Hello there, since there isn't exactly a forum for stories, of course there is fan art but that's for short stories.. I'm open to critisizime (Blah) And other helpful suggestions. Let Cold Blood.... BEGIN! If any could tell me how to center some of my text that would be great also.
Prologue
Deception…Kill….Power…
Running through the woods, faster and faster.
Dagger in hand.
Slicing at the wind.
COLD BLOOD
Chapter one coming soon.
Chapter One
Jake was lying in the snow as his best friend David jumped his snowboard above him.
“Okay, Okay. That was scary enough but now it’s your turn!” Jake shouted at David.
David trudged up the snow back to where the start of the hill was. While Jake was a bit slower, he studied the snow, and the trees in the background, The cardinals flying around with snow on them. To top it off with elegant little flurry’s of snow.
“Will you hurry up?” David shouted at Jake. Jake woke up from his day dream and shouted “Ok!” back. Crunch. Crunch. Crunch. Jake looked around in a 360 degree turn. He saw nothing… But he wasn’t moving at all. “Um, David…. Did you hear that!?” Called Jake with panic in his voice. But David wasn’t there. “Um.. Whoever you are… I’ll…. I’ll fight you…” Jake screamed when something dead cold came into touch with his side.
(Sorry for the short chapter, the other chapters will NOT be like this. I’ve been pretty busy with Christmas.)
Yeah, I agree with Z91www n-n
If only you had at least some sort of summary or something :3
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Do not wallow do not stall
Time waits for none at all
Your allowance may crawl,
It may fly or even vanish
But none will seem more lavished
Than time lost to all.
Prologue
Deception…Kill….Power…
Running through the woods, faster and faster.
Dagger in hand.
Slicing at the wind.
COLD BLOOD
Chapter one coming soon.
Chapter One
Jake was lying in the snow as his best friend David jumped his snowboard above him.
“Okay, Okay. That was scary enough but now it’s your turn!” Jake shouted at David.
David trudged up the snow back to where the start of the hill was. While Jake was a bit slower, he studied the snow, and the trees in the background, The cardinals flying around with snow on them. To top it off with elegant little flurry’s of snow.
“Will you hurry up?” David shouted at Jake. Jake woke up from his day dream and shouted “Ok!” back. Crunch. Crunch. Crunch. Jake looked around in a 360 degree turn. He saw nothing… But he wasn’t moving at all. “Um, David…. Did you hear that!?” Called Jake with panic in his voice. But David wasn’t there. “Um.. Whoever you are… I’ll…. I’ll fight you…” Jake screamed when something dead cold came into touch with his side.
(Sorry for the short chapter, the other chapters will NOT be like this. I’ve been pretty busy with Christmas.)
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Retired StaffIf only you had at least some sort of summary or something :3
Do not wallow do not stall
Time waits for none at all
Your allowance may crawl,
It may fly or even vanish
But none will seem more lavished
Than time lost to all.
Thank you.
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