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Here, have a neat little warningpresent because the regard of your post-count is notrelevant for this thread and thus not allowed.
Reason for joining: I love zombies, roleplaying and the lore is cool too
Are you mature?: Im pretty mature when it comes to roleplaying
IC: Adam Smith
Age: 23
Bio: Born a decade after the incident Adam was raised by his mother after his father was eaten by zombies after hunting for food. Adam was raised in a hut in the middle of a forest and lived mainly by chopping wood, Hunting small game, and defending his sickly mother. After his mother had died because of a deadly sickness brought on by spiders, he moved outside out of the forest to find a world in ruin and after dispatching a few undead he thought "The human race must live on". Adam is deft with a axe and a bow, and is a man who will often work well in groups. He is somewhat good at surviving and is a good fisherman taught from a young age. But he is easily angered
RP example: Adam is looking in the forest for some fire wood, but then gets attacked by some undead, he then proceeds to climb up a tree and jump from tree to tree, Adam is trying to look for a way to get out of this situation and then sees a man wielding a bow cautiously on patrol and warns him about the monsters, he then jumps out of the tree and helps the man fight them. They dispatch them after careful fighting making sure not to hit each other and he thanks him for helping and rewards him in some food then leaves. He then wanders aimlessly toward the nearest civilization
First person to actually say something other than zombies that are out there.. Your biography could use a little bit more expansion. The roleplay example makes your guy have the feel of a Modern-Tarzan.
Two guys cannot take on a horde, and this is 32 years ago when the infection first began.
also you're forgetting something to add. ^^
For now it will be Denied you need add that one thing that needs to be added to your application.
Mod-Edit: Congratulations to your new user title.
Here, have a neat little warningpresent because the regard of your post-count is notrelevant for this thread and thus not allowed.
First person to actually say something other than zombies that are out there.. Your biography could use a little bit more expansion. The roleplay example makes your guy have the feel of a Modern-Tarzan.
Two guys cannot take on a horde, and this is 32 years ago when the infection first began.
also you're forgetting something to add. ^^
For now it will be Denied you need add that one thing that needs to be added to your application.
sorry I forgot to add it was only a few monsters.. I might get denied a lot for not being through in explaination sometime. But I will try again!
Posted Yesterday, 03:39 PM
Keegan97's NEW NEW whitelist application
OOC:
IGN:Keegan97
Name: Keegan Kowalski
Age:14
Gender: Male
Reason for joining: I love zombies, roleplaying and the lore is cool too
Are you mature?: Im pretty mature when it comes to roleplaying (I Play D&D!)
IC: Adam Smith
Age: 22
Gender: Male (I dont know how to roleplay a woman)
Bio: Born a decade after the incident Adam was raised by his mother after his father was eaten by zombies after hunting for food. Adam was raised in a hut in the middle of a forest and lived mainly by chopping wood, Hunting small game, and defending his sickly mother. After his mother had died because of a deadly sickness brought on by spiders when she was attacked outside one day, he moved outside out of the forest to find a world in ruin and after dispatching one undead he thought "The human race must live on". Adam is deft with a axe and a bow, and is a man who will often work well in groups. He is somewhat good at surviving and is a good fisherman taught from a young age. But he is easily angered, and often times will hurt himself in a fall.
RP example: Adam is looking in the forest for some fire wood, but then gets attacked by a few undead, he then proceeds to climb up a tree and jump from tree to tree, Adam is trying to look for a way to get out of this situation and then sees some men cautiously on patrol after hearing a rustling in the bushes and warns them about the monsters, he then jumps out of the tree and helps the men fight them. They dispatch them after careful fighting making sure not to hit any of each other and he thanks them for helping and rewards them with half of all of his food and water then leaves grateful for their service. He then wanders aimlessly toward the nearest civilization.
P.S. This is my the only rp server I ever applied to sorry if I keep trying and failing
Posted Yesterday, 03:39 PM
Keegan97's NEW NEW whitelist application
OOC:
IGN:Keegan97
Name: Keegan Kowalski
Age:14
Reason for joining: I love zombies, roleplaying and the lore is cool too
Are you mature?: Im pretty mature when it comes to roleplaying
IC: Adam Smith
Age: 22
Bio: Born a decade after the incident Adam was raised by his mother after his father was eaten by zombies after hunting for food. Adam was raised in a hut in the middle of a forest and lived mainly by chopping wood, Hunting small game, and defending his sickly mother. After his mother had died because of a deadly sickness brought on by spiders when she was attacked outside one day, he moved outside out of the forest to find a world in ruin and after dispatching one undead he thought "The human race must live on". Adam is deft with a axe and a bow, and is a man who will often work well in groups. He is somewhat good at surviving and is a good fisherman taught from a young age. But he is easily angered, and often times will hurt himself in a fall.
