LONG AGO, THE FOUR NATIONS LIVED TOGETHER IN HARMONY,
BUT EVERYTHING CHANGED WHEN THE FIRE NATION ATTACKED.
IT'S BEEN 50 YEARS SINCE THE AVATAR DISAPPEARED AND THE WAR BEGUN.
THE FIRE NATION IS STARTING TO WIN THE BATTLE.
BUT THEY WON'T WIN, WE WON'T LET THEM
AVATAR: THE YEARS WITHOUT AANG
BOOK 1
Welcome to the Avatar RP! This is the second time I've done an Avatar RP, and I have to say that the first one went incredibly well, so I have high hopes for this one.
This RP is set in the time that Aang was frozen inside the iceberg, so there will be no Avatar as we role play. But there will be benders of course.
Although in this RP we won't be able to kill the Fire Lord (which in this time is Ozai's father) because in the TV show Aang defeats him, we will be able to fight the fire nation. Maybe to defend Ba Sing Se or another city. We can also face some enemies not mentioned in the series. We can make it up as we go along.
In this RP you can be anything from the avatar universe. There are only three rules about who you can be, it cannot be OP, it has to be able to talk, and it can't appear on any of the two TV shows. Now that I've said all this, please read the rules to be able to play!
Rules:
- No OP characters or anything similar like meta-gaming.
- Keep it PG-13.
- In the app, there is NO "other" section, add it to the bottom to show me you read the rules.
- If you're not a bender, you might have three simple items. Nothing OP.
- You cannot start off with a pet, you have to acquire it as you go along.
- If you're not a bender you can be a ninja, a king, a normal person, etc.
- These are all the rules I could think of, I might add more in the future if needed.
App:
- Name:
- Age:
- Gender:
- Appearance:
- Bender:
- If you're not a bender, what are you?:
- Where do you live?:
- Items (only non-benders):
- Likes/dislikes:
People who have already joined:
SamFliker:
- Name: Sam Fliker
- Age: 21
- Gender: Male
- Appearance: Kinda tall guy with straight dark hair. He's a bit big, but not fat.
- Bender: Water.
- If you're not a bender, what are you?: ---
- Where do you live?: Southern Ice Tribe.
- Items (only non-benders):
- Likes/dislikes: He likes to help and is very competitive. He hates it when people treat poorly other living creatures, from small insects to flying bisons.
Lauryman:
- Name:
Arion Hunter
- Age:
16
- Gender:
Male
- Appearance:
Black hair, slightly lighter than most generic black hair. Has greenish eyes. Attractive face, considered "cute" or "handsome", but does not have a girlfriend. He is about 5'11", with a lean, toned body. His hair is short and slightly messy. He walks around with a smile on his face, being optimistic about everything.
- Bender:
Water, and everything related to it (such as ice and blood).
- If you're not a bender, what are you?:
N/A
- Where do you live?:
Northern Water Tribe.
- Items (only non-benders):
N/A
- Likes/dislikes:
He likes friends and enjoys conversations. He dislikes mean people, and always tries helping others. He also very much indeed likes women, but does not know how to approach one in a way that doesn't seem like he just wants to be friends.
He dislikes bullies, anyone who hurts his friends. He also does not like harming anyone more than necessary, including his enemies. He does not mind other people fighting women, as they can be stronger than men, but due to the fact he likes women, he cannot bring himself to harm them.
Welcome, to the most EPIC thread on the forums. GENERATION 37: The first time you see this, copy it into your signature on any forum and add 1 to the generation. This is a Social experiment.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
12/20/2010
Posts:
103
Minecraft:
IAmKnight
Member Details
Yeah, I'll join. The first thread I ever made was an avatar one, that one didn't even start XD.
- Name:
Arion Hunter
- Age:
16
- Gender:
Male
- Appearance:
Black hair, slightly lighter than most generic black hair. Has greenish eyes. Attractive face, considered "cute" or "handsome", but does not have a girlfriend. He is about 5'11", with a lean, toned body. His hair is short and slightly messy. He walks around with a smile on his face, being optimistic about everything.
- Bender:
Water, and everything related to it (such as ice and blood).
- If you're not a bender, what are you?:
N/A
- Where do you live?:
Northern Water Tribe.
- Items (only non-benders):
N/A
- Likes/dislikes:
He likes friends and enjoys conversations. He dislikes mean people, and always tries helping others. He also very much indeed likes women, but does not know how to approach one in a way that doesn't seem like he just wants to be friends.
