---For people with good English only. If you have bad grammar even in your application, you're most likely not going to be accepted. People have to be able to know what you're trying to say.---
If I deny anyone, they have a chance to improve on their character and they may get in. You MUST read the rules. I have my ways of knowing.
You wake up on a beach and look up. What do you see? A whole world ahead of you. By the looks of it, no one has explored it, too. You look to your sides and there are a few other people, some unconscious, and some confusedly getting up. You can't remember how you got there or who you were before. It's a new world. You have the same personalities, the same thirst for blood, and the same desire to survive.
Basically, you've washed up on a shore and have no idea how you got there. There are a few other people that had washed up at the same time and have washed up after you. Everyone has powers they'll eventually discover, some sooner than others. The world is bringing out sides of people they didn't even know they had. You all need to do whatever it takes to survive, adapt, explore, and kill so you can find out what kind of evil has brought you all here before it's too late.
Race:
Human- A regular human. Good adaptation skills, low defense and health, and decent fighting skills.
Angel- Fallen or not, looks like a human, but has higher health and higher intellect than most other races. They weigh very little, and can jump much higher than humans, and land safely.
Gnoll- Ratlike creatures. 7-8 feet tall. They have dangerous claws and are savage beasts. They rely on more food than humans and are fast.
Beast- Human-like creatures with brute strength. They eat twice as much as humans and use either their hands or weapons. They're fairly slow.
Fairy- A creature with wings. They can fly and eat very little. They have low health and defenses, but their magic abilities are high. They often have features most humans do not.
*You may make your own race or use a custom race from someone that was already accepted.
Element:
Shadow- Do well in darkness. Nothing really scares them.
Water- They can hold their breath for an extremely long amount of time. The only protein they'll eat is fish. They are extremely fast swimmers.
Air- Fast and stealthy. Mostly angels. They can resist winds up to 80 mph.
Earth- Slow but strong fighters. They mine faster than most others.
Fire- People that are constantly feeling cold. They can withstand high heats and can't stand nighttime. They don't like raw food.
Light- People of light. They normally stay away from caves. At nighttime, they stay inside practicing which is why they are skilled with magic.
Plants- These people can grow anything. They can speak to plants, sometimes, to make them help them with a battle because they themselves are not very strong or skilled.
Ice- Love the snow. Will eat raw food. They can stand very cold temperatures, but not very hot. They can make a bridge of ice across water.
Application (original powers are greatly appreciated):
Name:
Race:
Element:
Age:
Background, personality, skills:
Gender:
Appearance:
Power(s):
Anything I should add?:
Have you read the rules?:
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The rules are based upon the ones in Orchard by Feokris. I thought she did a good job with her rules and used it as a basis for mine.
If you're OOC (out of character) please signify it by using (( or ** or something like that.
I am a strong believer of three strikes. I will be watching you. If you blow through one, say good-bye to your chances of being a mod.
No one likes a perfect character. They are just plain boring.
DO NOT BE A CHARACTER THAT SIGNS UP AND NEVER POSTS. Those people are not respected and could be kicked from the RP. Make sure to keep up and make it possible for other people to keep up. If you're at a point where someone needs to reply for you to move on, wait and be patient.
I will be the unseen force controlling good and bad things in everyone's lives. You are not that force to control other people’s lives. However, I won't always be there, so this can get uninteresting. If you have ideas, PM them to me.
No God-modding, or controlling another character. You can control NPCs as long as what they do goes along with their personality. If someone made an NPC a nice character, you wouldn’t make them attack you for no reason.
Be realistic. Like a perfect character, if you’re unrealistic, it’s boring. You will get hurt if your battling an army.
Time warps can only be done by me or the mods. If you want a time change, ask a mod or me whether you can or not. If someone's in the middle of fighting, and it's nighttime, it would ruin it for them if it magically turns daytime. You can change the weather, though, as long as it doesn’t interfere with another player.
If you leave the RP for any reason, you have to give a reason your character left. You can choose whether to kill them, have them run away, or do your own little thing. Make it interesting.
