Was I actually accepted, because I haven't been white-listed yet. I'm not trying to be rude, I'm genuinely confused.
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"People... of the universe! Tonight... is the night.. when the skies will open, and spray forth a divine hand with pointed finger! And it will say... everybody... you're not just a duck... YOU ARE HUMAN! YOU ARE HUMAAAAN!!!" -Thurston Moore
Was I actually accepted, because I haven't been white-listed yet. I'm not trying to be rude, I'm genuinely confused.
Oops, I'm sorry for the problem! It seems like Aljoford forgot to whitelist you... hah, you are accepted. ^ - ^ For the bio, I would keep it out of Slyverant, but still on- their world. If you get that, hehe.
Oops, I'm sorry for the problem! It seems like Aljoford forgot to whitelist you... hah, you are accepted. ^ - ^ For the bio, I would keep it out of Slyverant, but still on- their world. If you get that, hehe.
Hahaha, thanks! I changed my bio to fit in better, and it is now centered far from Slyverant.
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"People... of the universe! Tonight... is the night.. when the skies will open, and spray forth a divine hand with pointed finger! And it will say... everybody... you're not just a duck... YOU ARE HUMAN! YOU ARE HUMAAAAN!!!" -Thurston Moore
Username: OddBob Age: 16 RP Experience: Many different games, Guildwars, World of Warcraft, Realms, and some others. My experience with RP as far as Minecraft.. this would be my first time. Anything else you want to note?: No thanks. Skype?: Yet to make one.
--- In Character:
Name: Vrael Oakensteel Age: 749 Race: Elf Gender: Male Biography:
If I need to add anything, or something doens't quite fit your idea of the land/lore.. PLEASE let me know.
I don't feel like I really need to type out 500 paragraphs. I just need to show the general idea of him, where he came from or how he acts.
Vrael grew up mostly in the forests. When he was younger he was taken..(not..literally "taken". Trees don't have arms. That would be rediculous.) by the forest. He saw it for it's beauty, and innocence. The animals were also a play in his moving. He seemed to have this odd attraction toward animals since he was old enough to open his arms and hug his overly large cat. As Vrael got older.. he moved completely out of the city, leaving his parents behind as they managed a small store selling Elvish breads. Vrael traveled for many-many nights, and days. He crossed many forests, a small desert and a snowy wasteland.. Then, suddenly the attitude changed all together. There were trees again. The land stretched out as far as the elvish eye could see. In the distance.. he could see a large city. One he had never seen before, nor heard of. He narrowed his eyes, jumped off the small hill he was standing on.. and started walking. Hoping that his hunting skills would be of use among the strangers, he held his head high as he made his way toward the city of Elysium.
On a different note. ~ Vrael, as he was growing up, had small contact with magic users.. even if most elves were generally able to use it.. it did not interest him. Most of the Magic users in the elvish community tended to stay away from the "Poorer" areas of the cities. Hiding away in their towers and burying their noses deep in ther books. Vrael.. he was simple, he wanted to use his hands, and make things from the forest around him. Tech didn't interest him.. hence why he was called a hermit.. avoiding the world..and making his own. in his own time.
Vrael had a soft face when he was younger, his skin was fair and his hair was a lovely bright silver.. his mouth as smooth, and his cheekbones were only slightly pointed, giving his cheeks a slight indent to them..but as he slowly got older his hair changed to an odd light brown, and his cheekbones bacame less shaped and more flat. His eyes grew a dark emerald. He stood just over the average Human height. 6'3. He wore a long green overcoat sort of clothing. It was extended down his back and down to his knees. He wore elfvish styled leather boots that reached almost to his knees, and an Elvish mail chest guard under his tunic. Then the lovely green hood placed on his head. His ears poking out of the sides. He carried a bow with elvish designs on it, and a longsword at his hip. All fastoned to his body by tight leather straps around his chest, and waist. Movements would be swift, and deliberate. Obviously well thought out, and quick. ((Need to add anything else?))
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There will be no room for the future, if you hold on to the past.
I wouldn't state that your character is "The best there is" it makes us think you are powergamy. I would add some more server lore as well. Which means, no orcs, Elysium is its own thing, orcs do not exist in our world.
Username- empaul47
Age-15
Rp Experience-Im a good role player and have played on many rp servers
Anyhting else you want to note- i will be on most of the time and like to build structures for role play experience
Skype- yes i do have a skype but i dont use it as offtenas i used to bu my username for it is empaul47 the same as mc username
-In Charecter
Name- Aesis Steelblade
Age-20
Race- Human
Gender- Male
Bio-Aesis was a young man living with his mother, father, and 2 sisters.
they lived on the outskirts of a small villiage that they usually got there food and resources from. But one day while Aesis was going out to get food for diner he heard a rucus going on in the villiage. He decided to investigate, and what he saw was horrible. An enderman was choking one of the villiagers. Aesis reacted fast and grapped a log off the woodsmans stand and threw it at the enderman. What happened next Aesis would have never of guessed. The enderman grabbed hold of aesis and took him to an unknown realm. It was all black and for miles he saw nothing. He was touched on the forehead by the enderman and heard, " You have made a mistake in attacking me but soon i may regret what im about to do to you." He pulled out a book and gave it to Aesis, " Here this will help you in the world that you come from."
