Characters name:Zelaphor Belaron
Character Age:23
Race:Human
Gender:Male
Fears:Having those he cares about killed as he watches
Strengths:Intelligent, Brave, Good marksmanship
Occupation:Explorer
Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs)
Zelaphor grew up in a small group of nomads and, as such never had a permanent home. In his youth he never cared much for adventurers, as the ones he met always seemed to act before thinking, but tales of the great heroes Simon and Lewis still made him want to become one himself. Unfortunately for him he always hated training with a sword, and as such he never got very good with them, He did however enjoy Hunting and as such became proficient with a bow. He spent many years training with whatever adventurers he could convince to help, often ending with him getting frustrated at the adventurers as they tried dueling him with a sword. The adventurers of course always won, adding to his frustration. His group ended one such time, when after losing three times in a row, the adventurer, deemed him unteachable. Out of frustration, Zelaphor grabbed his bow as the adventurer was leaving and carefully aimed an arrow, shooting it into the adventurers left arm. Thanks to years of hunting, The arrow hit it's target exactly as planned, sending the adventurer into a fit of rage. Even with the use of only one arm he had no trouble slaughtering everyone in the camp, leaving it barren and empty. As the adventurer approached Zelaphor, his sword ready he was shot several times from behind. Zelaphor Stood there Shocked as the adventurer fell over dead in front of him, until he heard a voice calling to him, another adventurer who was passing by. The man came closer to check if he was injured, upon finding he was relatively unharmed, the man prepared to leave. As the man was leaving Zelaphor asked his name. He replied that his name was john, a hopeful skylord, and that Zelaphor could come with in his travels if he so wished.
Zelaphor traveled with John for many years until he was ready to set off as on his own. With no destination in mind, he off set for wherever his adventures may take him.
Characters name:Justin
Character Age:12
Race:elf
Gender:male
Fears:creepers
Strengths:Math And Reading And Archery And Taming
Occupation:School/Explorer
Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Long Long Before Justin Was Born His Dad's Dad Got Murdered.Justin's Dad was so sad of the tragic death.
Now when Justin turned 10 his dad taught him how to survive.Justin was good at gathering and archery,so his dad got him tools and a bow.Justin loved his dad till,One day he got slain by a creeper.Justin was so sad at the lost of his father.He ventured out to make his own place even though he is 12 he is smart.Justin tamed a dog named Sparks and a kitty named Fluffy he made himself a tiny house to live in.He goes outside everyday to gather supplies and fish and bones for the dog and cat.His house is made of jungle wood or planks,sometimes he can get cobble.He is really smart,so he outwits his foes like the creeper.He has a unique apperence that will only be seen in game.He usually hangs to himself,as he barely makes friends.His backstory is short and sweet since he is young.
Please accept this his adventures just begun !EDITED!
Characters name: Garnade CharacterAge:23 Race:Human Gender:Male Fears: Losing the ones he loves Strengths:Combat, smithing Occupation: Blacksmith Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Garnade was raised on a small farm way out in the country. He was really close with his family because that was all they head. They were very poor and were half starved everyday. Garnades father had a secret talent of smithing. Although their family could not afford iron Garnades father would go out and steal some iron and smith it into many things such as armor and tools.He trained Garnade at a early age to smith and then on Garnade excelled at it. Life was good,but raids were starting to come more and more often. killing more and more of Garnades brothers and sisters. Garnade knew he had to stop it but he was only 11 how could he do that? Garnade had to stay inside and watch as his father and older brothers hopelessly fought these bandits. Garnades mother fearing the worst ran away with Garnade. Garnade was furious with his mother for leaving their family behind. Later Garnades mother died of illness from the trip. When he was 17 he went back to check on his family.All he saw was ashes. bones in a pile. Everything was abandoned or ransacked... Garnade swore revenge on all thiefs bandits or outlaws from that day foward.
Characters name:Justin
Character Age:12
Race:elf
Gender:male
Fears:creepers
Strengths:Math And Reading And Archery And Taming
Occupation:School/Explorer
Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Long Long Before Justin Was Born Israphel Ruled The Land 2 Brave Heroes Slain Him.Justins Dad was a reporter who heard of it.He made a big spotlight for it.
