Greetings, I am Chardinok, King of the Blood Demons that dwell in the Underworld.
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
First of all, Gulliver's Travels is my favorite book and never will stop being it. I love every aspect of the book. I mean, imagine going shipwrecked on an unknown island full of tiny people! Second of all, it took me not too long to find the Gulliver's mod. It became my favorate mod instantly. I craved a server for years, and found a popular one, this one in particular. I couldnt get the courage to apply then, so I had to wait. A very long time. When I say a very long time, I mean another year. I am finally making this application for this wonderful server. Cant wait to be a Big Sister- err, Big Sister-Ian? Biggish Sister-something, I dont know. I suspect you are working on it.
I can't hide my excitement!
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I may be deemed a blood-thirsty demon on the internet, but in real life, I am a young jolly person who enjoys to play Minecraft regularly. I like to make people laugh, and succeed most of the time. I will crack a bad or good joke every now and then, and love hearing people in chat go threather (I made that word myself! Its the three version of either) "omg wot", or "xD" or "lolololol". You have also asked me if I was still 38. In fact, I am! Thank you for the questions. I also enjoy seeing smiles and happy faces. That isn't regular for a demon, but, whaddya gunna do? I am a nice person and would love to be a regular sized player on your server. Regular sized, cause that was what size Gulliver was. I want to see a mix of tiny people (oh so cutie) or a mix of giants (oh not so cutie). When I play Minecraft, I am skilled in both building and redstone. If you ever need help with commands, I am at your service (ITS FREEEEE!). I also have a confession to make. I have lost trust to be whitelisted, because I have been insulting your staff members, creating bad whitelist applications, and other things. I really hope you will accept my apology and hope I get to see the above. If you do accept my apology, I will be your eternal slave. If you don't, well...
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
- Gaming: Games. Frisbee or Mario, I love to play outside and inside. Why, excerSIZE (im so sorry) is great! Its fun and healthy! Just like broccoli is delicous and healthy! (Im one of those people.)
- Pets: Another demon would kick a puppy. I wouldn't. This is self explanatory, but I'll tell some secrets. My soul animal is a pig and my dream pet is a lizard. I've done it, the words are out.
- Comedic: I am a great comedian. I can make people laugh as my popularity GROWS. Im great at joking. I can cut even the SMALLEST thing in SIZE as a joke. I love joking. (Im sorry.)
- Coder: Self explanitory.
- Active: I get on minecraft almost every single day. I will get on the server frequently, and will respect all rules I have to follow.
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
20.With good behaviour, you have the right to onetime introductory bread and cheese
I copied the layout from another application above. I like cheese too :3
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
Only the greatest currency that could ever exist: Cheese. <--- Told you i'm a comedian.
Now please let me in.
Alright, let's get started on you peeps.
1) Welcome to the Overworld.
2) So you like Gulliver's Travels. And you like the Gulliver Mod. Now what do you like about our server besides that?
3) Well, this is... interesting. Your length is good, content is... well, what needs to be there is there. There's a whole lot of stuff that is just... messy. First of all, your persistent ideas of demon-ness and slavery are, if not troublesome, irritating at best to read. I realize the vast majority of it is a joke, but by the end of this answer it's over-played.
So besides that, it checks out.
4) Your first three random facts are great, constant inferences to your apparent demonic nature aside. However, 'coder' is not, in fact, self-explanatory. At all. What languages are you good with? Do you do games, or software in general? Why are you interested in code, assuming we're even talking computer code here?
Also, proclaiming you'll be active on our server is not, in fact, a random fact. That belongs in 3).
5) Well, that checks out.
6) This checks out, too. Very funny.
Overall, no, you're not quite whitelist material. You're dogged, though, I'll give you that. So, before you run off and come back to bump right back into the same walls you have, please read through my review, which I have written as tersely as possible to hopefully get my points across. If you manage that, you should be good to go on your next try.
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
I first found out about the gulliver mod when my brother showed me a mod showcase of it that was made by my favorite youtuber, TheDiamondMinecart. After a little while, I got very interested in the mod, and I played with it almost every day. I eventually found out about The Big Sister Server, and when I looked at the dynamic map, I fell in love with all the towns that people have worked together to make and I really want to be a part of that.
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I am not trying to brag, but I have to say I am really good at decorative design. I also love building, and I specialize in building underground and I love making treehouses. I am also really good with mods, and I almost never play vanilla minecraft unless I am playing on a mini game server, or if I am testing a new minecraft update. I also LOVE minecraft roleplays, and I am very serious about them, too.
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
I am a huge anime fan. My favorites being Fairy Tail, One Piece, and Naruto.
If there is anything I like more than anime, it probably has to do with Marvel Comics. (My favorite super hero being Spider Man.)
I am a VERY serious gamer! >D
I have my own YouTube channel, and I have a lot of video and editing software.
Even though I suck at it, I love to draw.
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read theNovice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
My favorite right is:
You have the right to take the contents of any chest predesignated as a Donation Bin, such as the Spawnington Villager Church donation bins at the global spawn point.
6) And finally, to confirm that you read theBig Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
The name of the official server currency is CHEESE!!!!
Alright, next!
I've gotta say, your whitelist app's gotta be the prettiest thing I've seen in a while. Brownie points for that. ^^
1) Straight to the point. Thanks for not risking confusion. ^^
2) A love for the mod and our aesthetic. I hope Chardinok's taking notes, because this is good to go in terms of length and content.
3) I'm tempted to poke fun at your #humblebrag, but overall this section is pretty good. However, there's little on your personality or past examples of it besides you being a serious RPer (which I can appreciate ). Add that, and this section will then be all good.
4) Ah, here you stumble a little again. Your third and fifth facts could use more content, and... well, it'd be nice to have the link to your youtube channel. Both to give you more publicity, perhaps, but also to check what kind of videos you upload. We just like to be sure accounts aren't loaded with griefing videos (you'd be surprised how many people try to sneak those by us...), really, and it helps get a better feel for your character. ^^
5) Clear! (Though a number would be nice :V )
6) There should be three exclamation marks in there. Jeez. (In case it isn't obvious: it's a joke )
Okay, overall, you've got a pretty solid app. It looks pretty, most of the content is pretty, there's just a couple of potholes. Some facts are a tad short or lacking in vital content which I've already covered, and we could use a better feel for your personality (though after reading through this whole thing, I don't doubt it's the kind we'll like on the server). Besides that, I just dropped some half-joking nitpicks that'll make your application even better than it is.
Just fix those little things, and you'll be clear for a whitelist. ^^
2. I would like to join this server because I sometimes get lonely in singleplayer. I can't find anyone to play with me, because I have no friends that play minecraft.
3. I would like to have a companion where I can sit on their shoulder, also I would like to build a tiny house while I am there. And another thing I would like to do is help other players build their home. Because I just like to help around.
4. Random Facts:
-In my spare time, I like to build.
-I would rather be tiny or big in the mod.
