Note: Anyone accepted in the round of apps I'm about to do may have to wait a bit, as the server is down. And I have no clue why, and no means to contact Gamer9726. It may be a few hours before he gets on to rectify the problem.
I apologize that our server is currently down, but you will be added to the whitelist once it's back up.
Rejected minecraftfreak61: Your latter two definitions are incorrect. Your bio is less than 250 words. Your bio does not show a very high degree of literary ability. Consider improving the quality.
JamilHalo117: Your third answer is the same as your second. Said answer is incorrect for both questions you put it as. That is an inappropriate character name. Your bio is less than 250 words. You have spelling mistakes all over the place. You may not have a fearless character. You may not reapply.
iMuteYou: Your powergaming definition is incorrect and your bio is less than 250 words. We would prefer a weakness besides "Poor". Creepers aren't snakes in our world..
Minecraft_kid99: Bio is less than 250 words. "World domination" may be a biiiit of a stretch-goal. Perhaps replace it for the goal behind your wish for world-domination? Something like "Have all the other races realize the power of the Orc"?
DaCapital: Powergaming definition is incorrect, and the other two are very poorly worded. You have grammar problems all over the place. If you get accepted, it will be imperative that you improve your grammar as it would be difficult to RP with you otherwise.
Feel free to make revisions and reapply, except for JamilHalo117.
zePato determined that even if you revised your application, you are not suitable for our server. We sincerely hope that you can find another server to play on.
Define Roleplay: Roleplay is like you actually are that character and the other characters are real people to so you wont walk into a bar and kill everyone because you should rp before a kill (not sure if thats needed on this server) so you act like your character would so if your a good guy you dont kill everyone and take slaves and if your a bad guy you dont walk around giving children cookies.
What is Meta-gaming?: Meta gaming is using osmething your character doesnt know to your advantage like if someone said *whispers to bob lets trap him you wouldnt kill them for it because your character wouldnt know it
What is Power-gaming?: Power gaming is doing something and not allowing the person to react like tying someone up whenever there perfectly fine you would have to knock them out first or get them to let you.
Who can use flymod?: Nobody, hacks arent allowed
IC Information
Character Name: Kran'Osh Dra'Kash
Character Race: Orc
Character Class: Warrior
Character Role (out of the set roles): Fighter (I fight for my gang to fight the law.)
Character Biography (should be at least 250 words): Kran'Osh came from a family of law breakers they had there own gang an his father was the fighting elder and his mother the elder of knowledge the gang was actually very organized and had its own hidden village, in which his best friend Dok'Ush also lived and they would have fighting tournament and in just the friendly ones there would be broken bones but it was all just fun and games. However several times the guards unfortunately found there village, and they had to kill the guards and move on. Kran'Osh worked hard to become the slaver elder as he could make there tribe catch more slaves which he wanted. When he finally got the position he lived happily as the same position as his parents for a while but then the guards came in mass numbers everyone died he even had to watch his friend Dok'Ush kill 20 soldiers before he died which made him feel better but he still felt bad because him and the other elders were all granted the permission to leave but he couldn't bring his friend with him however though he still wouldn't of been able to stay with Dok'Ush because all the elders had to split up so the guards wouldn't identify them. These days Kran'Osh is trying to form a new gang, in memory of his old one he once got a small one going but it was wiped out by just a small patrol of guards when he was off catching slaves. He has decided today he's going to recruit the elders to form his gang however the elders will be strong as to defend the gang if hes gone so they wont all be wiped out... Ever again. So today he heads off looking for a city however this gang wont just be destroying towns it will also try to take over the orc throne for 2 reasons one is that his gang won't be wiped out by guards and second he will make it run by the elder system which he thinks will be better then having a single ruler make all the decisions. When he becomes king he will show everyone the true power of the orcs, he will prove they are the strongest race all around by waging war on the elves and enslaving them all and killing the ones who resist...
What are your character's ambitions: Showing people the true power of the orcs, finding out the secrets of the world
What are your character's strengths?: His technique and strength.