He dislikes bullies, anyone who hurts his friends. He also does not like harming anyone more than necessary, including his enemies. He does not mind other people fighting women, as they can be stronger than men, but due to the fact he likes women, he cannot bring himself to harm them.
Yeah, I'll join. The first thread I ever made was an avatar one, that one didn't even start XD.
- Name:
Arion Hunter
- Age:
16
- Gender:
Male
- Appearance:
Black hair, slightly lighter than most generic black hair. Has greenish eyes. Attractive face, considered "cute" or "handsome", but does not have a girlfriend. He is about 5'11", with a lean, toned body. His hair is short and slightly messy. He walks around with a smile on his face, being optimistic about everything.
- Bender:
Water, and everything related to it (such as ice and blood).
- If you're not a bender, what are you?:
N/A
- Where do you live?:
Northern Water Tribe.
- Items (only non-benders):
N/A
- Likes/dislikes:
He likes friends and enjoys conversations. He dislikes mean people, and always tries helping others. He also very much indeed likes women, but does not know how to approach one in a way that doesn't seem like he just wants to be friends.
He dislikes bullies, anyone who hurts his friends. He also does not like harming anyone more than necessary, including his enemies. He does not mind other people fighting women, as they can be stronger than men, but due to the fact he likes women, he cannot bring himself to harm them.
- Other:
Nope.
Accepted! We'll wait for one more person before we start!
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Welcome, to the most EPIC thread on the forums. GENERATION 37: The first time you see this, copy it into your signature on any forum and add 1 to the generation. This is a Social experiment.
- Appearance: dark brown hair,light brown eyes,dark green clothing,his right arm is completely covered with dark green armor,short
- Bender: earth
- If you're not a bender, what are you?:
- Where do you live?: Outside Ba Sing Se
- Items (only non-benders):
- Likes/dislikes: doesn't like being called about his height and doesn't like being called Daniel only likes being called Dan and like's pets and very interested in air nomads
-Other: lives in a small cottage near a village with his mother
- Appearance: dark brown hair,light brown eyes,dark green clothing,his right arm is completely covered with dark green armor,short
- Bender: earth
- If you're not a bender, what are you?:
- Where do you live?: Outside Ba Sing Se
- Items (only non-benders):
- Likes/dislikes: doesn't like being called about his height and doesn't like being called Daniel only likes being called Dan and like's pets and very interested in air nomads
-Other: lives in a small cottage near a village with his mother
Accepted! Begin whenever you want.
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Welcome, to the most EPIC thread on the forums. GENERATION 37: The first time you see this, copy it into your signature on any forum and add 1 to the generation. This is a Social experiment.
- Appearance: Dirty blonde hair, gray eyes, average height.
- Bender: Earth
- If you're not a bender, what are you?:
- Where do you live?: Ba Sing Se streets.
- Items (only non-benders):
- Likes/dislikes: Destro is a highly optimistic, positive, and talented guy. His family was killed by the Fire Nation when he was young and through a couple of mishaps and other things he ended up in Ba Sing Se, he live's on the street performing using his talented but unskilled bending to make a living. Use's a mask of happiness to hide his raging hatred of the fire nation, fire benders, and a deep grief at seeing his own parents die.
- Appearance: Dirty blonde hair, gray eyes, average height.
- Bender: Earth
- If you're not a bender, what are you?:
- Where do you live?: Ba Sing Se streets.
- Items (only non-benders):
- Likes/dislikes: Destro is a highly optimistic, positive, and talented guy. His family was killed by the Fire Nation when he was young and through a couple of mishaps and other things he ended up in Ba Sing Se, he live's on the street performing using his talented but unskilled bending to make a living. Use's a mask of happiness to hide his raging hatred of the fire nation, fire benders, and a deep grief at seeing his own parents die.
- Other: He's that one annoyingly optimistic guy.
Accepted! Start roleplaying whenever you want!
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Welcome, to the most EPIC thread on the forums. GENERATION 37: The first time you see this, copy it into your signature on any forum and add 1 to the generation. This is a Social experiment.
so the fire nation attacks the village near my house so I have over heard the captain say to "finish the others" and I saw my mother she said "go"and I had to run until I got to the city and I saw a blonde hair kid running from what seems to be two fire nation guards so I help him so I did and I ask to him "hey you okay?"
"Yep! I'm peachy! Ya know', two fire nation soldier's chasing me and i'm just peachy!" Destro said sarcastically, the fire nation guards were catching up quickly and Destro took a deep breath. He hadn't fought in so long, but he could do this.
