Do you wish to join our community Skype chat? If so, what is your Skype username? (This is optional): I’m already in it.
Have you read and agreed to both the rules and the lore of the server?: Yes.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is when a person forces an action or the results of an action on another without their consent. *slices his head off* is powergaming whereas *swings his axe at his head* is not.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using out of character information in character.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplaying is when you take on the role of another character and play them. You act out their actions, feelings, and personality with others.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: Nobody.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When you have the other person’s permission.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: In out of character chat or with the use of ((double parentheses))
Do you have any previous RP experience, Minecraft or elsewhere? (Optional): I’ve played on Silverage, Book of Halegron, Shrines of the Ancients, The Anerian Chronicles, and The Wayward Ones. In addition to Minecraft roleplay servers I’ve also played D&D 3.5 for several years.
Character Information
Name: Treven B. Highwall
Age: 63 (25 in human years)
Race: Elf
Physical description: Treven has bright green eyes and well kempt short black hair. He has a rather skinny stature and is of an average height. As a well accustomed traveler his hands are worn, but he holds the appearance of a business man.
Screen capture of your skin (I recommend uploading to imgur and posting link here):
Biography (Minimum 225 words. Most very fleshed-out characters have around 300, but feel free to use even more than that if you wish. Try and avoid clichés such as loved one being killed by bandits or the like):
Treven grew up with his parents in the forests of mainland Rinion among a tribe of wild elves. Both his father (Arlen) and his mother (Meillion) worked as translators and merchants facilitating trade between the tribes and various merchants along the ports. At a fairly young age his mother started taking Treven on trips from his home in the forest out to trading settlements. As Treven became more accustomed to the city he began his proper schooling, learning of his people (both Arturan Elves and Nomadic Elves) as well as the greater world around him. It was here that he became close friends with a kid by the name of Kalad who belonged to a Rinion-Drunn trading family. As a wild elf he was often looked down upon by others but he quickly showed his class that he deserved a place in school. Treven earned high marks in language and economics, though he fell a bit flat when it came to more physical activities. Later he found that Kalad’s parents had been close to Meillion in their Drunn expeditions. As Treven grew older his mother took him on more and more trips across the continent. He visited Drunn several times with his childhood friend Kalad as well as Arturan and the Crownlands. Being the young kid that he was Treven often found himself committing rather mischievous actions involving certain Drunn artifacts, but nothing too serious ever really came from it. When Treven was 40 (16 in human years) his father Arlen moved to Enris, leaving his one child and wife Meillion to run the business. Arlen assisted in trading deals between the mixing pot and holy land that was Enris and other nations that Treven and Meillion had strong connections with. When the undead sieges began to occur Arlen stayed behind with whatever forces remained, desperately trying to keep supply lines to support the cities. As one city after another fell, so did Arlen. Now Treven is taking his friend Kalad to the new world to fill his father’s role and act as a mediator for the struggling nation and the rest of the greater world.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
Treven seeks to uphold his family’s business and to support the nation that his father died for.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Due to Treven’s wide education and knowledge of the world he’s very open-minded and accepting of others. Treven has a way with words, negotiating agreements and trade deals.
Weaknesses (Balance out yours character's strengths with suitable weaknesses. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. I.E. Not knowing how to use a bow as a miner.): Treven is physically weak, more well versed in the academic side of life. He also has troubles making personal connections with others and expressing his emotions to their fullest.
I haven't finished reading everything but this server looks really cool already I most likely won't be able to apply by launch though--but I'm excited to rejoin the community!
Do you wish to join our community Skype chat? If so, what is your Skype username? (This is optional): Do not have Skype.
Have you read and agreed to both the rules and the lore of the server?:Yes! I 100% agree and are find with them!
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is forcing RP in someone, and they dont have an opportunity to respond.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is when your character has knowledge it shouldn't know. Like a miner telling a warrior how to fight.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: The acting out or performance of a role. Being in the shoes of your character and really act like its you.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one at all.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: If they allow it, and also if its a RP death. (Not just kill someone because they want to die)
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: You can only speak out of character in the OOC channel, a private message, or with (( message ))
Do you have any previous RP experience, Minecraft or elsewhere? (Optional): No! This is actually my first one ever!
Character Information
Name: Edric
Age: 20
Race: Human
Physical description: Edric has black hair, a tan skin and is very firm from lots of training. He is average height and he is also young.
Screen capture of your skin (I recommend uploading to imgur and posting link here): http://imgur.com/a/Bb1tX#0 My skin of an explorer!
Biography (Minimum 225 words. Most very fleshed-out characters have around 300, but feel free to use even more than that if you wish. Try and avoid clichés such as loved one being killed by bandits or the like):
Edric was born in Alann. His father was a warrior for Alann and his mother was a teacher from unknown lands.
He had 2 older brothers, 1 younger brother and 1 younger sister. His family was poor, and there main source of income was from their father's job as a warrior. He loved his old life, even though he was poor. He would study, train and also play with his family and siblings for hours. He read books on the entire land and his nation. He knew all kinds of things. He went to best school (even though school didn't matter in Alann). Edric spend hours training and was really strong. His father called him a sure warrior. But, what always lingered in his family was war and poverty. The constant threat of being attacked or going homeless and hungry. Some days they did go hungry. He seemed so normal, and he was. There was just one thing that nether his mother or father really liked, and it was his adventurous spirit. This was something rare at these times since people thought adventurers are useless and just like to get in trouble. Edric would secretly do mini adventures by himself and sometimes with his brothers and sisters.
One day, there father got hurt badly. He was slabbed and was bleeding.13-year old Edric had alot of more responsibly. The oldest brother, who was 18 years old, became the main provider of the house. After his father got better, his father couldn't go back as a warrior and the oldest brother couldn't maintain both his kids and wife and them. In the end, they decided to create a shop. Edric and his second oldest brother was always going in the wild looking for things and materials they could sell. They had adventures an lots of fun. The business went smoothly. They made enough money to mantain there selves and to have enough left over.As Edric grew up over the years, he grew more adventurous and when he reached 15, he set off and left Alann for 2 weeks. There Edric grew more strong and learned more things while in Drunn and the Horizon. He learned how to fish and hunt and to survive on his own, something that would be useful in the future.