Now when Justin turned 10 his dad taught him how to survive.Justin was good at gathering and archery,so his dad got him tools and a bow.Justin loved his dad till,One day he got slain by a creeper.Justin was so sad at the lost of his father.He ventured out to make his own place even though he is 12 he is epic.Justin tamed a dog named Sparks and a kitty named Fluffy he made himself a tiny house to live in.
Justins faith is in your hands spend it wisely
Did you even read the first page? Israphel is already dead! You would be over 100 years old if you were born in that time. Rewrite it, don't use modern things like "epic", and most of all MAKE IT LONGER.
Characters name: Garnade CharacterAge:23 Race:Human Gender:Male Fears: Losing the ones he loves Strengths:Combat, smithing Occupation: Blacksmith Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Garnade was raised on a small farm way out in the country. He was really close with his family because that was all they head. They were very poor and were half starved everyday. Garnades father had a secret talent of smithing. Although their family could not afford iron Garnades father would go out and steal some iron and smith it into many things such as armor and tools.He trained Garnade at a early age to smith and then on Garnade excelled at it. Life was good,but raids were starting to come more and more often. killing more and more of Garnades brothers and sisters. Garnade knew he had to stop it but he was only 11 how could he do that? Garnade had to stay inside and watch as his father and older brothers hopelessly fought these bandits. Garnades mother fearing the worst ran away with Garnade. Garnade was furious with his mother for leaving their family behind. Later Garnades mother died of illness from the trip. When he was 17 he went back to check on his family.All he saw was ashes. bones in a pile. Everything was abandoned or ransacked... Garnade swore revenge on all thiefs bandits or outlaws from that day foward.
Characters name:Kenzi Bonarck
Character Age:23
Race:Human
Gender:Male
Fears:Un-stable things, and fire.
Strengths:Parkour and Fighting.
Occupation:Explorer
Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Kenzi loved to climb mountains as a boy. He was raised in mistral city, With his father. His mother passed away 2 years before. His father, died of an unknown disease, leaving Kenzi at the age of 19. Later, Kenzi got a job as a ShopKeeper, but he left it when he was 21, he got enough money, and bought alot of gear. He bought Swords, picks, shovels, Torches, food, everything he needed for Exploring. He, then sells all his items he collected to Shops, allowing him to gain money. At the age of 22, he was A Exper at Exploring. He lives his life here now, in Mistral city....At age 23..........(Epic cinematic.)
OOC IGN:Loandry412 Age:12 Maturity:8 /10 IC Characters name:Kenzi Bonarck Character Age:23 Race:Human Gender:Male Fears:Un-stable things, and fire. Strengths:Parkour and Fighting. Occupation:Explorer Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Kenzi loved to climb mountains as a boy. He was raised in mistral city, With his father. His mother passed away 2 years before. His father, died of an unknown disease, leaving Kenzi at the age of 19. Later, Kenzi got a job as a ShopKeeper, but he left it when he was 21, he got enough money, and bought alot of gear. He bought Swords, picks, shovels, Torches, food, everything he needed for Exploring. He, then sells all his items he collected to Shops, allowing him to gain money. At the age of 22, he was A Exper at Exploring. He lives his life here now, in Mistral city....At age 23..........(Epic cinematic.)
Needs to be longer. Work on your spelling and grammar. Otherwise you would be accepted.
Flex! The server has been destroyed! Everything is covered in ice and destroyed. WHAT HAPPENED!!!
