That's pretty good. After the server gets started it will take more than that because more people will be on, but you are accepted, my friend. Also, for those reading this, usually you need an application to get in the clans, but since the applications haven't been made yet, he is in.
IGN: Drdredr1
Age: 20
Role-Play Exp.: a bit
Why Us: My other servers hate me
Time You Can Dedicate: 2-7 hours EST time
IC
Name:Dreydan
Gender: Male
Age: 11
Appearance:a regular person
Fears: Spiders,zombies,creepers,enderman,herobrine
Personality:Nice loyal to assassins
Occupation:Assassins
Skills:farming,swords
RP Example:assassin:i will kill you templar *templar stabs assassin* Drdredr1/me says"You get off of him *I stab templar*
/is it good now?
Back Story:I was a regular person then my father was taken by templars. He was accused for stealing but I was too scared to fight. They tried to take me next my mother cried.Then assassins saved my life.
Then i joined them.But when I was a child The templars hated my family and I was poor. Cause the assassins liked our family.So when our family made a bit of money the templars would take it.
So when they killed my family I wanted revenge
I'll break it down for you drdredr1
edit: this is your old app, your new one isn't as bad
IGN:Drdredr1
Age:11 I'm not saying that there are no mature 11 year olds, but this isn't looking good
Role-Play Exp.:a bunch
Why Us:my peeps in other server gotta hate what the hell
Time You Can Dedicate:ussaly 2-9
IC
Name:Dreydan
Gender:Male
Age:11
Appearance:white,blue eyes,long hair,
Fears:FKING SIDERS
Personality:Cool cool how, be spicific
Occupation:school student 5th grade what would a 5th grader do in a templar assassin war?
Skills:Sliding how would this help, with, anything
Nickname (Optional):None
RP Example (Add Dialogue):IDK If you can't give example RP you probably shouldn't join a RP server
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):WHen i was a small penguin i had a great life until templars took over the artic and i wanted revenge.I got some people and want to help the assaians cause they destroyed the templars in the Artic. and i want to help them. nice server notches for you *facepalm*
Unless you create your own templar city, you cannot be duke of the city. =P But other than that, accepted.
Oh , you also need to change your name... Sorry.
Can I just be some politician in the city with less power then duke, or should I just a Templar leader then?
As for my name I will think about a new one... maybe Marik... or Baris... idk
IGN:Adjns
Age:12
Role play XP:Alot.
Why us:With a server like this i can play assasins creed in minecraft.
Time you can dedicate:Mostly from 2:30-9:00
IC
Name:Adrian
Gender:Male
Age:20
Appearence:White,Brown eyes,Wind swept hair,
Fears:Bandits,Spiders
Personality:Good person,Sorta like the shop keeper that does his work silently but one day pulls a sword and kills everyone none the less still nice
Occupation:Going through tough times with money and trying to pay the bills.
Skills:Bargening,Mining,Building
Nickname:None
Rp Example:
Trader:Hello fine merchant Im looking to buy some bread how much would it cost?
Adrian:Its would be Five gold fine sir!
Trader:Thats a little much how about 2?
Adrian:Thats a little low i'll settle on 4.
Trader:3.
Adrian:Deal.
Backstory:
When i was young my mother was training to be an assasin when she was murdered one day. the killers were trying to steal some food from a farmer and she tried to stop them she was outnumbered and died.
for my father he was working for a polotician when an archers arrow peierced his heart in an attempt to murder the polotician. like all loyal gaurds would do he jumped infront of the arrow and saved the polotician. at the time i was only 5.
my dad was teaching me skills in combat so i grew up almost an orphan and took to selling and trading.
IGN:Adjns
Age:12
Role play XP:Alot.
Why us:With a server like this i can play assasins creed in minecraft.\
Time you can dedicate:Mostly from 2:30-9:00
IC
Name:Adrian
Gender:Male
Age:20
Appearence:White,Brown eyes,Wind swept hair,
Fears:Bandits,Spiders
Personality:Good person,Sorta like the shop keeper that does his work silently but one day pulls a sword and kills everyone none the less still nice
Occupation:Going through tough times with money and trying to pay the bills.
