Minecraft Username: Twizzler_Lord Age: 14 Have you been banned before?: Not that I'm aware of, no. What is the answer to the question in the rules?: 409 List the rules quickly, and state which one is your favorite: Strictly RP, no meta, no god-moding, roleplay out survival, stay in character while roleplaying, NO ANIME CHARACTERS (thank god), humans and robots only, try your best to RP fight, have fun, and use the texture pack. I think my favorite is to try RPing out a fight, it's good to encourage RP over PvP. What made you want to join the server?: A friend suggested it, thought I would give the server a chance. If the server could improve in anyway, what would it be: I've not played on it to see what it has to offer, so I honestly don't know.
IC Info:
Character Name: Leo Chang Character Age: Approx. 23 Character Physical Description: Leo is very average, being around 5' 10" and of medium build. Traveling the wastes keeps him fit, but he's not exactly muscular. He wears worn out blue jeans and sneakers that he scavenged himself. He wears a normal shirt but his favorite possession is a pre-war Houston Astro baseball cap. ( http://th02.devianta...112-d5kke19.jpg ) Character Condition: Asthma, he has problems breathing when scavenging sometimes. Afraid of getting in chases. Character Dreams: He dreams of having enough money to settle down in a home, so he doesn't have to be out in the dangers of the wastes for prolonged periods, just to make enough money to eat. Character Fears: Death. Leo's no brave man, he knows where his place is, and his place is not trying to be the hero and saving a woman when he knows he will die. Character Skills: He's been scavenging since he was young, and he knows whats valuable and whats not, and he can always get the best prices. Character Backstory: Leo doesn't remember much of his parents at all, he was told by his older brother that they left the boys at a young age. They grew up together in a vault city, supporting each other. One would look through dumpsters for food, and the other would try to find anything to sell. Life was tough trying to grow up, and both of the boys were very skinny and weak. They got in trouble with crime, Leo's brother Koby became a guard with a local mob boss. It brought good money, and Leo used the excess robobits for drugs. He became a junkie. Things got worse and worse, and eventually Koby snapped under the pressure. His boss had been making him do horrible things. He shot himself that night. Right in front of Leo. Leo couldn't take it anymore, he spent their life savings on a gun and left the vault, putting the crime and drugs behind him. Scavenging the wastes was a dream come true for Leo. He loved the thrill of the adventure, and it was a good way for him to forget about his teenage years. Character roleplay Example: The man sat by the fire, twisting the makeshift cooking spit slowly to roast the recently killed rat. Below the spit, resting on the hot coals was a pot full of water, slowly boiling. The man sighed, poking at the fire with a stick in boredom. It had been a slow day. A handful of robobits and some shotgun shells, nothing spectacular. Luckily he had been able to find some dinner. Though it was hard to call a mangy rat dinner. He heard faint voices, and the young man looked up keeping a hand on his shotgun. If he was lucky it would just be a few idiots talking too loud in the middle of the night. If he was unlucky... He would probably be sleeping with a few bullets in him tonight. The voices got louder and louder as they approached him... it sounded like a woman and a man. "We can't keep going! I'm too... . Do you see that smoke? duck down woman!" the man said, finally realizing Leo's presence. Leo stood up, aiming his shotgun towards the direction of the voices. "Turn back now!" Leo shouted, trying to make his voice much deeper than it was. "We don't want no trouble! Just want some place to rest!" the unknown man responded. Leo looked down at his feet, unsure. These people could be like him, struggling to survive in this hell. "Ok... ok alright, but you better not try anything," he told the small group. Slowly, the man and woman came into view because of the firelight. The man was tall, and bony. He had a rough beard and long hair, but you could tell he was scared. Neither had had enough to eat for weeks. He could see the gaunt blonde woman eyeing the rat hungrily. Leo sighed, taking the rat off the spit. Grabbing it by the tail, he held it out to the couple. "Is...is that for us?" the woman asked. "Take it," Leo replied, "I can't eat it seeing two people who need it more." Reluctantly, she took it and the couple savored each bite. Leo filled two old plastic water bottles with the boiled water, giving all of it to them. His stomach growled, but he didn't care. He rolled out his bedroll and slept peacefully knowing he had done some sort of good deed.
OOC Information (Ps: It's the same exept for the backstory, I changed it as you asked)
My Minecraft username : dylan00117
My Skype : daimondylan
My Steam : I don't have any.
Age : I am 16 years old.
Have I been banned before? : Yes I did get banned a couple of times.
The answer to the question in the rules is 409.
The rules ------------------------------
1. This is strictly a roleplay server.
2. No god-modding.
3. No meta.
4. We need to purify the water.
5. No characters from animes, shows, movies, books, etc.
6. No other types of characters other than robots or humans.
7. We need to roleplay fight.
8. I already answered the question.
9. We need to roleplay our character AS WE DESCRIBED HIM.
10. Have fun and behave properly
11. We need to use the server's texture pack.
My favorite rule is that we need to roleplay our character as we described him.
Others --------------------
Why do I want to join this server? : Because I have been looking for a while now for a good roleplay server. This one seems really cool and I would like to check it out.
How can the server improve : I can't really know since I haven't played the server yet.
IC Information
Description ------------------
Character's name : Nicholas Johnson
Character's age : He is 21 years old.
Character's physical description : Nicholas is a boy that has a long curved black hair. He wears a red shirt with a hoodie and he has black pants. Nicholas weights 165 Lbs and is 5foot10. He is well built since he did work out.
Character's condition : Nicholas's leg have its femur broken at 2 places. It could heal by itself but it's gonna take a while. He can barely walk.
Character's fears : He fears the dark and being alone.
Character's dream : He dreams that one day, the world would be in peace and everyone would be happy.