Deaths are allowed. Deaths of any character other than your own must be either allowed by me or the dying character. Dead characters can make a new character as long as they're not a family member, clone, or whatever you can come up with to find a loophole with that. If someone was accepted, they die, they make a new character, and their character is lame. I will tell them that. They can either change it or die very soon.
If I or a mod say your character needs changing, either reason maturely or change it. We will never tell you who and what your character has to be, so you can usually decide how to change your character. (we may tell you to add more detail in their background, make them more realistic, etc.) If we say your character dies, you can create a new character, but we're not mean enough to kill them for no reason, so it won't happen very often. And if we think that a certain event is not acceptable, edit it and be done with that.
Any comments that have something or anything to do with the advancement of the story have to be PMed to me and/or a mod. If you post them, there is a HIGH chance it will ruin it for RPers and readers.
Be reasonable. If you have don't agree with someone, PM them. We don't want people to have to have to look really hard for the actual story.
If you have read this, say no in your application where it asks you. If you do not, you will immediately be denied.
You are not allowed to have one sentence in a post for ANY reason whatsoever.
You are allowed to post in 1st person, however, most people post in 3rd and it will sound odd and be hard to follow your posts if they are in 1st person.
You can have relationships, just please, nothing too graphic, and I know you know what I mean.
Cursing is allowed, however, posting f*** every 2 words is annoying, and you know what we do to annoying people.
Note: If all mods disagree with a suggestion/decision I make, I do not have the right to add it to the story. This means it is possible to "veto" what I say. Players can disagree with a mod or even me as well. In this event, it’s the majority of players that can decide against a mod, and the majority of mods that can decide against me if either they or many players disagree with me, so you do have a say.
I am the only person that can choose mods. Mods can't choose mods, they can only suggest to me, and I have the right to say yes or no to them. If you write 2-sentence posts that don't advance the story in any way, are inactive, or have a strike, don't expect to be a mod.
This is an example of my character.
Name: Elia
Race: Angel
Element: Ice
Age: 24
Background, personality, skills: Elia used to live alone right after she moved out. Her love life had been tough since ever. She couldn't stand not doing anything. In her village, she was very respected, yet no one ever bothered to so much as say "hi." Elia had been planning to find a cure to a rare disease called shilleouce which slowly turned you into a horrid monster. She believed she would be able to find the cure until she washed up on the shores and forgot everything. She is very independent and hates help. Sometimes, she needs it, but still will refuse it. She trusts people easily, which always seems to hurt her. She moved very swiftly and can dodge almost any attack, but will horribly regret if she kills anyone. When she's done fighting, she feels completely drained, but is only cured with time, not sleep. She's great with a sword, but only if she's using one.
Gender: Female
Appearance: Pale, brown hair. Yellowish eyes. Tallish.
Power(s): She can shoot balls and flames of energy out of her hands, and later can freeze things other than water.
Anything I should add?: Nah.
Name:fergydanny
Race:beast
Element:ice
Age:20
Background, personality, skills:basicaly this is one of my first rp idk ?
Gender:male
Appearance:chuck norris :biggrin.gif:
Power(s):standard
Anything I should add?:nope
Name:fergydanny
Race:beast
Element:ice
Age:20
Background, personality, skills:basicaly this is one of my first rp idk ?
Gender:male
Appearance:chuck norris :biggrin.gif:
Power(s):standard
Anything I should add?:nope
You REALLY need to add more detail. I basically know nothing about your character by what you're telling me. Give them a personality, what they did before they got here, and their strengths and weaknesses. Also, he has to get a power eventually. And you need to read the rules. I can't accept this.
You REALLY need to be in a lot more RPs before you make your own. I've been in atleast ten before I made Viral Beasts. It doesn't matter if you've been in RPs outside the forum, you need to be known and have a bit of a name for yourself. 90% of RPs that people make before they are well known fail incredibly quickly. I'm just letting you know - don't make an RP yet.
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To all new RPers... Participate before you Create!