When Edric reached 18 he was ready to go to the university. He wanted to be a business man. (Deep down he wanted to be an explorer). After 2 years of learning , Edric reached 20 and something unexpected happened. A mysterious event brought more war to Alann and it was during this time his famiy got really poor. They still had a 15 year old girl (his sister) and 13 year old boy (his brother) to worry about. They were more poor than ever, and Edric tried to help out. To clear his mind, Edric set off to another journey (Edric didnt know anything about the following event until after he set off).But this one was an awful journey. He saw entire cities burned to the ground and life of people wrecked an destroyed. He ventured down way to St. Jessica and saw the same thing. The screams and fire, the land. All destroyed. He had a lot of pride for his land and did what every he could to help out. He saw children and babies left alone and skeletons everywhere. He reflected on his life and felt sorry for these children, never growing up in happiness, but in a destroyed family and land.
He knew life was hard, like war and poverty that was in his family, but he never knew life was this hard. Edric gave up on being an explorer. He set up shelters to help the families and people.
While on this month long journey he received news Alann was destroyed. He rushed back just to see the same pictures again. But this time his family and nation was in it. It was a terrible site. He rushed to help his family. By the time then, the university was destroyed and everyone dropped out. Edric had to get a job, where would he work? Soon news reached that Enris was untouched. Edric mind then thought of untouched nature....safe and still peaceful.Edric had to go to Enris...to get a job and help his family out. Edric then explained to his family the awful situation the Cordolan Confederation was in. At that point Edric claims, his goal was to help and save the entire land. He stayed in Alann for 2 weeks to get news that the second oldest brother was dead, which was Edric's favorite brother.Edric's last spark of adventure lit. Edric had an mission to save and restore land, and restore it even better than before. He wanted to start a new future and to avenge his brother. Edric doesn't care about himself anymore, he cares about his family,the land, the people and his brother. Edric looking for a place to start, chooses Enris. He gets on his horse, packs his bags, and faces toward Enris, ready to go, with his adventurous spirit on.
Edric is going undercoved as an victim of the recent events. He will an normal man that fleed to Enris. He doesn't want people to know his goal and wants to go undercovered.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): Edric's goal is too save the entire land, no matter what it takes. He doesn't want to see his land and nation like this, it pains him. He also wants to help his family out. He needs to get a good job to help his family. Edric also needs a place to start life, he is young, just beginning year 20 of his life.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Edric is very smart, wise and strong. He is also tough and has an strong mental mind, which comes from his adventuring.
Weaknesses (Balance out yours character's strengths with suitable weaknesses. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. I.E. Not knowing how to use a bow as a miner.): Edric loves adventures, and can be tricked very easily with one. He likes to think way to far, and think of the impossible, which sometimes makes him get into trouble. He is foolish when it comes to some things.
What is your character's personality? (Optional; use this field to note character traits that you feel don't fit into either strengths or weaknesses if you wish): He can adapt to stuff easily, which is good sometimes. He is sort of friendly but sometimes he isn't. His mouth can get him in trouble.
Bonus Language (Caro is free):
Arturan - Language of the civilized elves
Scholar:
Savage - Forlorn language, but also spoken by outcasts, exiles and wanderers
When i get my 8 Character point (Linguist):
Runic - Language of the Halfmen, it has been slowly dying off for centuries
Allani -
Character Traits (up to 7 points worth):
Scholar -2 (From his time of learning and reading)
Chef -2 (Learning how to survive in the wild)
Simple Weapons Proficiency - 1
Ranged Weapons Proficiency - 1 (All 3 from training in the army and learning in the wild)
Light Armor Proficiency - 1
Human talent: Roll-1
When i get my 8 Character point:
Linguist -1
Please note i may change Scholar for Fast Healing (not sure if it will be something else)
and Cross-Country Runner, in-game as the Roleplay progresses.
Please use the following link to read up on all the traits available: Trait System.
Your traits MUST COINCIDE with your character in description and biography. Whitelisters can and will defer apps if your traits do not match your character. New characters begin with 7 trait points, but a final eighth point can be earned in character through training. Some traits such as alchemy and arcane magic can only be obtained in game. You can learn new traits through in-character training at the expense of replacing one of your previously known traits. Some traits cost more than one point, so please ask if you have any questions.
I have finshed! If you have any advice for me (even if i am accepted) feel free to tell me!
I have re-posted my app to make it easier! My original is on Page 9!
Do you wish to join our community Skype chat? If so, what is your Skype username? (This is optional): I don't go on Skype often but my username is BeastyXEC
Have you read and agreed to both the rules and the lore of the server?: Yep!
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is when you make your character OP (Over powered) or making it so that ones character does something without letting the other rp respond or react.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is when you use information from outside of rp to benifit rp.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplay is basically acting out as a character with other characters as if a play, but it is often unscripted and it tells a story.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one. Not even my mum.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: Not unless the character you want to cause the death to allows it.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: OOC channel or ((Like this))
Do you have any previous RP experience, Minecraft or elsewhere? (Optional): Yep. RP'ed on fourms, minecraft servers, subreddits, etc,.
Character Information[/b][/b]
Name: Sven
Age: 17
Race: Half-Elf, Half-Drow. (Please let this be possible, I made my whole character's backstory about this )
Physical description: Dark brown medium length hair, pale-ish face with red eyes. Skinny, barely any muscle but not anorexic. 5'9 (on a good day)
Biography (Minimum 225 words. Most very
fleshed-out characters have around 300, but feel free to use even more
than that if you wish. Try and avoid clichés such as loved one being
killed by bandits or the like):
Sven was a freak. There was no question to it. Being born as a drow was bad enough, but at least they were accepted by their own. But being born half-elf half-drow? That was a nightmare.
His father, who was an elf, took care of him after his mother left after he was born. His father always wanted to live in the city, studying magic from the thousands of books that they had, but unfortunately Sven's eyes gave away the monster he was. The rest of his body was fine, an ideal body of an elf. But his drow eyes could be seen a mile away.
They lived in the sewers, eating (almost) anything edible. It wasn't an idea life for his father, being raised on high standards, but he loved his son, no matter what happened.
While eavesdropping on a few humans, they talked about a woman named Saviesa. Apparently she was a 'deity', someone of great mystical power of wisdom and knowledge. The humans talked highly of her, called her one of the most smartest people on the planet. If she was so smart, could she possibly help him? Make him a pure elf? This gave him hope, hope that he desperately needed.
So every night when his father fell asleep, he layed on the sewer floor, praying to Saviesa, praying that one day he will meet her, and help him.
