: T-that was interesting...
Rp example style 2
The location is an old world highway road with Tresk Bolt-Eye the caravan guard and Canon the Caravan owner. They are traveling north to trade their wares to towns that are along this highway. Tresk is tending to the wagon checking the supplies while he is traveling and tinkering with a small puzzle box with a small lock keeping it shut that is supposed to have a treasure inside of it. He starts shaking the box to his ear when Canon starts talking to him.
"Son if you keep shaking it like that you will break whatever is inside that thing. If you really wanted to open that you need a bobby pin." He hands Tresk a bobby pin saying "try this might help you." "T-thank you Canon but d-do you even think whatever is in t-this little thing is even w-worth the effort I-I mean what if it is j-just a little rock or s-something lame." Tresk replies. "Well it is not really about getting what is inside that is interesting, it is about knowing that nothing will stop you at achieving your goal be it opening a small box or making your fortune in this world isn't that right Bolt." Bolt grumbles and states "if it was me trying to open that stupid piece of junk I would just use a hammer and smash it open." Canon chuckles while replying "Well if you did that you would just destroy whatever was inside and lose out of what could be worth a fortune that is why Tresk is going to open that box right son." "I-I’m trying but this thing just will not op..." a click is heard in the box as Tresk finally opens the box. The other two group together and look inside. Canon grabs the box looking inside stating "Tresk you might have just giving us a unique opportunity to earn a lot of caps." "W-what do you p-plan to d-do?" he says. Canon looks at the two and says "Boys we are going south, very south..."
New setting is in an old worn out prewar building in central Florida. While walking through the building Canon, Bolt-eye, and Tresk stumble upon a locked door and try to find a way inside.
"Hey son this doors locked try to pick its lock." Canon says. "Ok b-but this w-will takes some t-time." Tresk tries to pick the lock but then trips a failsafe mechanism. "Oh c-crap." Alarms start to ring in the whole area and protectrons appears from nowhere in the room and start attacking. Canon runs for cover with Tresk shouting "Bolt cover us!" "W-what should w-we do Canon!" "Keep your head down and aim for their backs or their heads!" Bolt surprisingly calm and in his element begins to laugh like a madman going "HA HA HA THAT ALL YOU GOT YOU ROBOT SOBS YOU CAN'T KIL ME!" "B-bolts insane isn't he?" says Tresk. "Yes he is but one thing is that he is good at what he does and nothing stops him." They finish off all the protectrons but one and Bolt runs up to it with his brass knuckles "This one’s going out the old fashion way!" When the dust settles from the battle the door clicks open by it revealing a brand new top of the line weapon. Upon seeing it Canon and Bolt look each other in the eye and state at the same time "Mine!"
Biography
Background
Life story
Early life
Tresk was born in a small farming community near the florida coastline. He was a middle son of 7 brothers and sisters. Due to being the youngest he endured hardships from his older sibleings who played jokes on him. His older brothers and sisters always working with his parents on the families ranch. He helped worked growing crops that had minimal exposure to radition useing local purified water. While doing his chores he learned basic farming skills and how to recognized good crops for deadly ones. His family made caps and a living by selling and trading their crops to caravanas traveling along the coastline. While young he always loved it when the traders came by to his area where they would tell stories of the travels they have made and the sights they have seen. One evening he heard a tale from a trader who spoke of an island way to the north. This land was old and had buildings that reached the heavens. He spoke of longlost treasures from a forgoten time and the secret dangers that lurked in the shadows. He knew that one day he would venture out and find these secrets.
Teens
Tresk always loved exploreing the area around his home but one day he ventured too far off his families property. While searching an abandoned ranch house out in the wastes. He was too busy being distracted trying to pick the lock in home to hear more people enter the house. The poeple who came in were slavers. Tresk finally finished picking the lock as the slavers entered the room he was in. Once the spotted him they attacked and even though he fought back trying to defend himself one slaver struck a large blow to his head causing him to pass out. He was tossed into a cart and was brought northward to the slavers base.
When he awake he was in a slave pen in an unknown region of the wastes. He found that his head was wrapped in old clothing and that a colar was placed around his neck. Scared and frightened he tried to escape but failed due to the surrounding fense. The others in the pen attempted to calm him down cause the slavers would beat anyone who tried anything funny. When he was finally calm and tried to speak he realized he could no longer speak normally and stuttered over his words. He continues this habit to today. Latter on he was finally sold to a caravan trader who took pity in this young lad and could use a hand with his caravan. The trader who bought his treated him with respect, kindness, and tought him how to be a successful caravan worker. The collar was removed shortly after the purchase with the option for him to leave but he decided to stay with the trader. He learned much from the trader and was trained in ways to defend himself by the guard the trader employed.
One day after a few years the trader traveled with his caravan back to Tresks hometown and he was finally reunited with his family. He Spent a good while working back on the farm and enjoying his families company and his time home. During a harse winter food and money was growing scarse and his family had to try to think of ways to earn some more caps. Tresk came up with an idea to travel north to the land that the trader told him of in his youth. He set out to head north along the coast to find this strange land and send back riches for his family to live off of.
Young adult
Today he has ventured north from his coastal family home in Florida along the coast out to find treasures to send home to his town. Along his journy he has seen many unique places and people living near the waters. He saw small wandering tribes who craft unique weapons, clothing and untilities. He spent time and told stories with the tribels who lead him to see new places. One of his favorite stops was a newly recovered and operational nuka cola factory that sold carbinated nuka to caravans. The further north he traveled the more he heard stories of the island filled with large buildings and treaures and lost technologies from the past and where to keep heading. Knowing of the grand potential to find new wonders he kept following the coast until he could finally see the tall buildings on the horizon. He finally reached the land he heard as a child and now he has his sights set at fortune. Who and what did he find on the island well i do not want to spoil the suprise so please stay tuned to find out!