As Burger mentioned, you should really take your time revising the application, don't rush it as we ourselves are in no rush. Review the above carefully and slowly, taking a few days if need be, and be absolutely sure we have what you're looking for.
1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
AexoDiergka
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
I have over a decade's worth of experience in size-changing environments and I adore the interaction that ensues. I'm not sure if I'll be a long-term member but I at least want to check out the server since I haven't been able to find good Gulliver alternatives.
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I'm a thoroughly-practiced roleplayer and a Minecraft veteran from the alpha days. I automatically make the lives of the people I come into contact more interesting, and should I decide to become an invested member of the community, you'll be proud to have me (or your money back)!
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
- I've played over two thousand different video games across over a dozen platforms.
- I'm more at home in the sky than I am on the ground, and I tend to build everything up high as a result.
- I'm a professionally published game design author!
- I played eleven years of piano, then dropped it and never looked back.
- I'm a huge fan of worldbuilding (as in, developing alternate/fantasy worlds).
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
"As a Tiny, please refrain from frequent and uncomfortable stalking activities, unless consented to
by the larger player."
I've been the subject of my fair share of stalking activities, to be concise.
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
Well, to start off, I now see the server as an unfinished project. It always bugged me that I was naive enough to not think this was a serious application that needs thought and heart pouring into it. Of course, I don't JUST see it as an unfinished project, but a haven for diverse and rational people, something I long to see in every whitelisted server. With your depiction of the server alone somehow drew me again and again back to this forum page, craving more knowledge on this this seemingly wonderful of a server. Even beyond that, I kept looking about, snuck around your forum page a little, exploring as much as i could on the dynmap, which I do enjoy a laugh at Piggy University, and of course to top it all off, I downloaded and read all the creeds just to catch a bigger glimpse of what this server truly is! Some would call that an obsession, but I call it a fascination of the unknown!
3) Explain your talents, skills, etc.
I'd like to begin with how I can bring a significant amount of life to the server! My determined personality and calm server, I do enjoy to think that I could bring smile upon faces, even if I don't get to see it! Not only that, but I do bet the positive mood and even brighter players would attract a sum to this endangered type of server. Enough narcissism, let us continue! Like a majority of other players, I do enjoy doing my fair share of building. If I do get accepted, I plan on making tiny hotel with transparent roofs so the larger get to see the smaller squirm about! A win-win for all sizes! Of course, that doesn't end there! I also plan for larger building to rent out to the giants, a great money-gain for those who need a rest after a time of adventuring.
4) Please list five random facts about yourself!
• I enjoy my large share of writing, I do have a sum of stories on my desktop that I really wish I had time to continue or touch up!
• For the past 5 years I've been learning how to play the violin, I still continue, but I'm debating if I really want to continue.
• I will become very determined and ambitious when it comes to doing something I even moderately enjoy, worst part, I enjoy most things!
• I am simply fascinated when it comes to space, particularly black holes and the theorized white holes!
• I have a novice amount of knowledge of Java programming, it's always useful on knowing how the base line works in various programs.
5)Write down the responsibility/right you enjoy the most.
"12. If held or kidnapped by a Giant player against your will, or attacked by a PvP-obsessed player, you have the right to protest the act or defend yourself if necessary." I think all the smaller enjoy this right, I do think this would be an immense problem that'd have to be directly addressed if this wasn't here, as Novices wouldn't know if they're allowed to PvP if they're being held, stomped on, etc. It's a great clarification and I know I'm going to hold onto this if a bigger tries to kidnap me and complain that I'm nipping them!
6) What is the Big Sister's currency?
The server's currency is the beloved cheese!
Thank you for your time for reading this LONG application. Totally didn't put a joke about my previous applications in here.
1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
AexoDiergka
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
I have over a decade's worth of experience in size-changing environments and I adore the interaction that ensues. I'm not sure if I'll be a long-term member but I at least want to check out the server since I haven't been able to find good Gulliver alternatives.
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I'm a thoroughly-practiced roleplayer and a Minecraft veteran from the alpha days. I automatically make the lives of the people I come into contact more interesting, and should I decide to become an invested member of the community, you'll be proud to have me (or your money back)!
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
- I've played over two thousand different video games across over a dozen platforms.
- I'm more at home in the sky than I am on the ground, and I tend to build everything up high as a result.
- I'm a professionally published game design author!
- I played eleven years of piano, then dropped it and never looked back.
- I'm a huge fan of worldbuilding (as in, developing alternate/fantasy worlds).
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
"As a Tiny, please refrain from frequent and uncomfortable stalking activities, unless consented to
by the larger player."
I've been the subject of my fair share of stalking activities, to be concise.
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
Hello Aexo,
My staff is in vacation mode and I have some spare time, so I'll go ahead and process some of these app reviews. Thanks for waiting. ^^
QUESTION 2:
Wow, a decade! Gulliver hasn't been around that log, so I'd be curious to know what these size-changing environments are/were. Ironically, the Gulliver aspect isn't as big a deal much anymore as everyone has pretty much settled into social or artistic modes, so aside from the tiny villages or 8x towns you could hardly tell we were a Gulliver server.
