Tonetto, accepted. You just had a few grammatical errors. Feokris, accepted of course. vMpee accepted((I know how hard it is to RP using an iPhone, so I'll let minor grammar errors slide.))
Edit:Absolete, if you will, I need you to be the the moderator for the Free People.
Oh, hey, another RP. Might as well join it. :smile.gif:
Name: John Flekar.
Age: 19
Race: Human
Appearance: Jake was generally quite athletic, so his muscles are well-defined. That doesn't mean he looks like a beefstick though. He is quite tall, at around 6'4", and has long brown hair in a ponytail.
Equipment: Jake wears simple clothes, designed not to hinder him. He wears a plain black t-shirt and pants, with simple shoes. He uses dual short-swords, both at separate sides on his hip.
Personality: Jake is charismatic, able to sway people with words, rather than fight. He also tends to be quite nonchalant and sarcastic, tending to rarely take anything seriously. He prefers not to fight, not because he's a coward, but more because he just doesn't like the concept of killing anything with it's own free will. But when he gets angry, which is hard, since he's so calm usually, he really gets angry. He is also great at making deals, money-wise.
Bio/History: When Jake was a kid, he was always one of the types to live in a city. His parents were wealthy merchants, and it involved him moving a lot. He always liked fighting, and was generally agile, so he learned how to wield 2 swords, which suited his fighting style. He was tutored in this aspect by a professional mercenary that served as the bodygaurd for his family on his many trips.
Jake was also into the whole merchant business, and at age 18, decided to continue the business on his own, rather than with his parents.
He ended up selling weapons, and was at the military outpost trying to sell some weapons there for a price higher than what they were worth.
Anything to add?: *Tastes soup* Needs more salt.
Scorpion uses "Get over here !" (unobvious Mortal Kombat reference.)
**NOTE: REPLACE ALL JAKES YOU SEE WITH JOHNS! I'm too lazy to change them. >.>**
I'm always happy just 'cause there isn't a reason to be sad.
Don't take this as there is nothing that could cause sadness. I just mean it's pointless to dwell on it. I mean, depression is so boring.
**Just 1 complaint. Although i like your background, could you elaborate on how he got to the military out post, or any military background? Otherwise, accepted.**
**Just 1 complaint. Although i like your background, could you elaborate on how he got to the military out post, or any military background? Otherwise, accepted.**
((Alright, one sec.))
((EDIT: Alright, I edited the end of the bio to explain how my character got there. Also, does he *need* military experience? The closest to experience would be private tutoring he got in how to fight and whatnot with dual swords, does that count?
Also, I changed his name from Jake to John, because I noticed VmPee's character was already named Jake.))
I'm always happy just 'cause there isn't a reason to be sad.
Don't take this as there is nothing that could cause sadness. I just mean it's pointless to dwell on it. I mean, depression is so boring.
((I still have a question though: was the "Get over here!" thing actually a Mortal Kombat reference?))
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I'm always happy just 'cause there isn't a reason to be sad.
Don't take this as there is nothing that could cause sadness. I just mean it's pointless to dwell on it. I mean, depression is so boring.
((In that case... *does extremely long and hard to combo seqeunce with the buttons on the controller; becomes a dragon and eats CyanTortoise's head off.* FATALITY!))
I'm always happy just 'cause there isn't a reason to be sad.
Don't take this as there is nothing that could cause sadness. I just mean it's pointless to dwell on it. I mean, depression is so boring.
I'm always happy just 'cause there isn't a reason to be sad.
Don't take this as there is nothing that could cause sadness. I just mean it's pointless to dwell on it. I mean, depression is so boring.
(sure i will do this :smile.gif: )
Name:tirtow grenspin
Age:24
Race:Necrothemians
Appearance:tirtow is a Necrothemians, he has mutated into a small cat like creature (i LOVE CATS :smile.gif: oh and thats all, i am pretty sure you all know what a cat looks like)
Equipment:tirtow weapoon is spikes that are hidden in his back. his cloths are fur.. duh :smile.gif:
Personality:submisive
Bio/History:tirtow was a cat lover, he lived in a small house and had 3 cats. When Ahtren invaded the town his house was burnt down with his cats inside. But this was not becuase of Ahtren's army... It was thugs and Theives running around grabbing all the loot they can. Teartoz frist defended his home from the thugs, but sure enough they hit hem with a peace of wood and ran in there only to knock down a torch setting alight his house. Teartoz was angry, that all his worldly objects and his beloved cats were murdered and destroyed, but then came along Ahtren asking Teartoz if he wanted revenge. Sadly enough he said yes...
