Ok i came on this morning with 7 people (woop) but one of my staff put a player (Xtro thank god or i would of banned this Staff member) and forgot to take him out of it.
I will say this once to all of my staff including the one that did this. Only a Admin may put a player in Creative, and if they allow a mod to do it that mod is responsible for taking them out. I will not say the name of the mod but he/she will know who he/she is.
Ok i came on this morning with 7 people (woop) but one of my staff put a player (Xtro thank god or i would of banned this Staff member) and forgot to take him out of it.
I will say this once to all of my staff including the one that did this. Only a Admin may put a player in Creative, and if they allow a mod to do it that mod is responsible for taking them out. I will not say the name of the mod but he/she will know who he/she is.
This will not happen again
Like seriously, we need new staff. Or, we should whip them to become better.
Ok Winky, if people want more Zombie RPs, Deadra Attacks, Ext. , Then i want a bit of a head count, whoever wants more fighting RPs up this post or reply to it.
IGN: orangebacon1 Age: 16 Role-PlayExp.: Lots. I have played on 4 RP servers. WhyUs: I like Skyrim I like Minecraft and RP..Seems good enough for me TimeYouCanDedicate: Lots especially on weekends BriefDescription of Yourself: Im mature most of the time however when someone does something that really makes me mad..I can get a little out of hand.. Thought it would be good to tell you this incase it happens..If it does hoping I dont get banned. (That is if I get accepted) ExplainRole-PlayInYourOwnWords: Roleplay is when (normally) two people take a role diffrent from themselves and..Play a role. WhatIsPowergamingandMetagaming?Explainin your own words: Powergaming Example. *In a blink of an eye 30 master warriors were dead and he didnt even move*
IC
Name: Isabella Noviv
Race: (I did not see anything about races and I read EVERYTHING if you tell me what they are or where I can look at them I will pick one)
Fears: Drowning Dragons Fire and swords pointed at her.
Personality: Easy going. Tends to be calm in even the worst situations. Unless angered (Den stuff gets serious lol)
Occupation: (Dont know if there are custom Occupations or not I didnt see any so I will go with..) Doctor
Skills: Good with a bow. Good at making potions and healing wounds.
Nickname(Optional): Hunter
CanYourCharacterWield A Sword/Axe?: Yes. Not axe but sword.
CanYouCharacterFarm?: Yes but not well CanYourCharacterMine?:[/b] No
WhatOtherThingsCanYourCharacterDo?: She can shoot arrows well and can train people how to use potions/heal people.
Backstory(1-2LONG paragraphs): Isabella grew up on a farm far away.On her farm she was rich and could have anything she wanted. She had slaves that would gladly do her bidding because she was fair. But she knew it was wrong to have slaves. One night someone came into her room and dropped a letter telling her she had the power to set the slaves free she knew what she had to do..She set them free using some of her Fathers money and brought them to Lordran on a ship she bought a few days ago. She returned a year later to find that her father had been killed and the farm raided. After finding this out she left and became part of a pirate crew raiding other ships. On one raid their captain was killed. After she decided she would be the new captain. After a few more years of raiding she found out that the person who left her the letter was in Lordran. She also knew Lordran was suppose to be an amazing place to live. She decided to travel to Italy to find the person that left the letter and to find a new life where she could forget her past and look to her future. However her Paradise is not all that it turns out to be.. She must now survive in her so called Paradise.
(Lordran is the name of the country right? Or is that the other thing up by the lore? If it is I will change it to the other place if not well..I do nothing :D)
IGN: orangebacon1 Age: 16 Role-PlayExp.: Lots. I have played on 4 RP servers. WhyUs: I like Skyrim I like Minecraft and RP..Seems good enough for me TimeYouCanDedicate: Lots especially on weekends BriefDescription of Yourself: Im mature most of the time however when someone does something that really makes me mad..I can get a little out of hand.. Thought it would be good to tell you this incase it happens..If it does hoping I dont get banned. (That is if I get accepted) ExplainRole-PlayInYourOwnWords: Roleplay is when (normally) two people take a role diffrent from themselves and..Play a role. WhatIsPowergamingandMetagaming?Explainin your own words: Powergaming Example. *In a blink of an eye 30 master warriors were dead and he didnt even move*
IC
Name: Isabella Noviv
Race: (I did not see anything about races and I read EVERYTHING if you tell me what they are or where I can look at them I will pick one)
Fears: Drowning Dragons Fire and swords pointed at her.
Personality: Easy going. Tends to be calm in even the worst situations. Unless angered (Den stuff gets serious lol)
Occupation: (Dont know if there are custom Occupations or not I didnt see any so I will go with..) Doctor
Skills: Good with a bow. Good at making potions and healing wounds.
Nickname(Optional): Hunter
CanYourCharacterWield A Sword/Axe?: Yes. Not axe but sword.
CanYouCharacterFarm?: Yes but not well CanYourCharacterMine?:[/b] No
WhatOtherThingsCanYourCharacterDo?: She can shoot arrows well and can train people how to use potions/heal people.
Backstory(1-2LONG paragraphs): Isabella grew up on a farm far away.On her farm she was rich and could have anything she wanted. She had slaves that would gladly do her bidding because she was fair. But she knew it was wrong to have slaves. One night someone came into her room and dropped a letter telling her she had the power to set the slaves free she knew what she had to do..She set them free using some of her Fathers money and brought them to Lordran on a ship she bought a few days ago. She returned a year later to find that her father had been killed and the farm raided. After finding this out she left and became part of a pirate crew raiding other ships. On one raid their captain was killed. After she decided she would be the new captain. After a few more years of raiding she found out that the person who left her the letter was in Lordran. She also knew Lordran was suppose to be an amazing place to live. She decided to travel to Italy to find the person that left the letter and to find a new life where she could forget her past and look to her future. However her Paradise is not all that it turns out to be.. She must now survive in her so called Paradise.
(Lordran is the name of the country right? Or is that the other thing up by the lore? If it is I will change it to the other place if not well..I do nothing )
DECLINED
Reasons
1: You must pick a race (they are the basic races of TES i.e: Bosmer, Orc, High elf, Nord, Imperial, Argonian, dark elf, Khajit and such
2: Your occupation is non-existent in the realm of Lordran maybe an Alchemist or mage specializing in restoration magics.
