2. I always wanted to play with someone with mod gulliver, this is my
chance!, i love this mod and the possibilities are many!, I would be
very grateful if I could enter the server!
3. I can build, help in the survival, fight with monsters and more!
4. a. I was always considered a 'builder' ', usually in servers of my friends, I am who builds more.
b. In free building situations, I expand my mind and build random things =I
c. I am confident, approved by many people
d. I like Giants
e. I always had creativity for draw, I am considered a designer in my school!
5. You want to befriend all and be loved by all. Or at the very least, you want to prove to yourselfthat
you can survive, thrive, and prosper against all odds and
without the luxury of a head start.
6. The money is Cheese :3
Hello there! My name is Hannah and I am going to review your application today
Question 1: This is good to go.
Question 2: This one is very, very vague. It needs much more personalization if you want this one to pass. You should explain more how you found this server and why you would like to join. For example a friend telling you about it or simply finding it on the web, and why you want to join other then you “always wanted to play with someone”. Also explain why you would be grateful if you could be whitelisted.
Question 3: Again this one is pretty vague, I’d suggest instead of redoing this altogether I would go ahead and expand on these because while they are okay to mention, they lack too much detail . I’d advise you go back on this and think about how you can help in survival, what you can do to help the other players, what your personality is, etc. You’ll need to have at least 60-90 words, so instead of saying “and more”, define what that actually is.
Question 4:
a + b ) These cannot be minecraft facts, sorry.
c) Can you mention anything about your hobbies?
d) The sports team or in the gulliver mod? You should probably change this one either way.
e) We have quite a few artists on this server, so you should fit right in
Question 5: This is not what we asked. We asked that you quote one right or responsibility not part of the introduction ^^;
Question 6: Correct!
Conclusion: Well, while this definitely won’t get you in the server, you can improve this application to have another chance. Look back at my review and work on it based on my advice above. If you decide to reapply, remember to repost your new application and not edit your old application.
2 i found the server searching minecraft gulliver server and i found the server trailer i wanna play because i love the gulliver its my favorite mod for minecraft and i wanna play the mod with someone and this is the best minecraft server with gulliver mod
3 i can help in the survival because i lovee heelping people geting itens and building houses good,im very good with the bow,i can do a lot of things with redstone i have good ways to protect locations from monsters, im good at the pvp and killing monsters,i know a lot of tricks ho help players to get things more realistic and hiding chests and itens,im good to make sercret passages and i know how to craft fireworks and make all the potions
4
1i like giants
2 im bad at draw but i love draw
3 i love talk to new people and make friends
4 i love see youtube vídeos and i have a channel!
5 i play footbol
5
As a Tiny, please refrain from frequent and uncomfortable stalking activities, unless consented to
by the larger player.
Hi I'm BabyLillyKittPup(Sean). I Would Like to join your server! i am New to Gulivers mod i have dreamed about playing on your server.As i said i Am New i don't know much but i know the basics Please accept and add me to the white list! I Am Kind Careful Caring and i Love playing! (Please Accept)
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
Gullivers mod has had an interest of me for a month now and I never got a chance to use it on multiplayer. This is a great chance to interact with people that have the same mod as me and that also have a love to the mod and I can play with them and have fun like I never had in Minecraft. It would be a unique chance to join your server! I mean I am almost sure this is the only actual organized whitelisted server out there! I would like to interact with people that also have a great love of the mod like I do! It's like this server is uniquely made for me!
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I am a great person. I have a great building skill and PvP skill and I would like to join your server to help collaborate with everyone on the server. I am very compatible person with a great personality that I can be nice when I need to and I can be serious and funny when I need to. I feel that I can make a very big impact on this server!
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
I really have an interest and love in dogs and I had a dog but but we had to give her up so I really want a dog again.
My favorite sport is baseball and when I play baseball I play 2nd base first and Right Field 2nd.
When I grow up I would like to be a math teacher beacause I would like to shape young minds. ( Specificaclly a Middle school math teacher )
I was on the honor roll in 7th grade in school almost all A's and B's
I have a great talent in math as I am in the top 5% of my state!
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
As a Tiny, please refrain from frequent and uncomfortable stalking activities, unless consented to by the larger player
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
2 i found the server searching minecraft gulliver server and i found the server trailer i wanna play because i love giants and gulliver its my favorite mod for minecraft and i wanna play the mod with someone and this is the best minecraft server with gulliver mod
3 i can help in the survival because i lovee heelping people geting itens and building houses good,im very good with the bow,i can do a lot of things with redstone i have good ways to protect locations from monsters, im good at the pvp and killing monsters,i know a lot of tricks ho help players to get things more realistic and hiding chests and itens,im good to make sercret passages and i know how to craft fireworks and make all the potions
4
1i like giants
2 im bad at draw but i love draw
3 i love talk to new people and make friends
4 i love see youtube vídeos and i have a channel!