-I would like to have someone's shoulder to sit on.
-I build pixel art.
-I draw animations on a daily basis.
5. "You are a person of small power, but grand ambition, and immeasurable potential. Yet you
know you are currently a guest in a strange house, unknown by most or all its inhabitants. You are wise to proceed with caution, as your actions will be tracked, your words held against you, your every moment scrutinized. Just as you are unsure of what challenges and dangers lie ahead, so too will we be unsure of exactly what kind of person you are. After all that effort and hospitality, will you be a new good friend for us, and a noble protector to the server that is so dear to us? Or will you be seduced by the dark arts of griefery, and betray our trust in the most callous manner possible?"
6. Cheese is the official server currency.
If I didn't get approved, just let me know, if I did, just let me know.
Well, tl;dr? You're not getting approved just yet. ntl;dr? You've got more than one shot at this, so assuming you're still reading, I'll get on with the review.
1) Nice to meetcha.
2) So... you don't know what the Gulliver Mod is or like it, don't know what our forums, community, or server is like, don't know anything about us, and so can't name anything you like about our server? Ouch. Not the best introduction you could give us, mate, especially since that's blatantly asked.
3) This just needs... a whole lot more to it. It's just a skeleton of what it could be, really.
4)
a ) too short
b ) too short
c ) too short
d ) too short
e ) too short.
Seriously, your whole application's more bone than meat: you've got what you need, but you can't leave this thing a sketch: color it!
5) This... isn't a Right nor a Responsibility. You may want to re-read the Creed. Rather, you may want to read it in the first place.
6) Well, you got that much. Congrats! I guess...
So... overall, this was all but a total flop. If you wish to put effort into it next time, I'm sure I'll be able to actually give you specific help to improve. As it is... it needs help all over the place, mostly because of your own lack of effort, spirit, and determination.
Good luck, whether you intend to try applying again or go off to find an easier server or what-have-you.
Greetings, I am Chardinok, King of the Blood Demons that dwell in the Underworld.
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
First of all, Gulliver's Travels is my favorite book and never will stop being it. I love every aspect of the book. I mean, imagine going shipwrecked on an unknown island full of tiny people! Second of all, it took me not too long to find the Gulliver's mod. It became my favorate mod instantly. I craved a server for years, and found a popular one, this one in particular. I couldnt get the courage to apply then, so I had to wait. A very long time. When I say a very long time, I mean another year. I am finally making this application for this wonderful server. Cant wait to be a Big Sister Server Player! What I like about your server is all the towns, and houses you have. I will pick a regular sized house, with a regular sized demon. I also love the games you have in store. Battleship. Chess/Checkers. Golf. More! I can't wait!
I can't hide my excitement!
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I may be deemed a blood-thirsty demon on the internet, but in real life, I am a young jolly person who enjoys to play Minecraft regularly. I like to make people laugh, and succeed most of the time. I will crack a bad or good joke every now and then, and love hearing people in chat go threather (I made that word myself! Its the three version of either) "omg wot", or "xD" or "lolololol". You have also asked me if I was still 38. In fact, I am! Thank you for the questions. I also enjoy seeing smiles and happy faces. That isn't regular for a demon, but, whaddya gunna do? I am a nice person and would love to be a regular sized player on your server. Regular sized, cause that was what size Gulliver was. I want to see a mix of tiny people (oh so cutie) or a mix of giants (oh not so cutie). When I play Minecraft, I am skilled in both building and redstone. If you ever need help with commands, I am at your service (ITS FREEEEE!). And, Im on Minecraft a lot so be prepared to see my beautiful face almost every day. I also have a confession to make. I have lost trust to be whitelisted, because I have been insulting your staff members, creating bad whitelist applications, and other things. I really hope you will accept my apology and hope I get to see the above. If you do accept my apology, I will be your eternal slave. If you don't, well...
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
- Gaming: Games. Frisbee or Mario, I love to play outside and inside. Why, excerSIZE (im so sorry) is great! Its fun and healthy! Just like broccoli is delicous and healthy! (Im one of those people.)
- Pets: Another demon would kick a puppy. I wouldn't. This is self explanatory, but I'll tell some secrets. My soul animal is a pig and my dream pet is a lizard. I've done it, the words are out.
- Comedic: I am a great comedian. I can make people laugh as my popularity GROWS. Im great at joking. I can cut even the SMALLEST thing in SIZE as a joke. I love joking. (Im sorry.)
- Coder: Ahh, coding. My favorite thing to do in my free time. My favorite types of coding are, Java, and Lua. I can give an example of some lua code here.
print("Hey. Hay is for horses.")
In the command bar, it would say, Hey. Hay is for horses. ;^)
Coding is most of my life. It is very interesting to test out the creations you can make with code. The possibilities are endless. Literally. I code games, mostly. In fact, I have maked my own Minecraft mod! Not everyone can do that. Look up minecraft demonized in your search browser, and there. (Sorry if this is self advertising, I just need to prove i have actually done it.)
- Food: Im great at cooking. I can make waffles, cereal, and more breakfast foods. Thats pretty much all I can make. Breakfast foods. Yep. And sandwiches. Thats it. Most of the time I burn foods. Never trust me to make a omelet for you. You may just get a waffle.
Even though it said five facts, I decided to give it a little more effort, and make it SIX facts. (If you give me an error for this, I don't care, its an easy fix.)
- Marvel: I love Marvel superheroes. My favorite being ant-man (I predict you know why.)
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
20. With good behaviour, you have the right to onetime introductory bread and cheese.
I copied the layout from another application above. I like cheese too :3
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
Only the greatest currency that could ever exist: Cheese. <--- Told you i'm a comedian.
2) So you like Gulliver's Travels. And you like the Gulliver Mod. Now what do you like about our server besides that?
3) Well, this is... interesting. Your length is good, content is... well, what needs to be there is there. There's a whole lot of stuff that is just... messy. First of all, your persistent ideas of demon-ness and slavery are, if not troublesome, irritating at best to read. I realize the vast majority of it is a joke, but by the end of this answer it's over-played.
So besides that, it checks out.
4) Your first three random facts are great, constant inferences to your apparent demonic nature aside. However, 'coder' is not, in fact, self-explanatory. At all. What languages are you good with? Do you do games, or software in general? Why are you interested in code, assuming we're even talking computer code here?
Also, proclaiming you'll be active on our server is not, in fact, a random fact. That belongs in 3).
Greetings, I am Chardinok, King of the Blood Demons that dwell in the Underworld.
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
First of all, Gulliver's Travels is my favorite book and never will stop being it. I love every aspect of the book. I mean, imagine going shipwrecked on an unknown island full of tiny people! Second of all, it took me not too long to find the Gulliver's mod. It became my favorate mod instantly. I craved a server for years, and found a popular one, this one in particular. I couldnt get the courage to apply then, so I had to wait. A very long time. When I say a very long time, I mean another year. I am finally making this application for this wonderful server. Cant wait to be a Big Sister Server Player! What I like about your server is all the towns, and houses you have. I will pick a regular sized house, with a regular sized demon. I also love the games you have in store. Battleship. Chess/Checkers. Golf. More! I can't wait!
