· Minecraft Name: Nintendo0o64 · Real life age: 16 · How you found this post: googled minecraft life role play · IC Name: Alan · IC Age: 28 · Gender: male · Ambitions: As a young child he never had anything. He had no role models to look up. But the famous cartel members. He saw what they had gold chains, gold watches, diamond rings and lots and lots of money. So this was his only ambition to be as rich and powerful as them or even richer. · Personality: Ruthless not care or respect for anyone. · Preferred Job: The only job he really knows how to do and make money quick is selling drugs. · Biography: as he crossed the border with his cousin in search for a better live for the both of them border patrol came out of nowhere and shot his cousin dead. Alan hid until they left then went back to see his cousin. in his last moments of live he reached in his pocket and got out 100 dollars and told him to run off anywhere have a better live.
did youread the note? this is only one grade-school paragraph.
do you actually want to get on to the server or do you not really care? (not trying to be rude. legitimate question)
the part you had to expand was not how your cousin died. if i were to be frank i would tell you that no one actually cares. (i dont mean that in a rude way)
let me explain.
you need to expand how you got the place you currently are (the moment you are writing about) and why you got there. why youre going to sherlock city and what are you going to do once youre there?
answer these questions thouroughly and properly in 3-5 college level paragraphs and you will be whitelisted.
Minecraft Name: cmh51392
· Real life age: (Lieing not taken lightly) 12
· How you found this post: I was just browsing the forums
· IC Name: (Charectors name) Judith Asher
· IC Age: Charectors Age) 22
· Gender: Female
· Ambitions: (What does your charector want to do with there life?) To be successful in something.
· Personality: (What is your charector like?) Quiet, keeps to herself. Very street smart. Acts cold to others, but if you become close to her, she opens up. Creative. Deadpan snarker.
· Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your charector WANTS for a job.) Musician or record shop operator.
· Biography: (Explain how your charector ended up here. NOTE: All charectors start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.)
Judith was born to a young, hard working couple, Joan and Maxwell. Because her parents worked all day, they never got time to see her. In fact, she hasn't seen them in at least 14 years. So, she pretty much lived with her uncle, John. Her uncle was a music shop owner, with a collection of all things music. He had instruments, CDs, vinyl records, posters, everything. He was a joker, who always made her smile. She would look forward to going home after school and being able to just relax and zone out. At school, Judith was always behind her classmates, having no idea what to do. People ignored her, but never really bullied her. She was just the quiet one, who ate lunch by herself and never got involved. Even though she was doing terrible, she was pushed to do well by her uncle. He helped her to at least pass her subjects. She was able to get things together around 5th grade and went through her studies, until College arrived…
As that time came, she grew farther from her uncle and got into the wrong crowds. When she was around 18, Judith picked up smoking and hanged around the rejects. She was, officially, a drop-out. She was with the failures, that had no drive to go anywhere in life. They were mostly greasy, moronic boys, who didn't care about others. She forgot about her education and just traveled with them. The boys treated her okay, but like at school, she was still ignored. She was still the quiet one. The last she heard of her uncle, his shop was bankrupt. Judith didn't care, she could just take care of herself. The group that she was in needed food and whatnot, scrapping whatever they could. This went on until she was around 21, then she cracked. She wanted to stop, realizing what she was doing with her life, but she had nowhere to go. In the dark of the night, she ran away from her group, leaving a simple note. Judith wandered the streets, lost. Then, she remembered something, or perhaps someone.
During High School, she had a close friend by the name of Cynthia, who she had almost forgotten by this time. Cynthia was pretty much Judith’s only friend and someone who she trusted greatly on. Looking through her phone, she found the contact and frantically called it. As she dialed, she sat down in a park, on a simple bench. It was autumn, sunset, and it felt freezing. Judith had basic supplies with her; a coat, some food, a backpack, and of course her trusty phone which probably wouldn't last long without a charger anyways. From her experience with the gang, she figured she could survive on this, but not for long. She wanted to go home. After what seemed like hours, Cynthia answered. Immediately Judith broke down, crying. She tried to explain all she could to Cynthia. Cynthia told her that she had an apartment a few blocks away from where she was, and that she should just walk. Judith sprinted to the complex, tears running down onto the sidewalk as she did.
Judith was able to get to the apartment and she was greeted by her long lost friend. Cynthia was glad that her friend was okay, but upset because of what she had been doing. After things settled down, Judith stayed in the apartment, sleeping on the couch. Cynthia had a job, luckily, as a waitress. Judith was able to stay there for a few months, giving her time to relax and figure things out. She finally connected with her uncle, who's shop had gone under. However, he felt happy to be able to talk to his niece, after all these years. Judith found out where her parents were. Her mother had lost her job and was being supported by her dad. Even though she felt horrid about her family, there was nothing she could do. Then, after 3 months, Cynthia told her about Sherlock City. Saying a few goodbyes, Judith went to the city, a hundred dollars in hand, hoping that she can reshape her life.
How is this? I think I worked fairly hard on it, but if you whitelisters want me to modify it (not long enough, too mary-suey, not enough details, etc.) please let me know!
· How you found this post: Searched up minecraft roleplay.
· IC Name: Andrew Ryan
· IC Age: 56
· Gender: Male
· Ambitions: Andrew Ryan dislikes governments of which do not allow people to own their own work so he often speaks out against these governments. He his harsh and not the "Party type" and his past is what forged him into this.
· Preferred Job: He wants to start his old buisness of Ryan Industries, He rose from the slums once and now he wants to do it again, So he can finally retire the correct way.