Thank you for your honesty, we understand if you don't feel the need to spend a whole lot of time here (I don't) -- I do get the impression you only want to join to quickly check it out, so I hope this whole lot of time doesn't amount to about 4 minutes. If you want to check our server out, you can do so by watching our trailer, visiting our Dynmap, reading our Creeds or visiting our official forum (http://bigsister.forumotion.com/) without the expense of typing up an application. I would encourage you to do so now to ensure we are what you're looking for -- there's a chance we may not be. ^^
QUESTION 3:
ooh yay, money back guarantee!! If you're also a great road or bridge builder, I can definitely cash that in often. ^^
Roleplay is also not a huge thing here anymore, but our folks do get bit by the RP bug every once in a while, so if you wish to revitalize that industry you'd certainly be in your element. ^^
QUESTION 4:
- oh dear gawd! I hope most of those include mobile and web games because that's intense. XD
- this is probably a Minecraft fact, but I'll let it slide since it can also apply to other builder games (like Terraria) and I like building up in the sky too.
- Hmm, another game fact... this would worry me normally since we don't like repetitive facts, but I'm okay with game design since this could be a profession... and in fact in your case it IS a profession!
- Aww, what a shame. But thanks for the non-game fact.
- Almost a game fact too, but this can apply to literature, movies, drawings, tabletop games, even music I'm sure.
QUESTION 5:
Oh dear gawd, poor you. But yes, this is rarely if ever a problem, so expect this to be enforced regularly.
QUESTION 6:
I think the idea is clever, but sadly it backfired for you here since I'm in an environment where I cannot watch youtube videos. Ergo, this is technically incorrect [as in unanswered], sorry. :<
VERDICT:
It's a solid little app and I feel you might enjoy being here -- but we do have to get past the technicalities of Question 2 and 6 first before the application can be whitelistable. I hate to be a stickler for rules on #6 especially, but there is a very specific reason why this is so, and I hope you'll understand. If possible, please repost your application with #2 and #6 revised per my feedback above, and I'm sure we can get you hooked up!
Thank you. ^^
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Oh and welcome back, Toothy. Last time you were here was like two years ago, and your writing skills (and alleged insanity) needed some work. :3
I actually reread my old posts before posting this one, I just had to cringe at it one more time before trying again. The insanity get-up I tried, yeeeaaahhh, I obviously see why and how that failed miserably. I don't really regret it, as I learned A LOT from the unholy mistake and yeah, I've been practicing my writing a lot since then, thanks for noticing ^-^. Thanks ahead of time for taking time out of your day to read the next monstrosity the infamous Toothy has for you!
Well, to start off, I now see the server as an unfinished project. It always bugged me that I was naive enough to not think this was a serious application that needs thought and heart pouring into it. Of course, I don't JUST see it as an unfinished project, but a haven for diverse and rational people, something I long to see in every whitelisted server. With your depiction of the server alone somehow drew me again and again back to this forum page, craving more knowledge on this this seemingly wonderful of a server. Even beyond that, I kept looking about, snuck around your forum page a little, exploring as much as i could on the dynmap, which I do enjoy a laugh at Piggy University, and of course to top it all off, I downloaded and read all the creeds just to catch a bigger glimpse of what this server truly is! Some would call that an obsession, but I call it a fascination of the unknown!
3) Explain your talents, skills, etc.
I'd like to begin with how I can bring a significant amount of life to the server! My determined personality and calm server, I do enjoy to think that I could bring smile upon faces, even if I don't get to see it! Not only that, but I do bet the positive mood and even brighter players would attract a sum to this endangered type of server. Enough narcissism, let us continue! Like a majority of other players, I do enjoy doing my fair share of building. If I do get accepted, I plan on making tiny hotel with transparent roofs so the larger get to see the smaller squirm about! A win-win for all sizes! Of course, that doesn't end there! I also plan for larger building to rent out to the giants, a great money-gain for those who need a rest after a time of adventuring.
4) Please list five random facts about yourself!
• I enjoy my large share of writing, I do have a sum of stories on my desktop that I really wish I had time to continue or touch up!
• For the past 5 years I've been learning how to play the violin, I still continue, but I'm debating if I really want to continue.
• I will become very determined and ambitious when it comes to doing something I even moderately enjoy, worst part, I enjoy most things!
• I am simply fascinated when it comes to space, particularly black holes and the theorized white holes!
• I have a novice amount of knowledge of Java programming, it's always useful on knowing how the base line works in various programs.
5)Write down the responsibility/right you enjoy the most.
"12. If held or kidnapped by a Giant player against your will, or attacked by a PvP-obsessed player, you have the right to protest the act or defend yourself if necessary." I think all the smaller enjoy this right, I do think this would be an immense problem that'd have to be directly addressed if this wasn't here, as Novices wouldn't know if they're allowed to PvP if they're being held, stomped on, etc. It's a great clarification and I know I'm going to hold onto this if a bigger tries to kidnap me and complain that I'm nipping them!
6) What is the Big Sister's currency?
The server's currency is the beloved cheese!
Thank you for your time for reading this LONG application. Totally didn't put a joke about my previous applications in here.