3: Your backstory was altogether not very good, not to mention that you do not que in that Lordran is part of TES world and therefore Italy is not existent in this RP.
4: your backstory tells me absolutely didily squat about how you learned your skills and almost nothing about anything else.
5: Really just not well thought out
DECLINED
Reasons
1: You must pick a race (they are the basic races of TES i.e: Bosmer, Orc, High elf, Nord, Imperial, Argonian, dark elf, Khajit and such
2: Your occupation is non-existent in the realm of Lordran maybe an Alchemist or mage specializing in restoration magics.
3: Your backstory was altogether not very good, not to mention that you do not que in that Lordran is part of TES world and therefore Italy is not existent in this RP.
4: your backstory tells me absolutely didily squat about how you learned your skills and almost nothing about anything else.
5: Really just not well thought out
Wow. Major decline.. Guess I still dont have enough rp experience to join... ugh.. Well I will reapply in idk a few months.
Wow. Major decline.. Guess I still dont have enough rp experience to join... ugh.. Well I will reapply in idk a few months.
This reply has been made accordingly to your application and I stand by it, doesn't matter if it is harsh it is true. It has not passed my standards for an acceptable application.
IGN:Dyeriuss
Age: 18
Role-Play Exp.: dnd skyim tales of exile
Why Us: I like the Twist on skyrims ending and it seems fun to play off of
Time You Can Dedicate: whenever im on
Brief Description of Yourself: geek
Explain Role-Play In Your Own Words: acting
What Is Powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: powergaming is having DM like abilitys and Metagaming is knowing what you shouldent know
IC
Name: Victoria Graendal
Race: Breton
Gender:female
Age:24
Appearance: long brown/black hair and a long purple dress
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Victoria was an orphaned found by a old woman on her travels... the old woman took her to cyrodil to live oustide the imperial city in a small village with her. however the woman was a witch by the name of Graendal. however when victoria was 17 Graendal was brutally murdered by the villagers in town.... in a rage Victoria killed all of the villagers. after all of the fighting died down victoria droped the sword in horror at what she had done.
during the following years after that horrible incident Victoria fled... gradually making her way up to skyrim just in time for the dovah to take over.... seeking hope that she may find a new life free of her crimes she fled to the new world
IGN:Dyeriuss
Age: 18
Role-Play Exp.: dnd skyim tales of exile
Why Us: I like the Twist on skyrims ending and it seems fun to play off of
Time You Can Dedicate: whenever im on
Brief Description of Yourself: geek
Explain Role-Play In Your Own Words: acting
What Is Powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: powergaming is having DM like abilitys and Metagaming is knowing what you shouldent know
IC
Name: Victoria Graendal
Race: Breton
Gender:female
Age:24
Appearance: long brown/black hair and a long purple dress
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Victoria was an orphaned found by a old woman on her travels... the old woman took her to cyrodil to live oustide the imperial city in a small village with her. however the woman was a witch by the name of Graendal. however when victoria was 17 Graendal was brutally murdered by the villagers in town.... in a rage Victoria killed all of the villagers. after all of the fighting died down victoria droped the sword in horror at what she had done.
during the following years after that horrible incident Victoria fled... gradually making her way up to skyrim just in time for the dovah to take over.... seeking hope that she may find a new life free of her crimes she fled to the new world
IGN:Dyeriuss
Age: 18
Role-Play Exp.: dnd skyim tales of exile
Why Us: I like the Twist on skyrims ending and it seems fun to play off of
Time You Can Dedicate: whenever im on
Brief Description of Yourself: geek
Explain Role-Play In Your Own Words: acting
What Is Powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: powergaming is having the ablility to control other peoples characters and Metagaming is knowing what you shouldent know
IC
Name: Victoria Graendal
Race: Breton
Gender:female
Age:24
Appearance: long brown/black hair and a long purple dress
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Victoria was an orphaned found by a old woman on her travels... the old woman took her to cyrodil to live oustide the imperial city in a small village with her. however the woman was a witch by the name of Graendal. Graendal then raised victoria as if she was her own baby. Victoria learned all of the tricks and abilitys in how to be a alchemist because that is what Graendal did. however when victoria was 17 Graendal was brutally murdered by the villagers in town.... in a rage Victoria killed all of the villagers. after all of the fighting died down victoria droped the sword in horror at what she had done.
during the following years after that horrible incident Victoria fled... gradually making her way up to skyrim just in time for the dovah to take over.... seeking hope that she may find a new life free of her crimes she fled to the new world
IGN:Dyeriuss
Age: 18
Role-Play Exp.: dnd skyim tales of exile
Why Us: I like the Twist on skyrims ending and it seems fun to play off of
Time You Can Dedicate: whenever im on
Brief Description of Yourself: geek
Explain Role-Play In Your Own Words: acting
What Is Powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: powergaming is having the ablility to control other peoples characters and Metagaming is knowing what you shouldent know
IC
Name: Victoria Graendal
Race: Breton
Gender:female
Age:24
Appearance: long brown/black hair and a long purple dress
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Victoria was an orphaned found by a old woman on her travels... the old woman took her to cyrodil to live oustide the imperial city in a small village with her. however the woman was a witch by the name of Graendal. Graendal then raised victoria as if she was her own baby. Victoria learned all of the tricks and abilitys in how to be a alchemist because that is what Graendal did. however when victoria was 17 Graendal was brutally murdered by the villagers in town.... in a rage Victoria killed all of the villagers. after all of the fighting died down victoria droped the sword in horror at what she had done.
during the following years after that horrible incident Victoria fled... gradually making her way up to skyrim just in time for the dovah to take over.... seeking hope that she may find a new life free of her crimes she fled to the new world
fus ro dah
Declined
Power gaming definition still wrong
backstory still doesn't make the cut; has to tell the characters life up to the point of lordran in excessive detail.