Skills:Bargening,Mining,Building
Nickname:None
Rp Example:
Trader:Hello fine merchant Im looking to buy some bread how much would it cost?
Adrian:Its would be Five gold fine sir!
Trader: thats a little much how about 2?
Adrian:Thats a little low i'll settle on 4.
Trader:3.
Adrian:Deal.
Backstory:
When i was young the templars took my mother when she was selling she tried bargening for more money then they thought she was asking for too much they lowered it and she refused so they killed her
for my father he was working for the emporer when an archers arrow peierced his heart in an attempt to murder the emporor like all loyal gaurds would do he jumped infront of the arrow and saved the emporer. at the time i was only 5
my dad was teaching me skills in combat So i grew up almost an orphan and took to selling and trading.
Okay. I have returned. Zoo, (can I call you zoo?) you did good on telling him what to do. I'm not sure about the politician thing though...
drdre, your new app is much better than the previous, but I do suggest you change a few things... Your spelling and grammar absolutely sucks in there. The back story is much too short and it says you became an assassin but your occupation says citizen? Next, you need to go more in depth with the appearance... Lastly, the RP example is dialogue, not a sentence. Oh... 1 more thing... You don't quite seem to understand the assassins...
Zoo, you said being 11 was a bad sign? I'm 12 and this is the second server I have run... I have been accepted to 10 servers, 4 of which were "hardcore" RPGs. So, I suggest you don't underestimate because of age. Speaking of which, I have a bit of a surprise for you and J3astly. I'll PM you.
Rollback Post to RevisionRollBack
"Because I could not stop for Death, He kindly stopped for me;
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
IGN: TheUndeadTaco
Age:16
Role-Play Exp.: Many RP games played, but little MMORPG's
Why Us:This seems like a great server with respectable rules and looks like it is run with a great staff, plus, RPG's are amazing.
Time You Can Dedicate: 3+ hours weekends, 1-3 hours weekdays
IC (Assassin-if too many, then I can change to another character)
Name: Leonardo Rossi
Gender: Male
Age:35
Appearance: Mid-aged, clean
Fears: Death of a Loved one/close friend
Personality: Stealthy, Cocky yet wise, Creative, Self-less
Occupation: Undercover/Recon
Skills: Creating a Diversion, Trickery, Getting in-and-out of places
Nickname: Leo
RP Example: "Leo, there's the way in, but the palace is covered with guards..." Michel whispers to Leonardo. He replies, "Okay... well there is another way up there in that window, I'll distract the guards and while they chase me, get in there."
Skin (Link, picture, description): Hooded robe, green, w/ quiver on back
Backstory : When Leonardo was a child, he grew up learning to hunt with the bow from his father. He lived most of his life on the farm, helping his family pay the overpriced taxes and the rules of corrupted Leaders. Finaly, when he was at the age of 21, he left the farm in search for rights that the rulers never gave. Thus finding himself inside one of the most Notorious of all Creeds.
In there he met one of his now closest friend/partner, and the girl of his dreams. 4 years later, after Leo, His partner, and His wife's group Did a joint mission to Locate and Persue the Bishop of The Neighboring city, they where all captured. Imprisioned, Leonardo thought of a brilliant plan to escape and free them all. He tricked the guard into thinking he was asleep, then, when they checked him, did one swift motion stabbing the guard and impaling the other guard with the same knife. He managed to resque his closest friend, yet when he came to save his Love and her partner, he learned she had the same plan but didn't make it. The loss of her was a tragic blow to him. He lost his way of the Creed and lived the next 7 years as a commoner, but his partner got him to come back to the creed. He now is fighting side-by-side with his partner, and the rest of his Creed for 3 years.
IGN:Adjns
Age:12
Role play XP:Alot.