Hi Toothy,
Oh yeah, the older posts were ghastly (no offense), so I'm really happy to see you've improved quite a lot Hopefully you'll continue to advance here too. As for monstrosities, not to worry... in the past three years of doing app reviews, I can safely say your app would be considered "above-average" (and it's nowhere near the longest I've reviewed).
Anyway....
QUESTION 2:
The server is WOEFULLY unfinished, yes, and chances are it will never get finished before its three-year mandate, and possibly its fourth year extension. It's just too big, with too much unrealized ambition, and too much appreciation for real life interaction. ^^
That being said, I appreciate that you researched enough to conclude that we're a kind of haven for a diverse range of people -- while we're not perfect in this role, I have felt that we do offer a kind of stable and safe play and interaction environment, not least of which is because a> we do take the whitelist process seriously, and b> we never reset the world or willingly destroy people's creations, so players appreciate that they can build without risk of losing everything. I'd be curious to ask you your thoughts on the Creeds at a later date, especially the Owner's Creed which a lot of people overlook (but shouldn't!).
And I'm glad you loved Piggy U., you might enjoy it more visiting it in person.
QUESTION 3:
While your writing has improved, I have to make note of the distorted grammar (e.g., "determined personality and calm server, I do enjoy to think")... either you write when you're tired (like yours truly), or the writing improvement is an ongoing process. It's not a dealbreaker per se, but thought I'd point it out. ^^
Note that while determination is good, sometimes it's necessary to be a little yielding... always aim to achieve balance of emotion rather than striving for an unrelenting and inflexible force of will.
Your building ideas are cute if a little overdone, since I've had three years of players trying out similar things... don't be disappointed if you don't get people absolutely clamoring over your builds, as these days people rightfully focus more on the builder rather than the buildings.
QUESTION 4:
- You've definitely been practicing your writing, good for you! Again, the grammar needs a bit of work, so make sure you focus on that as your next goal... quality matters as much as quantity in just about anything, ESPECIALLY when it comes to writing. ^^
- Aww, that's a shame since the violin is such a pretty instrument! Maybe an electric violin might appeal to you more?
- As I mentioned earlier, there is such a thing as being TOO determined and TOO ambitious, to the point it clouds your judgement. For example, lots of our players start off with huge ambitions to create 8x towns, then get lazy and leave, leaving behind empty, ugly husks of buildings. This is a clear example of poor planning and a kind of blind determination that leads them to bite off more than they can chew... be sure not to become a statistic and try to ground your ambitions to realistic expectations. As the old saying goes: "if you fail to plan, you plan to fail". ^^
- Oh yeah, space is beautiful! And such a phenomenal topic of conversation, with lots of great history behind it... just the other day, I was watching a documentary that narrated the great achievements of Edmond Halley, a phenomenal man of many extraordinary talents who, sadly, is only remembered for the comet he helped calculate the orbit of (but never actually named!). >v<
- Oh very cool, we're always eager to have Java developers visit since there are lots of mod problems that could use the keen eye of a Java developer. We've had a few thus far, but they're not always around. ^^
QUESTION 5:
Nice explanation, and indeed this rule was based on some unsavoury experiences I had when I first joined Gunia's server (our parent server) and no PvP was allowed... when a Giant grabbed you then, there was no way to escape the grasp as a normal player, and this lead to a lot of abuse sadly. I've since felt that everyone has the right to defend him/herself, no matter how pointless it may seem.
QUESTION 6:
Correct.
VERDICT:
Your app has all the appropriate word lengths and technical merits, and it is rather interesting to read, if a bit over-flattery at times (i.e., "beloved cheese"? XD ). I will say, however, that the poor grammar in some parts can be very distracting, especially in light of the fact you're first two attempts years ago were also very poor and plagued with numerous grammar and spelling problems.
Therefore, before approving the whitelist, I want to ask you some questions (and there won't be a need to repost your application to answer these...)
- Are you a native English-speaker or is it something of a second/third/etc language?
- Can you explain why there are so many grammar issues?
- Do you feel this may pose problems when interacting with the rest of the players?
- And lastly, can you assure us that you will work on using your determination and ambition wisely?
If you can get me some good answers to these (which I'm confident you will do your best for), the whitelist is yours. ^^
English was my first written language, but not spoken, Spanish takes that place.
- Why are there so many grammar issues?
The reason for all the grammatical errors is very simple; I wrote my newest application around three in the morning. I never really got around checking the application thoroughly for misspelled words and odd-sounding sentence structure when I was fully rested, so the outcome was an application with a mass amount of bad grammar.
- Will this pose problems with interacting with other players?
This will be no problem at all since I'll be playing during the day while I post things during the night, the difference being on how much I pay attention on how I'm writing, which will be significantly heightened when I'm actually awake. Again, no problem at all with player interaction.
- Can you assure us that you'll work on using your determination and ambition wisely?
I promise you and myself that the large sum of determination and ambition will be used wisely. To confirm this I'd just like to say that I really don't want to get removed from the whitelist quicker than I join, so I guarantee you I'll be able to handle myself and overdoses of self-expectation of being able to one-shot my buildings.