5 im brazilian
5
As a Tiny, please refrain from frequent and uncomfortable stalking activities, unless consented to
by the larger player.
6
Cheese
Heya there ^^ I’m Hannah and I’ll be reviewing your application today.
Question 1: Yep, that’s fine
Question 2: Can you try and write in proper sentences please? And also be careful with the way you phrase things like “I love giants”, this can come off as creepish to other players, and end up having people misinterpret you easily. I personally don’t think we would be a good server for you if these are your only reasons for joining. Plus, how do you know we are the best Minecraft server? There are many, many other minecraft servers out there, and from reading this I don’t see much evidence of looking at what’s in our server except gulliver mod.
Question 3: It seems like you have a lot of experience in Minecraft from what I see, you say that you’re good at fighting, redstone and make all the potions. Those are some really good traits to have on an multiplayer survival server, as you can also teach others what you know so they can be better at Minecraft. While it’s great that you have a lot of knowledge on Minecraft, I do have a slight issue with the fact that this answer barely touches the subject of how your personality/aspirations could contribute to this server. It seems to only really focus on how your Minecraft skills can help the server. Also because you haven’t used very good grammar and formatting skills here, it kind of makes me want to think you’re exaggerating a little, so if you could fix that up as well it would make it 20% cooler.
Question 4:
1> *facedesk* These can’t be Minecraft facts! xD
2> Drawing is a fun relaxing hobby to have, even if you aren’t good at it. But they say, the more you draw, the better you get at it! Practice makes perfect after all.
3> This should go in question 3 to add to your personality
4> Yeah youtube videos are great!
5> Oh so English isn’t your first language then, I do apologise if I sound like I’m being harsh. But we don’t want to accept you into a server where people don’t understand you very well. It would be nice for you to expand on this.
Question 5: Correct
Question 6: I didn’t know we switched our currency to Ciabatta’s, I always thought we’ve had something beginning with CH, ending with an E. XD
Conclusion: I’m sorry but this application will not get you anywhere, you need to seriously work on writing proper sentences, correcting your spelling mistakes better and give us more detailed reasons on question 2. I do want to stay sympathetic with you since English may not be your first language, but you need to at least have a fairly good application to get whitelisted in our server. I have provided you with plenty of ways to improve your application, and I’m sure if you really put lots of effort into getting it right the next time round, you will certainly have a better chance of passing. Anyway, if you decide to go ahead and try again, you can use this application as a kind of template and work on improving it there and repost when your done.
Hi I'm BabyLillyKittPup(Sean). I Would Like to join your server! i am New to Gulivers mod i have dreamed about playing on your server.As i said i Am New i don't know much but i know the basics Please accept and add me to the white list! I Am Kind Careful Caring and i Love playing! (Please Accept)
Hi there! if your interested in joining this server, you need to write an application like everyone else has. I strongly recommend you go back onto the first page and read where Cia explains how your application should be set out. Thank you and good luck
Just FYI, Hannah is also interested in reviewing your application, she might get to it tomorrow so stand by. I do recommend you beef up your question 4 facts and improve your grammar first so you can improve your chances of being whitelisted, but that's entirely up to you.
1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")? Diz
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
Gullivers mod has had an interest of me for a month now and I never got a chance to use it on multiplayer. This is a great chance to interact with people that have the same mod as me and that also have a love to the mod and I can play with them and have fun like I never had in Minecraft. It would be a unique chance to join your server! I mean I am almost sure this is the only actual organized whitelisted server out there! I would like to interact with people that also have a great love of the mod like I do! It's like this server is uniquely made for me!
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I am a great person. I have a great building skill and PvP skill and I would like to join your server to help collaborate with everyone on the server. I am very compatible person with a great personality that I can be nice when I need to and I can be serious and funny when I need to. I feel that I can make a very big impact on this server!
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players. I really have an interest and love in dogs and I had a dog but but we had to give her up so I really want a dog again. My favorite sport is baseball and when I play baseball I play 2nd base first and Right Field 2nd. When I grow up I would like to be a math teacher beacause I would like to shape young minds. ( Specificaclly a Middle school math teacher ) I was on the honor roll in 7th grade in school almost all A's and B's I have a great talent in math as I am in the top 5% of my state! 5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most. As a Tiny, please refrain from frequent and uncomfortable stalking activities, unless consented to by the larger player
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
Cheese
Hello Diz, my name is Hannah and I will be reviewing your application!