Character's skills : His 6 sences are very developped and he is intelligent
Character's backstory : He was born in his parent's house. It protected them from the radiations that came from the explosion of the atomic bomb. Nicholas's mother was pregnant 3 months before the explosion. There was still a good amount of food for them to survive a few months. They decided to stay in the shelter for as long as possible to not be exposed to the radiations. The only food they had access was raw meat and bread. To drink, they still had some water bottles. They tried to use as few water bottles possible so they can survive longer. 17 Weeks later, they were completely out of supplies. They had to go outside. Lucky for them the radiadion was cleared up. They tried to raid some stores that weren't completely destroyed but they had nothing left. They had no choice left. They had to leave the city. The father used to go take car trips so he knew where there was another city. It was 12 miles away. After long hours of walking in the street. they finally arrive to the city. Lucky for them, it looked like there were still unraided they took all sorts of supplies : Medicine, Water, Food, etc. As they were leaving a bulding one day with supplies they took, another starving survivor came to them and started treatening them so they hand over thier supplies. He was armed. Nicholas's father got mad and yelled at the guy that they needed the supplies. The guy then put the gun on the father's head and pull the trigger, he then killed the mom too. Nicholas was around 3 months old so he was just crying there. The guy left him. 2 Hours later, another survivor saw Nicholas lying on the ground, next to his dead parents. He had pity for him and decided to take him with them. He feeded him for a few years until he was 10. The man was low on food and he was old so he couldn't go get food by himself. He taught him everything he needed to know to survive and then let him go. Since then, Nicholas has been surviving on his own at his risks and perils.
Character roleplay exemple : (Still the same, it's the best I can possibly do)
*Nicholas's father just came back from a long day of hunting, he caught 2 rabbits and found a dead deer. Nicholas : Dad! it was about time you come back, I am starving! said Nicholas. Mother : Try to give more respect to your father! It is harder than you think to hunt, Nicholas. Nicholas : ...Ok, sorry dad! Father : It's ok, I understand that you're very hungry, so now lets eat! *As the father was cooking the meat, the family heard a noise coming from the bushes. ''Chrchhhhh!'' Nicholas : Dad, what was that? Father : I don't know, I'm going to go see what it was. *As soon as the father stood up, a bear jumped on him out of nowhere. Bear: ''ROAAR!!'' *The bear bit his neck, the impact of the bear jumping on him made multiple of his bones break. Father : AAAAAARGH!!! Mother : *High pitch scream* Get off of him! As she said while punching it. *It was pointless, the father was already done for and the mother was too weak, her punches had no effects. Then, the bear started to get annoyed of her punches and attacked her. Panicked, Nicholas ran away from the seen, leaving his parents dying.
ACCEPTED
You're accepted - however, your backstory says about being in a city. Just edit that to a vault city (since they are just giant underground cities) and you'll be good to go.
I overlooked it because your roleplay example was absolutely superb.
Thanks! I'm looking forward to playing on this server, and I'll be sure to make the edits immediately
OOC Information (Once again, only my backstory changed)
My Minecraft username : dylan00117
My Skype : daimondylan
My Steam : I don't have any.
Age : I am 16 years old.
Have I been banned before? : Yes I did get banned a couple of times.
The answer to the question in the rules is 409.
The rules ------------------------------
1. This is strictly a roleplay server.
2. No god-modding.
3. No meta.
4. We need to purify the water.
5. No characters from animes, shows, movies, books, etc.
6. No other types of characters other than robots or humans.
7. We need to roleplay fight.
8. I already answered the question.
9. We need to roleplay our character AS WE DESCRIBED HIM.
10. Have fun and behave properly
11. We need to use the server's texture pack.
My favorite rule is that we need to roleplay our character as we described him.
Others --------------------
Why do I want to join this server? : Because I have been looking for a while now for a good roleplay server. This one seems really cool and I would like to check it out.
How can the server improve : I can't really know since I haven't played the server yet.
IC Information
Description ------------------
Character's name : Nicholas Johnson
Character's age : He is 21 years old.
Character's physical description : Nicholas is a boy that has a long curved black hair. He wears a red shirt with a hoodie and he has black pants. Nicholas weights 165 Lbs and is 5foot10. He is well built since he did work out.
Character's condition : Nicholas's leg have its femur broken at 2 places. It could heal by itself but it's gonna take a while. He can barely walk.
Character's fears : He fears the dark and being alone.
Character's dream : He dreams that one day, the world would be in peace and everyone would be happy.
Character's skills : His 6 sences are very developped and he is intelligent
Character's backstory : Nicholas was born in one of the nuclear shelters. His dream was the world to be in peace. His shelter was getting so much more people that they had to make the most weak ones leave. When he was 11 an officer came to Nicholas's mom and said : You've had your time, now, it's time to leave miss. She had an infection and she was constantly sick. Her husband said that he wouldn't abandon her so he left with her as he said : Take care of my boy! He stayed in there for 7 more years until he could get out.When he was finally 18, he left the shelter and went on an adventure to find his parents and rebuild the world. 3 Years has passed and he still has no clue where his parents are. And now, he is still in the look for them.
Character roleplay exemple :
*Nicholas's father just came back from a long day of hunting, he caught 2 rabbits and found a dead deer. Nicholas : Dad! it was about time you come back, I am starving! said Nicholas. Mother : Try to give more respect to your father! It is harder than you think to hunt, Nicholas. Nicholas : ...Ok, sorry dad! Father : It's ok, I understand that you're very hungry, so now lets eat! *As the father was cooking the meat, the family heard a noise coming from the bushes. ''Chrchhhhh!'' Nicholas : Dad, what was that? Father : I don't know, I'm going to go see what it was. *As soon as the father stood up, a bear jumped on him out of nowhere. Bear: ''ROAAR!!'' *The bear bit his neck, the impact of the bear jumping on him made multiple of his bones break. Father : AAAAAARGH!!! Mother : *High pitch scream* Get off of him! As she said while punching it. *It was pointless, the father was already done for and the mother was too weak, her punches had no effects. Then, the bear started to get annoyed of her punches and attacked her. Panicked, Nicholas ran away from the seen, leaving his parents dying.