Why us:With a server like this i can play assasins creed in minecraft.\
Time you can dedicate:Mostly from 2:30-9:00
IC
Name:Adrian
Gender:Male
Age:20
Appearence:White,Brown eyes,Wind swept hair,
Fears:Bandits,Spiders
Personality:Good person,Sorta like the shop keeper that does his work silently but one day pulls a sword and kills everyone none the less still nice
Occupation:Going through tough times with money and trying to pay the bills.
Skills:Bargening,Mining,Building
Nickname:None
Rp Example:
Trader:Hello fine merchant Im looking to buy some bread how much would it cost?
Adrian:Its would be Five gold fine sir!
Trader: thats a little much how about 2?
Adrian:Thats a little low i'll settle on 4.
Trader:3.
Adrian:Deal.
Backstory:
When i was young the templars took my mother when she was selling she tried bargening for more money then they thought she was asking for too much they lowered it and she refused so they killed her
for my father he was working for the emporer when an archers arrow peierced his heart in an attempt to murder the emporor like all loyal gaurds would do he jumped infront of the arrow and saved the emporer. at the time i was only 5
my dad was teaching me skills in combat So i grew up almost an orphan and took to selling and trading.
Not bad... Could use some grammar fixes. Your backstory should kinda be checked... There were no emperors of Italy... I think ever? Also, I don't think the Templars would that for a price. They could steal it, or they have enough connections and nearby stores to get it somewhere else.
IGN: TheUndeadTaco
Age:16
Role-Play Exp.: Many RP games played, but little MMORPG's
Why Us:This seems like a great server with respectable rules and looks like it is run with a great staff, plus, RPG's are amazing.
Time You Can Dedicate: 3+ hours weekends, 1-3 hours weekdays
IC (Assassin-if too many, then I can change to another character)
Name: Leonardo
Gender: Male
Age:35
Appearance: Mid-aged, clean
Fears: Death of a Loved one/close friend
Personality: Stealthy, Cocky yet wise, Creative, Self-less
Occupation: Undercover/Recon
Skills: Creating a Diversion, Trickery, Getting in-and-out of places
Nickname: Leo
RP Example: "Leo, there's the way in, but the palace is covered with guards..." Michel whispers to Leonardo. He replies, "Okay... well there is another way up there in that window, I'll distract the guards and while they chase me, get in there."
Skin (Link, picture, description): Hooded robe, green, w/ quiver on back
Backstory : When Leonardo was a child, he grew up learning to hunt with the bow from his father. He lived most of his life on the farm, helping his family pay the overpriced taxes and the rules of corrupted Leaders. Finaly, when he was at the age of 21, he left the farm in search for rights that the rulers never gave. Thus finding himself inside one of the most Notorious of all Creeds.
In there he met one of his now closest friend/partner, and the girl of his dreams. 4 years later, after Leo, His partner, and His wife's group Did a joint mission to Locate and Persue the Bishop of The Neighboring city, they where all captured. Imprisioned, Leonardo thought of a brilliant plan to escape and free them all. He tricked the guard into thinking he was asleep, then, when they checked him, did one swift motion stabbing the guard and impaling the other guard with the same knife. He managed to resque his closest friend, yet when he came to save his Love and her partner, he learned she had the same plan but didn't make it. The loss of her was a tragic blow to him. He lost his way of the Creed and lived the next 7 years as a commoner, but his partner got him to come back to the creed. He now is fighting side-by-side with his partner, and the rest of his Creed for 3 years.
Accepted. Although, I will say people need to start giving their characters last names. =/
Rollback Post to RevisionRollBack
"Because I could not stop for Death, He kindly stopped for me;
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
Okay. I have returned. Zoo, (can I call you zoo?) you did good on telling him what to do. I'm not sure about the politician thing though...
drdre, your new app is much better than the previous, but I do suggest you change a few things... Your spelling and grammar absolutely sucks in there. The back story is much too short and it says you became an assassin but your occupation says citizen? Next, you need to go more in depth with the appearance... Lastly, the RP example is dialogue, not a sentence. Oh... 1 more thing... You don't quite seem to understand the assassins...
