2. I want to join this server because I don't have many servers, and I was looking for a good one when I stumbled upon this one! I viewed the mod, downloaded it, and loved it! And I'm sure playing it multiplayer will be even better! I looked at the trailers, and saw how well done 'Spawnington' was, and I thought, what a cool server!
3. I am usually, although not always, not a very talkative person. I don't get into fights easily, unless someone purposely provokes me, but even then I will be the first to apologize. I don't grief, and I don't have an intention to. Also, I have never been banned from the server, and I have been staff on a few small, local servers. I don't like huge servers, but the community seems nice here. ^u^
4. Uhm... Okay here we go!
1. I love video games! Video games take up most of my life! And not just Minecraft, you can find me on CoD, League of Legends, Battlefield 2, TF2, and many others! Constantly sharing jokes on teamspeak and having fun (I loose most often, though!)
2. I love to draw! Drawing is my second favorite thing. I am a novice feral, manga and MLP artist! I do some stuff on Twitter and DeviantArt, but most of my art is put up through Instagram (I find it the easiest!)
3. I am in Highschool, almost 3rd year. I am not very smart academically, but I'm moving forward...
4. All 8 members of my family are U.S. Veterans and I plan of being one to, one day! (#MURICA!)
5. I like cheese :3
5. I like this rule:
If Tiny, you have the right to carve a home within Spawnington, its sewers, or its various hovels, so
long as the outward appearance of the aforementioned structures are not altered.
I think it's cool to be able to make a house inside the town as a tiny.
2. I want to join this server because I don't have many servers, and I was looking for a good one when I stumbled upon this one! I viewed the mod, downloaded it, and loved it! And I'm sure playing it multiplayer will be even better! I looked at the trailers, and saw how well done 'Spawnington' was, and I thought, what a cool server!
3. I am usually, although not always, not a very talkative person. I don't get into fights easily, unless someone purposely provokes me, but even then I will be the first to apologize. I don't grief, and I don't have an intention to. Also, I have never been banned from the server, and I have been staff on a few small, local servers. I don't like huge servers, but the community seems nice here. ^u^
4. Uhm... Okay here we go!
1. I love video games! Video games take up most of my life! And not just Minecraft, you can find me on CoD, League of Legends, Battlefield 2, TF2, and many others! Constantly sharing jokes on teamspeak and having fun (I loose most often, though!)
2. I love to draw! Drawing is my second favorite thing. I am a novice feral, manga and MLP artist! I do some stuff on Twitter and DeviantArt, but most of my art is put up through Instagram (I find it the easiest!)
3. I am in Highschool, almost 3rd year. I am not very smart academically, but I'm moving forward...
4. All 8 members of my family are U.S. Veterans and I plan of being one to, one day! (#MURICA!)
5. I like cheese :3
5. I like this rule:
If Tiny, you have the right to carve a home within Spawnington, its sewers, or its various hovels, so
long as the outward appearance of the aforementioned structures are not altered.
I think it's cool to be able to make a house inside the town as a tiny.
6. The money is cheese!
YUM!
~WarriorWolf
P.S. danku
I figure I should take over some whitelisting duties, it's been a while.
Anyway, your application at first glance is pretty good and meets most of the minimum requirements. Compared to some of our other latest applicants, this should under any normal circumstance be considered a shoe-in. In fact, if I were any other lazy slob, I would be stamping "whitelist whitelist whitelist!" all over this.
Sadly, you had to be called "xXWarriorWolfXx", and it's an unfortunate coincidence that ALL players who join us with some "xX[Something]Xx" always cause us trouble in some way shape or form... not sure if its superstition, a curse, or collusion by some kind of xXXx Guild. In any event, I had to raise my guard and take a deeper dive, and sadly I still found some troubling things.
Rather than offer up a full review, let me just focus on the things that need... clarification.
QUESTION 2: You don't have many servers? Well how many servers do you expect to have at home? Running those use up a lot of electricity.
In any case, while I appreciate the focus on why you think you like our server, now I have the reverse concern... I don't really get an indication of why you want to play with this mod. Based on everything else you've written, it doesn't appear to be your cup of tea, maybe you favor something a bit more action-oriented?
Also, you make it sound like you'e never had any experience with Gulliver and Gulliver servers at all, and yet based on records from our former parent server...
...you applied to Gunia's server over a year ago. Maybe it's my imagination, but this doesn't quite strike me as truthful.
QUESTION 3: Curious that you should say you never been banned from "the" server -- not sure which one in particular you're referring to, since you can't possibly be referring to our server given you've never been on it [as far as I know]. And the "never been banned" claim is negated by this post here....
...where you unclearly mention that you got banned, although it's impossible for me to decipher why based on the peculiar writing style you used there. So again, that's twice you possibly fibbed on your application.
QUESTION 4: All the reasons are fine, except 4.5... this is a very common cop-out given we already have a cheese question. Also, since this does not equal a full sentence, you'll have to elaborate on what kinds of cheese you like. That, or choose some other fun fact to write a bout.
QUESTION 5: Just FYI, this is our laziest, most egoistic, most unimaginative Right available, and given what I've listed above, I'm not surprised you picked it and explained your choice so generically too boot.
In short, your application strikes me as just a little fishy, and for us to seriously consider your entry, you'll probably have a lot of explaining to do. It might just be easier to stick with one of your other servers.
1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN") ncbiggins
2)Why Would like to join the server:I would like to join this server because it looks intresting and i have never been on a guilver server before so im quite exited.Also i'm a HUGE fan of the mod and i like just a normal minecraft server were i can just hang about after school or on weekends. I also think the server is well staffed and safe so i cant just get all the time.(P.S i like cheeze and crackers!)