When the war ended teartoz was stuck in the neather. He wanted to see one last cat so baddly that the evil coming from the necro'tyr started to transform teartoz into a ecazt (:smile.gif:). All memory was wiped clean from his mind and all he knew is that he wanted to kill... EVERY LAST HUMAN AND LIVING CREATURE IN MINECRAFTIA.
Anything to add?
I know mutating into a cat may not sound like a mutation or something but it what i decided to use becuase it is diffrent and a little weird :smile.gif:.
**Denied. First of all cats. Really? One of the most evil forces know to minecraftia and you turn him into a cat? Second, Necrothemians that are fully mutated are called Atramentar. They're regular humans turned bad. Also, this is a serious RP. The little emoticons you scatter through your app do not make ne want to accept you any more**
I'll test it.
"1. GAYLORD Minock"
@Neilsaur
Yep, it is.
Edit:Absolete, if you will, I need you to be the the moderator for the Free People.
Name: John Flekar.
Age: 19
Race: Human
Appearance: Jake was generally quite athletic, so his muscles are well-defined. That doesn't mean he looks like a beefstick though. He is quite tall, at around 6'4", and has long brown hair in a ponytail.
Equipment: Jake wears simple clothes, designed not to hinder him. He wears a plain black t-shirt and pants, with simple shoes. He uses dual short-swords, both at separate sides on his hip.
Personality: Jake is charismatic, able to sway people with words, rather than fight. He also tends to be quite nonchalant and sarcastic, tending to rarely take anything seriously. He prefers not to fight, not because he's a coward, but more because he just doesn't like the concept of killing anything with it's own free will. But when he gets angry, which is hard, since he's so calm usually, he really gets angry. He is also great at making deals, money-wise.
Bio/History: When Jake was a kid, he was always one of the types to live in a city. His parents were wealthy merchants, and it involved him moving a lot. He always liked fighting, and was generally agile, so he learned how to wield 2 swords, which suited his fighting style. He was tutored in this aspect by a professional mercenary that served as the bodygaurd for his family on his many trips.
Jake was also into the whole merchant business, and at age 18, decided to continue the business on his own, rather than with his parents.
He ended up selling weapons, and was at the military outpost trying to sell some weapons there for a price higher than what they were worth.
Anything to add?: *Tastes soup* Needs more salt.
Scorpion uses "Get over here !" (unobvious Mortal Kombat reference.)
**NOTE: REPLACE ALL JAKES YOU SEE WITH JOHNS! I'm too lazy to change them. >.>**
Don't take this as there is nothing that could cause sadness. I just mean it's pointless to dwell on it. I mean, depression is so boring.
((Alright, one sec.))
((EDIT: Alright, I edited the end of the bio to explain how my character got there. Also, does he *need* military experience? The closest to experience would be private tutoring he got in how to fight and whatnot with dual swords, does that count?
Also, I changed his name from Jake to John, because I noticed VmPee's character was already named Jake.))
Don't take this as there is nothing that could cause sadness. I just mean it's pointless to dwell on it. I mean, depression is so boring.
Don't take this as there is nothing that could cause sadness. I just mean it's pointless to dwell on it. I mean, depression is so boring.
Don't take this as there is nothing that could cause sadness. I just mean it's pointless to dwell on it. I mean, depression is so boring.
It was necessary.))
Don't take this as there is nothing that could cause sadness. I just mean it's pointless to dwell on it. I mean, depression is so boring.
Name:tirtow grenspin
Age:24
Race:Necrothemians
Appearance:tirtow is a Necrothemians, he has mutated into a small cat like creature (i LOVE CATS :smile.gif: oh and thats all, i am pretty sure you all know what a cat looks like)
Equipment:tirtow weapoon is spikes that are hidden in his back. his cloths are fur.. duh :smile.gif:
Personality:submisive
Bio/History:tirtow was a cat lover, he lived in a small house and had 3 cats. When Ahtren invaded the town his house was burnt down with his cats inside. But this was not becuase of Ahtren's army... It was thugs and Theives running around grabbing all the loot they can. Teartoz frist defended his home from the thugs, but sure enough they hit hem with a peace of wood and ran in there only to knock down a torch setting alight his house. Teartoz was angry, that all his worldly objects and his beloved cats were murdered and destroyed, but then came along Ahtren asking Teartoz if he wanted revenge. Sadly enough he said yes...
When the war ended teartoz was stuck in the neather. He wanted to see one last cat so baddly that the evil coming from the necro'tyr started to transform teartoz into a ecazt (:smile.gif:). All memory was wiped clean from his mind and all he knew is that he wanted to kill... EVERY LAST HUMAN AND LIVING CREATURE IN MINECRAFTIA.
Anything to add?
I know mutating into a cat may not sound like a mutation or something but it what i decided to use becuase it is diffrent and a little weird :smile.gif:.
Get over here (or COME AT ME BRO )
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Chears
talsment
))