((Ehmmm... got a bit of a problem with your character Zharii, allow me to elaborate.
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Name: Cole Corweld
Age: 14
Bit young to be a serial killer, and what happened to skills? Why do I get the feeling you just copied this from somewhere and added a tiny bit to tie your character into the vault story.
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Bio: When Cole was born with her forty-eight other siblings, her mother noticed something about Cole. Cole was a runt. While her brothers and sisters were as long as their mother's forearm, Cole was barely the length of her hand. Cole's mother left her at the edge of the forest where she had made her home, telling herself that Cole would not be worth it.
From then on, the little Skethyn would never back down. She promised to show her good-for-nothing family what it really meant to survive. Cole ran as far as she could away from her mother. Finally, after a week, she came to the home of a simple farmer and his wife.
For years, the human couple had prayed for a child of their own, but the gods seemed to ignore their pleas. It was one day that Cole happened upon their house. Though it had been but a week since she was born, Cole had already grown to the size of a three-year-old human child. The farmer and his wife, so overcome with shock, took in the small Skethyn child. For a year, Cole lived with the kind farmer.
By the time Cole was twelve, she had traveled around a fair amount of the island. She had done her part to help some of the various residents there. How? She murdered the others. Cole wasn't picky; whoever paid the highest didn't die.
When the meteor struck, Cole was forced into the vault against her will. Since her days on the surface, Cole has harmed no one. She hasn't needed to; the Watchers do that for her.
It's not like we've only been in the vault for a few months, most of our people, at least should've been born in the vault, and unless she did 99% of the stuff in her bio while she was a preteen (including murdering lots of people :tongue.gif:), ehhhh...
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Equipment: A large, metal-plated bow made of a dark, black ore and steel, enough arrows to fell half of an army and a dagger, made from a simple sheet of granite and wood. She wears a loose, dark blue shirt, a tight leather vest and simple leggings made of linen that are cut short to stop at her higher knee.
I do believe we're in Post-Modern Day, why would anybody own a bow?
That's all my nitpicking out of the way. That is a lie, but I don't want to come off like a jerk. :tongue.gif:))
[Hmmm, an interesting character. No real problems with him as far as rules, but it seems to lack some detail, such as what he wears and his height and hair color. Mainly just a description of him. Add that and you will be accepted.]
((Alright,it looks like this RP is gaining some popularity.))
((All new members,interact normally and just RP.))
((There is only ONE watcher.))
The whir of the monitors went on into what felt like eternity. Jonah looked at the monitors and saw that Scott had walked into Jonah's room. "Hello Scott,just come into my room." I got up off my chair and opened the hatch that was under my bed. He looked at Scott and said,"Come in."
((Yeah, Sidewanderer. You're kinda Right. Why do I have a bow? And I didn't really elaborate on her age. I'm sorry for that confusion. I didn't mean HUMAN years. I changed it to human years, though. You know how some tortoises can live up to 200 years? Same basic Idea. Though my character WAS found when she was seven days old, she is nearing 27 in human time. That gives her enough time. And the bow? I thought a handgun would be a tad overpowered, but I can change to a more modern weapon. I would like to keep it ranged, if that is all right, but for now, I'll just have her use her claws and tail. And no, this character is completely original... Unless there's something I'm unaware of. I kind of rushed this, as I was late for something but also because the original was INSANELY long. I shortened it quickly and may have removed some key bits. I swear that if I did copy something, I'm unaware of it. Anyway, tell me what you think and I'll edit the app. EDIT: I fixed it... I think. Tell me if it's better. I'm sort of a perfectionist, so it's inevitably going to bother me.))
Nathan cursed under his breath as the vaultie yelled up at him. He could see the man....was not a man at all.... Perhaps he's from the slums... Maybe he can help me.... He quickly kicked out the grate and jumped down to greet the.... person. "Yes there is. Now is there something you wanted, or would you kindly come with me?
(( I talked to pie and he said I could have the AK-47 with 300 bullets.))
((If you slay a person with five bullets form the AK... 300/5= 60. No. you will not be opening fire on sixty people with that AK, Because I know you will slay much more. Killing at least eight people is enough. THat, added with the fact that you would probably slay 8-18 People with the pistol if it has twenty bullets, no. Also, I find drunken boxing to be something done at illegal strip clubs and such. I owuld allow it, but Pie's decision overrules mine.))