3)Please explain how your Talents, Skills, Experience, ect... Will contribute to our server: Well i don't exactly plan ahead but ok i think im good at greating new members and i love to help people build ect. Also i am very good with mod installing so if u need help with pluggins or somthin ask me. My talents well im good with new players and also getig along with others and im good at talking. My experience ok i guess ive been staff on quite a few servers and some tekkit ones but never a guliver server this is my first time.(i have been staff on i estimated about 9/10 servers)
4) Randome facts: I LIKE TUTLES no no no just kiddin but i do like reptiles marine life and animals
I have a pet snake named slithers
I like drinking almond milk
i like suishi
and finaly the ocean.
(i hope this is enough to get me applyed!)
more facts
I have a pet snake named slithers who is about 1 and a half foot long
i like helping people out such as baking making food ect
1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN") ncbiggins
2)Why Would like to join the server:I would like to join this server because it looks intresting and i have never been on a guilver server before so im quite exited.Also i'm a HUGE fan of the mod and i like just a normal minecraft server were i can just hang about after school or on weekends. I also think the server is well staffed and safe so i cant just get all the time.(P.S i like cheeze and crackers!)
3)Please explain how your Talents, Skills, Experience, ect... Will contribute to our server: Well i don't exactly plan ahead but ok i think im good at greating new members and i love to help people build ect. Also i am very good with mod installing so if u need help with pluggins or somthin ask me. My talents well im good with new players and also getig along with others and im good at talking. My experience ok i guess ive been staff on quite a few servers and some tekkit ones but never a guliver server this is my first time.(i have been staff on i estimated about 9/10 servers)
4) FIXED FACTS
sorry this editor sucks
I have a pet snake named slithers who is about 1 and a half foot longi love to help people cook ect
I whoud like to join this server becuase me and my friend (TobiasTorgersen) have always tryed to find a server with gulivers mod and I whoud see that intresting to play with others with gullivers mod.
I am a person that loves building different tings and I like getting new intresting friends. I like to Play rolepaying games so that was a got combination.
-I do play the piano and I have resently begun to make music whith noteblocks
-I like drawing and I like to "paint" the the landskapes with drawings of things ( in minecraft)
-I like doing adventure maps and having fun with my friends
-I also Love to hear to music when I build different things.
-At last I love to Listen to other people and I like to Talk with people
As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the
smaller player.
1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN") ncbiggins
2)Why Would like to join the server:I would like to join this server because it looks intresting and i have never been on a guilver server before so im quite exited.Also i'm a HUGE fan of the mod and i like just a normal minecraft server were i can just hang about after school or on weekends. I also think the server is well staffed and safe so i cant just get all the time.(P.S i like cheeze and crackers!)
3)Please explain how your Talents, Skills, Experience, ect... Will contribute to our server: Well i don't exactly plan ahead but ok i think im good at greating new members and i love to help people build ect. Also i am very good with mod installing so if u need help with pluggins or somthin ask me. My talents well im good with new players and also getig along with others and im good at talking. My experience ok i guess ive been staff on quite a few servers and some tekkit ones but never a guliver server this is my first time.(i have been staff on i estimated about 9/10 servers)
4) FIXED FACTS
sorry this editor sucks
I have a pet snake named slithers who is about 1 and a half foot longi love to help people cook ect
i enjoy eating raw fish
i love playing in the ocean it is so fun!
all animals are amazing
Hi ncbiggins, I'm Cordelia, a deputy on the server.
First things first, you're missing numbers 5 and 6. Please take another look at the first page of this thread and read through the instructions. Number 5 will ask you to quote a rule, number 6 will ask you to state the server currency.
Other than that, please try to fix up your formatting, spelling and grammar. Your application is very difficult to read.
Conclusion: I can't recommend that you be added to the whitelist right now. Not to be mean, but your application is very, very rough. Please reread the first post and spend a bit more time on it. A good idea might be to type it up in Microsoft Word or something first and then move it over here when it's ready.
4>TobiasTorgersen
I want to join the server because i love roleplay and i love small societies.
once i were at a smillar server but it got grifed and every one left the server.
that was 3 years.ca
ive been building medivel a creative builds and love roleplaying as well as redstoneing.
ive been building big and massive things and projects lately and i want to build with friends and share
what i can build and build together.
1 year ago i buildt a server spawn the admin loved it.
i am in to building and producing buildings and help other`s
1*I love to do big projects at school and computer and relativly soscial projects
that is what makes me produce better and makes me happy and lets the time fly away.
i love to work with electrisity and and work with such that would be on the shelves on the store.
2*i love to know as much as i can and learn as much as possibel.
3*i love visiting my friends every day i do it very often and we do much together
4*i love to draw i draw since i was 6 and i thougth i was teribel until my friends told me i was better then i thougth
5* since i was at the kindergarden i loved to build
20.Please help keep the atmosphere on our server peaceful, laidback, exhilarating, appreciative and fun.
Cheese.
I can tell just from a quick look that your application doesn't have any kind of formatting in it. To give you the same advice I gave the person above you, try typing it up in a different program so you'll have a better idea how it might look. Anyways, I'd suggest you add some numbers before your answers (like, "Number 1: TobiasTogerson"). Otherwise, try and run it through a spell checker, and try and fix the spacing up a bit. I barely even noticed you mentioned cheese because it's all the way at the bottom of the post, and the "paragraphs" for each number are confusing to say the least.
Conclusion: All in all, this is a very rough application. I don't want to sound rude, but you're going to need to put in a bit more effort for this. You're on the right track, but it's very disorganized and just confusing. Please try and fix this up to be more readable, and try and work on things like capitalizing the starts of sentences. As of now, I can't recommend that you be whitelisted until you fix up your application.
