The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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6/21/2011
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FearTheReaPR
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*radio crackles, a voice can be heared* You boys hear me loud and clear? Good, your mission is to take out an old abandoned fort located in the remote jungles Brazil(this never happened, hence the RP?). Insurgent forces have been spotted there. It wasn't until recently that we discovered high activity going on there. We don't know what is in there, nor do we want to. It is your mission to take them out. I don't care how you get it done, just make sure it happens. Support is thin and we don't know what artillery they have. We need you to scout the fort and its surrounding areas. Don't forget what your mission is, good luck boys, and last thing. Make sure no-one knows.
Description/Rules(saves time and space):
You have been hand picked for this mission(ironic huh?) by the leaders of the Allied forces. You are given limited supplies. You are able to choose your supplies, but please, keep them within reason. NO LASER GUNS!! You start time is 0500 and you have 2 weeks to finish. WHAT A TWIST!! >:biggrin.gif: jk time limits will ruin the RP :tongue.gif: but you do start at 0500(5 am) for time purposes. At the end of your application put #69 xD. Raids should be done when it is dark or when they are sleeping. Daylight is the time to do planning and check everyones gear. Or just have a conversation. The roleplay can have many side stories, but they have to be within reason. Don't have your character go off and find the holy gernade of super explosions. That will be stupid. You could have it to where your character goes to a village for supplies, it is up to you. Your choices and decisions could get you and your squad killed, or save them. Be careful with words because it just might anger the villagers.
No Ubering
No Powergamming
Stay in character, if you have them talking with a Jersey accent when we started, don't make them start talking with a tenesee accent later on
Don't spam your posts, give other people time to reply so the story runs more smoothly. One person can't kill everyone. You're not god.
YOU CAN SAY ****!! it adds more realisim to the scenario. You can use any other swear words, just don't drop F bombs every other sentence.
Application
Name: (first and last)
Age: (self-explanitory)
Apperance: (what he looks like, hair, beard, etc.)
Rank: (no not lvl 76 necromancer, if your a private or higher! Nothing more than luetenant, and not everyone will get to be one.)
Equipment: (Guns, supplies, clothes, stuff like that. Combat boots and some sort of camo clothes is requiered. dont want to get shot do you ?:wink.gif:)
Classification: (if they're a sniper, infintry, heavy support, etc. not everyone can be the same)
Bio: (Paint me a picture)
Nationality: (Chinese, Russian, Brtish, etc. creates better description)
Skills: (something they can do that is not easy to do. holding their breath for long periods of time, etc.)
Other information: (anything you want to add about him)
Suggestions: (what do you think I should change or add?)
My App:
Name: Helio Rasco
Rank: Sergeant
Age: 28
Apperance: He weighs in at 237 lbs, and is 5'10" tall. He has buzzed black hair and a 5 o'clock shadow. He looks like he could kill a man if they look at him wrong.
Equipment: L86 LSW is his primary weapon of choice, his Colt M1911 has never failed him as a secondary. He brings along a machete(we're in the jungle, should come in handy :wink.gif:)to chop down all the vines and underbrush. He wear a woodland camo shirt and pants so he won't draw any unneccesary attention. He paints his face a woodland color as to blend in with his surroundings. His combat boots are shined black every day. Sgt. Rasco wraps his head with a woodland camo bandana to keep his head cool.
Classification: Light Support Gunner
Bio: He grew up in the slums. He had to fight to survive. His mother died during child birth, and his father died of depression when he was 7. He had only two choices, fight or die. He would do petty thefts, like steal some food or money. He wasn't labeled a criminal until he joined a gang. The Foxes.
The Foxes treated him like he was their brother. They would let him stay at their house, eat with them, or just make sure that he stayed in school. One day the Foxes rival gang, the Trips, made a raid on their hideout. At the time he was only 10 but acted like an adult. The only people there was Helio, their leader John, and a few other. The Trips outnumbered the Foxes two to one. When they first started shooting John told Helio to go hide. Helio did as John told him, he hid in some boxes. He was scared for his life. All the foxes in the warehouse were killed. But before John died, he yelled at the top of his lungs, "RUN HELIO!" Both gangs searched for Helio, the Foxes because they thought Helio was the person who killed everyone in their warehouse, and the Trips because they thought he was going to tell the Foxes who killed everyone.