That’s a very colourfully presented app you got there, it’s definitely clever and creative, and mostly easy to read!
Question 2: Wow, only a month and you already want to play on multiplayer servers for things thing? Cool, but what about Gulliver interests you so much to downgrade to Minecraft 1.6? There are plenty of other fun mods out there, some that even do a million times more fun things than Gulliver, and are already updated to Minecraft 1.9 and above.
Haha, nice save on the “organised” part… but maybe you mean the only “actual organised whitelisted [GULLIVER] server” because there are also millions of other whitelisted Minecraft servers out there that are much more organised than we are. I’m glad you have a reason to join us, although without knowing why you like the mod we really don’t know if you love the mod the same way… everyone here likes the mod for different reasons, or don’t even like the mod at all (they just like the community).
Besides the mod, are there any other reasons why you want to go through the trouble of applying with us? Once you get bored with Gulliver, what else about the server might you be willing to stick around for? Here’s where you can check out our server trailer, forum and Dynmap to see what else we have to offer. ^^
Question 3: Oh wow, so self-confident… you absolutely KNOW you’re a great person! XD
I guess your application is one-of-a-kind, so it might be a good clue to your personality… then again, I saw when it was really tiny and was very “failable”, so maybe that’s a good example of how you adapted to the situation. I will ask you to update this application later, so we’ll need you to adapt one more time.
Everything else seems fine… you want to collaborate, you are usually nice, you have good building skills and you think you’re a great person… not the best we’ve seen, but better than average.
Question 4: Your facts are so much better now, I’m really glad Cia asked you to improve these!
a) Aww… that’s really sad to have such a big interest in dogs, but not be able to have a dog of your own.
Oh nice! We like athletic players… we also have players who do lots of sports, from backflipping to football.
c) Oh, being a teacher is a super-hard job; but I know what a wonderful math teacher looks like. I hope you fulfill that dream some day and inspire other people!
d) Haha, what happened to the 5’4” fact, lol? Still, this one is much better and something to feel proud of!
e) Wow, most of these facts deal with school and accomplishments and such, no wonder you’re so self-confident! Some of us have trouble with Maths homework, so your services would be helpful. ^-^
Question 5: It’s a bit odd of you to choose that responsibility; since you love being great, inspiring others, and being the best you can be, I would have expected you to pick something more noble.
Question 6: This is correct.
Conclusion: Your application looks pretty good, and I’m glad you followed Cia’s advice to fix the grammar and question 4 facts, it’s really helped make this ALMOST whitelist material. I say “almost” because there is one big question mark regarding why you want to join this server; and it’s become very important recently so I really need to hold the process up to get some answers.
So for now, please review all my comments above, especially for Question 2, and repost your application with revisions that address what I wrote. Question 2 is especially important because we want to know 1) why you love the Gulliver mod so much, and 2) why do you want to join our server. If your answers check out, the whitelist is yours.
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
Gullivers mod has had an interest of me for a month now and I never got a chance to use it on multiplayer. This is a great chance to interact with people that have the same mod as me and that also have a love to the mod and I can play with them and have fun like I never had in Minecraft. It would be a unique chance to join your server! I mean I am almost sure this is the only actual organized whitelisted server out there! I would like to interact with people that also have a great love of the mod like I do! It's like this server is uniquely made for me! Now I really would like to join because Gullivers mod is pretty unique mod. It makes mobs and people small and big. I have always wanted to be a giant. I have also wanted to be small. I have an interest with being different sizes. I would be being a giant. I want to join your server because I do not think their is any other Gulliver servers out there. About 1 year ago I saw this server and I never got the chance to apply and join but now 1 year later I think I am more mature and ready for this cool and unique server.
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I am a great person. I have a great building skill and PvP skill and I would like to join your server to help collaborate with everyone on the server. I am very compatible person with a great personality that I can be nice when I need to and I can be serious and funny when I need to. I feel that I can make a very big impact on this server! I think that I would be a active person that would fit well overall. I am a person that is going through puberty and I do not look, act or am perfect. But I think I am a positive person that can get a job done easy.
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
I really have an interest and love in dogs and I had a dog but but we had to give her up so I really want a dog again.
My favorite sport is baseball and when I play baseball I play 2nd base first and Right Field 2nd.
When I grow up I would like to be a math teacher beacause I would like to shape young minds. ( Specificaclly a Middle school math teacher )
I was on the honor roll in 7th grade in school almost all A's and B's
I have a great talent in math as I am in the top 5% of my state!
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
As a Tiny, please refrain from frequent and uncomfortable stalking activities, unless consented to
by the larger player
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the officialserver currency.