· Biography: Andrew Ryan was born in the slums of a nearby city, His parents abandoned him in the streets to grow on his own. Luckily he was found by an older man who took Andrew to an orphanage. It was here that he got his name. He spent his infant years of course doing what infants do... Learn. He learned to walk, talk, write, read. He was able to get adopted at age 4 by a younger couple who wished to adopt a child.
For his age he had a higher intelligence than others around him, He attended gradeschool but was smart enough to attend class two grades ahead of his age level. At age 11 he graduated into High school in which he was constantly bullied by others because of his age, but when he was a senior he was able to get multiple Scholarships to any college of his choice. Many years later he was able to walk out of his college with a masters degree and an intelligence far more superior than most his age.
He was able to start his own buisness of construction, he hired a few men, Sent them to be taught by only the best and put them on the worksites to build. After a few years his buisness was more well known than the other big companies around. The construction made by Ryan Industries was superb, rated by critics. He was so successful he himself started another buisness of which they researched into new technologies and studied the unknown. They were even able to obtain some Iridium in which they used to create a more efficient Computer than the others of that time. Ryan was on newspapers, interviews, and was known for his signiture suit of which he had custom made for himself. A yellow three peice suit of which he wore everywhere. Just as he was created a new buisness a bomb went off in one of his top competitor's buildings. Of course Andrew was framed and blamed for this and run out of town. Andrew grabbed what few things he could, he had no time to open his safe and take his money as he snuck out of his tower in his private elevator taking him right down underground of which he escaped from town. He had on him only his suit, some money that he kept in his pockets and his pipe which he kept in his pocket.
He escaped town but didn't have time to think of where he was going to go. So he came to Sherlock city. He knew though he had little. that once again, he could rebuild Ryan Industries into what it once was... He never had friends throught his life, He wished not to rely on others, so now he had no one. He was known in his town for speaking out against the government, refering to them as Parasites. He hated how people could not own their own work he hated the current government. He would run his own country if he could.
- Minecraft Name: Fvpm - Real life age: 17 - How you found this post: Just browsing the minecraft forums - IC Name: Aust Galanodel - IC Age: 22 - Gender: Male - Ambitions: Aust wants to own a business, maybe even starting small, and get a fair amount of money, he might expand the business, and hopefully create a franchise. At the end of his life, he'd like to buy a house in the country, and just relax. - Personality: He is a kind honest, smart man. he tries to be friends with absolutely everybody. He's good with money, very competitive, and extremely ambitious. - Preferred Job: Business owner or manager, or maybe a lawyer. - Biography: Aust was born and raised in the country, far from Sherlock City. His dad was a professor, and his mom was a nurse. He went to a normal elementary school and middle school, and spent his high school years at a boarding school. He graduated with straight As, but not best in his class. He went to a 4 year college, funded by his parents. He came back home and realized that he wouldn't be able to accomplish his goals in the country, so he moved to Sherlock City, with 100 dollars in his hands, he was ready to reach his dreams.
· Minecraft Name: Bladester16
· Real life age: (Lieing not taken lightly) 14
· How you found this post: Minecraft Forums
· IC Name: (Charectors name) Austin Mills
· IC Age: Charectors Age) 20
· Gender: Male
· Ambitions: (What does your charector want to do with there life?) Achieve respect by whatever it takes.
· Personality: (What is your charector like?) Hard to anger, Flexible (personality wise), Happy,
· Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your charector WANTS for a job.) Bounty Hunter
· Biography: (Explain how your charector ended up here. NOTE: All charectors start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.) I was travelling around Minecraftia when someone told me about a city called Sherlock City. I asked him where it was and he pointed. So I grabbed all the thing i could and ran for Sherlock City. Upon arrival I realised i had very low money compared to your average people. With the money i had i was able to get a apartment.
Minecraft Name: emporder
· Real life age: 13
· How you found this post: Looking for a silverfish egg spawner texture pack (from another server)
· IC Name: Markus Good
· IC Age: 27
· Gender: male
· Ambitions: To finally get his dream job of psychology, and lead a normal life.
· Personality: kind but deceiving
· Preferred Job: Pick Pocket
· Biography: Ever since he was young, Markus was fascinated at how things work. He grew up with his dad as a drug dealer and his mom a wh*** ( I don't know if we can swear). Every night before he went to bed, we was abused. One day when he was 13, his dad got caught and his mom pulled away from him. He was never the same. He was going to be sent to a foster family, but he ran away. Living off purely his wits, and the clothes off his back, he started a life in the big city. The modern city. Sherlock City. He now lives his life, a lowly crook. Striving to put an end to the drug deals that ruined his life, and the sex business that took his family away from him, he is an enemy, not only to the police, but the mafia too.Sorry i missed the note
Whitelist Application Minecraft Name: RowanRH · Real life age: 15 · How you found this post: Google searching for interesting minecraft severs · IC Name: Rowan Roth · IC Age: 21 · Gender: Female · Ambitions: none yet · Personality: Cunning and highly intelligent but also a bit absent minded at times, spends most days evading the low and trying not to anger anyone that could cause her trouble, which is exceedingly hard to do for someone with such a sarcastic nature. And she's not afraid to stand up for her beliefs. · Preferred Job: Thief for hire · Biography: At the age of 15 Rowan Roth was disowned by her family solely because she realized she is a lesbian. For the past 6 years she's survived on the world on her own. However being thrown into the world at such a young age,she was forced into taking up a life of thievery. Stealing started off as a nesesity, but now its turned into a passion. Now after spending the last 6 yrs of her life traveling from town to town, city to city, she finds herself in Sherlock City.
