Why You're Interested In The Server I am interested in the server because it looks like a fairly good RP Server and I am ready to get back on the RP Train.
Do you know how to roleplay (Say so if you don't!) Yes, I do know how to roleplay but some people might say otherwise.
If yes, how long have you been roleplaying (And, optional, on what games)I have been roleplaying since June 2012, I roleplayed on such games of gMod and Minecraft, and some other games I cannot remember but they do exist. Probably flash games.
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Character Name Creegan
Character Age 27
Character Personality A friendly young man who admires the art of hunting.
Character Physical Description (Preferably your minecraft skin, describe if needed)
Character Backstory(The more detailed the better, but I'll ask for quality over quantity. Make it interesting first, long afterwards. 2-3 paragraphs of decent length will do fine.)
(Sorry if I dun goof'd again with this, I'll try my best not to)
There once lived a boy named Creegan, he loved all that was good and was good himself. He was born into a small farming family. He had no brothers nor sisters and no cousins he knew of. Most of the time when he wasn't helping his parents with the crops or the farm animals, he was really bored. His father tried to help with that by giving him a job to do every Sunday. He was to go out with his bow and try to catch something small. Now, Creegan was only 10 at the time and couldn't really catch anything but it kept him entertained for a few hours. Every week Creegan got closer and closer to getting something with his bow. He asked his Dad that if he caught something, if his dad would buy him a better bow. His dad jokingly agreed not thinking he'd have to buy him a bow for a while, but to his surprise, the next sunday, Creegan came back with a rabbit. Creegan's dad said he'd buy him a bow that Wednesday.
That Wednesday Creegan jumped out of his bed at 730 AM and, woke his Dad up excitedly and they got ready to go to town to buy a bow. It was a long walk from Creegan's farm to the town but, Creegan didn't mind. When they finally arrived Creegan rushed over to the trader's posts and looked around for a bow. They usually had one or two. Creegan spent a good 20 minutes looking until he finally found it, a perfect bow. He yelled for his Dad to come buy this one. When he pointed out the bow he wanted to buy his dad asked him Are you sure you can handle that Its almost the same size as you. It was true but, Creegan wanted it nonetheless. His dad asked the trader manning this post How much is it for the bow Normally 40 The Trader said, But for you, 35. Creegan's Dad bought the bow remarking that they won't be eating the particularly best meals for the rest of the week. Creegan asked if he could get some new arrows but a somewhat angry look from his father stopped him. They walked home to the farm each with very different moods. Creegan was playing with his bow pretending to shoot an arrow out of it. When they got home they saw that one of their chickens had been slaughtered by what seemed to be a coyote. Creegan's dad rushed over trying to salvage what he could of the dead chicken. Creegan went to help but was told to go home and continue with his work. Creegan did as he was told and- since he had no work decided to go to sleep since it was pretty late that night.
Creegan woke up in the middle of the night because of a noise he heard. He tried to go back to sleep but the noise happened again. Creegan went out to investigate. He grabbed his bow and quiver just in case he told himself but the real reason was he wanted to use it. He got out of his bed and knocked and arrow as he heard the noise again. He now realized that the noise was coming from the farm, he opened the door and ran out there. He saw 2 coyotes about to enter the chicken pen. He charged his knocked arrow and let go of the string when the bow was directed at the first coyote, the second when noticed what happened before the arrow hit him. He charged at Creegan and Creegan struggled to knock another arrow. He had it knocked it then tried to charge it. He pulled back the string and let go, hitting the coyote right between the eyes. Creegan went to the second coyote to retrieve the arrow when the first one, still not dead came at him Creegan could not charge the arrow fast enough, the coyote lunged at him. Creegan's small child hood flashed between his eyes. He knew there was no way out of the coyote's attack. Then Creegan died. The End. (not really ) Creegan's dad then stepped out of the shadows then attacked the coyote furiously. The coyote yelped in pain and fell back dead. Creegan's dad also fell back, but not dead. Creegan then helped his dad back to the home, closing the chicken pen on the way there. Creegan sat down after sitting his father down in his bed and slept thinking of what had happened. He had dreams of what he could accomplish with his new found power of the bow.
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17 Years later and Creegan is still doing the same thing, caring for his father and hunting wildlife and farming.
Nothing major had happened, until one day a messenger came to Creegan's farm and told him he had to go to Delenor ASAP. Creegan left his friend to care for his father and left to the lands of Delenor...
(Sorry if I screwed up on the application, I have been studying the app for days, trying to not get denied)
Why You're Interested In The Server: My friend recommended it and it looks very interesting
Do you know how to role play? (Say so if you don't!): I do I have a little experience
If yes, how long have you been role playing? (And, optional, on what games?): I have role played on Minecraft only
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Character Name: Leo
Character Age: 18
Character Personality:Shy and enjoys archery
Character Physical Description (Preferably your Minecraft skin, describe if needed):
Character Back story The more detailed the better, but I'll ask for quality over quantity. Make it interesting first, long afterwards. 2-3 paragraphs of decent length will do fine.): Leo was a boy who was born to a small family in a valley his father was a tailor for a living he did his job very well and didn't make mistakes but Leo didn't want to be a tailor he loved archery and he told his father. His father told him that it wouldn't be right. He told him to stick to the family business this made Leo angry he ran away to learn archery and become better he promised not to give up so now Leo was learning to become a better archer than ever before. Leo trained in the woods by himself.
He started off shooting Rabbits and voles with his bow he made from wood. Then he shot deer and foxes. Then Leo wanted to get a challenge so Leo shot a bear it wasn't easy the bear didn't go down with one shot it tried to fight Leo, Leo then ran out of arrows he unsheathed his knife to fight the bear head on he charged and slashed at the bear til it went down Leo was panting by time he defeated the bear he then passed out. Leo started walking back to his cove to rest and Leo would do what he did each day to get stronger he would shoot animals and use targets on trees til he became a amazing archer. Leo wanted to get better but how? Then he found out! He would join one of the factions called "The Council" aka The Royals he found out about this faction "The Council" from the people of his village in the valley he lived in. Now he was off!
Why You're Interested In The Server: My friend recommended it and it looks very interesting
Do you know how to role play? (Say so if you don't!): I do I have a little experience
If yes, how long have you been role playing? (And, optional, on what games?): I have role played on Minecraft only
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Character Name: Leo
Character Age: 18
Character Personality:Shy and enjoys archery
Character Physical Description (Preferably your Minecraft skin, describe if needed):
Character Back story The more detailed the better, but I'll ask for quality over quantity. Make it interesting first, long afterwards. 2-3 paragraphs of decent length will do fine.): Leo was a boy who was born to a small family in a valley his father was a tailor for a living he did his job very well and didn't make mistakes but Leo didn't want to be a tailor he loved archery and he told his father. His father told him that it wouldn't be right. He told him to stick to the family business this made Leo angry he ran away to learn archery and become better he promised not to give up so now Leo was learning to become a better archer than ever before. Leo trained in the woods by himself.
He started off shooting Rabbits and voles with his bow he made from wood. Then he shot deer and foxes. Then Leo wanted to get a challenge so Leo shot a bear it wasn't easy the bear didn't go down with one shot it tried to fight Leo, Leo then ran out of arrows he unsheathed his knife to fight the bear head on he charged and slashed at the bear til it went down Leo was panting by time he defeated the bear he then passed out. Leo started walking back to his cove to rest and Leo would do what he did each day to get stronger he would shoot animals and use targets on trees til he became a amazing archer. Leo wanted to get better but how? Then he found out! He would join one of the factions called "The Council" aka The Royals he found out about this faction "The Council" from the people of his village in the valley he lived in. Now he was off!
While I'm not the one to do final decisions, I'll give you a little criticism.
1. Grammar. You have capitalization down right, your just missing commas and such. Read that. If I tried to read the first sentence out loud I'd die from oxygen deprivation.
2. Backstory could stand to be improved.. It really tells us nothing about him other than he likes archery. And what about his dad? I mean you mentioned him like once. Elaborate on these things. It's also boring as hell, I had to force myself to read it.
3. I think you mistook the question "How long have you been RolePlaying", as you answered with "Minecraft only", we want a approximate time.
Why You're Interested In The Server:I have been looking for a good role play server and I read all of the lore and think this is a really good server.I have been looking for something like this for a while.
Do you know how to roleplay?:Yes I do know how to roleplay.
If yes, how long have you been roleplaying?:I have been roleplaying for about a year now and I love it.
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Character Name:Core Macentire
Character Age:26
Character Personality:Core is shy but friendly when he gets to know people.He is also hard working and honest.He is friendly but not super sociable.
Character Physical Description:My skin is a woodelf wearing a greenish-blue kind of robe that covers most of his body.
Character Backstory:Core grew up on a distant island where he lived in a magnificent town.He didn't have many friends but he was friendly to everyone.One day his mother got sick and died a few days later.His father owned a small shop in town so Core had to run the store while his dad went out to get supplies.After 3 years of helping his father run the shop, Core decided to travel to the great Kingdom of Delenor to open up a shop in the capital city.It took him 2 weeks to get to the city.When he got there he was welcomed by the townsfolk.He had a decent shop and made a decent amount of money.Then after living in the city for about 8 months he got word that his father grew ill.So Core had to close up his shop and return home to see his father.His father died 3 weeks later so Core had to take over the store.Core decided to stay and leave behind his shop in the capital.Now, 4 years have passed and Core thinks it's time to close down the shop and go back to the capital to open his shop back up.
anthonyJ1999, your backstory was well-written but not very interesting (Although I guess that's because it's just based on a merchants life, which is fine,) and your application was well done. Accepted! (Although, be warned, there's not many people on.)
Why You're Interested In The Server:Because i love role playing and i have a friend in the server
Do you know how to roleplay? (Say so if you don't!):Yea i know how to
If yes, how long have you been roleplaying? (And, optional, on what games?):a year, only on minecraft
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Character Name:Duncan McClain
Character Age:25
Character Personality:Out going, fearless
Character Physical Description (Preferably your minecraft skin, describe if needed):
Character Backstory(The more detailed the better, but I'll ask for quality over quantity. Make it interesting first, long afterwards. 2-3 paragraphs of decent length will do fine.): Duncan was a famous/rich kid his dad was a king and his mom was the queen. So as his childhood he wanted to be a shopkeeper, because he wanted to sell the things he found in the mine because he didnt want to depend on his parents when he was older. He also didnt want to take over the kingdom because when he wanted to do something he put his mind to it so, he wanted to be a shop keeper and that wasn't going to change.
When he was older his other family members took over the kingdom, when he was younger he wanted to be a shop keeper so at the age of 19 he open he very own store, the first couple months he was doing bad then his family posted some posters at the town/kingdom and in a week he made a good buck, then from then on he has been successful.
Sigh, things are going pretty slowly :l. Can't do much roleplaying until we have enough people on..
killzone232, your application has bad grammar (also, who writes the words 'so like...' in TEXT?) and he's severely undeveloped. Deferred. The app seems a bit..childish.
Why You're Interested In The Server I am interested in the server because it looks like a fairly good RP Server and I am ready to get back on the RP Train.
Do you know how to roleplay (Say so if you don't!) Yes, I do know how to roleplay but some people might say otherwise.
If yes, how long have you been roleplaying (And, optional, on what games)I have been roleplaying since June 2012, I roleplayed on such games of gMod and Minecraft, and some other games I cannot remember but they do exist. Probably flash games.
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Character Name Creegan
Character Age 27
Character Personality A friendly young man who admires the art of hunting.
Character Physical Description (Preferably your minecraft skin, describe if needed)
Character Backstory(The more detailed the better, but I'll ask for quality over quantity. Make it interesting first, long afterwards. 2-3 paragraphs of decent length will do fine.)