Oh Diz, just FYI, be sure you have Gulliver Forge installed so you're ready to join the server if you're whitelisted. It has to be the Forge version... If you do run into any installation issues, be sure to check out my installation guide (it'll be referenced in the instructions for this application).
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
Gullivers mod has had an interest of me for a month now and I never got a chance to use it on multiplayer. This is a great chance to interact with people that have the same mod as me and that also have a love to the mod and I can play with them and have fun like I never had in Minecraft. It would be a unique chance to join your server! I mean I am almost sure this is the only actual organized whitelisted server out there! I would like to interact with people that also have a great love of the mod like I do! It's like this server is uniquely made for me! Now I really would like to join because Gullivers mod is pretty unique mod. It makes mobs and people small and big. I have always wanted to be a giant. I have also wanted to be small. I have an interest with being different sizes. I would be being a giant. I want to join your server because I do not think their is any other Gulliver servers out there. About 1 year ago I saw this server and I never got the chance to apply and join but now 1 year later I think I am more mature and ready for this cool and unique server.
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I am a great person. I have a great building skill and PvP skill and I would like to join your server to help collaborate with everyone on the server. I am very compatible person with a great personality that I can be nice when I need to and I can be serious and funny when I need to. I feel that I can make a very big impact on this server! I think that I would be a active person that would fit well overall. I am a person that is going through puberty and I do not look, act or am perfect. But I think I am a positive person that can get a job done easy.
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
I really have an interest and love in dogs and I had a dog but but we had to give her up so I really want a dog again.
My favorite sport is baseball and when I play baseball I play 2nd base first and Right Field 2nd.
When I grow up I would like to be a math teacher beacause I would like to shape young minds. ( Specificaclly a Middle school math teacher )
I was on the honor roll in 7th grade in school almost all A's and B's
I have a great talent in math as I am in the top 5% of my state!
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
As a Tiny, please refrain from frequent and uncomfortable stalking activities, unless consented to
by the larger player
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the officialserver currency.
Cheese
Heyo~ I will withhold reviewing your application until I have gotten confirmation that you have installed Gulliver Forge as requested by Cia.
2. (Why I would Like to Join) I would like to join this server because it looks like it has a nice community, and I really like talking to people and getting to know everyone on the server. The dynmap is a neat feature too most server that I have seen don't have that. I have never played on a real Gulliver server besides LAN with friends. I have been playing Gulliver for about 4 years now, mostly just RPing and random stuff. I read the Novices Creed and I liked it, I also saw a few of the server videos.
3. (How I can help the server) I'm an ok builder and I do have a good personality and it might be enjoyable to me around me. I'm kind of mature, but everyone has a goofy side to them I am good at coming up with ideas for new things to add. I will probably be on the server often, I definitely won't join the server play for a few months then never come back.
4. (5 random facts)
In my free time I usually like to play games on steam or play basketball. 3 of my favorite games at the moment are Garry's Mod, CS:GO, and Age of Empires. I also kind of suck at basketball xD.
My favorite Ice cream is rocky road.
I really like making people happy, I don't know why it just feels right.
I have 3 brothers, 2 dogs, 3 cats, and a hamster. My house is kind of small so its very crowded xD.
I love the lake. I love boating, tubing, skiing, swimming, everything to do about it. It is my happy place.
5. (favorite right or responsibility) It was hard to pick because I liked them all, but I picked this one. Please be courteous to your fellow players on our server. I chose this one because when people are friendly it creates a nice environment that everyone enjoys playing in.
6. CHEESE! It's also my favorite snack along with crackers and maybe an apple.
I really look forward to playing on this server and I hope you like my application. BTW I have the mod installed already.
Oh thank goodness! Someone confirms mod installation, finally! XD
Anyway, a member of my staff will review your application in the coming days. Before that happens, I do advise taking a look at question 3 and trying REAL HARD to come up with a few more things to say.
Well seeing as how it's been two years, I would suggest going over your old posts, explain your actions then, and explain why it's safe to consider your application now.
Yeah I have been reading over those I don't even know what to say. I'm really sorry for causing you all that trouble, that was me before puberty, I messed up really bad. I really don't deserve to be on this server but if you want to give me a try I would appreciate it. If you don't trust me I completely understand. I don't even know why I did that, that looks nothing like something I would do. I guess I have changed a lot. It's safe to consider my application I just want to play Gulliver on a nice server with people. I'm not quite sure how to say sorry its really bad. I guess you will just have to trust me which I guess I have proven to be pretty hard, but trust me that won't happen again that was in the past. Just give me a try and see how things go. I'v never been banned from a server and I have never greifed, I promise you that. I'm not a greifer I guess younger me was very different.