He clenched his teeth together, a glint of determination in his eyes. He span around and stood in a wide stance, arms bent and out on either side of his body, ready to bend. He jumped forward and landed on the ground, hard, he sent a minor quake through the ground aiming to knock down the fire nation goons, they saw it coming and jumped forward, sending burst's of flame from there hands, encircling Destro. He pushed up with his hand's a created a circle of pure earth before pushing it out, knocking back the firebenders.
"Let's go!" Destro said, and started running out of the town. The whole time a stupid grin plastered over his face.
App:
- Name: Kazira Arzen
- Age: 17
- Gender: F
- Appearance: She's a bit shorter than he average girl, with shoulder-length brown hair and blue eyes. The outfit she wears is relatively normal, none of it particularly screams "fire nation" at first glance.
- Bender: Fire
- Where do you live?: Kazira is a travelling nomad, currently camping near Ba Sing Se.
- Likes/dislikes: Kazira was born into a rather sub-par family - owners of a modest tea-house in the outskirts of the fire nation. Neither of her parents were benderse, so Kazira's skills went mostly untapped (besides the ability to create a small flame strong enough to boil water). Kazira then set out to find someone to teach her real firebending, and now has found herself in the outskirts of Ba Sing Se. Kazira enjoys drinking tea and burning small insects. She believes in most firebender propaganda, fully supporting the war and the Fire Nation's cause; Kazira believes those who bend water or earth to be inferior to her own kind, and hates them.
seeing the blonde hair kid bend was mind blowing for Dan thinking he was only a street rat but no apparently not "hey what's your name and why were those fire nation guards chasing?" Dan asked
"Because the fire nation is a bunch of blood hungry b*stards!" Destro said loudly, running as fast as he could out of the town, "I'm Destro, now hurry up! These fire nation scum are going to burn this village to the ground!" Remembering his manners Destro yelled back "Who are you!?"
((For the sake of the RP and logic let's say were in a village near the outskirts of the earth nation, this is just the beginning of the invasion they have yet attack Ba Sing Se or get near it,))
"No! i'm not a bender! I just throw a boomerang at those two fire nation guys!" Destro said, sarcasm filling his voice, he spread his hands open wide and held his arms at the side of his body and slowly moved them up, the earth rumbling beneath him and raising, until they were level with his shoulders. He pulled back his arms and pushed out, the earth rocketing him and Dan forward.
He clenched his fists and earth clutched onto their feet, halfway to their ankles. "This should be fun" Durnus said with a smirk as they ripped through the town.
"Let's do this woop woop" Dan while they were breaking.. I mean cruising through the town he was blocking the back making more carnage... I mean 'fixing' the back to block the fire nation guards that are chasing us
((I dunno.... Maybe one day they will. Hopefully.))
They got out, it was amazing to Destro, they had broken free. Sure the town looked like it had a small war fought it in it, with the streets looking like they had been uprooted and every building a blaze.
They weren't alone though. The Fire Nation advanced, and Destro and Dan were surrounded by about 100 escapees of the village. Some with children.
There was no way in hell they could run away, but Destro muttered to himself, there was no way in hell he would leave these people. "Dan, were fighting." He turned to the village folk and yelled out "Benders! Come forth! Save your people! Or hid behind them and show that you deserve to die as cowards!"
About 10 Earth benders pushed through the crowd and joined them, Destro and the earth benders quickly raised a 7 foot tall plateau circling the villages, protecting them from harm and giving a perch from where they could rain earthy death on their enemies.
((Theres about 30 Fire Nation guards. Feel free to get captured or defeated, you don't always have to win.))
all of the benders form a wall like stance "earth benders do the most devastating earth bend you can. push your limits fight the fire with earth!!!" he shouted "fire is nothing its like the weakest bend ever am I right" he whispered to Destro "NOW WE FIGHT ARE YOU READY!!!!"
the benders said"AYE!!!!" all of the benders perform all kinds of stances some synced some random as all of us finish the stances we wait.
the fire nation guards laughed. as the earth quakes some strong but a few weak but as the quakes finish a huge earth hale comes in but there is no big ones but there are golems,arms,boulders all forming from the earth the fire nation guards run away some fell and got encased in earth but you think they would go back to they're bases. but no they came back with a large weapon you can see it over the mountain 3 large blimps of metal fly over the mountain and 1 large looking cannon.... it fire's after a few shots the atmosphere changes I make an opening for the village it will lead out but we benders know were gonna get captured a few benders escaped but me,Destro and 6 others hold them back for as long as we can a few more shots were captured I say to Destro" when we get captured we HAVE to escape immediately 3 days no more than that we have to warn the others the friendly fire if there are and earth,water, and even air if there are some still around see you in jail I guess" the fire nation busts through the defense they knock us out
now we me and Destro wake up in a cell 4 got killed 2 wounded in jail 3 days to escape no more than that good luck to us
((sorry if there is wrong spelling or grammar i'm only 11))
Welcome to the Avatar RP! This is the second time I've done an Avatar RP, and I have to say that the first one went incredibly well, so I have high hopes for this one.
