Moose, "thousand and thousands" of Nordic ships being part of the exodus is incredibly unlikely. Unless your faction owned half of humanity's spaceships, there's no way "thousands and thousands" of Nordic ships were part of the exodus. Tone it all down a bit. I already have a bad feeling about your faction because I fear you're going to make your faction extremely powerful and numerous. Tone it all down, they can't (and don't have to) be huge. Quality is better anyway.
Hug i am talking about one use ships merely made to get off the planet and reach another destination.
These ships were all discarded as they were useless after the exodus, they were barely even ships, more large boxes in space to send about three hundred million people (Going by future population not current) off earth.
And i edited how old my thing was to make it more feasible.
I am using the 304 and 302 from stargate as my ships, to save me drawing. They are not very hard to imagine and pretty basic, as i am using generation one 304s and adding a whole lot more than what i have.
Also Magical Dwarf person your human ships are good for weapons but USLESS when it comes to protection. 3 cm of titanium can be broken by a 50. BMG let alone a railgun round, i recommend upping that to 2 meters at minimum and adding other counter measures like i did for my Nordic Cruiser. Also keep in mind your decks are huge, in 70 something meters of depth i have way more decks than you, just think your ships over some more, there are glaring flaws i won't hesitate to point out and exploit.
Also heck your use of size is terrible, you have only 300 people in that behemoth of a cruiser and you have way less guns than you could fit on it.
Stargate always did make better use of size than Halo and Mass Effect, i use it as my reference
It has been since time immemorial that man has looked to the stars in wonder, so I ask you, how can going to them be anything but an extension of a will older than any of us? It is our very nature to discover, and to lust for knowledge, you accept this but doubt the nobility of working to the stars?
Oh, and Moose, I don't approve of your 'Nordic Cruiser' for one reason; You say it's " the most agile craft in the galaxy, capable of maneuvers no other ship call pull off ".
LOLNO.
As with PoW, it's best that we don't claim our things to be " the best " at anything, for balancing purposes. You can say it's very agile, but not the most, not even of it's kind. The most agile in the Nordic navy? Sure. In the galaxy? No.
Another thing, Cruisers are all the Nordic navy has? All four fleets are made up of Cruisers!? Not only is that very unlikely but also very dumb. My main point being there's no way your entire navy is made up of Cruisers, and certainly not " the most agile crafts in the galaxy ". Really, stop trying to make your guys better than others. I guarantee you that if you start being fair and stop trying to be the best at everything, you won't hear any bitching from me, but so long as you do, I will *****.
I can't say if the ship itself is overpowered, so I'll let that be answered by someone else.
So, should I edit the wiki with my pages first or make an app? I'm quite confused in this part.
Also, can I take other people's vehicles or weapons, or even characters as an example?
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"The only good injins are tame." ~ Roderick Willis. I guess.
I personally think it would be better to post your application first, and then begin making wiki pages once you've been accepted. That way we don't have to delete the wiki pages if your application is denied.
You can use other people's stuff for reference, of course, but try to be original. And if you're going to make a ship very, very similar to another faction's, at least have the decency to note that " -insert name of your race here- took inspiration from -insert other person's faction- ships, finding them to be quite admirable, and began works on their own versions ". Don't just say that out of pure coincidence your ship is the same as mine (for example). The Russians in real life took inspiration from the German STG44 when they were making their AK47, so it's fine for you to do the same here, just don't shamelessly steal people's ideas and designs.
(Oh, this won't be good. I don't know how to edit wiki pages. D:)*
*Not including the *click edit button*. I mean details and stuff...
Also, I plan on creating a race.
It is about androids that were hacked and freed, then they decided destroy humankind but aliens entered their hideout and took some to make experiences. When the new androids returned, they destroy the earlier androids, taking their bodies to aliens. I should add on the wiki first.... it's pretty confusing.
Go to the wiki, and look near the top right where it says 'Contribute'. Click on that and then click on 'Start a page'. Then choose the standard format (unless you want a blank page for whatever reason, and name the page you want to make (If it's a page about your race/species, name it whatever your species is called). Then work on the page. You'll get the hang of it, and I'll clean up whatever you mess up, so don't worry.
Which reminds me, I made a page for the planet 'Asphis' (or whatever it's called). It's in dire need of more information (which only the Arphogian creator can contribute, because only he knows what the planet is like).
Yeah, I am open to anyone joining regardless of who they are.
However, I am a bit of a quality nazi. While at first I am being fairly loose, when I feel like enough stuff is in the wiki, I will start to crack down.
Remember, no gods, no magic, and be original as you can.
When I say gods, I mean anything that is unconditionally a god. Or purely omnipotent and all-powerful. There may be extremely powerful beings worshipped as gods by lesser life forms, but you can't say they are in every way a god.
When I say magic, this includes things that are like per say, the force from star wars or plasmids. Anything that can be used to explain every weird thing that happens in the galaxy in a millisecond is not allowed.