IGN:Dyeriuss
Age: 18
Role-Play Exp.: dnd skyim tales of exile
Why Us: I like the Twist on skyrims ending and it seems fun to play off of
Time You Can Dedicate: whenever im on
Brief Description of Yourself: geek
Explain Role-Play In Your Own Words: acting
What Is Powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: powergaming is having abilitys taht you cant have in real life and Metagaming is knowing what you shouldent know
IC
Name: Victoria Graendal
Race: Breton
Gender:female
Age:24
Appearance: long brown/black hair and a long purple dress
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Victoria was an orphaned found by a old woman on her travels... the old woman took her to cyrodil to live oustide the imperial city in a small village with her. however the woman was a witch by the name of Graendal. Graendal then raised victoria as if she was her own baby. Victoria learned all of the tricks and abilitys in how to be a alchemist because that is what Graendal did. however when victoria was 17 Graendal was brutally murdered by the villagers in town.... in a rage Victoria killed all of the villagers. after all of the fighting died down victoria droped the sword in horror at what she had done.
during the following years after that horrible incident Victoria fled... gradually making her way up to skyrim she was able to cross the border right before the war broke out... living up in whiterun until the return of the dragons she got scared and ran up to solitude. when the news of the dovakins horrible failure she was one of the last onto the boat
OOC IGN:Dyeriuss Age: 18 Role-Play Exp.: dnd skyim tales of exile Why Us: I like the Twist on skyrims ending and it seems fun to play off of Time You Can Dedicate: whenever im on Brief Description of Yourself: geek Explain Role-Play In Your Own Words: acting What Is Powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: powergaming is having abilitys taht you cant have in real life and Metagaming is knowing what you shouldent know IC Name: Victoria Graendal Race: Breton Gender:female Age:24 Appearance: long brown/black hair and a long purple dress Fears: large crowds Personality: shy Occupation: Alchemist Skills:[/left]Brewing potions [left] Nickname (Optional):witch Can Your Character Wield A Sword/Axe?:no Can You Character Farm?: yes Can Your Character Mine?: not really What Other Things Can Your Character Do?: brew Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Victoria was an orphaned found by a old woman on her travels... the old woman took her to cyrodil to live oustide the imperial city in a small village with her. however the woman was a witch by the name of Graendal. Graendal then raised victoria as if she was her own baby. Victoria learned all of the tricks and abilitys in how to be a alchemist because that is what Graendal did. however when victoria was 17 Graendal was brutally murdered by the villagers in town.... in a rage Victoria killed all of the villagers. after all of the fighting died down victoria droped the sword in horror at what she had done. during the following years after that horrible incident Victoria fled... gradually making her way up to skyrim she was able to cross the border right before the war broke out... living up in whiterun until the return of the dragons she got scared and ran up to solitude. when the news of the dovakins horrible failure she was one of the last onto the boat fus ro dah
Denied. Reason(s):
1. Role-play, meta-gaming, and power-gaming examples should be expanded on.
2. Your application is riddled with grammatical errors.
3. Add detail and more explanation to your backstory, I don't enjoy most of it (especially when you killed every villager).
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You look like you cast dark magic and eviscerate babies.
Um i got whitelisted a while back and i just now remembered about this server and I'm not whitelisted. I cant find my application becuase that would take forever i was just wondering if u could whitelist me or i would have to make a new application.
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AcD is a very unstable element that stands for 'Austro Combustion Dioxide'. AcD is an explosive Minecraftian element created by the Holy Notch that is found in gunpowder. The old race of Creepers that inhabited Minecraftia were naturally spawned with large traces of AcD in their pixel stream. Long ago, when the Holy Notch created The Player, jealous Creepers swallowed large amounts of sand, the amount of sand they 'ate' was so large, it mixed with the AcD in their pixel stream. This concoction was so unstable, a hostile that simply walks within 1 block of a Creeper would cause enough anger to set off the time bomb that Creepers now are. Now, as modern Creepers are simply spawned with this 'natural' bomb, The Players have acknowledged AcD as a chemical element that causes a disease in which the afflicted begins to be angry and suicidal. Unless they meet certain requirements that are different for everybody, the afflicted will die a violent death.
IGN: Frizing
Age: 16
-Role Play Exp.: I played great games Beyond the medieval I'm more passionate about the medieval time, I played Skyrim, Oblivion and morrowind Gave the final three, played lord of the rings, DOTA, king of Amalur, and others I not remember the
For us, and I said the above I love medieval and rpg games and more minecraft entaum I'd love to Become a warrior of this great world of lordran: D
Time you can devote: well I'm on vacation so the team Possible
Brief description of himself: I am a Dreamer I may look young but I am not a child I just wanted to be a brave warrior and a swordsman would love to stab the sword and defeat dragons and who would not want?
Explain role-play in his own words: RPG (Role Playing Game) Almost like playing a character from a movie, playing in the minds of each player. In the case of tabletop RPG, the player will be the master, Responsible for Creating the story, all the scenarios and characters are not controlled by That Other players (NPCs). The Other players will create and interpret a character each. During the game, the teacher is Explaining the scenes and each player will interact with the scene through his character.
There are procedures Also, each system uses a different set of Them. Valley one above all: the master has the power to decide whether a rule is valid or not. Even made to help, Sometimes Can Occur in the rule That ends the way.
What is powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: It Is Something That Can not be done in real life has a way of acting without giving someone else a chance to fight back, or something impossible to be done!
EXAMPLE OF GAMING POWER: - WRONG!
Allison says Wesker: I'll kill you!
(/ I) Allison_Wesker of a super punch Alvez_Lajes and he bursts.
(/ I) Allison_Wesker of a super sonic kick in John_Aballus and he flies away.
See? Allison Powergame Wesker made in this situation, not giving anyone the option to respond. What is considered powergaming!
How not to commit Power Gaming. RIGHT-
Allison_Wesker says hey Matheus, his EDITED .. I'll beat you.
(/ I) Allison Wesker tries to punch in the face of Matthew.
(/ Do) Can you? ((Allison Wesker))
The person who will be playing will have to say YES or NO between the (/ of), follow the example.
(/ Of) Yes ((Matheus_Wesker))
(/ I) Matheus Wesker departs backwards due to the punch he received.
If Wesker Matheus tried to defend himself he would use the following example:
(/ Do) not ((Matheus Wesker))
(/ I) Matheus Wesker dodges the punch ducking.
This was a simple example abbreviated powergaming
Metagaming -
Metagaming is to make use of information OCC (outside game / character) to use it there in the IC (Inside game / character).
What is not allowed in Brazil New Life!
EXAMPLE OF GAMING GOAL: WRONG!
Just because the name of the person appears above the character, I will not ask her name and where there.