Next thing he knew Aesis was back in his room wacking up from a strange dream. But when he looked in his hands there it was the same book the enderman gave him. He opened it up and inside were strange words he wasnt familiar with it even though he could almost speak all the tongues of his world (tongues is another word for langueages if you didnt know.) Aesis didnt know what the enderman meant by he might regret what hes going t do to him but he was sure that meant the enderman was helping him he wasnt sure if this was good or bad. A few days later there was a terrible storm and it destroyed Aesis' home with his family. Aesis was out taking a walk while it happened so he wasnt there to be killed. After that he decided to leave the villiage and go to new land. He soo n found a region where there were cities but a rumor told him about a cursed ountian he shouldn't go to. Unfortunately Aesis was daring and foolish so he would end up going there anyway. But what really intrigued him was one night in his new home he heard a howling of the night and it sounded like a piggish scream, he didnt know what to think of it but thought it was a pig. But the next morning at his doorstep was a golden nugget. He thought someone was being generouse but then he noticed it stunk of death.
Now Aesis is leaving the town for a sudden incline in enderman appearance in the area. He has now gone to Elyisum to see if there is good land or houses. What he does is up to him and what that book does is still a mysterie.
Appearence-Aesis is a young looking man with bright orange hair and he wairs a black robe with a hood. He has no facial hair and no scars but in his eye you can sense something unnatural.
Mage Application-
Username- empaul47
Anything else you want to note- well i wont be op with magic and say im granted immortality and freakin kill everything bomb or anything like that but the magik aesis will use will grant him some very minor abilities like sensing someones chakra or aura type of thing but no strength or anything.
In Charecter-
Name- Aesis Steelblade
Age- 20
Race- Human
How did they learn magic- In my bio i got a mysterious book with wierd writing well aesis will soon learn how to unlock the magik by findin a skilled mage and learning the tongue of magic or a mystical language.
What will they do with magic- Aesis will try to find uses of dark magic and put it to good use, either that or help people wiht normal magic if dark isnt allowed.
ps- i hope i get axcepted cause all the other ones ive tried in the last week all stink and this looks good so i hope this is good to youre likng
ChrisOwnsYou - I don't think I could approve your mage-app unless you added much more! I do however would accept your character application - although Elysium has been only up for, just recently, five years, I don't mind the easy mistakes. If you want another go at the Mage App, go for it! There are unlimited tries, so don't worry.
empaul47 - I would try a new approach at a story, one with less Enders, one with less non-existent dark magic, and one with more care. By care I mean... a little more attention to spell checking and such. I suggest Google Chrome, or Firefox- or - just searching up something that will proofread. It'll make the whole thing much more impressive, thank you. Feel free to try again!
Username:95noodles Age:15 RP Experience: (( Don't be afraid if this is your first time! ))Some servers a long time ago that have been shut down, So I hope to join this one :3 Anything else you want to note?:Nope Skype?: (( This is optional, but it's for the future- if you wish to be in a skype chat. :3 ))
--- In Character:
Name:Hayden James Age:17 Race: (( If you are not a human or born near Elysium , please include why your character is there! ))Human Gender:Male Biography: (( This should be at least a paragraph or two long! I suggest you include their history, personality, skills, and such. Also note that you start out with NOTHING- ^^; Most people would live in the slums on Elyisum too.)) Hayden grew up wishing he was a dwarf, he would try to look like one and act like one. As silly as it seems he has a lot in common with them. He loves mining and inventing. When his parents sent him off at 15 (At least no murdered parents backstory ) he went on a journey to find the perfect dwarven city. He was quickly denied entry to 3 of these cities but he determination (and stuborness) led him to go on. He soon learned about the great city of Elysium and its support for inventors and such. He swiftly found his way there and settled down. The only problem is that he could only afford a house in the slums. After a year of hardship he decided to move away when he owed money (and was beaten the out of). He plans to make enough money to return but with great wealth. Appearance: (( A description of your character, please! Pictures of your skin is optional. )) Haydens appearence is a white male with fitting goggles and a lab coat.
does that mean I am accepted? If so it says I am not whitelisted
It means, if you plan to be a mage - no, you are not accepted. If you want to give up your magical abilities though, I can accept you without any hassle of reapplying and such.
Event today at 7pm EST! Time might be changed later.
