I was thinking... Maybe the server should add a college if it has not already been added. You could do it so that you spend a certain amount of time in college for the degree that you want, and you need these degrees for better jobs, such as doctor and engineer. You could have to spend more time for a doctorate and etc. It could be called Sherlock University, or University of Sherlock. SHERU, or USHER. I could fancy going to the Sherlock Institution of the Medicinal Arts. or SHERMED. Jobs such as Mc. Fatties worker shouldn't require a degree. Overall, this will add a huge amount of realism and role-play to the server, and it would greatly enhance the game-play of this server.
Minecraft Name: NoaMarwhal · Real life age: 13 · How you found this post: I searched for a hardcore whitelist roleplay. · IC Name: (Charectors name) Johnathan Reef · IC Age: Charectors Age) 23 · Gender: Male · Ambitions: To change his life and prove to his family that he isn't a useless waste of space. · Personality: A nice man on the outside, but if you get on his bad side he will ruin your life and the life of your family. · Preferred Job: Board Member of Richard Real Estate. · Biography: John was from a wealthy family. Just out of college John didn't know what he wanted to do with his life. He had never fooled around with girls before. He didn't really want to but one day a girl he thought was smoking offered. He accepted the girl's offer of course, and this went on for a while. His family learned and never talked to him, and whenever the girl needed anything of course he payed for it. But one day he walked into his condo and found the girl with another man! They had a massive fight and she ran off with his credit card. John couldn't get the police to find her and eventually was downsized to an apartment, and this is where his story starts. Disowned by his family and without a job. Now he seeks to find his family and show them all his success.
Minecraft Name: cherren4
· Real life age: (Lieing not taken lightly): 17
· How you found this post: browsing through servers on the minecraft forums
· IC Name: (Charectors name): Steven Coleman
· IC Age: Charectors Age): 37
· Gender: male
· Ambitions: (What does your charector want to do with there life?): Aspire's to recreate his life in a new city with new friends to hang out with
· Personality: (What is your charector like?): Im highly intelligent and respected, but im often disliked by other doctors due to my cockyness
· Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your charector WANTS for a job.): Surgeon
· Biography: (Explain how your charector ended up here. NOTE: All charectors start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.): I was once the top of the food chain; acting as the Head of Surgery at Seattle Grace Hospital. Monday when I arrived home my wife was no where to be found. I found a note on the table saying that she had left me for my best friend. since she was gone I decided to have an early midlife crisis and buy the car I had always wanted. So I went to the bank to see how much money I had and how much I was able to spend. At the bank they told me I was broke. My wife had completely wiped me out. The next day I put in my resignition at work to start at the bottom in a new town. This is how I ended up in Sherlock City.
· Minecraft Name: Nebwr
· Real life age: Gustav
· How you found this post: I looked on the forum and it looked awesome so i wannted to check it out
· IC Name: Nebwr
· IC Age: 20
· Gender: Male
· Ambitions: Proove to his parents that he can live on his own
· Personality: Happy, Cheerful and Caring
· Preferred Job: Nothing much like a technican
This..... Is just awful. There was no effort put into this at all.
You don't have a bio, you put Gustav for your Real life...
Mysticice I would like your advice on my Application I submitted, or anyones advice at that. I was just wondering if I should add to my bio, or change anything that could give me better chances in making it.
Minecraft Name: ndb17915
Real Life Age:11 ( Almost 12)
How I Found This Post: Looking up servers on Google.
IC Name: Jerry
IC Age: 20
Gender: Male
Ambitions: Move to the "Big City"
Personality: Humourous, Cheerful, Cruel at Times
Preferred Job:Waiter
Biography: Jerry is from a small town in the middle of nowhere where everyone is a farmer. Jerry wanted to do more than be a farmer. So Jerry moved to the city where he thought he would be happier.
So just out of curiosity... When you are whitelisted how would you know? Will we get a email saying that we were? (if we provided our email info) or do we have to wait until some large post saying everyone who is white listed.