Allison is Wesker with his taxi looking for a customer sees when an unknown person walking
Without the same ask his name, The Allison Wesker says:
Allison Wesker says: Ay Kaio, Need Taxi? Very cheap here .. Going to the Beach Bar.
How so? The guy did not know each other in real life and already calls her name? Do not you know? the right would you ask his name, or say "Hey, Need Taxi? very cheap here, going to the beach bar." See? Do not know the name of the person .. so do not call her name unless you ask her name!
EXAMPLE METAGAMING NOT DOING!
Allison is a taxi with his demand for a customer sees when an unknown person walking
Because Allison did not recognize the person he will ask her name.
Allison says: Lord needs taxi? very cheap .. going to the beach bar.
Anonymous says: Yes, of course
Allison says: What is the name of the Lord?
Anonymous says: Kaio
Allison says: Um, it Coincidence, is the name of my brother!
Another example is metagaming:
For example, a PM sees a hitman killing a person, the hitman this mask .. so the Hitman enters the car to run and type / bind v will appear a "/ I" with the name "Allison Wesker called the vehicle" that is, / I = action done by someone. For the PM to see Allison in the name of the chat / I go there and apply it to SU, and Allison Wesker this mascara .. in this case did the PM Metagaming, took information from a single thing from GM to know who the person is, this is WRONG!
hypothetically an explanation to this and then invented names mentioned are
IC:
Name:Warrior Claver
Race:Nord
Gender:Male
Age:21 Appearance:Blond, tall, slender, brown eyes
Fears:Losing memory, and be eaten
Personality:Friendly, funny, brave, loving, companion, adventurer
Occupation:Hunter, Warrior, and blacksmith
Skills:Swordsman, magic, alchemist, fast moving, and blacksmith
Nickname (opcional):
CanYourCharacter A Sword / Axe:yes
CanYouCharacterFarm? as a child
CanYourCharacterMine?:to search for ores but he spends a little time
WhatOtherThingsCanYourCharacterDo?: can enchant items with a few stones of enchantment, and a well trained when young arcane spell
Backstory(1-2[b]LONG[/b] paragraphs):Claver warrior I'll tell my story to you, it starts when I was only 10 years, not back to my childhood, my family or anything, so the stories that my trainer told me about the era of the legendary dragonborns I was so poignant with that which I have devoted my youth I loved to train empunhalar my special sword that my coach has created for myself, I was and I was thinking for two months the name of that sword and decided on the name of righteous sword in a while I lost my sword, not a thought, but could not entaum train my sword skills without it.
She was a specialist, it was made for me, I started to train in the shares of magic, until I learned that one of relics thief, stealing the sword goes in the land of solsthelm entaum created a sword, I devoted all my time, she was special but not as much as the other, she was special because my coach gave me an item and said it was my grandfather, was a sword made of dragon skin channeled with his soul, I trained with her, trained, and trained I completed my 20 years old already had to survive my coach I have ever considered him as a father, gave me his armor made more special with the same item used in the righteous sword, took a year but I finally found one who stole my sword he is here in the realm of lordran and here I am and now I'm with the fury of the old and the dragonborns said: "Fus Ro Dah"
Wow. Major decline.. Guess I still dont have enough rp experience to join... ugh.. Well I will reapply in idk a few months.
ill look at your next one, you did not do it that bad, but we are a Elder Scrolls Server, so you do not have a Elder Scrolls race and we are not set in Earth lol, we are in Solsteim north of Skyrim, try again
Um i got whitelisted a while back and i just now remembered about this server and I'm not whitelisted. I cant find my application becuase that would take forever i was just wondering if u could whitelist me or i would have to make a new application.
IGN: Frizing
Age: 16
-Role Play Exp.: I played great games Beyond the medieval I'm more passionate about the medieval time, I played Skyrim, Oblivion and morrowind Gave the final three, played lord of the rings, DOTA, king of Amalur, and others I not remember the
For us, and I said the above I love medieval and rpg games and more minecraft entaum I'd love to Become a warrior of this great world of lordran: D
Time you can devote: well I'm on vacation so the team Possible
Brief description of himself: I am a Dreamer I may look young but I am not a child I just wanted to be a brave warrior and a swordsman would love to stab the sword and defeat dragons and who would not want?
Explain role-play in his own words: RPG (Role Playing Game) Almost like playing a character from a movie, playing in the minds of each player. In the case of tabletop RPG, the player will be the master, Responsible for Creating the story, all the scenarios and characters are not controlled by That Other players (NPCs). The Other players will create and interpret a character each. During the game, the teacher is Explaining the scenes and each player will interact with the scene through his character.
There are procedures Also, each system uses a different set of Them. Valley one above all: the master has the power to decide whether a rule is valid or not. Even made to help, Sometimes Can Occur in the rule That ends the way.
What is powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: It Is Something That Can not be done in real life has a way of acting without giving someone else a chance to fight back, or something impossible to be done!
EXAMPLE OF GAMING POWER: - WRONG!
Allison says Wesker: I'll kill you!
(/ I) Allison_Wesker of a super punch Alvez_Lajes and he bursts.
(/ I) Allison_Wesker of a super sonic kick in John_Aballus and he flies away.
See? Allison Powergame Wesker made in this situation, not giving anyone the option to respond. What is considered powergaming!
How not to commit Power Gaming. RIGHT-
Allison_Wesker says hey Matheus, his EDITED .. I'll beat you.
(/ I) Allison Wesker tries to punch in the face of Matthew.
(/ Do) Can you? ((Allison Wesker))
The person who will be playing will have to say YES or NO between the (/ of), follow the example.
(/ Of) Yes ((Matheus_Wesker))
(/ I) Matheus Wesker departs backwards due to the punch he received.
If Wesker Matheus tried to defend himself he would use the following example:
(/ Do) not ((Matheus Wesker))
(/ I) Matheus Wesker dodges the punch ducking.
This was a simple example abbreviated powergaming
Metagaming -
Metagaming is to make use of information OCC (outside game / character) to use it there in the IC (Inside game / character).
What is not allowed in Brazil New Life!
EXAMPLE OF GAMING GOAL: WRONG!
Just because the name of the person appears above the character, I will not ask her name and where there.