What are your character's weaknesses?: Agility and using a bow
What are your character's fears?: Of becoming a slave to another group of people.
A guard walks up to you and tells you that you have been convicted of treason. What is your reaction?: To get the troop he would of been traveling with to kidnap the guard to be the newest slave of his gang.
(Is there an orc king? and if there is could he declare war on other species and wipe them out/ make them slaves and appoint other orcs to rule over there countries?)
(Is there an orc king? and if there is could he declare war on other species and wipe them out/ make them slaves and appoint other orcs to rule over there countries?)
There is indeed an Orc King (Leader, at least. I don't know if he calls himself King) and the Orcs have been actively raiding the other lands.
Their, not there.
I'll handle your revised app once there's a couple more, or once the server comes up, whichever is sooner.
Define Roleplay: To portray a story and it's characters as one plays, It usually has more than one person participating
What is Meta-gaming?: Using information from OOC against players in game
What is Power-gaming?: Basically to make your character unfair to others by adding unrealistic attributes
Who can use flymod?: no one
IC Information
Character Name: Jack Redwood
Character Race: Elf
Character Class:Archer
Character Role (out of the set roles):Writer
Character Biography (should be at least 250 words): Jack was born into a discrete Elven family who kept to themselves when it came to other races. They were rich and Jack grew up in a large house filled with antiques and brilliant paintings. But Jack was a curious little boy and was always finding ways to learn about other Races and Nirania but for the most part had no access to the place. He was taught in an academy how to shoot a bow and that was to be his duty to be an archer in the Elven army as his father was. Jack agreed to this because he was particularly fond of shooting a bow but he'd never and still hasn't shot anyone with a bow. Just a bunch of sacks of sand and training dummies.
He's fascinated by the magician art but has yet to acquire a teacher. His skill lies in his bow. Most of his peers took up archery as well so together they trained and became archers like many of their ancestors. Jack joined the army as many of his elven friends did and he was good too. He excelled in nearly each training exercise but he knew deep down he wanted to explore through the army into new lands and inevitably defend Tunayy. He also meant to find a love interest. He's always had a brilliant ability and love to build. If it be models of Elven soldiers and Brute Orcs in his father's workshop or constructing rafts and soon he plans on building his own home in Nirania. Jack may not be a lot of things but hes not short of his will to pursue the right.
What are your character's ambitions: Jack hopes to find a beautiful wife, have a lovely child and build a nice house.
What are your character's strengths?:His ability with a bow along side his intelligence and interest in things
What are your character's weaknesses?: He's not the best hand to hand combatant and he's easily tricked
What are your character's fears?:Spiders, Losing his relatives and Dying in a painful way
A guard walks up to you and tells you that you have been convicted of treason. What is your reaction? He'd probably defend himself for the rest of his natural life because he'd know he's innocent. Treason isn't something that Jack would ever do.
Define Roleplay: Acting like a particular person, or a made-up character.
What is Meta-gaming?: Using information or resources to affect in-game actions/playing
What is Power-gaming?: Power-gaming is where you demand the role-play onto another character/player.
Who can use flymod?: Nobody
IC Information
Character Name: Ardir
Character Race: Elf
Character Class: Warrior
Character Role (out of the set roles): Soldier
Character Biography (should be at least 250 words):
Ardir grew up on an island South of Araethon, being a part of the isolated Elven race.
He grew up there since birth, but not remembering anything about his family. At a young age, when he was left by his family, he starting playing minor pranks on the people and the guards that lived there. He was quite unsociable so he didn't have many friends. Although he would play these small jokes, he always looked up to those around him, especially the guards. It's been his dream to serve for the Elven race. At the age of 17, he starting becoming more sociable, making some friends. At the age of 18, he decided to start practicing his fighting skills. It took him a while, but he's finally done it; he has memorized every battle tactic there is.