On his 17 birthday, he set out to find his goal, leaving his father to go back to his home town and live out the rest of his life.
Even though Sven wants to be 'cured', is it really what he wants? After all, his drow blood hasn't showed it's true potential, it's hunger for battle, something Sven doesn't want. The question is, will he make his drow blood disappear, or will the drow blood make him disappear?
DUN DUN DUNN
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
To be fully Elven and live with his father.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):
Spiritually open. Very in depth with the woods.
Weaknesses (Balance out yours character's
strengths with suitable weaknesses. Not knowing how to do something that
is outside of your class is not a weakness. I.E. Not knowing how to use
a bow as a miner.):
When Sven gets angry his drow blood comes out to play and things get...bad.
What is your character's personality?
(Optional; use this field to note character traits that you feel don't
fit into either strengths or weaknesses if you wish):
Open minded, peaceful, emotional, friendly. If you get him mad he goes into a state where he is closed minded, war driven and unfriendly.
Bonus Language (Caro is free):
I forgot what it's called but it's the one where it's spoken by outlaws?
Character Traits (up to 7 points worth):[/b][/b]
Follower[/b][/b]
I don't know any more character traits for my character. Any recommendations?[/b][/b]
I know this is your first time, but this application doesn't meet our standards. For starters, your grammar is messy. Please fix that up. Anyways, your character is little on the generic side. You seem to be more intent on making a videogame protagonist than an actual person. Nobody on this server immediately begins as the hero, or with the mindset of one. It makes your character very bland. Also, you cannot say that your character knows alchemy in your app without permission from staff. Finally, you did the Traits math wrong. Your starting total adds up to 8, not 7 TP. Just fix these up and repost your app.
HeartlessAngelXO
While your half-breed race is possible, it's too improbable to be realistic. Drow hate Elves. Also, your char's dominant genes appear to be Elven, and Elf Years are 2.5 times longer than Human Years. This would make your char less than 8 years old, physically and mentally. Your bio doesn't look fleshed out enough, and as a result you don't have too many useful traits. I can't let you on until you fix these, because your character would have a hard time functioning mechanically. Also, it should be worth mentioning that your character's goals are simply not possible. There's no way in the world to change your race, and the odds of anyone meeting the gods for any reason are lower than Half-Life 3 being announced. Fix all of this up, and then repost your app.
I know this is your first time, but this application doesn't meet our standards. For starters, your grammar is messy. Please fix that up. Anyways, your character is little on the generic side. You seem to be more intent on making a videogame protagonist than an actual person. Nobody on this server immediately begins as the hero, or with the mindset of one. It makes your character very bland. Also, you cannot say that your character knows alchemy in your app without permission from staff. Finally, you did the Traits math wrong. Your starting total adds up to 8, not 7 TP. Just fix these up and repost your app.
HeartlessAngelXO
While your half-breed race is possible, it's too improbable to be realistic. Drow hate Elves. Also, your char's dominant genes appear to be Elven, and Elf Years are 2.5 times longer than Human Years. This would make your char less than 8 years old, physically and mentally. Your bio doesn't look fleshed out enough, and as a result you don't have too many useful traits. I can't let you on until you fix these, because your character would have a hard time functioning mechanically. Also, it should be worth mentioning that your character's goals are simply not possible. There's no way in the world to change your race, and the odds of anyone meeting the gods for any reason are lower than Half-Life 3 being announced. Fix all of this up, and then repost your app.
Yes, but you replying bumped the thread up a page, hahah. So you might as well repost it. It's on the OP that says we would like it reposted after you get deferred, even if it's on the same page.
Do you wish to join our community Skype chat? If so, what is your Skype username? (This is optional): Do not have Skype.
Have you read and agreed to both the rules and the lore of the server?:Yes! I 100% agree and are find with them!
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is forcing RP in someone, and they dont have an opportunity to respond.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is when your character has knowledge it shouldn't know. Like a miner telling a warrior how to fight.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: The acting out or performance of a role. Being in the shoes of your character and really act like its you.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one at all.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: If they allow it, and also if its a RP death. (Not just kill someone because they want to die)
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: You can only speak out of character in the OOC channel, a private message, or with (( message ))
Do you have any previous RP experience, Minecraft or elsewhere? (Optional): No! This is actually my first one ever!
Character Information
Name: Edric
Age: 20
Race: Human
Physical description: Edric has black hair, a tan skin and is very firm from lots of training. He is average height and he is also young.
Screen capture of your skin (I recommend uploading to imgur and posting link here): http://imgur.com/a/Bb1tX#0 My skin of an explorer!
Biography (Minimum 225 words. Most very fleshed-out characters have around 300, but feel free to use even more than that if you wish. Try and avoid clichés such as loved one being killed by bandits or the like):
Edric was born in a small town in Alann. Edric was taught to be a fierce warrior and a wise student. His father was a mighty commander that fought for the lands of Alann and his mother was a teacher with unknown origin. He had two older brothers, one younger brother, and one younger sister. His family was always poor, and there main source of income was from their father's job as a warrior. Edric would study, train and play with his family and siblings for hours. He read books on the entire land, his nation as well as many other subjects. He knew all kinds of things and was well educated. He even went to best school (even though school didn't matter in Alann). Edric spend hours training and was really strong. His father called him a sure warrior. From a young age Edric remember fighting with a sword. Alann installed great pride for Alann and the Confederation in all its citizens. Unfortunately, what always lingered in his family was poverty. The constant threat of going homeless and hungry was there. Some days they did go hungry. Edric had one thing trait that nether his mother or father really liked, and it was his adventurous spirit. This was something rare at these times since people thought adventurers are useless fellows and just like to get in trouble. Edric would secretly do mini adventures by himself and sometimes with his brothers and sisters. His father wanted Edric to be a warrior and his mother wanted Edric to study hard.
One day, there father got seriously injured. He was slabbed and was bleeding .13 year old Edric had more responsibly. The oldest brother, who was 18 years old, became the main provider of the house. After his father got better, his father couldn't go back as a warrior and the oldest brother couldn't maintain both his kids and wife and them. In the end, they decided to create a shop. The nation of Alann didn't really approve of the shop, the reason why was that the military was the most important thing, not shops or businesses. Edric worked in the army, worked in the family shop, and went on adventures. He learned how to deal under pressure. Edric and his second oldest brother was always going in the wild looking for things and materials they could sell. They had adventures and lots of fun. The business went smoothly and they made enough money to maintain there selves and to have enough left over. As Edric grew up over the years, he grew more adventurous and when he reached 15, he set off and left Alann for two weeks. There Edric grew stronger and learned more things while in Drunn and the Horizon. His brother enjoyed listening to Edric's adventures. Edric learned how to fish and hunt and to survive on his own, something that would be useful in the future.
When Edric reached 18 he was ready to go to the university. He wanted to be a business man, as he had a lot of experience from working in the shop. (Although deep down he wanted to be an explorer). After two years of learning business and so much other subjects, Edric, now 20, changed his mind. He dropped out of university and his family was stunned. Edric simply explained to them "I want to be explorer." His family was surprised and tried to convince Edric to go back to school...but that never worked. Edric now a man, decided he must settle down and begin his adult life. He decided he doesn't want to live in constant warring Alann or in any troubled nation. He finds Enris as his best option, student-wise, and job-wise. Also Enris is the main nation and the blessed lands, which he feels are great for exploration. So there is his destination, Enris.
Edric was packing his backs when troubling news came. He heard his family was in major finical crisis. They still had a 15 year old girl (his sister) and 13 year old boy (his brother) to worry about. They were more poor than ever, and Edric tried to help out. Edric told his family that only Enris has jobs which pay enough, and he thought it was a good time to mention that there was where he was moving to. To clear his mind, Edric set off to another journey (Edric didnt know anything about the following event until after he set off).But this one was an awful journey. He saw entire cities burned to the ground and life of people wrecked and destroyed. He ventured down way to St. Jessica just to see the same thing. The screams and fire, the land. All destroyed. He had a lot of pride for his land and did what every he could to help out. He saw children and babies left alone and skeletons everywhere. He reflected on his life and felt sorry for these children, never growing up in happiness, but in a destroyed family and land.
Edric felt his spark of explorer was less. While on this month long journey he received news Alann was destroyed. He rushed back just to see the same pictures again. But this time his family and nation was in it. It was a terrible site. He rushed to help his family. Edric had to get a job to help his family out. Soon news reached that Enris was untouched. Edric mind then thought of untouched nature....safe and still peaceful. Edric had to go to Enris...to get a job and help his family out.This was a once in a life time opportunity. Edric then explained to his family the awful situation the Cordolan Confederation was in. At that point Edric claims, his goal was to help and save the entire land. Alann's people had great pride and they wanted to stop the undead sieges. He stayed in Alann for two weeks and he soon after his stay he got news that the second oldest brother was dead, which was Edric's favorite brother. Edric's last spark of adventure lit. Out of pride for his nation, Edric wanted to save and restore land, and restore it even better than before. He gets on his horse, packs his bags, and faces toward Enris, ready to go, with his adventurous spirit on.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
To get a job in Enris, to help him start off his life and more importantly to help his family.
(Other second Motivations)
-Edric needs a place to begin his exploration, and he feels Enris is The right place
-Edric wants to help the nations stop these invaders, in honor of his brother and his pride.
-(This a future Motivation, in The future) To study and and become a professor
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Edric is very smart, wise and strong. He is also tough and has an strong mental mind, which comes from his adventuring.
Weaknesses (Balance out yours character's strengths with suitable weaknesses. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. I.E. Not knowing how to use a bow as a miner.): Edric loves adventures, and can be tricked very easily with one. He likes to think way to far, and think of the impossible, which sometimes makes him get into trouble. He is foolish when it comes to some things. Edric is young, and well looking for a mate, and that could make weak and tricked.
What is your character's personality? (Optional; use this field to note character traits that you feel don't fit into either strengths or weaknesses if you wish): He can adapt to stuff easily, which is good sometimes. He isn't hat friendly, but he is friendly at times. His mouth can get him in trouble.
Bonus Language (Caro is free):
Arturan - Language of the civilized elves
Scholar:
Savage - Forlorn language, but also spoken by outcasts, exiles and wanderers
When i get my 8 Character point (Linguist):
Runic - Language of the Halfmen, it has been slowly dying off for centuries
Allani -
Character Traits (up to 7 points worth):
Scholar -2 (From his time of learning and reading)
Chef -2 (Learning how to survive in the wild)
Simple Weapons Proficiency - 1
Ranged Weapons Proficiency - 1 (All 3 from training in the army and learning in the wild)
Light Armor Proficiency - 1
Human talent: Roll-1
When i get my 8 Character point:
Linguist -1
Please note i may change Scholar for Fast Healing (not sure if it will be something else)
and Cross-Country Runner, in-game as the Roleplay progresses.
Please use the following link to read up on all the traits available: Trait System.
Your traits MUST COINCIDE with your character in description and biography. Whitelisters can and will defer apps if your traits do not match your character. New characters begin with 7 trait points, but a final eighth point can be earned in character through training. Some traits such as alchemy and arcane magic can only be obtained in game. You can learn new traits through in-character training at the expense of replacing one of your previously known traits. Some traits cost more than one point, so please ask if you have any questions.
I have finshed! If you have any advice for me (even if i am accepted) feel free to tell me!
I'm glad you've fixed up the traits and alchemy issue, but you've still got glaring grammar errors to fix, and your bio still seems generic and not unique enough. Let me elaborate on this: You are using tired story elements such as "broken family," and "save the land." You're not elaborating further on exactly WHAT he wants to "save the land" from, and your character also doesn't even seem to have a plan for this. Let me make this clear: Your character will not be anywhere near a main protagonist. Your character is supposed to start off as a regular person, and your bio just seems to assume that everything's going to be automatically laid out for him. It's not. That is the impression I am getting from your app and I recommend rethinking your character a bit before reposting.
Take all the time and mental resources you need. I'm not suggesting a complete rewrite of the bio. That's a little extreme. You should only do a complete rewrite if you're not confident about submitting your app. We want our applicants to feel confident while we review their apps.
Try quoting yourself in a post? I think you can do that.
This is what I thought of too.
Sorry guys....stupid Apple, I can't quote any long posts.
My computer is acting weird, when I get it fixed like 1 hour later I will repost my app. Ugh, Apple
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Do you wish to join our community Skype chat? If so, what is your Skype username? (This is optional): I’m already in it.
Have you read and agreed to both the rules and the lore of the server?: Yes.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is when a person forces an action or the results of an action on another without their consent. *slices his head off* is powergaming whereas *swings his axe at his head* is not.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using out of character information in character.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplaying is when you take on the role of another character and play them. You act out their actions, feelings, and personality with others.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: Nobody.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When you have the other person’s permission.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: In out of character chat or with the use of ((double parentheses))
Do you have any previous RP experience, Minecraft or elsewhere? (Optional): I’ve played on Silverage, Book of Halegron, Shrines of the Ancients, The Anerian Chronicles, and The Wayward Ones. In addition to Minecraft roleplay servers I’ve also played D&D 3.5 for several years.
Character Information
Name: Treven B. Highwall
Age: 63 (25 in human years)
Race: Elf
Physical description: Treven has bright green eyes and well kempt short black hair. He has a rather skinny stature and is of an average height. As a well accustomed traveler his hands are worn, but he holds the appearance of a business man.
Screen capture of your skin (I recommend uploading to imgur and posting link here):
http://i.imgur.com/PvvUH9G.
Biography (Minimum 225 words. Most very fleshed-out characters have around 300, but feel free to use even more than that if you wish. Try and avoid clichés such as loved one being killed by bandits or the like):
Treven grew up with his parents in the forests of mainland Rinion among a tribe of wild elves. Both his father (Arlen) and his mother (Meillion) worked as translators and merchants facilitating trade between the tribes and various merchants along the ports. At a fairly young age his mother started taking Treven on trips from his home in the forest out to trading settlements. As Treven became more accustomed to the city he began his proper schooling, learning of his people (both Arturan Elves and Nomadic Elves) as well as the greater world around him. It was here that he became close friends with a kid by the name of Kalad who belonged to a Rinion-Drunn trading family. As a wild elf he was often looked down upon by others but he quickly showed his class that he deserved a place in school. Treven earned high marks in language and economics, though he fell a bit flat when it came to more physical activities. Later he found that Kalad’s parents had been close to Meillion in their Drunn expeditions. As Treven grew older his mother took him on more and more trips across the continent. He visited Drunn several times with his childhood friend Kalad as well as Arturan and the Crownlands. Being the young kid that he was Treven often found himself committing rather mischievous actions involving certain Drunn artifacts, but nothing too serious ever really came from it. When Treven was 40 (16 in human years) his father Arlen moved to Enris, leaving his one child and wife Meillion to run the business. Arlen assisted in trading deals between the mixing pot and holy land that was Enris and other nations that Treven and Meillion had strong connections with. When the undead sieges began to occur Arlen stayed behind with whatever forces remained, desperately trying to keep supply lines to support the cities. As one city after another fell, so did Arlen. Now Treven is taking his friend Kalad to the new world to fill his father’s role and act as a mediator for the struggling nation and the rest of the greater world.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
Treven seeks to uphold his family’s business and to support the nation that his father died for.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Due to Treven’s wide education and knowledge of the world he’s very open-minded and accepting of others. Treven has a way with words, negotiating agreements and trade deals.
Weaknesses (Balance out yours character's strengths with suitable weaknesses. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. I.E. Not knowing how to use a bow as a miner.): Treven is physically weak, more well versed in the academic side of life. He also has troubles making personal connections with others and expressing his emotions to their fullest.
Bonus Languages (Caro is free):
Caro (Default)
Wild Elven (Starting language)
Arturan (Scholar)
Allani (Linguist)
Runic (Linguist)
Character Traits (up to 7 points worth):
Merchant – 1 Point
Savings I – 1 Point
Orator – 1 Point
Linguist – 1 Point
Scholar – 2 Points
Accepted
baeshra:
The first pre-launch baeshrapp. I feel honored to be a part of this. Welcome to the server, uh, boss.
Random Question
Just wanted to know how much people are in the Roleplay!
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You mean how many players have been accepted to the server? I think we're around 30 at this point, plus staff.
30! Wow, can't wait to see who I will meet
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I haven't finished reading everything but this server looks really cool already I most likely won't be able to apply by launch though--but I'm excited to rejoin the community!
Out of Character Information
IGN: ExplorerEze
Do you wish to join our community Skype chat? If so, what is your Skype username? (This is optional): Do not have Skype.
Have you read and agreed to both the rules and the lore of the server?: Yes! I 100% agree and are find with them!
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is forcing RP in someone, and they dont have an opportunity to respond.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is when your character has knowledge it shouldn't know. Like a miner telling a warrior how to fight.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: The acting out or performance of a role. Being in the shoes of your character and really act like its you.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one at all.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: If they allow it, and also if its a RP death. (Not just kill someone because they want to die)
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: You can only speak out of character in the OOC channel, a private message, or with (( message ))
Do you have any previous RP experience, Minecraft or elsewhere? (Optional): No! This is actually my first one ever!
Character Information
Name: Edric
Age: 20
Race: Human
Physical description: Edric has black hair, a tan skin and is very firm from lots of training. He is average height and he is also young.
Screen capture of your skin (I recommend uploading to imgur and posting link here): http://imgur.com/a/Bb1tX#0 My skin of an explorer!
https://seuscraft.com/tools/stealer His is my skin when I first enter the game! I will change it too the second one as time goes on!
Biography (Minimum 225 words. Most very fleshed-out characters have around 300, but feel free to use even more than that if you wish. Try and avoid clichés such as loved one being killed by bandits or the like):
Edric was born in Alann. His father was a warrior for Alann and his mother was a teacher from unknown lands.
He had 2 older brothers, 1 younger brother and 1 younger sister. His family was poor, and there main source of income was from their father's job as a warrior. He loved his old life, even though he was poor. He would study, train and also play with his family and siblings for hours. He read books on the entire land and his nation. He knew all kinds of things. He went to best school (even though school didn't matter in Alann). Edric spend hours training and was really strong. His father called him a sure warrior. But, what always lingered in his family was war and poverty. The constant threat of being attacked or going homeless and hungry. Some days they did go hungry. He seemed so normal, and he was. There was just one thing that nether his mother or father really liked, and it was his adventurous spirit. This was something rare at these times since people thought adventurers are useless and just like to get in trouble. Edric would secretly do mini adventures by himself and sometimes with his brothers and sisters.
One day, there father got hurt badly. He was slabbed and was bleeding.13-year old Edric had alot of more responsibly. The oldest brother, who was 18 years old, became the main provider of the house. After his father got better, his father couldn't go back as a warrior and the oldest brother couldn't maintain both his kids and wife and them. In the end, they decided to create a shop. Edric and his second oldest brother was always going in the wild looking for things and materials they could sell. They had adventures an lots of fun. The business went smoothly. They made enough money to mantain there selves and to have enough left over.As Edric grew up over the years, he grew more adventurous and when he reached 15, he set off and left Alann for 2 weeks. There Edric grew more strong and learned more things while in Drunn and the Horizon. He learned how to fish and hunt and to survive on his own, something that would be useful in the future.
When Edric reached 18 he was ready to go to the university. He wanted to be a business man. (Deep down he wanted to be an explorer). After 2 years of learning , Edric reached 20 and something unexpected happened. A mysterious event brought more war to Alann and it was during this time his famiy got really poor. They still had a 15 year old girl (his sister) and 13 year old boy (his brother) to worry about. They were more poor than ever, and Edric tried to help out. To clear his mind, Edric set off to another journey (Edric didnt know anything about the following event until after he set off).But this one was an awful journey. He saw entire cities burned to the ground and life of people wrecked an destroyed. He ventured down way to St. Jessica and saw the same thing. The screams and fire, the land. All destroyed. He had a lot of pride for his land and did what every he could to help out. He saw children and babies left alone and skeletons everywhere. He reflected on his life and felt sorry for these children, never growing up in happiness, but in a destroyed family and land.
He knew life was hard, like war and poverty that was in his family, but he never knew life was this hard. Edric gave up on being an explorer. He set up shelters to help the families and people.
While on this month long journey he received news Alann was destroyed. He rushed back just to see the same pictures again. But this time his family and nation was in it. It was a terrible site. He rushed to help his family. By the time then, the university was destroyed and everyone dropped out. Edric had to get a job, where would he work? Soon news reached that Enris was untouched. Edric mind then thought of untouched nature....safe and still peaceful.Edric had to go to Enris...to get a job and help his family out. Edric then explained to his family the awful situation the Cordolan Confederation was in. At that point Edric claims, his goal was to help and save the entire land. He stayed in Alann for 2 weeks to get news that the second oldest brother was dead, which was Edric's favorite brother.Edric's last spark of adventure lit. Edric had an mission to save and restore land, and restore it even better than before. He wanted to start a new future and to avenge his brother. Edric doesn't care about himself anymore, he cares about his family,the land, the people and his brother. Edric looking for a place to start, chooses Enris. He gets on his horse, packs his bags, and faces toward Enris, ready to go, with his adventurous spirit on.
Edric is going undercoved as an victim of the recent events. He will an normal man that fleed to Enris. He doesn't want people to know his goal and wants to go undercovered.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): Edric's goal is too save the entire land, no matter what it takes. He doesn't want to see his land and nation like this, it pains him. He also wants to help his family out. He needs to get a good job to help his family. Edric also needs a place to start life, he is young, just beginning year 20 of his life.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Edric is very smart, wise and strong. He is also tough and has an strong mental mind, which comes from his adventuring.
Weaknesses (Balance out yours character's strengths with suitable weaknesses. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. I.E. Not knowing how to use a bow as a miner.): Edric loves adventures, and can be tricked very easily with one. He likes to think way to far, and think of the impossible, which sometimes makes him get into trouble. He is foolish when it comes to some things.
What is your character's personality? (Optional; use this field to note character traits that you feel don't fit into either strengths or weaknesses if you wish): He can adapt to stuff easily, which is good sometimes. He is sort of friendly but sometimes he isn't. His mouth can get him in trouble.
Bonus Language (Caro is free):
Arturan - Language of the civilized elves
Scholar:
Savage - Forlorn language, but also spoken by outcasts, exiles and wanderers
When i get my 8 Character point (Linguist):
Runic - Language of the Halfmen, it has been slowly dying off for centuries
Allani -
Character Traits (up to 7 points worth):
Scholar -2 (From his time of learning and reading)
Chef -2 (Learning how to survive in the wild)
Simple Weapons Proficiency - 1
Ranged Weapons Proficiency - 1 (All 3 from training in the army and learning in the wild)
Light Armor Proficiency - 1
When i get my 8 Character point:
Linguist -1
Please note i may change Scholar for Fast Healing (not sure if it will be something else)
and Cross-Country Runner, in-game as the Roleplay progresses.
Please use the following link to read up on all the traits available: Trait System.
Your traits MUST COINCIDE with your character in description and biography. Whitelisters can and will defer apps if your traits do not match your character. New characters begin with 7 trait points, but a final eighth point can be earned in character through training. Some traits such as alchemy and arcane magic can only be obtained in game. You can learn new traits through in-character training at the expense of replacing one of your previously known traits. Some traits cost more than one point, so please ask if you have any questions.
I have finshed! If you have any advice for me (even if i am accepted) feel free to tell me!
I have re-posted my app to make it easier! My original is on Page 9!
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Sorry, some poor wording on my part for Talented- You need to select your Talent from the provided list of options.
IGN: HeartlessAngelXO
Do you wish to join our community Skype chat? If so, what is your Skype username? (This is optional): I don't go on Skype often but my username is BeastyXEC
Have you read and agreed to both the rules and the lore of the server?: Yep!
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is when you make your character OP (Over powered) or making it so that ones character does something without letting the other rp respond or react.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is when you use information from outside of rp to benifit rp.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplay is basically acting out as a character with other characters as if a play, but it is often unscripted and it tells a story.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one. Not even my mum.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: Not unless the character you want to cause the death to allows it.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: OOC channel or ((Like this))
Do you have any previous RP experience, Minecraft or elsewhere? (Optional): Yep. RP'ed on fourms, minecraft servers, subreddits, etc,.
Character Information[/b][/b]
Name: Sven
Age: 17
Race: Half-Elf, Half-Drow. (Please let this be possible, I made my whole character's backstory about this )
Physical description: Dark brown medium length hair, pale-ish face with red eyes. Skinny, barely any muscle but not anorexic. 5'9 (on a good day)
Screen capture of your skin (I recommend uploading to imgur and posting link here): I'm too lazy but here's what the skin looks like: http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/5634159/random-pvp-elf/
Biography (Minimum 225 words. Most very
fleshed-out characters have around 300, but feel free to use even more
than that if you wish. Try and avoid clichés such as loved one being
killed by bandits or the like):
Sven was a freak. There was no question to it. Being born as a drow was bad enough, but at least they were accepted by their own. But being born half-elf half-drow? That was a nightmare.
His father, who was an elf, took care of him after his mother left after he was born. His father always wanted to live in the city, studying magic from the thousands of books that they had, but unfortunately Sven's eyes gave away the monster he was. The rest of his body was fine, an ideal body of an elf. But his drow eyes could be seen a mile away.
They lived in the sewers, eating (almost) anything edible. It wasn't an idea life for his father, being raised on high standards, but he loved his son, no matter what happened.
While eavesdropping on a few humans, they talked about a woman named Saviesa. Apparently she was a 'deity', someone of great mystical power of wisdom and knowledge. The humans talked highly of her, called her one of the most smartest people on the planet. If she was so smart, could she possibly help him? Make him a pure elf? This gave him hope, hope that he desperately needed.
So every night when his father fell asleep, he layed on the sewer floor, praying to Saviesa, praying that one day he will meet her, and help him.
On his 17 birthday, he set out to find his goal, leaving his father to go back to his home town and live out the rest of his life.
Even though Sven wants to be 'cured', is it really what he wants? After all, his drow blood hasn't showed it's true potential, it's hunger for battle, something Sven doesn't want. The question is, will he make his drow blood disappear, or will the drow blood make him disappear?
DUN DUN DUNN
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
To be fully Elven and live with his father.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):
Spiritually open. Very in depth with the woods.
Weaknesses (Balance out yours character's
strengths with suitable weaknesses. Not knowing how to do something that
is outside of your class is not a weakness. I.E. Not knowing how to use
a bow as a miner.):
When Sven gets angry his drow blood comes out to play and things get...bad.
What is your character's personality?
(Optional; use this field to note character traits that you feel don't
fit into either strengths or weaknesses if you wish):
Open minded, peaceful, emotional, friendly. If you get him mad he goes into a state where he is closed minded, war driven and unfriendly.
Bonus Language (Caro is free):
I forgot what it's called but it's the one where it's spoken by outlaws?
Character Traits (up to 7 points worth):[/b][/b]
Follower[/b][/b]
I don't know any more character traits for my character. Any recommendations?[/b][/b]
Deferred:
ExplorerEze:
I know this is your first time, but this application doesn't meet our standards. For starters, your grammar is messy. Please fix that up. Anyways, your character is little on the generic side. You seem to be more intent on making a videogame protagonist than an actual person. Nobody on this server immediately begins as the hero, or with the mindset of one. It makes your character very bland. Also, you cannot say that your character knows alchemy in your app without permission from staff. Finally, you did the Traits math wrong. Your starting total adds up to 8, not 7 TP. Just fix these up and repost your app.
HeartlessAngelXO
While your half-breed race is possible, it's too improbable to be realistic. Drow hate Elves. Also, your char's dominant genes appear to be Elven, and Elf Years are 2.5 times longer than Human Years. This would make your char less than 8 years old, physically and mentally. Your bio doesn't look fleshed out enough, and as a result you don't have too many useful traits. I can't let you on until you fix these, because your character would have a hard time functioning mechanically. Also, it should be worth mentioning that your character's goals are simply not possible. There's no way in the world to change your race, and the odds of anyone meeting the gods for any reason are lower than Half-Life 3 being announced. Fix all of this up, and then repost your app.
Edited.........and removed post.
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Yes, but you replying bumped the thread up a page, hahah. So you might as well repost it. It's on the OP that says we would like it reposted after you get deferred, even if it's on the same page.
Out of Character Information
IGN: ExplorerEze
Do you wish to join our community Skype chat? If so, what is your Skype username? (This is optional): Do not have Skype.
Have you read and agreed to both the rules and the lore of the server?: Yes! I 100% agree and are find with them!
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Powergaming is forcing RP in someone, and they dont have an opportunity to respond.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is when your character has knowledge it shouldn't know. Like a miner telling a warrior how to fight.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: The acting out or performance of a role. Being in the shoes of your character and really act like its you.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one at all.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: If they allow it, and also if its a RP death. (Not just kill someone because they want to die)
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: You can only speak out of character in the OOC channel, a private message, or with (( message ))
Do you have any previous RP experience, Minecraft or elsewhere? (Optional): No! This is actually my first one ever!
Character Information
Name: Edric
Age: 20
Race: Human
Physical description: Edric has black hair, a tan skin and is very firm from lots of training. He is average height and he is also young.
Screen capture of your skin (I recommend uploading to imgur and posting link here): http://imgur.com/a/Bb1tX#0 My skin of an explorer!
https://seuscraft.com/tools/stealer His is my skin when I first enter the game! I will change it too the second one as time goes on!
Biography (Minimum 225 words. Most very fleshed-out characters have around 300, but feel free to use even more than that if you wish. Try and avoid clichés such as loved one being killed by bandits or the like):
Edric was born in a small town in Alann. Edric was taught to be a fierce warrior and a wise student. His father was a mighty commander that fought for the lands of Alann and his mother was a teacher with unknown origin. He had two older brothers, one younger brother, and one younger sister. His family was always poor, and there main source of income was from their father's job as a warrior. Edric would study, train and play with his family and siblings for hours. He read books on the entire land, his nation as well as many other subjects. He knew all kinds of things and was well educated. He even went to best school (even though school didn't matter in Alann). Edric spend hours training and was really strong. His father called him a sure warrior. From a young age Edric remember fighting with a sword. Alann installed great pride for Alann and the Confederation in all its citizens. Unfortunately, what always lingered in his family was poverty. The constant threat of going homeless and hungry was there. Some days they did go hungry. Edric had one thing trait that nether his mother or father really liked, and it was his adventurous spirit. This was something rare at these times since people thought adventurers are useless fellows and just like to get in trouble. Edric would secretly do mini adventures by himself and sometimes with his brothers and sisters. His father wanted Edric to be a warrior and his mother wanted Edric to study hard.
One day, there father got seriously injured. He was slabbed and was bleeding .13 year old Edric had more responsibly. The oldest brother, who was 18 years old, became the main provider of the house. After his father got better, his father couldn't go back as a warrior and the oldest brother couldn't maintain both his kids and wife and them. In the end, they decided to create a shop. The nation of Alann didn't really approve of the shop, the reason why was that the military was the most important thing, not shops or businesses. Edric worked in the army, worked in the family shop, and went on adventures. He learned how to deal under pressure. Edric and his second oldest brother was always going in the wild looking for things and materials they could sell. They had adventures and lots of fun. The business went smoothly and they made enough money to maintain there selves and to have enough left over. As Edric grew up over the years, he grew more adventurous and when he reached 15, he set off and left Alann for two weeks. There Edric grew stronger and learned more things while in Drunn and the Horizon. His brother enjoyed listening to Edric's adventures. Edric learned how to fish and hunt and to survive on his own, something that would be useful in the future.
When Edric reached 18 he was ready to go to the university. He wanted to be a business man, as he had a lot of experience from working in the shop. (Although deep down he wanted to be an explorer). After two years of learning business and so much other subjects, Edric, now 20, changed his mind. He dropped out of university and his family was stunned. Edric simply explained to them "I want to be explorer." His family was surprised and tried to convince Edric to go back to school...but that never worked. Edric now a man, decided he must settle down and begin his adult life. He decided he doesn't want to live in constant warring Alann or in any troubled nation. He finds Enris as his best option, student-wise, and job-wise. Also Enris is the main nation and the blessed lands, which he feels are great for exploration. So there is his destination, Enris.
Edric was packing his backs when troubling news came. He heard his family was in major finical crisis. They still had a 15 year old girl (his sister) and 13 year old boy (his brother) to worry about. They were more poor than ever, and Edric tried to help out. Edric told his family that only Enris has jobs which pay enough, and he thought it was a good time to mention that there was where he was moving to. To clear his mind, Edric set off to another journey (Edric didnt know anything about the following event until after he set off).But this one was an awful journey. He saw entire cities burned to the ground and life of people wrecked and destroyed. He ventured down way to St. Jessica just to see the same thing. The screams and fire, the land. All destroyed. He had a lot of pride for his land and did what every he could to help out. He saw children and babies left alone and skeletons everywhere. He reflected on his life and felt sorry for these children, never growing up in happiness, but in a destroyed family and land.
Edric felt his spark of explorer was less. While on this month long journey he received news Alann was destroyed. He rushed back just to see the same pictures again. But this time his family and nation was in it. It was a terrible site. He rushed to help his family. Edric had to get a job to help his family out. Soon news reached that Enris was untouched. Edric mind then thought of untouched nature....safe and still peaceful. Edric had to go to Enris...to get a job and help his family out.This was a once in a life time opportunity. Edric then explained to his family the awful situation the Cordolan Confederation was in. At that point Edric claims, his goal was to help and save the entire land. Alann's people had great pride and they wanted to stop the undead sieges. He stayed in Alann for two weeks and he soon after his stay he got news that the second oldest brother was dead, which was Edric's favorite brother. Edric's last spark of adventure lit. Out of pride for his nation, Edric wanted to save and restore land, and restore it even better than before. He gets on his horse, packs his bags, and faces toward Enris, ready to go, with his adventurous spirit on.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
To get a job in Enris, to help him start off his life and more importantly to help his family.
(Other second Motivations)
-Edric needs a place to begin his exploration, and he feels Enris is The right place
-Edric wants to help the nations stop these invaders, in honor of his brother and his pride.
-(This a future Motivation, in The future) To study and and become a professor
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Edric is very smart, wise and strong. He is also tough and has an strong mental mind, which comes from his adventuring.
Weaknesses (Balance out yours character's strengths with suitable weaknesses. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. I.E. Not knowing how to use a bow as a miner.): Edric loves adventures, and can be tricked very easily with one. He likes to think way to far, and think of the impossible, which sometimes makes him get into trouble. He is foolish when it comes to some things. Edric is young, and well looking for a mate, and that could make weak and tricked.
What is your character's personality? (Optional; use this field to note character traits that you feel don't fit into either strengths or weaknesses if you wish): He can adapt to stuff easily, which is good sometimes. He isn't hat friendly, but he is friendly at times. His mouth can get him in trouble.
Bonus Language (Caro is free):
Arturan - Language of the civilized elves
Scholar:
Savage - Forlorn language, but also spoken by outcasts, exiles and wanderers
When i get my 8 Character point (Linguist):
Runic - Language of the Halfmen, it has been slowly dying off for centuries
Allani -
Character Traits (up to 7 points worth):
Scholar -2 (From his time of learning and reading)
Chef -2 (Learning how to survive in the wild)
Simple Weapons Proficiency - 1
Ranged Weapons Proficiency - 1 (All 3 from training in the army and learning in the wild)
Light Armor Proficiency - 1
When i get my 8 Character point:
Linguist -1
Please note i may change Scholar for Fast Healing (not sure if it will be something else)
and Cross-Country Runner, in-game as the Roleplay progresses.
Please use the following link to read up on all the traits available: Trait System.
Your traits MUST COINCIDE with your character in description and biography. Whitelisters can and will defer apps if your traits do not match your character. New characters begin with 7 trait points, but a final eighth point can be earned in character through training. Some traits such as alchemy and arcane magic can only be obtained in game. You can learn new traits through in-character training at the expense of replacing one of your previously known traits. Some traits cost more than one point, so please ask if you have any questions.
I have finshed! If you have any advice for me (even if i am accepted) feel free to tell me!
I have re-posted my app for Deferred reasons!
Join Rising Nations!
This server is a history-based server on the 1850s! Join Spain if you every try it out
Awesome Mods I support:
Millernaire Mod!
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Deferred: ExplorerEze:
I'm glad you've fixed up the traits and alchemy issue, but you've still got glaring grammar errors to fix, and your bio still seems generic and not unique enough. Let me elaborate on this: You are using tired story elements such as "broken family," and "save the land." You're not elaborating further on exactly WHAT he wants to "save the land" from, and your character also doesn't even seem to have a plan for this. Let me make this clear: Your character will not be anywhere near a main protagonist. Your character is supposed to start off as a regular person, and your bio just seems to assume that everything's going to be automatically laid out for him. It's not. That is the impression I am getting from your app and I recommend rethinking your character a bit before reposting.
Hmmm ok, i'll rewrite the Bio tomorrow.
Should I recompletely rewrite it? Or do you think i can leave a few elements in there.
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Take all the time and mental resources you need. I'm not suggesting a complete rewrite of the bio. That's a little extreme. You should only do a complete rewrite if you're not confident about submitting your app. We want our applicants to feel confident while we review their apps.