Allison is Wesker with his taxi looking for a customer sees when an unknown person walking
Without the same ask his name, The Allison Wesker says:
Allison Wesker says: Ay Kaio, Need Taxi? Very cheap here .. Going to the Beach Bar.
How so? The guy did not know each other in real life and already calls her name? Do not you know? the right would you ask his name, or say "Hey, Need Taxi? very cheap here, going to the beach bar." See? Do not know the name of the person .. so do not call her name unless you ask her name!
EXAMPLE METAGAMING NOT DOING!
Allison is a taxi with his demand for a customer sees when an unknown person walking
Because Allison did not recognize the person he will ask her name.
Allison says: Lord needs taxi? very cheap .. going to the beach bar.
Anonymous says: Yes, of course
Allison says: What is the name of the Lord?
Anonymous says: Kaio
Allison says: Um, it Coincidence, is the name of my brother!
Another example is metagaming:
For example, a PM sees a hitman killing a person, the hitman this mask .. so the Hitman enters the car to run and type / bind v will appear a "/ I" with the name "Allison Wesker called the vehicle" that is, / I = action done by someone. For the PM to see Allison in the name of the chat / I go there and apply it to SU, and Allison Wesker this mascara .. in this case did the PM Metagaming, took information from a single thing from GM to know who the person is, this is WRONG!
hypothetically an explanation to this and then invented names mentioned are
IC:
Name:Warrior Claver
Race:Nord
Gender:Male
Age:21 Appearance:Blond, tall, slender, brown eyes
Fears:Losing memory, and be eaten
Personality:Friendly, funny, brave, loving, companion, adventurer
Occupation:Hunter, Warrior, and blacksmith
Skills:Swordsman, magic, alchemist, fast moving, and blacksmith
Nickname (opcional):
CanYourCharacter A Sword / Axe:yes
CanYouCharacterFarm? as a child
CanYourCharacterMine?:to search for ores but he spends a little time
WhatOtherThingsCanYourCharacterDo?: can enchant items with a few stones of enchantment, and a well trained when young arcane spell
Backstory(1-2[b]LONG[/b] paragraphs):Claver warrior I'll tell my story to you, it starts when I was only 10 years, not back to my childhood, my family or anything, so the stories that my trainer told me about the era of the legendary dragonborns I was so poignant with that which I have devoted my youth I loved to train empunhalar my special sword that my coach has created for myself, I was and I was thinking for two months the name of that sword and decided on the name of righteous sword in a while I lost my sword, not a thought, but could not entaum train my sword skills without it.
She was a specialist, it was made for me, I started to train in the shares of magic, until I learned that one of relics thief, stealing the sword goes in the land of solsthelm entaum created a sword, I devoted all my time, she was special but not as much as the other, she was special because my coach gave me an item and said it was my grandfather, was a sword made of dragon skin channeled with his soul, I trained with her, trained, and trained I completed my 20 years old already had to survive my coach I have ever considered him as a father, gave me his armor made more special with the same item used in the righteous sword, took a year but I finally found one who stole my sword he is here in the realm of lordran and here I am and now I'm with the fury of the old and the dragonborns said: "Fus Ro Dah"
Declined
The quality of your OOC application is okay but I sense that you are not a native English speaker so I will give some leniency.
You cannot have a named sword or enchanted sword right off the bat.
Honestly I see your application is in development and if i'm correct and you are not a native english speaker I strongly suggest using more comfortable language, some words seemed forced and to go through it with a fine tooth comb.
IGN: Frizing
Age: 16
-Role Play Exp.: I played great games Beyond the medieval I'm more passionate about the medieval time, I played Skyrim, Oblivion and morrowind Gave the final three, played lord of the rings, DOTA, king of Amalur, and others I not remember the
For us, and I said the above I love medieval and rpg games and more minecraft entaum I'd love to Become a warrior of this great world of lordran: D
Time you can devote: well I'm on vacation so the team Possible
Brief description of himself: I am a Dreamer I may look young but I am not a child I just wanted to be a brave warrior and a swordsman would love to stab the sword and defeat dragons and who would not want?
Explain role-play in his own words: RPG (Role Playing Game) Almost like playing a character from a movie, playing in the minds of each player. In the case of tabletop RPG, the player will be the master, Responsible for Creating the story, all the scenarios and characters are not controlled by That Other players (NPCs). The Other players will create and interpret a character each. During the game, the teacher is Explaining the scenes and each player will interact with the scene through his character.
There are procedures Also, each system uses a different set of Them. Valley one above all: the master has the power to decide whether a rule is valid or not. Even made to help, Sometimes Can Occur in the rule That ends the way.
What is powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: It Is Something That Can not be done in real life has a way of acting without giving someone else a chance to fight back, or something impossible to be done!
EXAMPLE OF GAMING POWER: - WRONG!
Allison says Wesker: I'll kill you!
(/ I) Allison_Wesker of a super punch Alvez_Lajes and he bursts.
(/ I) Allison_Wesker of a super sonic kick in John_Aballus and he flies away.
See? Allison Powergame Wesker made in this situation, not giving anyone the option to respond. What is considered powergaming!
How not to commit Power Gaming. RIGHT-
Allison_Wesker says hey Matheus, his EDITED .. I'll beat you.
(/ I) Allison Wesker tries to punch in the face of Matthew.
(/ Do) Can you? ((Allison Wesker))
The person who will be playing will have to say YES or NO between the (/ of), follow the example.
(/ Of) Yes ((Matheus_Wesker))
(/ I) Matheus Wesker departs backwards due to the punch he received.
If Wesker Matheus tried to defend himself he would use the following example:
(/ Do) not ((Matheus Wesker))
(/ I) Matheus Wesker dodges the punch ducking.
This was a simple example abbreviated powergaming
Metagaming -
Metagaming is to make use of information OCC (outside game / character) to use it there in the IC (Inside game / character).
What is not allowed in Brazil New Life!
EXAMPLE OF GAMING GOAL: WRONG!
Just because the name of the person appears above the character, I will not ask her name and where there.
Allison is Wesker with his taxi looking for a customer sees when an unknown person walking
Without the same ask his name, The Allison Wesker says:
Allison Wesker says: Ay Kaio, Need Taxi? Very cheap here .. Going to the Beach Bar.
How so? The guy did not know each other in real life and already calls her name? Do not you know? the right would you ask his name, or say "Hey, Need Taxi? very cheap here, going to the beach bar." See? Do not know the name of the person .. so do not call her name unless you ask her name!
EXAMPLE METAGAMING NOT DOING!
Allison is a taxi with his demand for a customer sees when an unknown person walking
Because Allison did not recognize the person he will ask her name.
Allison says: Lord needs taxi? very cheap .. going to the beach bar.
Anonymous says: Yes, of course
Allison says: What is the name of the Lord?
Anonymous says: Kaio
Allison says: Um, it Coincidence, is the name of my brother!
Another example is metagaming:
For example, a PM sees a hitman killing a person, the hitman this mask .. so the Hitman enters the car to run and type / bind v will appear a "/ I" with the name "Allison Wesker called the vehicle" that is, / I = action done by someone. For the PM to see Allison in the name of the chat / I go there and apply it to SU, and Allison Wesker this mascara .. in this case did the PM Metagaming, took information from a single thing from GM to know who the person is, this is WRONG!
hypothetically an explanation to this and then invented names mentioned are
IC:
Name:Warrior Claver
Race:Nord
Gender:Male
Age:21 Appearance:Blond, tall, slender, brown eyes
Fears:Losing memory, and be eaten
Personality:Friendly, funny, brave, loving, companion, adventurer
Occupation:Hunter, Warrior, and blacksmith
Skills:Swordsman, magic, alchemist, fast moving, and blacksmith
Nickname (opcional):
CanYourCharacter A Sword / Axe:yes
CanYouCharacterFarm? as a child
CanYourCharacterMine?:to search for ores but he spends a little time
WhatOtherThingsCanYourCharacterDo?: can enchant items with a few stones of enchantment, and a well trained when young arcane spell
Backstory(1-2[b]LONG[/b] paragraphs):Claver warrior I'll tell my story to you, it starts when I was only 10 years, not back to my childhood, my family or anything, so the stories that my trainer told me about the era of the legendary dragonborns I was so poignant with that which I have devoted my youth I loved to train empunhalar my special sword that my coach has created for myself, I was and I was thinking for two months the name of that sword and decided on the name of righteous sword in a while I lost my sword, not a thought, but could not entaum train my sword skills without it.
She was a specialist, it was made for me, I started to train in the shares of magic, until I learned that one of relics thief, stealing the sword goes in the land of solsthelm entaum created a sword, I devoted all my time, she was special but not as much as the other, she was special because my coach gave me an item and said it was my grandfather, was a sword made of dragon skin channeled with his soul, I trained with her, trained, and trained I completed my 20 years old already had to survive my coach I have ever considered him as a father, gave me his armor made more special with the same item used in the righteous sword, took a year but I finally found one who stole my sword he is here in the realm of lordran and here I am and now I'm with the fury of the old and the dragonborns said: "Fus Ro Dah"
Extremely good, but the dragon Skin sword is a lil much unless you put in the back Story that you lose it
I will say this once to all of my staff including the one that did this. Only a Admin may put a player in Creative, and if they allow a mod to do it that mod is responsible for taking them out. I will not say the name of the mod but he/she will know who he/she is.
This will not happen again
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Like seriously, we need new staff. Or, we should whip them to become better.
As long as I don't die?
<3
If it ever comes to that i have a list of potential Staff dont worry.
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IGN: orangebacon1
Age: 16
Role-Play Exp.: Lots. I have played on 4 RP servers.
Why Us: I like Skyrim I like Minecraft and RP..Seems good enough for me
Time You Can Dedicate: Lots especially on weekends
Brief Description of Yourself: Im mature most of the time however when someone does something that really makes me mad..I can get a little out of hand.. Thought it would be good to tell you this incase it happens..If it does hoping I dont get banned. (That is if I get accepted)
Explain Role-Play In Your Own Words: Roleplay is when (normally) two people take a role diffrent from themselves and..Play a role.
What Is Powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: Powergaming Example. *In a blink of an eye 30 master warriors were dead and he didnt even move*
IC
Name: Isabella Noviv
Race: (I did not see anything about races and I read EVERYTHING if you tell me what they are or where I can look at them I will pick one)
Gender: Female
Age: 23
Appearance: http://minecraftskins.info/piratequeen.html (Link to skin)
Fears: Drowning Dragons Fire and swords pointed at her.
Personality: Easy going. Tends to be calm in even the worst situations. Unless angered (Den stuff gets serious lol)
Occupation: (Dont know if there are custom Occupations or not I didnt see any so I will go with..) Doctor
Skills: Good with a bow. Good at making potions and healing wounds.
Nickname (Optional): Hunter
Can Your Character Wield A Sword/Axe?: Yes. Not axe but sword.
Can You Character Farm?: Yes but not well
Can Your Character Mine?:[/b] No
What Other Things Can Your Character Do?: She can shoot arrows well and can train people how to use potions/heal people.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Isabella grew up on a farm far away.On her farm she was rich and could have anything she wanted. She had slaves that would gladly do her bidding because she was fair. But she knew it was wrong to have slaves. One night someone came into her room and dropped a letter telling her she had the power to set the slaves free she knew what she had to do..She set them free using some of her Fathers money and brought them to Lordran on a ship she bought a few days ago. She returned a year later to find that her father had been killed and the farm raided. After finding this out she left and became part of a pirate crew raiding other ships. On one raid their captain was killed. After she decided she would be the new captain. After a few more years of raiding she found out that the person who left her the letter was in Lordran. She also knew Lordran was suppose to be an amazing place to live. She decided to travel to Italy to find the person that left the letter and to find a new life where she could forget her past and look to her future. However her Paradise is not all that it turns out to be.. She must now survive in her so called Paradise.
(Lordran is the name of the country right? Or is that the other thing up by the lore? If it is I will change it to the other place if not well..I do nothing :D)
DECLINED
Reasons
1: You must pick a race (they are the basic races of TES i.e: Bosmer, Orc, High elf, Nord, Imperial, Argonian, dark elf, Khajit and such
2: Your occupation is non-existent in the realm of Lordran maybe an Alchemist or mage specializing in restoration magics.
3: Your backstory was altogether not very good, not to mention that you do not que in that Lordran is part of TES world and therefore Italy is not existent in this RP.