RP example: Adam is looking in the forest for some fire wood, but then gets attacked by a few undead, he then proceeds to climb up a tree and jump from tree to tree, Adam is trying to look for a way to get out of this situation and then sees some men cautiously on patrol after hearing a rustling in the bushes and warns them about the monsters, he then jumps out of the tree and helps the men fight them. They dispatch them after careful fighting making sure not to hit any of each other and he thanks them for helping and rewards them with half of all of his food and water then leaves grateful for their service. He then wanders aimlessly toward the nearest civilization.
((EDIT: Forgot my real name, sorry)) ☣☣☣ OOC: IGN: swisscheeseluver
Name: Dan Age: 17 Reason for joining: I'm looking for a good server to join, and a roleplaying deal seems right to me. I'd love to try it out! Are you mature?: Totally, I've run my own server, and I can understand how annoying it can be when people don't follow the rules.
IC: Character name: Ranger Harth Age: 21 Gender: male Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough):
Born 11 years after the Portal incident, Ranger Harth has no idea what the world was like before he was born. He only has the stories that the others in the community can tell him, though most of them seem too incredible to be true. Preferring to stick to reality as much as possible(it's easy to get killed when you're daydreaming), Harth has dedicated himself to the most dangerous of professions: Ranger. These are the hard men and women who range outside the walls of communities, searching for supplies, weapons, and refugees, while scouting for -- and sometimes confronting -- the beings that roam freely in the wasteland. Harth is the perfect man for this job: he has no family to speak of, few personal possessions, and no emotional baggage to speak of. Although only 21, he is passable in any and all forms of combat, whether with a weapon or not. His rough exterior makes it hard for him to connect with people, however, and so spends as much time as he can scouting or exploring.
RP example:
The sun was so hot it seemed that the very rocks were melting around Harth's feet. "Gods," he thought, "If I'm out here much longer maybe I won't have to wait for a monster to find me. This blasted sun will kill me just as quickly." It was still another two hours to the community, but his mission had not been without purpose. In the sack he carried over his back was sets of salvaged armor and two dented swords. If he managed to make it to the community alive, he could arm two or three more people with it, and they would stay alive that much longer. Not that it mattered whether they were armed; those damned creatures could rip a man in two, no matter if they had armor on or not. Harth grumbled and started to climb the steep rise in front of him; the one that, when a man stood at its crest, could just see the lights of the community. Suddenly he heard a noise. Knowing he would soon be in for a fight, Harth tossed down his sack and pulled out two axes. The noise intensified, and grew to a steady hum that he knew could only be spiders. As he pulled on his combat helmet, Harth muttered, "Come and get me, you little slimy buggers."
"If we put our lobster bibs on backwards and swam around in the ocean, would crabs come over to us and think we were some kind of god-king?" - towely10, 2/22/13
Posted Yesterday, 03:39 PM
Keegan97's NEW NEW whitelist application
OOC:
IGN:Keegan97
Name: Keegan Kowalski
Age:14
Reason for joining: I love zombies, roleplaying and the lore is cool too
Are you mature?: Im pretty mature when it comes to roleplaying
IC: Adam Smith
Age: 22
Bio: Born a decade after the incident Adam was raised by his mother after his father was eaten by zombies after hunting for food. Adam was raised in a hut in the middle of a forest and lived mainly by chopping wood, Hunting small game, and defending his sickly mother. After his mother had died because of a deadly sickness brought on by spiders when she was attacked outside one day, he moved outside out of the forest to find a world in ruin and after dispatching one undead he thought "The human race must live on". Adam is deft with a axe and a bow, and is a man who will often work well in groups. He is somewhat good at surviving and is a good fisherman taught from a young age. But he is easily angered, and often times will hurt himself in a fall.