I can't hide my excitement!
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I may be deemed a blood-thirsty demon on the internet, but in real life, I am a young jolly person who enjoys to play Minecraft regularly. I like to make people laugh, and succeed most of the time. I will crack a bad or good joke every now and then, and love hearing people in chat go threather (I made that word myself! Its the three version of either) "omg wot", or "xD" or "lolololol". You have also asked me if I was still 38. In fact, I am! Thank you for the questions. I also enjoy seeing smiles and happy faces. That isn't regular for a demon, but, whaddya gunna do? I am a nice person and would love to be a regular sized player on your server. Regular sized, cause that was what size Gulliver was. I want to see a mix of tiny people (oh so cutie) or a mix of giants (oh not so cutie). When I play Minecraft, I am skilled in both building and redstone. If you ever need help with commands, I am at your service (ITS FREEEEE!). And, Im on Minecraft a lot so be prepared to see my beautiful face almost every day. I also have a confession to make. I have lost trust to be whitelisted, because I have been insulting your staff members, creating bad whitelist applications, and other things. I really hope you will accept my apology and hope I get to see the above. If you do accept my apology, I will be your eternal slave. If you don't, well...
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
- Gaming: Games. Frisbee or Mario, I love to play outside and inside. Why, excerSIZE (im so sorry) is great! Its fun and healthy! Just like broccoli is delicous and healthy! (Im one of those people.)
- Pets: Another demon would kick a puppy. I wouldn't. This is self explanatory, but I'll tell some secrets. My soul animal is a pig and my dream pet is a lizard. I've done it, the words are out.
- Comedic: I am a great comedian. I can make people laugh as my popularity GROWS. Im great at joking. I can cut even the SMALLEST thing in SIZE as a joke. I love joking. (Im sorry.)
- Coder: Ahh, coding. My favorite thing to do in my free time. My favorite types of coding are, Java, and Lua. I can give an example of some lua code here.
print("Hey. Hay is for horses.")
In the command bar, it would say, Hey. Hay is for horses. ;^)
Coding is most of my life. It is very interesting to test out the creations you can make with code. The possibilities are endless. Literally. I code games, mostly. In fact, I have maked my own Minecraft mod! Not everyone can do that. Look up minecraft demonized in your search browser, and there. (Sorry if this is self advertising, I just need to prove i have actually done it.)
- Food: Im great at cooking. I can make waffles, cereal, and more breakfast foods. Thats pretty much all I can make. Breakfast foods. Yep. And sandwiches. Thats it. Most of the time I burn foods. Never trust me to make a omelet for you. You may just get a waffle.
Even though it said five facts, I decided to give it a little more effort, and make it SIX facts. (If you give me an error for this, I don't care, its an easy fix.)
- Marvel: I love Marvel superheroes. My favorite being ant-man (I predict you know why.)
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
20. With good behaviour, you have the right to onetime introductory bread and cheese.
I copied the layout from another application above. I like cheese too :3
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
Only the greatest currency that could ever exist: Cheese. <--- Told you i'm a comedian.
Lets hope this checks out.
2) Okay, minigames and stuff. That works. ^^
3) ...Well, I thought it was a little obvious that I didn't want to see hide nor hair of mentions of demon-ness or slavery here, but it seems like that didn't get through to you. Somehow. I mean, the first thing where you explain you're normal rather than a self-proclaimed demon is fine, but everything after that point would be nice if it went.
4) ...Here, though, you actually did very well. Your extended and new facts are both good, even if the sixth is a tad short. Given it's a bonus fact, though, I don't think that's a problem.
Overall... you're very, very close. I guess I can understand why you didn't pick up on my critique on your third answer and should've made my own desire for that to be edited clear, though. So... in the end... I'm going to add you to the whitelist.
With a dose of caution, however. I'd really prefer it if you cut it out with your demon act, as harmless and perhaps funny as you seem to think it is. I just find it plain irritating, and others may take offense at it. It's unlikely, but to avoid needless conflict like that you may want to start thinking of a less... frankly, evil persona to adopt while on the server.
Besides that, though, you... actually don't seem like a bad sort, even if it took you a while to get to this point. Welcome aboard.
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
I first found out about the gulliver mod when my brother showed me a mod showcase of it that was made by my favorite youtuber, TheDiamondMinecart. After a little while, I got very interested in the mod, and I played with it almost every day. I eventually found out about The Big Sister Server, and when I looked at the dynamic map, I fell in love with all the towns that people have worked together to make and I really want to be a part of that.
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I am not trying to brag, but I have to say I am really good at decorative design. I also love building, and I specialize in building underground and I love making tree houses. I am also really good with mods, and I almost never play vanilla minecraft unless I am playing on a minigame server, or if I am testing a new minecraft update. I am an honest, determined hard worker, but I think my best trait is that I am loyal to any server I join. I also LOVE minecraft role plays, and I am very serious about them, too.
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
I am a huge anime fan. My favorites being Fairy Tail, One Piece, and Naruto.
If there is anything I like more than anime, it probably has to do with Marvel Comics. (My favorite super hero being Spider Man.)
I am a VERY serious gamer. I have made lots of friends playing RPG games, and because I don’t really have any friends that live near me, I play them a lot. I also get really bored when I am not at school, so that’s another reason I play online games. A few of the many games I play are School of Dragons, Fairy Tail Online, Animal Jam, Unlimited Ninja, and Minecraft (obviously).
Even though I suck at it, I love to draw. School makes me stressed, and drawing is a good way of calming me down. It relaxes me. I also don’t really have any friends that live near me, so drawing is a good way to relieve my boredom. I like to draw my favorite anime and Marvel characters.
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read theNovice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
My favorite right is:
You have the right to take the contents of any chest predesignated as a Donation Bin, such as the Spawnington Villager Church donation bins at the global spawn point.
6) And finally, to confirm that you read theBig Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
The name of the official server currency is CHEESE!!!!!
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
I first found out about the gulliver mod when my brother showed me a mod showcase of it that was made by my favorite youtuber, TheDiamondMinecart. After a little while, I got very interested in the mod, and I played with it almost every day. I eventually found out about The Big Sister Server, and when I looked at the dynamic map, I fell in love with all the towns that people have worked together to make and I really want to be a part of that.
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I am not trying to brag, but I have to say I am really good at decorative design. I also love building, and I specialize in building underground and I love making tree houses. I am also really good with mods, and I almost never play vanilla minecraft unless I am playing on a minigame server, or if I am testing a new minecraft update. I am an honest, determined hard worker, but I think my best trait is that I am loyal to any server I join. I also LOVE minecraft role plays, and I am very serious about them, too.
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
I am a huge anime fan. My favorites being Fairy Tail, One Piece, and Naruto.