4: your backstory tells me absolutely didily squat about how you learned your skills and almost nothing about anything else.
5: Really just not well thought out
Wow. Major decline.. Guess I still dont have enough rp experience to join... ugh.. Well I will reapply in idk a few months.
This reply has been made accordingly to your application and I stand by it, doesn't matter if it is harsh it is true. It has not passed my standards for an acceptable application.
IGN:Dyeriuss
Age: 18
Role-Play Exp.: dnd skyim tales of exile
Why Us: I like the Twist on skyrims ending and it seems fun to play off of
Time You Can Dedicate: whenever im on
Brief Description of Yourself: geek
Explain Role-Play In Your Own Words: acting
What Is Powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: powergaming is having DM like abilitys and Metagaming is knowing what you shouldent know
IC
Name: Victoria Graendal
Race: Breton
Gender:female
Age:24
Appearance: long brown/black hair and a long purple dress
Fears: large crowds
Personality: shy
Occupation: Alchemist
Skills:[/left]Brewing potions
[left]
Nickname (Optional):witch
Can Your Character Wield A Sword/Axe?:no
Can You Character Farm?: yes
Can Your Character Mine?: not really
What Other Things Can Your Character Do?: brew
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Victoria was an orphaned found by a old woman on her travels... the old woman took her to cyrodil to live oustide the imperial city in a small village with her. however the woman was a witch by the name of Graendal. however when victoria was 17 Graendal was brutally murdered by the villagers in town.... in a rage Victoria killed all of the villagers. after all of the fighting died down victoria droped the sword in horror at what she had done.
during the following years after that horrible incident Victoria fled... gradually making her way up to skyrim just in time for the dovah to take over.... seeking hope that she may find a new life free of her crimes she fled to the new world
fus ro dah
DECLINED
1:Power gaming explanation
2: backstory inadequacy
IGN:Dyeriuss
Age: 18
Role-Play Exp.: dnd skyim tales of exile
Why Us: I like the Twist on skyrims ending and it seems fun to play off of
Time You Can Dedicate: whenever im on
Brief Description of Yourself: geek
Explain Role-Play In Your Own Words: acting
What Is Powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: powergaming is having the ablility to control other peoples characters and Metagaming is knowing what you shouldent know
IC
Name: Victoria Graendal
Race: Breton
Gender:female
Age:24
Appearance: long brown/black hair and a long purple dress
Fears: large crowds
Personality: shy
Occupation: Alchemist
Skills:[/left]Brewing potions
[left]
Nickname (Optional):witch
Can Your Character Wield A Sword/Axe?:no
Can You Character Farm?: yes
Can Your Character Mine?: not really
What Other Things Can Your Character Do?: brew
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Victoria was an orphaned found by a old woman on her travels... the old woman took her to cyrodil to live oustide the imperial city in a small village with her. however the woman was a witch by the name of Graendal. Graendal then raised victoria as if she was her own baby. Victoria learned all of the tricks and abilitys in how to be a alchemist because that is what Graendal did. however when victoria was 17 Graendal was brutally murdered by the villagers in town.... in a rage Victoria killed all of the villagers. after all of the fighting died down victoria droped the sword in horror at what she had done.
during the following years after that horrible incident Victoria fled... gradually making her way up to skyrim just in time for the dovah to take over.... seeking hope that she may find a new life free of her crimes she fled to the new world
fus ro dah
Declined
Power gaming definition still wrong
backstory still doesn't make the cut; has to tell the characters life up to the point of lordran in excessive detail.
IGN:Dyeriuss
Age: 18
Role-Play Exp.: dnd skyim tales of exile
Why Us: I like the Twist on skyrims ending and it seems fun to play off of
Time You Can Dedicate: whenever im on
Brief Description of Yourself: geek
Explain Role-Play In Your Own Words: acting
What Is Powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: powergaming is having abilitys taht you cant have in real life and Metagaming is knowing what you shouldent know
IC
Name: Victoria Graendal
Race: Breton
Gender:female
Age:24
Appearance: long brown/black hair and a long purple dress
Fears: large crowds
Personality: shy
Occupation: Alchemist
Skills:[/left]Brewing potions
[left]
Nickname (Optional):witch
Can Your Character Wield A Sword/Axe?:no
Can You Character Farm?: yes
Can Your Character Mine?: not really
What Other Things Can Your Character Do?: brew
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Victoria was an orphaned found by a old woman on her travels... the old woman took her to cyrodil to live oustide the imperial city in a small village with her. however the woman was a witch by the name of Graendal. Graendal then raised victoria as if she was her own baby. Victoria learned all of the tricks and abilitys in how to be a alchemist because that is what Graendal did. however when victoria was 17 Graendal was brutally murdered by the villagers in town.... in a rage Victoria killed all of the villagers. after all of the fighting died down victoria droped the sword in horror at what she had done.
during the following years after that horrible incident Victoria fled... gradually making her way up to skyrim she was able to cross the border right before the war broke out... living up in whiterun until the return of the dragons she got scared and ran up to solitude. when the news of the dovakins horrible failure she was one of the last onto the boat
fus ro dah
Denied. Reason(s):
1. Role-play, meta-gaming, and power-gaming examples should be expanded on.
2. Your application is riddled with grammatical errors.
3. Add detail and more explanation to your backstory, I don't enjoy most of it (especially when you killed every villager).
AcD is a very unstable element that stands for 'Austro Combustion Dioxide'. AcD is an explosive Minecraftian element created by the Holy Notch that is found in gunpowder. The old race of Creepers that inhabited Minecraftia were naturally spawned with large traces of AcD in their pixel stream. Long ago, when the Holy Notch created The Player, jealous Creepers swallowed large amounts of sand, the amount of sand they 'ate' was so large, it mixed with the AcD in their pixel stream. This concoction was so unstable, a hostile that simply walks within 1 block of a Creeper would cause enough anger to set off the time bomb that Creepers now are. Now, as modern Creepers are simply spawned with this 'natural' bomb, The Players have acknowledged AcD as a chemical element that causes a disease in which the afflicted begins to be angry and suicidal. Unless they meet certain requirements that are different for everybody, the afflicted will die a violent death.