Minecraft Name: cmh51392
· Real life age: (Lieing not taken lightly) 12
· How you found this post: I was just browsing the forums
· IC Name: (Charectors name) Judith Asher
· IC Age: Charectors Age) 22
· Gender: Female
· Ambitions: (What does your charector want to do with there life?) To be successful in something.
· Personality: (What is your charector like?) Quiet, keeps to herself. Very street smart. Acts cold to others, but if you become close to her, she opens up. Creative. Deadpan snarker.
· Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your charector WANTS for a job.) Musician or record shop operator.
· Biography: (Explain how your charector ended up here. NOTE: All charectors start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.)
Judith was born to a young, hard working couple, Joan and Maxwell. Because her parents worked all day, they never got time to see her. In fact, she hasn't seen them in at least 14 years. So, she pretty much lived with her uncle, John. Her uncle was a music shop owner, with a collection of all things music. He had instruments, CDs, vinyl records, posters, everything. He was a joker, who always made her smile. She would look forward to going home after school and being able to just relax and zone out. At school, Judith was always behind her classmates, having no idea what to do. People ignored her, but never really bullied her. She was just the quiet one, who ate lunch by herself and never got involved. Even though she was doing terrible, she was pushed to do well by her uncle. He helped her to at least pass her subjects. She was able to get things together around 5th grade and went through her studies, until College arrived…
As that time came, she grew farther from her uncle and got into the wrong crowds. When she was around 18, Judith picked up smoking and hanged around the rejects. She was, officially, a drop-out. She was with the failures, that had no drive to go anywhere in life. They were mostly greasy, moronic boys, who didn't care about others. She forgot about her education and just traveled with them. The boys treated her okay, but like at school, she was still ignored. She was still the quiet one. The last she heard of her uncle, his shop was bankrupt. Judith didn't care, she could just take care of herself. The group that she was in needed food and whatnot, scrapping whatever they could. This went on until she was around 21, then she cracked. She wanted to stop, realizing what she was doing with her life, but she had nowhere to go. In the dark of the night, she ran away from her group, leaving a simple note. Judith wandered the streets, lost. Then, she remembered something, or perhaps someone.
During High School, she had a close friend by the name of Cynthia, who she had almost forgotten by this time. Cynthia was pretty much Judith’s only friend and someone who she trusted greatly on. Looking through her phone, she found the contact and frantically called it. As she dialed, she sat down in a park, on a simple bench. It was autumn, sunset, and it felt freezing. Judith had basic supplies with her; a coat, some food, a backpack, and of course her trusty phone which probably wouldn't last long without a charger anyways. From her experience with the gang, she figured she could survive on this, but not for long. She wanted to go home. After what seemed like hours, Cynthia answered. Immediately Judith broke down, crying. She tried to explain all she could to Cynthia. Cynthia told her that she had an apartment a few blocks away from where she was, and that she should just walk. Judith sprinted to the complex, tears running down onto the sidewalk as she did.
Judith was able to get to the apartment and she was greeted by her long lost friend. Cynthia was glad that her friend was okay, but upset because of what she had been doing. After things settled down, Judith stayed in the apartment, sleeping on the couch. Cynthia had a job, luckily, as a waitress. Judith was able to stay there for a few months, giving her time to relax and figure things out. She finally connected with her uncle, who's shop had gone under. However, he felt happy to be able to talk to his niece, after all these years. Judith found out where her parents were. Her mother had lost her job and was being supported by her dad. Even though she felt horrid about her family, there was nothing she could do. Then, after 3 months, Cynthia told her about Sherlock City. Saying a few goodbyes, Judith went to the city, a hundred dollars in hand, hoping that she can reshape her life.
How is this? I think I worked fairly hard on it, but if you whitelisters want me to modify it (not long enough, too mary-suey, not enough details, etc.) please let me know!
they may not be checking here anymore so you should go post it on their webiste. i posted the link on the page earlier
but it looks spectacular. i would be shocked if you didnt get in.
Ps. maybe write about you getting to sherlock city or how you ended up with only $100 and take off parentheses
Minecraft Name: emporder
· Real life age: 13
· How you found this post: Looking for a silverfish egg spawner texture pack (from another server)
· IC Name: Markus Good
· IC Age: 27
· Gender: male
· Ambitions: To finally get his dream job of psychology, and lead a normal life.
· Personality: kind but deceiving
· Preferred Job: Pick Pocket
· Biography: Ever since he was young, Markus was fascinated at how things work. He grew up with his dad as a drug dealer and his mom a wh*** ( I don't know if we can swear). Every night before he went to bed, we was abused. One day when he was 13, his dad got caught and his mom pulled away from him. He was never the same. He was going to be sent to a foster family, but he ran away. Living off purely his wits, and the clothes off his back, he started a life in the big city. The modern city. Sherlock City. He now lives his life, a lowly crook. Striving to put an end to the drug deals that ruined his life, and the sex business that took his family away from him, he is an enemy, not only to the police, but the mafia too.