Zoo, you said being 11 was a bad sign? I'm 12 and this is the second server I have run... I have been accepted to 10 servers, 4 of which were "hardcore" RPGs. So, I suggest you don't underestimate because of age. Speaking of which, I have a bit of a surprise for you and J3astly. I'll PM you.
sure you can call me zoo, a lot of people do. As for the politician thing if you don't want people being politicians then why did you put it in the OP. And on the age topic I said "I'm not saying that there are no mature 11 year olds, but this isn't looking good" and I meant emphasis on the first part and I know many mature young people.
can you let me in i just love penguins sorry
No one gets in that easy.
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
what do you want me to do?
plus i will not spam on chat
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
when you are back please tell me to do do you want me to get for my skin
Oh , you also need to change your name... Sorry.
Your application was all around bad. Fix it. Afk for real this time.
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
Why is this bad
IGN: Drdredr1
Age: 20
Role-Play Exp.: a bit
Why Us: My other servers hate me
Time You Can Dedicate: 2-7 hours EST time
IC
Name:Dreydan
Gender: Male
Age: 11
Appearance:a regular person
Fears: Spiders,zombies,creepers,enderman,herobrine
Personality:Nice loyal to assassins
Occupation:Assassins
Skills:farming,swords
RP Example:assassin:i will kill you templar *templar stabs assassin* Drdredr1/me says"You get off of him *I stab templar*
/is it good now?
Back Story:I was a regular person then my father was taken by templars. He was accused for stealing but I was too scared to fight. They tried to take me next my mother cried.Then assassins saved my life.
Then i joined them.But when I was a child The templars hated my family and I was poor. Cause the assassins liked our family.So when our family made a bit of money the templars would take it.
So when they killed my family I wanted revenge
edit: this is your old app, your new one isn't as bad
IGN:Drdredr1
Age:11 I'm not saying that there are no mature 11 year olds, but this isn't looking good
Role-Play Exp.:a bunch
Why Us:my peeps in other server gotta hate what the hell
Time You Can Dedicate:ussaly 2-9
IC
Name:Dreydan
Gender:Male
Age:11
Appearance:white,blue eyes,long hair,
Fears:FKING SIDERS
Personality:Cool cool how, be spicific
Occupation:school student 5th grade what would a 5th grader do in a templar assassin war?
Skills:Sliding how would this help, with, anything
Nickname (Optional):None
RP Example (Add Dialogue):IDK If you can't give example RP you probably shouldn't join a RP server
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):WHen i was a small penguin i had a great life until templars took over the artic and i wanted revenge.I got some people and want to help the assaians cause they destroyed the templars in the Artic. and i want to help them. nice server notches for you *facepalm*
Can I just be some politician in the city with less power then duke, or should I just a Templar leader then?
As for my name I will think about a new one... maybe Marik... or Baris... idk
i'm sorry for the 5th grader stuff idk what it meant at first then a got it
IGN:Adjns
Age:12
Role play XP:Alot.
Why us:With a server like this i can play assasins creed in minecraft.
Time you can dedicate:Mostly from 2:30-9:00
IC
Name:Adrian
Gender:Male
Age:20
Appearence:White,Brown eyes,Wind swept hair,
Fears:Bandits,Spiders
Personality:Good person,Sorta like the shop keeper that does his work silently but one day pulls a sword and kills everyone none the less still nice
Occupation:Going through tough times with money and trying to pay the bills.
Skills:Bargening,Mining,Building
Nickname:None
Rp Example:
Trader:Hello fine merchant Im looking to buy some bread how much would it cost?
Adrian:Its would be Five gold fine sir!
Trader:Thats a little much how about 2?
Adrian:Thats a little low i'll settle on 4.
Trader:3.
Adrian:Deal.