This RP is set in the time that Aang was frozen inside the iceberg, so there will be no Avatar as we role play. But there will be benders of course.
Although in this RP we won't be able to kill the Fire Lord (which in this time is Ozai's father) because in the TV show Aang defeats him, we will be able to fight the fire nation. Maybe to defend Ba Sing Se or another city. We can also face some enemies not mentioned in the series. We can make it up as we go along.
In this RP you can be anything from the avatar universe. There are only three rules about who you can be, it cannot be OP, it has to be able to talk, and it can't appear on any of the two TV shows. Now that I've said all this, please read the rules to be able to play!
Rules:
- No OP characters or anything similar like meta-gaming.
- Keep it PG-13.
- In the app, there is NO "other" section, add it to the bottom to show me you read the rules.
- If you're not a bender, you might have three simple items. Nothing OP.
- You cannot start off with a pet, you have to acquire it as you go along.
- If you're not a bender you can be a ninja, a king, a normal person, etc.
- These are all the rules I could think of, I might add more in the future if needed.
App:
- Name:
- Age:
- Gender:
- Appearance:
- Bender:
- If you're not a bender, what are you?:
- Where do you live?:
- Items (only non-benders):
- Likes/dislikes:
People who have already joined:
- Name: Sam Fliker
- Age: 21
- Gender: Male
- Appearance: Kinda tall guy with straight dark hair. He's a bit big, but not fat.
- Bender: Water.
- If you're not a bender, what are you?: ---
- Where do you live?: Southern Ice Tribe.
- Items (only non-benders):
- Likes/dislikes: He likes to help and is very competitive. He hates it when people treat poorly other living creatures, from small insects to flying bisons.
Lauryman:
- Name:
Arion Hunter
- Age:
16
- Gender:
Male
- Appearance:
Black hair, slightly lighter than most generic black hair. Has greenish eyes. Attractive face, considered "cute" or "handsome", but does not have a girlfriend. He is about 5'11", with a lean, toned body. His hair is short and slightly messy. He walks around with a smile on his face, being optimistic about everything.
- Bender:
Water, and everything related to it (such as ice and blood).
- If you're not a bender, what are you?:
N/A
- Where do you live?:
Northern Water Tribe.
- Items (only non-benders):
N/A
- Likes/dislikes:
He likes friends and enjoys conversations. He dislikes mean people, and always tries helping others. He also very much indeed likes women, but does not know how to approach one in a way that doesn't seem like he just wants to be friends.
He dislikes bullies, anyone who hurts his friends. He also does not like harming anyone more than necessary, including his enemies. He does not mind other people fighting women, as they can be stronger than men, but due to the fact he likes women, he cannot bring himself to harm them.
- Other:
Nope.
GENERATION 37: The first time you see this, copy it into your signature on any forum and add 1 to the generation. This is a Social experiment.
Yeah, I'll join. The first thread I ever made was an avatar one, that one didn't even start XD.
- Name:
Arion Hunter
- Age:
16
- Gender:
Male
- Appearance:
Black hair, slightly lighter than most generic black hair. Has greenish eyes. Attractive face, considered "cute" or "handsome", but does not have a girlfriend. He is about 5'11", with a lean, toned body. His hair is short and slightly messy. He walks around with a smile on his face, being optimistic about everything.
- Bender:
Water, and everything related to it (such as ice and blood).
- If you're not a bender, what are you?:
N/A
- Where do you live?:
Northern Water Tribe.
- Items (only non-benders):
N/A
- Likes/dislikes:
He likes friends and enjoys conversations. He dislikes mean people, and always tries helping others. He also very much indeed likes women, but does not know how to approach one in a way that doesn't seem like he just wants to be friends.
He dislikes bullies, anyone who hurts his friends. He also does not like harming anyone more than necessary, including his enemies. He does not mind other people fighting women, as they can be stronger than men, but due to the fact he likes women, he cannot bring himself to harm them.
- Other:
Nope.
Accepted! We'll wait for one more person before we start!
GENERATION 37: The first time you see this, copy it into your signature on any forum and add 1 to the generation. This is a Social experiment.