(Sorry if I dun goof'd again with this, I'll try my best not to)
There once lived a boy named Creegan, he loved all that was good and was good himself. He was born into a small farming family. He had no brothers nor sisters and no cousins he knew of. Most of the time when he wasn't helping his parents with the crops or the farm animals, he was really bored. His father tried to help with that by giving him a job to do every Sunday. He was to go out with his bow and try to catch something small. Now, Creegan was only 10 at the time and couldn't really catch anything but it kept him entertained for a few hours. Every week Creegan got closer and closer to getting something with his bow. He asked his Dad that if he caught something, if his dad would buy him a better bow. His dad jokingly agreed not thinking he'd have to buy him a bow for a while, but to his surprise, the next sunday, Creegan came back with a rabbit. Creegan's dad said he'd buy him a bow that Wednesday.
That Wednesday Creegan jumped out of his bed at 730 AM and, woke his Dad up excitedly and they got ready to go to town to buy a bow. It was a long walk from Creegan's farm to the town but, Creegan didn't mind. When they finally arrived Creegan rushed over to the trader's posts and looked around for a bow. They usually had one or two. Creegan spent a good 20 minutes looking until he finally found it, a perfect bow. He yelled for his Dad to come buy this one. When he pointed out the bow he wanted to buy his dad asked him Are you sure you can handle that Its almost the same size as you. It was true but, Creegan wanted it nonetheless. His dad asked the trader manning this post How much is it for the bow Normally 40 The Trader said, But for you, 35. Creegan's Dad bought the bow remarking that they won't be eating the particularly best meals for the rest of the week. Creegan asked if he could get some new arrows but a somewhat angry look from his father stopped him. They walked home to the farm each with very different moods. Creegan was playing with his bow pretending to shoot an arrow out of it. When they got home they saw that one of their chickens had been slaughtered by what seemed to be a coyote. Creegan's dad rushed over trying to salvage what he could of the dead chicken. Creegan went to help but was told to go home and continue with his work. Creegan did as he was told and- since he had no work decided to go to sleep since it was pretty late that night.
Creegan woke up in the middle of the night because of a noise he heard. He tried to go back to sleep but the noise happened again. Creegan went out to investigate. He grabbed his bow and quiver just in case he told himself but the real reason was he wanted to use it. He got out of his bed and knocked and arrow as he heard the noise again. He now realized that the noise was coming from the farm, he opened the door and ran out there. He saw 2 coyotes about to enter the chicken pen. He charged his knocked arrow and let go of the string when the bow was directed at the first coyote, the second when noticed what happened before the arrow hit him. He charged at Creegan and Creegan struggled to knock another arrow. He had it knocked it then tried to charge it. He pulled back the string and let go, hitting the coyote right between the eyes. Creegan went to the second coyote to retrieve the arrow when the first one, still not dead came at him Creegan could not charge the arrow fast enough, the coyote lunged at him. Creegan's small child hood flashed between his eyes. He knew there was no way out of the coyote's attack. Then Creegan died. The End. (not really ) Creegan's dad then stepped out of the shadows then attacked the coyote furiously. The coyote yelped in pain and fell back dead. Creegan's dad also fell back, but not dead. Creegan then helped his dad back to the home, closing the chicken pen on the way there. Creegan sat down after sitting his father down in his bed and slept thinking of what had happened. He had dreams of what he could accomplish with his new found power of the bow.
(Sorry if I screwed up on the application, I have been studying the app for days, trying to not get denied)
JimJimJimBob, added to the whitelist. (assuming that's your IGN, you didn't put yours in the app.)
While I'm not the one to do final decisions, I'll give you a little criticism.
1. Grammar. You have capitalization down right, your just missing commas and such. Read that. If I tried to read the first sentence out loud I'd die from oxygen deprivation.
2. Backstory could stand to be improved.. It really tells us nothing about him other than he likes archery. And what about his dad? I mean you mentioned him like once. Elaborate on these things. It's also boring as hell, I had to force myself to read it.
3. I think you mistook the question "How long have you been RolePlaying", as you answered with "Minecraft only", we want a approximate time.
Fix all that and you got my vote.
epicelmolord, I don't know how old you are, but this application is terrible in every way possible, I can't even give any constructive criticism.
EDIT: Server's up for another day, time for round two. Let's see how many people actually bother to get on this time, eh?