If there is anything I like more than anime, it probably has to do with Marvel Comics. (My favorite super hero being Spider Man.)
I am a VERY serious gamer. I have made lots of friends playing RPG games, and because I don’t really have any friends that live near me, I play them a lot. I also get really bored when I am not at school, so that’s another reason I play online games. A few of the many games I play are School of Dragons, Fairy Tail Online, Animal Jam, Unlimited Ninja, and Minecraft (obviously).
Even though I suck at it, I love to draw. School makes me stressed, and drawing is a good way of calming me down. It relaxes me. I also don’t really have any friends that live near me, so drawing is a good way to relieve my boredom. I like to draw my favorite anime and Marvel characters.
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read theNovice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
My favorite right is:
You have the right to take the contents of any chest predesignated as a Donation Bin, such as the Spawnington Villager Church donation bins at the global spawn point.
6) And finally, to confirm that you read theBig Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
The name of the official server currency is CHEESE!!!!!
Hi Zvcx,
I'm KC and I'll be reviewing your second attempt so we can give Burger a break.
QUESTION 2: This is still the same as your first app, which is good. Thank you for visiting Dynmap and checking out some of our towns, I hope you liked Astoria! *nudge nudge wink wink*
QUESTION 3: Aww, you just added one extra line. But it's nice to know you're a loyal player, which means you might be sticking around for a bit (which always attracts others to play), so it's a great treat to bring with! I love RPs too, so the more the merrier!
QUESTION 4:
1, same as before, which is fine.
2, same as before, which is fine.
3, y u get bored outside of school? You might need to try out some more outdoor pastimes to unbore yourself. But anyway, that's a lot of online games to try out.
4, Emerald warrior, heh. That looks like a neat little channel, thank you! \0/
5, there we go, thats a nice other pastime to try out, drawing can be cool! We have an artist thread on the main forum you can join and post your work in!
QUESTION 5: Heh, this is an old rule, but it checks out. I think Cia is going to revise this in the updated Creed (yes, it's in the works!) \^o^/
QUESTION 6: And still correct!
Yep, Burger was right to like this app, it's a really good job and you didn't have a whole lot to fix to make it a keeper! I like what I see and I say you're good for a whitelist! Congratulations and welcome!
I'm KC and I'll be reviewing your second attempt so we can give Burger a break.
QUESTION 2: This is still the same as your first app, which is good. Thank you for visiting Dynmap and checking out some of our towns, I hope you liked Astoria! *nudge nudge wink wink*
QUESTION 3: Aww, you just added one extra line. But it's nice to know you're a loyal player, which means you might be sticking around for a bit (which always attracts others to play), so it's a great treat to bring with! I love RPs too, so the more the merrier!
QUESTION 4:
1, same as before, which is fine.
2, same as before, which is fine.
3, y u get bored outside of school? You might need to try out some more outdoor pastimes to unbore yourself. But anyway, that's a lot of online games to try out.
4, Emerald warrior, heh. That looks like a neat little channel, thank you! \0/
5, there we go, thats a nice other pastime to try out, drawing can be cool! We have an artist thread on the main forum you can join and post your work in!
QUESTION 5: Heh, this is an old rule, but it checks out. I think Cia is going to revise this in the updated Creed (yes, it's in the works!) \^o^/
QUESTION 6: And still correct!
Yep, Burger was right to like this app, it's a really good job and you didn't have a whole lot to fix to make it a keeper! I like what I see and I say you're good for a whitelist! Congratulations and welcome!
OMG Thank you! I look forward to playing on the server! I really can't thank you enough!
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
I've been messing around with the Gulliver Mod for quite a while, but I've never tried playing on a multiplayer server that uses it. I want to be able to play with other people on a server with the mod rather than just alone, and the server had caught my eye some time back. I had recently (as in yesterday and today) got the mod working again, and I want to try out a Gulliver server this time around.
I found the server by roaming the web while looking for a multiplayer Gulliver server. I never acted upon it, and so I've finally decided to try getting whitelisted. I'm expecting to be denied, but at least I would have tried. The server had seemed fairly nice from the trailer, and the server sounds very fun so I'd like to try it out and perhaps meet some people or just play around on multiplayer rather than just singleplayer.
I just sort of want to join a fun community with the Gulliver mod, to sum it all up.
I had discovered Uncle Mion's Gulliver Mod by looking for a size-changing mod for Minecraft to see what there was. I was a little surprised to find that such a thing even existed. I had previously never installed a mod at this point, and so the first mod I ended up installing was, in fact, the Gulliver mod. I sort of stopped playing Minecraft after a while, and I still rarely do, but the mod seems to always bring me back.
I've had no experience with other Gulliver servers.
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I try to be as friendly as I can, and I feel as though a community needs that sort of thing. (Though I'm sure everyone within the community is already fairly friendly!) I'd talk before acting if I felt as though I or someone else was wronged, and it would be nice to be able to diplomatically solve situations rather than having it descend into chaos.
I try to handle things in the most reasonable way. I try to gather the facts and evidence before I assert what I want to say, assuming what I'd say would need backing up. This would be beneficial when communicating within the server.
I want to improve my architectural abilities and enjoy building, and perhaps if I get good enough at construction, my structures could end up being aesthetically appealing to players.
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
• I don't really like watching movies, I'd rather play video games since I can actually take part in them. Movies just don't interest me since they can be fairly boring. I added this because it means that I'd probably
• I'm somewhat quiet, but I can go into a lot of detail if I need to, assuming I fully comprehend what I'm talking about. If I don't know, then I'll say what I do know and say that I'm not sure about the rest and look into it further.
• I've tried my hand at writing literature previously, though I've taken a break from it for now. I've basically trashed all that I've tried to write, but I've kept a theoretical book around to finish at a later date.
• I spend a lot of time playing games or at least on my computer, and so I'd probably end up on the server quite frequently, perhaps even nightly or once every two days.
• I'm currently a member of a Canadian political party, which although it may not be very useful for the server, it may be useful when distinguishing me from others.
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
My favourite right is:
"You have the right to harvest wood or public crops, so long as you replant these."
I chose this right because it shows that the players are trusted to clean up after themselves and to take what they need but to restore the plantation to its normal state afterwards. It builds a sense of community and trust within the player base.
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
Explain why you want to join the server: The mod is really fun to play and i have searched through the few servers out there and this seems like the best one. The staff seem really active and the community looks great so I would want to be a part of it =] heard about it from random google searches
What can/will you do to contribute?: I'm gonna try to help people in anyway i can like building and redstone as far as my knowledge can. The last two things i said were because i get bullied quite often.
Tell us a little about yourself:
-I'm one of the tallest kids in my class, ironically i'm also the youngest. (guess everybody is using the Gulliver mod )
-I'm good at art
-I love apples and milk so much that i atleast drink one bottle of milk and eat six apples a day. (i honestly cant tell if that's healthy or unhealthy)
-I was born in America although i have been in England for a while.
