Well I appreciate those facts and no I wouldn't accept hat3ers gunn a hate or whatever and besides it's my first RP I don't have any other experience and I'm using a Ipad not a computer so sometimes it doesn't correct the mistakes I make.
P.S I couldn't think of a name for the RP so I settled on Ateher
Meh
Also I don't give a **** it's my first and I want it to go on soooo I am going to start.
Ra finally arrived at town square and he saw a few things that pleased him. Firstly a inn ,secondly a blacksmith,and finally a tailor it was late so everything was shut except the inn so he strolled in talked to the innkeeper about a room rented one for a few gold,and bought a drink. He sat down near a rowdy dwarf who looked quite drunk indeed and also quite mean." excuse me sir but shouldn't you lay off the ale?"
Ra replied quite smoothly " I am simply trying to prevent you from killing someone and goodnight to you and please don't kill anyone" and Ra began to stand.
(( just as an idea maby a fight should start?))
Kaelthyn entered the inn, looking for information about the local town and it's surrounding area. He was close to completing the task the Witch King had set for him. (A note: All italicized writing is a flashback. It will be used to inform the readers about his past life and current goal.) He had killed him. His father, his mentor, all a lie. He was dead, by Kaelthyn's hand. Darkwhisper looked down coldly at the body laying on the floor. " I am sorry,'father'", he spat sarcastically. He turned on his heel and walked away from his home, his father, and his life without a second glance. It was all a lie.
Kaelthyn scanned the bar, looking for a man that could give him the information he needed. He spotted a dwarf drinking heavily from his mug of ale. He walked quickly and took the sight adjacent to the dwarf. "Excuse me,"he said smoothly," I require something rather dire, and I believe you can help."
**I think its time to give it up. This rp is dead.**
Kaelthyn scanned the bar, looking for a man that could give him the information he needed. He spotted a dwarf drinking heavily from his mug of ale. He walked quickly and took the sight adjacent to the dwarf. "Excuse me,"he said smoothly," I require something rather dire, and I believe you can help."
**I think its time to give it up. This rp is dead.**
Sigh u might be right :sad.gif: it was my first oh well
[Noticed this, and thought I would offer some tips.
1. Grammar makes people happy. Even if you are on an iPad, iPhone, etc, you can always go back and review it. I've done it, so I'm talking from experience.
2. Don't let people spam pointless OOC in the thread. This is an RP, yet people were having a spam war up above.
3. Edit. You did a triple post up there, when you could have edited it into one. Big turn off for potential RP-ers.
4. Description for the storyline is lovely, and the more there is, the happier potential RP-ers will be.
5. Ignore the trolls. Show them you're better than them, and don't bother replying to their posts. :biggrin.gif:
I know you said this was your first, and I haven't seen you in other RP's before, so I would suggest joining, or at least reading through some other ones, seeing what they look like, and then trying making this again. This is also meant to be helpful, so please don't take it the wrong way. D: Well... See you around the RP's! :biggrin.gif:
~Kai ]
I am in a RP ATM and it's good I just don't think I can do RP's but I can write stories and also I was away when this war happened so I didn't know and finally I have seen absolete troll almost EVERY RP i've seen including the one I'm in!
P.S check out the journal of a minecrafter series that's mine! :smile.gif:
I couldn't agree with Absolete more. This RP needs a lot of help. At it's state right now, all you're going to get is a bunch of noobies and a shitty roleplay. Take part in some roleplays before you begin one. And please, download Firefox or something so you can have a spell-check.
Also I don't give a **** it's my first and I want it to go on soooo I am going to start.
Check out my fan-fic! http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/704612-frozen/
((DEROCK THIS IS WHERE YOU SHOULD COME IN!))
Check out my fan-fic! http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/704612-frozen/
(( just as an idea maby a fight should start?))
Check out my fan-fic! http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/704612-frozen/
Check out my fan-fic! http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/704612-frozen/
**I think its time to give it up. This rp is dead.**
Sigh u might be right :sad.gif: it was my first oh well
Check out my fan-fic! http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/704612-frozen/
1. Grammar makes people happy. Even if you are on an iPad, iPhone, etc, you can always go back and review it. I've done it, so I'm talking from experience.
2. Don't let people spam pointless OOC in the thread. This is an RP, yet people were having a spam war up above.
3. Edit. You did a triple post up there, when you could have edited it into one. Big turn off for potential RP-ers.
4. Description for the storyline is lovely, and the more there is, the happier potential RP-ers will be.
5. Ignore the trolls. Show them you're better than them, and don't bother replying to their posts. :biggrin.gif:
I know you said this was your first, and I haven't seen you in other RP's before, so I would suggest joining, or at least reading through some other ones, seeing what they look like, and then trying making this again. This is also meant to be helpful, so please don't take it the wrong way. D: Well... See you around the RP's! :biggrin.gif:
~Kai ]
~DED
I am in a RP ATM and it's good I just don't think I can do RP's but I can write stories and also I was away when this war happened so I didn't know and finally I have seen absolete troll almost EVERY RP i've seen including the one I'm in!
P.S check out the journal of a minecrafter series that's mine! :smile.gif:
Check out my fan-fic! http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/704612-frozen/
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