IGN: Frizing
Age: 16
-Role Play Exp.: I played great games Beyond the medieval I'm more passionate about the medieval time, I played Skyrim, Oblivion and morrowind Gave the final three, played lord of the rings, DOTA, king of Amalur, and others I not remember the
For us, and I said the above I love medieval and rpg games and more minecraft entaum I'd love to Become a warrior of this great world of lordran: D
Time you can devote: well I'm on vacation so the team Possible
Brief description of himself: I am a Dreamer I may look young but I am not a child I just wanted to be a brave warrior and a swordsman would love to stab the sword and defeat dragons and who would not want?
Explain role-play in his own words: RPG (Role Playing Game) Almost like playing a character from a movie, playing in the minds of each player. In the case of tabletop RPG, the player will be the master, Responsible for Creating the story, all the scenarios and characters are not controlled by That Other players (NPCs). The Other players will create and interpret a character each. During the game, the teacher is Explaining the scenes and each player will interact with the scene through his character.
There are procedures Also, each system uses a different set of Them. Valley one above all: the master has the power to decide whether a rule is valid or not. Even made to help, Sometimes Can Occur in the rule That ends the way.
What is powergaming and Metagaming? Explain in your own words: It Is Something That Can not be done in real life has a way of acting without giving someone else a chance to fight back, or something impossible to be done!
EXAMPLE OF GAMING POWER: - WRONG!
Allison says Wesker: I'll kill you!
(/ I) Allison_Wesker of a super punch Alvez_Lajes and he bursts.
(/ I) Allison_Wesker of a super sonic kick in John_Aballus and he flies away.
See? Allison Powergame Wesker made in this situation, not giving anyone the option to respond. What is considered powergaming!
How not to commit Power Gaming. RIGHT-
Allison_Wesker says hey Matheus, his EDITED .. I'll beat you.
(/ I) Allison Wesker tries to punch in the face of Matthew.
(/ Do) Can you? ((Allison Wesker))
The person who will be playing will have to say YES or NO between the (/ of), follow the example.
(/ Of) Yes ((Matheus_Wesker))
(/ I) Matheus Wesker departs backwards due to the punch he received.
If Wesker Matheus tried to defend himself he would use the following example:
(/ Do) not ((Matheus Wesker))
(/ I) Matheus Wesker dodges the punch ducking.
This was a simple example abbreviated powergaming
Metagaming -
Metagaming is to make use of information OCC (outside game / character) to use it there in the IC (Inside game / character).
What is not allowed in Brazil New Life!
EXAMPLE OF GAMING GOAL: WRONG!
Just because the name of the person appears above the character, I will not ask her name and where there.
Allison is Wesker with his taxi looking for a customer sees when an unknown person walking
Without the same ask his name, The Allison Wesker says:
Allison Wesker says: Ay Kaio, Need Taxi? Very cheap here .. Going to the Beach Bar.
How so? The guy did not know each other in real life and already calls her name? Do not you know? the right would you ask his name, or say "Hey, Need Taxi? very cheap here, going to the beach bar." See? Do not know the name of the person .. so do not call her name unless you ask her name!
EXAMPLE METAGAMING NOT DOING!
Allison is a taxi with his demand for a customer sees when an unknown person walking
Because Allison did not recognize the person he will ask her name.
Allison says: Lord needs taxi? very cheap .. going to the beach bar.
Anonymous says: Yes, of course
Allison says: What is the name of the Lord?
Anonymous says: Kaio
Allison says: Um, it Coincidence, is the name of my brother!
Another example is metagaming:
For example, a PM sees a hitman killing a person, the hitman this mask .. so the Hitman enters the car to run and type / bind v will appear a "/ I" with the name "Allison Wesker called the vehicle" that is, / I = action done by someone. For the PM to see Allison in the name of the chat / I go there and apply it to SU, and Allison Wesker this mascara .. in this case did the PM Metagaming, took information from a single thing from GM to know who the person is, this is WRONG!
hypothetically an explanation to this and then invented names mentioned are
IC:
Name:Warrior Claver
Race:Nord
Gender:Male
Age:21
Appearance:Blond, tall, slender, brown eyes
Fears:Losing memory, and be eaten
Personality:Friendly, funny, brave, loving, companion, adventurer
Occupation:Hunter, Warrior, and blacksmith
Skills:Swordsman, magic, alchemist, fast moving, and blacksmith
Nickname (opcional):
Can Your Character A Sword / Axe:yes
Can You Character Farm? as a child
Can Your Character Mine?:to search for ores but he spends a little time
What Other Things Can Your Character Do?: can enchant items with a few stones of enchantment, and a well trained when young arcane spell
Backstory (1-2 [b]LONG[/b] paragraphs):Claver warrior I'll tell my story to you, it starts when I was only 10 years, not back to my childhood, my family or anything, so the stories that my trainer told me about the era of the legendary dragonborns I was so poignant with that which I have devoted my youth I loved to train empunhalar my special sword that my coach has created for myself, I was and I was thinking for two months the name of that sword and decided on the name of righteous sword in a while I lost my sword, not a thought, but could not entaum train my sword skills without it.
She was a specialist, it was made for me, I started to train in the shares of magic, until I learned that one of relics thief, stealing the sword goes in the land of solsthelm entaum created a sword, I devoted all my time, she was special but not as much as the other, she was special because my coach gave me an item and said it was my grandfather, was a sword made of dragon skin channeled with his soul, I trained with her, trained, and trained I completed my 20 years old already had to survive my coach I have ever considered him as a father, gave me his armor made more special with the same item used in the righteous sword, took a year but I finally found one who stole my sword he is here in the realm of lordran and here I am and now I'm with the fury of the old and the dragonborns said: "Fus Ro Dah"
ill look at your next one, you did not do it that bad, but we are a Elder Scrolls Server, so you do not have a Elder Scrolls race and we are not set in Earth lol, we are in Solsteim north of Skyrim, try again
Link to accepted app or make another
Link to accepted app or a new one
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The quality of your OOC application is okay but I sense that you are not a native English speaker so I will give some leniency.
You cannot have a named sword or enchanted sword right off the bat.
Honestly I see your application is in development and if i'm correct and you are not a native english speaker I strongly suggest using more comfortable language, some words seemed forced and to go through it with a fine tooth comb.
Extremely good, but the dragon Skin sword is a lil much unless you put in the back Story that you lose it
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