Welcome to the Luigi's Mansion Dark Moon RP! I have owned both Luigi's Mansion and Luigi's Mansion Dark Moon for a long time and know alot about it and love it, so I decided to make an rp about it.
Human App Layout
Ghost App Layout
Have you gone insane or not?:
Appearance: Blonde hair, blue eyes, red shirt, jeans, standard shoes.
Bio: Garrett is a teen that discovered the supernatural almost instantly after the Dark Moon shattered. A couple of greenies snuck into his house and wrecked havoc on it. He works for Professor Elvin Gadd to gather the shards of the Dark Moon and put it back together. He has a short temper and often charges into battle without thinking. This gets the best of him most of the time.
There are a few bad things about this RP, let me explain them and how to solve them.
1. This looks like a clone.
You did say it was based of his idea, which was good but we don't want similar RPs. If two RPs are the same, arguments will happen and people won't join any of them. If you want to host the idea but it was stolen or being used, ask the host if you could help run it. If the RP is bad, you still can't use the idea unless the RP dies. If you really want to make a new RP, just change the plot slightly. Maybe make it futuristic or in a linked dimension where everything is edible.
Struggling to read the thing above? That's my point, the applications all merge into one. It's soo easy to solve this, just add bolds, italics and underlines, or make it a different size,font and colour.
3. What do you do?
Only people who own the game have the slightest idea what to expect. There are many questions, including "Do you hunt ghosts?" and "Why are we here?". Just add a paragraph saying what has happened. For example, a Castle Life RP would have a few paragraphs about how the king settled in the land and what different ranks/classes mean. There could be a ghost who reads minds, one who alerts the others, or one who can change the temperature.
I hope this helped, and here's another tip, change your profile pic or I suggest you are an 8 year old.
(I'm not much older but i'm a genius ).