-I'm gonna buy Borderlands The-Presequel once it comes out but i'm still gonna be playing on this server
Favorite responsibility/right: Responsibility #16, As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the smaller player.
Hey Ive been absent for a while because I have test's and I was back on the gulliver server but found out I was un-whitelisted will I have to re-apply?
Please try again. If it still doesn't work, you should reconfirm your IGN... Remember that spelling is important.
Explain why you want to join the server: The mod is really fun to play and i have searched through the few servers out there and this seems like the best one. The staff seem really active and the community looks great so I would want to be a part of it =] heard about it from random google searches
What can/will you do to contribute?: I'm gonna try to help people in anyway i can like building and redstone as far as my knowledge can. The last two things i said were because i get bullied quite often.
Tell us a little about yourself:
-I'm one of the tallest kids in my class, ironically i'm also the youngest. (guess everybody is using the Gulliver mod )
-I'm good at art
-I love apples and milk so much that i atleast drink one bottle of milk and eat six apples a day. (i honestly cant tell if that's healthy or unhealthy)
-I was born in America although i have been in England for a while.
-I'm gonna buy Borderlands The-Presequel once it comes out but i'm still gonna be playing on this server
Favorite responsibility/right: Responsibility #16, As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the smaller player.
Currency: Cheese
Hello Sans,
Thank you for... now that that's over, I can go ahead and review your application myself. ^^
QUESTION 2:
Though your reply is a tad bit short (52 words, not counting a repeat of the question), it's surprisingly-complete, a lot more so than the first attempts of many other applicants. Indeed, there aren't many active Gulliver servers left today, probably since we got left behind in 1.6.4... in fact, the owner of a very popular independent server (MarioWaffle) also closed down his Gulliver server and joined us, so it's been rather harrowing to see that we're becoming an endangered species. XD
To that degree, I like how you focus on the staff here and the community, that shows you took the time to read up a little.
As far as how to bulk up your question a little, there are a few things you can do:
- You can say a little about what you like about the Gulliver mod, or
- You can check out our official server video and add a comment about it, or
- You can check out our Dynmap and describe what you would most like to see in person.
Not much needed to make this question pass. ^^
QUESTION 3:
Aww, this is a very small answer sadly, we'll have to work on this one quite a bit.
Helping people is always appreciated but how? Why? Why does this relate to bullying? How do you know if maybe being TOO helpful is what's causing so much bullying in the first place? Are you generally a nice, sweet person who would like to ask the server owner a lot of wonderful [food] questions? Or are you rather quiet, shy and recluse, and just spend your time here hawing and moping? You don't have to be overly-specific but... give us a little insight into your personality so you can showcase how you can enliven our community. ^^
QUESTION 4:
- haha, wow that's so cool! Well depending on your age, gender, nutrition, health, social support and genes, it's certainly not unlikely to be the tallest kid in your class. Hopefully the aforementioned bullying isn't related to this, as I've had some run-ins with that in the past... some very insecure people feel they have NO redeeming qualities whatsoever, and so they turn to bullying other [better] people in order to feel better. It's annoying, but sadly VERY systematic.
- Oh, how great! Can you talk about some recent examples? Do you hand draw or do it digitally? Do you draw anime style?
- Hahaha... well if you can tolerate the milk (or its fermented or whole pasteurized or fresh-raw from the cow), and if the apples are whole (not juiced) and are of a more heirloom variety bred for vibrance rather than sweetness, then yeah you get a nice influx of healthy fat, some protein, vitD and calcium, some sugars from the apple, lots of fiber (especially good soluble pectin from the skin), and various other really good micronutrients. Even if it were substandard skim milk or crappy Golden Delicious apples, you'd still eat WAY better than some of your peers, so I'd be proud. ^^
- Oh yay, a lot of our players here are British, you'd probably get a long well.
- I have never played that game (I generally don't play many games), but well that's nice that you're willing to show us that dedication.
QUESTION 5:
Very nice choice! I very much like when people advocate not bullying others. ^^
QUESTION 6:
Correct!
VERDICT:
Although the app is very short, I actually very much enjoyed what you wrote! I would ask you to write more to fix over the technical shortcomings, but I have to admit I also kinda want to learn more about you, you sound interesting (in a quiet, shy sort of way). So great work, and if you can...
A - Add that extra bit to Question 2.
B - Add a lot more to Question 3.
C - Tell us more about your artwork in Question 4.
...then I can guarantee that you'll get the whitelist.
Thank you and hope to hear from you again! ^^
Thank you for... now that that's over, I can go ahead and review your application myself. ^^
QUESTION 2:
Though your reply is a tad bit short (52 words, not counting a repeat of the question), it's surprisingly-complete, a lot more so than the first attempts of many other applicants. Indeed, there aren't many active Gulliver servers left today, probably since we got left behind in 1.6.4... in fact, the owner of a very popular independent server (MarioWaffle) also closed down his Gulliver server and joined us, so it's been rather harrowing to see that we're becoming an endangered species. XD
To that degree, I like how you focus on the staff here and the community, that shows you took the time to read up a little.
As far as how to bulk up your question a little, there are a few things you can do:
- You can say a little about what you like about the Gulliver mod, or
- You can check out our official server video and add a comment about it, or
- You can check out our Dynmap and describe what you would most like to see in person.
Not much needed to make this question pass. ^^
QUESTION 3:
Aww, this is a very small answer sadly, we'll have to work on this one quite a bit.
Helping people is always appreciated but how? Why? Why does this relate to bullying? How do you know if maybe being TOO helpful is what's causing so much bullying in the first place? Are you generally a nice, sweet person who would like to ask the server owner a lot of wonderful [food] questions? Or are you rather quiet, shy and recluse, and just spend your time here hawing and moping? You don't have to be overly-specific but... give us a little insight into your personality so you can showcase how you can enliven our community. ^^
QUESTION 4:
- haha, wow that's so cool! Well depending on your age, gender, nutrition, health, social support and genes, it's certainly not unlikely to be the tallest kid in your class. Hopefully the aforementioned bullying isn't related to this, as I've had some run-ins with that in the past... some very insecure people feel they have NO redeeming qualities whatsoever, and so they turn to bullying other [better] people in order to feel better. It's annoying, but sadly VERY systematic.
- Oh, how great! Can you talk about some recent examples? Do you hand draw or do it digitally? Do you draw anime style?
- Hahaha... well if you can tolerate the milk (or its fermented or whole pasteurized or fresh-raw from the cow), and if the apples are whole (not juiced) and are of a more heirloom variety bred for vibrance rather than sweetness, then yeah you get a nice influx of healthy fat, some protein, vitD and calcium, some sugars from the apple, lots of fiber (especially good soluble pectin from the skin), and various other really good micronutrients. Even if it were substandard skim milk or crappy Golden Delicious apples, you'd still eat WAY better than some of your peers, so I'd be proud. ^^
- Oh yay, a lot of our players here are British, you'd probably get a long well.