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"For to win one hundred victories in one hundred battles is not the acme of skill. To subdue the enemy without fighting is the acme of skill."
-Sun Tzu
Lance slowly shuffled his way towards his room, leaving the cafeteria. Once again, like every days after a meal, Lance would go back to the confines of his room and continue to work on little gadgets he had created in his spare time.
((I don't have any idea on what's going on. This thread is being way to cluttered with OOC comments, without much contributions to the RP.))
((We're all in a room, I think, and we want to break out.))
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"For to win one hundred victories in one hundred battles is not the acme of skill. To subdue the enemy without fighting is the acme of skill."
-Sun Tzu
((We are all living in a Fallout-style vault. Pie is leading some sort of resistance in his room & we're all going over there. More or less, we're going to meet and plan a breakout (I'm assuming), where we will then adventure in the Fallout-esque world. Try to find a way to notice us either now or during the uprising. Fallout.))
((We haven't yet. I'm going there, I think, with DorisDwarf, and only Pie and one other person are actually there. But give it a page or so and we'll all be present & accounted for.))
((Mk. I guess I should somehow make it there too, then. By the way, it's not so much like Fallout. Yes, it is like a Fallout setting, but the natural disasters and catastrophes are still occurring in the outside world.))
((Eh, I suppose so. Still, aside from disasters still happening (which is a good idea, plenty of Role-play material there) its just another Post-Apocalyptic (Mid-Apocalyptic? Apocalyptic?) setting, and the best I know of that genre is Fallout.))
((@: RainbowPoptartCat No. Read the title. Specifically the 2nd half of the title.))
((Yeah, I would agree with that. When I said not so much Fallout, what I was implying was that how Fallout is post-apocalyptic. This RP would be more like of a "mid-apocalyptic" setting, since we are technically still within apocalyptic times.))
((Anyways...))
As Lance was walking over to his door, he heard some noises from a different room. Curiously, the noises came from what seemed to be more than one person. "Hm. I wonder what's going on in there," Lance mumbled to himself, pausing.
Bit young to be a serial killer, and what happened to skills? Why do I get the feeling you just copied this from somewhere and added a tiny bit to tie your character into the vault story.
It's not like we've only been in the vault for a few months, most of our people, at least should've been born in the vault, and unless she did 99% of the stuff in her bio while she was a preteen (including murdering lots of people :tongue.gif:), ehhhh...
I do believe we're in Post-Modern Day, why would anybody own a bow?
That's all my nitpicking out of the way.That is a lie, but I don't want to come off like a jerk. :tongue.gif:))((All new members,interact normally and just RP.))
((There is only ONE watcher.))
The whir of the monitors went on into what felt like eternity. Jonah looked at the monitors and saw that Scott had walked into Jonah's room. "Hello Scott,just come into my room." I got up off my chair and opened the hatch that was under my bed. He looked at Scott and said,"Come in."
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Nathan cursed under his breath as the vaultie yelled up at him. He could see the man....was not a man at all.... Perhaps he's from the slums... Maybe he can help me.... He quickly kicked out the grate and jumped down to greet the.... person. "Yes there is. Now is there something you wanted, or would you kindly come with me?
((If you slay a person with five bullets form the AK... 300/5= 60. No. you will not be opening fire on sixty people with that AK, Because I know you will slay much more. Killing at least eight people is enough. THat, added with the fact that you would probably slay 8-18 People with the pistol if it has twenty bullets, no. Also, I find drunken boxing to be something done at illegal strip clubs and such. I owuld allow it, but Pie's decision overrules mine.))
-Sun Tzu
((I don't have any idea on what's going on. This thread is being way to cluttered with OOC comments, without much contributions to the RP.))
-Sun Tzu
((@: RainbowPoptartCat No. Read the title. Specifically the 2nd half of the title.))
I thought so because it was already started and the thread title hasn't been updating, and crap like that.
((Anyways...))
As Lance was walking over to his door, he heard some noises from a different room. Curiously, the noises came from what seemed to be more than one person. "Hm. I wonder what's going on in there," Lance mumbled to himself, pausing.