Spoiler: I do write almost EVERYTHING at the dead of night and post it when I just wake up, including this.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
11/28/2011
Posts:
69
Member Details
1. SuperSonicFan411
2. I've always been playing the gulliver mod only by myself or with my friends. I don't know how I did not notice this server until now, as I really have been looking for a gulliver mod server for a long time. At the time I saw this server, my account got hacked, and I decided to buy an account today, just to join this server. If this server is still running, I would really like to join it, specifically to play this mod with even more people.
3.I don't have many talents, but I am always a helping and mature person. An example, out of topic, is when someone got scammed on steam, I tried to help them as much as I could. He eventually got his items back, and thanked me alot. Back to topic, I always like helping people in many different situations. As for talents, I am pretty good in technology, especially in Windows cmd.exe.
4. 1. I am an honest person. If by chance I were to do something that bothers someone, I will confess to them and apologize to them.
2. As mentioned before, I like to help alot.
3. I also like to share alot. I am planning to buy a game for my friend when I get the money, but, like in RL, I also like to share In game.
4. I am very smart in minecraft commands, although I am sure many others are as well. And lastly...
5. I know my position, especially in Minecraft. If an admin tells me to do something, I do it. Period.
5. 2. Please be courteous to your fellow players on our server. (Responsibilities)
6. The server currency is called "Cheese". Cheese Blocks (Sponges)/Blue Cheese Blocks (Lapis Lazuli Blocks) are physical currency of this.
aww, sorry to hear. Well if you ever decide to make an application, maybe you can have a shot. But if you dont think you feel able to, thats okay... there are other great servers out there too.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
11/28/2011
Posts:
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Member Details
It's understandable if everyone is busy, and I can wait as long as I have to. But I wanted to post this as a bump to my application, as it has been 4 days and I received no reply.
Regardless of this, take your time and don't think I'm impatient. Although by posting this, I probably already sound impatient...
It's understandable if everyone is busy, and I can wait as long as I have to. But I wanted to post this as a bump to my application, as it has been 4 days and I received no reply.
Regardless of this, take your time and don't think I'm impatient. Although by posting this, I probably already sound impatient...
A little... ^^;
Someone is in the process of writing your application review, but she's also tied up with homework as well so it's been a rather slow process. I've forwarded this note of yours to her.
2. I've always been playing the gulliver mod only by myself or with my friends. I don't know how I did not notice this server until now, as I really have been looking for a gulliver mod server for a long time. At the time I saw this server, my account got hacked, and I decided to buy an account today, just to join this server. If this server is still running, I would really like to join it, specifically to play this mod with even more people.
3.I don't have many talents, but I am always a helping and mature person. An example, out of topic, is when someone got scammed on steam, I tried to help them as much as I could. He eventually got his items back, and thanked me alot. Back to topic, I always like helping people in many different situations. As for talents, I am pretty good in technology, especially in Windows cmd.exe.
4. 1. I am an honest person. If by chance I were to do something that bothers someone, I will confess to them and apologize to them.
2. As mentioned before, I like to help alot.
3. I also like to share alot. I am planning to buy a game for my friend when I get the money, but, like in RL, I also like to share In game.
4. I am very smart in minecraft commands, although I am sure many others are as well. And lastly...
5. I know my position, especially in Minecraft. If an admin tells me to do something, I do it. Period.
5. 2. Please be courteous to your fellow players on our server. (Responsibilities)
6. The server currency is called "Cheese". Cheese Blocks (Sponges)/Blue Cheese Blocks (Lapis Lazuli Blocks) are physical currency of this.
Hi there, sorry for the wait as I've been unwell during the weekend and as Cia said at the time I've been tied up in homework. I'll work on it when I have a chance.
2. I've always been playing the gulliver mod only by myself or with my friends. I don't know how I did not notice this server until now, as I really have been looking for a gulliver mod server for a long time. At the time I saw this server, my account got hacked, and I decided to buy an account today, just to join this server. If this server is still running, I would really like to join it, specifically to play this mod with even more people.
3.I don't have many talents, but I am always a helping and mature person. An example, out of topic, is when someone got scammed on steam, I tried to help them as much as I could. He eventually got his items back, and thanked me alot. Back to topic, I always like helping people in many different situations. As for talents, I am pretty good in technology, especially in Windows cmd.exe.
4. 1. I am an honest person. If by chance I were to do something that bothers someone, I will confess to them and apologize to them.
2. As mentioned before, I like to help alot.
3. I also like to share alot. I am planning to buy a game for my friend when I get the money, but, like in RL, I also like to share In game.
4. I am very smart in minecraft commands, although I am sure many others are as well. And lastly...
5. I know my position, especially in Minecraft. If an admin tells me to do something, I do it. Period.
5. 2. Please be courteous to your fellow players on our server. (Responsibilities)
6. The server currency is called "Cheese". Cheese Blocks (Sponges)/Blue Cheese Blocks (Lapis Lazuli Blocks) are physical currency of this.
Hi, SuperSonicFan411 I will be reviewing your application today, so let's just get down to business, shall we?
