[ColdDiamonds, you seem to have completely forgotten that you applied for my RP, because it's been 2 pages since you were accepted, and you haven't posted.]
[ColdDiamonds, you seem to have completely forgotten that you applied for my RP, because it's been 2 pages since you were accepted, and you haven't posted.]
((Im sorry ive been busy with life and I cant do anything about that.))
Drake ran watching the human falling him. Good he thought, he fell right for my trap. As soon as he had a good sight he threw an iron sword straight at peters other leg to make him immoble, he turned back around Drake and Herobrine ran to their target, a nether portal, the only place where monsters could survive during the day, he jumped in wondering if the humans would follow. Herobrine gathered up the monsters to guard the portal and soon an army was created. They come in, they die. It was simple, just like that.
I walked up to the house, or what used to be the house. It was now a burnt pile of rubble and wood. What!? I ran up and began to inspect the ruins. I discovered a hatch that led to a tunnel. I salvaged what I could from the 'house' and began my journey into the tunnel.
(sorry for never posting. my computer was out of commission and i have it back now)
After many days of walking and nights of living in small holes i decide to build my house in a hill I just found.After making a big enough room i chopped down some trees and returned to my cave before the sun set.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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I dodged the sword and handed my newest friend all of my stuff except my Netherblade and Assassin Blade. "Live well, Die good." I said then ran in to the portal. I saw a Zombie Pigman village and then Herobrine said if they saw me to kill me, in which case they started shooting me with bow and arrows. I ran, then got shot in the right arm. Well running I pulled out the arrow and threw it at herobrine which right when it nearly hit him he mysteriously vanished and then I just ran back out of the portal to realize I was surrounded by monsters.
Drake held his position as the fool Peter ran out of the portal injured. Drake jumped through and grabbed him and threw him back into the Nether before his minions could kill him. " I just saved your life Human, and now I shall end it. He grabbed Peter and threw him back down. He kicked him into a pit Smothered by lava at the bottom. "Goodbye, Peter".
"Peter!" I yelled as he ran into the portal. "What in blazes are you doing?!?"
I decided to go in and follow him, but unfortunately, as soon as I went in, he went out. I found myself surrounded by zombie pigmen, bows ready and loaded. But they didn't attack. It seemed like they were waiting for something. I tried to stay calm and did not draw my sword. Naturally, zombie pigmen only attack when provoked. Little did I know that these were under the control of Herobrine. As fast as I could, I dug down a little and put some dirt above me. The one thing those pigmen don't have is the brains to follow. I placed a torch, and lay in wait, holding my sword ready to strike upwards.
[EDIT: Sorry, CD, I didn't see your post when I was typing this. should I re-do mine?]
*You can just change the name if it has already been taken*
Name: Ed
Appearance: Big, tall, black hair, black eyes, and tanned skin wearing black slacks, and a white hat(like my avatar) :biggrin.gif:
Personality: The looks of him made people get scared, but he has a gentle, calm, and peaceful personality :smile.gif:
Place they spawn:In a wet rain forest (not far from the snowy mountain you guys were talking about) :blink.gif:
Race: Good/human
Gender: Male
Sorry for my bad english (english is not my first language) ,also this is the first time I have joined an RP :smile.gif: It looks fun seeing you guys writing it, I have an awesome time reading!
*You can just change the name if it has already been taken*
Name: Rent
Appearance: Big, tall, black hair, brown eyes, and tanned skin
Personality: The looks of him made people get scared, but he has a nice personality :smile.gif:
Place they spawn:In a wet rain forest (not far from the snowy mountain you guys were talking about) :blink.gif:
Race: Good/human
Gender: Male
Sorry for my bad english (english is not my first language) ,also this is the first time I have joined an RP :smile.gif: It looks fun seeing you guys writing it, I have an awesome time reading!Let's start a new chapter!
(( Hey I know this is your first RP app and all but I have some editations that could be made so it would be better. your personality is 1 word, nice, it would be better if it was more descriptive, because if you want to join other proffesional RP's you're going to have to come up with some intricate stuff. The name Rent is taken, it would also be better if you tried a different place to spawn because of the fact that there's a certain place where all the action is going on. Im not a mod so I can't accept/decline this.))
(( Hey I know this is your first RP app and all but I have some editations that could be made so it would be better. your personality is 1 word, nice, it would be better if it was more descriptive, because if you want to join other proffesional RP's you're going to have to come up with some intricate stuff. The name Rent is taken, it would also be better if you tried a different place to spawn because of the fact that there's a certain place where all the action is going on. Im not a mod so I can't accept/decline this.))
Thanks for the advice ! :smile.gif:
Let's wait for the mod to come and judge this :smile.gif:
*You can just change the name if it has already been taken*
Name: Ed
Appearance: Big, tall, black hair, black eyes, and tanned skin wearing black slacks, and a white hat(like my avatar) :biggrin.gif:
Personality: The looks of him made people get scared, but he has a gentle, calm, and peaceful personality :smile.gif:
Place they spawn:In a wet rain forest (not far from the snowy mountain you guys were talking about) :blink.gif:
Race: Good/human
Gender: Male
Sorry for my bad english (english is not my first language) ,also this is the first time I have joined an RP :smile.gif: It looks fun seeing you guys writing it, I have an awesome time reading!