Sorry i missed the note
i dont know if youre refering to my note or not. either way i just wanted to say that this looks okay. i think it might have potential. just a couple of tips 1. expand it. not only your biography, but your other answers as well. (Ex. personality and ambitions shouldn't be one/two-word answers. they should be, at least, a few sentences. 2. fix the grammar (one of the whitelisters pays close attention to grammar) 3. i would suggest taking out the sex references. this isminecraft. you cant actually have sex in vanilla and i doubt this server will make it an option 4. take out the swears and such. (Ex. dont call your mom a *****) im pretty sure that they dont want people to go around swearing, and either way, some people take it as a sign of the level of your maturity.
the people white listing are very observant and they will not whitelist you unless they know that you really!want to be whitelisted. and how they judge this is by the amount of visible effort that you put into your application.
Minecraft Name: cmh51392
· Real life age: (Lieing not taken lightly) 12
· How you found this post: I was just browsing the forums
· IC Name: (Charectors name) Judith Asher
· IC Age: Charectors Age) 22
· Gender: Female
· Ambitions: (What does your charector want to do with there life?) To be successful in something.
· Personality: (What is your charector like?) Quiet, keeps to herself. Very street smart. Acts cold to others, but if you become close to her, she opens up. Creative. Deadpan snarker.
· Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your charector WANTS for a job.) Musician or record shop operator.
· Biography: (Explain how your charector ended up here. NOTE: All charectors start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.)
Judith was born to a young, hard working couple, Joan and Maxwell. Because her parents worked all day, they never got time to see her. In fact, she hasn't seen them in at least 14 years. So, she pretty much lived with her uncle, John. Her uncle was a music shop owner, with a collection of all things music. He had instruments, CDs, vinyl records, posters, everything. He was a joker, who always made her smile. She would look forward to going home after school and being able to just relax and zone out. At school, Judith was always behind her classmates, having no idea what to do. People ignored her, but never really bullied her. She was just the quiet one, who ate lunch by herself and never got involved. Even though she was doing terrible, she was pushed to do well by her uncle. He helped her to at least pass her subjects. She was able to get things together around 5th grade and went through her studies, until College arrived…
As that time came, she grew farther from her uncle and got into the wrong crowds. When she was around 18, Judith picked up smoking and hanged around the rejects. She was, officially, a drop-out. She was with the failures, that had no drive to go anywhere in life. They were mostly greasy, moronic boys, who didn't care about others. She forgot about her education and just traveled with them. The boys treated her okay, but like at school, she was still ignored. She was still the quiet one. The last she heard of her uncle, his shop was bankrupt. Judith didn't care, she could just take care of herself. The group that she was in needed food and whatnot, scrapping whatever they could. This went on until she was around 21, then she cracked. She wanted to stop, realizing what she was doing with her life, but she had nowhere to go. In the dark of the night, she ran away from her group, leaving a simple note. Judith wandered the streets, lost. Then, she remembered something, or perhaps someone.
During High School, she had a close friend by the name of Cynthia, who she had almost forgotten by this time. Cynthia was pretty much Judith’s only friend and someone who she trusted greatly on. Looking through her phone, she found the contact and frantically called it. As she dialed, she sat down in a park, on a simple bench. It was autumn, sunset, and it felt freezing. Judith had basic supplies with her; a coat, some food, a backpack, and of course her trusty phone which probably wouldn't last long without a charger anyways. From her experience with the gang, she figured she could survive on this, but not for long. She wanted to go home. After what seemed like hours, Cynthia answered. Immediately Judith broke down, crying. She tried to explain all she could to Cynthia. Cynthia told her that she had an apartment a few blocks away from where she was, and that she should just walk. Judith sprinted to the complex, tears running down onto the sidewalk as she did.
Judith was able to get to the apartment and she was greeted by her long lost friend. Cynthia was glad that her friend was okay, but upset because of what she had been doing. After things settled down, Judith stayed in the apartment, sleeping on the couch. Cynthia had a job, luckily, as a waitress. Judith was able to stay there for a few months, giving her time to relax and figure things out. She finally connected with her uncle, who's shop had gone under. However, he felt happy to be able to talk to his niece, after all these years. Judith found out where her parents were. Her mother had lost her job and was being supported by her dad. Even though she felt horrid about her family, there was nothing she could do. Then, after 3 months, Cynthia told her about Sherlock City. Saying a few goodbyes, Judith went to the city, a hundred dollars in hand, hoping that she can reshape her life.
How is this? I think I worked fairly hard on it, but if you whitelisters want me to modify it (not long enough, too mary-suey, not enough details, etc.) please let me know!
Perfect, god damn its been a long time since ive seen a decent application, sadly i'm not a whitelister and this wont be looked at. Go to http://sherlockcity.webs.com/ and apply there! Im sure you`ll get in
roleplay experience: a lot of medieval themed minecraft servers and 2 city themed servers
Ic
Name: Duncan Freeman
Age: 27
Gender: male
Ambitions: Become one of the best Freerunners in Sherlock City, become a scientist in mechanical engineering, and get married before he gets to the age of 40
Personality Duncan is a very kind and gentle person, who is very interested in philisophical beliefs, engineering and Writing
Preferred job: scientist and/ or self employed inventor
biography: When Duncan was young he was a very friendly child and had many friends. He was born into a middle class family on the edge of running out of money. When he first had the opportunity to work for money for his family he took the job. The job he had found was working at a small convenience store on the out skirts of the city working at minimum wage. He later had to quit his job to be able to get a higher paying job as a mechanic at the local vehicle garage. As the years went by he became quite skilled at mechanics and other things like cooking. Duncan always dreamed about being one of the most famous freerunners (someone who does parkour) in Sherlock City. After he graduated from high school he went to college in another city called Craft Central for four years. There he learned more about mechanical design and took a few culinary classes to hone his cooking skills. When he came back to Sherlock City he met with his parents and his sister. His parents allowed him to stay at their house for sometime. During this time he worked for the same local garage he worked at as a teenager. After about 4 years of living with his parents he decided to slowly move out of their house to buy an apartment. He finally found an apartment and this is where we leave him...