Ardir loves to run and he's been doing it ever since he played jokes on the people. At the age of 20 he was faster and stronger. He decided to start climbing, and maintain his ability for his swiftness by jumping from tree to tree, and from tree to a pool of water. Also occasionally wanting to jump from rooftop to rooftop. After all this, he was able to recognize how far of a jump he could make, and if a tree was too far.
With all of his friends at his side helping and encouraging him, he was able to fulfill his dream of becoming a guard at the age of 23, but now he has a new goal. To become a well know guard
for his swordsmanship skills. Another choice for him right now, is if he should have a family or not.
What are your character's ambitions?: To become well-known, preferably for fighting.
What are your character's strengths?: Fighting skills/tactics, parkour/climbing, and running.
What are your character's weaknesses?: Hiding, lying, bows, and building.
What are your character's fears?: Lava, fire, and dark rooms.
A guard walks up to you and tells you that you have been convicted of treason. What is your reaction?: Allow him to take me to jail, then either wait for my release, or attempt to break out.
As I said to the last batch of accepteds, the server is currently down, but should be fixed soon. You ought to be added to the whitelist within the day.
Rejected
Crabnuts: Your latter two definitions need a bit more explanation. Your bio is less than 250 words. You cannot start-out knowing how to read/write - you need to learn in-RP.
This is my 3rd revision due to incomplete biographys, this bio is 298 words long so it meets the requirments OOC Information
Username: king105
Age: 17
Country/Time Zone: USA
Define Roleplay: Controlling the attitude and actions of another.
What is Meta-gaming?: Using information gathered out side of the roleplay inside it.
What is Power-gaming?: Creating a roleplay character above agreed abilities
Who can use flymod?: Nobody
IC Information
Character Name: Crane Gro' Heran
Character Race: Orc
Character Class: Warrior
Character Role (out of the set roles): Mercenary, Body guard
Character Biography (should be at least 250 words): The mind of any race is forced to assume a green skinned beast is a threat to any organsim upon the plaines of Araethon, and that sort of assuming is what caused Crane to become what the races excpected of him even his own family wished him to be feared among all. This was difficult for Crane due to his dreams of being the first peaceful orc but now he stands alone spilling blood across Araethon for just some change in his pocket. His father cheered him on during his murders and so did his mother, other orcs that connected to Crane's family was even jealous of his power. Its a great change from wishing to become a peace caring beast to a flesh ripping demon, and that is what he was titled a "demon". That of course dident stop Crane from proving worth to his fathers expectations. Soon enough he was called "War forged" meaning the only cause for his birth was to kill, but that statement drove Crane wild. He declined the fate of a murderer and seeked peace and silence away from the harming of others, and the disapearence of Crane made his father furious causing him to kill his own wife and soon when the news spread Crane returned for one last kill, one last strike against a soul and that unfortunate life was his own fathers. After that last visit back to his past he returned to his new future, living his life away from most harm and from most pain. Crane Gro' Heran became what he always wanted, a peace loving orc. And beyond the coast of Areathon the races of all forgot the existence of Crane Gro' Heran, he was invisible from others even when he spent visits back to civilization.
What are your character's ambitions: To become hidden and to escape his fate.
What are your character's strengths?: Combat and persuasion.
What are your character's weaknesses?: Fighting against quick enemies and entering tight rooms.
What are your character's fears?: Meeting his own family, murdering the innocent.
A guard walks up to you and tells you that you have been convicted of treason. What is your reaction?: Crane would accept the guards accusations and let him take him away.
Oh and my gang only does illegal acts towards other races and orcs that arent orcy xD like an orc that acts like an elf even our elder of knowledge is vicious in the gang im making
Define Roleplay: To portray a story and it's characters as one plays, It usually has more than one person participating
What is Meta-gaming?:
Meta-gaming is where you take information from outside of the game and use it in game without experiencing it.
What is Power-gaming?: Forcing roleplay onto someone without giving them a chance to participate in the role play like 'arrow in the back! You're dead'
Who can use flymod?: no one
IC Information
Character Name: Jack Redwood
Character Race: Elf
Character Class:Archer
Character Role (out of the set roles):Writer
Character Biography (should be at least 250 words): Jack was born into a discrete Elven family who kept to themselves when it came to other races. They were rich and Jack grew up in a large house filled with antiques and brilliant paintings. But Jack was a curious little boy and was always finding ways to learn about other Races and Nirania but for the most part had no access to the place. He was taught in an academy how to shoot a bow and that was to be his duty to be an archer in the Elven army as his father was. Jack agreed to this because he was particularly fond of shooting a bow but he'd never and still hasn't shot anyone with a bow. Just a bunch of sacks of sand and training dummies.
He's fascinated by the magician art but has yet to acquire a teacher. His skill lies in his bow. Most of his peers took up archery as well so together they trained and became archers like many of their ancestors. Jack joined the army as many of his elven friends did and he was good too. He excelled in nearly each training exercise but he knew deep down he wanted to explore through the army into new lands and inevitably defend Tunayy. He also meant to find a love interest. He's always had a brilliant ability and love to build. If it be models of Elven soldiers and Brute Orcs in his father's workshop or constructing rafts and soon he plans on building his own home in Nirania. Jack may not be a lot of things but hes not short of his will to pursue the right.
What are your character's ambitions: Jack hopes to find a beautiful wife, have a lovely child and build a nice house.
What are your character's strengths?:His ability with a bow along side his intelligence and interest in things
What are your character's weaknesses?: He's not the best hand to hand combatant and he's easily tricked
What are your character's fears?:Spiders, Losing his relatives and Dying in a painful way
A guard walks up to you and tells you that you have been convicted of treason. What is your reaction? He'd probably defend himself for the rest of his natural life because he'd know he's innocent. Treason isn't something that Jack would ever do.
Could the orc warlord change the way the government is run if he wanted like for example the orcs are run by a series of elders and each handles a different job?And if you kill someone do they need to make a new character?
Hey! I handled a whole bundle last night! I'll deal with this latest round of apps within the hour.
How could you FORGET about me? D:
brilliantdork: Welcome to the server!
Toby974: Impressive app!
I apologize that our server is currently down, but you will be added to the whitelist once it's back up.
Rejected
minecraftfreak61: Your latter two definitions are incorrect. Your bio is less than 250 words. Your bio does not show a very high degree of literary ability. Consider improving the quality.
JamilHalo117: Your third answer is the same as your second. Said answer is incorrect for both questions you put it as. That is an inappropriate character name. Your bio is less than 250 words. You have spelling mistakes all over the place. You may not have a fearless character. You may not reapply.
iMuteYou: Your powergaming definition is incorrect and your bio is less than 250 words. We would prefer a weakness besides "Poor". Creepers aren't snakes in our world..
Minecraft_kid99: Bio is less than 250 words. "World domination" may be a biiiit of a stretch-goal. Perhaps replace it for the goal behind your wish for world-domination? Something like "Have all the other races realize the power of the Orc"?
DaCapital: Powergaming definition is incorrect, and the other two are very poorly worded. You have grammar problems all over the place. If you get accepted, it will be imperative that you improve your grammar as it would be difficult to RP with you otherwise.
Feel free to make revisions and reapply, except for JamilHalo117.
Please repost your revised app.
zePato determined that even if you revised your application, you are not suitable for our server. We sincerely hope that you can find another server to play on.
Username: Minecraft_kid99
Age: 15
Country/Time Zone: Canada, atlantic time
Define Roleplay: Roleplay is like you actually are that character and the other characters are real people to so you wont walk into a bar and kill everyone because you should rp before a kill (not sure if thats needed on this server) so you act like your character would so if your a good guy you dont kill everyone and take slaves and if your a bad guy you dont walk around giving children cookies.
What is Meta-gaming?: Meta gaming is using osmething your character doesnt know to your advantage like if someone said *whispers to bob lets trap him you wouldnt kill them for it because your character wouldnt know it
What is Power-gaming?: Power gaming is doing something and not allowing the person to react like tying someone up whenever there perfectly fine you would have to knock them out first or get them to let you.
Who can use flymod?: Nobody, hacks arent allowed
IC Information
Character Name: Kran'Osh Dra'Kash
Character Race: Orc
Character Class: Warrior
Character Role (out of the set roles): Fighter (I fight for my gang to fight the law.)
Character Biography (should be at least 250 words): Kran'Osh came from a family of law breakers they had there own gang an his father was the fighting elder and his mother the elder of knowledge the gang was actually very organized and had its own hidden village, in which his best friend Dok'Ush also lived and they would have fighting tournament and in just the friendly ones there would be broken bones but it was all just fun and games. However several times the guards unfortunately found there village, and they had to kill the guards and move on. Kran'Osh worked hard to become the slaver elder as he could make there tribe catch more slaves which he wanted. When he finally got the position he lived happily as the same position as his parents for a while but then the guards came in mass numbers everyone died he even had to watch his friend Dok'Ush kill 20 soldiers before he died which made him feel better but he still felt bad because him and the other elders were all granted the permission to leave but he couldn't bring his friend with him however though he still wouldn't of been able to stay with Dok'Ush because all the elders had to split up so the guards wouldn't identify them. These days Kran'Osh is trying to form a new gang, in memory of his old one he once got a small one going but it was wiped out by just a small patrol of guards when he was off catching slaves. He has decided today he's going to recruit the elders to form his gang however the elders will be strong as to defend the gang if hes gone so they wont all be wiped out... Ever again. So today he heads off looking for a city however this gang wont just be destroying towns it will also try to take over the orc throne for 2 reasons one is that his gang won't be wiped out by guards and second he will make it run by the elder system which he thinks will be better then having a single ruler make all the decisions. When he becomes king he will show everyone the true power of the orcs, he will prove they are the strongest race all around by waging war on the elves and enslaving them all and killing the ones who resist...
What are your character's ambitions: Showing people the true power of the orcs, finding out the secrets of the world
What are your character's strengths?: His technique and strength.
What are your character's weaknesses?: Agility and using a bow
What are your character's fears?: Of becoming a slave to another group of people.
A guard walks up to you and tells you that you have been convicted of treason. What is your reaction?: To get the troop he would of been traveling with to kidnap the guard to be the newest slave of his gang.
(Is there an orc king? and if there is could he declare war on other species and wipe them out/ make them slaves and appoint other orcs to rule over there countries?)
There is indeed an Orc King (Leader, at least. I don't know if he calls himself King) and the Orcs have been actively raiding the other lands.
Their, not there.
I'll handle your revised app once there's a couple more, or once the server comes up, whichever is sooner.
A guard walks up to you and tells you that you have been convicted of treason. What is your reaction? He'd probably defend himself for the rest of his natural life because he'd know he's innocent. Treason isn't something that Jack would ever do.
Username: nurb
Age: 16
Country/Time Zone: Canada, PST
Define Roleplay: Acting like a particular person, or a made-up character.
What is Meta-gaming?: Using information or resources to affect in-game actions/playing
What is Power-gaming?: Power-gaming is where you demand the role-play onto another character/player.
Who can use flymod?: Nobody
IC Information
Character Name: Ardir
Character Race: Elf
Character Class: Warrior
Character Role (out of the set roles): Soldier
Character Biography (should be at least 250 words):
Ardir grew up on an island South of Araethon, being a part of the isolated Elven race.
He grew up there since birth, but not remembering anything about his family. At a young age, when he was left by his family, he starting playing minor pranks on the people and the guards that lived there. He was quite unsociable so he didn't have many friends. Although he would play these small jokes, he always looked up to those around him, especially the guards. It's been his dream to serve for the Elven race. At the age of 17, he starting becoming more sociable, making some friends. At the age of 18, he decided to start practicing his fighting skills. It took him a while, but he's finally done it; he has memorized every battle tactic there is.