Yeah, trust is something that's earned, not owed. In any case, I will admit that the quality of the application is better than your earlier attempts, so perhaps it does warrant a second (more like fifth) chance.
2. (Why I would Like to Join) I would like to join this server because it looks like it has a nice community, and I really like talking to people and getting to know everyone on the server. The dynmap is a neat feature too most server that I have seen don't have that. I have never played on a real Gulliver server besides LAN with friends. I have been playing Gulliver for about 4 years now, mostly just RPing and random stuff. I read the Novices Creed and I liked it, I also saw a few of the server videos.
3. (How I can help the server) I'm an ok builder and I do have a good personality and it might be enjoyable to me around me. I'm kind of mature, but everyone has a goofy side to them I am good at coming up with ideas for new things to add. I will probably be on the server often, I definitely won't join the server play for a few months then never come back.
4. (5 random facts)
In my free time I usually like to play games on steam or play basketball. 3 of my favorite games at the moment are Garry's Mod, CS:GO, and Age of Empires. I also kind of suck at basketball xD.
My favorite Ice cream is rocky road.
I really like making people happy, I don't know why it just feels right.
I have 3 brothers, 2 dogs, 3 cats, and a hamster. My house is kind of small so its very crowded xD.
I love the lake. I love boating, tubing, skiing, swimming, everything to do about it. It is my happy place.
5. (favorite right or responsibility) It was hard to pick because I liked them all, but I picked this one. Please be courteous to your fellow players on our server. I chose this one because when people are friendly it creates a nice environment that everyone enjoys playing in.
6. CHEESE! It's also my favorite snack along with crackers and maybe an apple.
I really look forward to playing on this server and I hope you like my application. BTW I have the mod installed already.
Hello again Panda Paullam,
Turns out that volunteers to handle your app are rather... scarce... at this time. So in the interest of just getting this out of the way, I'll go ahead and do this app review for you.
QUESTION 2:
So yes, a big improvement over the one from two years ago, and this generally touches on almost everything that we want covered. I say "almost", however, because there's no clear indication of why you like Gulliver, or what makes up this RP or "random stuff". In light of recent events and the fact we're being extra diligent with you, I'll have to stop you for a sec while you give us some reasons why you like th emod, and give us some brief examples of the kind of RPs and "random stuff" you generally do using the mod.
QUESTION 3:
You used "me" twice, I wonder if it was a subconscious choice. >v>
You've already proven your immaturity before, so you can completely strike out that "kind of mature" comment as patently false; besides, mature people don't have to say they're mature. The rest of what you wrote is fine and makes the cut, but it'll be hard to believe until I see it as lots of people make that promise and disappear anyway (and who can really blame them, since we're so far behind version-wise).
QUESTION 4:
- Is it wrong for me to focus on the basketball part since that seems much more exciting than those other yawn-tastic games? >v>
- This is not a full sentence so invalid... you can try adding why you like rocky road.
- Doesn't belong here, this belongs in question 3. You certainly haven't made "me" happy, so I think you still need some practice.
- Oh now this is a good fact, just right! So many wonderful critters!
- This one is superb too, it makes you more than just your average "gamer" player.
QUESTION 5:
Correct, and good explanation.
QUESTION 6:
Correct.
INSTALLATION NOTE:
Appreciated.
VERDICT:
It needs some work on questions 2, 3 and 4, so be sure to read my comments above regarding this. But all in all, while it's disappointing to see that after two years, you still haven't made a perfect, it's not entirely lost. With some tweak and polish, it can be an acceptable application, and I'll be willing to let you revise your application to see if you have what it takes.
When you're ready, repost your application with the additions and revisions I asked for, and we'll try again.
Hello there! My name is Hannah and I am going to review your application today
Question 1: This is good to go.
Question 2: This one is very, very vague. It needs much more personalization if you want this one to pass. You should explain more how you found this server and why you would like to join. For example a friend telling you about it or simply finding it on the web, and why you want to join other then you “always wanted to play with someone”. Also explain why you would be grateful if you could be whitelisted.
Question 3: Again this one is pretty vague, I’d suggest instead of redoing this altogether I would go ahead and expand on these because while they are okay to mention, they lack too much detail . I’d advise you go back on this and think about how you can help in survival, what you can do to help the other players, what your personality is, etc. You’ll need to have at least 60-90 words, so instead of saying “and more”, define what that actually is.
Question 4:
a + b ) These cannot be minecraft facts, sorry.
Question 5: This is not what we asked. We asked that you quote one right or responsibility not part of the introduction ^^;
Question 6: Correct!