This. Although you've gotten in two already, you're not even a good roleplayer if you can take that criticism. You aren't creative, copied a lot of things, and there's already a roleplay just like this called Orchard. Don't run in here full of yourself and make a roleplay, that's just silly.
Application (original powers are greatly appreciated):
Name: Zeke Draigo
Race: ReBorn (Boom, custom race. ReBorns are strange human like cyborgs that are greatly discriminated against. ReBorns used to be dead, lifeless corpses. That was until their whole body was surrounded in a cocoon of metal. Their heart was replaced with a soul stone, and their organs were replaced with machines. They lost their hair, and their eyes became lifeless holes. They still have feelings however, maintaining a brain. They do not need to eat, drink, or sleep. However, they do need to recharge. They accomplish this by sitting still, and "powering down". ReBorns are very smart, however they are usually slower than normal humans. They cannot touch large amounts of water.)
Element: Lightning. (Requires no explanation. I think.)
Age: 213 Years Old
Background, personality, skills: Zeke remembers nothing of his past. He only remembers being awoken as a ReBorn, and mercilessly killing his creators for bringing this hell on him. Ever since then, Zeke had been apart from everything. He drifted from town to town, and trusted no one. That was until one day he fell in a river, short circuiting himself. He awoke on a beach, with no recollection of where is was or why. Zeke stands about 6.5 feet and weighs 217 pounds.
Gender: Male
Appearance: Zeke looks like a human, except instead of skin, he has swirling metal. His chest glows with the power of a soul stone, as well as his brain. His eyes are lifeless holes, inspecting everything. He wears black and blue robes, and has a long sword hanging from his belt. Tied onto his back is a large, thick metal rod. In a leather satchel, Zeke holds some basic tools, and a couple of batteries.
Power(s): Can do basic lightning spells. He can shoot lightning, and see the nerves of mammals. He has a special skill called transfer. The metal rod is used to harness his electricity. Zeke also has the ability to store any information he saw or heard in his personal database. Making a loss of memory impossible.
Anything I should add?:
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I don't suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it! <3
I'm just trying this because I figured the worst that could happen is everyone hates me and this whole RP is forgotten, so I figured I had nothing to lose. I just wanted to see how this would go. It seems fun. I had no intentions of success or to come across as obnoxious whatsoever.
This. Although you've gotten in two already, you're not even a good roleplayer if you can take that criticism. You aren't creative, copied a lot of things, and there's already a roleplay just like this called Orchard. Don't run in here full of yourself and make a roleplay, that's just silly.
Oh and I didn't know Orchard was like this. I just used Feokris's rules as a basis.
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I would tell you about how awesome I am down here, but I have a feeling you probably already know that. <- Please. ._.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
7/9/2011
Posts:
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Minecraft:
Lexiuno
Member Details
Application (original powers are greatly appreciated): She can fly, heal and Teleport or go into the other worlds. It's all together one power and it is called meskanian-galion pasken power.
Name: Eshkimina
Race:Gahumaniim (A half Goddess half Human not perfect at all)
Element: Water
Age:17 (Yes she's a young gahumaniim)
Background, personality, skills: The more she uses her power the more depressed she'll be. She is always happy because she barely uses her power and when she does it counts as only a small bit of depression.
Gender:Female
Appearance: Turquoise eye's, Light Blonde hair with natural blue streaks, Regular clothes that any girl would wear.
Power(s):She can fly, heal and Teleport or go into the other worlds. It's all together one power and it is called meskanian-galion pasken power.
Anything I should add?: NOPE
It's o.k. We probably won't start until then anyway, but what about the other RPs? Awe, and my character can't move on until you're on. And we don't have to use OOC yet because the RP hasn't started yet.