Love Festival, as the name suggests, is festival about celebrating the love between couples and family. Many have forgotten why or how it the holiday started up. But it is rumored that the spirit of Saint Valentinus returns to the Sylverant in search of something.
jaydog21 - You wouldn't be able to start with anything, I hope... but ah, accepted.
Oops, I'm sorry for the problem! It seems like Aljoford forgot to whitelist you... hah, you are accepted. ^ - ^ For the bio, I would keep it out of Slyverant, but still on- their world. If you get that, hehe.
Thanks
Pancham, Breloom, Mankey
Pancham, Breloom, Mankey
Hahaha, thanks! I changed my bio to fit in better, and it is now centered far from Slyverant.
In the wilds, yeah... away from any current towns or homes.
@ Stereo_head - Lovely ^^ Hope to see you on the server soon!
Whitelist Report -
Cr4pSnip3r - Accepted. Halfings, yayyyyyyy!
Username: OddBob
Age: 16
RP Experience: Many different games, Guildwars, World of Warcraft, Realms, and some others. My experience with RP as far as Minecraft.. this would be my first time.
Anything else you want to note?: No thanks.
Skype?: Yet to make one.
--- In Character:
Name: Vrael Oakensteel
Age: 749
Race: Elf
Gender: Male
Biography:
If I need to add anything, or something doens't quite fit your idea of the land/lore.. PLEASE let me know.
I don't feel like I really need to type out 500 paragraphs. I just need to show the general idea of him, where he came from or how he acts.
Vrael grew up mostly in the forests. When he was younger he was taken..(not..literally "taken". Trees don't have arms. That would be rediculous.) by the forest. He saw it for it's beauty, and innocence. The animals were also a play in his moving. He seemed to have this odd attraction toward animals since he was old enough to open his arms and hug his overly large cat. As Vrael got older.. he moved completely out of the city, leaving his parents behind as they managed a small store selling Elvish breads. Vrael traveled for many-many nights, and days. He crossed many forests, a small desert and a snowy wasteland.. Then, suddenly the attitude changed all together. There were trees again. The land stretched out as far as the elvish eye could see. In the distance.. he could see a large city. One he had never seen before, nor heard of. He narrowed his eyes, jumped off the small hill he was standing on.. and started walking. Hoping that his hunting skills would be of use among the strangers, he held his head high as he made his way toward the city of Elysium.
On a different note. ~ Vrael, as he was growing up, had small contact with magic users.. even if most elves were generally able to use it.. it did not interest him. Most of the Magic users in the elvish community tended to stay away from the "Poorer" areas of the cities. Hiding away in their towers and burying their noses deep in ther books. Vrael.. he was simple, he wanted to use his hands, and make things from the forest around him. Tech didn't interest him.. hence why he was called a hermit.. avoiding the world..and making his own. in his own time.
Appearance:
http://24.media.tumblr.com/dcb8f25442a237cd8a6f3f718c3ebf03/tumblr_mgh5cmBT7q1s2dmloo1_r1_400.jpg <---younger
Vrael had a soft face when he was younger, his skin was fair and his hair was a lovely bright silver.. his mouth as smooth, and his cheekbones were only slightly pointed, giving his cheeks a slight indent to them..but as he slowly got older his hair changed to an odd light brown, and his cheekbones bacame less shaped and more flat. His eyes grew a dark emerald. He stood just over the average Human height. 6'3. He wore a long green overcoat sort of clothing. It was extended down his back and down to his knees. He wore elfvish styled leather boots that reached almost to his knees, and an Elvish mail chest guard under his tunic. Then the lovely green hood placed on his head. His ears poking out of the sides. He carried a bow with elvish designs on it, and a longsword at his hip. All fastoned to his body by tight leather straps around his chest, and waist. Movements would be swift, and deliberate. Obviously well thought out, and quick. ((Need to add anything else?))
Whitelist Report
OddBob - Accepted! ^ u ^ Welcome aboard!
Now to be whitelisted! 8D
May have made a Typo. I'm going to take a guess that the username: is my Minecraft name. ;o In that case~
Username: Odd_Bob
Sorry for the confusion.
Sorry for the delay, you should be added* ^ ^!
Username- empaul47
Age-15
Rp Experience-Im a good role player and have played on many rp servers
Anyhting else you want to note- i will be on most of the time and like to build structures for role play experience
Skype- yes i do have a skype but i dont use it as offtenas i used to bu my username for it is empaul47 the same as mc username
-In Charecter
Name- Aesis Steelblade
Age-20
Race- Human
Gender- Male
Bio-Aesis was a young man living with his mother, father, and 2 sisters.
they lived on the outskirts of a small villiage that they usually got there food and resources from. But one day while Aesis was going out to get food for diner he heard a rucus going on in the villiage. He decided to investigate, and what he saw was horrible. An enderman was choking one of the villiagers. Aesis reacted fast and grapped a log off the woodsmans stand and threw it at the enderman. What happened next Aesis would have never of guessed. The enderman grabbed hold of aesis and took him to an unknown realm. It was all black and for miles he saw nothing. He was touched on the forehead by the enderman and heard, " You have made a mistake in attacking me but soon i may regret what im about to do to you." He pulled out a book and gave it to Aesis, " Here this will help you in the world that you come from."