I whoud like to join this server becuase me and my friend (TobiasTorgersen) have always tryed to find a server with gulivers mod and I whoud see that intresting to play with others with gullivers mod.
I am a person that loves building different tings and I like getting new intresting friends. I like to Play rolepaying games so that was a got combination.
-I do play the piano and I have resently begun to make music whith noteblocks
-I like drawing and I like to "paint" the the landskapes with drawings of things ( in minecraft)
-I like doing adventure maps and having fun with my friends
-I also Love to hear to music when I build different things.
-At last I love to Listen to other people and I like to Talk with people
As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the
smaller player.
An at the end we have the currensy that is Cheese
Hi Haakon, I'm Cordelia and I am going to review your application.
Same thing as your friend, unfortunately. Your formatting leaves a lot to be desired. It's very difficult to tell where one point ends and another begins. However, yours is a bit better off than your friend, so try and lead him in the right direction.
Try and add some prefixes to each answer. Run your application through a spell checker.
Anyways, for some more specific points on certain questions: For number 3, please reread the question. The question asks in what ways you can contribute to the the server. You seem like you're on the right track, but please go into more detail. For number 4, please put some more detail into your facts.
Conclusion: Your application is lacking, unfortunately. I'm going to have to ask you to put some more effort into the basics (formatting and spelling). I can't recommend you to be whitelisted at the moment. Please try and spend some more time on your application before resubmitting it.
Hello Cordelia I am sorry I didn’t do my best at the last application, and I respect you for not letting everybody in on this server. So I am going to try again if I am allowed to do so. J
Nr.1 my minecraft Username is haakon9303 and I have played minecraft since it was first made. (In 2008 I believe)
Nr.2 I would really liked to join this server because I like doing role-playing games, and building Cities all around the minecraft. I also enjoy playing and having fun and even try making other people laugh.
My sort of skill is I believe getting friends and having fun. And I also enjoy building, and help people build different things.
I do also play on a role-playing medieval server and I think that is very fun.
And I would like to get my friend on this server too.
Nr.3
-Fact Number 1: I do play the piano and I really like hearing on jazzy music. I do many performances for an audience and I think it is very fun doing that.
-Fact Number 2: I’m a 13 year old boy from Norway and I Hope That Tells a bit about My Typing Skills. I’m a happy kid, which tries to make people have fun.
-Fact Number 3: I like to do Drawings. I am not so very got at it “But If You Practice it you master it”, Right
-Fact Number 4: I enjoy doing conversations with people. I literally love to talk with people.
-Fact Number 5: I really enjoy playing adventure maps with people, it always make me happy at least.
-Fact Number 6: It’s more than 5 “but the more it is, the better it is”. I like getting new friends.
And this server I think will make that very easy.
Nr.4 I think this is the best and most respecting rule. "As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the smaller player.”
Nr. 5 The currency for this server is so funny. It is CHEESE. YAY!
I hope you think this is a much better application. And I want to thank you for teaching me to be more serious about these texts.
You ate #3 and in its place put #4. This just won't fly, please try again reading the instructions very carefully -- there are six questions total, not five.
I Want to join this server cause i love to just play around with my friends
And love to build with others
And i love to roleplay in a group of pepole
When its about Productivity to the server i love build Medieval style buildings.
Ive been building for 1 year on medivel projects and i have been getting better on building in a medivel style and i hope it will become productive to the server.
- I play the instrument bass Guitar
-I can eat chili raw
- I love to make thing to much detailed
- I buildt a tree hut once in my yard on top of the biggest tree
- I hold Projects all the time once im done with project then i jump to another project.
«I Think the most important rule is that big sized pepole dont bully
i do Respect that i cant be whitelisted but i hope you accept this aplication.
1) My username is Tobias Torgersen
2) I Want to join this server cause i love to just play around with my friends
And love to build with others it makes it faster and fun and every one get
And i love to roleplay in a group of people it makes I more fun and entertaining.
3)When its about Productivity to the server i love build Medieval style buildings.
Ive been building for 1 year on medivel projects and i have been getting better on building in a medivel style and i hope it will become productive to the server make it better.
4) 5 facts about my self
Fact number 1=I play the instrument bass Guitar
Fact number 2=I can eat chili raw
Fact number3=I love to make thing to much detailed
Fact number4= once I buildt a tree hut in my yard on top of the biggest tree
Fact number5=I hold Projects all the time once im done with my project
I start on a second
5)«I Think the most important rule is that big sized pepole dont bully
Small people it make`s peole sad and left out and it makes the server
Hello Cordelia I am sorry I didn’t do my best at the last application, and I respect you for not letting everybody in on this server. So I am going to try again if I am allowed to do so. J
Nr.1 my minecraft Username is haakon9303 and I have played minecraft since it was first made. (In 2008 I believe)
Nr.2 I’m a 13 year old boy from Norway. I love Walking in the mountains I really like playing with Gullivers mod so I realy hope that I can get in to this server
Nr.3 I would really liked to join this server because I like doing role-playing games, and building Cities all around the minecraft. I also enjoy playing and having fun and even try making other people laugh.
My sort of skill is I believe getting friends and having fun. And I also enjoy building, and help people build different things.
I do also play on a role-playing medieval server and I think that is very fun.
And I would like to get my friend on this server too.
Nr.4
-Fact Number 1: I do play the piano and I really like hearing on jazzy music. I do many performances for an audience and I think it is very fun doing that.
-Fact Number 2: I’m a 13 year old boy from Norway and I Hope That Tells a bit about My Typing Skills. I’m a happy kid, which tries to make people have fun.
-Fact Number 3: I like to do Drawings. I am not so very got at it “But If You Practice it you master it”, Right
-Fact Number 4: I enjoy doing conversations with people. I literally love to talk with people.