Backstory:
When i was young my mother was training to be an assasin when she was murdered one day. the killers were trying to steal some food from a farmer and she tried to stop them she was outnumbered and died.
for my father he was working for a polotician when an archers arrow peierced his heart in an attempt to murder the polotician. like all loyal gaurds would do he jumped infront of the arrow and saved the polotician. at the time i was only 5.
my dad was teaching me skills in combat so i grew up almost an orphan and took to selling and trading.
your backstory is touching :'(
drdre, your new app is much better than the previous, but I do suggest you change a few things... Your spelling and grammar absolutely sucks in there. The back story is much too short and it says you became an assassin but your occupation says citizen? Next, you need to go more in depth with the appearance... Lastly, the RP example is dialogue, not a sentence. Oh... 1 more thing... You don't quite seem to understand the assassins...
Zoo, you said being 11 was a bad sign? I'm 12 and this is the second server I have run... I have been accepted to 10 servers, 4 of which were "hardcore" RPGs. So, I suggest you don't underestimate because of age. Speaking of which, I have a bit of a surprise for you and J3astly. I'll PM you.
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
Age:16
Role-Play Exp.: Many RP games played, but little MMORPG's
Why Us:This seems like a great server with respectable rules and looks like it is run with a great staff, plus, RPG's are amazing.
Time You Can Dedicate: 3+ hours weekends, 1-3 hours weekdays
IC (Assassin-if too many, then I can change to another character)
Name: Leonardo Rossi
Gender: Male
Age:35
Appearance: Mid-aged, clean
Fears: Death of a Loved one/close friend
Personality: Stealthy, Cocky yet wise, Creative, Self-less
Occupation: Undercover/Recon
Skills: Creating a Diversion, Trickery, Getting in-and-out of places
Nickname: Leo
RP Example: "Leo, there's the way in, but the palace is covered with guards..." Michel whispers to Leonardo. He replies, "Okay... well there is another way up there in that window, I'll distract the guards and while they chase me, get in there."
Skin (Link, picture, description): Hooded robe, green, w/ quiver on back
Backstory : When Leonardo was a child, he grew up learning to hunt with the bow from his father. He lived most of his life on the farm, helping his family pay the overpriced taxes and the rules of corrupted Leaders. Finaly, when he was at the age of 21, he left the farm in search for rights that the rulers never gave. Thus finding himself inside one of the most Notorious of all Creeds.
In there he met one of his now closest friend/partner, and the girl of his dreams. 4 years later, after Leo, His partner, and His wife's group Did a joint mission to Locate and Persue the Bishop of The Neighboring city, they where all captured. Imprisioned, Leonardo thought of a brilliant plan to escape and free them all. He tricked the guard into thinking he was asleep, then, when they checked him, did one swift motion stabbing the guard and impaling the other guard with the same knife. He managed to resque his closest friend, yet when he came to save his Love and her partner, he learned she had the same plan but didn't make it. The loss of her was a tragic blow to him. He lost his way of the Creed and lived the next 7 years as a commoner, but his partner got him to come back to the creed. He now is fighting side-by-side with his partner, and the rest of his Creed for 3 years.
Not bad... Could use some grammar fixes. Your backstory should kinda be checked... There were no emperors of Italy... I think ever? Also, I don't think the Templars would that for a price. They could steal it, or they have enough connections and nearby stores to get it somewhere else.
Of course... It was just like a month or 2 ago since I last talked to you. xD
Accepted. Although, I will say people need to start giving their characters last names. =/
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
Uh...Yeah. (didthattomakeufeelawkward)
Anyways, you left so suddenly. Was it for this? Looks like interesting concepts are starting to crawl over those boring Medieval RP servers.
sure you can call me zoo, a lot of people do. As for the politician thing if you don't want people being politicians then why did you put it in the OP. And on the age topic I said "I'm not saying that there are no mature 11 year olds, but this isn't looking good" and I meant emphasis on the first part and I know many mature young people.