- I have never played that game (I generally don't play many games), but well that's nice that you're willing to show us that dedication.
QUESTION 5:
Very nice choice! I very much like when people advocate not bullying others. ^^
QUESTION 6:
Correct!
VERDICT:
Although the app is very short, I actually very much enjoyed what you wrote! I would ask you to write more to fix over the technical shortcomings, but I have to admit I also kinda want to learn more about you, you sound interesting (in a quiet, shy sort of way). So great work, and if you can...
A - Add that extra bit to Question 2.
B - Add a lot more to Question 3.
C - Tell us more about your artwork in Question 4.
...then I can guarantee that you'll get the whitelist.
Thank you and hope to hear from you again! ^^
A- Well I also want to join Because the like you said its becoming an "Endangered Species" so the more people that help the longer Big Sister will Survive.
B- I'm good at building pixel art (Pixel To Block) so for any giants (Like my future self) I can build 16 x 16 Blocks for them (Example of my work attached). I can also help with plugins (if you ever need). I can give anyone advice if they cannot decide on something and they ask. And then there's mining, I'm usually lucking when doing it I actually don' know why I most of the time get what i set out to find and lots of it.
C- I draw it by hand but some of them I can scan and but on the computer, They're not anime but there a cartoon style and although im not the best best im rather good at it.
Alright, let's get started on you peeps.
1) Welcome to the Overworld.
2) So you like Gulliver's Travels. And you like the Gulliver Mod. Now what do you like about our server besides that?
3) Well, this is... interesting. Your length is good, content is... well, what needs to be there is there. There's a whole lot of stuff that is just... messy. First of all, your persistent ideas of demon-ness and slavery are, if not troublesome, irritating at best to read. I realize the vast majority of it is a joke, but by the end of this answer it's over-played.
So besides that, it checks out.
4) Your first three random facts are great, constant inferences to your apparent demonic nature aside. However, 'coder' is not, in fact, self-explanatory. At all. What languages are you good with? Do you do games, or software in general? Why are you interested in code, assuming we're even talking computer code here?
Also, proclaiming you'll be active on our server is not, in fact, a random fact. That belongs in 3).
5) Well, that checks out.
6) This checks out, too. Very funny.
Overall, no, you're not quite whitelist material. You're dogged, though, I'll give you that. So, before you run off and come back to bump right back into the same walls you have, please read through my review, which I have written as tersely as possible to hopefully get my points across. If you manage that, you should be good to go on your next try.
Good luck.
Alright, next!
). Add that, and this section will then be all good.
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I've gotta say, your whitelist app's gotta be the prettiest thing I've seen in a while. Brownie points for that. ^^
1) Straight to the point. Thanks for not risking confusion. ^^
2) A love for the mod and our aesthetic. I hope Chardinok's taking notes, because this is good to go in terms of length and content.
3) I'm tempted to poke fun at your #humblebrag, but overall this section is pretty good. However, there's little on your personality or past examples of it besides you being a serious RPer (which I can appreciate
4) Ah, here you stumble a little again. Your third and fifth facts could use more content, and... well, it'd be nice to have the link to your youtube channel. Both to give you more publicity, perhaps, but also to check what kind of videos you upload. We just like to be sure accounts aren't loaded with griefing videos (you'd be surprised how many people try to sneak those by us...), really, and it helps get a better feel for your character. ^^
5) Clear! (Though a number would be nice :V )
6) There should be three exclamation marks in there. Jeez. (In case it isn't obvious: it's a joke
Okay, overall, you've got a pretty solid app. It looks pretty, most of the content is pretty, there's just a couple of potholes. Some facts are a tad short or lacking in vital content which I've already covered, and we could use a better feel for your personality (though after reading through this whole thing, I don't doubt it's the kind we'll like on the server). Besides that, I just dropped some half-joking nitpicks that'll make your application even better than it is.
Just fix those little things, and you'll be clear for a whitelist. ^^
Well, tl;dr? You're not getting approved just yet. ntl;dr? You've got more than one shot at this, so assuming you're still reading, I'll get on with the review.
1) Nice to meetcha.
2) So... you don't know what the Gulliver Mod is or like it, don't know what our forums, community, or server is like, don't know anything about us, and so can't name anything you like about our server? Ouch. Not the best introduction you could give us, mate, especially since that's blatantly asked.
3) This just needs... a whole lot more to it. It's just a skeleton of what it could be, really.
4)
a ) too short
b ) too short
c ) too short
d ) too short
e ) too short.
Seriously, your whole application's more bone than meat: you've got what you need, but you can't leave this thing a sketch: color it!
5) This... isn't a Right nor a Responsibility. You may want to re-read the Creed. Rather, you may want to read it in the first place.
6) Well, you got that much. Congrats! I guess...
So... overall, this was all but a total flop. If you wish to put effort into it next time, I'm sure I'll be able to actually give you specific help to improve. As it is... it needs help all over the place, mostly because of your own lack of effort, spirit, and determination.
Good luck, whether you intend to try applying again or go off to find an easier server or what-have-you.
Okay, I will be sure to find a quality non white-listed server somewhere. Thanks anyways.
Lets do this.
1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
Greetings, I am Chardinok, King of the Blood Demons that dwell in the Underworld.
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
First of all, Gulliver's Travels is my favorite book and never will stop being it. I love every aspect of the book. I mean, imagine going shipwrecked on an unknown island full of tiny people! Second of all, it took me not too long to find the Gulliver's mod. It became my favorate mod instantly. I craved a server for years, and found a popular one, this one in particular. I couldnt get the courage to apply then, so I had to wait. A very long time. When I say a very long time, I mean another year. I am finally making this application for this wonderful server. Cant wait to be a Big Sister Server Player! What I like about your server is all the towns, and houses you have. I will pick a regular sized house, with a regular sized demon. I also love the games you have in store. Battleship. Chess/Checkers. Golf. More! I can't wait!
I can't hide my excitement!
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I may be deemed a blood-thirsty demon on the internet, but in real life, I am a young jolly person who enjoys to play Minecraft regularly. I like to make people laugh, and succeed most of the time. I will crack a bad or good joke every now and then, and love hearing people in chat go threather (I made that word myself! Its the three version of either) "omg wot", or "xD" or "lolololol". You have also asked me if I was still 38. In fact, I am! Thank you for the questions. I also enjoy seeing smiles and happy faces. That isn't regular for a demon, but, whaddya gunna do? I am a nice person and would love to be a regular sized player on your server. Regular sized, cause that was what size Gulliver was. I want to see a mix of tiny people (oh so cutie) or a mix of giants (oh not so cutie). When I play Minecraft, I am skilled in both building and redstone. If you ever need help with commands, I am at your service (ITS FREEEEE!). And, Im on Minecraft a lot so be prepared to see my beautiful face almost every day. I also have a confession to make. I have lost trust to be whitelisted, because I have been insulting your staff members, creating bad whitelist applications, and other things. I really hope you will accept my apology and hope I get to see the above. If you do accept my apology, I will be your eternal slave. If you don't, well...