-Fact Number 5: I really enjoy playing adventure maps with people, it always make me happy at least.
-Fact Number 6: It’s more than 5 “but the more it is, the better it is”. I like getting new friends.
And this server I think will make that very easy.
Nr.5 I think this is the best and most respecting rule. "As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the smaller player.”
Nr. 6 The currency for this server is so funny. It is CHEESE. YAY!
I hope you think this is a much better application.
i do Respect that i cant be whitelisted but i hope you accept this aplication.
1) My username is Tobias Torgersen
2) I Want to join this server cause i love to just play around with my friends
And love to build with others it makes it faster and fun and every one get
And i love to roleplay in a group of people it makes I more fun and entertaining.
3)When its about Productivity to the server i love build Medieval style buildings.
Ive been building for 1 year on medivel projects and i have been getting better on building in a medivel style and i hope it will become productive to the server make it better.
4) 5 facts about my self
Fact number 1=I play the instrument bass Guitar
Fact number 2=I can eat chili raw
Fact number3=I love to make thing to much detailed
Fact number4= once I buildt a tree hut in my yard on top of the biggest tree
Fact number5=I hold Projects all the time once im done with my project
I start on a second
5)«I Think the most important rule is that big sized pepole dont bully
Small people it make`s peole sad and left out and it makes the server
Less entertaining »
6)The Server`s currency.
Is Chesse !
Geez, well hold the rrespect about not being whitelisted, and instead try respecting my application rules a little, as well as spelling and grammar rules. This is very very hard to review in its current state, and only shows to me that you're trying to rush things.
I'm going to guess either you're very young or English is not your main language -- in either case, you have to be absolutely sure you want to get in here, because we don't make things easier to cater to either. You have to be able to understand rules, and the Rights of other players, and the Responsibilities asked of you -- if you can't understand that, then this will not be the server for you and your friend.
Anyway, I'm going to quickly show you what's wrong this time,...
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QUESTION 1: Can you really have spaces in Minecraft IGNs? That doesn't sound right.
QUESTION 2: You have no friends here, other than the friend that is trying and failing to apply here the same time as you. We do not whitelist friends together for reasons of security, so even if you somehow succeed in improving the application, we will only take one of you at a time. The other can come in later after you prove to be trustworthy.
Also, this paragraph is badly written and has nothing to do with Gulliver OR our server -- what you describe, you can easily do on any other Minecraft server, including your own.
QUESTION 2: Mispelled "Medieval" a few times, and again has very little to do with our server -- we are not a medieval server. And all you tell us is that you can build things, which is obvious since anyone who plays Minecraft can build things.
QUESTION 4: All these need to be one sentence long, and with decent grammar and spelling. Also, #3 and #5 sound like Minecraft facts, or at least VERY vague facts, and I'm going to toss those and ask for new ones. As for #4, tell me what a tree hut is, and how did you build it on a tree.
QUESTION 5: I don't know what "pepole" are -- if you're spelling is bad, go and quote the exact Right or Responsibility that you need to pass this question. The Application rules even ask that you do that first and foremost, and it's certainly a lot easier. Your explanation doesn't make sense either.
QUESTION 6: Incorrect. If you mispelled the easiest question in the entire application, there is no hope.
VERDICT: You failed and your friend is also going to fail, and I really don't think you should try to do another application -- we are definitely not the place you're looking for. Try a simple non-Gulliver Minecraft server where it will be easier to get in and play on with no hard questions.
Hello Cordelia I am sorry I didn’t do my best at the last application, and I respect you for not letting everybody in on this server. So I am going to try again if I am allowed to do so. J
Nr.1 my minecraft Username is haakon9303 and I have played minecraft since it was first made. (In 2008 I believe)
Nr.2 I’m a 13 year old boy from Norway. I love Walking in the mountains I really like playing with Gullivers mod so I realy hope that I can get in to this server
Nr.3 I would really liked to join this server because I like doing role-playing games, and building Cities all around the minecraft. I also enjoy playing and having fun and even try making other people laugh.
My sort of skill is I believe getting friends and having fun. And I also enjoy building, and help people build different things.
I do also play on a role-playing medieval server and I think that is very fun.
And I would like to get my friend on this server too.
Nr.4
-Fact Number 1: I do play the piano and I really like hearing on jazzy music. I do many performances for an audience and I think it is very fun doing that.
-Fact Number 2: I’m a 13 year old boy from Norway and I Hope That Tells a bit about My Typing Skills. I’m a happy kid, which tries to make people have fun.
-Fact Number 3: I like to do Drawings. I am not so very got at it “But If You Practice it you master it”, Right
-Fact Number 4: I enjoy doing conversations with people. I literally love to talk with people.
-Fact Number 5: I really enjoy playing adventure maps with people, it always make me happy at least.
-Fact Number 6: It’s more than 5 “but the more it is, the better it is”. I like getting new friends.
And this server I think will make that very easy.
Nr.5 I think this is the best and most respecting rule. "As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the smaller player.”
Nr. 6 The currency for this server is so funny. It is CHEESE. YAY!
I hope you think this is a much better application.
Hello Haakon,
I just finished failing your friend sadly, but thanks to your app I can see that you're both young (though not "too" young) and English is not your primary languages. We've had problems before letting people in who have poor mastery of the language that our staff communicates in, and because the persons did not understand instructions to stop griefing our server, they essentially had to be kicked out mercilessly. Therefore, now the rules are simple... regardless of age, language or neurological problem, if you are not able to observe the Rights given and Responsibilities required by all our players, you cannot get in. Truly sorry, but we don't have much of a choice given our limited resources, and there are also plenty of other servers that can happily take those players instead.