Thank you for taking the time to read my application.
added: oh btw i found the server while browsing forums for rpg servers
· Minecraft Name: Dewhow123456 · Real life age: (Lieing not taken lightly) 13 · How you found this post: Friend told me about it. · IC Name: (Charectors name) Gigi Anderson · IC Age: Charectors Age) 15 · Gender: Female · Ambitions: (What does your charector want to do with there life?) She wants to become a very popular singer, and also become a famous artist. · Personality: (What is your charector like?) She is shy, quiet, but once you get to know her she is crazy, funny, friendly,smart, and very down to earth. · Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your charector WANTS for a job.) Singer, or maybe a actress, or also would like to be a artist · Biography: (Explain how your charector ended up here. NOTE: All charectors start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.) ~She used to live in a small city, with her family. They weren't the poorest or the richest in the town, but you get my point. She was very liked by everyone, she was the best singer,and artist in the whole school and very popular too, until she got a bad rep. by something that wasn't even her fault. She got kicked out of school, singing classes, and art classes,and everyone disliked her and stayed away from her like she was nothing, and didn't know where else to go. Until her only friend told her about some large city that was in another state,so Gigi decided to take a chance to start off somewhere new, so she packed up and decided to move to Sherlock city. To start new, and try to fulfill her dreams in the city, along with some new friends on the way. There isn't no one or nothing that's gonna bring her down this time, even though the ups or the downs, the good and the bad, she might even make some enemies, but she will always have her friends to back her up.
· Minecraft Name: Dewhow123456 · Real life age: (Lieing not taken lightly) 13 · How you found this post: Friend told me about it. · IC Name: (Charectors name) Gigi Anderson · IC Age: Charectors Age) 15 · Gender: Female · Ambitions: (What does your charector want to do with there life?) She wants to become a very popular singer, and also become a famous artist. · Personality: (What is your charector like?) She is shy, quiet, but once you get to know her she is crazy, funny, friendly,smart, and very down to earth. · Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your charector WANTS for a job.) Singer, or maybe a actress, or also would like to be a artist · Biography: (Explain how your charector ended up here. NOTE: All charectors start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.) ~She used to live in a small city, with her family. They weren't the poorest or the richest in the town, but you get my point. She was very liked by everyone, she was the best singer,and artist in the whole school and very popular too, until she got a bad rep. by something that wasn't even her fault. She got kicked out of school, singing classes, and art classes,and everyone disliked her and stayed away from her like she was nothing, and didn't know where else to go. Until her only friend told her about some large city that was in another state,so Gigi decided to take a chance to start off somewhere new, so she packed up and decided to move to Sherlock city. To start new, and try to fulfill her dreams in the city, along with some new friends on the way. There isn't no one or nothing that's gonna bring her down this time, even though the ups or the downs, the good and the bad, she might even make some enemies, but she will always have her friends to back her up.
if i get accepted i will gladly have her as my adopted kid if the age gets it deniedwell if age gets this one denied because she's a friend of mine
Jesbus...its in one ear and out the other with some people isn't it?
hey lark, i was just wondering about something that isn't getting answered.
if i get whitelisted under one name before the server is up and running, would i be able to get that switched from that name to a different one?
i posted on the site my app, and I'm pretty sure you accepted it (UN: PurpleBaconEater) but my posted IGN was uggymuzzy. which is my brothers account. (i didn't have one of my own at that time) i later got a my own account because i wanted to be able to play with a believable skin and to not have to start over once i eventually got my own account.
Minecraft Name: · Real life age: 14 · How you found this post: Minecraft Forums :3 · IC Name: Mary Jane · IC Age: 21 · Gender: Female · Ambitions: Mary Jane hopes to become successful in life although is often distracted by the simplest things. · Personality: Procrastinates a lot. Laid back, serious when needs to be. · Preferred Job: A writer or company manager. · Biography:Mary Jane hadn't really thought this through, but she was hoping that she'd land that new job up in the big building.
· Minecraft Name: fhamersley · Real life age: (Lying not taken lightly) 13 · How you found this post: Searching for a roleplay city server · IC Name: (Characters name) Eve Mayer · IC Age: (Characters Age) 21 · Gender: Female · Ambitions: (What does your character want to do with there life?) Eve has always dreamed of becoming a doctor. · Personality: (What is your character like?) Eve is hard to get close to because she does not trust easily. Inside, she is kind and caring, but the only Eve the city sees for now is a cautious girl with a fake smile plastered on her face. · Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your character WANTS for a job.) Doctor · Biography: (Explain how your character ended up here. NOTE: All characters start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.) ~Eve used to live in a smaller city, where she and her long-term high school boyfriend of seven years, Jason Tank, were making big plans. Her father was a drunk, and her mother abused her, so her partner was the only good thing about her life. One day, she went over to his house because her mother had attacked her and she found him with another girl. It had been going on for ages. Eve became depressed and small, white, thread-like scars now adorn her arms. She has one, larger scar from when her mother grabbed a knife and cut her from left shoulder to right armpit. So, when she was twenty-one, Eve grabbed a wad of $100 and ran for the subway. She found herself in Sherlock City, and is trying to make a new life.
did youread the note?
this is only one grade-school paragraph.
do you actually want to get on to the server or do you not really care? (not trying to be rude. legitimate question)
the part you had to expand was not how your cousin died. if i were to be frank i would tell you that no one actually cares. (i dont mean that in a rude way)
let me explain.
you need to expand how you got the place you currently are (the moment you are writing about) and why you got there. why youre going to sherlock city and what are you going to do once youre there?
answer these questions thouroughly and properly in 3-5 college level paragraphs and you will be whitelisted.