Conclusion: Well, while this definitely won’t get you in the server, you can improve this application to have another chance. Look back at my review and work on it based on my advice above. If you decide to reapply, remember to repost your new application and not edit your old application.
Thank you
(Updated)
1 my name on minecraft is space_force
2 i found the server searching minecraft gulliver server and i found the server trailer i wanna play because i love the gulliver its my favorite mod for minecraft and i wanna play the mod with someone and this is the best minecraft server with gulliver mod
3 i can help in the survival because i lovee heelping people geting itens and building houses good,im very good with the bow,i can do a lot of things with redstone i have good ways to protect locations from monsters, im good at the pvp and killing monsters,i know a lot of tricks ho help players to get things more realistic and hiding chests and itens,im good to make sercret passages and i know how to craft fireworks and make all the potions
4
1i like giants
2 im bad at draw but i love draw
3 i love talk to new people and make friends
4 i love see youtube vídeos and i have a channel!
5 i play footbol
5
As a Tiny, please refrain from frequent and uncomfortable stalking activities, unless consented to
by the larger player.
6
Cheese
Hi I'm BabyLillyKittPup(Sean). I Would Like to join your server! i am New to Gulivers mod i have dreamed about playing on your server.As i said i Am New i don't know much but i know the basics Please accept and add me to the white list! I Am Kind Careful Caring and i Love playing! (Please Accept)
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
by the larger player
Heya there ^^ I’m Hannah and I’ll be reviewing your application today.
Question 1: Yep, that’s fine
Question 2: Can you try and write in proper sentences please? And also be careful with the way you phrase things like “I love giants”, this can come off as creepish to other players, and end up having people misinterpret you easily. I personally don’t think we would be a good server for you if these are your only reasons for joining. Plus, how do you know we are the best Minecraft server? There are many, many other minecraft servers out there, and from reading this I don’t see much evidence of looking at what’s in our server except gulliver mod.
Question 3: It seems like you have a lot of experience in Minecraft from what I see, you say that you’re good at fighting, redstone and make all the potions. Those are some really good traits to have on an multiplayer survival server, as you can also teach others what you know so they can be better at Minecraft. While it’s great that you have a lot of knowledge on Minecraft, I do have a slight issue with the fact that this answer barely touches the subject of how your personality/aspirations could contribute to this server. It seems to only really focus on how your Minecraft skills can help the server. Also because you haven’t used very good grammar and formatting skills here, it kind of makes me want to think you’re exaggerating a little, so if you could fix that up as well it would make it 20% cooler.
Question 4:
1> *facedesk* These can’t be Minecraft facts! xD
2> Drawing is a fun relaxing hobby to have, even if you aren’t good at it. But they say, the more you draw, the better you get at it! Practice makes perfect after all.
3> This should go in question 3 to add to your personality
4> Yeah youtube videos are great!
5> Oh so English isn’t your first language then, I do apologise if I sound like I’m being harsh. But we don’t want to accept you into a server where people don’t understand you very well. It would be nice for you to expand on this.
Question 5: Correct
Question 6: I didn’t know we switched our currency to Ciabatta’s, I always thought we’ve had something beginning with CH, ending with an E. XD
Conclusion: I’m sorry but this application will not get you anywhere, you need to seriously work on writing proper sentences, correcting your spelling mistakes better and give us more detailed reasons on question 2. I do want to stay sympathetic with you since English may not be your first language, but you need to at least have a fairly good application to get whitelisted in our server. I have provided you with plenty of ways to improve your application, and I’m sure if you really put lots of effort into getting it right the next time round, you will certainly have a better chance of passing. Anyway, if you decide to go ahead and try again, you can use this application as a kind of template and work on improving it there and repost when your done.
Thank you
-Hannah
Hi there! if your interested in joining this server, you need to write an application like everyone else has. I strongly recommend you go back onto the first page and read where Cia explains how your application should be set out. Thank you and good luck
Hannah
Hi Diz!
Just FYI, Hannah is also interested in reviewing your application, she might get to it tomorrow so stand by. I do recommend you beef up your question 4 facts and improve your grammar first so you can improve your chances of being whitelisted, but that's entirely up to you.
Good luck!
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
Right on that ty for the tips
Hello Diz, my name is Hannah and I will be reviewing your application!
That’s a very colourfully presented app you got there, it’s definitely clever and creative, and mostly easy to read!
Question 2: Wow, only a month and you already want to play on multiplayer servers for things thing? Cool, but what about Gulliver interests you so much to downgrade to Minecraft 1.6? There are plenty of other fun mods out there, some that even do a million times more fun things than Gulliver, and are already updated to Minecraft 1.9 and above.