Wow, usually I have to have been on the server at least once before it gets destroyed ( It always seems to happen ) Anyway my IGN is Superin7enden7 (gasp, I know shocking)
phew...well thursday I will be in dallas with my father he's having surgery on his lung....sadly the STATE OF TEXAS ASSESSMENT OF ACCEDEMIC READINESS (or STAAR formerly TAKS) HAS TO BE ON THE SAME DAMN DAY! so I won't be on for untill maybe next monday, wish my father luck guys oh and If you don't remember me I'm Kreeperofstealth or better
Characters name: Daniel Broadcloth
Character Age: 32
Race: Human
Gender:Male
Fears: Spiders
Strengths: Baking and cooking
Occupation: Baker
Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Daniel Broadcloth was a baker from the start. His great grandfather told him about a lovely lady who went mad. Her name was Rosemary Bacon, but everyone called her "Granny!" Ms. Bacon was always a nice lady to my grandfather and my great grandfather. She would bake delicious cupcakes for my grandfather, and chocolate chip cookies for my great grandfather. Her baking was so good, a few friends of my great grandpa came all the way from terrorvale to taste a treat of Granny Bacon's. When granny died, my grandfather wouldn't speak a word about her. As I learned her tales and the art of baking, I had a good friend rebuild her shop for all those who wanted to try her icing, her sweet, sweet icing. I opened up my own bake shop at a young age and began a new tradition, "The Broadcloth Bakery!" I even came up with a motto, "Granny's treats reborn!" Daniel even put signs up saying, "Top notch bakers needed! Skills as good as Granny's!" Nobody responded so I opened the shop the very next day. I looked outside my window opening day and see hundreds of visiters from all over Minecraftia! Each wanting to taste the amazing flavor and tradition, of Granny Bacon's Greasy Spoon Shop!
Characters name: Duren Codlak
Character Age: 21
Race: Dwarf
Gender: Male
Fears: Death, Starvation, etc.
Strengths: Smithing, Fighting, Mining, Hunting.
Occupation: Blacksmith
Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Duren was born in A mine in the wilderness. His mother is still alive, but returned to her homeland of Icaria. His Father, Roribrand, was killed during a bandit raid to the mining camp. All Duren's life, he's been trained as many things. It helps him get through any situation. He excells and loves Blacksmithing. He chose that as his occupation. He was good with history and learned much about Israphael and the heroes Simon Lane and Lewis Brindley. He loves to hunt and mine around mountains, and finds unspeakable fun in adventuring.
His main goal in life is to become a hero. He follows in the footsteps of the great heroes from over 100 years ago, and wants to find the ruins and such of that the heroes ventured through. He believes the first step in this is to make money from a living he enjoys. That living is blacksmithing, but also being a jack of all trades. Once he arrived in the great Mistral City, he knew that this was the place he would do it. He often thinks about what his father is like, and how his mother is doing. Duren made a good friend named Joshoua Madley. He was a skylord. On the way to Mistral, his airship broke down in mid air, sending Josh, and Duren (He was hitching a ride), down to the ground. While Duren survived without any serious injury aside from a broken rib, Josh was killed. Duren still mourns the death of his good friend.
Characters name:Justin
Character Age:12
Race:elf
Gender:male
Fears:creepers
Strengths:Math And Reading And Archery And Taming
Occupation:School/Explorer
Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Long Long Before Justin Was Born His Mom Got Murdered.Justin's Dad was so sad of the tragic death.
Now when Justin turned 10 his dad taught him how to survive.Justin was good at gathering and archery,so his dad got him tools and a bow.Justin loved his dad till,One day he got slain by a creeper.Justin was so sad at the lost of his father.He ventured out to make his own place even though he is 12 he is smart.Justin tamed a dog named Sparks and a kitty named Fluffy he made himself a tiny house to live in.He goes outside everyday to gather supplies and fish and bones for the dog and cat.His house is made of jungle wood or planks,sometimes he can get cobble.He is really smart,so he outwits his foes like the creeper.He has a unique apperence that will only be seen in game.He usually hangs to himself,as he barely makes friends.His backstory is short and sweet since he is young.
Please accept this his adventures just begun !EDITED!
Justins faith is in your hands spend it wisely
Not to be mean(since im not a whitelister) but.... How can your characters mom get murdered before your born? Doesnt make much sence. Still, if I get whitelisted, I hope to see you on the server!