Alright, You want me to go all out? I'll try not to decive you. Let's do this! (By the way I am keeping my design for the application but im changing some things)
My Application By: dylan00117
OOC Information
______________________________________________________ l Username l Skype l Steam l Age l l dylan00117 l daimondylan l None l 16 l
Have I been banned before? : Yes I did get banned a couple of times but mostly for stupid reasons.
The answer to the question in the rules is 409.
Rules.
1. This is strictly a roleplay server. 2. No god-modding. 3. No meta. 4. We need to purify the water. 5. No characters from animes, shows, movies, books, etc. 6. No other types of characters other than robots or humans. 7. We need to roleplay fight. 8. I already answered the question. 9. We need to roleplay our character AS WE DESCRIBED HIM. 10. Have fun and behave properly 11. We need to use the server's texture pack.
My favorite rule is that we need to roleplay our character as we described him.
Other questions.
Why do I want to join this server? : Because I have been looking for a while now for a good roleplay server. I made many applications but all of them were denied. If my grammar is bothering you well sorry english isn't my first grammar. This one seems really cool and I would like to check it out. I would at least like a chance.
How can the server improve : I can't really know since I haven't played the server yet.
IC Information
_____________________________ l Name l Age l l Nicholas Johnson l 21 l
Character's physical description : Nicholas has brown hair, a blue shirt and green pants. He is 5 foot 10 and has black marks on his arms
Character's condition : Nicholas's leg have its femur broken at 2 places. It could heal by itself but it's gonna take a while. He can barely walk.
Character's fears : He fears the dark and being alone.
Character's dream : He dreams that one day, the world would be in peace and everyone would be happy.
Character's skills : His 6 sences are very developped and he is intelligent
Character's backstory : Nicholas was born in one of the nuclear shelters. He was one of the many childs that were born every month. He made alot of friends and was happy for the time being. His best friend ''Mark'' was the same age as Nicholas. He was always doing pranks to him but they both had alot of fun together. His parents were named Vanessa and Robert. When Nicholas was born, Vanessa was 39 years old and Robers was 43 years old. The shelter had food for everyone for years. Nicholas and Mark had a dream, they wanted to go on an advanture to rebuild a city where everyone would be happy when they would be 18 and be allowed to leave the bunker. Years had passed and Nicholas finally reached 18. They said goodbye to Thier friends and families and headed off to accomplish thier dream.
Character roleplay exemple :
The bomb destroyed everything, this world is now made of dust and dirty stone. Only a few people overcame this incident and went in the bunkers to survive. For generations, nothing good have been accomplished. But now, things have changed. Nicholas has been born. He is going to change the fate of this miserable world. His goal is to rebuild a city where everyone will be happy. Like how it was, years ago. School, Jobs, Cars, everything was gone and Nicholas wanted to recreate them. He wouldn't stop to any challenges until he finishes what he wants to do. What is going to happen to him? We don't know. But what we do know, it's that we have hope that things changes, for the better.
Ps: If I don't make it this time, I won't be able to make an app for a week. At least I would of have tried. But I will be back and I will try again until I get it.
Alright, You want me to go all out? I'll try not to decive you. Let's do this! (By the way I am keeping my design for the application but im changing some things)
My Application By: dylan00117
OOC Information
______________________________________________________ l Username l Skype l Steam l Age l l dylan00117 l daimondylan l None l 16 l
Have you been banned before?: I think I was temp-banned on one server, but that was because I broke something I wasn't supposed to by accident.
What is the answer to the question in the rules?: 43+366=999999, obviously.
List the rules quickly, and state which one is your favorite: No metagaming, be in character, no powergaming, math problem, no ridiculous characters. I was pretty happy with #5, because every single roleplay server I was on, the apps were just, "I'm a darkness ninja cyborg assassin that lost his family."
What made you want to join the server?: I FREAKING LOVE ROLEPLAY. Minecraft needs more.
If the server could improve in anyway, what would it be: Be really strict about the roleplay rules, because in servers where the roleplay rules weren't as enforced, nobody was roleplaying. Also, just a suggestion, but it'd be nice to have some admin created events that keep a story going. One server I was on did that, and oh boy it was fun.
IC Info:
Character Name: Robert Bishop
Character Age: 40
Character Physical Description: Very tall, 7 feet at least, robust build. Wears an exosuit to keep himself alive, respiration mask and various mechanical workings over the suit. Ambles slowly and has a limp.
Character Condition: His suit is the only thing keeping him alive (it's not a battle suit, it's his life) He often has breathing problems, and is not agile due to his suit.
Character Dreams: He has no exact set goal, aside from wanting to be of some use to someone before his suit fails him one day. He often daydreams about any possible family members that he wishes to see again, if they're alive. Bishop also dreams to meet the man who saved him, if he is still alive.
Character Fears: Bishop is VERY wary of areas with high electrical activity, as a misstep can zap and possibly damage, or even disable, his suit.
Character Skills: Though not very agile, Bishop's suit comes with a built in hydraulic system for his arms. At the lowest levels, he can handle very small objects and insects properly. At the highest levels, he can punch holes in steel (at the expense of his suit's own conditions of course).