Next thing he knew Aesis was back in his room wacking up from a strange dream. But when he looked in his hands there it was the same book the enderman gave him. He opened it up and inside were strange words he wasnt familiar with it even though he could almost speak all the tongues of his world (tongues is another word for langueages if you didnt know.) Aesis didnt know what the enderman meant by he might regret what hes going t do to him but he was sure that meant the enderman was helping him he wasnt sure if this was good or bad. A few days later there was a terrible storm and it destroyed Aesis' home with his family. Aesis was out taking a walk while it happened so he wasnt there to be killed. After that he decided to leave the villiage and go to new land. He soo n found a region where there were cities but a rumor told him about a cursed ountian he shouldn't go to. Unfortunately Aesis was daring and foolish so he would end up going there anyway. But what really intrigued him was one night in his new home he heard a howling of the night and it sounded like a piggish scream, he didnt know what to think of it but thought it was a pig. But the next morning at his doorstep was a golden nugget. He thought someone was being generouse but then he noticed it stunk of death.
Now Aesis is leaving the town for a sudden incline in enderman appearance in the area. He has now gone to Elyisum to see if there is good land or houses. What he does is up to him and what that book does is still a mysterie.
Appearence-Aesis is a young looking man with bright orange hair and he wairs a black robe with a hood. He has no facial hair and no scars but in his eye you can sense something unnatural.
Mage Application-
Username- empaul47
Anything else you want to note- well i wont be op with magic and say im granted immortality and freakin kill everything bomb or anything like that but the magik aesis will use will grant him some very minor abilities like sensing someones chakra or aura type of thing but no strength or anything.
In Charecter-
Name- Aesis Steelblade
Age- 20
Race- Human
How did they learn magic- In my bio i got a mysterious book with wierd writing well aesis will soon learn how to unlock the magik by findin a skilled mage and learning the tongue of magic or a mystical language.
What will they do with magic- Aesis will try to find uses of dark magic and put it to good use, either that or help people wiht normal magic if dark isnt allowed.
ps- i hope i get axcepted cause all the other ones ive tried in the last week all stink and this looks good so i hope this is good to youre likng
Whitelist Report - -
ChrisOwnsYou - I don't think I could approve your mage-app unless you added much more! I do however would accept your character application - although Elysium has been only up for, just recently, five years, I don't mind the easy mistakes. If you want another go at the Mage App, go for it! There are unlimited tries, so don't worry.
empaul47 - I would try a new approach at a story, one with less Enders, one with less non-existent dark magic, and one with more care. By care I mean... a little more attention to spell checking and such. I suggest Google Chrome, or Firefox- or - just searching up something that will proofread. It'll make the whole thing much more impressive, thank you. Feel free to try again!
Username:95noodles
Age:15
RP Experience: (( Don't be afraid if this is your first time! ))Some servers a long time ago that have been shut down, So I hope to join this one :3
Anything else you want to note?:Nope
Skype?: (( This is optional, but it's for the future- if you wish to be in a skype chat. :3 ))
--- In Character:
Name:Hayden James
Age:17
Race: (( If you are not a human or born near Elysium , please include why your character is there! ))Human
Gender:Male
Biography: (( This should be at least a paragraph or two long! I suggest you include their history, personality, skills, and such. Also note that you start out with NOTHING- ^^; Most people would live in the slums on Elyisum too.)) Hayden grew up wishing he was a dwarf, he would try to look like one and act like one. As silly as it seems he has a lot in common with them. He loves mining and inventing. When his parents sent him off at 15 (At least no murdered parents backstory ) he went on a journey to find the perfect dwarven city. He was quickly denied entry to 3 of these cities but he determination (and stuborness) led him to go on. He soon learned about the great city of Elysium and its support for inventors and such. He swiftly found his way there and settled down. The only problem is that he could only afford a house in the slums. After a year of hardship he decided to move away when he owed money (and was beaten the out of). He plans to make enough money to return but with great wealth.
Appearance: (( A description of your character, please! Pictures of your skin is optional. )) Haydens appearence is a white male with fitting goggles and a lab coat.
Whitelist Report - -
95noodles - Accepted!
It means, if you plan to be a mage - no, you are not accepted. If you want to give up your magical abilities though, I can accept you without any hassle of reapplying and such.
Event today at 7pm EST! Time might be changed later.