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
- Gaming: Games. Frisbee or Mario, I love to play outside and inside. Why, excerSIZE (im so sorry) is great! Its fun and healthy! Just like broccoli is delicous and healthy! (Im one of those people.)
- Pets: Another demon would kick a puppy. I wouldn't. This is self explanatory, but I'll tell some secrets. My soul animal is a pig and my dream pet is a lizard. I've done it, the words are out.
- Comedic: I am a great comedian. I can make people laugh as my popularity GROWS. Im great at joking. I can cut even the SMALLEST thing in SIZE as a joke. I love joking. (Im sorry.)
- Coder: Ahh, coding. My favorite thing to do in my free time. My favorite types of coding are, Java, and Lua. I can give an example of some lua code here.
print("Hey. Hay is for horses.")
In the command bar, it would say, Hey. Hay is for horses. ;^)
Coding is most of my life. It is very interesting to test out the creations you can make with code. The possibilities are endless. Literally. I code games, mostly. In fact, I have maked my own Minecraft mod! Not everyone can do that. Look up minecraft demonized in your search browser, and there. (Sorry if this is self advertising, I just need to prove i have actually done it.)
- Food: Im great at cooking. I can make waffles, cereal, and more breakfast foods. Thats pretty much all I can make. Breakfast foods. Yep. And sandwiches. Thats it. Most of the time I burn foods. Never trust me to make a omelet for you. You may just get a waffle.
Even though it said five facts, I decided to give it a little more effort, and make it SIX facts. (If you give me an error for this, I don't care, its an easy fix.)
- Marvel: I love Marvel superheroes. My favorite being ant-man (I predict you know why.)
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
20. With good behaviour, you have the right to onetime introductory bread and cheese.
I copied the layout from another application above. I like cheese too :3
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
Only the greatest currency that could ever exist: Cheese. <--- Told you i'm a comedian.
Lets hope this checks out.
this account is dead btw not using it anymore
Let's see how these compare...
2) Okay, minigames and stuff. That works. ^^
3) ...Well, I thought it was a little obvious that I didn't want to see hide nor hair of mentions of demon-ness or slavery here, but it seems like that didn't get through to you. Somehow. I mean, the first thing where you explain you're normal rather than a self-proclaimed demon is fine, but everything after that point would be nice if it went.
4) ...Here, though, you actually did very well. Your extended and new facts are both good, even if the sixth is a tad short. Given it's a bonus fact, though, I don't think that's a problem.
Overall... you're very, very close. I guess I can understand why you didn't pick up on my critique on your third answer and should've made my own desire for that to be edited clear, though. So... in the end... I'm going to add you to the whitelist.
With a dose of caution, however. I'd really prefer it if you cut it out with your demon act, as harmless and perhaps funny as you seem to think it is. I just find it plain irritating, and others may take offense at it. It's unlikely, but to avoid needless conflict like that you may want to start thinking of a less... frankly, evil persona to adopt while on the server.
Besides that, though, you... actually don't seem like a bad sort, even if it took you a while to get to this point. Welcome aboard.
Thanks so much! I have been looking forward to this day for a very, very long time!
P.S: As long as im on the server, I will not act offensive or demonish on this server.
Thanks again!
~Chardinok
this account is dead btw not using it anymore
Okay, I will make a new application fixing these mistakes. Thanks for your feedback!
Okay, first is the worst, second is the best.
1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
zvcxfromaj
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
I first found out about the gulliver mod when my brother showed me a mod showcase of it that was made by my favorite youtuber, TheDiamondMinecart. After a little while, I got very interested in the mod, and I played with it almost every day. I eventually found out about The Big Sister Server, and when I looked at the dynamic map, I fell in love with all the towns that people have worked together to make and I really want to be a part of that.
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I am not trying to brag, but I have to say I am really good at decorative design. I also love building, and I specialize in building underground and I love making tree houses. I am also really good with mods, and I almost never play vanilla minecraft unless I am playing on a minigame server, or if I am testing a new minecraft update. I am an honest, determined hard worker, but I think my best trait is that I am loyal to any server I join. I also LOVE minecraft role plays, and I am very serious about them, too.
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
My favorite right is:
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
The name of the official server currency is CHEESE!!!!!
Hi Zvcx,
I'm KC and I'll be reviewing your second attempt so we can give Burger a break.
QUESTION 2: This is still the same as your first app, which is good. Thank you for visiting Dynmap and checking out some of our towns, I hope you liked Astoria! *nudge nudge wink wink*
QUESTION 3: Aww, you just added one extra line. But it's nice to know you're a loyal player, which means you might be sticking around for a bit (which always attracts others to play), so it's a great treat to bring with! I love RPs too, so the more the merrier!
QUESTION 4:
1, same as before, which is fine.
2, same as before, which is fine.
3, y u get bored outside of school? You might need to try out some more outdoor pastimes to unbore yourself. But anyway, that's a lot of online games to try out.
4, Emerald warrior, heh. That looks like a neat little channel, thank you! \0/
5, there we go, thats a nice other pastime to try out, drawing can be cool! We have an artist thread on the main forum you can join and post your work in!
QUESTION 5: Heh, this is an old rule, but it checks out. I think Cia is going to revise this in the updated Creed (yes, it's in the works!) \^o^/
QUESTION 6: And still correct!
Yep, Burger was right to like this app, it's a really good job and you didn't have a whole lot to fix to make it a keeper! I like what I see and I say you're good for a whitelist! Congratulations and welcome!
OMG Thank you! I look forward to playing on the server! I really can't thank you enough!
i cant join say you are not whie listed on this server my nick is space_force
Surprise, it's a whitelist server. How about you actually read the main post this time?
1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
SATails
2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
I've been messing around with the Gulliver Mod for quite a while, but I've never tried playing on a multiplayer server that uses it. I want to be able to play with other people on a server with the mod rather than just alone, and the server had caught my eye some time back. I had recently (as in yesterday and today) got the mod working again, and I want to try out a Gulliver server this time around.
I found the server by roaming the web while looking for a multiplayer Gulliver server. I never acted upon it, and so I've finally decided to try getting whitelisted. I'm expecting to be denied, but at least I would have tried. The server had seemed fairly nice from the trailer, and the server sounds very fun so I'd like to try it out and perhaps meet some people or just play around on multiplayer rather than just singleplayer.
I just sort of want to join a fun community with the Gulliver mod, to sum it all up.
I had discovered Uncle Mion's Gulliver Mod by looking for a size-changing mod for Minecraft to see what there was. I was a little surprised to find that such a thing even existed. I had previously never installed a mod at this point, and so the first mod I ended up installing was, in fact, the Gulliver mod. I sort of stopped playing Minecraft after a while, and I still rarely do, but the mod seems to always bring me back.