RP example: Adam is looking in the forest for some fire wood, but then gets attacked by a few undead, he then proceeds to climb up a tree and jump from tree to tree, Adam is trying to look for a way to get out of this situation and then sees some men cautiously on patrol after hearing a rustling in the bushes and warns them about the monsters, he then jumps out of the tree and helps the men fight them. They dispatch them after careful fighting making sure not to hit any of each other and he thanks them for helping and rewards them with half of all of his food and water then leaves grateful for their service. He then wanders aimlessly toward the nearest civilization.
P.S. This is my the only rp server I ever applied to sorry if I keep trying and failing
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Your still missing something. The backstory could use some expanding, add some more details or events. Your skin link doesn't work, use the link button in the bar next to numbered list.
Achievement seems to be connected with action. Successful people keep moving. They make mistakes, but they don't quit - Conrad Hilton
((EDIT: Forgot my real name, sorry)) ☣☣☣ OOC: IGN: swisscheeseluver
Name: Dan Age: 17 Reason for joining: I'm looking for a good server to join, and a roleplaying deal seems right to me. I'd love to try it out! Are you mature?: Totally, I've run my own server, and I can understand how annoying it can be when people don't follow the rules.
IC: Character name: Ranger Harth Age: 21 Gender: male Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough):
Born 11 years after the Portal incident, Ranger Harth has no idea what the world was like before he was born. He only has the stories that the others in the community can tell him, though most of them seem too incredible to be true. Preferring to stick to reality as much as possible(it's easy to get killed when you're daydreaming), Harth has dedicated himself to the most dangerous of professions: Ranger. These are the hard men and women who range outside the walls of communities, searching for supplies, weapons, and refugees, while scouting for -- and sometimes confronting -- the beings that roam freely in the wasteland. Harth is the perfect man for this job: he has no family to speak of, few personal possessions, and no emotional baggage to speak of. Although only 21, he is passable in any and all forms of combat, whether with a weapon or not. His rough exterior makes it hard for him to connect with people, however, and so spends as much time as he can scouting or exploring.
RP example:
The sun was so hot it seemed that the very rocks were melting around Harth's feet. "Gods," he thought, "If I'm out here much longer maybe I won't have to wait for a monster to find me. This blasted sun will kill me just as quickly." It was still another two hours to the community, but his mission had not been without purpose. In the sack he carried over his back was sets of salvaged armor and two dented swords. If he managed to make it to the community alive, he could arm two or three more people with it, and they would stay alive that much longer. Not that it mattered whether they were armed; those damned creatures could rip a man in two, no matter if they had armor on or not. Harth grumbled and started to climb the steep rise in front of him; the one that, when a man stood at its crest, could just see the lights of the community. Suddenly he heard a noise. Knowing he would soon be in for a fight, Harth tossed down his sack and pulled out two axes. The noise intensified, and grew to a steady hum that he knew could only be spiders. As he pulled on his combat helmet, Harth muttered, "Come and get me, you little slimy buggers."
With your backstory it could use some expanding, maybe explaining his near death experiences or what happened to his parents. Your RP example is excellent but you're Denied for now.
IGN: Mondasin Age: 18 Reason for joining: Started playing on a RP server back in beta 1.7 and this seems like a nice server of equal or greater epicness. Are you mature?: I might make some immature jokes every now and then, but if the server deems that inappropriate then I can contain that immaturity making me, very much, mature.
Character name: Mond A. Behr Age: 25 Gender: Male Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough): The mutated offspring of a pair of escaped cicus grizzly bears. The first seven years of Mond's life was spent foraging for food, digging makeshift dens, and avoiding humans that his more or less feral parents distrusted. Mond had not been inprisoned in a circus like his parents, so he was more curious of humans and their culture. As Mond grew he resembled more like a bear version of the werewolves he saw on the covers of unburned books in the few towns his family had tore through for any type of food. He learned that some travelers, fleeing from besieged lands towards one of the more secure communities that stood in the wasteland, were jumpy, and often paniced if they saw him or his kin wandering nearby. Other humans were more bold, cruel and hungry like the group of bandits that slew his parents for food. Mond didn't let the murders of his parents stand unpunished, but he didn't rush them in rage either, he waited for night fall and baited a group of mutants into the bandits camp. While the bandits focused on the mutants swarming into the camp, Mond using his claws tore into the few bandits that survived the mutant onslaught. Mond took the pelts of his parents and gave them a proper burial near the den he had been birthed in. Mond realising that roaming the wilds would just end in a grizzly demise like his parents, decided to seek refuge with the friendly-er human communities, but first he'd need suitible clothing, showing up bear naked with ill-practiced english was more likely to get him shot. Luckily for him, he knew that the owner of the circus his parents were a part of, had spare suits incase one of the animals ripped one during the show. Mond found the suits to fit surprisingly well, even if they were slightly singed. With some cloths and speech that was good enough to make people not immediately shoot him, he set off to find some accepting humans.