Name: Marc Andrews
Race: Human
Element: Ice
Age: 23
Background, personality, skills: Marc is a hard to deal with person, and often resorts to sarcastic wit in times of danger or trouble. He can work out problems very quickly, but in the most unconventional ways. He is strange and sometimes hard-hearted, but can be very nice once you get to know him. Marc used to be an inventor for a big company (who's name escapes me at the moment). He was working on a quantum portal generator one day, when he had a splitting headache. He fell to the floor and eventually passed out. When he woke up, he found himself on a beach, people knocked out or just waking up to the left and right of him. And not just people; all kinds of different creatures. Where was he?
Gender: Male
Appearance: Marc is tall and slightly dark. Standing at 5"11, He is wearing a long-sleeved, blue and white striped, button-down shirt; long, black pants and black shoes. He just looked like your average Joe. He has short, straight, black hair and brown eyes.
Power(s): (he will discover later) Marc can walk across water, and can produce a hail of ice shards onto any one point. However, using these powers will cause him to become weak.
Anything I should add?: Pancakes taste good.
Have you read the rules?: Yes.
If I deny anyone, they have a chance to improve on their character and they may get in. You MUST read the rules. I have my ways of knowing.
You wake up on a beach and look up. What do you see? A whole world ahead of you. By the looks of it, no one has explored it, too. You look to your sides and there are a few other people, some unconscious, and some confusedly getting up. You can't remember how you got there or who you were before. It's a new world. You have the same personalities, the same thirst for blood, and the same desire to survive.
Basically, you've washed up on a shore and have no idea how you got there. There are a few other people that had washed up at the same time and have washed up after you. Everyone has powers they'll eventually discover, some sooner than others. The world is bringing out sides of people they didn't even know they had. You all need to do whatever it takes to survive, adapt, explore, and kill so you can find out what kind of evil has brought you all here before it's too late.
Race:
Human- A regular human. Good adaptation skills, low defense and health, and decent fighting skills.
Angel- Fallen or not, looks like a human, but has higher health and higher intellect than most other races. They weigh very little, and can jump much higher than humans, and land safely.
Gnoll- Ratlike creatures. 7-8 feet tall. They have dangerous claws and are savage beasts. They rely on more food than humans and are fast.
Beast- Human-like creatures with brute strength. They eat twice as much as humans and use either their hands or weapons. They're fairly slow.
Fairy- A creature with wings. They can fly and eat very little. They have low health and defenses, but their magic abilities are high. They often have features most humans do not.
*You may make your own race or use a custom race from someone that was already accepted.
Element:
Shadow- Do well in darkness. Nothing really scares them.
Water- They can hold their breath for an extremely long amount of time. The only protein they'll eat is fish. They are extremely fast swimmers.
Air- Fast and stealthy. Mostly angels. They can resist winds up to 80 mph.
Earth- Slow but strong fighters. They mine faster than most others.
Fire- People that are constantly feeling cold. They can withstand high heats and can't stand nighttime. They don't like raw food.
Light- People of light. They normally stay away from caves. At nighttime, they stay inside practicing which is why they are skilled with magic.
Plants- These people can grow anything. They can speak to plants, sometimes, to make them help them with a battle because they themselves are not very strong or skilled.
Ice- Love the snow. Will eat raw food. They can stand very cold temperatures, but not very hot. They can make a bridge of ice across water.
Application (original powers are greatly appreciated):
Name:
Race:
Element:
Age:
Background, personality, skills:
Gender:
Appearance:
Power(s):
Anything I should add?:
Have you read the rules?:
-
The rules are based upon the ones in Orchard by Feokris. I thought she did a good job with her rules and used it as a basis for mine.
If you're OOC (out of character) please signify it by using (( or ** or something like that.
I am a strong believer of three strikes. I will be watching you. If you blow through one, say good-bye to your chances of being a mod.
No one likes a perfect character. They are just plain boring.
DO NOT BE A CHARACTER THAT SIGNS UP AND NEVER POSTS. Those people are not respected and could be kicked from the RP. Make sure to keep up and make it possible for other people to keep up. If you're at a point where someone needs to reply for you to move on, wait and be patient.
I will be the unseen force controlling good and bad things in everyone's lives. You are not that force to control other people’s lives. However, I won't always be there, so this can get uninteresting. If you have ideas, PM them to me.