I've had no experience with other Gulliver servers.
3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
I try to be as friendly as I can, and I feel as though a community needs that sort of thing. (Though I'm sure everyone within the community is already fairly friendly!) I'd talk before acting if I felt as though I or someone else was wronged, and it would be nice to be able to diplomatically solve situations rather than having it descend into chaos.
I try to handle things in the most reasonable way. I try to gather the facts and evidence before I assert what I want to say, assuming what I'd say would need backing up. This would be beneficial when communicating within the server.
I want to improve my architectural abilities and enjoy building, and perhaps if I get good enough at construction, my structures could end up being aesthetically appealing to players.
4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
• I don't really like watching movies, I'd rather play video games since I can actually take part in them. Movies just don't interest me since they can be fairly boring. I added this because it means that I'd probably
• I'm somewhat quiet, but I can go into a lot of detail if I need to, assuming I fully comprehend what I'm talking about. If I don't know, then I'll say what I do know and say that I'm not sure about the rest and look into it further.
• I've tried my hand at writing literature previously, though I've taken a break from it for now. I've basically trashed all that I've tried to write, but I've kept a theoretical book around to finish at a later date.
• I spend a lot of time playing games or at least on my computer, and so I'd probably end up on the server quite frequently, perhaps even nightly or once every two days.
• I'm currently a member of a Canadian political party, which although it may not be very useful for the server, it may be useful when distinguishing me from others.
5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
My favourite right is:
"You have the right to harvest wood or public crops, so long as you replant these."
I chose this right because it shows that the players are trusted to clean up after themselves and to take what they need but to restore the plantation to its normal state afterwards. It builds a sense of community and trust within the player base.
6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
The official server currency is cheese.
IGN: Sans4454
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Explain why you want to join the server: The mod is really fun to play and i have searched through the few servers out there and this seems like the best one. The staff seem really active and the community looks great so I would want to be a part of it =] heard about it from random google searches
What can/will you do to contribute?: I'm gonna try to help people in anyway i can like building and redstone as far as my knowledge can. The last two things i said were because i get bullied quite often.
Tell us a little about yourself:
-I'm one of the tallest kids in my class, ironically i'm also the youngest. (guess everybody is using the Gulliver mod
-I'm good at art
-I love apples and milk so much that i atleast drink one bottle of milk and eat six apples a day. (i honestly cant tell if that's healthy or unhealthy)
-I was born in America although i have been in England for a while.
-I'm gonna buy Borderlands The-Presequel once it comes out but i'm still gonna be playing on this server
Favorite responsibility/right: Responsibility #16, As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the smaller player.
Currency: Cheese
Please try again. If it still doesn't work, you should reconfirm your IGN... Remember that spelling is important.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
Sorry for being impatient but I've waited 24 hours and no reply once again sorry for being impatient
>.> If you're so sorry, you just could have waited... Someone will get to you. We don't just forget.
Grrr, I knew it would be something like that. (And geez, you've changed your name a lot!)
Anyway, you're now whitelisted with your current name.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
Ugh, you had to go adding a weird character at the end of that IGN. T.T
Anyway, try it again.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
Hello Sans,
Thank you for... now that that's over, I can go ahead and review your application myself. ^^
QUESTION 2:
Though your reply is a tad bit short (52 words, not counting a repeat of the question), it's surprisingly-complete, a lot more so than the first attempts of many other applicants. Indeed, there aren't many active Gulliver servers left today, probably since we got left behind in 1.6.4... in fact, the owner of a very popular independent server (MarioWaffle) also closed down his Gulliver server and joined us, so it's been rather harrowing to see that we're becoming an endangered species. XD
To that degree, I like how you focus on the staff here and the community, that shows you took the time to read up a little.
As far as how to bulk up your question a little, there are a few things you can do:
- You can say a little about what you like about the Gulliver mod, or
- You can check out our official server video and add a comment about it, or
- You can check out our Dynmap and describe what you would most like to see in person.
Not much needed to make this question pass. ^^
QUESTION 3:
Aww, this is a very small answer sadly, we'll have to work on this one quite a bit.
Helping people is always appreciated but how? Why? Why does this relate to bullying? How do you know if maybe being TOO helpful is what's causing so much bullying in the first place? Are you generally a nice, sweet person who would like to ask the server owner a lot of wonderful [food] questions? Or are you rather quiet, shy and recluse, and just spend your time here hawing and moping? You don't have to be overly-specific but... give us a little insight into your personality so you can showcase how you can enliven our community. ^^
QUESTION 4:
- haha, wow that's so cool! Well depending on your age, gender, nutrition, health, social support and genes, it's certainly not unlikely to be the tallest kid in your class. Hopefully the aforementioned bullying isn't related to this, as I've had some run-ins with that in the past... some very insecure people feel they have NO redeeming qualities whatsoever, and so they turn to bullying other [better] people in order to feel better. It's annoying, but sadly VERY systematic.
- Oh, how great! Can you talk about some recent examples? Do you hand draw or do it digitally? Do you draw anime style?
- Hahaha... well if you can tolerate the milk (or its fermented or whole pasteurized or fresh-raw from the cow), and if the apples are whole (not juiced) and are of a more heirloom variety bred for vibrance rather than sweetness, then yeah you get a nice influx of healthy fat, some protein, vitD and calcium, some sugars from the apple, lots of fiber (especially good soluble pectin from the skin), and various other really good micronutrients. Even if it were substandard skim milk or crappy Golden Delicious apples, you'd still eat WAY better than some of your peers, so I'd be proud. ^^
- Oh yay, a lot of our players here are British, you'd probably get a long well.
- I have never played that game (I generally don't play many games), but well that's nice that you're willing to show us that dedication.
QUESTION 5:
Very nice choice! I very much like when people advocate not bullying others. ^^
QUESTION 6:
Correct!
VERDICT:
Although the app is very short, I actually very much enjoyed what you wrote! I would ask you to write more to fix over the technical shortcomings, but I have to admit I also kinda want to learn more about you, you sound interesting (in a quiet, shy sort of way). So great work, and if you can...
A - Add that extra bit to Question 2.
B - Add a lot more to Question 3.
C - Tell us more about your artwork in Question 4.
...then I can guarantee that you'll get the whitelist.
Thank you and hope to hear from you again! ^^
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
A- Well I also want to join Because the like you said its becoming an "Endangered Species" so the more people that help the longer Big Sister will Survive.
B- I'm good at building pixel art (Pixel To Block) so for any giants (Like my future self) I can build 16 x 16 Blocks for them (Example of my work attached). I can also help with plugins (if you ever need). I can give anyone advice if they cannot decide on something and they ask. And then there's mining, I'm usually lucking when doing it I actually don' know why I most of the time get what i set out to find and lots of it.
C- I draw it by hand but some of them I can scan and but on the computer, They're not anime but there a cartoon style and although im not the best best im rather good at it.