RP example: Mond woke from his slumber, was it just the wind moving litter around the burnt ruins of the small town he took refuge in, or if it was something more sinister. Perhaps a half starved mutant wandered into the town and began gnawing on a fence, or maybe it was some bandits like the ones that shot his parents for food. Swift: Great another picked town, nothing of use here unless you want to carry rotted wood home. Rose: Relax honey, its only another days travel to the western community, we'll be safe there.
Mond thought "great, its a small caravan. Slightest wrong move around them, and someone, more likely me, will get shot." Mond noticed something shambling towards the small camp from the darkness. A simple zombie, by itself not too much of a threat, but if it saw the humans and let out its alarm-like moan, any wild beast in the area my swarm in for a quick meal. Mond sneaks around the camp to get in to position to pounce the undead, hopefully silencing it before it spooks the humans. As he creeps up to the zombie, it sights a sleeping caravan guard, this sends the zombie almsot tumbling towards its target. Mond seeing this situation, debating whether to save the guard knowing it would wake him and set off an alarm, or let the guard die and escaped before more undead show up. Mond decided on saving the poor man, leaping over a wagon, landing on the zombie and bringing a brick down on to the creatures head. the impact of the brick on bone emitted a horrid noised like a watermelon being forced through chain-link fence. Picture of skin:http://www.minecraft.../pedobear-suit/
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Your still missing something. The backstory could use some expanding, add some more details or events. Your skin link doesn't work, use the link button in the bar next to numbered list.
Achievement seems to be connected with action. Successful people keep moving. They make mistakes, but they don't quit - Conrad Hilton
This might take me a while to get what it is im missing. Though you are helpful and tell me whats wrong with application i just wannna say it might me a while to get it just right
Keegan97's NEW NEW NEW whitelist application (dont know how long this is gonna take for me to get it right)
OOC:
IGN:Keegan97
Name: Keegan Kowalski
Age:14
Gender: Male
Reason for joining: I love zombies, roleplaying and the lore is cool too
Are you mature?: Im pretty mature when it comes to roleplaying (I Play D&D!)
IC:
Character Name: Adam Smith
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Bio: Born a decade after the incident Adam was raised by his mother after his father was eaten by zombies after hunting for food. After his father died he started to practice swinging a axe and shooting a bow as a young boy. Adam was raised in a hut in the middle of a forest and lived mainly by chopping wood, Hunting small game, and defending his sickly mother. After his mother had died because of a deadly sickness brought on by spiders when she was attacked outside one day, After that he could not stay in the woods any longer so he went outside of the woods. Out of the forest He found a world in ruin, and the only people he would meet would be either afraid to move outside or people that would try to kill him. Adam is deft with a axe and a bow, and is a man who will often work well in groups. He is somewhat good at surviving and is a good fisherman taught from a young age. But he is easily angered, and often times will hurt himself in a fall. He is very agile when it comes to climbing, or jumping through the treetops.
RP example: Adam is looking in the forest for some fire wood, but then gets attacked by a few undead, he then proceeds to climb up a tree and jump from tree to tree, Adam is trying to look for a way to get out of this situation and then sees some men cautiously on patrol after hearing a rustling in the bushes and warns them about the monsters, he then jumps out of the tree and helps the men fight them. They dispatch them after careful fighting making sure not to hit any of each other and he thanks them for helping and rewards them with half of all of his food and water then leaves grateful for their service. He then wanders aimlessly toward the nearest civilization.
Keegan97's NEW NEW NEW whitelist application (dont know how long this is gonna take for me to get it right)
OOC:
IGN:Keegan97
Name: Keegan Kowalski
Age:14
Gender: Male
Reason for joining: I love zombies, roleplaying and the lore is cool too
Are you mature?: Im pretty mature when it comes to roleplaying (I Play D&D!)