((It looks good, your accepted.))
Once I got out of the tunnels I was surprised to find a neather portal and lots of monsters. " What's going on here?" I say.
Another human entered the Nether portal and this time Drake was mad. Herobrine handed him a dark sword and gave Drake simple orders, " Kill him". Drake ran towards the boy and lunged at him with his sword.
Name: Shadow
Appearance: 7"6 Tall, Broad shouldered, Black Smoke-like skin, neck length Dark brown hair, dark brown eyes. Black armour with crimson tribal and crimson tribal tattoos.
Personality: He may look evil but Shadow is very calm, collected and travels on his own, helping people as he goes.
Place he spawns: 20 minutes walk from the burnt down "house"
Race: Neutral/Shadow
Gender: Male
(If you need any more detail about my character then don't be afraid to ask me)
<Ed>
I've just stranded on a forest that seems to be near a snowy biome. While I take the time to hit trees and build some crafting table and 4x4 shelter :smile.gif:
(( Right now im on a trip to a family reunion, I will get internet connection there but not on the trip, right now im at a Mcdonald's lol.))
"You brought an army now did you?", Drake said with gritted teeth during their fight. When his opponent called out to their leader he let his guard down. Drake lunged sword pointed at the neck.
Here's a story I'm writing. So yeah.
Silent Raven
((Im sorry ive been busy with life and I cant do anything about that.))
Drake ran watching the human falling him. Good he thought, he fell right for my trap. As soon as he had a good sight he threw an iron sword straight at peters other leg to make him immoble, he turned back around Drake and Herobrine ran to their target, a nether portal, the only place where monsters could survive during the day, he jumped in wondering if the humans would follow. Herobrine gathered up the monsters to guard the portal and soon an army was created. They come in, they die. It was simple, just like that.
http://dragcave.net/...CreeperKittenXX Click the dragons on my scroll, please. Their lives depend on you! =3
After many days of walking and nights of living in small holes i decide to build my house in a hill I just found.After making a big enough room i chopped down some trees and returned to my cave before the sun set.
Drake held his position as the fool Peter ran out of the portal injured. Drake jumped through and grabbed him and threw him back into the Nether before his minions could kill him. " I just saved your life Human, and now I shall end it. He grabbed Peter and threw him back down. He kicked him into a pit Smothered by lava at the bottom. "Goodbye, Peter".
(( Good luck :cool.gif: ))
I decided to go in and follow him, but unfortunately, as soon as I went in, he went out. I found myself surrounded by zombie pigmen, bows ready and loaded. But they didn't attack. It seemed like they were waiting for something. I tried to stay calm and did not draw my sword. Naturally, zombie pigmen only attack when provoked. Little did I know that these were under the control of Herobrine. As fast as I could, I dug down a little and put some dirt above me. The one thing those pigmen don't have is the brains to follow. I placed a torch, and lay in wait, holding my sword ready to strike upwards.
[EDIT: Sorry, CD, I didn't see your post when I was typing this. should I re-do mine?]
Here's a story I'm writing. So yeah.
Silent Raven
happened just before:
I guess that would work.]
Here's a story I'm writing. So yeah.
Silent Raven
[So basically, just after I covered up my hidey hole with dirt, you threw Peter back in the portal.]
Here's a story I'm writing. So yeah.
Silent Raven
Name: Ed
Appearance: Big, tall, black hair, black eyes, and tanned skin wearing black slacks, and a white hat(like my avatar) :biggrin.gif:
Personality: The looks of him made people get scared, but he has a gentle, calm, and peaceful personality :smile.gif:
Place they spawn:In a wet rain forest (not far from the snowy mountain you guys were talking about) :blink.gif:
Race: Good/human
Gender: Male
Sorry for my bad english (english is not my first language) ,also this is the first time I have joined an RP :smile.gif: It looks fun seeing you guys writing it, I have an awesome time reading!
(( Hey I know this is your first RP app and all but I have some editations that could be made so it would be better. your personality is 1 word, nice, it would be better if it was more descriptive, because if you want to join other proffesional RP's you're going to have to come up with some intricate stuff. The name Rent is taken, it would also be better if you tried a different place to spawn because of the fact that there's a certain place where all the action is going on. Im not a mod so I can't accept/decline this.))
Thanks for the advice ! :smile.gif:
Let's wait for the mod to come and judge this :smile.gif:
((It looks good, your accepted.))
Once I got out of the tunnels I was surprised to find a neather portal and lots of monsters. " What's going on here?" I say.
http://dragcave.net/...CreeperKittenXX Click the dragons on my scroll, please. Their lives depend on you! =3
How dumbass you are. There are like 10 ACTIVE RP TOPICS about different stuff.
Don't be so ignorant. No one cares the **** you want.
((accepted))
http://dragcave.net/...CreeperKittenXX Click the dragons on my scroll, please. Their lives depend on you! =3
I've just stranded on a forest that seems to be near a snowy biome. While I take the time to hit trees and build some crafting table and 4x4 shelter :smile.gif:
"You brought an army now did you?", Drake said with gritted teeth during their fight. When his opponent called out to their leader he let his guard down. Drake lunged sword pointed at the neck.
((Permission to kill Matt???))