When I say be original as you can, that means well, you can't introduce space marines from war hammer or protoss into the galaxy. Please don't try to make a knock-off version of them either. Take your time to think of something as different as possible, and avoid comparing what you have to something from something that exists *cough*marginallydwarven*cough*.
We will give constructive criticism where needed to the best of our abilities, and it is expected you understand this and don't flay out over it and get pissed at us.
I just got a part-time job fixing Dwarven's never-ending generalizations in all of the ship pages he made. He made it sound like ALL humans ships were of -insert size- and carried -insert number of crew- along with -insert number of turrets- and have -insert type of armor-.
I realize that, Interceptors, for example, will always be light moving aircraft no matter the faction, and they'll always be relatively small (which is why I didn't edit the Interceptor page), but holy hell the Command Ship page was FILLED with generalizations. I edited it and clarified that Command Ship specifications vary across different human factions. They aren't always the same size, and they don't always carry the same crew size, and they don't always have the same type of armor.
I'm on a quest currently to sniff out all the other pages you (Dwarven) made in an attempt to seek and destroy all of the generalizations.
I just got a part-time job fixing Dwarven's never-ending generalizations in all of the ship pages he made. He made it sound like ALL humans ships were of -insert size- and carried -insert number of crew- along with -insert number of turrets- and have -insert type of armor-.
I realize that, Interceptors, for example, will always be light moving aircraft no matter the faction, and they'll always be relatively small (which is why I didn't edit the Interceptor page), but holy hell the Command Ship page was FILLED with generalizations. I edited it and clarified that Command Ship specifications vary across different human factions. They aren't always the same size, and they don't always carry the same size of crews, and they don't always have the same type of armor.
I'm on a quest currently to sniff out all the other pages you (Dwarven) made in an attempt to seek and destroy all of the generalizations.
You took out the mass effect tech comparison, right? If you didn't i'll crack down on it. I would like to avoid as many references to fictional sci-fi at as possible because than things get immersion breaking.
Well, now to beef the pylorian article up and make the roogus system they live in. They are in the orion nebulae with humans.
Speaking of that nebulae, I should make an article about the orion nebulae and label these stars already. I recently put in some expansions to make it bigger and better:
I don't think i removed the Mass Effect comparison, but I will now.
Relax I got it and replaced it with something else. I also decided to get rid of some generalizing myself by saying it is only a popular engine type using by the ship class and placed the word "usually" before the size specifications.
Now the popular engine used is now called a "Cyrotech engine" which does the same thing he stated the engine does, but now sounds cooler and more sophisticated rather than something a mass effect fanboy wrote trying to cram in a reference to mass effect.
I'll be taking a break from sniffing out generalizations. I've exhausted my self. If you want, you can take over for now. You can see the list of pages he's made in page two of this thread, and check if he generalized in any of them. It's usually only a matter of adding " Most " and " usually " or " commonly ", but it still bothers me a little bit. I've already fixed the Strategic Cruiser and the Command Ship pages. The Interceptor page was fine because it's likely all human factions use very similar Interceptors.
I laid down the Roogus system outline. Although now I may actually make a defined catalogue of planet/star types. Just some way to tell which planet type is which and what star is which.
Green planets are basically planets with earth-like conditions for instance.
It has been since time immemorial that man has looked to the stars in wonder, so I ask you, how can going to them be anything but an extension of a will older than any of us? It is our very nature to discover, and to lust for knowledge, you accept this but doubt the nobility of working to the stars?
These ships were all discarded as they were useless after the exodus, they were barely even ships, more large boxes in space to send about three hundred million people (Going by future population not current) off earth.
And i edited how old my thing was to make it more feasible.
I am using the 304 and 302 from stargate as my ships, to save me drawing. They are not very hard to imagine and pretty basic, as i am using generation one 304s and adding a whole lot more than what i have.
Also Magical Dwarf person your human ships are good for weapons but USLESS when it comes to protection. 3 cm of titanium can be broken by a 50. BMG let alone a railgun round, i recommend upping that to 2 meters at minimum and adding other counter measures like i did for my Nordic Cruiser. Also keep in mind your decks are huge, in 70 something meters of depth i have way more decks than you, just think your ships over some more, there are glaring flaws i won't hesitate to point out and exploit.
Also heck your use of size is terrible, you have only 300 people in that behemoth of a cruiser and you have way less guns than you could fit on it.
Stargate always did make better use of size than Halo and Mass Effect, i use it as my reference
"The best revenge is to be unlike him who performed the injury." - Marcus Aurelis
LOLNO.
As with PoW, it's best that we don't claim our things to be " the best " at anything, for balancing purposes. You can say it's very agile, but not the most, not even of it's kind. The most agile in the Nordic navy? Sure. In the galaxy? No.
Another thing, Cruisers are all the Nordic navy has? All four fleets are made up of Cruisers!? Not only is that very unlikely but also very dumb. My main point being there's no way your entire navy is made up of Cruisers, and certainly not " the most agile crafts in the galaxy ". Really, stop trying to make your guys better than others. I guarantee you that if you start being fair and stop trying to be the best at everything, you won't hear any bitching from me, but so long as you do, I will *****.