Ardir loves to run and he's been doing it ever since he played jokes on the people. At the age of 20 he was faster and stronger. He decided to start climbing, and maintain his ability for his swiftness by jumping from tree to tree, and from tree to a pool of water. Also occasionally wanting to jump from rooftop to rooftop. After all this, he was able to recognize how far of a jump he could make, and if a tree was too far.
With all of his friends at his side helping and encouraging him, he was able to fulfill his dream of becoming a guard at the age of 23, but now he has a new goal. To become a well know guard
for his swordsmanship skills. Another choice for him right now, is if he should have a family or not.
What are your character's ambitions?: To become well-known, preferably for fighting.
What are your character's strengths?: Fighting skills/tactics, parkour/climbing, and running.
What are your character's weaknesses?: Hiding, lying, bows, and building.
What are your character's fears?: Lava, fire, and dark rooms.
A guard walks up to you and tells you that you have been convicted of treason. What is your reaction?: Allow him to take me to jail, then either wait for my release, or attempt to break out.
Minecraft_kid99: Welcome aboard!
phaskofication: On the first try!
nurb: Congrats!
As I said to the last batch of accepteds, the server is currently down, but should be fixed soon. You ought to be added to the whitelist within the day.
Rejected
Crabnuts: Your latter two definitions need a bit more explanation. Your bio is less than 250 words. You cannot start-out knowing how to read/write - you need to learn in-RP.
Feel free to make edits and reapply.
OOC Information
Username: king105
Age: 17
Country/Time Zone: USA
Define Roleplay: Controlling the attitude and actions of another.
What is Meta-gaming?: Using information gathered out side of the roleplay inside it.
What is Power-gaming?: Creating a roleplay character above agreed abilities
Who can use flymod?: Nobody
IC Information
Character Name: Crane Gro' Heran
Character Race: Orc
Character Class: Warrior
Character Role (out of the set roles): Mercenary, Body guard
Character Biography (should be at least 250 words): The mind of any race is forced to assume a green skinned beast is a threat to any organsim upon the plaines of Araethon, and that sort of assuming is what caused Crane to become what the races excpected of him even his own family wished him to be feared among all. This was difficult for Crane due to his dreams of being the first peaceful orc but now he stands alone spilling blood across Araethon for just some change in his pocket. His father cheered him on during his murders and so did his mother, other orcs that connected to Crane's family was even jealous of his power. Its a great change from wishing to become a peace caring beast to a flesh ripping demon, and that is what he was titled a "demon". That of course dident stop Crane from proving worth to his fathers expectations. Soon enough he was called "War forged" meaning the only cause for his birth was to kill, but that statement drove Crane wild. He declined the fate of a murderer and seeked peace and silence away from the harming of others, and the disapearence of Crane made his father furious causing him to kill his own wife and soon when the news spread Crane returned for one last kill, one last strike against a soul and that unfortunate life was his own fathers. After that last visit back to his past he returned to his new future, living his life away from most harm and from most pain. Crane Gro' Heran became what he always wanted, a peace loving orc. And beyond the coast of Areathon the races of all forgot the existence of Crane Gro' Heran, he was invisible from others even when he spent visits back to civilization.
What are your character's ambitions: To become hidden and to escape his fate.
What are your character's strengths?: Combat and persuasion.
What are your character's weaknesses?: Fighting against quick enemies and entering tight rooms.
What are your character's fears?: Meeting his own family, murdering the innocent.
A guard walks up to you and tells you that you have been convicted of treason. What is your reaction?: Crane would accept the guards accusations and let him take him away.
What is Power-gaming?: Forcing roleplay onto someone without giving them a chance to participate in the role play like 'arrow in the back! You're dead'
A guard walks up to you and tells you that you have been convicted of treason. What is your reaction? He'd probably defend himself for the rest of his natural life because he'd know he's innocent. Treason isn't something that Jack would ever do.