Haha, nice save on the “organised” part… but maybe you mean the only “actual organised whitelisted [GULLIVER] server” because there are also millions of other whitelisted Minecraft servers out there that are much more organised than we are. I’m glad you have a reason to join us, although without knowing why you like the mod we really don’t know if you love the mod the same way… everyone here likes the mod for different reasons, or don’t even like the mod at all (they just like the community).
Besides the mod, are there any other reasons why you want to go through the trouble of applying with us? Once you get bored with Gulliver, what else about the server might you be willing to stick around for? Here’s where you can check out our server trailer, forum and Dynmap to see what else we have to offer. ^^
Question 3: Oh wow, so self-confident… you absolutely KNOW you’re a great person! XD
I guess your application is one-of-a-kind, so it might be a good clue to your personality… then again, I saw when it was really tiny and was very “failable”, so maybe that’s a good example of how you adapted to the situation. I will ask you to update this application later, so we’ll need you to adapt one more time.
Everything else seems fine… you want to collaborate, you are usually nice, you have good building skills and you think you’re a great person… not the best we’ve seen, but better than average.
Question 4: Your facts are so much better now, I’m really glad Cia asked you to improve these!
a) Aww… that’s really sad to have such a big interest in dogs, but not be able to have a dog of your own.
c) Oh, being a teacher is a super-hard job; but I know what a wonderful math teacher looks like. I hope you fulfill that dream some day and inspire other people!
d) Haha, what happened to the 5’4” fact, lol? Still, this one is much better and something to feel proud of!
e) Wow, most of these facts deal with school and accomplishments and such, no wonder you’re so self-confident! Some of us have trouble with Maths homework, so your services would be helpful. ^-^
Question 5: It’s a bit odd of you to choose that responsibility; since you love being great, inspiring others, and being the best you can be, I would have expected you to pick something more noble.
Question 6: This is correct.
Conclusion: Your application looks pretty good, and I’m glad you followed Cia’s advice to fix the grammar and question 4 facts, it’s really helped make this ALMOST whitelist material. I say “almost” because there is one big question mark regarding why you want to join this server; and it’s become very important recently so I really need to hold the process up to get some answers.
So for now, please review all my comments above, especially for Question 2, and repost your application with revisions that address what I wrote. Question 2 is especially important because we want to know 1) why you love the Gulliver mod so much, and 2) why do you want to join our server. If your answers check out, the whitelist is yours.
Good luck!
1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
Diz
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
Gullivers mod has had an interest of me for a month now and I never got a chance to use it on multiplayer. This is a great chance to interact with people that have the same mod as me and that also have a love to the mod and I can play with them and have fun like I never had in Minecraft. It would be a unique chance to join your server! I mean I am almost sure this is the only actual organized whitelisted server out there! I would like to interact with people that also have a great love of the mod like I do! It's like this server is uniquely made for me! Now I really would like to join because Gullivers mod is pretty unique mod. It makes mobs and people small and big. I have always wanted to be a giant. I have also wanted to be small. I have an interest with being different sizes. I would be being a giant. I want to join your server because I do not think their is any other Gulliver servers out there. About 1 year ago I saw this server and I never got the chance to apply and join but now 1 year later I think I am more mature and ready for this cool and unique server.
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I am a great person. I have a great building skill and PvP skill and I would like to join your server to help collaborate with everyone on the server. I am very compatible person with a great personality that I can be nice when I need to and I can be serious and funny when I need to. I feel that I can make a very big impact on this server! I think that I would be a active person that would fit well overall. I am a person that is going through puberty and I do not look, act or am perfect. But I think I am a positive person that can get a job done easy.
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
I really have an interest and love in dogs and I had a dog but but we had to give her up so I really want a dog again.
My favorite sport is baseball and when I play baseball I play 2nd base first and Right Field 2nd.
When I grow up I would like to be a math teacher beacause I would like to shape young minds. ( Specificaclly a Middle school math teacher )
I was on the honor roll in 7th grade in school almost all A's and B's
I have a great talent in math as I am in the top 5% of my state!
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
As a Tiny, please refrain from frequent and uncomfortable stalking activities, unless consented to
by the larger player
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
Cheese
Oh Diz, just FYI, be sure you have Gulliver Forge installed so you're ready to join the server if you're whitelisted. It has to be the Forge version... If you do run into any installation issues, be sure to check out my installation guide (it'll be referenced in the instructions for this application).
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
Heyo~ I will withhold reviewing your application until I have gotten confirmation that you have installed Gulliver Forge as requested by Cia.