IC:
Character Name: Adam Smith
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Bio: Born a decade after the incident Adam was raised by his mother after his father was eaten by zombies after hunting for food. After his father died he started to practice swinging a axe and shooting a bow as a young boy. Adam was raised in a hut in the middle of a forest and lived mainly by chopping wood, Hunting small game, and defending his sickly mother. After his mother had died because of a deadly sickness brought on by spiders when she was attacked outside one day, After that he could not stay in the woods any longer so he went outside of the woods. Out of the forest He found a world in ruin, and the only people he would meet would be either afraid to move outside or people that would try to kill him. Adam is deft with a axe and a bow, and is a man who will often work well in groups. He is somewhat good at surviving and is a good fisherman taught from a young age. But he is easily angered, and often times will hurt himself in a fall. He is very agile when it comes to climbing, or jumping through the treetops.
RP example: Adam is looking in the forest for some fire wood, but then gets attacked by a few undead, he then proceeds to climb up a tree and jump from tree to tree, Adam is trying to look for a way to get out of this situation and then sees some men cautiously on patrol after hearing a rustling in the bushes and warns them about the monsters, he then jumps out of the tree and helps the men fight them. They dispatch them after careful fighting making sure not to hit any of each other and he thanks them for helping and rewards them with half of all of his food and water then leaves grateful for their service. He then wanders aimlessly toward the nearest civilization.
Keegan97's NEW NEW NEW NEW whitelist application (did that help?)
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Name: Keegan Kowalski
Age:14
Gender: Male
Reason for joining: I love zombies, roleplaying and the lore is cool too
Are you mature?: Im pretty mature when it comes to roleplaying (I Play D&D!)
IC:
Character Name: Adam Smith
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Bio: Born a decade after the incident Adam was raised by his mother after his father was eaten by zombies after hunting for food. After his father died he started to practice swinging a axe and shooting a bow as a young boy. Adam was raised in a hut in the middle of a forest and lived mainly by chopping wood, Hunting small game, and defending his sickly mother. After his mother had died because of a deadly sickness brought on by spiders when she was attacked outside one day, After that he could not stay in the woods any longer so he went outside of the woods. Out of the forest He found a world in ruin, and the only people he would meet would be either afraid to move outside or people that would try to kill him. Adam is deft with a axe and a bow, and is a man who will often work well in groups. He is somewhat good at surviving and is a good fisherman taught from a young age. But he is easily angered, and often times will hurt himself in a fall. He is very agile when it comes to climbing, or jumping through the treetops.
RP example: Adam is looking in the forest for some fire wood, but then gets attacked by a few undead, he then proceeds to climb up a tree and jump from tree to tree, Adam is trying to look for a way to get out of this situation and then sees some men cautiously on patrol after hearing a rustling in the bushes and warns them about the monsters, he then jumps out of the tree and helps the men fight them. They dispatch them after careful fighting making sure not to hit any of each other and he thanks them for helping and rewards them with half of all of his food and water then leaves grateful for their service. He then wanders aimlessly toward the nearest civilization.
Reason for joining: This looks like a really good server. I'm pretty much addicted to minecraft but I’m getting bored of single player. This server looks like it takes RP serious, which is what I'm looking for.
Are you mature?: Yes
IC:
Character name: Aaron Fultern
Age: 36
Backstory: Aaron was only four when the portal incident happened. Riots broke out in his town a few days later. During the riots someone broke in, shot his mom, took everything, and left. His dad was shot too, but he survived only to be separated by him 8 years later. His best friend was also separated. It happened when his parents tried to get out of town during the riots, and took him with them. He joined a gang in his teenage years. He joined them because they saved his live when an insane man was attacking him. While in the gang he did things he wasn't proud of, but now he isn't hesitant to kill. Three years later while they were raiding, his gang killed the parents of a small child. He realized that they were terrible people, so when they weren't looking he ran off. The gang has a price on his head now. One day he came across the gang. He was running from them with his best friend that he met just before he joined the gang. He managed to lose them but his friend was shot. With his last breath he told him where his old friend was and that he was sick. The sickness is causing him to slowly go insane.
Aaron has been looking for his friend and a cure since. He himself is sick with a similar disease; he throws random fits of rage and loses his mind when he gets frustrated. Luckily, he has something that helps him with his anger. He has to eat a whole melon once every few days. He knows what the cure is; he has to eat one golden apple each day for a week. He found it out when he ate a golden apple and he stopped having fits for the rest of the week.