· Real life age: (Lieing not taken lightly) 12
· How you found this post: I was just browsing the forums
· IC Name: (Charectors name) Judith Asher
· IC Age: Charectors Age) 22
· Gender: Female
· Ambitions: (What does your charector want to do with there life?) To be successful in something.
· Personality: (What is your charector like?) Quiet, keeps to herself. Very street smart. Acts cold to others, but if you become close to her, she opens up. Creative. Deadpan snarker.
· Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your charector WANTS for a job.) Musician or record shop operator.
· Biography: (Explain how your charector ended up here. NOTE: All charectors start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.)
Judith was born to a young, hard working couple, Joan and Maxwell. Because her parents worked all day, they never got time to see her. In fact, she hasn't seen them in at least 14 years. So, she pretty much lived with her uncle, John. Her uncle was a music shop owner, with a collection of all things music. He had instruments, CDs, vinyl records, posters, everything. He was a joker, who always made her smile. She would look forward to going home after school and being able to just relax and zone out. At school, Judith was always behind her classmates, having no idea what to do. People ignored her, but never really bullied her. She was just the quiet one, who ate lunch by herself and never got involved. Even though she was doing terrible, she was pushed to do well by her uncle. He helped her to at least pass her subjects. She was able to get things together around 5th grade and went through her studies, until College arrived…
As that time came, she grew farther from her uncle and got into the wrong crowds. When she was around 18, Judith picked up smoking and hanged around the rejects. She was, officially, a drop-out. She was with the failures, that had no drive to go anywhere in life. They were mostly greasy, moronic boys, who didn't care about others. She forgot about her education and just traveled with them. The boys treated her okay, but like at school, she was still ignored. She was still the quiet one. The last she heard of her uncle, his shop was bankrupt. Judith didn't care, she could just take care of herself. The group that she was in needed food and whatnot, scrapping whatever they could. This went on until she was around 21, then she cracked. She wanted to stop, realizing what she was doing with her life, but she had nowhere to go. In the dark of the night, she ran away from her group, leaving a simple note. Judith wandered the streets, lost. Then, she remembered something, or perhaps someone.
During High School, she had a close friend by the name of Cynthia, who she had almost forgotten by this time. Cynthia was pretty much Judith’s only friend and someone who she trusted greatly on. Looking through her phone, she found the contact and frantically called it. As she dialed, she sat down in a park, on a simple bench. It was autumn, sunset, and it felt freezing. Judith had basic supplies with her; a coat, some food, a backpack, and of course her trusty phone which probably wouldn't last long without a charger anyways. From her experience with the gang, she figured she could survive on this, but not for long. She wanted to go home. After what seemed like hours, Cynthia answered. Immediately Judith broke down, crying. She tried to explain all she could to Cynthia. Cynthia told her that she had an apartment a few blocks away from where she was, and that she should just walk. Judith sprinted to the complex, tears running down onto the sidewalk as she did.
Judith was able to get to the apartment and she was greeted by her long lost friend. Cynthia was glad that her friend was okay, but upset because of what she had been doing. After things settled down, Judith stayed in the apartment, sleeping on the couch. Cynthia had a job, luckily, as a waitress. Judith was able to stay there for a few months, giving her time to relax and figure things out. She finally connected with her uncle, who's shop had gone under. However, he felt happy to be able to talk to his niece, after all these years. Judith found out where her parents were. Her mother had lost her job and was being supported by her dad. Even though she felt horrid about her family, there was nothing she could do. Then, after 3 months, Cynthia told her about Sherlock City. Saying a few goodbyes, Judith went to the city, a hundred dollars in hand, hoping that she can reshape her life.
How is this? I think I worked fairly hard on it, but if you whitelisters want me to modify it (not long enough, too mary-suey, not enough details, etc.) please let me know!
· Real life age: 16
· How you found this post: Searched up minecraft roleplay.
· IC Name: Andrew Ryan
· IC Age: 56
· Gender: Male
· Ambitions: Andrew Ryan dislikes governments of which do not allow people to own their own work so he often speaks out against these governments. He his harsh and not the "Party type" and his past is what forged him into this.
· Preferred Job: He wants to start his old buisness of Ryan Industries, He rose from the slums once and now he wants to do it again, So he can finally retire the correct way.
· Biography: Andrew Ryan was born in the slums of a nearby city, His parents abandoned him in the streets to grow on his own. Luckily he was found by an older man who took Andrew to an orphanage. It was here that he got his name. He spent his infant years of course doing what infants do... Learn. He learned to walk, talk, write, read. He was able to get adopted at age 4 by a younger couple who wished to adopt a child.
For his age he had a higher intelligence than others around him, He attended gradeschool but was smart enough to attend class two grades ahead of his age level. At age 11 he graduated into High school in which he was constantly bullied by others because of his age, but when he was a senior he was able to get multiple Scholarships to any college of his choice. Many years later he was able to walk out of his college with a masters degree and an intelligence far more superior than most his age.