1. This one's all good! I'm going to guess you're a big Sonic the Hedgehog fan?
2. Well, keep note, that there are many other gulliver servers out there. They are just not as advertised as ours. Your answer here seems to be a little bit too generic, so I would ask you to go through and add more detail to get back on track. For instance, why do you like the Gulliver mod so much, and why do you want to join our server so badly (enough to buy a whole new account, wow!) when there are other Gulliver Servers out there that are much easier to get into. You can check out our server trailer, our Dynmap and our forum for a better understanding of what we're about, since we're MUCH more than just Gulliver.
3. You could add more detail to how you can contribute specifically to this server, since we're not Windows (in fact, some of us play on Mac and even Chrome!). Also, as Cia always says, mature people don't have to say they're mature, they just walk, talk and quack like mature ducks.
4. Woah, these are definitely too generic...
1 - Better in question 3.
2 - You should not repeat a fact stated earlier in the application.
3 - Better in question 3.
4 - No Minecraft facts please, these belong in question 3.
5 - Same as 4.
We need to be able to differentiate you from other players. Maybe try replacing these with some more interesting facts about the person behind the keyboard. Nothing too personal, just fun things, like what kind of animals you like, foods you eat, and all that.
5. Spot on ^^
6. This one is all gouda (^w^) You even mentioned the blocks! Great job
Verdict: Your app needs some work, sorry to say. But at least your application has good form, and you sound like you'll easily be able to fix what I asked you to fix and make it in. So go ahead and give it another go, I have faith you'll do better a second time. Good luck! ^^
Hi, SuperSonicFan411 I will be reviewing your application today, so let's just get down to business, shall we?
1. This one's all good! I'm going to guess you're a big Sonic the Hedgehog fan?
2. Well, keep note, that there are many other gulliver servers out there. They are just not as advertised as ours. Your answer here seems to be a little bit too generic, so I would ask you to go through and add more detail to get back on track. For instance, why do you like the Gulliver mod so much, and why do you want to join our server so badly (enough to buy a whole new account, wow!) when there are other Gulliver Servers out there that are much easier to get into. You can check out our server trailer, our Dynmap and our forum for a better understanding of what we're about, since we're MUCH more than just Gulliver.
3. You could add more detail to how you can contribute specifically to this server, since we're not Windows (in fact, some of us play on Mac and even Chrome!). Also, as Cia always says, mature people don't have to say they're mature, they just walk, talk and quack like mature ducks.
4. Woah, these are definitely too generic...
1 - Better in question 3.
2 - You should not repeat a fact stated earlier in the application.
3 - Better in question 3.
4 - No Minecraft facts please, these belong in question 3.
5 - Same as 4.
We need to be able to differentiate you from other players. Maybe try replacing these with some more interesting facts about the person behind the keyboard. Nothing too personal, just fun things, like what kind of animals you like, foods you eat, and all that.
5. Spot on ^^
6. This one is all gouda (^w^) You even mentioned the blocks! Great job
Verdict: Your app needs some work, sorry to say. But at least your application has good form, and you sound like you'll easily be able to fix what I asked you to fix and make it in. So go ahead and give it another go, I have faith you'll do better a second time. Good luck! ^^
Thank you! ~ FlowerPowerFaerie
Two questions:
1. Can I refer to some information from this old application in my new one?
2. Do I have to wait a certain amount of time before I post another one?
Knowing the answer to question one could help me a lot in my new application.
Two questions:
1. Can I refer to some information from this old application in my new one?
2. Do I have to wait a certain amount of time before I post another one?
Knowing the answer to question one could help me a lot in my new application.
1. You do not have to make a new application. You just have to edit your current one.
2. Not at all.
Well specifically, you repost your old application into a new post below and then edit that one. This is to ensure we can do a proper Before/After comparison between your original and improved application. ^^
Here are three resources you can use:
Server Trailer:
Server Dynmap:
http://bigsister.mcserver.ws:8123/
Official Server Forum:
http://bigsister.forumotion.com/forum
As Burger mentioned, you should really take your time revising the application, don't rush it as we ourselves are in no rush. Review the above carefully and slowly, taking a few days if need be, and be absolutely sure we have what you're looking for.
Good luck.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
AexoDiergka
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
I have over a decade's worth of experience in size-changing environments and I adore the interaction that ensues. I'm not sure if I'll be a long-term member but I at least want to check out the server since I haven't been able to find good Gulliver alternatives.
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I'm a thoroughly-practiced roleplayer and a Minecraft veteran from the alpha days. I automatically make the lives of the people I come into contact more interesting, and should I decide to become an invested member of the community, you'll be proud to have me (or your money back)!
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
- I've played over two thousand different video games across over a dozen platforms.
- I'm more at home in the sky than I am on the ground, and I tend to build everything up high as a result.
- I'm a professionally published game design author!
- I played eleven years of piano, then dropped it and never looked back.
- I'm a huge fan of worldbuilding (as in, developing alternate/fantasy worlds).
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
"As a Tiny, please refrain from frequent and uncomfortable stalking activities, unless consented toby the larger player."
I've been the subject of my fair share of stalking activities, to be concise.
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
Third times the charm with the infamous Toothy!
1) IGN
ToothyMineCraft
2) Why would you like to join the server?
Well, to start off, I now see the server as an unfinished project. It always bugged me that I was naive enough to not think this was a serious application that needs thought and heart pouring into it. Of course, I don't JUST see it as an unfinished project, but a haven for diverse and rational people, something I long to see in every whitelisted server. With your depiction of the server alone somehow drew me again and again back to this forum page, craving more knowledge on this this seemingly wonderful of a server. Even beyond that, I kept looking about, snuck around your forum page a little, exploring as much as i could on the dynmap, which I do enjoy a laugh at Piggy University, and of course to top it all off, I downloaded and read all the creeds just to catch a bigger glimpse of what this server truly is! Some would call that an obsession, but I call it a fascination of the unknown!
3) Explain your talents, skills, etc.
I'd like to begin with how I can bring a significant amount of life to the server! My determined personality and calm server, I do enjoy to think that I could bring smile upon faces, even if I don't get to see it! Not only that, but I do bet the positive mood and even brighter players would attract a sum to this endangered type of server. Enough narcissism, let us continue! Like a majority of other players, I do enjoy doing my fair share of building. If I do get accepted, I plan on making tiny hotel with transparent roofs so the larger get to see the smaller squirm about! A win-win for all sizes! Of course, that doesn't end there! I also plan for larger building to rent out to the giants, a great money-gain for those who need a rest after a time of adventuring.
4) Please list five random facts about yourself!
• I enjoy my large share of writing, I do have a sum of stories on my desktop that I really wish I had time to continue or touch up!
• For the past 5 years I've been learning how to play the violin, I still continue, but I'm debating if I really want to continue.
• I will become very determined and ambitious when it comes to doing something I even moderately enjoy, worst part, I enjoy most things!
• I am simply fascinated when it comes to space, particularly black holes and the theorized white holes!
• I have a novice amount of knowledge of Java programming, it's always useful on knowing how the base line works in various programs.
5) Write down the responsibility/right you enjoy the most.
"12. If held or kidnapped by a Giant player against your will, or attacked by a PvP-obsessed player, you have the right to protest the act or defend yourself if necessary." I think all the smaller enjoy this right, I do think this would be an immense problem that'd have to be directly addressed if this wasn't here, as Novices wouldn't know if they're allowed to PvP if they're being held, stomped on, etc. It's a great clarification and I know I'm going to hold onto this if a bigger tries to kidnap me and complain that I'm nipping them!
6) What is the Big Sister's currency?
The server's currency is the beloved cheese!
Thank you for your time for reading this LONG application. Totally didn't put a joke about my previous applications in here.
Hello Aexo,
My staff is in vacation mode and I have some spare time, so I'll go ahead and process some of these app reviews. Thanks for waiting. ^^
QUESTION 2:
Wow, a decade! Gulliver hasn't been around that log, so I'd be curious to know what these size-changing environments are/were. Ironically, the Gulliver aspect isn't as big a deal much anymore as everyone has pretty much settled into social or artistic modes, so aside from the tiny villages or 8x towns you could hardly tell we were a Gulliver server.
Thank you for your honesty, we understand if you don't feel the need to spend a whole lot of time here (I don't) -- I do get the impression you only want to join to quickly check it out, so I hope this whole lot of time doesn't amount to about 4 minutes. If you want to check our server out, you can do so by watching our trailer, visiting our Dynmap, reading our Creeds or visiting our official forum (http://bigsister.forumotion.com/) without the expense of typing up an application. I would encourage you to do so now to ensure we are what you're looking for -- there's a chance we may not be. ^^
QUESTION 3:
ooh yay, money back guarantee!! If you're also a great road or bridge builder, I can definitely cash that in often. ^^
Roleplay is also not a huge thing here anymore, but our folks do get bit by the RP bug every once in a while, so if you wish to revitalize that industry you'd certainly be in your element. ^^
QUESTION 4:
- oh dear gawd! I hope most of those include mobile and web games because that's intense. XD
- this is probably a Minecraft fact, but I'll let it slide since it can also apply to other builder games (like Terraria) and I like building up in the sky too.
- Hmm, another game fact... this would worry me normally since we don't like repetitive facts, but I'm okay with game design since this could be a profession... and in fact in your case it IS a profession!
- Aww, what a shame. But thanks for the non-game fact.
- Almost a game fact too, but this can apply to literature, movies, drawings, tabletop games, even music I'm sure.
QUESTION 5:
Oh dear gawd, poor you. But yes, this is rarely if ever a problem, so expect this to be enforced regularly.
QUESTION 6:
I think the idea is clever, but sadly it backfired for you here since I'm in an environment where I cannot watch youtube videos. Ergo, this is technically incorrect [as in unanswered], sorry. :<
VERDICT:
It's a solid little app and I feel you might enjoy being here -- but we do have to get past the technicalities of Question 2 and 6 first before the application can be whitelistable. I hate to be a stickler for rules on #6 especially, but there is a very specific reason why this is so, and I hope you'll understand. If possible, please repost your application with #2 and #6 revised per my feedback above, and I'm sure we can get you hooked up!
Thank you. ^^
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Oh and welcome back, Toothy. Last time you were here was like two years ago, and your writing skills (and alleged insanity) needed some work. :3
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/739830-big-sister-gulliver-minecraft-server-whitelisted?comment=1237
Luckily, it seems you've improved a lot since, so I think I'll enjoy reviewing your app later. ^^
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
I actually reread my old posts before posting this one, I just had to cringe at it one more time before trying again. The insanity get-up I tried, yeeeaaahhh, I obviously see why and how that failed miserably. I don't really regret it, as I learned A LOT from the unholy mistake and yeah, I've been practicing my writing a lot since then, thanks for noticing ^-^. Thanks ahead of time for taking time out of your day to read the next monstrosity the infamous Toothy has for you!
Hi Toothy,
Oh yeah, the older posts were ghastly (no offense), so I'm really happy to see you've improved quite a lot Hopefully you'll continue to advance here too. As for monstrosities, not to worry... in the past three years of doing app reviews, I can safely say your app would be considered "above-average" (and it's nowhere near the longest I've reviewed).
Anyway....
QUESTION 2:
The server is WOEFULLY unfinished, yes, and chances are it will never get finished before its three-year mandate, and possibly its fourth year extension. It's just too big, with too much unrealized ambition, and too much appreciation for real life interaction. ^^
That being said, I appreciate that you researched enough to conclude that we're a kind of haven for a diverse range of people -- while we're not perfect in this role, I have felt that we do offer a kind of stable and safe play and interaction environment, not least of which is because a> we do take the whitelist process seriously, and b> we never reset the world or willingly destroy people's creations, so players appreciate that they can build without risk of losing everything. I'd be curious to ask you your thoughts on the Creeds at a later date, especially the Owner's Creed which a lot of people overlook (but shouldn't!).
And I'm glad you loved Piggy U., you might enjoy it more visiting it in person.
QUESTION 3:
While your writing has improved, I have to make note of the distorted grammar (e.g., "determined personality and calm server, I do enjoy to think")... either you write when you're tired (like yours truly), or the writing improvement is an ongoing process. It's not a dealbreaker per se, but thought I'd point it out. ^^
Note that while determination is good, sometimes it's necessary to be a little yielding... always aim to achieve balance of emotion rather than striving for an unrelenting and inflexible force of will.
Your building ideas are cute if a little overdone, since I've had three years of players trying out similar things... don't be disappointed if you don't get people absolutely clamoring over your builds, as these days people rightfully focus more on the builder rather than the buildings.
QUESTION 4:
- You've definitely been practicing your writing, good for you! Again, the grammar needs a bit of work, so make sure you focus on that as your next goal... quality matters as much as quantity in just about anything, ESPECIALLY when it comes to writing. ^^
- Aww, that's a shame since the violin is such a pretty instrument! Maybe an electric violin might appeal to you more?
- As I mentioned earlier, there is such a thing as being TOO determined and TOO ambitious, to the point it clouds your judgement. For example, lots of our players start off with huge ambitions to create 8x towns, then get lazy and leave, leaving behind empty, ugly husks of buildings. This is a clear example of poor planning and a kind of blind determination that leads them to bite off more than they can chew... be sure not to become a statistic and try to ground your ambitions to realistic expectations. As the old saying goes: "if you fail to plan, you plan to fail". ^^
- Oh yeah, space is beautiful! And such a phenomenal topic of conversation, with lots of great history behind it... just the other day, I was watching a documentary that narrated the great achievements of Edmond Halley, a phenomenal man of many extraordinary talents who, sadly, is only remembered for the comet he helped calculate the orbit of (but never actually named!). >v<
- Oh very cool, we're always eager to have Java developers visit since there are lots of mod problems that could use the keen eye of a Java developer. We've had a few thus far, but they're not always around. ^^
QUESTION 5:
Nice explanation, and indeed this rule was based on some unsavoury experiences I had when I first joined Gunia's server (our parent server) and no PvP was allowed... when a Giant grabbed you then, there was no way to escape the grasp as a normal player, and this lead to a lot of abuse sadly. I've since felt that everyone has the right to defend him/herself, no matter how pointless it may seem.
QUESTION 6:
Correct.
VERDICT:
Your app has all the appropriate word lengths and technical merits, and it is rather interesting to read, if a bit over-flattery at times (i.e., "beloved cheese"? XD ). I will say, however, that the poor grammar in some parts can be very distracting, especially in light of the fact you're first two attempts years ago were also very poor and plagued with numerous grammar and spelling problems.
Therefore, before approving the whitelist, I want to ask you some questions (and there won't be a need to repost your application to answer these...)
- Are you a native English-speaker or is it something of a second/third/etc language?
- Can you explain why there are so many grammar issues?
- Do you feel this may pose problems when interacting with the rest of the players?
- And lastly, can you assure us that you will work on using your determination and ambition wisely?
If you can get me some good answers to these (which I'm confident you will do your best for), the whitelist is yours. ^^
Good luck!
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
- Are you a native English-Speaker?
English was my first written language, but not spoken, Spanish takes that place.
- Why are there so many grammar issues?
The reason for all the grammatical errors is very simple; I wrote my newest application around three in the morning. I never really got around checking the application thoroughly for misspelled words and odd-sounding sentence structure when I was fully rested, so the outcome was an application with a mass amount of bad grammar.
- Will this pose problems with interacting with other players?
This will be no problem at all since I'll be playing during the day while I post things during the night, the difference being on how much I pay attention on how I'm writing, which will be significantly heightened when I'm actually awake. Again, no problem at all with player interaction.