RP example: Aaron is walking, when a looter attacks him. The looter demanded he give him what he had on him or he shoots. He gives it to him and the looter leaves. After the looter left, Aaron starts wandering. On the ground he finds a bat. He heads toward the direction where the looter left. Aaron finds the looter and runs up to him and knocks his gun out of his hand. Aaron starts swinging at the looter. The looter punches him a few times until Aaron finally knocks him to the floor and finishes him off. He retrieves his stolen items and what the looter had on him.
Picture of skin: I don't know how to post a picture, but I can tell you that it's perfect for this server.
With your backstory it could use some expanding, maybe explaining his near death experiences or what happened to his parents. Your RP example is excellent but you're Denied for now.
Alrighty, should I repost it with my changes or simply edit my first post?
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"If we put our lobster bibs on backwards and swam around in the ocean, would crabs come over to us and think we were some kind of god-king?" - towely10, 2/22/13
(i should work on my paitence )
Khazâd Ai-Mênu!
First person to actually say something other than zombies that are out there.. Your biography could use a little bit more expansion. The roleplay example makes your guy have the feel of a Modern-Tarzan.
Two guys cannot take on a horde, and this is 32 years ago when the infection first began.
also you're forgetting something to add. ^^
For now it will be Denied you need add that one thing that needs to be added to your application.
Theres No "You Miss, Are ****ing awesome." Image
Khazâd Ai-Mênu!
Posted Yesterday, 03:39 PM
Keegan97's NEW NEW whitelist application
OOC:
IGN:Keegan97
Name: Keegan Kowalski
Age:14
Reason for joining: I love zombies, roleplaying and the lore is cool too
Are you mature?: Im pretty mature when it comes to roleplaying
IC: Adam Smith
Age: 22
Bio: Born a decade after the incident Adam was raised by his mother after his father was eaten by zombies after hunting for food. Adam was raised in a hut in the middle of a forest and lived mainly by chopping wood, Hunting small game, and defending his sickly mother. After his mother had died because of a deadly sickness brought on by spiders when she was attacked outside one day, he moved outside out of the forest to find a world in ruin and after dispatching one undead he thought "The human race must live on". Adam is deft with a axe and a bow, and is a man who will often work well in groups. He is somewhat good at surviving and is a good fisherman taught from a young age. But he is easily angered, and often times will hurt himself in a fall.
RP example: Adam is looking in the forest for some fire wood, but then gets attacked by a few undead, he then proceeds to climb up a tree and jump from tree to tree, Adam is trying to look for a way to get out of this situation and then sees some men cautiously on patrol after hearing a rustling in the bushes and warns them about the monsters, he then jumps out of the tree and helps the men fight them. They dispatch them after careful fighting making sure not to hit any of each other and he thanks them for helping and rewards them with half of all of his food and water then leaves grateful for their service. He then wanders aimlessly toward the nearest civilization.
Skin:http://www.minecraft...162959/my-skin/ i made it myself
P.S. This is my the only rp server I ever applied to sorry if I keep trying and failing
Khazâd Ai-Mênu!
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OOC:
IGN: swisscheeseluver
Name: Dan
Age: 17
Reason for joining: I'm looking for a good server to join, and a roleplaying deal seems right to me. I'd love to try it out!
Are you mature?: Totally, I've run my own server, and I can understand how annoying it can be when people don't follow the rules.
IC:
Character name: Ranger Harth
Age: 21
Gender: male
Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough):
Born 11 years after the Portal incident, Ranger Harth has no idea what the world was like before he was born. He only has the stories that the others in the community can tell him, though most of them seem too incredible to be true. Preferring to stick to reality as much as possible(it's easy to get killed when you're daydreaming), Harth has dedicated himself to the most dangerous of professions: Ranger. These are the hard men and women who range outside the walls of communities, searching for supplies, weapons, and refugees, while scouting for -- and sometimes confronting -- the beings that roam freely in the wasteland. Harth is the perfect man for this job: he has no family to speak of, few personal possessions, and no emotional baggage to speak of. Although only 21, he is passable in any and all forms of combat, whether with a weapon or not. His rough exterior makes it hard for him to connect with people, however, and so spends as much time as he can scouting or exploring.
RP example:
The sun was so hot it seemed that the very rocks were melting around Harth's feet. "Gods," he thought, "If I'm out here much longer maybe I won't have to wait for a monster to find me. This blasted sun will kill me just as quickly." It was still another two hours to the community, but his mission had not been without purpose. In the sack he carried over his back was sets of salvaged armor and two dented swords. If he managed to make it to the community alive, he could arm two or three more people with it, and they would stay alive that much longer. Not that it mattered whether they were armed; those damned creatures could rip a man in two, no matter if they had armor on or not. Harth grumbled and started to climb the steep rise in front of him; the one that, when a man stood at its crest, could just see the lights of the community. Suddenly he heard a noise. Knowing he would soon be in for a fight, Harth tossed down his sack and pulled out two axes. The noise intensified, and grew to a steady hum that he knew could only be spiders. As he pulled on his combat helmet, Harth muttered, "Come and get me, you little slimy buggers."
Picture of skin: http://www.minecraft...28/evil-hazmat/
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Your still missing something. The backstory could use some expanding, add some more details or events. Your skin link doesn't work, use the link button in the bar next to numbered list.
Achievement seems to be connected with action. Successful people keep moving. They make mistakes, but they don't quit - Conrad Hilton
With your backstory it could use some expanding, maybe explaining his near death experiences or what happened to his parents. Your RP example is excellent but you're Denied for now.
Age: 18
Reason for joining: Started playing on a RP server back in beta 1.7 and this seems like a nice server of equal or greater epicness.
Are you mature?: I might make some immature jokes every now and then, but if the server deems that inappropriate then I can contain that immaturity making me, very much, mature.
Character name: Mond A. Behr
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough): The mutated offspring of a pair of escaped cicus grizzly bears. The first seven years of Mond's life was spent foraging for food, digging makeshift dens, and avoiding humans that his more or less feral parents distrusted. Mond had not been inprisoned in a circus like his parents, so he was more curious of humans and their culture. As Mond grew he resembled more like a bear version of the werewolves he saw on the covers of unburned books in the few towns his family had tore through for any type of food. He learned that some travelers, fleeing from besieged lands towards one of the more secure communities that stood in the wasteland, were jumpy, and often paniced if they saw him or his kin wandering nearby. Other humans were more bold, cruel and hungry like the group of bandits that slew his parents for food. Mond didn't let the murders of his parents stand unpunished, but he didn't rush them in rage either, he waited for night fall and baited a group of mutants into the bandits camp. While the bandits focused on the mutants swarming into the camp, Mond using his claws tore into the few bandits that survived the mutant onslaught. Mond took the pelts of his parents and gave them a proper burial near the den he had been birthed in. Mond realising that roaming the wilds would just end in a grizzly demise like his parents, decided to seek refuge with the friendly-er human communities, but first he'd need suitible clothing, showing up bear naked with ill-practiced english was more likely to get him shot. Luckily for him, he knew that the owner of the circus his parents were a part of, had spare suits incase one of the animals ripped one during the show. Mond found the suits to fit surprisingly well, even if they were slightly singed. With some cloths and speech that was good enough to make people not immediately shoot him, he set off to find some accepting humans.
RP example: Mond woke from his slumber, was it just the wind moving litter around the burnt ruins of the small town he took refuge in, or if it was something more sinister. Perhaps a half starved mutant wandered into the town and began gnawing on a fence, or maybe it was some bandits like the ones that shot his parents for food. Swift: Great another picked town, nothing of use here unless you want to carry rotted wood home. Rose: Relax honey, its only another days travel to the western community, we'll be safe there.
Mond thought "great, its a small caravan. Slightest wrong move around them, and someone, more likely me, will get shot." Mond noticed something shambling towards the small camp from the darkness. A simple zombie, by itself not too much of a threat, but if it saw the humans and let out its alarm-like moan, any wild beast in the area my swarm in for a quick meal. Mond sneaks around the camp to get in to position to pounce the undead, hopefully silencing it before it spooks the humans. As he creeps up to the zombie, it sights a sleeping caravan guard, this sends the zombie almsot tumbling towards its target. Mond seeing this situation, debating whether to save the guard knowing it would wake him and set off an alarm, or let the guard die and escaped before more undead show up. Mond decided on saving the poor man, leaping over a wagon, landing on the zombie and bringing a brick down on to the creatures head. the impact of the brick on bone emitted a horrid noised like a watermelon being forced through chain-link fence.
Picture of skin: http://www.minecraft.../pedobear-suit/
This might take me a while to get what it is im missing. Though you are helpful and tell me whats wrong with application i just wannna say it might me a while to get it just right
Khazâd Ai-Mênu!
OOC:
IGN:Keegan97
Name: Keegan Kowalski
Age:14
Gender: Male
Reason for joining: I love zombies, roleplaying and the lore is cool too
Are you mature?: Im pretty mature when it comes to roleplaying (I Play D&D!)
IC:
Character Name: Adam Smith
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Bio: Born a decade after the incident Adam was raised by his mother after his father was eaten by zombies after hunting for food. After his father died he started to practice swinging a axe and shooting a bow as a young boy. Adam was raised in a hut in the middle of a forest and lived mainly by chopping wood, Hunting small game, and defending his sickly mother. After his mother had died because of a deadly sickness brought on by spiders when she was attacked outside one day, After that he could not stay in the woods any longer so he went outside of the woods. Out of the forest He found a world in ruin, and the only people he would meet would be either afraid to move outside or people that would try to kill him. Adam is deft with a axe and a bow, and is a man who will often work well in groups. He is somewhat good at surviving and is a good fisherman taught from a young age. But he is easily angered, and often times will hurt himself in a fall. He is very agile when it comes to climbing, or jumping through the treetops.
RP example: Adam is looking in the forest for some fire wood, but then gets attacked by a few undead, he then proceeds to climb up a tree and jump from tree to tree, Adam is trying to look for a way to get out of this situation and then sees some men cautiously on patrol after hearing a rustling in the bushes and warns them about the monsters, he then jumps out of the tree and helps the men fight them. They dispatch them after careful fighting making sure not to hit any of each other and he thanks them for helping and rewards them with half of all of his food and water then leaves grateful for their service. He then wanders aimlessly toward the nearest civilization.
Skin: http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/162959/my-skin/
P.S. If I dont get it this time tell me whats wrong.
Khazâd Ai-Mênu!
Reread the rules thoroughly
Age:14
Gender: Male
Reason for joining: I love zombies, roleplaying and the lore is cool too
Are you mature?: Im pretty mature when it comes to roleplaying (I Play D&D!)
IC:
Character Name: Adam Smith
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Bio: Born a decade after the incident Adam was raised by his mother after his father was eaten by zombies after hunting for food. After his father died he started to practice swinging a axe and shooting a bow as a young boy. Adam was raised in a hut in the middle of a forest and lived mainly by chopping wood, Hunting small game, and defending his sickly mother. After his mother had died because of a deadly sickness brought on by spiders when she was attacked outside one day, After that he could not stay in the woods any longer so he went outside of the woods. Out of the forest He found a world in ruin, and the only people he would meet would be either afraid to move outside or people that would try to kill him. Adam is deft with a axe and a bow, and is a man who will often work well in groups. He is somewhat good at surviving and is a good fisherman taught from a young age. But he is easily angered, and often times will hurt himself in a fall. He is very agile when it comes to climbing, or jumping through the treetops.
RP example: Adam is looking in the forest for some fire wood, but then gets attacked by a few undead, he then proceeds to climb up a tree and jump from tree to tree, Adam is trying to look for a way to get out of this situation and then sees some men cautiously on patrol after hearing a rustling in the bushes and warns them about the monsters, he then jumps out of the tree and helps the men fight them. They dispatch them after careful fighting making sure not to hit any of each other and he thanks them for helping and rewards them with half of all of his food and water then leaves grateful for their service. He then wanders aimlessly toward the nearest civilization.
Skin: http://www.minecraft...162959/my-skin/
P.S. I got angry at copying and pasting. I SERIOUSLY hope i get accepted this time.
Khazâd Ai-Mênu!
Sorry we might have skipped it, repost it.
Aaron has been looking for his friend and a cure since. He himself is sick with a similar disease; he throws random fits of rage and loses his mind when he gets frustrated. Luckily, he has something that helps him with his anger. He has to eat a whole melon once every few days. He knows what the cure is; he has to eat one golden apple each day for a week. He found it out when he ate a golden apple and he stopped having fits for the rest of the week.
Alrighty, should I repost it with my changes or simply edit my first post?