Character Backstory: My village was raided and my parents died and now I'm cool (lol jk). Bishop was raised in a vault that reeked of poverty, of filth, being put to labor by the vault's leaders, much to the anger of his parents. However, these were common occurences in this vault, as it was one already affected by the outside, plagued with occasional breaches of its doors, smog floods, and robot raids. Every person, every child, was expected to contribute to the vault in any way possible. Through this, Bishop grew up to be a hard, cold man, adapting to the rule of the vault's harsh conditions. But he would often wonder, was life in this vault much better than the flood of death and poison on the surface? Bishop rose in the ranks, moving from lowly laborer to mechanic to security duty. It was then that a rather large malfunctioning fuel robot, rusty from years of wandering the wastes, trying to finish its already installed program, gave in and crashed into the vault doors, exploding and taking down the vault door with it. What followed was an immigration of mutants that heard the explosion. During the fight to retake the vault, Bishop's charred body was taken to the medical ward, where he was declared as good as dead. However, one man offered to take him, and the overseers recognized him as a scientist. After the vault was retaken, and months after that, Bishop exited the lab, wearing an exosuit of the scientist's own creation. However, Bishop's mind was not the same after the attack, and his eyes took on a gray color. Not recognizing anyone, without a trace of his memory, and filled with a primal bloodlust, he went on a blind rampage through the vault, supposedly killing everyone. Exiting the vault, Bishop continued his reign of terror, breaking the doors to vaults and incinerating everyone inside. This continued until he confronted a gang of malfunctining fuel bots, which exploded and severely damaged his suit. Bishop lay there, dying, and eventually woke up in a seemingly abandoned vault, his suit damaged but partially mended. His rage had dissipated for unknown reasons. Bishop exited the vault and set out, an inexplicably changed man. (Just remember that the current Bishop is nowhere near as powerful as his violent counterpart. Current Bishop's suit is worn out and faulty, and even attempting such feats from the past would kill him)
Character Roleplay Example: As Bishop stepped out of the burning vault into the night, a bright light stopped him. The sirens were evident, and Bishop stood still as vault police ordered him to get on the ground. By then, refugees were starting to exit the vaults, and of all refugees, the first to meet Bishop was the police force, ready with a preserved car recognized as centuries old. As the police voices fought with the roaring fire, Bishop dropped his empty flamethrower, and walked towards the car. As he got closer to the car, the sounds of the fire died as the voices grew stronger, telling him to stop and get down on the ground. Bishop did not understand this language, this form of communication, this attempt at negotiation. As Bishop walked, the car's engines roared, and the police dismissed Bishop as non communicable. Orders were made to kill the man. To crush him under the might of the shining automobile, the likes of which Bishop had never seen. As the car sped towards him, Bishop did not slow down, and sped up his own pace. After what seemed like years, the car was mere inches from Bishop, when his fist landed upon the hood, deforming it beyond recognition. The car flipped over, barely missing Bishop's head, and landed behind him with a crash, upside down.
I didn't put in the math question as a joke. You are expected to seriously answer it.
Anyway, you really basically tried to force everything Exosuit onto your character and it felt OVERLY forced at some points. As well formatted and long as your app is, your character just isn't that good for this server. The backstory felt bland at some points, it feels like it was forced a bit way too much across your whole app.
I didn't put in the math question as a joke. You are expected to seriously answer it.
Anyway, you really basically tried to force everything Exosuit onto your character and it felt OVERLY forced at some points. As well formatted and long as your app is, your character just isn't that good for this server. The backstory felt bland at some points, it feels like it was forced a bit way too much across your whole app.
I'm going to have to say denied on this one.
Shooooooooot...that's what I feared, I kinda bs-ed my app, lol. Guess I'll change it up. Just to make sure, which parts do you want me to change specifically, aside from the math question? I figured I gotta rehash the backstory, but is there anything else sticking out?
Shooooooooot...that's what I feared, I kinda bs-ed my app, lol. Guess I'll change it up. Just to make sure, which parts do you want me to change specifically, aside from the math question? I figured I gotta rehash the backstory, but is there anything else sticking out?
I say ditch the battlesuit thing but other then that go ahead.
Also, we now have a website! The main site isn't finished yet, so it's just a portal. Have a flip through, though.
Have you been banned before?: I think I was temp-banned on one server, but that was because I broke something I wasn't supposed to by accident.
What is the answer to the question in the rules?: 43+366=409
List the rules quickly, and state which one is your favorite: No metagaming, be in character, no powergaming, math problem, no ridiculous characters. I was pretty happy with #5, because every single roleplay server I was on, the apps were just, "I'm a darkness ninja cyborg assassin that lost his family."
What made you want to join the server?: I FREAKING LOVE ROLEPLAY. Minecraft needs more.
If the server could improve in anyway, what would it be: Be really strict about the roleplay rules, because in servers where the roleplay rules weren't as enforced, nobody was roleplaying. Also, just a suggestion, but it'd be nice to have some admin created events that keep a story going. One server I was on did that, and oh boy it was fun.
IC Info:
Character Name: Robert Bishop
Character Age: 40
Character Physical Description: Very tall, 7 feet at least, robust build. Wears a respiration mask to keep himself alive. Ambles slowly and has a limp. He also wears an exoskeleton (it's not a battle suit, it only keeps him alive by regulating his basic internal functions).
Character Condition: His suit is the only thing keeping him alive. He often has breathing problems, and is not agile due to his injuries.
Character Dreams: He has no exact set goal, aside from wanting to be of some use to someone before his respirator fails him one day. He often daydreams about any possible family members that he wishes to see again, if they're alive. Bishop also dreams to meet the man who saved him, if he is still alive.
Character Fears: Bishop is VERY wary of areas with high electrical activity, as a misstep can zap and possibly damage, or even disable, his suit.
Character Skills: Though not very agile, and despite his injuries, Bishop is a very well built and resilient man, having great strength from years of labor.
Character Backstory: My village was raided and my parents died and now I'm cool (lol jk). Bishop was raised in a vault that reeked of poverty, of filth, being put to labor by the vault's leaders, much to the anger of his parents. However, these were common occurences in this vault, as it was one already affected by the outside, plagued with occasional breaches of its doors, smog floods, and robot raids. Every person, every child, was expected to contribute to the vault in any way possible. Through this, Bishop grew up to be a hard, cold man, adapting to the rule of the vault's harsh conditions. But he would often wonder, was life in this vault much better than the flood of death and poison on the surface? Bishop rose in the ranks, moving from lowly laborer to mechanic to security duty. It was then that a rather large malfunctioning fuel robot, rusty from years of wandering the wastes, trying to finish its already installed program, gave in and crashed into the vault doors, exploding and taking down the vault door with it. What followed was an immigration of mutants that heard the explosion. During the fight to retake the vault, Bishop's charred body was taken to the medical ward, where he was declared as good as dead. His family would have none of this, and donated their entire funds into helping Bishop. What followed was 6 months of vacillating between life and death, occasionaly regaining consciousness and falling unconscious again. After 6 more months, the doors opened to reveal a strange figure, one with Bishop's height and build, but an unrecognizable, metallic mask, and a bizarre costume. What happened next Bishop could not remember, aside from images of leaving a corpse ridden vault, and waking up later, bleeding, in pain, unable to breathe.