IGN:Tails2356
Age:17
Maturity: 7/10
IC
Characters name:Zelaphor Belaron
Character Age:23
Race:Human
Gender:Male
Fears:Having those he cares about killed as he watches
Strengths:Intelligent, Brave, Good marksmanship
Occupation:Explorer
Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs)
Zelaphor grew up in a small group of nomads and, as such never had a permanent home. In his youth he never cared much for adventurers, as the ones he met always seemed to act before thinking, but tales of the great heroes Simon and Lewis still made him want to become one himself. Unfortunately for him he always hated training with a sword, and as such he never got very good with them, He did however enjoy Hunting and as such became proficient with a bow. He spent many years training with whatever adventurers he could convince to help, often ending with him getting frustrated at the adventurers as they tried dueling him with a sword. The adventurers of course always won, adding to his frustration. His group ended one such time, when after losing three times in a row, the adventurer, deemed him unteachable. Out of frustration, Zelaphor grabbed his bow as the adventurer was leaving and carefully aimed an arrow, shooting it into the adventurers left arm. Thanks to years of hunting, The arrow hit it's target exactly as planned, sending the adventurer into a fit of rage. Even with the use of only one arm he had no trouble slaughtering everyone in the camp, leaving it barren and empty. As the adventurer approached Zelaphor, his sword ready he was shot several times from behind. Zelaphor Stood there Shocked as the adventurer fell over dead in front of him, until he heard a voice calling to him, another adventurer who was passing by. The man came closer to check if he was injured, upon finding he was relatively unharmed, the man prepared to leave. As the man was leaving Zelaphor asked his name. He replied that his name was john, a hopeful skylord, and that Zelaphor could come with in his travels if he so wished.
Zelaphor traveled with John for many years until he was ready to set off as on his own. With no destination in mind, he off set for wherever his adventures may take him.
Accepted. Gonna whitelist you now.
UM! YAH! YAH!
Really? Maybe you could finally whitelist me, I mean you only accepted my app a couple months ago
Super stop bitching. Just tell us your IGN. Maybe we'll give you a bit of respect if you didn't *****.
IGN:mattspook
Age:11 (im mature
Maturity: 10/10
IC
Characters name:Justin
Character Age:12
Race:elf
Gender:male
Fears:creepers
Strengths:Math And Reading And Archery And Taming
Occupation:School/Explorer
Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Long Long Before Justin Was Born His Dad's Dad Got Murdered.Justin's Dad was so sad of the tragic death.
Now when Justin turned 10 his dad taught him how to survive.Justin was good at gathering and archery,so his dad got him tools and a bow.Justin loved his dad till,One day he got slain by a creeper.Justin was so sad at the lost of his father.He ventured out to make his own place even though he is 12 he is smart.Justin tamed a dog named Sparks and a kitty named Fluffy he made himself a tiny house to live in.He goes outside everyday to gather supplies and fish and bones for the dog and cat.His house is made of jungle wood or planks,sometimes he can get cobble.He is really smart,so he outwits his foes like the creeper.He has a unique apperence that will only be seen in game.He usually hangs to himself,as he barely makes friends.His backstory is short and sweet since he is young.
Please accept this his adventures just begun !EDITED!
Justins faith is in your hands spend it wisely
Love Choerry Motion
IGN:gmaster724
Age:14
Maturity: 9/10
IC
Characters name: Garnade
Character Age:23
Race:Human
Gender:Male
Fears: Losing the ones he loves
Strengths:Combat, smithing
Occupation: Blacksmith
Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Garnade was raised on a small farm way out in the country. He was really close with his family because that was all they head. They were very poor and were half starved everyday. Garnades father had a secret talent of smithing. Although their family could not afford iron Garnades father would go out and steal some iron and smith it into many things such as armor and tools.He trained Garnade at a early age to smith and then on Garnade excelled at it. Life was good,but raids were starting to come more and more often. killing more and more of Garnades brothers and sisters. Garnade knew he had to stop it but he was only 11 how could he do that? Garnade had to stay inside and watch as his father and older brothers hopelessly fought these bandits. Garnades mother fearing the worst ran away with Garnade. Garnade was furious with his mother for leaving their family behind. Later Garnades mother died of illness from the trip. When he was 17 he went back to check on his family.All he saw was ashes. bones in a pile. Everything was abandoned or ransacked... Garnade swore revenge on all thiefs bandits or outlaws from that day foward.
Did you even read the first page? Israphel is already dead! You would be over 100 years old if you were born in that time. Rewrite it, don't use modern things like "epic", and most of all MAKE IT LONGER.
Accepted.
IGN:Loandry412
Age:12
Maturity:8 /10
IC
Characters name:Kenzi Bonarck
Character Age:23
Race:Human
Gender:Male
Fears:Un-stable things, and fire.
Strengths:Parkour and Fighting.
Occupation:Explorer
Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Kenzi loved to climb mountains as a boy. He was raised in mistral city, With his father. His mother passed away 2 years before. His father, died of an unknown disease, leaving Kenzi at the age of 19. Later, Kenzi got a job as a ShopKeeper, but he left it when he was 21, he got enough money, and bought alot of gear. He bought Swords, picks, shovels, Torches, food, everything he needed for Exploring. He, then sells all his items he collected to Shops, allowing him to gain money. At the age of 22, he was A Exper at Exploring. He lives his life here now, in Mistral city....At age 23..........(Epic cinematic.)
Needs to be longer. Work on your spelling and grammar. Otherwise you would be accepted.
Love Choerry Motion
Wow, usually I have to have been on the server at least once before it gets destroyed ( It always seems to happen ) Anyway my IGN is Superin7enden7 (gasp, I know shocking)
Father Havoc
IGN: DSchwaa
Age: 14
Maturity: 9/10
IC
Characters name: Daniel Broadcloth
Character Age: 32
Race: Human
Gender:Male
Fears: Spiders
Strengths: Baking and cooking
Occupation: Baker
Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Daniel Broadcloth was a baker from the start. His great grandfather told him about a lovely lady who went mad. Her name was Rosemary Bacon, but everyone called her "Granny!" Ms. Bacon was always a nice lady to my grandfather and my great grandfather. She would bake delicious cupcakes for my grandfather, and chocolate chip cookies for my great grandfather. Her baking was so good, a few friends of my great grandpa came all the way from terrorvale to taste a treat of Granny Bacon's. When granny died, my grandfather wouldn't speak a word about her. As I learned her tales and the art of baking, I had a good friend rebuild her shop for all those who wanted to try her icing, her sweet, sweet icing. I opened up my own bake shop at a young age and began a new tradition, "The Broadcloth Bakery!" I even came up with a motto, "Granny's treats reborn!" Daniel even put signs up saying, "Top notch bakers needed! Skills as good as Granny's!" Nobody responded so I opened the shop the very next day. I looked outside my window opening day and see hundreds of visiters from all over Minecraftia! Each wanting to taste the amazing flavor and tradition, of Granny Bacon's Greasy Spoon Shop!
IGN: Irondeath79
Age: 12
Maturity: 9/10
IC
Characters name: Duren Codlak
Character Age: 21
Race: Dwarf
Gender: Male
Fears: Death, Starvation, etc.
Strengths: Smithing, Fighting, Mining, Hunting.
Occupation: Blacksmith
Background story (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Duren was born in A mine in the wilderness. His mother is still alive, but returned to her homeland of Icaria. His Father, Roribrand, was killed during a bandit raid to the mining camp. All Duren's life, he's been trained as many things. It helps him get through any situation. He excells and loves Blacksmithing. He chose that as his occupation. He was good with history and learned much about Israphael and the heroes Simon Lane and Lewis Brindley. He loves to hunt and mine around mountains, and finds unspeakable fun in adventuring.
His main goal in life is to become a hero. He follows in the footsteps of the great heroes from over 100 years ago, and wants to find the ruins and such of that the heroes ventured through. He believes the first step in this is to make money from a living he enjoys. That living is blacksmithing, but also being a jack of all trades. Once he arrived in the great Mistral City, he knew that this was the place he would do it. He often thinks about what his father is like, and how his mother is doing. Duren made a good friend named Joshoua Madley. He was a skylord. On the way to Mistral, his airship broke down in mid air, sending Josh, and Duren (He was hitching a ride), down to the ground. While Duren survived without any serious injury aside from a broken rib, Josh was killed. Duren still mourns the death of his good friend.
Love Choerry Motion