No God-modding, or controlling another character. You can control NPCs as long as what they do goes along with their personality. If someone made an NPC a nice character, you wouldn’t make them attack you for no reason.
Be realistic. Like a perfect character, if you’re unrealistic, it’s boring. You will get hurt if your battling an army.
Time warps can only be done by me or the mods. If you want a time change, ask a mod or me whether you can or not. If someone's in the middle of fighting, and it's nighttime, it would ruin it for them if it magically turns daytime. You can change the weather, though, as long as it doesn’t interfere with another player.
If you leave the RP for any reason, you have to give a reason your character left. You can choose whether to kill them, have them run away, or do your own little thing. Make it interesting.
Deaths are allowed. Deaths of any character other than your own must be either allowed by me or the dying character. Dead characters can make a new character as long as they're not a family member, clone, or whatever you can come up with to find a loophole with that. If someone was accepted, they die, they make a new character, and their character is lame. I will tell them that. They can either change it or die very soon.
If I or a mod say your character needs changing, either reason maturely or change it. We will never tell you who and what your character has to be, so you can usually decide how to change your character. (we may tell you to add more detail in their background, make them more realistic, etc.) If we say your character dies, you can create a new character, but we're not mean enough to kill them for no reason, so it won't happen very often. And if we think that a certain event is not acceptable, edit it and be done with that.
Any comments that have something or anything to do with the advancement of the story have to be PMed to me and/or a mod. If you post them, there is a HIGH chance it will ruin it for RPers and readers.
Be reasonable. If you have don't agree with someone, PM them. We don't want people to have to have to look really hard for the actual story.
If you have read this, say no in your application where it asks you. If you do not, you will immediately be denied.
You are not allowed to have one sentence in a post for ANY reason whatsoever.
You are allowed to post in 1st person, however, most people post in 3rd and it will sound odd and be hard to follow your posts if they are in 1st person.
You can have relationships, just please, nothing too graphic, and I know you know what I mean.
Cursing is allowed, however, posting f*** every 2 words is annoying, and you know what we do to annoying people.
Note: If all mods disagree with a suggestion/decision I make, I do not have the right to add it to the story. This means it is possible to "veto" what I say. Players can disagree with a mod or even me as well. In this event, it’s the majority of players that can decide against a mod, and the majority of mods that can decide against me if either they or many players disagree with me, so you do have a say.
I am the only person that can choose mods. Mods can't choose mods, they can only suggest to me, and I have the right to say yes or no to them. If you write 2-sentence posts that don't advance the story in any way, are inactive, or have a strike, don't expect to be a mod.
This is an example of my character.
Name: Elia
Race: Angel
Element: Ice
Age: 24
Background, personality, skills: Elia used to live alone right after she moved out. Her love life had been tough since ever. She couldn't stand not doing anything. In her village, she was very respected, yet no one ever bothered to so much as say "hi." Elia had been planning to find a cure to a rare disease called shilleouce which slowly turned you into a horrid monster. She believed she would be able to find the cure until she washed up on the shores and forgot everything. She is very independent and hates help. Sometimes, she needs it, but still will refuse it. She trusts people easily, which always seems to hurt her. She moved very swiftly and can dodge almost any attack, but will horribly regret if she kills anyone. When she's done fighting, she feels completely drained, but is only cured with time, not sleep. She's great with a sword, but only if she's using one.
Gender: Female
Appearance: Pale, brown hair. Yellowish eyes. Tallish.
Power(s): She can shoot balls and flames of energy out of her hands, and later can freeze things other than water.
Anything I should add?: Nah.
<- Please. ._.
Race:beast
Element:ice
Age:20
Background, personality, skills:basicaly this is one of my first rp idk ?
Gender:male
Appearance:chuck norris :biggrin.gif:
Power(s):standard
Anything I should add?:nope
You REALLY need to add more detail. I basically know nothing about your character by what you're telling me. Give them a personality, what they did before they got here, and their strengths and weaknesses. Also, he has to get a power eventually. And you need to read the rules. I can't accept this.