Character Roleplay Example: As Bishop stepped out of the burning vault into the night, a bright light stopped him. The sirens were evident, and Bishop stood still as vault police ordered him to get on the ground. By then, refugees were starting to exit the vaults, and of all refugees, the first to meet Bishop was the police force, ready with a preserved car recognized as centuries old. As the police voices fought with the roaring fire, Bishop dropped his empty flamethrower, and walked towards the car. As he got closer to the car, the sounds of the fire died as the voices grew stronger, telling him to stop and get down on the ground. Bishop did not understand this language, this form of communication, this attempt at negotiation. As Bishop walked, the car's engines roared, and the police dismissed Bishop as non communicable. Orders were made to kill the man. To crush him under the might of the shining automobile, the likes of which Bishop had never seen. As the car sped towards him, Bishop, thoughtless, charged the car. Seconds later, there was only darkness.
I edited it so that it's not a battle suit, it just keeps him alive, but doesn't really help him in any other way, aside from being somewhat resistant to heat.
What is the answer to the question in the rules?: 409
List the rules quickly, and state which one is your favorite: 1.Strictly roleplay server.
2. No god modding
3. No doing any meta.
4. Roleplay survival. The water isn't clean, and you should RP purifying it.
5. No anime characters,
6. No other types of characters then robots or humans.
7. Try to roleplay fights,
8. Math 409
9. Roleplay your character as you described him
10. Have fun,
IC Info:
Character Name: Nick Sailio
Character Age: 18
Character Physical Description:
5'9
Scars on his feet from bare feet.
Home made camo outfit.
Pocket knife tattoo on his chest
Character Condition: Doesnt trust alot of people, thinks they are to much of a burden to be around until he gets to know him.
Character Dreams: Looking for a place to settle down in this apocalyptic place.
Character Fears: Spiders.
Character Skills: Bows and construction in building houses
Character Backstory: He grew up in a vault which was almost destroyed. There has been fighting around where he lived of other gangs coming and trying to take supplies. As of the age of 13 He realized he was adopted and didn't want to know his real parents. At the age of 15 he decided that the second he turned 18 on this birthday he would leave that night, take supplies and make sure no one saw him leave for he wouldn't need to say goodbye. So bye the age of 17 he learned that there was once this beautiful place that his father told him of and he wanted to see it for his own eyes so at the age of 18 he left around 11:46pm to go to see that beautiful place.
Character Roleplay Example: It was very dark out, He didn't know that at night there were many gangs out looking for food and medicine so he just stuck to the backroads hoping no one would see him. In the corner of his eyes he could see something shining in the distance. It was a light to one of the camps. Just that second his stomach was rumbling so he thought he could sneak up and see if there was any food. He stayed in the bushes hoping not to be seen and saw they were roasting a duck they had caught. He had never tasted duck in his life since food was hard to come by in the apocalypse. As he saw some were asleep he was sure he could successfully get the duck and his hunger would be satisfied. As he got up "BANG" you heard his head hit the ground so far from one of the gang members hitting his head with a rock. He opened his eyes one last time to see them all standing there and passed out.
Don't be sore if you get denied, try to improve based off of any advice given or really have a read through your application and think about what you could improve on, or try a whole new character. If you can't get in after multiple tries or think your character is perfect and it's still denied, this server just might not be for you.
First off, your characters condition is not his personality. Moving on from that, your backstory was very.. lackluster to say the least. No build up, no real story besides you were adopted and that you want to go to a good place. Nothing. What happens after? Is there more story? No? Didn't think so. How was the vault almost destroyed?
Also, your grammar is awful. Unacceptable for this server, even. And after having a weak poorly described character, I ran another background check on you. You also lie about your age, leaving me unable to know whether you are 13, 18 or younger/older.
I would apply again but what you said i would rather sebroz reply to it i know he would have denied it to well thats what im thinking and that ing gay excuse of saying idk if you are 18 or 13 it says 13 on my screen and always will till next year on april 4.
I would apply again but what you said i would rather sebroz reply to it i know he would have denied it to well thats what im thinking and that ing gay excuse of saying idk if you are 18 or 13 it says 13 on my screen and always will till next year on april 4.
Have you been banned before?: I have been banned in the past for griefing but that was long ago and i have learned the error of my ways. I've never been banned on a roleplay server before.
What is the answer to the question in the rules?: 409
List the rules quickly, and state which one is your favorite:
1. You make a character, you be the character.
2.No god-modding.
3. No doing any type of meta.
4.Try to roleplay the survival.
5. Be unique with the characters.
6. Only robots and humans.
7. Try to roleplay fights.
8. Math.
9. Be the character as you made him/her.
10. Have fun and have common sense!
My favorite is to be unique with the characters.
What made you want to join the server?: I haven't been on a good roleplay server in a while and i thought i would try to relieve that awesome experience again.
If the server could improve in anyway, what would it be: I'd suggest trying to appeal more to the common minecraft player.
IC Info:
Character Name: Johann Nobel (People just call him Nobel.)
Character Age: 18
Character Physical Description: A man about 5'9 with long, straight black hair. Wearing old clothes that seem too small on him. He's seems in shape but doesn't care to take advantage of it. He has green eyes and light skin.
Character Condition: Suffers from asthma and depression.
Character Dreams: He aims to become a famous musician enlightening the hearts of everyone with all types of music.
Character Fears: Fear of things going wrong. So in this case he has a fear of his surroundings.
Character Skills: Musician - He is good with any type of instrument that makes a sound.
Knowledge - From the education he got from the past, he is able to solve most things in life.
Character Backstory: Born as the son of two great composers, he parents dedicated his life to music. At the age of ten, he was already composing large pieces of classical music inside of the family's personal bunker. By the age of 15, he was talked about around everyone near him. He never liked the fame. One day he confronted his parents about them talking about him. They argued for hours, but it eventually stopped once the father struck upon Johann. He tended to do this when Johann got mad at his parents, and that was when the depression settled in. By the age of 18 Johann knew he was permitted to leave the bunker, but his parents wouldn't let him. They would force him to practice and practice the instruments he had till he passed out. One night, he decided we would take charge and just run away from home, regardless of the outdoors. That morning the parents noticed he was gone and alerted everyone they knew to help find him. After weeks of searching, they never found him. He is now far away from home not regretting a thing he did.
Character Roleplay Example: "A sack of apples please." Johann Nobel said to the vendor. Nobel handed him the money. "Thank you very much sir!" Chanted the vendor. "Hey wait a minute," Nobel turned around to see what the vendor had to say. "You look very familiar," Nobel continued to walk away. "You're that piano boy! From that town about north of here!" "No i'm not," Nobel quickly said as he rushed out of the place. "Wait! You're parents are looking for you!" The vendor shouted. And at that very moment, Nobel heard a piece in his head that reminded him of his beatings and gave him a huge migraine almost instantly. He eventually passed out in the middle of the town. When he woke up he saw a blur of people surrounding him, memorizing his face, and remembering who he is and where is from. He stood up. "I have to get out of here." He said in a low voice. There was a warm towel on his head. He took it off and ran out of there. People tried to stop him, but he made it through out of the town for good.
Minecraft Username: Twizzler_Lord
Age: 14
Have you been banned before?: Not that I'm aware of, no.
What is the answer to the question in the rules?: 409
List the rules quickly, and state which one is your favorite: Strictly RP, no meta, no god-moding, roleplay out survival, stay in character while roleplaying, NO ANIME CHARACTERS (thank god), humans and robots only, try your best to RP fight, have fun, and use the texture pack. I think my favorite is to try RPing out a fight, it's good to encourage RP over PvP.
What made you want to join the server?: A friend suggested it, thought I would give the server a chance.
If the server could improve in anyway, what would it be: I've not played on it to see what it has to offer, so I honestly don't know.
IC Info:
Character Name: Leo Chang
Character Age: Approx. 23
Character Physical Description: Leo is very average, being around 5' 10" and of medium build. Traveling the wastes keeps him fit, but he's not exactly muscular. He wears worn out blue jeans and sneakers that he scavenged himself. He wears a normal shirt but his favorite possession is a pre-war Houston Astro baseball cap. ( http://th02.devianta...112-d5kke19.jpg )
Character Condition: Asthma, he has problems breathing when scavenging sometimes. Afraid of getting in chases.
Character Dreams: He dreams of having enough money to settle down in a home, so he doesn't have to be out in the dangers of the wastes for prolonged periods, just to make enough money to eat.
Character Fears: Death. Leo's no brave man, he knows where his place is, and his place is not trying to be the hero and saving a woman when he knows he will die.
Character Skills: He's been scavenging since he was young, and he knows whats valuable and whats not, and he can always get the best prices.
Character Backstory: Leo doesn't remember much of his parents at all, he was told by his older brother that they left the boys at a young age. They grew up together in a vault city, supporting each other. One would look through dumpsters for food, and the other would try to find anything to sell. Life was tough trying to grow up, and both of the boys were very skinny and weak. They got in trouble with crime, Leo's brother Koby became a guard with a local mob boss. It brought good money, and Leo used the excess robobits for drugs. He became a junkie. Things got worse and worse, and eventually Koby snapped under the pressure. His boss had been making him do horrible things. He shot himself that night. Right in front of Leo. Leo couldn't take it anymore, he spent their life savings on a gun and left the vault, putting the crime and drugs behind him. Scavenging the wastes was a dream come true for Leo. He loved the thrill of the adventure, and it was a good way for him to forget about his teenage years.
Character roleplay Example: The man sat by the fire, twisting the makeshift cooking spit slowly to roast the recently killed rat. Below the spit, resting on the hot coals was a pot full of water, slowly boiling. The man sighed, poking at the fire with a stick in boredom. It had been a slow day. A handful of robobits and some shotgun shells, nothing spectacular. Luckily he had been able to find some dinner. Though it was hard to call a mangy rat dinner. He heard faint voices, and the young man looked up keeping a hand on his shotgun. If he was lucky it would just be a few idiots talking too loud in the middle of the night. If he was unlucky... He would probably be sleeping with a few bullets in him tonight. The voices got louder and louder as they approached him... it sounded like a woman and a man. "We can't keep going! I'm too... . Do you see that smoke? duck down woman!" the man said, finally realizing Leo's presence. Leo stood up, aiming his shotgun towards the direction of the voices. "Turn back now!" Leo shouted, trying to make his voice much deeper than it was. "We don't want no trouble! Just want some place to rest!" the unknown man responded. Leo looked down at his feet, unsure. These people could be like him, struggling to survive in this hell. "Ok... ok alright, but you better not try anything," he told the small group. Slowly, the man and woman came into view because of the firelight. The man was tall, and bony. He had a rough beard and long hair, but you could tell he was scared. Neither had had enough to eat for weeks. He could see the gaunt blonde woman eyeing the rat hungrily. Leo sighed, taking the rat off the spit. Grabbing it by the tail, he held it out to the couple. "Is...is that for us?" the woman asked. "Take it," Leo replied, "I can't eat it seeing two people who need it more." Reluctantly, she took it and the couple savored each bite. Leo filled two old plastic water bottles with the boiled water, giving all of it to them. His stomach growled, but he didn't care. He rolled out his bedroll and slept peacefully knowing he had done some sort of good deed.
My Minecraft username : dylan00117
My Skype : daimondylan
My Steam : I don't have any.
Age : I am 16 years old.
Have I been banned before? : Yes I did get banned a couple of times.
The answer to the question in the rules is 409.
The rules
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1. This is strictly a roleplay server.
2. No god-modding.
3. No meta.
4. We need to purify the water.
5. No characters from animes, shows, movies, books, etc.
6. No other types of characters other than robots or humans.
7. We need to roleplay fight.
8. I already answered the question.
9. We need to roleplay our character AS WE DESCRIBED HIM.
10. Have fun and behave properly
11. We need to use the server's texture pack.
My favorite rule is that we need to roleplay our character as we described him.
Others
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Why do I want to join this server? : Because I have been looking for a while now for a good roleplay server. This one seems really cool and I would like to check it out.
How can the server improve : I can't really know since I haven't played the server yet.
IC Information
Description
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Character's name : Nicholas Johnson
Character's age : He is 21 years old.
Character's physical description : Nicholas is a boy that has a long curved black hair. He wears a red shirt with a hoodie and he has black pants. Nicholas weights 165 Lbs and is 5foot10. He is well built since he did work out.
Character's condition : Nicholas's leg have its femur broken at 2 places. It could heal by itself but it's gonna take a while. He can barely walk.
Character's fears : He fears the dark and being alone.
Character's dream : He dreams that one day, the world would be in peace and everyone would be happy.
Character's skills : His 6 sences are very developped and he is intelligent
Character's backstory : He was born in his parent's house. It protected them from the radiations that came from the explosion of the atomic bomb. Nicholas's mother was pregnant 3 months before the explosion. There was still a good amount of food for them to survive a few months. They decided to stay in the shelter for as long as possible to not be exposed to the radiations. The only food they had access was raw meat and bread. To drink, they still had some water bottles. They tried to use as few water bottles possible so they can survive longer. 17 Weeks later, they were completely out of supplies. They had to go outside. Lucky for them the radiadion was cleared up. They tried to raid some stores that weren't completely destroyed but they had nothing left. They had no choice left. They had to leave the city. The father used to go take car trips so he knew where there was another city. It was 12 miles away. After long hours of walking in the street. they finally arrive to the city. Lucky for them, it looked like there were still unraided they took all sorts of supplies : Medicine, Water, Food, etc. As they were leaving a bulding one day with supplies they took, another starving survivor came to them and started treatening them so they hand over thier supplies. He was armed. Nicholas's father got mad and yelled at the guy that they needed the supplies. The guy then put the gun on the father's head and pull the trigger, he then killed the mom too. Nicholas was around 3 months old so he was just crying there. The guy left him. 2 Hours later, another survivor saw Nicholas lying on the ground, next to his dead parents. He had pity for him and decided to take him with them. He feeded him for a few years until he was 10. The man was low on food and he was old so he couldn't go get food by himself. He taught him everything he needed to know to survive and then let him go. Since then, Nicholas has been surviving on his own at his risks and perils.
Character roleplay exemple : (Still the same, it's the best I can possibly do)
*Nicholas's father just came back from a long day of hunting, he caught 2 rabbits and found a dead deer.
Nicholas : Dad! it was about time you come back, I am starving! said Nicholas.
Mother : Try to give more respect to your father! It is harder than you think to hunt, Nicholas.
Nicholas : ...Ok, sorry dad!
Father : It's ok, I understand that you're very hungry, so now lets eat!
*As the father was cooking the meat, the family heard a noise coming from the bushes.
''Chrchhhhh!''
Nicholas : Dad, what was that?
Father : I don't know, I'm going to go see what it was.
*As soon as the father stood up, a bear jumped on him out of nowhere.
Bear: ''ROAAR!!''
*The bear bit his neck, the impact of the bear jumping on him made multiple of his bones break.
Father : AAAAAARGH!!!
Mother : *High pitch scream* Get off of him! As she said while punching it.
*It was pointless, the father was already done for and the mother was too weak, her punches had no effects. Then, the bear started to get annoyed of her punches and attacked her. Panicked, Nicholas ran away from the seen, leaving his parents dying.
Thanks! I'm looking forward to playing on this server, and I'll be sure to make the edits immediately
My Minecraft username : dylan00117
My Skype : daimondylan
My Steam : I don't have any.
Age : I am 16 years old.
Have I been banned before? : Yes I did get banned a couple of times.
The answer to the question in the rules is 409.
The rules
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1. This is strictly a roleplay server.
2. No god-modding.
3. No meta.
4. We need to purify the water.
5. No characters from animes, shows, movies, books, etc.
6. No other types of characters other than robots or humans.
7. We need to roleplay fight.
8. I already answered the question.
9. We need to roleplay our character AS WE DESCRIBED HIM.
10. Have fun and behave properly
11. We need to use the server's texture pack.
My favorite rule is that we need to roleplay our character as we described him.
Others
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Why do I want to join this server? : Because I have been looking for a while now for a good roleplay server. This one seems really cool and I would like to check it out.
How can the server improve : I can't really know since I haven't played the server yet.
IC Information
Description
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Character's name : Nicholas Johnson
Character's age : He is 21 years old.
Character's physical description : Nicholas is a boy that has a long curved black hair. He wears a red shirt with a hoodie and he has black pants. Nicholas weights 165 Lbs and is 5foot10. He is well built since he did work out.
Character's condition : Nicholas's leg have its femur broken at 2 places. It could heal by itself but it's gonna take a while. He can barely walk.
Character's fears : He fears the dark and being alone.
Character's dream : He dreams that one day, the world would be in peace and everyone would be happy.
Character's skills : His 6 sences are very developped and he is intelligent
Character's backstory : Nicholas was born in one of the nuclear shelters. His dream was the world to be in peace. His shelter was getting so much more people that they had to make the most weak ones leave. When he was 11 an officer came to Nicholas's mom and said : You've had your time, now, it's time to leave miss. She had an infection and she was constantly sick. Her husband said that he wouldn't abandon her so he left with her as he said : Take care of my boy! He stayed in there for 7 more years until he could get out. When he was finally 18, he left the shelter and went on an adventure to find his parents and rebuild the world. 3 Years has passed and he still has no clue where his parents are. And now, he is still in the look for them.