Anyway, I'll give you a quick review before I send you off on your journey to find another server.
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QUESTION 2: The 13 yr old part and the mountain walking part can really go in Question 4 instead. You don't tell us why you like playing the Gulliver mod, and also why you want to join our difficult server (instead of the other easier Gulliver servers). And of course the word count is too small in this question either way.
QUESTION 3: First sentence should have gone into Question 2 instead. Your answer looks long, but it is simply repeating the same things twice over; also you are spacing out sentences which does not work out here because it should be a full paragraph. And I already explained in Tobias' app our problem with whitelisting two unknown "friends", which is why we never do it.
QUESTION 4: Well you have full sentences here, so you're slightly better than your friend. But again like I mentioned earlier, we can't excuse typing skills -- we do not go easy on anyone other than from players we know and trust. And you mention friends so many times, I may ask you to watch MLP: Friendship is Magic. >.>
QUESTION 5: No, there are other better and more respectful rules, but okay at least you actually gave me a quote.
QUESTION 6: And you actually spelled this right.
VERDICT: You did better than your friend, so even though you fail you are clearly the person we would consider more likely to join our server if you continued doing improvements to your questions, spelling and grammar. However, this may be to difficult to do now, and it will certainly make it difficult to communicate with people in-game.
Also, this may all be a moot point because your friend will not join you, and that may mean you won't want choose to join us either because you will not have your friend. It's happened before many many times, and if that's what you want to do, that's fine. I respect friendship enough that I wouldn't want to break it -- I'm just letting you know so you two won't keep trying to repost your applications and using up our time.
I am so sorry but I am not that good at writing application and I am trying hard but I hope
This is good enough sorry for not trying hard but thanks for saying what I could do better
And I hope I done It much better this time tell me if I do something wrong
1) My IGN name :TobiasTorgersen
2) Why do I want to join this server: I want to join this server because I want to try the multiplayer side of Gulliver mod And I think its Gonne be fun so I thought I could try.
3) Explain how your talents, skills and experience can help the server
When I bring productivity to the server
I help players and those how asks and I am lovely to help them out.
And I love to make big builds that is community related such as
*Minigames
*Roleplaying areas
* Hangouts
That is what I can bring to the productivety to the server
5) 5 facts about my self
1*I love Chili raw
2*I am that one guy how gets left out every time at school L
3*I love adding Detail to everything and sometimes I may add to much and end up getting uglyJ.
4*I love puzzles that take ages.
5*I Love exploring things that makes me scared and just dig deeper in to it.
6) What it the server`s currency:
The currency of the server is “Chesse” .
Im sorry for not doing my best but I am trying until I get it J and I hope I will make it to the whitelist
Sorry, but I already stated to you and your friend that you will not be able to join, less so now that your revised app is no better than the last one. (You still mispell "cheese")
I seriously recommend that you and your friend try to visit another Minecraft server, you will enjoy yourselves more there.
2. I want to join this server because I don't have many servers, and I was looking for a good one when I stumbled upon this one! I viewed the mod, downloaded it, and loved it! And I'm sure playing it multiplayer will be even better! I looked at the trailers, and saw how well done 'Spawnington' was, and I thought, what a cool server!
3. I am usually, although not always, not a very talkative person. I don't get into fights easily, unless someone purposely provokes me, but even then I will be the first to apologize. I don't grief, and I don't have an intention to. Also, I have never been banned from the server, and I have been staff on a few small, local servers. I don't like huge servers, but the community seems nice here. ^u^
4. Uhm... Okay here we go!
1. I love video games! Video games take up most of my life! And not just Minecraft, you can find me on CoD, League of Legends, Battlefield 2, TF2, and many others! Constantly sharing jokes on teamspeak and having fun (I loose most often, though!)
2. I love to draw! Drawing is my second favorite thing. I am a novice feral, manga and MLP artist! I do some stuff on Twitter and DeviantArt, but most of my art is put up through Instagram (I find it the easiest!)
3. I am in Highschool, almost 3rd year. I am not very smart academically, but I'm moving forward...
4. All 8 members of my family are U.S. Veterans and I plan of being one to, one day! (#MURICA!)
5. I like cheese :3
5. I like this rule:
If Tiny, you have the right to carve a home within Spawnington, its sewers, or its various hovels, so
long as the outward appearance of the aforementioned structures are not altered.
I think it's cool to be able to make a house inside the town as a tiny.
6. The money is cheese!
YUM!
~WarriorWolf
P.S. danku
I figure I should take over some whitelisting duties, it's been a while.
Anyway, your application at first glance is pretty good and meets most of the minimum requirements. Compared to some of our other latest applicants, this should under any normal circumstance be considered a shoe-in. In fact, if I were any other lazy slob, I would be stamping "whitelist whitelist whitelist!" all over this.
Sadly, you had to be called "xXWarriorWolfXx", and it's an unfortunate coincidence that ALL players who join us with some "xX[Something]Xx" always cause us trouble in some way shape or form... not sure if its superstition, a curse, or collusion by some kind of xXXx Guild. In any event, I had to raise my guard and take a deeper dive, and sadly I still found some troubling things.
Rather than offer up a full review, let me just focus on the things that need... clarification.
QUESTION 2: You don't have many servers? Well how many servers do you expect to have at home? Running those use up a lot of electricity.
In any case, while I appreciate the focus on why you think you like our server, now I have the reverse concern... I don't really get an indication of why you want to play with this mod. Based on everything else you've written, it doesn't appear to be your cup of tea, maybe you favor something a bit more action-oriented?
Also, you make it sound like you'e never had any experience with Gulliver and Gulliver servers at all, and yet based on records from our former parent server...