- Can you assure us that you'll work on using your determination and ambition wisely?
I promise you and myself that the large sum of determination and ambition will be used wisely. To confirm this I'd just like to say that I really don't want to get removed from the whitelist quicker than I join, so I guarantee you I'll be able to handle myself and overdoses of self-expectation of being able to one-shot my buildings.
Spoiler: I do write almost EVERYTHING at the dead of night and post it when I just wake up, including this.
Perfect answers ! I think that everything is in order now, so you're more than welcomed to log in when you're ready. Thank you and welcome aboard! ^^
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
A million thanks! I can finally play the server I've been longing for a year or so! Again, thank you.
1. SuperSonicFan411
2. I've always been playing the gulliver mod only by myself or with my friends. I don't know how I did not notice this server until now, as I really have been looking for a gulliver mod server for a long time. At the time I saw this server, my account got hacked, and I decided to buy an account today, just to join this server. If this server is still running, I would really like to join it, specifically to play this mod with even more people.
3.I don't have many talents, but I am always a helping and mature person. An example, out of topic, is when someone got scammed on steam, I tried to help them as much as I could. He eventually got his items back, and thanked me alot. Back to topic, I always like helping people in many different situations. As for talents, I am pretty good in technology, especially in Windows cmd.exe.
4. 1. I am an honest person. If by chance I were to do something that bothers someone, I will confess to them and apologize to them.
2. As mentioned before, I like to help alot.
3. I also like to share alot. I am planning to buy a game for my friend when I get the money, but, like in RL, I also like to share In game.
4. I am very smart in minecraft commands, although I am sure many others are as well. And lastly...
5. I know my position, especially in Minecraft. If an admin tells me to do something, I do it. Period.
5. 2. Please be courteous to your fellow players on our server. (Responsibilities)
6. The server currency is called "Cheese". Cheese Blocks (Sponges)/Blue Cheese Blocks (Lapis Lazuli Blocks) are physical currency of this.
This isn't the best thread to ask this question. We'll update when it's ready to update, or stay on 1.6.4 until the end of our server's mandate.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
I never played a gulliver server
and i will never play one #Sadforever
What is Dat? it is a plane it is nyancat? no its DAT FLYING BOI!!!
(oh noes dat boi is super fast is dat flying boiz) or no?
aww, sorry to hear. Well if you ever decide to make an application, maybe you can have a shot. But if you dont think you feel able to, thats okay... there are other great servers out there too.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
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It's understandable if everyone is busy, and I can wait as long as I have to. But I wanted to post this as a bump to my application, as it has been 4 days and I received no reply.
Regardless of this, take your time and don't think I'm impatient. Although by posting this, I probably already sound impatient...
A little... ^^;
Someone is in the process of writing your application review, but she's also tied up with homework as well so it's been a rather slow process. I've forwarded this note of yours to her.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
Hi there, sorry for the wait as I've been unwell during the weekend and as Cia said at the time I've been tied up in homework. I'll work on it when I have a chance.
Hi, SuperSonicFan411 I will be reviewing your application today, so let's just get down to business, shall we?
1. This one's all good! I'm going to guess you're a big Sonic the Hedgehog fan?
2. Well, keep note, that there are many other gulliver servers out there. They are just not as advertised as ours. Your answer here seems to be a little bit too generic, so I would ask you to go through and add more detail to get back on track. For instance, why do you like the Gulliver mod so much, and why do you want to join our server so badly (enough to buy a whole new account, wow!) when there are other Gulliver Servers out there that are much easier to get into. You can check out our server trailer, our Dynmap and our forum for a better understanding of what we're about, since we're MUCH more than just Gulliver.
3. You could add more detail to how you can contribute specifically to this server, since we're not Windows (in fact, some of us play on Mac and even Chrome!). Also, as Cia always says, mature people don't have to say they're mature, they just walk, talk and quack like mature ducks.
4. Woah, these are definitely too generic...
1 - Better in question 3.
2 - You should not repeat a fact stated earlier in the application.
3 - Better in question 3.
4 - No Minecraft facts please, these belong in question 3.
5 - Same as 4.
We need to be able to differentiate you from other players. Maybe try replacing these with some more interesting facts about the person behind the keyboard. Nothing too personal, just fun things, like what kind of animals you like, foods you eat, and all that.
5. Spot on ^^
6. This one is all gouda (^w^) You even mentioned the blocks! Great job
Verdict: Your app needs some work, sorry to say. But at least your application has good form, and you sound like you'll easily be able to fix what I asked you to fix and make it in. So go ahead and give it another go, I have faith you'll do better a second time. Good luck! ^^
Thank you! ~ FlowerPowerFaerie
Two questions:
1. Can I refer to some information from this old application in my new one?
2. Do I have to wait a certain amount of time before I post another one?
Knowing the answer to question one could help me a lot in my new application.
1. You do not have to make a new application. You just have to edit your current one.
2. Not at all.
Good luck ^^
Well specifically, you repost your old application into a new post below and then edit that one. This is to ensure we can do a proper Before/After comparison between your original and improved application. ^^
Thank you.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
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