Also, to the people wanting to know if you were whitelisted; Just be paitent, half of the apps are crappy anyways so it takes some time to sift through the dirt to find the gold...
Oh and I figured since I'm in a criticism type of mood, I might as well point out the bios that don't meet my PERSONAL Opinion. But considering I do writing as a hobby....who cares?:
Minecraft Name: ndb17915
Real Life Age:11 ( Almost 12)
How I Found This Post: Looking up servers on Google.
IC Name: Jerry
IC Age: 20
Gender: Male
Ambitions: Move to the "Big City"
Personality: Humourous, Cheerful, Cruel at Times
Preferred Job:Waiter
Biography: Jerry is from a small town in the middle of nowhere where everyone is a farmer. Jerry wanted to do more than be a farmer. So Jerry moved to the city where he thought he would be happier.
No. Why? You don't explain anything. Think of your bio like an essay(but since your almost 12 I doubt you have done an essay by now so I shall be lenient) Go for 6 sentences MINIMUM. You have a good concept, now expand upon it.
Minecraft Name: cherren4
· Real life age: (Lieing not taken lightly): 17
· How you found this post: browsing through servers on the minecraft forums
· IC Name: (Charectors name): Steven Coleman
· IC Age: Charectors Age): 37
· Gender: male
· Ambitions: (What does your charector want to do with there life?): Aspire's to live a life of wealth
· Personality: (What is your charector like?): Im highly intelligent and respected, but im often disliked by other doctors due to my cockyness
· Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your charector WANTS for a job.): Surgeon
· Biography: (Explain how your charector ended up here. NOTE: All charectors start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.): I was once the top of the food chain; acting as the Head of Surgery at Seattle Grace Hospital. Monday when I arrived home my wife was no where to be found. I found a note on the table saying that she had left me for my best friend. since she was gone I decided to have an early midlife crisis and buy the car I had always wanted. So I went to the bank to see how much money I had and how much I was able to spend. At the bank they told me I was broke. My wife had completely wiped me out. The next day I put in my resignition at work to start at the bottom in a new town. This is how I ended up in Sherlock City.
Your app is fine but since its one of those, "I want to be rich because, etc" apps, Its going to be an example. Why do you want to be rich? Not all doctors are rich, some yes, but not all. Since I have followed this topic, at least half the people who have applied have their ambitions along the lines of "I want to be rich/famous/Minecraft Jackson". But like I said, your app is fine otherwise. For the sake of originality, change the ambition.
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Warning: Personal Opinions in this spoiler, Veiw at your own risk. Don't whine if it seems like I'm harsh. I warned you, deal with it.
Also,
The Supernovas are recruiting, having a friend working on gang skins(a basic design that members can customize as they see fit). If you would like to join this gang, shoot me a pm and we can work out the details. My only prerequisites are common sense and people who follow instructions and give ideas. I don't like sheeple.
Minecraft Name: Stevetta
Real life Age: 12 (I am mature and will not do anything stupid)
How you found this post: On minecraft Forums of course
IC name:Rachel
IC age: 24
Gender: Female
Ambitions: To have a great job, get married and live in nice size house.
Personality: Rachel is kind, and always there with a kind word for all her friends. She hates people that hurt other people, and law breakers.
Preferred Jobs: Doctor/Surgon or Teacher
Biography: Rachel has just gotten out of college, and is looking for the love of her life. She has decided to move to a big city named Serlock city. There her parents helped her get an apartment and made $100 doing odd jobs. She is ready for the big city life.
So just out of curiosity... When you are whitelisted how would you know? Will we get a email saying that we were? (if we provided our email info) or do we have to wait until some large post saying everyone who is white listed.
Just wondering... Is Sherlock City the capital of the Country? If not, what is? Also, what is the name of the Country? This would really help with Role-Playing.