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/survival-servers/698449-1-5-2-gulliver-server-whitelisted-non-forge#c1939
...you applied to Gunia's server over a year ago. Maybe it's my imagination, but this doesn't quite strike me as truthful.
QUESTION 3: Curious that you should say you never been banned from "the" server -- not sure which one in particular you're referring to, since you can't possibly be referring to our server given you've never been on it [as far as I know]. And the "never been banned" claim is negated by this post here....
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/objective-servers/768372-new-warrior-cats-rp-server-minecraft-1-5-2-no#c25
...where you unclearly mention that you got banned, although it's impossible for me to decipher why based on the peculiar writing style you used there. So again, that's twice you possibly fibbed on your application.
QUESTION 4: All the reasons are fine, except 4.5... this is a very common cop-out given we already have a cheese question. Also, since this does not equal a full sentence, you'll have to elaborate on what kinds of cheese you like. That, or choose some other fun fact to write a bout.
QUESTION 5: Just FYI, this is our laziest, most egoistic, most unimaginative Right available, and given what I've listed above, I'm not surprised you picked it and explained your choice so generically too boot.
In short, your application strikes me as just a little fishy, and for us to seriously consider your entry, you'll probably have a lot of explaining to do. It might just be easier to stick with one of your other servers.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
2)Why Would like to join the server:I would like to join this server because it looks intresting and i have never been on a guilver server before so im quite exited.Also i'm a HUGE fan of the mod and i like just a normal minecraft server were i can just hang about after school or on weekends. I also think the server is well staffed and safe so i cant just get
3)Please explain how your Talents, Skills, Experience, ect... Will contribute to our server: Well i don't exactly plan ahead but ok i think im good at greating new members and i love to help people build ect. Also i am very good with mod installing so if u need help with pluggins or somthin ask me. My talents well im good with new players and also getig along with others and im good at talking. My experience ok i guess ive been staff on quite a few servers and some tekkit ones but never a guliver server this is my first time.(i have been staff on i estimated about 9/10 servers)
4) Randome facts: I LIKE TUTLES no no no just kiddin but i do like reptiles marine life and animals
I have a pet snake named slithers
I like drinking almond milk
i like suishi
and finaly the ocean.
(i hope this is enough to get me applyed!)
more facts
I have a pet snake named slithers who is about 1 and a half foot long
i like helping people out such as baking making food ect
i love to eat raw fish( it just tastes good)
And i love to go play in the ocean
I love animals marine reptile all!
2)Why Would like to join the server:I would like to join this server because it looks intresting and i have never been on a guilver server before so im quite exited.Also i'm a HUGE fan of the mod and i like just a normal minecraft server were i can just hang about after school or on weekends. I also think the server is well staffed and safe so i cant just get
3)Please explain how your Talents, Skills, Experience, ect... Will contribute to our server: Well i don't exactly plan ahead but ok i think im good at greating new members and i love to help people build ect. Also i am very good with mod installing so if u need help with pluggins or somthin ask me. My talents well im good with new players and also getig along with others and im good at talking. My experience ok i guess ive been staff on quite a few servers and some tekkit ones but never a guliver server this is my first time.(i have been staff on i estimated about 9/10 servers)
4) FIXED FACTS
sorry this editor sucks
I have a pet snake named slithers who is about 1 and a half foot longi love to help people cook ect
i enjoy eating raw fish
i love playing in the ocean it is so fun!
all animals are amazing
I whoud like to join this server becuase me and my friend (TobiasTorgersen) have always tryed to find a server with gulivers mod and I whoud see that intresting to play with others with gullivers mod.
I am a person that loves building different tings and I like getting new intresting friends. I like to Play rolepaying games so that was a got combination.
-I do play the piano and I have resently begun to make music whith noteblocks
-I like drawing and I like to "paint" the the landskapes with drawings of things ( in minecraft)
-I like doing adventure maps and having fun with my friends
-I also Love to hear to music when I build different things.
-At last I love to Listen to other people and I like to Talk with people
As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the
smaller player.
An at the end we have the currensy that is Cheese
TobiasTorgersen
I want to join the server because i love roleplay and i love small societies.
once i were at a smillar server but it got grifed and every one left the server.
that was 3 years.ca
ive been building medivel a creative builds and love roleplaying as well as redstoneing.
ive been building big and massive things and projects lately and i want to build with friends and share
what i can build and build together.
1 year ago i buildt a server spawn the admin loved it.
i am in to building and producing buildings and help other`s
1*I love to do big projects at school and computer and relativly soscial projects
that is what makes me produce better and makes me happy and lets the time fly away.
i love to work with electrisity and and work with such that would be on the shelves on the store.
2*i love to know as much as i can and learn as much as possibel.
3*i love visiting my friends every day i do it very often and we do much together
4*i love to draw i draw since i was 6 and i thougth i was teribel until my friends told me i was better then i thougth
5* since i was at the kindergarden i loved to build
20.Please help keep the atmosphere on our server peaceful, laidback, exhilarating, appreciative and fun.
Cheese.
Hi ncbiggins, I'm Cordelia, a deputy on the server.
First things first, you're missing numbers 5 and 6. Please take another look at the first page of this thread and read through the instructions. Number 5 will ask you to quote a rule, number 6 will ask you to state the server currency.
Other than that, please try to fix up your formatting, spelling and grammar. Your application is very difficult to read.
Conclusion: I can't recommend that you be added to the whitelist right now. Not to be mean, but your application is very, very rough. Please reread the first post and spend a bit more time on it. A good idea might be to type it up in Microsoft Word or something first and then move it over here when it's ready.