<- Please. ._.
This. Although you've gotten in two already, you're not even a good roleplayer if you can take that criticism. You aren't creative, copied a lot of things, and there's already a roleplay just like this called Orchard. Don't run in here full of yourself and make a roleplay, that's just silly.
Name: Zeke Draigo
Race: ReBorn (Boom, custom race. ReBorns are strange human like cyborgs that are greatly discriminated against. ReBorns used to be dead, lifeless corpses. That was until their whole body was surrounded in a cocoon of metal. Their heart was replaced with a soul stone, and their organs were replaced with machines. They lost their hair, and their eyes became lifeless holes. They still have feelings however, maintaining a brain. They do not need to eat, drink, or sleep. However, they do need to recharge. They accomplish this by sitting still, and "powering down". ReBorns are very smart, however they are usually slower than normal humans. They cannot touch large amounts of water.)
Element: Lightning. (Requires no explanation. I think.)
Age: 213 Years Old
Background, personality, skills: Zeke remembers nothing of his past. He only remembers being awoken as a ReBorn, and mercilessly killing his creators for bringing this hell on him. Ever since then, Zeke had been apart from everything. He drifted from town to town, and trusted no one. That was until one day he fell in a river, short circuiting himself. He awoke on a beach, with no recollection of where is was or why. Zeke stands about 6.5 feet and weighs 217 pounds.
Gender: Male
Appearance: Zeke looks like a human, except instead of skin, he has swirling metal. His chest glows with the power of a soul stone, as well as his brain. His eyes are lifeless holes, inspecting everything. He wears black and blue robes, and has a long sword hanging from his belt. Tied onto his back is a large, thick metal rod. In a leather satchel, Zeke holds some basic tools, and a couple of batteries.
Power(s): Can do basic lightning spells. He can shoot lightning, and see the nerves of mammals. He has a special skill called transfer. The metal rod is used to harness his electricity. Zeke also has the ability to store any information he saw or heard in his personal database. Making a loss of memory impossible.
Anything I should add?:
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Oh and I didn't know Orchard was like this. I just used Feokris's rules as a basis.
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Name: Eshkimina
Race:Gahumaniim (A half Goddess half Human not perfect at all)
Element: Water
Age:17 (Yes she's a young gahumaniim)
Background, personality, skills: The more she uses her power the more depressed she'll be. She is always happy because she barely uses her power and when she does it counts as only a small bit of depression.
Gender:Female
Appearance: Turquoise eye's, Light Blonde hair with natural blue streaks, Regular clothes that any girl would wear.
Power(s):She can fly, heal and Teleport or go into the other worlds. It's all together one power and it is called meskanian-galion pasken power.
Anything I should add?: NOPE
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Race: Human
Element: Ice
Age: 23
Background, personality, skills: Marc is a hard to deal with person, and often resorts to sarcastic wit in times of danger or trouble. He can work out problems very quickly, but in the most unconventional ways. He is strange and sometimes hard-hearted, but can be very nice once you get to know him. Marc used to be an inventor for a big company (who's name escapes me at the moment). He was working on a quantum portal generator one day, when he had a splitting headache. He fell to the floor and eventually passed out. When he woke up, he found himself on a beach, people knocked out or just waking up to the left and right of him. And not just people; all kinds of different creatures. Where was he?
Gender: Male
Appearance: Marc is tall and slightly dark. Standing at 5"11, He is wearing a long-sleeved, blue and white striped, button-down shirt; long, black pants and black shoes. He just looked like your average Joe. He has short, straight, black hair and brown eyes.
Power(s): (he will discover later) Marc can walk across water, and can produce a hail of ice shards onto any one point. However, using these powers will cause him to become weak.
Anything I should add?: Pancakes taste good.
Have you read the rules?: Yes.
Here's a story I'm writing. So yeah.
Silent Raven
I may join later, but until than-
oh. this was just a necro'd thread. OK.
STOP NECROING OLD THREADS.
<- Please. ._.