He was able to start his own buisness of construction, he hired a few men, Sent them to be taught by only the best and put them on the worksites to build. After a few years his buisness was more well known than the other big companies around. The construction made by Ryan Industries was superb, rated by critics. He was so successful he himself started another buisness of which they researched into new technologies and studied the unknown. They were even able to obtain some Iridium in which they used to create a more efficient Computer than the others of that time. Ryan was on newspapers, interviews, and was known for his signiture suit of which he had custom made for himself. A yellow three peice suit of which he wore everywhere. Just as he was created a new buisness a bomb went off in one of his top competitor's buildings. Of course Andrew was framed and blamed for this and run out of town. Andrew grabbed what few things he could, he had no time to open his safe and take his money as he snuck out of his tower in his private elevator taking him right down underground of which he escaped from town. He had on him only his suit, some money that he kept in his pockets and his pipe which he kept in his pocket.
He escaped town but didn't have time to think of where he was going to go. So he came to Sherlock city. He knew though he had little. that once again, he could rebuild Ryan Industries into what it once was... He never had friends throught his life, He wished not to rely on others, so now he had no one. He was known in his town for speaking out against the government, refering to them as Parasites. He hated how people could not own their own work he hated the current government. He would run his own country if he could.
War, War Never changes
- Real life age: 17
- How you found this post: Just browsing the minecraft forums
- IC Name: Aust Galanodel
- IC Age: 22
- Gender: Male
- Ambitions: Aust wants to own a business, maybe even starting small, and get a fair amount of money, he might expand the business, and hopefully create a franchise. At the end of his life, he'd like to buy a house in the country, and just relax.
- Personality: He is a kind honest, smart man. he tries to be friends with absolutely everybody. He's good with money, very competitive, and extremely ambitious.
- Preferred Job: Business owner or manager, or maybe a lawyer.
- Biography: Aust was born and raised in the country, far from Sherlock City. His dad was a professor, and his mom was a nurse. He went to a normal elementary school and middle school, and spent his high school years at a boarding school. He graduated with straight As, but not best in his class. He went to a 4 year college, funded by his parents. He came back home and realized that he wouldn't be able to accomplish his goals in the country, so he moved to Sherlock City, with 100 dollars in his hands, he was ready to reach his dreams.
· Real life age: (Lieing not taken lightly) 14
· How you found this post: Minecraft Forums
· IC Name: (Charectors name) Austin Mills
· IC Age: Charectors Age) 20
· Gender: Male
· Ambitions: (What does your charector want to do with there life?) Achieve respect by whatever it takes.
· Personality: (What is your charector like?) Hard to anger, Flexible (personality wise), Happy,
· Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your charector WANTS for a job.) Bounty Hunter
· Biography: (Explain how your charector ended up here. NOTE: All charectors start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.) I was travelling around Minecraftia when someone told me about a city called Sherlock City. I asked him where it was and he pointed. So I grabbed all the thing i could and ran for Sherlock City. Upon arrival I realised i had very low money compared to your average people. With the money i had i was able to get a apartment.
· Real life age: 13
· How you found this post: Looking for a silverfish egg spawner texture pack (from another server)
· IC Name: Markus Good
· IC Age: 27
· Gender: male
· Ambitions: To finally get his dream job of psychology, and lead a normal life.
· Personality: kind but deceiving
· Preferred Job: Pick Pocket
· Biography: Ever since he was young, Markus was fascinated at how things work. He grew up with his dad as a drug dealer and his mom a wh*** ( I don't know if we can swear). Every night before he went to bed, we was abused. One day when he was 13, his dad got caught and his mom pulled away from him. He was never the same. He was going to be sent to a foster family, but he ran away. Living off purely his wits, and the clothes off his back, he started a life in the big city. The modern city. Sherlock City. He now lives his life, a lowly crook. Striving to put an end to the drug deals that ruined his life, and the sex business that took his family away from him, he is an enemy, not only to the police, but the mafia too.Sorry i missed the note
Minecraft Name: RowanRH
· Real life age: 15
· How you found this post: Google searching for interesting minecraft severs
· IC Name: Rowan Roth
· IC Age: 21
· Gender: Female
· Ambitions: none yet
· Personality: Cunning and highly intelligent but also a bit absent minded at times, spends most days evading the low and trying not to anger anyone that could cause her trouble, which is exceedingly hard to do for someone with such a sarcastic nature. And she's not afraid to stand up for her beliefs.
· Preferred Job: Thief for hire
· Biography: At the age of 15 Rowan Roth was disowned by her family solely because she realized she is a lesbian. For the past 6 years she's survived on the world on her own. However being thrown into the world at such a young age,she was forced into taking up a life of thievery. Stealing started off as a nesesity, but now its turned into a passion. Now after spending the last 6 yrs of her life traveling from town to town, city to city, she finds herself in Sherlock City.
they may not be checking here anymore so you should go post it on their webiste. i posted the link on the page earlier
but it looks spectacular. i would be shocked if you didnt get in.
Ps. maybe write about you getting to sherlock city or how you ended up with only $100 and take off parentheses
i dont know if youre refering to my note or not. either way i just wanted to say that this looks okay. i think it might have potential. just a couple of tips
1. expand it. not only your biography, but your other answers as well. (Ex. personality and ambitions shouldn't be one/two-word answers. they should be, at least, a few sentences.