I can tell just from a quick look that your application doesn't have any kind of formatting in it. To give you the same advice I gave the person above you, try typing it up in a different program so you'll have a better idea how it might look. Anyways, I'd suggest you add some numbers before your answers (like, "Number 1: TobiasTogerson"). Otherwise, try and run it through a spell checker, and try and fix the spacing up a bit. I barely even noticed you mentioned cheese because it's all the way at the bottom of the post, and the "paragraphs" for each number are confusing to say the least.
Conclusion: All in all, this is a very rough application. I don't want to sound rude, but you're going to need to put in a bit more effort for this. You're on the right track, but it's very disorganized and just confusing. Please try and fix this up to be more readable, and try and work on things like capitalizing the starts of sentences. As of now, I can't recommend that you be whitelisted until you fix up your application.
Hi Haakon, I'm Cordelia and I am going to review your application.
Same thing as your friend, unfortunately. Your formatting leaves a lot to be desired. It's very difficult to tell where one point ends and another begins. However, yours is a bit better off than your friend, so try and lead him in the right direction.
Try and add some prefixes to each answer. Run your application through a spell checker.
Anyways, for some more specific points on certain questions: For number 3, please reread the question. The question asks in what ways you can contribute to the the server. You seem like you're on the right track, but please go into more detail. For number 4, please put some more detail into your facts.
Conclusion: Your application is lacking, unfortunately. I'm going to have to ask you to put some more effort into the basics (formatting and spelling). I can't recommend you to be whitelisted at the moment. Please try and spend some more time on your application before resubmitting it.
Nr.1 my minecraft Username is haakon9303 and I have played minecraft since it was first made. (In 2008 I believe)
Nr.2 I would really liked to join this server because I like doing role-playing games, and building Cities all around the minecraft. I also enjoy playing and having fun and even try making other people laugh.
My sort of skill is I believe getting friends and having fun. And I also enjoy building, and help people build different things.
I do also play on a role-playing medieval server and I think that is very fun.
And I would like to get my friend on this server too.
Nr.3
-Fact Number 1: I do play the piano and I really like hearing on jazzy music. I do many performances for an audience and I think it is very fun doing that.
-Fact Number 2: I’m a 13 year old boy from Norway and I Hope That Tells a bit about My Typing Skills. I’m a happy kid, which tries to make people have fun.
-Fact Number 3: I like to do Drawings. I am not so very got at it “But If You Practice it you master it”, Right
-Fact Number 4: I enjoy doing conversations with people. I literally love to talk with people.
-Fact Number 5: I really enjoy playing adventure maps with people, it always make me happy at least.
-Fact Number 6: It’s more than 5 “but the more it is, the better it is”. I like getting new friends.
And this server I think will make that very easy.
Nr.4 I think this is the best and most respecting rule. "As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the smaller player.”
Nr. 5 The currency for this server is so funny. It is CHEESE. YAY!
I hope you think this is a much better application. And I want to thank you for teaching me to be more serious about these texts.
Thanks for your time, See you later.
You ate #3 and in its place put #4. This just won't fly, please try again reading the instructions very carefully -- there are six questions total, not five.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
I Want to join this server cause i love to just play around with my friends
And love to build with others
And i love to roleplay in a group of pepole
When its about Productivity to the server i love build Medieval style buildings.
Ive been building for 1 year on medivel projects and i have been getting better on building in a medivel style and i hope it will become productive to the server.
- I play the instrument bass Guitar
-I can eat chili raw
- I love to make thing to much detailed
- I buildt a tree hut once in my yard on top of the biggest tree
- I hold Projects all the time once im done with project then i jump to another project.
«I Think the most important rule is that big sized pepole dont bully
Small people»
The Server`s currency.
Is Chesse
It doesnt look like you listened to anything Cordelia said; you'll never get whitelisted if you do that.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
1) My username is Tobias Torgersen
2) I Want to join this server cause i love to just play around with my friends
And love to build with others it makes it faster and fun and every one get
And i love to roleplay in a group of people it makes I more fun and entertaining.
3)When its about Productivity to the server i love build Medieval style buildings.
Ive been building for 1 year on medivel projects and i have been getting better on building in a medivel style and i hope it will become productive to the server make it better.
4) 5 facts about my self
Fact number 1=I play the instrument bass Guitar
Fact number 2=I can eat chili raw
Fact number3=I love to make thing to much detailed
Fact number4= once I buildt a tree hut in my yard on top of the biggest tree
Fact number5=I hold Projects all the time once im done with my project
I start on a second
5)«I Think the most important rule is that big sized pepole dont bully
Small people it make`s peole sad and left out and it makes the server
Less entertaining »
6)The Server`s currency.
Is Chesse !
Nr.1 my minecraft Username is haakon9303 and I have played minecraft since it was first made. (In 2008 I believe)
Nr.2 I’m a 13 year old boy from Norway. I love Walking in the mountains I really like playing with Gullivers mod so I realy hope that I can get in to this server
Nr.3 I would really liked to join this server because I like doing role-playing games, and building Cities all around the minecraft. I also enjoy playing and having fun and even try making other people laugh.
My sort of skill is I believe getting friends and having fun. And I also enjoy building, and help people build different things.
I do also play on a role-playing medieval server and I think that is very fun.
And I would like to get my friend on this server too.
Nr.4
-Fact Number 1: I do play the piano and I really like hearing on jazzy music. I do many performances for an audience and I think it is very fun doing that.
-Fact Number 2: I’m a 13 year old boy from Norway and I Hope That Tells a bit about My Typing Skills. I’m a happy kid, which tries to make people have fun.
-Fact Number 3: I like to do Drawings. I am not so very got at it “But If You Practice it you master it”, Right
-Fact Number 4: I enjoy doing conversations with people. I literally love to talk with people.
-Fact Number 5: I really enjoy playing adventure maps with people, it always make me happy at least.