Minecraft Name: beegle678
· Real life age: 16
· How you found this post: Browsing Minecraft Pc servers
· IC Name: Josh Kuhler
· IC Age: 20
· Gender: Male
· Ambitions: Aspires to be a successful musician but has a good background of IT experience for a back up job.
· Personality: Outgoing but awkward in front of new people, loner,finds it hard to trust new people
· Preferred Job: To be a successful Musician
· Biography: When Josh was a kid his family was poor. His parents would always manipulate him and never let him be himself. His best friend and someone he could always rely on to be there was his pet named Magic. Josh is now in high school going into college and his pet passed away. His parents kicked him out for standing up to his dad for trying to hit beat him up. But now he has new friends that he met in some music classes. He just recently graduated college and moved to a new town leaving behind his friends for a new fresh start and a bright future.
email: [email protected]
Just wondering... Is Sherlock City the capital of the Country? If not, what is? Also, what is the name of the Country? This would really help with Role-Playing.
Well I dont think so because I think the whole server is about sherlock city and they would have to get a lot of staff to make a whole country and to maintain it. So yeah I think unless they did happen to decide to do a whole country they probably say something in the first post hoped I helped a bit.
Well I dont think so because I think the whole server is about sherlock city and they would have to get a lot of staff to make a whole country and to maintain it. So yeah I think unless they did happen to decide to do a whole country they probably say something in the first post hoped I helped a bit.
I don't mean building a whole country. Sherlock City is obviously part of a country. I'm just wondering what that country is, to get an idea. BTW, it mentioned President as a job, hinting that this is a capital.
EDIT: I claim page 12!!!!! :PSherlock? What is your estimated date of opening; and what is your timezone, so I can get a general idea of when to log on? I am so excited for this server!
I count as the original gang right?
I count as the original gang right?
I count as the original gang right?
· Real life age: 13
· How you found this post: I searched for a hardcore whitelist roleplay.
· IC Name: (Charectors name) Johnathan Reef
· IC Age: Charectors Age) 23
· Gender: Male
· Ambitions: To change his life and prove to his family that he isn't a useless waste of space.
· Personality: A nice man on the outside, but if you get on his bad side he will ruin your life and the life of your family.
· Preferred Job: Board Member of Richard Real Estate.
· Biography: John was from a wealthy family. Just out of college John didn't know what he wanted to do with his life. He had never fooled around with girls before. He didn't really want to but one day a girl he thought was smoking offered. He accepted the girl's offer of course, and this went on for a while. His family learned and never talked to him, and whenever the girl needed anything of course he payed for it. But one day he walked into his condo and found the girl with another man! They had a massive fight and she ran off with his credit card. John couldn't get the police to find her and eventually was downsized to an apartment, and this is where his story starts. Disowned by his family and without a job. Now he seeks to find his family and show them all his success.
I believe 100%, but with leniency. Most RP servers aren't nazis for making mistakes, or going OOC for a small period.
· Real life age: (Lieing not taken lightly): 17
· How you found this post: browsing through servers on the minecraft forums
· IC Name: (Charectors name): Steven Coleman
· IC Age: Charectors Age): 37
· Gender: male
· Ambitions: (What does your charector want to do with there life?): Aspire's to recreate his life in a new city with new friends to hang out with
· Personality: (What is your charector like?): Im highly intelligent and respected, but im often disliked by other doctors due to my cockyness
· Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your charector WANTS for a job.): Surgeon
· Biography: (Explain how your charector ended up here. NOTE: All charectors start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.): I was once the top of the food chain; acting as the Head of Surgery at Seattle Grace Hospital. Monday when I arrived home my wife was no where to be found. I found a note on the table saying that she had left me for my best friend. since she was gone I decided to have an early midlife crisis and buy the car I had always wanted. So I went to the bank to see how much money I had and how much I was able to spend. At the bank they told me I was broke. My wife had completely wiped me out. The next day I put in my resignition at work to start at the bottom in a new town. This is how I ended up in Sherlock City.
Email: [email protected]
This..... Is just awful. There was no effort put into this at all.
You don't have a bio, you put Gustav for your Real life...
Real Life Age:11 ( Almost 12)
How I Found This Post: Looking up servers on Google.
IC Name: Jerry
IC Age: 20
Gender: Male
Ambitions: Move to the "Big City"
Personality: Humourous, Cheerful, Cruel at Times
Preferred Job:Waiter
Biography: Jerry is from a small town in the middle of nowhere where everyone is a farmer. Jerry wanted to do more than be a farmer. So Jerry moved to the city where he thought he would be happier.
Lets see...
Parents died?:
Want to be rich?:
Other?:
Also, to the people wanting to know if you were whitelisted; Just be paitent, half of the apps are crappy anyways so it takes some time to sift through the dirt to find the gold...
Oh and I figured since I'm in a criticism type of mood, I might as well point out the bios that don't meet my PERSONAL Opinion. But considering I do writing as a hobby....who cares?:
No. Why? You don't explain anything. Think of your bio like an essay(but since your almost 12 I doubt you have done an essay by now so I shall be lenient) Go for 6 sentences MINIMUM. You have a good concept, now expand upon it.
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Your app is fine but since its one of those, "I want to be rich because, etc" apps, Its going to be an example. Why do you want to be rich? Not all doctors are rich, some yes, but not all. Since I have followed this topic, at least half the people who have applied have their ambitions along the lines of "I want to be rich/famous/Minecraft Jackson". But like I said, your app is fine otherwise. For the sake of originality, change the ambition.
^
Warning: Personal Opinions in this spoiler, Veiw at your own risk. Don't whine if it seems like I'm harsh. I warned you, deal with it.
Also,
The Supernovas are recruiting, having a friend working on gang skins(a basic design that members can customize as they see fit). If you would like to join this gang, shoot me a pm and we can work out the details. My only prerequisites are common sense and people who follow instructions and give ideas. I don't like sheeple.
See you all when the server is up
Real life Age: 12 (I am mature and will not do anything stupid)
How you found this post: On minecraft Forums of course
IC name:Rachel
IC age: 24
Gender: Female
Ambitions: To have a great job, get married and live in nice size house.
Personality: Rachel is kind, and always there with a kind word for all her friends. She hates people that hurt other people, and law breakers.
Preferred Jobs: Doctor/Surgon or Teacher
Biography: Rachel has just gotten out of college, and is looking for the love of her life. She has decided to move to a big city named Serlock city. There her parents helped her get an apartment and made $100 doing odd jobs. She is ready for the big city life.
(My e-mail is [email protected])
Thank you
Large Post.
Which isn't mine.
I can help you with the basics, if you'd like. Send me a PM when you're ready. (If you accept my offer, that is.)
I count as the original gang right?
· Real life age: 16
· How you found this post: Browsing Minecraft Pc servers
· IC Name: Josh Kuhler
· IC Age: 20
· Gender: Male
· Ambitions: Aspires to be a successful musician but has a good background of IT experience for a back up job.
· Personality: Outgoing but awkward in front of new people, loner,finds it hard to trust new people
· Preferred Job: To be a successful Musician
· Biography: When Josh was a kid his family was poor. His parents would always manipulate him and never let him be himself. His best friend and someone he could always rely on to be there was his pet named Magic. Josh is now in high school going into college and his pet passed away. His parents kicked him out for standing up to his dad for trying to hit beat him up. But now he has new friends that he met in some music classes. He just recently graduated college and moved to a new town leaving behind his friends for a new fresh start and a bright future.
email: [email protected]
EDIT: I claim page 12!!!!! :PSherlock? What is your estimated date of opening; and what is your timezone, so I can get a general idea of when to log on? I am so excited for this server!
I count as the original gang right?