He was tired of hiding and was tired of running. Trying to escape the gangs, Helio joined the Army. He had to lie about his age, he was only 16. He was a quick learner and was always working as hard as he could. He quickly became a Corporal. His time came when he could have retired, but he knew that the gangs would find him. His decision to stay was one he would soon enjoy. Helio was deployed onto the battlefield, where he would quickly take role as a sniper. With his aim, stealth, and tacticts, he became the deadliest the military had to offer. Helio was out on recon one day with his spotter, Frank, when they were ambushed. Helio was shot in the leg, but Frank was not so fortunate. When help finally came, Frank was dead. Helio recieved the purple heart and was promoted to Sergeant for his bravery and service.
Helio was confined to work in an office for the next few months. When he got the call about the mission in Brazil, he was eccstatic, and accepted it without hesitiation. He suited up, and prepared for a mission he might not return on....
Nationality: American
Skills: Can lift nearly 3 times his body weight. Can reload very quickly.
Other information: He hates when people talk about him behind his back. Is a nice person but will kill anyone if it will help the mission. Listens to his ipod when he kills.
Name: Mark Ciero
Rank: Corporal
Equipment: Springfield Rifle (No Scope), Colt M1911. (Sometimes an M1 Garand)
Classification: Infantry
Appearance: 22-Years-Old, slightly shaggy hair, slightly buffed arms, buffed legs. Clothes are a bit raggy and torn.
Bio: Mark Ciero has recieved a regular education, being at the top of his class. He had been very strategic as a young child, but as he grew, he found out he had amazing agility skills. By the age of 17, in 1939, he started taking up sniping. He fought in Japan as a sharpshooter with his scoped Springfield Rifle, then gave it up. He became an infantryman, using his Springfield Rifle (No Scope) or an M1 Garand. He still fought in Japan.
Nationality: American. (Ancestors are Turkish)
Skills: Abnormal Agility. Able to jump from long distances. A bit smart.
Other information: Has been a marksmanship for the army.
Suggestions: Everything looks great.
Hey, bud, I know you're really wanting to roleplay and all but you have to participate in about two or three roleplays before you can create one. Otherwise this is original, but you really just organized it terribly, it has bad grammar and is just kinda ugly.
Hey, bud, I know you're really wanting to roleplay and all but you have to participate in about two or three roleplays before you can create one. Otherwise this is original, but you really just organized it terribly, it has bad grammar and is just kinda ugly.
I'm sorry, but you've broken a few rules by this.
Let him be. If he wants to start one, let him. My bestfriend once made one, even though he never played on any servers.
I want to make a small variation though... You need to know about guns. This takes place in World War 2, and you're using an L86? That was made in 1986. Learn about your guns a bit, bud. :tongue.gif:
Actually, I'm not going to step aside when one breaks a rule. I'd gladly let him roleplay and all since he's eager to do it and new, but he's ignoring rules he has to follow.
Your character seems to be a rip off of both Ding Chavez and Julio Vega, both from the novel Rainbow Six, as well as Clear and Present danger. Oh, and The Outsiders. Also, the scenario screams Clear and Present Danger as well. Seems to be a Tom Clancy plot covered up with World War 2. Just throwing that out there.
Name: Mark Ciero
Rank: Corporal
Equipment: Springfield Rifle (No Scope), Colt M1911. (Sometimes an M1 Garand)
Classification: Infantry
Appearance: 22-Years-Old, slightly shaggy hair, slightly buffed arms, buffed legs. Clothes are a bit raggy and torn.
Bio: Mark Ciero has recieved a regular education, being at the top of his class. He had been very strategic as a young child, but as he grew, he found out he had amazing agility skills. By the age of 17, in 1939, he started taking up sniping. He fought in Japan as a sharpshooter with his scoped Springfield Rifle, then gave it up. He became an infantryman, using his Springfield Rifle (No Scope) or an M1 Garand. He still fought in Japan.
Nationality: American. (Ancestors are Turkish)
Skills: Abnormal Agility. Able to jump from long distances. A bit smart.
Other information: Has been a marksmanship for the army.
Suggestions: Everything looks great.
Pretty good app, but the bio needs some tweaking. I don't see how he could just start sniping?
And it's ok, Absoletes criticism can only help make it better :smile.gif:
Absolete, I have played in some roleplays. This seemed like a good idea and so I started it. It might not be good but you have to start somewhere, right?
I was just about to say that. It has no increments of Minecraft, and I've only seen you in a single roleplay in Fan Art, 69FoYou. Which you need to participate in at least three. Or at least long enough to be recognized as a well enough roleplay who can handle himself leading a roleplay.
I would love to be in an RP with this kind of setting and idea, but you don't have it close enough to minecraft, and you don't have enough experience in RPing.
This just isn't good RP quality, and not Minecraftish enough. Good Day sir.
I might, later. I gave CiD to Jumjummju, and Crimson Mist died after forty pages. I'll need to host a roleplay sooner or later, the public is screaming for a new one...
*radio crackles, a voice can be heared* You boys hear me loud and clear? Good, your mission is to take out an old abandoned fort located in the remote jungles Brazil(this never happened, hence the RP?). Insurgent forces have been spotted there. It wasn't until recently that we discovered high activity going on there. We don't know what is in there, nor do we want to. It is your mission to take them out. I don't care how you get it done, just make sure it happens. Support is thin and we don't know what artillery they have. We need you to scout the fort and its surrounding areas. Don't forget what your mission is, good luck boys, and last thing. Make sure no-one knows.
You have been hand picked for this mission(ironic huh?) by the leaders of the Allied forces. You are given limited supplies. You are able to choose your supplies, but please, keep them within reason. NO LASER GUNS!! You start time is 0500 and you have 2 weeks to finish. WHAT A TWIST!! >:biggrin.gif: jk time limits will ruin the RP :tongue.gif: but you do start at 0500(5 am) for time purposes. At the end of your application put #69 xD. Raids should be done when it is dark or when they are sleeping. Daylight is the time to do planning and check everyones gear. Or just have a conversation. The roleplay can have many side stories, but they have to be within reason. Don't have your character go off and find the holy gernade of super explosions. That will be stupid. You could have it to where your character goes to a village for supplies, it is up to you. Your choices and decisions could get you and your squad killed, or save them. Be careful with words because it just might anger the villagers.
No Ubering
No Powergamming
Stay in character, if you have them talking with a Jersey accent when we started, don't make them start talking with a tenesee accent later on
Don't spam your posts, give other people time to reply so the story runs more smoothly. One person can't kill everyone. You're not god.
YOU CAN SAY ****!! it adds more realisim to the scenario. You can use any other swear words, just don't drop F bombs every other sentence.
Application
Name: (first and last)
Age: (self-explanitory)
Apperance: (what he looks like, hair, beard, etc.)
Rank: (no not lvl 76 necromancer, if your a private or higher! Nothing more than luetenant, and not everyone will get to be one.)
Equipment: (Guns, supplies, clothes, stuff like that. Combat boots and some sort of camo clothes is requiered. dont want to get shot do you ?:wink.gif:)
Classification: (if they're a sniper, infintry, heavy support, etc. not everyone can be the same)
Bio: (Paint me a picture)
Nationality: (Chinese, Russian, Brtish, etc. creates better description)
Skills: (something they can do that is not easy to do. holding their breath for long periods of time, etc.)
Other information: (anything you want to add about him)
Suggestions: (what do you think I should change or add?)
Name: Helio Rasco
Rank: Sergeant
Age: 28
Apperance: He weighs in at 237 lbs, and is 5'10" tall. He has buzzed black hair and a 5 o'clock shadow. He looks like he could kill a man if they look at him wrong.
Equipment: L86 LSW is his primary weapon of choice, his Colt M1911 has never failed him as a secondary. He brings along a machete(we're in the jungle, should come in handy :wink.gif:)to chop down all the vines and underbrush. He wear a woodland camo shirt and pants so he won't draw any unneccesary attention. He paints his face a woodland color as to blend in with his surroundings. His combat boots are shined black every day. Sgt. Rasco wraps his head with a woodland camo bandana to keep his head cool.
Classification: Light Support Gunner
Bio: He grew up in the slums. He had to fight to survive. His mother died during child birth, and his father died of depression when he was 7. He had only two choices, fight or die. He would do petty thefts, like steal some food or money. He wasn't labeled a criminal until he joined a gang. The Foxes.
The Foxes treated him like he was their brother. They would let him stay at their house, eat with them, or just make sure that he stayed in school. One day the Foxes rival gang, the Trips, made a raid on their hideout. At the time he was only 10 but acted like an adult. The only people there was Helio, their leader John, and a few other. The Trips outnumbered the Foxes two to one. When they first started shooting John told Helio to go hide. Helio did as John told him, he hid in some boxes. He was scared for his life. All the foxes in the warehouse were killed. But before John died, he yelled at the top of his lungs, "RUN HELIO!" Both gangs searched for Helio, the Foxes because they thought Helio was the person who killed everyone in their warehouse, and the Trips because they thought he was going to tell the Foxes who killed everyone.
He was tired of hiding and was tired of running. Trying to escape the gangs, Helio joined the Army. He had to lie about his age, he was only 16. He was a quick learner and was always working as hard as he could. He quickly became a Corporal. His time came when he could have retired, but he knew that the gangs would find him. His decision to stay was one he would soon enjoy. Helio was deployed onto the battlefield, where he would quickly take role as a sniper. With his aim, stealth, and tacticts, he became the deadliest the military had to offer. Helio was out on recon one day with his spotter, Frank, when they were ambushed. Helio was shot in the leg, but Frank was not so fortunate. When help finally came, Frank was dead. Helio recieved the purple heart and was promoted to Sergeant for his bravery and service.
Helio was confined to work in an office for the next few months. When he got the call about the mission in Brazil, he was eccstatic, and accepted it without hesitiation. He suited up, and prepared for a mission he might not return on....
Nationality: American
Skills: Can lift nearly 3 times his body weight. Can reload very quickly.
Other information: He hates when people talk about him behind his back. Is a nice person but will kill anyone if it will help the mission. Listens to his ipod when he kills.
Suggestions: I made it, so no :smile.gif:
#69
Rank: Corporal
Equipment: Springfield Rifle (No Scope), Colt M1911. (Sometimes an M1 Garand)
Classification: Infantry
Appearance: 22-Years-Old, slightly shaggy hair, slightly buffed arms, buffed legs. Clothes are a bit raggy and torn.
Bio: Mark Ciero has recieved a regular education, being at the top of his class. He had been very strategic as a young child, but as he grew, he found out he had amazing agility skills. By the age of 17, in 1939, he started taking up sniping. He fought in Japan as a sharpshooter with his scoped Springfield Rifle, then gave it up. He became an infantryman, using his Springfield Rifle (No Scope) or an M1 Garand. He still fought in Japan.
Nationality: American. (Ancestors are Turkish)
Skills: Abnormal Agility. Able to jump from long distances. A bit smart.
Other information: Has been a marksmanship for the army.
Suggestions: Everything looks great.
I'm sorry, but you've broken a few rules by this.
Let him be. If he wants to start one, let him. My bestfriend once made one, even though he never played on any servers.
EDIT: Please don't double post.
Pretty good app, but the bio needs some tweaking. I don't see how he could just start sniping?
And it's ok, Absoletes criticism can only help make it better :smile.gif:
Absolete, I have played in some roleplays. This seemed like a good idea and so I started it. It might not be good but you have to start somewhere, right?
and I don't mean to be a troll, but...
What does this have to do with minecraft?
"...Billions of lighthouses, stuck at the far end of the sky."
the insurgents are zombies
And I'll just change my bio later...
at least i know when to stop....
I can accept zombies as insurgents, but why not make a server in which players have to choose between Allied and Axis?
This just isn't good RP quality, and not Minecraftish enough. Good Day sir.