-Fact Number 6: It’s more than 5 “but the more it is, the better it is”. I like getting new friends.
And this server I think will make that very easy.
Nr.5 I think this is the best and most respecting rule. "As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the smaller player.”
Nr. 6 The currency for this server is so funny. It is CHEESE. YAY!
I hope you think this is a much better application.
Geez, well hold the rrespect about not being whitelisted, and instead try respecting my application rules a little, as well as spelling and grammar rules. This is very very hard to review in its current state, and only shows to me that you're trying to rush things.
I'm going to guess either you're very young or English is not your main language -- in either case, you have to be absolutely sure you want to get in here, because we don't make things easier to cater to either. You have to be able to understand rules, and the Rights of other players, and the Responsibilities asked of you -- if you can't understand that, then this will not be the server for you and your friend.
Anyway, I'm going to quickly show you what's wrong this time,...
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QUESTION 1: Can you really have spaces in Minecraft IGNs? That doesn't sound right.
QUESTION 2: You have no friends here, other than the friend that is trying and failing to apply here the same time as you. We do not whitelist friends together for reasons of security, so even if you somehow succeed in improving the application, we will only take one of you at a time. The other can come in later after you prove to be trustworthy.
Also, this paragraph is badly written and has nothing to do with Gulliver OR our server -- what you describe, you can easily do on any other Minecraft server, including your own.
QUESTION 2: Mispelled "Medieval" a few times, and again has very little to do with our server -- we are not a medieval server. And all you tell us is that you can build things, which is obvious since anyone who plays Minecraft can build things.
QUESTION 4: All these need to be one sentence long, and with decent grammar and spelling. Also, #3 and #5 sound like Minecraft facts, or at least VERY vague facts, and I'm going to toss those and ask for new ones. As for #4, tell me what a tree hut is, and how did you build it on a tree.
QUESTION 5: I don't know what "pepole" are -- if you're spelling is bad, go and quote the exact Right or Responsibility that you need to pass this question. The Application rules even ask that you do that first and foremost, and it's certainly a lot easier. Your explanation doesn't make sense either.
QUESTION 6: Incorrect. If you mispelled the easiest question in the entire application, there is no hope.
VERDICT: You failed and your friend is also going to fail, and I really don't think you should try to do another application -- we are definitely not the place you're looking for. Try a simple non-Gulliver Minecraft server where it will be easier to get in and play on with no hard questions.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
Hello Haakon,
I just finished failing your friend sadly, but thanks to your app I can see that you're both young (though not "too" young) and English is not your primary languages. We've had problems before letting people in who have poor mastery of the language that our staff communicates in, and because the persons did not understand instructions to stop griefing our server, they essentially had to be kicked out mercilessly. Therefore, now the rules are simple... regardless of age, language or neurological problem, if you are not able to observe the Rights given and Responsibilities required by all our players, you cannot get in. Truly sorry, but we don't have much of a choice given our limited resources, and there are also plenty of other servers that can happily take those players instead.
Anyway, I'll give you a quick review before I send you off on your journey to find another server.
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QUESTION 2: The 13 yr old part and the mountain walking part can really go in Question 4 instead. You don't tell us why you like playing the Gulliver mod, and also why you want to join our difficult server (instead of the other easier Gulliver servers). And of course the word count is too small in this question either way.
QUESTION 3: First sentence should have gone into Question 2 instead. Your answer looks long, but it is simply repeating the same things twice over; also you are spacing out sentences which does not work out here because it should be a full paragraph. And I already explained in Tobias' app our problem with whitelisting two unknown "friends", which is why we never do it.
QUESTION 4: Well you have full sentences here, so you're slightly better than your friend. But again like I mentioned earlier, we can't excuse typing skills -- we do not go easy on anyone other than from players we know and trust. And you mention friends so many times, I may ask you to watch MLP: Friendship is Magic. >.>
QUESTION 5: No, there are other better and more respectful rules, but okay at least you actually gave me a quote.
QUESTION 6: And you actually spelled this right.
VERDICT: You did better than your friend, so even though you fail you are clearly the person we would consider more likely to join our server if you continued doing improvements to your questions, spelling and grammar. However, this may be to difficult to do now, and it will certainly make it difficult to communicate with people in-game.
Also, this may all be a moot point because your friend will not join you, and that may mean you won't want choose to join us either because you will not have your friend. It's happened before many many times, and if that's what you want to do, that's fine. I respect friendship enough that I wouldn't want to break it -- I'm just letting you know so you two won't keep trying to repost your applications and using up our time.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
This is good enough sorry for not trying hard but thanks for saying what I could do better
And I hope I done It much better this time tell me if I do something wrong
1) My IGN name :TobiasTorgersen
2) Why do I want to join this server: I want to join this server because I want to try the multiplayer side of Gulliver mod And I think its Gonne be fun so I thought I could try.
3) Explain how your talents, skills and experience can help the server
When I bring productivity to the server
I help players and those how asks and I am lovely to help them out.
And I love to make big builds that is community related such as
*Minigames
*Roleplaying areas
* Hangouts
That is what I can bring to the productivety to the server
5) 5 facts about my self
1*I love Chili raw
2*I am that one guy how gets left out every time at school L
3*I love adding Detail to everything and sometimes I may add to much and end up getting uglyJ.
4*I love puzzles that take ages.
5*I Love exploring things that makes me scared and just dig deeper in to it.
6) What it the server`s currency:
The currency of the server is “Chesse” .
Im sorry for not doing my best but I am trying until I get it J and I hope I will make it to the whitelist
but i dont think i can do i better than this
I seriously recommend that you and your friend try to visit another Minecraft server, you will enjoy yourselves more there.
Please do not post more revisions, thank you.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla