The funny thing is, I never knew you could farm rocks...
Hmm. I was wondering why there is a gain silo on a rock farm. :l
Applejack saying "Cock-a-doodle-doo" was probably where I started to let out all my daww.
Filly Fluttershy was just how I imagined her. You know. That skinny, awkward, introvert girl in middle school. Yep, just how I imagined.
Rarity, when her horn took her to the rock, made me laugh and her little tantrum was great.
Pinky Pie looks... different with long straight hair. But her face when she saw the rainbow, priceless!
Twilight waving her hooves at the egg trying to use some type of force powers was pure "LOL" And does the plant in "Green is Not Your Color" look familiar? :biggrin.gif:
Overall, this episode didn't have a strong plot to it, but It was wickedly cute. Now, if you excuse me, I have to go to the dentist to get all these cavities checked out due to this show.
The funny thing is, I never knew you could farm rocks...
And why farm rocks, anyways? Gems can be found easily in the wild. Unless...
ROCKS ARE MORE EXPENSIVE THEN GEMS?!
Equestria:Where ponies can talk, declared as vegetarians yet discuss eating hot-dogs, rocks are rarer then gems, dogs talk like a character from a book series that doesn't exist in this universe, and there are time lords in a universe that doesn't have them.
TIME LORDS WITH WALL-EYED COMPANIONS
And that brings me to my next point, a Doctor Whooves fan-fic. Which is my first public fan-fic I've ever written. I'm writing it here on the spot, and it will likely be improved on.
Ditzy 'Derpy' Doo was never a normal pony. An accident that occurred when she was just a filly gave her wall-eyes, which for a pegasus, is a problem. On multiple occasions she has caused problems for other ponies, and on one occasion, a huge benefit for ponies everywhere.
It all started in the middle of summer, when after an unfortunate incident where Derpy bumped into a delivery pony's truck and caused furniture to fall out onto some poor pony below, she was grounded by the Mayor of Ponyville from flying. Not that she cared too much about not flying, as walking was less dangerous to her with her wall-eyes. It's been a week since she did that, and even though she has seen the pony she accidentally hurt around town, thankfully she didn't recognize her any of the times she encountered her.
Derpy was walking down the main street of town that fateful day, wondering what she would do. Her only friend Lyra was out of town that day, so Derpy was by herself that day. She mainly wondered around town, looking at the various items that were in stock at the market, before heading over to the Sugar Cube Corner.
Pinkie Pie was her usual upbeat self, working happily in the kitchen making cupcakes. She noticed Derpy walking into the shop.
"Ain't it an absolutely-positively-wonderful-spectacular day, Ditzy Doo?" Said Pinkie, who was putting cupcakes into the oven.
"Pinkie, you really need to stop borrowing phrases from the Apple clan. It really isn't good for you." Derpy replied.
"I really don't CARE about my grammar, as long as my cupcakes taste SPECTACULAR! Mr. and Mrs. Cake are giving me good pay for this job, which allows me to buy all SORTS of crazy ingredients to put in my cupcakes!"
"I really don't care what kind of ingredients you use in your cupcakes. Can I have a dozen?" Derpy was getting impatient at Pinkie Pie, who was starting to make her angry.
"Okey-dokey! Coming right up!"
Pinkie Pie gave Derpy a bag of a dozen cupcakes, fresh from the oven.
"Thanks Pinkie, you're the best." Derpy said.
Derpy turned around from the counter and walked out the door. Or at least, she almost did. She immediately banged into the wall, missing the door by a foot, and leaving her with a small lump on her forehead.
"Ow, stupid wall-eyes" Derpy muttered under her breath. Walking out the door without bumping into anything this time, she noticed that the sun was setting.
"That's strange, the clock said it was 3 when I got up from my nap. It wouldn't be the first time it's happened for me, though, as I've misread the clock due to my wall-eyes before."
Walking down main-street the usual way she went home, which was through the market that was now closed due to it being sun-down.
Suddenly, a loud crashing noise came from the alley to her right. This was strange, as nopony was there, until
a brown pony came charging through, with a curious cutie mark the shape of an hourglass. He had brown fur, and a darker brown mane.
"RUN!" He yelled, with an accent that sounded like he came from Trottingham.
Derpy didn't know what was going on for a brief moment, which ended quite suddenly something that looked like an upside-down ice-cream cone with studs all over it, a rounded top, and a few sticks that had appendages on the end.
"EXTERMINATE THE DOCTOR!" It said, shortly before a blue beam fired from one of the sticks and half-destroyed a cart left out by it's owner.
"WHAT IN BLAZES IS GOING ON OUT THERE?!" Said a unicorn who popped her head out from a window, who had her mane combed, shortly before screaming after seeing the creature, and quickly shut the window and shutters with her magic.
"CATCH THIS!" Yelled the brown pony, suddenly throwing a blue ball at Derpy.
I know the perfect ponytar! You know that part when Fluttershy twirls around because of Rainbow Dash? Yea right there. From that part when she on the cloud to the part when she falls off. Right there. Yes.
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*GASP* So many mods! All so good!
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Noooooo, black screen of death! D:
Ditzy 'Derpy' Doo was never a normal pony. An accident that occurred when she was just a filly gave her wall-eyes, which for a pegasus, is a problem. On multiple occasions she has caused problems for other ponies, and on one occasion, a huge benefit for ponies everywhere.
It all started in the middle of summer, when after an unfortunate incident where Derpy bumped into a delivery pony's truck and caused furniture to fall out onto some poor pony below, she was grounded by the Mayor of Ponyville from flying. Not that she cared too much about not flying, as walking was less dangerous to her with her wall-eyes. It's been a week since she did that, and even though she has seen the pony she accidentally hurt around town, thankfully she didn't recognize her any of the times she encountered her.
Derpy was walking down the main street of town that fateful day, wondering what she would do. Her only friend Lyra was out of town that day, so Derpy was by herself that day. She mainly wondered around town, looking at the various items that were in stock at the market, before heading over to the Sugar Cube Corner.
Pinkie Pie was her usual upbeat self, working happily in the kitchen making cupcakes. She noticed Derpy walking into the shop.
"Ain't it an absolutely-positively-wonderful-spectacular day, Ditzy Doo?" Said Pinkie, who was putting cupcakes into the oven.
"Pinkie, you really need to stop borrowing phrases from the Apple clan. It really isn't good for you." Derpy replied.
"I really don't CARE about my grammar, as long as my cupcakes taste SPECTACULAR! Mr. and Mrs. Cake are giving me good pay for this job, which allows me to buy all SORTS of crazy ingredients to put in my cupcakes!"
"I really don't care what kind of ingredients you use in your cupcakes. Can I have a dozen?" Derpy was getting impatient at Pinkie Pie, who was starting to make her angry.
"Okey-dokey! Coming right up!"
Pinkie Pie gave Derpy a bag of a dozen cupcakes, fresh from the oven.
"Thanks Pinkie, you're the best." Derpy said.
Derpy turned around from the counter and walked out the door. Or at least, she almost did. She immediately banged into the wall, missing the door by a foot, and leaving her with a small lump on her forehead.
"Ow, stupid wall-eyes" Derpy muttered under her breath. Walking out the door without bumping into anything this time, she noticed that the sun was setting.
"That's strange, the clock said it was 3 when I got up from my nap. It wouldn't be the first time it's happened for me, though, as I've misread the clock due to my wall-eyes before."
Walking down main-street the usual way she went home, which was through the market that was now closed due to it being sun-down.
Suddenly, a loud crashing noise came from the alley to her right. This was strange, as nopony was there, until
a brown pony came charging through, with a curious cutie mark the shape of an hourglass. He had brown fur, and a darker brown mane.
"RUN!" He yelled, with an accent that sounded like he came from Trottingham.
Derpy didn't know what was going on for a brief moment, which ended quite suddenly something that looked like an upside-down ice-cream cone with studs all over it, a rounded top, and a few sticks that had appendages on the end.
"EXTERMINATE THE DOCTOR!" It said, shortly before a blue beam fired from one of the sticks and half-destroyed a cart left out by it's owner.
"WHAT IN BLAZES IS GOING ON OUT THERE?!" Said a unicorn who popped her head out from a window, who had her mane combed, shortly before screaming after seeing the creature, and quickly shut the window and shutters with her magic.
"CATCH THIS!" Yelled the brown pony, suddenly throwing a blue ball at Derpy.
I loved episode 23. I always love back story episodes though.
Applejack: really just loves her home and the country.
Rarity: learned her talent for finding gems, which was a nice tie in and throw back to "a dog and pony show".
Fluttershy: I believe she is scared of heights which is why she doesn't fly too much.
Rainbow Dash: well no real development there, but thats ok.
Pinkie Pie: Easily my favorite bit. It shows her tragic past where she never knew happyness, oddly enough that reinforces what I was writing for her in my fanfic, though mines a bit more grimdark.
Twilight: She lost control of her magic, but is powerful, weakest back story save RD.
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"That's strange, the clock said it was 3 when I got up from my nap. It wouldn't be the first time it's happened for me, though, as I've misread the clock due to my wall-eyes before."
The rest was rather good, I liked it, but this line. This line bothers me, The rest is fluid natural, but this line feels forced, it disrupts the flow. Also wall-eyed is used a bit to much, but I have the same problem about sticking to one phrase. I like it would like to read more.
Even if I dont like the idea of the Dalek being in the very first bit, they are the most dangerous thing. But there are scarier things, Angels, that thing where the doctor was on the monorail and it read his mind slowly getting more and more ahead of him until it was the doctor copying it. Those are horrific if done right. "The angels have the box."
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Look it's big red text!
Now that being said. Ponies.
I loved episode 23. I always love back story episodes though.
Applejack: really just loves her home and the country.
Rarity: learned her talent for finding gems, which was a nice tie in and throw back to "a dog and pony show".
Fluttershy: I believe she is scared of heights which is why she doesn't fly too much.
Rainbow Dash: well no real development there, but thats ok.
Pinkie Pie: Easily my favorite bit. It shows her tragic past where she never knew happyness, oddly enough that reinforces what I was writing for her in my fanfic, though mines a bit more grimdark.
Twilight: She lost control of her magic, but is powerful, weakest back story save RD.
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"That's strange, the clock said it was 3 when I got up from my nap. It wouldn't be the first time it's happened for me, though, as I've misread the clock due to my wall-eyes before."
The rest was rather good, I liked it, but this line. This line bothers me, The rest is fluid natural, but this line feels forced, it disrupts the flow. Also wall-eyed is used a bit to much, but I have the same problem about sticking to one phrase. I like it would like to read more.
Even if I dont like the idea of the Dalek being in the very first bit, they are the most dangerous thing. But there are scarier things, Angels, that thing where the doctor was on the monorail and it read his mind slowly getting more and more ahead of him until it was the doctor copying it. Those are horrific if done right. "The angels have the box."
In retrospect, I agree on the fact that the clock line feels like it disrupts the flow. It seems like the viewpoints change. But I really don't know how I could change it to fit better.
Also, I really had trouble decided what alien to pick as well. I didn't want to use Weeping Pegasi, as that would be better suited for a later chapter. Maybe I'll make the Dalek not be a Dalek at all, but something different? Somehow. It's the Doctor, sometimes things just don't make any sense.
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In retrospect, I agree on the fact that the clock line feels like it disrupts the flow. It seems like the viewpoints change. But I really don't know how I could change it to fit better.
Also, I really had trouble decided what alien to pick as well. I didn't want to use Weeping Pegasi, as that would be better suited for a later chapter. Maybe I'll make the Dalek not be a Dalek at all, but something different? Somehow. It's the Doctor, sometimes things just don't make any sense.
It's good, but it fells a little.. I don't know, used. I guess I've just read too much fan fiction. Keep it up though since it's only your first time.
And since I'm feeling a little down, have some sad Luna I made. I kinda said "Screw it!" when it came to the background. ;_;
This looks great! I think the background suits it.
How did you make it? What programme (If any) did you use to make it? Did you colour it yourself? How long did it take?
Sorry for all the questions, I'm doing some research.
Hurrrr.. you like it?
:|
:biggrin.gif:
I like the background too but I just didn't feel like messing around with the shadings and darkness. I gotta get to it one of these days.
Well, I made it using GIMP and my new tablet. I also listened to depressing music, but that's optional. Started out as a rough sketch using the pencil tool. Added a layer or two, copypasta'd the original colors, and used the paintbrush tool to go over my lines. Went in with the eraser to smooth out most of the lines (There are still a few mistakes in there :3), then filled with color for the major parts (the body, mane, tail, ect.) and resmoothed my lines. All in all, it took me a solid day and a half, but it's still not complete. I just felt like sharing.
Research for what if you don't mind me asking? I'm intrigued... :3
:biggrin.gif:
I like the background too but I just didn't feel like messing around with the shadings and darkness. I gotta get to it one of these days.
Well, I made it using GIMP and my new tablet. Started out as a rough sketch using the pencil tool. Added a layer or two, copypasta'd the original colors, and used the paintbrush tool to go over my lines. Went in with the eraser to smooth out most of the lines (There are still a few mistakes in there :3), then filled with color for the major parts (the body, mane, tail, ect.) and resmoothed my lines. All in all, it took me a solid day and a half, but it's still not complete. I just felt like sharing.
Research for what? I'm intrigued... :3
Great, thanks for the info!
Maybe 'research' was the wrong word.
I meant it as in I'm trying to get into digital art (of ponies!) and I want to find out as much as possible about how people construct their images. I think I've just gotta practice, but It's hard trying to do it without anyone noticing when you live with your mum and sister. (And your computer's in the living room!) :tongue.gif:
Maybe 'research' was the wrong word.
I meant it as in I'm trying to get into digital art (of ponies!) and I want to find out as much as possible about how people construct their images. I think I've just gotta practice, but It's hard trying to do it without anyone noticing when you live with your mum and sister. (And your computer's in the living room!) :tongue.gif:
Thanks again!
Oh, well in that case, You're welcome! It's a pretty fun hobby, but it takes a while of looking at reference art and then actually drawing it yourself. But maybe you have a different art style than the shows so get creative! Good luck!
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did anyone hear abput the new WIP MLP minecraft server? Sounds...cool i guess.
A MLP Minecraft server? Dude, I don't have time for minecraft anymore thanks to my job, drawing, and these damnly lovely ponies! I might have to check it out sometime if I'm free.
Really? That's what I do during my weekends, along with the internet.
Hmm. I was wondering why there is a gain silo on a rock farm. :l
Applejack saying "Cock-a-doodle-doo" was probably where I started to let out all my daww.
Filly Fluttershy was just how I imagined her. You know. That skinny, awkward, introvert girl in middle school. Yep, just how I imagined.
Rarity, when her horn took her to the rock, made me laugh and her little tantrum was great.
Pinky Pie looks... different with long straight hair. But her face when she saw the rainbow, priceless!
Twilight waving her hooves at the egg trying to use some type of force powers was pure "LOL"
And does the plant in "Green is Not Your Color" look familiar? :biggrin.gif:
Overall, this episode didn't have a strong plot to it, but It was wickedly cute. Now, if you excuse me, I have to go to the dentist to get all these cavities checked out due to this show.
And why farm rocks, anyways? Gems can be found easily in the wild. Unless...
ROCKS ARE MORE EXPENSIVE THEN GEMS?!
Equestria:Where ponies can talk, declared as vegetarians yet discuss eating hot-dogs, rocks are rarer then gems, dogs talk like a character from a book series that doesn't exist in this universe, and there are time lords in a universe that doesn't have them.
TIME LORDS WITH WALL-EYED COMPANIONS
And that brings me to my next point, a Doctor Whooves fan-fic. Which is my first public fan-fic I've ever written. I'm writing it here on the spot, and it will likely be improved on.
======================================================
Ditzy 'Derpy' Doo was never a normal pony. An accident that occurred when she was just a filly gave her wall-eyes, which for a pegasus, is a problem. On multiple occasions she has caused problems for other ponies, and on one occasion, a huge benefit for ponies everywhere.
It all started in the middle of summer, when after an unfortunate incident where Derpy bumped into a delivery pony's truck and caused furniture to fall out onto some poor pony below, she was grounded by the Mayor of Ponyville from flying. Not that she cared too much about not flying, as walking was less dangerous to her with her wall-eyes. It's been a week since she did that, and even though she has seen the pony she accidentally hurt around town, thankfully she didn't recognize her any of the times she encountered her.
Derpy was walking down the main street of town that fateful day, wondering what she would do. Her only friend Lyra was out of town that day, so Derpy was by herself that day. She mainly wondered around town, looking at the various items that were in stock at the market, before heading over to the Sugar Cube Corner.
Pinkie Pie was her usual upbeat self, working happily in the kitchen making cupcakes. She noticed Derpy walking into the shop.
"Ain't it an absolutely-positively-wonderful-spectacular day, Ditzy Doo?" Said Pinkie, who was putting cupcakes into the oven.
"Pinkie, you really need to stop borrowing phrases from the Apple clan. It really isn't good for you." Derpy replied.
"I really don't CARE about my grammar, as long as my cupcakes taste SPECTACULAR! Mr. and Mrs. Cake are giving me good pay for this job, which allows me to buy all SORTS of crazy ingredients to put in my cupcakes!"
"I really don't care what kind of ingredients you use in your cupcakes. Can I have a dozen?" Derpy was getting impatient at Pinkie Pie, who was starting to make her angry.
"Okey-dokey! Coming right up!"
Pinkie Pie gave Derpy a bag of a dozen cupcakes, fresh from the oven.
"Thanks Pinkie, you're the best." Derpy said.
Derpy turned around from the counter and walked out the door. Or at least, she almost did. She immediately banged into the wall, missing the door by a foot, and leaving her with a small lump on her forehead.
"Ow, stupid wall-eyes" Derpy muttered under her breath. Walking out the door without bumping into anything this time, she noticed that the sun was setting.
"That's strange, the clock said it was 3 when I got up from my nap. It wouldn't be the first time it's happened for me, though, as I've misread the clock due to my wall-eyes before."
Walking down main-street the usual way she went home, which was through the market that was now closed due to it being sun-down.
Suddenly, a loud crashing noise came from the alley to her right. This was strange, as nopony was there, until
a brown pony came charging through, with a curious cutie mark the shape of an hourglass. He had brown fur, and a darker brown mane.
"RUN!" He yelled, with an accent that sounded like he came from Trottingham.
Derpy didn't know what was going on for a brief moment, which ended quite suddenly something that looked like an upside-down ice-cream cone with studs all over it, a rounded top, and a few sticks that had appendages on the end.
"EXTERMINATE THE DOCTOR!" It said, shortly before a blue beam fired from one of the sticks and half-destroyed a cart left out by it's owner.
"WHAT IN BLAZES IS GOING ON OUT THERE?!" Said a unicorn who popped her head out from a window, who had her mane combed, shortly before screaming after seeing the creature, and quickly shut the window and shutters with her magic.
"CATCH THIS!" Yelled the brown pony, suddenly throwing a blue ball at Derpy.
End of Prologue
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Rarity- MY DESTINY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A rock? A ROCK IS MY DESTINY?!
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Applejack: really just loves her home and the country.
Rarity: learned her talent for finding gems, which was a nice tie in and throw back to "a dog and pony show".
Fluttershy: I believe she is scared of heights which is why she doesn't fly too much.
Rainbow Dash: well no real development there, but thats ok.
Pinkie Pie: Easily my favorite bit. It shows her tragic past where she never knew happyness, oddly enough that reinforces what I was writing for her in my fanfic, though mines a bit more grimdark.
Twilight: She lost control of her magic, but is powerful, weakest back story save RD.
The rest was rather good, I liked it, but this line. This line bothers me, The rest is fluid natural, but this line feels forced, it disrupts the flow. Also wall-eyed is used a bit to much, but I have the same problem about sticking to one phrase. I like it would like to read more.
Even if I dont like the idea of the Dalek being in the very first bit, they are the most dangerous thing. But there are scarier things, Angels, that thing where the doctor was on the monorail and it read his mind slowly getting more and more ahead of him until it was the doctor copying it. Those are horrific if done right. "The angels have the box."
Now that being said. Ponies.
In retrospect, I agree on the fact that the clock line feels like it disrupts the flow. It seems like the viewpoints change. But I really don't know how I could change it to fit better.
Also, I really had trouble decided what alien to pick as well. I didn't want to use Weeping Pegasi, as that would be better suited for a later chapter. Maybe I'll make the Dalek not be a Dalek at all, but something different? Somehow. It's the Doctor, sometimes things just don't make any sense.
I love the new episode.
Errr... No.
OT:It's good, but it fells a little.. I don't know, used. I guess I've just read too much fan fiction. Keep it up though since it's only your first time.
And since I'm feeling a little down, have some sad Luna I made. I kinda said "Screw it!" when it came to the background. ;_;
Also, still no Old Spice Ponies?
COME ON INTERNET.
This looks great! I think the background suits it.
How did you make it? What programme (If any) did you use to make it? Did you colour it yourself? How long did it take?
Sorry for all the questions, I'm doing some research.
Hurrrr.. you like it?
:|
:biggrin.gif:
I like the background too but I just didn't feel like messing around with the shadings and darkness. I gotta get to it one of these days.
Well, I made it using GIMP and my new tablet. I also listened to depressing music, but that's optional. Started out as a rough sketch using the pencil tool. Added a layer or two, copypasta'd the original colors, and used the paintbrush tool to go over my lines. Went in with the eraser to smooth out most of the lines (There are still a few mistakes in there :3), then filled with color for the major parts (the body, mane, tail, ect.) and resmoothed my lines. All in all, it took me a solid day and a half, but it's still not complete. I just felt like sharing.
Research for what if you don't mind me asking? I'm intrigued... :3
Great, thanks for the info!
Maybe 'research' was the wrong word.
I meant it as in I'm trying to get into digital art (of ponies!) and I want to find out as much as possible about how people construct their images. I think I've just gotta practice, but It's hard trying to do it without anyone noticing when you live with your mum and sister. (And your computer's in the living room!) :tongue.gif:
Thanks again!
It's super effective!
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Oh, well in that case, You're welcome! It's a pretty fun hobby, but it takes a while of looking at reference art and then actually drawing it yourself. But maybe you have a different art style than the shows so get creative! Good luck!
A MLP Minecraft server? Dude, I don't have time for minecraft anymore thanks to my job, drawing, and these damnly lovely ponies! I might have to check it out sometime if I'm free.