THank you
1. (IGN) Sir_Panda_9001
2. (Why I would Like to Join) I would like to join this server because it looks like it has a nice community, and I really like talking to people and getting to know everyone on the server. The dynmap is a neat feature too most server that I have seen don't have that. I have never played on a real Gulliver server besides LAN with friends. I have been playing Gulliver for about 4 years now, mostly just RPing and random stuff. I read the Novices Creed and I liked it, I also saw a few of the server videos.
3. (How I can help the server) I'm an ok builder and I do have a good personality and it might be enjoyable to me around me. I'm kind of mature, but everyone has a goofy side to them
I am good at coming up with ideas for new things to add. I will probably be on the server often, I definitely won't join the server play for a few months then never come back.
4. (5 random facts)
5. (favorite right or responsibility) It was hard to pick because I liked them all, but I picked this one. Please be courteous to your fellow players on our server. I chose this one because when people are friendly it creates a nice environment that everyone enjoys playing in.
6. CHEESE! It's also my favorite snack along with crackers and maybe an apple.
I really look forward to playing on this server and I hope you like my application. BTW I have the mod installed already.
Oh thank goodness! Someone confirms mod installation, finally! XD
Anyway, a member of my staff will review your application in the coming days. Before that happens, I do advise taking a look at question 3 and trying REAL HARD to come up with a few more things to say.
Anyway, good luck!
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
Ok, I took your advice and revised question 3, thank you.
Oh wait, turns out you're Paullam, one of the bad applicants on our blacklist.... :/
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/739830-big-sister-gulliver-minecraft-server-whitelisted?comment=1041
Well seeing as how it's been two years, I would suggest going over your old posts, explain your actions then, and explain why it's safe to consider your application now.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
Yeah I have been reading over those I don't even know what to say. I'm really sorry for causing you all that trouble, that was me before puberty, I messed up really bad. I really don't deserve to be on this server but if you want to give me a try I would appreciate it. If you don't trust me I completely understand. I don't even know why I did that, that looks nothing like something I would do. I guess I have changed a lot. It's safe to consider my application I just want to play Gulliver on a nice server with people. I'm not quite sure how to say sorry its really bad. I guess you will just have to trust me which I guess I have proven to be pretty hard, but trust me that won't happen again that was in the past. Just give me a try and see how things go. I'v never been banned from a server and I have never greifed, I promise you that. I'm not a greifer I guess younger me was very different.
Yeah, trust is something that's earned, not owed. In any case, I will admit that the quality of the application is better than your earlier attempts, so perhaps it does warrant a second (more like fifth) chance.
Very well, my staff can see what you got.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
Thanks. I really appreciate it.
Hello again Panda Paullam,
Turns out that volunteers to handle your app are rather... scarce... at this time. So in the interest of just getting this out of the way, I'll go ahead and do this app review for you.
QUESTION 2:
So yes, a big improvement over the one from two years ago, and this generally touches on almost everything that we want covered. I say "almost", however, because there's no clear indication of why you like Gulliver, or what makes up this RP or "random stuff". In light of recent events and the fact we're being extra diligent with you, I'll have to stop you for a sec while you give us some reasons why you like th emod, and give us some brief examples of the kind of RPs and "random stuff" you generally do using the mod.
QUESTION 3:
You used "me" twice, I wonder if it was a subconscious choice. >v>
You've already proven your immaturity before, so you can completely strike out that "kind of mature" comment as patently false; besides, mature people don't have to say they're mature. The rest of what you wrote is fine and makes the cut, but it'll be hard to believe until I see it as lots of people make that promise and disappear anyway (and who can really blame them, since we're so far behind version-wise).
QUESTION 4:
- Is it wrong for me to focus on the basketball part since that seems much more exciting than those other yawn-tastic games? >v>
- This is not a full sentence so invalid... you can try adding why you like rocky road.
- Doesn't belong here, this belongs in question 3. You certainly haven't made "me" happy, so I think you still need some practice.
- Oh now this is a good fact, just right! So many wonderful critters!
- This one is superb too, it makes you more than just your average "gamer" player.
QUESTION 5:
Correct, and good explanation.
QUESTION 6:
Correct.
INSTALLATION NOTE:
Appreciated.
VERDICT:
It needs some work on questions 2, 3 and 4, so be sure to read my comments above regarding this. But all in all, while it's disappointing to see that after two years, you still haven't made a perfect, it's not entirely lost. With some tweak and polish, it can be an acceptable application, and I'll be willing to let you revise your application to see if you have what it takes.
When you're ready, repost your application with the additions and revisions I asked for, and we'll try again.
Good luck.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla