OOC- IGN: IpproVen Age: 18 Previous RP Experience: Not to much, but really interested of learning more and playing. Why do you wish to join?: I've searching for a server like this for a long time and i think i've found it. I also want to be apart and create a awesome and familiar community you get. What can you bring to the server?: I will bring a humor filled, good builder filled with good ideas to the server.
--- ICC- Name: Enduriel, noone knows his last name, niether does he. Age: 31 Gender: Male Appearance: Enduriel has a medium long, very darkbrown hairstyle. Looks sprawling and not very taken care of. He got a average bodytype but a bit rugged and muscular and a little bit taller than average. At first look he seems like a man who has gone trough alot. Animals and the nature is weirdly drawn to him. He also have a brown eye and a black one with a red border. Personality: He is mostly quite and have a distance to other peaple, he is rough and determined. He has something deep in his mind that troubles him. Enduriel will get things done if he decides to do it. Enduriel is a person you really want to have on your side when things goes bad. Background Story: Its night and fullmoon, weirdly all enemy are spooky quiet, as something big or important is about to happen. Deep inside a big forest at a ruin, babyscreams can be heard. A little child have been born. Only two other persons are in the ruin taking care of the newborn child, a third person can be seen lying motionless on the cold, wet floor. It seems to be the mother who sadly passed away during the birth. The person who is holding the baby is a young woman who looks troubled about the birth. '' It's sad that she couldnt make it, she was a good person'', a man with a deep voice mumbles. ''Now give me the child Ynessa'', he says. The young woman gave the man the child and as soon the man touched the child it stopped screaming, and opened its eyes. The man watched deeply the movement of the eyes and the baby looked back. The man mumbled quietly a a sentence and the baby started to scream again. '' Here take him Ynessa'' he said. '' No what, why..why can't you take him?, the young woman replied. ''I have to leave, i have things i have to sort out, either you take care of him or find someone who can adopt him'', he told her.
Enduriel was quiet as a boy, but he played with the other kids and was healty. However peaple always felt wierd around him and he quickly got avoided at his older years. Birds, cats and dogs liked him, they actually liked him alot. On his 16th birthday he got a apprentice job at the villages lumberjack. Enduriel always asked where his mother and father was, who they were. Ynessa always replied that his mother died a unfortunate death and his father was gone. Enduriel always had this wonder in his mind, who he really was.
One day, the woman who had taken care of him ever since the birth got ill and awaited death. On her deathbed, Enduriel was sitting on the bed until the last breath. ''Ynessa, who am i, where did i come from'', Enduriel asked.'' The time has come for you to know the truth'', she replied.'' Your mother came to this village with your father a long time ago, from where they never said. Your mother died while giving birth to you and your father left the night when you came to this world'', she continued. More than that she didn't say and later on she died.
In her hands she held a book which Enduriel took when she died and in it, it stood. ''Deep in the jungle on top of the mountain the one who created this dark magic and darkness that lies upon this world lives. Only when the black, red and the animals are forged together, the darkness can be lift and the one that created this can be beaten''. What does this mean and who is this person, Enduriel wondered.
After talking to the villagers Enduriel decided to leave the village as he did not fit there. He also asked about his father and got directions to the north.
Wherever Enduriel walked even the darkest of animals remained quiet and watchfull. One day when Endurial was on ship a storm occured and the ship sank.
Enduriel waked up on a shore, he started to stumble upwords the forest and he heard a deep voice inside his head. ''Even the darkest dark of the big darkness has a foe''. This deep and faint voice also promped his upwords a old stair...
Sorry for my writing, might have rushed somethings at the end but my brain overheated, got to be quick. Well well, hoping to be accepted
Appearance: We like to know what his clothes look like. Describe them a bit.
Personality: While you're adding to the appearance, I suggest adding a couple character flaws. A good character has just as many flaws as he has strengths.
Background: Your writing skills aren't perfect, but I really like the story. It's vanilla but with a good twist of darkness mixed in. Your background is acceptable and won't need any changes. Though if you do proofread it and fix some of your grammar mistakes you'll get extra credit in my book.
It should be a very simple revision. I'll be happy to give you the proper perms once you make the few changes needed.
OOC-
IGN: Crash_92
Age: 15
Previous RP Experience: Kingdom of Ravien
Why do you wish to join?:A server to take place of my previous favorite server- Kingdom of Ravien
What can you bring to the server?: I will stay in character and help those around me
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ICC-
Name: Vaezpa
Age: 21
Gender:male
Appearance: Elvish build, with add tints of red and gray running through his skin. He wears cloaks of various colors, Normally the colors are darker with streaks of white on the trimming. He has a very dark and cold look normally holding different bladed weapons around himself. Stands around 5'5''
Personality: He is an extremely loyal ally, when he decides the cause is right. He uses all he can to his advantage and stratigises and makes desisions at his leasure. He is seemingly dark, yet cares for those who break him. Seemingly driven by a force of his own making- a light force as he thinks. He wishes to heal all he can and build a even equal world.(He can get a bit psychotic and is always on silent edge. All he does can be extremely quick but refined... Untrusting and acts a bit like he was a secluded, odd man out)
Background Story: Background Story: Vaespa -- Orphan when he was young -- learned by himself and pushed for all that he thought right... Slowly everything he knew was ripped away. Lords pushing to his homelands, He allied with all the people he could to push them out. Banishing one after another protecting his homeland and tribe, yet weirdly he was still thought of as an outcast, his people pushing him to the outskirts, few showing him any decent actions slowly he drifted away from his village, only to hear it destroyed in a few months. Days after as he was wandering he found a band of brothers who all fought against those of evil intent.(more will be coming with me if we like this server we all will know each other we are brothers (hypothetically))
(He is not an Elf just an elvish slender ears and build)
I'll accept the app and give you the permissions needed. Welcome to Irilath.
OOC-
IGN: deadjaw
Age: 18
Previous RP Experience: I've been on a few good MC servers.
Why do you wish to join?: I want to see if I still got it.
What can you bring to the server?: Hopefully a good time for myself and everyone I interact with.
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ICC-
Name: Finnick Hughes
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Finnick stands at a modest height of 5' 10'' with a lean build. He has tidy light-brown hair, and wears the suit he had on him when he went through the portal. His eyes are dark green. His stance and posture indicate that he's ready to run at a moments notice. His suit is tucked in, tidy, and relatively spot-less.
Personality:
The memories of his past life still burning in his mind, along with the fact that it is all gone now has all but broken Finnick. Cast into a new world in which he had no skills or any right to survive in sends uncontrollable primal feelings of despair and desperation coursing through him, which he hides poorly under a feigned courteous demeanor. He tends to keep things organised but the paranoia brought on by the dense Jungle has his attentions focused elsewhere. His imagination often roams freely which Finnick believes led him to start writing. Even with all the feelings of dread this new world brings to him, he is oddly fascinated by it.
Background Story:
His first thoughts after falling through the portal alone were, "Where am I?”. His second immediately followed by a sudden realization, "I am going to die here."
In a previous life before stepping through the portal, Finnick wrote stories. While other writers had to take on menial jobs to keep a steady income, Finnick, having been born into wealth, could continue on with his stories unperturbed. His father had owned a good percentage of land in their town, most of which was used for farming. As Finnick grew older, the children whom he'd befriended at a young age grew to resent him and his family’s wealth. Fine, he decided. If they were going to treat him so he was going to do the same right back. He created a shell around himself, often acting like a snob. As it was, Finnick soon didn't have many friends left at all. While most of them worked on the farm all day, Finnick usually was relaxing inside, a book in his hand. Despite it all, Finnick believed he had a good life, and future ahead of him. Looking back now, he couldn't believe how wrong he was.
Magic. Finnick never really cared for it but saw how many relied on its everyday application. He certainly didn't think anything of these rumours going around about how it was slowly unraveling the destruction of their own world. It was all like a dream now. He remembered his parent’s desperation to get out, to head towards the supposed location of a portal to another world; he remembered the rumblings shaking the ground; and he remembered the portal. It seemed like everything around it was one giant living entity. There must have been thousands of people rushing forward, some getting trampled in the process of entering this strange device. His parents were gone, pushed aside from him. All alone, he was forced forward with the crowd, moving forward in a singular mass. As he neared the portal, he closed his eyes and held his breath.
OOC-
IGN: deadjaw
Age: 18
Previous RP Experience: I've been on a few good MC servers.
Why do you wish to join?: I want to see if I still got it.
What can you bring to the server?: Hopefully a good time for myself and everyone I interact with.
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ICC-
Name: Finnick Hughes
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Finnick stands at a modest height of 5' 10'' with a lean build. He has tidy light-brown hair, and wears the suit he had on him when he went through the portal.
Personality:
The memories of his past life still burning in his mind, along with the fact that it is all gone now has all but broken Finnick. Cast into a new world in which he had no skills or any right to survive in sends uncontrollable primal feelings of despair and desperation coursing through him, which he hides poorly under a feigned courteous demeanor. He tends to keep things organised but the paranoia brought on by the dense Jungle has his attentions focused elsewhere. His imagination often roams freely which Finnick believes led him to start writing. Even with all the feelings of dread this new world brings to him, he is oddly fascinated by it.
Background Story:
His first thoughts after falling through the portal alone were, "Where am I?”. His second immediately followed by a sudden realization, "I am going to die here."
In a previous life before stepping through the portal, Finnick wrote stories. While other writers had to take on menial jobs to keep a steady income, Finnick, having been born into wealth, could continue on with his stories unperturbed. His father had owned a good percentage of land in their town, most of which was used for farming. As Finnick grew older, the children whom he'd befriended at a young age grew to resent him and his family’s wealth. Fine, he decided. If they were going to treat him so he was going to do the same right back. He created a shell around himself, often acting like a snob. As it was, Finnick soon didn't have many friends left at all. While most of them worked on the farm all day, Finnick usually was relaxing inside, a book in his hand. Despite it all, Finnick believed he had a good life, and future ahead of him. Looking back now, he couldn't believe how wrong he was.
Magic. Finnick never really cared for it but saw how many relied on its everyday application. He certainly didn't think anything of these rumours going around about how it was slowly unraveling the destruction of their own world. It was all like a dream now. He remembered his parent’s desperation to get out, to head towards the supposed location of a portal to another world; he remembered the rumblings shaking the ground; and he remembered the portal. It seemed like everything around it was one giant living entity. There must have been thousands of people rushing forward, some getting trampled in the process of entering this strange device. His parents were gone, pushed aside from him. All alone, he was forced forward with the crowd, moving forward in a singular mass. As he neared the portal, he closed his eyes and held his breath.
OOC-
IGN: Keerplunk
Age: 15
Previous RP Experience: I have played on multiple Rp server's. I think the most reconizable would be the Kingdoms.
Why do you wish to join?: I just love playing on RP servers. I love the experience and concept of Role Playing. I was also extremly impressed with your spawn and plugins you used.
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ICC- Tortes Watson
Name: Tortes Watson
Age: 35
Gender: Male
Appearance: He is a strong tall man from his experience as a captain of his ship. His skin is also weary from all of the travelling he has done. Even though he is 35 he looks a bit older because of this. He wears his dark blue captain jacket and dark black pants. It was a typical uniform for a captain and explorer of his prestige. He has dark black hair that has started to turn gray in some spots, again, due to his long travels. He has a stern face at first, but at a second glance he looks friendly. He also has a small black beard that is well kept and not messy.
Personality: From his extensive teaching as a child, he is very well spoken and smart. He is confident and knows what he is doing most of the time. He is very ambitious and he loves to question common belief and find answers. He doesn’t take someone’s word for it and would rather find out for himself. Although he has learned many skills as a child he lacks perspective because he never got to see what other children were like and only sees things he way. He often lacks understanding of other people. He seems to be perfect because of his intelligence but his crucial lack of perspective is harder to spot.
Background Story: Tortes was born in a small town fishing town in the old world. He was born to the mayor of the town’s family. Being the son of the mayor much was expected of him. He needed to be skilled at fishing, swimming and sailing. Much of his childhood was spent learning the skills needed to master those skills due to his father’s high expectations of him. With all the work he did, he was never given the opportunity to have a real childhood. He couldn’t play games in the water with other children because he needed to be taught by the teachers his father had been hired. Nevertheless, this made him extremely skilled at swimming, fishing, and riding boats. When he grew to be 18, he left his village in pursuit of perfecting his skills. Throughout the following years of his life he was taught by many wise and great teachers. He was recognized among sailors and fishermen as a highly skilled individual but was not recognized outside of that field. He then started to use his knowledge of the seas to go on long expeditions. He vastly explored the old land. He survived many dangerous monsoons and hurricanes to get to exotic and ancient places. The knowledge he had discovered attracted the likes of scientists as well. In fact he was headed towards one of his science partners when the core ruptured. Since he was near portal he was one of the first to get through. In this new world, he was not scared. Actually he was excited to see what this world had to offer.
OOC- IGN: ultra0 Age: 13 Previous RP Experience: alot of other servs Why do you wish to join?:so i may have a good time and be happy What can you bring to the server?: i can bring a good time to everyone i come across, and good rp actions
--- ICC- Name: eragon Age: 16 Gender: male Appearance:dark red hair, loving eyes, the eyes of a father, 5'10 you may think at first, oh this man is probably poorer that i can imagine, but that is just because he lost the will to live, "i dear lord, my lord help me find my lover and child, please lord i am begging you!" he prays all night, every night Personality: he has the eyes of a father, a father full of loss and anger, but just a hint of determination.he would look like a peasant, but his sword says otherwise, his bright red sword, xar'roc Background Story: "first person" I was a member of the old kingdom, i miss them so, arya, my lover, and eden, our child, i still cherish our memory, as soon as we jumped in the portal, arya and eden dissapeared, i was nearly dead from starvation and dehydration when i decided i would live for them, and i cry every night. you think you've had it tough dont you, well i have to slap myself in the face to get up in the morning, my mom, my dad,sister,lover, AND CHILD ARE GONE! dont you EVER say you have it worse than me, or i'll show you worse, DEAD, no i take that back, i would rather be dead, but i cant for the sake of arya and eden, never die, never die, never-r-r d-d-i-eee
OOC- IGN: ultra0 Age: 13 Previous RP Experience: alot of other servs Why do you wish to join?:so i may have a good time and be happy What can you bring to the server?: i can bring a good time to everyone i come across, and good rp actions
--- ICC- Name: eragon Age: 16 Gender: male Appearance:dark red hair, loving eyes, the eyes of a father, 5'10 Personality: He is passive agressive, unless just in a fight, then he murders immediatly, normally, he is generous and happy, normally on his home world, of course is the normally... but he is normally not sheathing his weapons, and instead hiding it in his pocket. Background Story: "first person" I was a member of the old kingdom, i miss them so, arya, my lover, and eden, our child, i still cherish our memory, as soon as we jumped in the portal, arya and eden dissapeared, i was nearly dead from starvation and dehydration when i decided i would live for them, and i cry every night.
Hmm, you'll need to dramatically expand all of the ICC sections. Aim for paragraphs not phrases. Look at the other apps, see how detailed those are.
OOC-
IGN: StarNomNom (Ridiculous, I know.)
Age: 13
Previous RP Experience: I have been in several RP threads, but I have never joined an RP server before.
Why do you wish to join?: The lore seems very interesting, and I've always wanted to join an RP server.
What can you bring to the server?: Some good Roleplaying experince, from already mentioned threads.
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ICC-
Name: Rai Lutona
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance: About 5 ft and 3 inches tall. A somewhat-tan skin color, with brown, bushy hair, covered by a dark blue cape. He wears a brown shirt, white gloves, reddish-brown pants, and black shoes. He is often thought to be a tween, due to his young appearance.
Personality: Shy, but smart, always thinking of every possibility. This, however, can often cause him to overthink some situations. He is also easily frightened, even by bats, which he hates most of all. Most of the time, if he is stood up by somemone who is, or seems, stronger then him, he will make no attempt to fight, making him a pushover, somewhat.
Background Story: Before being sucked to Iriliath, Rai was an apprentice for his father, who was a mage. Rai never understood the need for magic, as his true passion was to become an artist. However, since his mother was dead, and he didn't want to dissapoint his father, Rai continued to learn about magic. About a year later, Rai made little progress. He couldn't pronounce spells, he mixed up the wrong ingrediants for potions, and half of the time, he made up spells, hoping that one of them would work so his dad would be proud. A couple years later, his father had passed away, and he ran into the forest, ashamed of himself. As he sat on a stump watching, the birds fly by, he found an empty canvas, and some dyes, lying in the middle of the clearing. Rai painted a picture, dedicated to his father. But then...the unspeakable happened. The core of the planet tore itself out of the ground, and he watched as the forest set on fire. Before he could even run, the trees around him had fallen down, still burning. With no other choice, Rai hopped past the trees, rushing through the flames. Finally, he reached town, and he saw a portal that seemed to be the reason for this catastrophe. Before he could decide what to do, something pushed him from behind, sending him through the portal. When he reawoke, he thought he was dead, and in the sacred realm. He was then splashed in the face with sea water and sand, bringing him to his senses. As he got up, he saw the dense jungle ahead of him, his mouth, dropping in awe.
Anything that needs to be fixed can be fixed ASAP.
OOC-
IGN: StarNomNom (Ridiculous, I know.)
Age: 13
Previous RP Experience: I have been in several RP threads, but I have never joined an RP server before.
Why do you wish to join?: The lore seems very interesting, and I've always wanted to join an RP server.
What can you bring to the server?: Some good Roleplaying experince, from already mentioned threads.
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ICC-
Name: Rai Lutona
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance: About 5 ft and 3 inches tall. A somewhat-tan skin color, with brown, bushy hair, covered by a dark blue cape. He wears a brown shirt, white gloves, reddish-brown pants, and black shoes. He is often thought to be a tween, due to his young appearance.
Personality: Shy, but smart, always thinking of every possibility. This, however, can often cause him to overthink some situations. He is also easily frightened, even by bats, which he hates most of all. Most of the time, if he is stood up by somemone who is, or seems, stronger then him, he will make no attempt to fight, making him a pushover, somewhat.
Background Story: Before being sucked to Iriliath, Rai was an apprentice for his father, who was a mage. Rai never understood the need for magic, as his true passion was to become an artist. However, since his mother was dead, and he didn't want to dissapoint his father, Rai continued to learn about magic. About a year later, Rai made little progress. He couldn't pronounce spells, he mixed up the wrong ingrediants for potions, and half of the time, he made up spells, hoping that one of them would work so his dad would be proud. A couple years later, his father had passed away, and he ran into the forest, ashamed of himself. As he sat on a stump watching, the birds fly by, he found an empty canvas, and some dyes, lying in the middle of the clearing. Rai painted a picture, dedicated to his father. But then...the unspeakable happened. The core of the planet tore itself out of the ground, and he watched as the forest set on fire. Before he could even run, the trees around him had fallen down, still burning. With no other choice, Rai hopped past the trees, rushing through the flames. Finally, he reached town, and he saw a portal that seemed to be the reason for this catastrophe. Before he could decide what to do, something pushed him from behind, sending him through the portal. When he reawoke, he thought he was dead, and in the sacred realm. He was then splashed in the face with sea water and sand, bringing him to his senses. As he got up, he saw the dense jungle ahead of him, his mouth, dropping in awe.
Anything that needs to be fixed can be fixed ASAP.
OOC-
IGN: StarNomNom (Ridiculous, I know.)
Age: 13
Previous RP Experience: I have been in several RP threads, but I have never joined an RP server before.
Why do you wish to join?: The lore seems very interesting, and I've always wanted to join an RP server.
What can you bring to the server?: Some good Roleplaying experince, from already mentioned threads.
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ICC-
Name: Rai Lutona
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance: About 5 ft and 3 inches tall. A somewhat-tan skin color, with brown, bushy hair, covered by a dark blue cape. He wears a brown shirt, white gloves, reddish-brown pants, and black shoes. He is often thought to be a tween, due to his young appearance.
Personality: Shy, but smart, always thinking of every possibility. This, however, can often cause him to overthink some situations. He is also easily frightened, even by bats, which he hates most of all. Most of the time, if he is stood up by somemone who is, or seems, stronger then him, he will make no attempt to fight, making him a pushover, somewhat.
Background Story: Before being sucked to Iriliath, Rai was an apprentice for his father, who was a mage. Rai never understood the need for magic, as his true passion was to become an artist. However, since his mother was dead, and he didn't want to dissapoint his father, Rai continued to learn about magic. About a year later, Rai made little progress. He couldn't pronounce spells, he mixed up the wrong ingrediants for potions, and half of the time, he made up spells, hoping that one of them would work so his dad would be proud. A couple years later, his father had passed away, and he ran into the forest, ashamed of himself. As he sat on a stump watching, the birds fly by, he found an empty canvas, and some dyes, lying in the middle of the clearing. Rai painted a picture, dedicated to his father. But then...the unspeakable happened. The core of the planet tore itself out of the ground, and he watched as the forest set on fire. Before he could even run, the trees around him had fallen down, still burning. With no other choice, Rai hopped past the trees, rushing through the flames. Finally, he reached town, and he saw a portal that seemed to be the reason for this catastrophe. Before he could decide what to do, something pushed him from behind, sending him through the portal. When he reawoke, he thought he was dead, and in the sacred realm. He was then splashed in the face with sea water and sand, bringing him to his senses. As he got up, he saw the dense jungle ahead of him, his mouth, dropping in awe.
Anything that needs to be fixed can be fixed ASAP.
What can you bring to the server?: WELL! You can tell i'm power hungry right? xD I've said power about a million times. Well thats good for the server! Because i'm convinced i'm a good role-player so you won't find me "Power RPing" You'll find me trying to get powerful through a lot of time and hard work! Thats the first thing thats good! I'll be interacting as best I can with your world, story and other players because I want my character to find ways where he can earn his greatness (I came up with a different word to fool you! xD It still means powerful)
And that journey to his goal will be fantastic and in truth will never end! Muhahahaha!
And IF I become powerful? Well true power comes from people. That means i'll have to and will enjoy roleplaying with a lot of other people. I'll if I want to become great - will have to create tribes or guilds. Groups of players and find ways and things for them to do as a group. I will interact with other groups and so on.
If I do through a load of hard work make a character and have him succeed in his goal. Hopefully if I AM a good role-play too, which I believe I am. I will create role-play for as many characters as I can.
I don't know if my character will end up being evil or good. But I can assure you if I like the server and spend as much time on it as I think I will. Then hopefully if other players like me too, i'll become a big role in your world. And i'll stir some things up xD In a good way! A role-play way. A magnificent story way!
Previous RP Experience:
MMORPGS. DDO, Rappelz, Age of Conan. And more.
Why do you wish to join?:
Im kinda bored on singleplayer.
What can you bring to the server?:
I can be a companion to other players. Not much else.
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ICC-
Name:
Evareyla Leyun
Age:
28
Gender:
Female
Appearance:
Elfish pointy ears. Blonde or brown and black hair, will vary. Green or blue clothes, will vary too. Green eyes. Vines grow over her body. She is kind of like a dryad.
Screenshots of skin:
1.
2. With clothing changed and hair dye gone, also has the vines.
Personality:
Kind, friendly, honest and sometimes a bit impatient.
(Decided to add this one myself)Skills:
Healing, Growing Plants, Caring for Children, Markswomanship. Hunting.
Background Story:
I grew up in a small town. Our (my family's) house burned down when I was
seven years old. We wandered about for several years until we settled
down in another town. When I was 22 I moved out of my parent's house. 3 months later I was falsely accused of stealing from a merchant in the
marketplace and was put in jail for one year.
I was finally
released and I became an adventurer serving whoever paid enough, slaying
dragons and monsters. I was quite experienced with the bow and trained
daily when I wasn't on a mission. After about twelve years I had slain
so many monsters I was nicknamed 'The Slayer'. My younger brother joined
me on a mission and we decided to pair up thereafter.
Not long
after we were asked by a nobleman to assassinate his brother. I refused
however my brother accepted and I knew we would no longer be a team. I
decided to visit my parents again after about 5 years without
seeing them. By now I was about 27 years old. I attended some events with my parents including Great hunt. While we were hunting I got a
bit separated from the group and heard voices coming from the direction
opposite of the group. As I drew nearer I caught snatches for a
conversation. "What if we get caught? We....." says one of the voices.
"I've thought it over. We are safe here." replies another voice.
"Yes we....." adds a third.
I draw nearer and see that two of them are Wanted criminals. I mark my
way as I rush back to the group and tell them of what I have seen. "Come
quickly!" I gasp, so out of breath I can hardly speak. "Criminals,
wanted, come!" four of us return to the spot. The criminals were still
there. When we emerged from the brush the men jumped up in alarm and the
first voice I heard says, "What did I say?" We all jump forwards and
grab the thief’s hands. They struggle but we tie their hands behind
their backs.
While escorting them to the law an arrow whizzes by
my head. "Watch out! We are being attacked!" I say, "Go on without me, I
will deal with our attackers." I stealthily detach from the group so
that wherever the attackers may be they should be unable to see me.
Another arrow flew between the group. It came from the left. I climb a
tree as quietly as humanly possible. I Spot a man on a branch in a tree
about twenty meters away. I draw my bow and just as I shoot he jumps out
of the tree.
"Bad luck." I mutter under my breath. I jump down
and creep after him. He shoots again this time grazing the leader of the
group's leg "Close." I say to my-self, "Luckily he's not a good shot
with a bow." When I got closer I aimed, fired and..... Missed..... "Oh
no, now he knows where I am." I whisper. He stops and turns, but just
before he does I dive behind a tree. I waited until he drew nearer with
my bow drawn. I heard his footsteps and jumped out from behind the tree
and shot at his right arm so as to stop him from being able to shoot at
me. "It's a hit!" I shouted with joy. I tied his hands and rushed with
him to join the group.
When we returned to the town and turned in the criminal we were poorly rewarded. That was my greatest hunt yet. After that aurelia started being destroyed and me and my family fled through the portal.
What's the combat rules on this server? Normal pvp? The normal in game mechanics. Or is it an emote system?
Well usually you want to let someone know you are about to attack them. Or at least I'm pretty sure.
Like when I'm about to attack I go: " Violently swings at [name] attempting to cut his chest."
I'm not sure if that's how IT'S supposed to go.
Appearance and Personality lack detail, add more paragraphs.
The background is a little dodgy, the final part ( the hunt ) is really well written, but the dragon/monster hunting is a bit ... lackluster. Dragons are in fact friendly on our server.
When I look at your character's skills I imagine a kind woman helping out people, but being able to defend herself with a bow, but when I read the background I imagine a badass, rogue mercenary woman. Try to keep one theme going.
Also, Humans are the only race allowed.
I said elfish ears, I never said she is an elf. And my personality is like that towards friends not foes.
+ instead of doing alot about the appearance i did a screenshot so you can picture her....
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Previous RP Experience:
MMORPGS. DDO, Rappelz, Age of Conan. And more.
Why do you wish to join?:
Im kinda bored on singleplayer.
What can you bring to the server?:
I can be a companion to other players. Not much else.
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ICC-
Name:
Evareyla Leyun
Age:
28
Gender:
Female
Appearance:
Elfish pointy ears. Dyed hair that is naturally blonde. Blonde or brown and black hair, will vary. Green or blue clothes, will vary too. Green eyes. Vines grow over her body. She is kind of like a dryad. She is a smallish woman. Long hair.(Very long!!!)
Screenshots of skin:
1.
2. With clothing changed and hair dye gone, also has the vines.
Personality:
Kind, friendly, honest and sometimes a bit impatient. Always ready to deal justice to her foes.
(Decided to add this one myself)Skills:
Healing, Growing Plants, Caring for Children, Markswomanship. Hunting. Fighting.
Background Story:
I grew up in a small town. Our (my family's) house burned down when I was
seven years old. We wandered about for several years until we settled
down in another town. When I was 22 I moved out of my parent's house. 3 months later I was falsely accused of stealing from a merchant in the
marketplace and was put in jail for one year.
I was finally
released and I became an adventurer serving whoever paid enough, slaying
dragons and monsters. I was quite experienced with the bow and trained
daily when I wasn't on a mission. After about twelve years I had slain
so many monsters I was nicknamed 'The Slayer'. My younger brother joined
me on a mission and we decided to pair up thereafter.
Not long
after we were asked by a nobleman to assassinate his brother. I refused
however my brother accepted and I knew we would no longer be a team. I
decided to visit my parents again after about 5 years without
seeing them. By now I was about 27 years old. I attended some events with my parents including Great hunt. While we were hunting I got a
bit separated from the group and heard voices coming from the direction
opposite of the group. As I drew nearer I caught snatches for a
conversation. "What if we get caught? We....." says one of the voices.
"I've thought it over. We are safe here." replies another voice.
"Yes we....." adds a third.
I draw nearer and see that two of them are Wanted criminals. I mark my
way as I rush back to the group and tell them of what I have seen. "Come
quickly!" I gasp, so out of breath I can hardly speak. "Criminals,
wanted, come!" four of us return to the spot. The criminals were still
there. When we emerged from the brush the men jumped up in alarm and the
first voice I heard says, "What did I say?" We all jump forwards and
grab the thief’s hands. They struggle but we tie their hands behind
their backs.
While escorting them to the law an arrow whizzes by
my head. "Watch out! We are being attacked!" I say, "Go on without me, I
will deal with our attackers." I stealthily detach from the group so
that wherever the attackers may be they should be unable to see me.
Another arrow flew between the group. It came from the left. I climb a
tree as quietly as humanly possible. I Spot a man on a branch in a tree
about twenty meters away. I draw my bow and just as I shoot he jumps out
of the tree.
"Bad luck." I mutter under my breath. I jump down
and creep after him. He shoots again this time grazing the leader of the
group's leg "Close." I say to my-self, "Luckily he's not a good shot
with a bow." When I got closer I aimed, fired and..... Missed..... "Oh
no, now he knows where I am." I whisper. He stops and turns, but just
before he does I dive behind a tree. I waited until he drew nearer with
my bow drawn. I heard his footsteps and jumped out from behind the tree
and shot at his right arm so as to stop him from being able to shoot at
me. "It's a hit!" I shouted with joy. I tied his hands and rushed with
him to join the group.
When we returned to the town and turned in the criminal we were poorly rewarded. That was my greatest hunt yet. After that aurelia started being destroyed and me and my family fled through the portal.
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Ok. So in appearance im suppose to explain what i have visible in a pic?
And the personality is just a few basic things. What more should there be? Must i make it more like a short story?
Last thing. If i change personality to fit the background would it be fine then? Coz my backround is more my personality than the actual section for it. I will add some open response questions to add to the background and personality too ok?
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Appearance: We like to know what his clothes look like. Describe them a bit.
Personality: While you're adding to the appearance, I suggest adding a couple character flaws. A good character has just as many flaws as he has strengths.
Background: Your writing skills aren't perfect, but I really like the story. It's vanilla but with a good twist of darkness mixed in. Your background is acceptable and won't need any changes. Though if you do proofread it and fix some of your grammar mistakes you'll get extra credit in my book.
It should be a very simple revision. I'll be happy to give you the proper perms once you make the few changes needed.
I'll accept the app and give you the permissions needed. Welcome to Irilath.
IGN: deadjaw
Age: 18
Previous RP Experience: I've been on a few good MC servers.
Why do you wish to join?: I want to see if I still got it.
What can you bring to the server?: Hopefully a good time for myself and everyone I interact with.
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ICC-
Name: Finnick Hughes
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Finnick stands at a modest height of 5' 10'' with a lean build. He has tidy light-brown hair, and wears the suit he had on him when he went through the portal. His eyes are dark green. His stance and posture indicate that he's ready to run at a moments notice. His suit is tucked in, tidy, and relatively spot-less.
Personality:
The memories of his past life still burning in his mind, along with the fact that it is all gone now has all but broken Finnick. Cast into a new world in which he had no skills or any right to survive in sends uncontrollable primal feelings of despair and desperation coursing through him, which he hides poorly under a feigned courteous demeanor. He tends to keep things organised but the paranoia brought on by the dense Jungle has his attentions focused elsewhere. His imagination often roams freely which Finnick believes led him to start writing. Even with all the feelings of dread this new world brings to him, he is oddly fascinated by it.