Character roleplay exemple :
*Nicholas's father just came back from a long day of hunting, he caught 2 rabbits and found a dead deer.
Nicholas : Dad! it was about time you come back, I am starving! said Nicholas.
Mother : Try to give more respect to your father! It is harder than you think to hunt, Nicholas.
Nicholas : ...Ok, sorry dad!
Father : It's ok, I understand that you're very hungry, so now lets eat!
*As the father was cooking the meat, the family heard a noise coming from the bushes.
''Chrchhhhh!''
Nicholas : Dad, what was that?
Father : I don't know, I'm going to go see what it was.
*As soon as the father stood up, a bear jumped on him out of nowhere.
Bear: ''ROAAR!!''
*The bear bit his neck, the impact of the bear jumping on him made multiple of his bones break.
Father : AAAAAARGH!!!
Mother : *High pitch scream* Get off of him! As she said while punching it.
*It was pointless, the father was already done for and the mother was too weak, her punches had no effects. Then, the bear started to get annoyed of her punches and attacked her. Panicked, Nicholas ran away from the seen, leaving his parents dying.
My Application By: dylan00117
OOC Information
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l Username l Skype l Steam l Age l
l dylan00117 l daimondylan l None l 16 l
Have I been banned before? : Yes I did get banned a couple of times but mostly for stupid reasons.
The answer to the question in the rules is 409.
Rules.
1. This is strictly a roleplay server.
2. No god-modding.
3. No meta.
4. We need to purify the water.
5. No characters from animes, shows, movies, books, etc.
6. No other types of characters other than robots or humans.
7. We need to roleplay fight.
8. I already answered the question.
9. We need to roleplay our character AS WE DESCRIBED HIM.
10. Have fun and behave properly
11. We need to use the server's texture pack.
My favorite rule is that we need to roleplay our character as we described him.
Other questions.
Why do I want to join this server? : Because I have been looking for a while now for a good roleplay server. I made many applications but all of them were denied. If my grammar is bothering you well sorry english isn't my first grammar. This one seems really cool and I would like to check it out. I would at least like a chance.
How can the server improve : I can't really know since I haven't played the server yet.
IC Information
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l Name l Age l
l Nicholas Johnson l 21 l
Character's physical description : Nicholas has brown hair, a blue shirt and green pants. He is 5 foot 10 and has black marks on his arms
Character's condition : Nicholas's leg have its femur broken at 2 places. It could heal by itself but it's gonna take a while. He can barely walk.
Character's fears : He fears the dark and being alone.
Character's dream : He dreams that one day, the world would be in peace and everyone would be happy.
Character's skills : His 6 sences are very developped and he is intelligent
Character's backstory : Nicholas was born in one of the nuclear shelters. He was one of the many childs that were born every month. He made alot of friends and was happy for the time being. His best friend ''Mark'' was the same age as Nicholas. He was always doing pranks to him but they both had alot of fun together. His parents were named Vanessa and Robert. When Nicholas was born, Vanessa was 39 years old and Robers was 43 years old. The shelter had food for everyone for years. Nicholas and Mark had a dream, they wanted to go on an advanture to rebuild a city where everyone would be happy when they would be 18 and be allowed to leave the bunker. Years had passed and Nicholas finally reached 18. They said goodbye to Thier friends and families and headed off to accomplish thier dream.
Character roleplay exemple :
The bomb destroyed everything, this world is now made of dust and dirty stone. Only a few people overcame this incident and went in the bunkers to survive. For generations, nothing good have been accomplished. But now, things have changed. Nicholas has been born. He is going to change the fate of this miserable world. His goal is to rebuild a city where everyone will be happy. Like how it was, years ago. School, Jobs, Cars, everything was gone and Nicholas wanted to recreate them. He wouldn't stop to any challenges until he finishes what he wants to do. What is going to happen to him? We don't know. But what we do know, it's that we have hope that things changes, for the better.
Ps: If I don't make it this time, I won't be able to make an app for a week. At least I would of have tried. But I will be back and I will try again until I get it.
taking a risk with this one, and saying accepted.
Check out these links!
http://forum.industrialwasteland.net
http://wiki.industrialwasteland.net
I didn't put in the math question as a joke. You are expected to seriously answer it.
Anyway, you really basically tried to force everything Exosuit onto your character and it felt OVERLY forced at some points. As well formatted and long as your app is, your character just isn't that good for this server. The backstory felt bland at some points, it feels like it was forced a bit way too much across your whole app.
I'm going to have to say denied on this one.
Shooooooooot...that's what I feared, I kinda bs-ed my app, lol. Guess I'll change it up. Just to make sure, which parts do you want me to change specifically, aside from the math question? I figured I gotta rehash the backstory, but is there anything else sticking out?
I say ditch the battlesuit thing but other then that go ahead.
Also, we now have a website! The main site isn't finished yet, so it's just a portal. Have a flip through, though.
http://industrialwasteland.net/
I edited it so that it's not a battle suit, it just keeps him alive, but doesn't really help him in any other way, aside from being somewhat resistant to heat.
Denied.
First off, your characters condition is not his personality. Moving on from that, your backstory was very.. lackluster to say the least. No build up, no real story besides you were adopted and that you want to go to a good place. Nothing. What happens after? Is there more story? No? Didn't think so. How was the vault almost destroyed?
Also, your grammar is awful. Unacceptable for this server, even. And after having a weak poorly described character, I ran another background check on you. You also lie about your age, leaving me unable to know whether you are 13, 18 or younger/older.
Because that was the only thing wrong with your app, clearly.
Sebroz (she, btw) will respond to your app if you reapply.
I said re-apply if you want Sebroz to look at your app. I'm not changing my response.
DENIED.
We talked over Skype so you know why.