2. fix the grammar (one of the whitelisters pays close attention to grammar)
3. i would suggest taking out the sex references. this is minecraft. you cant actually have sex in vanilla and i doubt this server will make it an option
4. take out the swears and such. (Ex. dont call your mom a *****) im pretty sure that they dont want people to go around swearing, and either way, some people take it as a sign of the level of your maturity.
the people white listing are very observant and they will not whitelist you unless they know that you really!want to be whitelisted. and how they judge this is by the amount of visible effort that you put into your application.
best of luck to everyone
Age: 13 (age rounded off i'm almost 13)
roleplay experience: a lot of medieval themed minecraft servers and 2 city themed servers
Ic
Name: Duncan Freeman
Age: 27
Gender: male
Ambitions: Become one of the best Freerunners in Sherlock City, become a scientist in mechanical engineering, and get married before he gets to the age of 40
Personality Duncan is a very kind and gentle person, who is very interested in philisophical beliefs, engineering and Writing
Preferred job: scientist and/ or self employed inventor
biography: When Duncan was young he was a very friendly child and had many friends. He was born into a middle class family on the edge of running out of money. When he first had the opportunity to work for money for his family he took the job. The job he had found was working at a small convenience store on the out skirts of the city working at minimum wage. He later had to quit his job to be able to get a higher paying job as a mechanic at the local vehicle garage. As the years went by he became quite skilled at mechanics and other things like cooking. Duncan always dreamed about being one of the most famous freerunners (someone who does parkour) in Sherlock City. After he graduated from high school he went to college in another city called Craft Central for four years. There he learned more about mechanical design and took a few culinary classes to hone his cooking skills. When he came back to Sherlock City he met with his parents and his sister. His parents allowed him to stay at their house for sometime. During this time he worked for the same local garage he worked at as a teenager. After about 4 years of living with his parents he decided to slowly move out of their house to buy an apartment. He finally found an apartment and this is where we leave him...
Thank you for taking the time to read my application.
added: oh btw i found the server while browsing forums for rpg servers
· Real life age: (Lieing not taken lightly) 13
· How you found this post: Friend told me about it.
· IC Name: (Charectors name) Gigi Anderson
· IC Age: Charectors Age) 15
· Gender: Female
· Ambitions: (What does your charector want to do with there life?) She wants to become a very popular singer, and also become a famous artist.
· Personality: (What is your charector like?) She is shy, quiet, but once you get to know her she is crazy, funny, friendly,smart, and very down to earth.
· Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your charector WANTS for a job.) Singer, or maybe a actress, or also would like to be a artist
· Biography: (Explain how your charector ended up here. NOTE: All charectors start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.)
~She used to live in a small city, with her family. They weren't the poorest or the richest in the town, but you get my point. She was very liked by everyone, she was the best singer,and artist in the whole school and very popular too, until she got a bad rep. by something that wasn't even her fault. She got kicked out of school, singing classes, and art classes,and everyone disliked her and stayed away from her like she was nothing, and didn't know where else to go. Until her only friend told her about some large city that was in another state,so Gigi decided to take a chance to start off somewhere new, so she packed up and decided to move to Sherlock city. To start new, and try to fulfill her dreams in the city, along with some new friends on the way. There isn't no one or nothing that's gonna bring her down this time, even though the ups or the downs, the good and the bad, she might even make some enemies, but she will always have her friends to back her up.
Well I am kinda done with your ty 3 sentence apps. No effort, no acceptance. Problem? Leave. The door is right there. Have a wonderful day.
hey lark, i was just wondering about something that isn't getting answered.
if i get whitelisted under one name before the server is up and running, would i be able to get that switched from that name to a different one?
i posted on the site my app, and I'm pretty sure you accepted it (UN: PurpleBaconEater) but my posted IGN was uggymuzzy. which is my brothers account. (i didn't have one of my own at that time) i later got a my own account because i wanted to be able to play with a believable skin and to not have to start over once i eventually got my own account.
· Real life age: 14
· How you found this post: Minecraft Forums :3
· IC Name: Mary Jane
· IC Age: 21
· Gender: Female
· Ambitions: Mary Jane hopes to become successful in life although is often distracted by the simplest things.
· Personality: Procrastinates a lot. Laid back, serious when needs to be.
· Preferred Job: A writer or company manager.
· Biography: Mary Jane hadn't really thought this through, but she was hoping that she'd land that new job up in the big building.
· Real life age: (Lying not taken lightly) 13
· How you found this post: Searching for a roleplay city server
· IC Name: (Characters name) Eve Mayer
· IC Age: (Characters Age) 21
· Gender: Female
· Ambitions: (What does your character want to do with there life?) Eve has always dreamed of becoming a doctor.
· Personality: (What is your character like?) Eve is hard to get close to because she does not trust easily. Inside, she is kind and caring, but the only Eve the city sees for now is a cautious girl with a fake smile plastered on her face.
· Preferred Job: (Does not have to be from small list. Almost any modern job excepted. NOTE: This is not your first job. This is what your character WANTS for a job.) Doctor
· Biography: (Explain how your character ended up here. NOTE: All characters start off in a small apartment with 100$. NOTHING ELSE.)
~Eve used to live in a smaller city, where she and her long-term high school boyfriend of seven years, Jason Tank, were making big plans. Her father was a drunk, and her mother abused her, so her partner was the only good thing about her life. One day, she went over to his house because her mother had attacked her and she found him with another girl. It had been going on for ages. Eve became depressed and small, white, thread-like scars now adorn her arms. She has one, larger scar from when her mother grabbed a knife and cut her from left shoulder to right armpit. So, when she was twenty-one, Eve grabbed a wad of $100 and ran for the subway. She found herself in Sherlock City, and is trying to make a new life.