Background Story:
His first thoughts after falling through the portal alone were, "Where am I?”. His second immediately followed by a sudden realization, "I am going to die here."
In a previous life before stepping through the portal, Finnick wrote stories. While other writers had to take on menial jobs to keep a steady income, Finnick, having been born into wealth, could continue on with his stories unperturbed. His father had owned a good percentage of land in their town, most of which was used for farming. As Finnick grew older, the children whom he'd befriended at a young age grew to resent him and his family’s wealth. Fine, he decided. If they were going to treat him so he was going to do the same right back. He created a shell around himself, often acting like a snob. As it was, Finnick soon didn't have many friends left at all. While most of them worked on the farm all day, Finnick usually was relaxing inside, a book in his hand. Despite it all, Finnick believed he had a good life, and future ahead of him. Looking back now, he couldn't believe how wrong he was.
Magic. Finnick never really cared for it but saw how many relied on its everyday application. He certainly didn't think anything of these rumours going around about how it was slowly unraveling the destruction of their own world. It was all like a dream now. He remembered his parent’s desperation to get out, to head towards the supposed location of a portal to another world; he remembered the rumblings shaking the ground; and he remembered the portal. It seemed like everything around it was one giant living entity. There must have been thousands of people rushing forward, some getting trampled in the process of entering this strange device. His parents were gone, pushed aside from him. All alone, he was forced forward with the crowd, moving forward in a singular mass. As he neared the portal, he closed his eyes and held his breath.
Mhm, welcome to Iriliath.
IGN: Keerplunk
Age: 15
Previous RP Experience: I have played on multiple Rp server's. I think the most reconizable would be the Kingdoms.
Why do you wish to join?: I just love playing on RP servers. I love the experience and concept of Role Playing. I was also extremly impressed with your spawn and plugins you used.
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ICC- Tortes Watson
Name: Tortes Watson
Age: 35
Gender: Male
Appearance: He is a strong tall man from his experience as a captain of his ship. His skin is also weary from all of the travelling he has done. Even though he is 35 he looks a bit older because of this. He wears his dark blue captain jacket and dark black pants. It was a typical uniform for a captain and explorer of his prestige. He has dark black hair that has started to turn gray in some spots, again, due to his long travels. He has a stern face at first, but at a second glance he looks friendly. He also has a small black beard that is well kept and not messy.
Personality: From his extensive teaching as a child, he is very well spoken and smart. He is confident and knows what he is doing most of the time. He is very ambitious and he loves to question common belief and find answers. He doesn’t take someone’s word for it and would rather find out for himself. Although he has learned many skills as a child he lacks perspective because he never got to see what other children were like and only sees things he way. He often lacks understanding of other people. He seems to be perfect because of his intelligence but his crucial lack of perspective is harder to spot.
Background Story: Tortes was born in a small town fishing town in the old world. He was born to the mayor of the town’s family. Being the son of the mayor much was expected of him. He needed to be skilled at fishing, swimming and sailing. Much of his childhood was spent learning the skills needed to master those skills due to his father’s high expectations of him. With all the work he did, he was never given the opportunity to have a real childhood. He couldn’t play games in the water with other children because he needed to be taught by the teachers his father had been hired. Nevertheless, this made him extremely skilled at swimming, fishing, and riding boats. When he grew to be 18, he left his village in pursuit of perfecting his skills. Throughout the following years of his life he was taught by many wise and great teachers. He was recognized among sailors and fishermen as a highly skilled individual but was not recognized outside of that field. He then started to use his knowledge of the seas to go on long expeditions. He vastly explored the old land. He survived many dangerous monsoons and hurricanes to get to exotic and ancient places. The knowledge he had discovered attracted the likes of scientists as well. In fact he was headed towards one of his science partners when the core ruptured. Since he was near portal he was one of the first to get through. In this new world, he was not scared. Actually he was excited to see what this world had to offer.
IGN: ultra0
Age: 13
Previous RP Experience: alot of other servs
Why do you wish to join?:so i may have a good time and be happy
What can you bring to the server?: i can bring a good time to everyone i come across, and good rp actions
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ICC-
Name: eragon
Age: 16
Gender: male
Appearance:dark red hair, loving eyes, the eyes of a father, 5'10 you may think at first, oh this man is probably poorer that i can imagine, but that is just because he lost the will to live, "i dear lord, my lord help me find my lover and child, please lord i am begging you!" he prays all night, every night
Personality: he has the eyes of a father, a father full of loss and anger, but just a hint of determination.he would look like a peasant, but his sword says otherwise, his bright red sword, xar'roc
Background Story: "first person" I was a member of the old kingdom, i miss them so, arya, my lover, and eden, our child, i still cherish our memory, as soon as we jumped in the portal, arya and eden dissapeared, i was nearly dead from starvation and dehydration when i decided i would live for them, and i cry every night. you think you've had it tough dont you, well i have to slap myself in the face to get up in the morning, my mom, my dad,sister,lover, AND CHILD ARE GONE! dont you EVER say you have it worse than me, or i'll show you worse, DEAD, no i take that back, i would rather be dead, but i cant for the sake of arya and eden, never die, never die, never-r-r d-d-i-eee
Hmm, you'll need to dramatically expand all of the ICC sections. Aim for paragraphs not phrases. Look at the other apps, see how detailed those are.
The server is great guys! Keep it up!
IGN: StarNomNom (Ridiculous, I know.)
Age: 13
Previous RP Experience: I have been in several RP threads, but I have never joined an RP server before.
Why do you wish to join?: The lore seems very interesting, and I've always wanted to join an RP server.
What can you bring to the server?: Some good Roleplaying experince, from already mentioned threads.
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ICC-
Name: Rai Lutona
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance: About 5 ft and 3 inches tall. A somewhat-tan skin color, with brown, bushy hair, covered by a dark blue cape. He wears a brown shirt, white gloves, reddish-brown pants, and black shoes. He is often thought to be a tween, due to his young appearance.
Personality: Shy, but smart, always thinking of every possibility. This, however, can often cause him to overthink some situations. He is also easily frightened, even by bats, which he hates most of all. Most of the time, if he is stood up by somemone who is, or seems, stronger then him, he will make no attempt to fight, making him a pushover, somewhat.
Background Story: Before being sucked to Iriliath, Rai was an apprentice for his father, who was a mage. Rai never understood the need for magic, as his true passion was to become an artist. However, since his mother was dead, and he didn't want to dissapoint his father, Rai continued to learn about magic. About a year later, Rai made little progress. He couldn't pronounce spells, he mixed up the wrong ingrediants for potions, and half of the time, he made up spells, hoping that one of them would work so his dad would be proud. A couple years later, his father had passed away, and he ran into the forest, ashamed of himself. As he sat on a stump watching, the birds fly by, he found an empty canvas, and some dyes, lying in the middle of the clearing. Rai painted a picture, dedicated to his father. But then...the unspeakable happened. The core of the planet tore itself out of the ground, and he watched as the forest set on fire. Before he could even run, the trees around him had fallen down, still burning. With no other choice, Rai hopped past the trees, rushing through the flames. Finally, he reached town, and he saw a portal that seemed to be the reason for this catastrophe. Before he could decide what to do, something pushed him from behind, sending him through the portal. When he reawoke, he thought he was dead, and in the sacred realm. He was then splashed in the face with sea water and sand, bringing him to his senses. As he got up, he saw the dense jungle ahead of him, his mouth, dropping in awe.
Anything that needs to be fixed can be fixed ASAP.
OOC-
IGN: StarNomNom (Ridiculous, I know.)
Age: 13
Previous RP Experience: I have been in several RP threads, but I have never joined an RP server before.
Why do you wish to join?: The lore seems very interesting, and I've always wanted to join an RP server.
What can you bring to the server?: Some good Roleplaying experince, from already mentioned threads.
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ICC-
Name: Rai Lutona
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance: About 5 ft and 3 inches tall. A somewhat-tan skin color, with brown, bushy hair, covered by a dark blue cape. He wears a brown shirt, white gloves, reddish-brown pants, and black shoes. He is often thought to be a tween, due to his young appearance.
Personality: Shy, but smart, always thinking of every possibility. This, however, can often cause him to overthink some situations. He is also easily frightened, even by bats, which he hates most of all. Most of the time, if he is stood up by somemone who is, or seems, stronger then him, he will make no attempt to fight, making him a pushover, somewhat.
Background Story: Before being sucked to Iriliath, Rai was an apprentice for his father, who was a mage. Rai never understood the need for magic, as his true passion was to become an artist. However, since his mother was dead, and he didn't want to dissapoint his father, Rai continued to learn about magic. About a year later, Rai made little progress. He couldn't pronounce spells, he mixed up the wrong ingrediants for potions, and half of the time, he made up spells, hoping that one of them would work so his dad would be proud. A couple years later, his father had passed away, and he ran into the forest, ashamed of himself. As he sat on a stump watching, the birds fly by, he found an empty canvas, and some dyes, lying in the middle of the clearing. Rai painted a picture, dedicated to his father. But then...the unspeakable happened. The core of the planet tore itself out of the ground, and he watched as the forest set on fire. Before he could even run, the trees around him had fallen down, still burning. With no other choice, Rai hopped past the trees, rushing through the flames. Finally, he reached town, and he saw a portal that seemed to be the reason for this catastrophe. Before he could decide what to do, something pushed him from behind, sending him through the portal. When he reawoke, he thought he was dead, and in the sacred realm. He was then splashed in the face with sea water and sand, bringing him to his senses. As he got up, he saw the dense jungle ahead of him, his mouth, dropping in awe.
Anything that needs to be fixed can be fixed ASAP.
OOC-
IGN: StarNomNom (Ridiculous, I know.)
Age: 13
Previous RP Experience: I have been in several RP threads, but I have never joined an RP server before.
Why do you wish to join?: The lore seems very interesting, and I've always wanted to join an RP server.
What can you bring to the server?: Some good Roleplaying experince, from already mentioned threads.
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ICC-
Name: Rai Lutona
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance: About 5 ft and 3 inches tall. A somewhat-tan skin color, with brown, bushy hair, covered by a dark blue cape. He wears a brown shirt, white gloves, reddish-brown pants, and black shoes. He is often thought to be a tween, due to his young appearance.
Personality: Shy, but smart, always thinking of every possibility. This, however, can often cause him to overthink some situations. He is also easily frightened, even by bats, which he hates most of all. Most of the time, if he is stood up by somemone who is, or seems, stronger then him, he will make no attempt to fight, making him a pushover, somewhat.
Background Story: Before being sucked to Iriliath, Rai was an apprentice for his father, who was a mage. Rai never understood the need for magic, as his true passion was to become an artist. However, since his mother was dead, and he didn't want to dissapoint his father, Rai continued to learn about magic. About a year later, Rai made little progress. He couldn't pronounce spells, he mixed up the wrong ingrediants for potions, and half of the time, he made up spells, hoping that one of them would work so his dad would be proud. A couple years later, his father had passed away, and he ran into the forest, ashamed of himself. As he sat on a stump watching, the birds fly by, he found an empty canvas, and some dyes, lying in the middle of the clearing. Rai painted a picture, dedicated to his father. But then...the unspeakable happened. The core of the planet tore itself out of the ground, and he watched as the forest set on fire. Before he could even run, the trees around him had fallen down, still burning. With no other choice, Rai hopped past the trees, rushing through the flames. Finally, he reached town, and he saw a portal that seemed to be the reason for this catastrophe. Before he could decide what to do, something pushed him from behind, sending him through the portal. When he reawoke, he thought he was dead, and in the sacred realm. He was then splashed in the face with sea water and sand, bringing him to his senses. As he got up, he saw the dense jungle ahead of him, his mouth, dropping in awe.
Anything that needs to be fixed can be fixed ASAP.
IGN:
Cocoax
Age:
I will be 13 in about a month.
Previous RP Experience:
MMORPGS. DDO, Rappelz, Age of Conan. And more.
Why do you wish to join?:
Im kinda bored on singleplayer.
What can you bring to the server?:
I can be a companion to other players. Not much else.
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ICC-
Name:
Evareyla Leyun
Age:
28
Gender:
Female
Appearance:
Elfish pointy ears. Blonde or brown and black hair, will vary. Green or blue clothes, will vary too. Green eyes. Vines grow over her body. She is kind of like a dryad.
Screenshots of skin:
1.
2. With clothing changed and hair dye gone, also has the vines.
Personality:
Kind, friendly, honest and sometimes a bit impatient.
(Decided to add this one myself)Skills:
Healing, Growing Plants, Caring for Children, Markswomanship. Hunting.
Background Story:
I grew up in a small town. Our (my family's) house burned down when I was
seven years old. We wandered about for several years until we settled
down in another town. When I was 22 I moved out of my parent's house. 3 months later I was falsely accused of stealing from a merchant in the
marketplace and was put in jail for one year.
I was finally
released and I became an adventurer serving whoever paid enough, slaying
dragons and monsters. I was quite experienced with the bow and trained
daily when I wasn't on a mission. After about twelve years I had slain
so many monsters I was nicknamed 'The Slayer'. My younger brother joined
me on a mission and we decided to pair up thereafter.
Not long
after we were asked by a nobleman to assassinate his brother. I refused
however my brother accepted and I knew we would no longer be a team. I
decided to visit my parents again after about 5 years without
seeing them. By now I was about 27 years old. I attended some events with my parents including Great hunt. While we were hunting I got a
bit separated from the group and heard voices coming from the direction
opposite of the group. As I drew nearer I caught snatches for a
conversation. "What if we get caught? We....." says one of the voices.
"I've thought it over. We are safe here." replies another voice.
"Yes we....." adds a third.
I draw nearer and see that two of them are Wanted criminals. I mark my
way as I rush back to the group and tell them of what I have seen. "Come
quickly!" I gasp, so out of breath I can hardly speak. "Criminals,
wanted, come!" four of us return to the spot. The criminals were still
there. When we emerged from the brush the men jumped up in alarm and the
first voice I heard says, "What did I say?" We all jump forwards and
grab the thief’s hands. They struggle but we tie their hands behind
their backs.
While escorting them to the law an arrow whizzes by
my head. "Watch out! We are being attacked!" I say, "Go on without me, I
will deal with our attackers." I stealthily detach from the group so
that wherever the attackers may be they should be unable to see me.
Another arrow flew between the group. It came from the left. I climb a
tree as quietly as humanly possible. I Spot a man on a branch in a tree
about twenty meters away. I draw my bow and just as I shoot he jumps out
of the tree.
"Bad luck." I mutter under my breath. I jump down
and creep after him. He shoots again this time grazing the leader of the
group's leg "Close." I say to my-self, "Luckily he's not a good shot
with a bow." When I got closer I aimed, fired and..... Missed..... "Oh
no, now he knows where I am." I whisper. He stops and turns, but just
before he does I dive behind a tree. I waited until he drew nearer with
my bow drawn. I heard his footsteps and jumped out from behind the tree
and shot at his right arm so as to stop him from being able to shoot at
me. "It's a hit!" I shouted with joy. I tied his hands and rushed with
him to join the group.
When we returned to the town and turned in the criminal we were poorly rewarded. That was my greatest hunt yet. After that aurelia started being destroyed and me and my family fled through the portal.
If I helped then please
Well usually you want to let someone know you are about to attack them. Or at least I'm pretty sure.
Like when I'm about to attack I go: " Violently swings at [name] attempting to cut his chest."
I'm not sure if that's how IT'S supposed to go.
I said elfish ears, I never said she is an elf. And my personality is like that towards friends not foes.
+ instead of doing alot about the appearance i did a screenshot so you can picture her....
If I helped then please
IGN:
Cocoax
Age:
I will be 13 in about a month.
Previous RP Experience:
MMORPGS. DDO, Rappelz, Age of Conan. And more.
Why do you wish to join?:
Im kinda bored on singleplayer.
What can you bring to the server?:
I can be a companion to other players. Not much else.
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ICC-
Name:
Evareyla Leyun
Age:
28
Gender:
Female
Appearance:
Elfish pointy ears. Dyed hair that is naturally blonde. Blonde or brown and black hair, will vary. Green or blue clothes, will vary too. Green eyes. Vines grow over her body. She is kind of like a dryad. She is a smallish woman. Long hair.(Very long!!!)
Screenshots of skin:
1.
2. With clothing changed and hair dye gone, also has the vines.
Personality:
Kind, friendly, honest and sometimes a bit impatient. Always ready to deal justice to her foes.
(Decided to add this one myself)Skills:
Healing, Growing Plants, Caring for Children, Markswomanship. Hunting. Fighting.
Background Story:
I grew up in a small town. Our (my family's) house burned down when I was
seven years old. We wandered about for several years until we settled
down in another town. When I was 22 I moved out of my parent's house. 3 months later I was falsely accused of stealing from a merchant in the
marketplace and was put in jail for one year.
I was finally
released and I became an adventurer serving whoever paid enough, slaying
dragons and monsters. I was quite experienced with the bow and trained
daily when I wasn't on a mission. After about twelve years I had slain
so many monsters I was nicknamed 'The Slayer'. My younger brother joined
me on a mission and we decided to pair up thereafter.
Not long
after we were asked by a nobleman to assassinate his brother. I refused
however my brother accepted and I knew we would no longer be a team. I
decided to visit my parents again after about 5 years without
seeing them. By now I was about 27 years old. I attended some events with my parents including Great hunt. While we were hunting I got a
bit separated from the group and heard voices coming from the direction
opposite of the group. As I drew nearer I caught snatches for a
conversation. "What if we get caught? We....." says one of the voices.
"I've thought it over. We are safe here." replies another voice.
"Yes we....." adds a third.
I draw nearer and see that two of them are Wanted criminals. I mark my
way as I rush back to the group and tell them of what I have seen. "Come
quickly!" I gasp, so out of breath I can hardly speak. "Criminals,
wanted, come!" four of us return to the spot. The criminals were still
there. When we emerged from the brush the men jumped up in alarm and the
first voice I heard says, "What did I say?" We all jump forwards and
grab the thief’s hands. They struggle but we tie their hands behind
their backs.
While escorting them to the law an arrow whizzes by
my head. "Watch out! We are being attacked!" I say, "Go on without me, I
will deal with our attackers." I stealthily detach from the group so
that wherever the attackers may be they should be unable to see me.
Another arrow flew between the group. It came from the left. I climb a
tree as quietly as humanly possible. I Spot a man on a branch in a tree
about twenty meters away. I draw my bow and just as I shoot he jumps out
of the tree.
"Bad luck." I mutter under my breath. I jump down
and creep after him. He shoots again this time grazing the leader of the
group's leg "Close." I say to my-self, "Luckily he's not a good shot
with a bow." When I got closer I aimed, fired and..... Missed..... "Oh
no, now he knows where I am." I whisper. He stops and turns, but just
before he does I dive behind a tree. I waited until he drew nearer with
my bow drawn. I heard his footsteps and jumped out from behind the tree
and shot at his right arm so as to stop him from being able to shoot at
me. "It's a hit!" I shouted with joy. I tied his hands and rushed with
him to join the group.
When we returned to the town and turned in the criminal we were poorly rewarded. That was my greatest hunt yet. After that aurelia started being destroyed and me and my family fled through the portal.
If I helped then please
If I helped then please
And the personality is just a few basic things. What more should there be? Must i make it more like a short story?
Last thing. If i change personality to fit the background would it be fine then? Coz my backround is more my personality than the actual section for it. I will add some open response questions to add to the background and personality too ok?
If I helped then please