I can't say if the ship itself is overpowered, so I'll let that be answered by someone else.
Ima post app first...then make the millions of pages required...although it would be slightly easier, since the rce and ships are mostly canon...
So, should I edit the wiki with my pages first or make an app? I'm quite confused in this part.
Also, can I take other people's vehicles or weapons, or even characters as an example?
You can use other people's stuff for reference, of course, but try to be original. And if you're going to make a ship very, very similar to another faction's, at least have the decency to note that " -insert name of your race here- took inspiration from -insert other person's faction- ships, finding them to be quite admirable, and began works on their own versions ". Don't just say that out of pure coincidence your ship is the same as mine (for example). The Russians in real life took inspiration from the German STG44 when they were making their AK47, so it's fine for you to do the same here, just don't shamelessly steal people's ideas and designs.
(Oh, this won't be good. I don't know how to edit wiki pages. D:)*
*Not including the *click edit button*. I mean details and stuff...
Also, I plan on creating a race.
It is about androids that were hacked and freed, then they decided destroy humankind but aliens entered their hideout and took some to make experiences. When the new androids returned, they destroy the earlier androids, taking their bodies to aliens. I should add on the wiki first.... it's pretty confusing.
Go to the wiki, and look near the top right where it says 'Contribute'. Click on that and then click on 'Start a page'. Then choose the standard format (unless you want a blank page for whatever reason, and name the page you want to make (If it's a page about your race/species, name it whatever your species is called). Then work on the page. You'll get the hang of it, and I'll clean up whatever you mess up, so don't worry.
Which reminds me, I made a page for the planet 'Asphis' (or whatever it's called). It's in dire need of more information (which only the Arphogian creator can contribute, because only he knows what the planet is like).
Yeah, I am open to anyone joining regardless of who they are.
However, I am a bit of a quality nazi. While at first I am being fairly loose, when I feel like enough stuff is in the wiki, I will start to crack down.
Remember, no gods, no magic, and be original as you can.
When I say gods, I mean anything that is unconditionally a god. Or purely omnipotent and all-powerful. There may be extremely powerful beings worshipped as gods by lesser life forms, but you can't say they are in every way a god.
When I say magic, this includes things that are like per say, the force from star wars or plasmids. Anything that can be used to explain every weird thing that happens in the galaxy in a millisecond is not allowed.
When I say be original as you can, that means well, you can't introduce space marines from war hammer or protoss into the galaxy. Please don't try to make a knock-off version of them either. Take your time to think of something as different as possible, and avoid comparing what you have to something from something that exists *cough*marginallydwarven*cough*.
We will give constructive criticism where needed to the best of our abilities, and it is expected you understand this and don't flay out over it and get pissed at us.
I hope this helps.
I realize that, Interceptors, for example, will always be light moving aircraft no matter the faction, and they'll always be relatively small (which is why I didn't edit the Interceptor page), but holy hell the Command Ship page was FILLED with generalizations. I edited it and clarified that Command Ship specifications vary across different human factions. They aren't always the same size, and they don't always carry the same crew size, and they don't always have the same type of armor.
I'm on a quest currently to sniff out all the other pages you (Dwarven) made in an attempt to seek and destroy all of the generalizations.
You took out the mass effect tech comparison, right? If you didn't i'll crack down on it. I would like to avoid as many references to fictional sci-fi at as possible because than things get immersion breaking.
Well, now to beef the pylorian article up and make the roogus system they live in. They are in the orion nebulae with humans.
Speaking of that nebulae, I should make an article about the orion nebulae and label these stars already. I recently put in some expansions to make it bigger and better:
Relax I got it and replaced it with something else. I also decided to get rid of some generalizing myself by saying it is only a popular engine type using by the ship class and placed the word "usually" before the size specifications.
Now the popular engine used is now called a "Cyrotech engine" which does the same thing he stated the engine does, but now sounds cooler and more sophisticated rather than something a mass effect fanboy wrote trying to cram in a reference to mass effect.
Yay!
Now guys, I as of recent gave hug Admin privileges. Remember this.
I'll be taking a break from sniffing out generalizations. I've exhausted my self. If you want, you can take over for now. You can see the list of pages he's made in page two of this thread, and check if he generalized in any of them. It's usually only a matter of adding " Most " and " usually " or " commonly ", but it still bothers me a little bit. I've already fixed the Strategic Cruiser and the Command Ship pages. The Interceptor page was fine because it's likely all human factions use very similar Interceptors.
I laid down the Roogus system outline. Although now I may actually make a defined catalogue of planet/star types. Just some way to tell which planet type is which and what star is which.
Green planets are basically planets with earth-like conditions for instance.
Heavy cruisers, small heavily armed agile ships are far easier to produce and have advantages over nearly every other kind of larger ship.
Most navies are turning to Cruisers, a navy consisting of them and fighters is a smart decision.
Took the god moddy stuff out, sorry didn't intend that.