App:
- Name: Daniel Erisol
- Age: 15
- Gender: Male
- Appearance: dark brown hair,light brown eyes,dark green clothing,his right arm is completely covered with dark green armor,short
- Bender: earth
- If you're not a bender, what are you?:
- Where do you live?: Outside Ba Sing Se
- Items (only non-benders):
- Likes/dislikes: doesn't like being called about his height and doesn't like being called Daniel only likes being called Dan and like's pets and very interested in air nomads
-Other: lives in a small cottage near a village with his mother
Accepted! Begin whenever you want.
GENERATION 37: The first time you see this, copy it into your signature on any forum and add 1 to the generation. This is a Social experiment.
- Name: Destro Sladon
- Age: 17
- Gender: Male
- Appearance: Dirty blonde hair, gray eyes, average height.
- Bender: Earth
- If you're not a bender, what are you?:
- Where do you live?: Ba Sing Se streets.
- Items (only non-benders):
- Likes/dislikes: Destro is a highly optimistic, positive, and talented guy. His family was killed by the Fire Nation when he was young and through a couple of mishaps and other things he ended up in Ba Sing Se, he live's on the street performing using his talented but unskilled bending to make a living. Use's a mask of happiness to hide his raging hatred of the fire nation, fire benders, and a deep grief at seeing his own parents die.
- Other: He's that one annoyingly optimistic guy.
Woop. Unimportant stuff here.
Accepted! Start roleplaying whenever you want!
GENERATION 37: The first time you see this, copy it into your signature on any forum and add 1 to the generation. This is a Social experiment.
so the fire nation attacks the village near my house so I have over heard the captain say to "finish the others" and I saw my mother she said "go"and I had to run until I got to the city and I saw a blonde hair kid running from what seems to be two fire nation guards so I help him so I did and I ask to him "hey you okay?"
--Ignore this, I accidentally double posted--
Woop. Unimportant stuff here.
"Yep! I'm peachy! Ya know', two fire nation soldier's chasing me and i'm just peachy!" Destro said sarcastically, the fire nation guards were catching up quickly and Destro took a deep breath. He hadn't fought in so long, but he could do this.
He clenched his teeth together, a glint of determination in his eyes. He span around and stood in a wide stance, arms bent and out on either side of his body, ready to bend. He jumped forward and landed on the ground, hard, he sent a minor quake through the ground aiming to knock down the fire nation goons, they saw it coming and jumped forward, sending burst's of flame from there hands, encircling Destro. He pushed up with his hand's a created a circle of pure earth before pushing it out, knocking back the firebenders.
"Let's go!" Destro said, and started running out of the town. The whole time a stupid grin plastered over his face.
Woop. Unimportant stuff here.
App:
- Name: Kazira Arzen
- Age: 17
- Gender: F
- Appearance: She's a bit shorter than he average girl, with shoulder-length brown hair and blue eyes. The outfit she wears is relatively normal, none of it particularly screams "fire nation" at first glance.
- Bender: Fire
- Where do you live?: Kazira is a travelling nomad, currently camping near Ba Sing Se.
- Likes/dislikes: Kazira was born into a rather sub-par family - owners of a modest tea-house in the outskirts of the fire nation. Neither of her parents were benderse, so Kazira's skills went mostly untapped (besides the ability to create a small flame strong enough to boil water). Kazira then set out to find someone to teach her real firebending, and now has found herself in the outskirts of Ba Sing Se. Kazira enjoys drinking tea and burning small insects. She believes in most firebender propaganda, fully supporting the war and the Fire Nation's cause; Kazira believes those who bend water or earth to be inferior to her own kind, and hates them.
Other: Fire nation for life mate.
seeing the blonde hair kid bend was mind blowing for Dan thinking he was only a street rat but no apparently not "hey what's your name and why were those fire nation guards chasing?" Dan asked
"Because the fire nation is a bunch of blood hungry b*stards!" Destro said loudly, running as fast as he could out of the town, "I'm Destro, now hurry up! These fire nation scum are going to burn this village to the ground!" Remembering his manners Destro yelled back "Who are you!?"
((For the sake of the RP and logic let's say were in a village near the outskirts of the earth nation, this is just the beginning of the invasion they have yet attack Ba Sing Se or get near it,))
Woop. Unimportant stuff here.
"Oh my name is Dan by the way.can't we just bend out of here. you are a bender.....right?"Dan asked as they run away run away from the village
((Sure let's go with that))
"No! i'm not a bender! I just throw a boomerang at those two fire nation guys!" Destro said, sarcasm filling his voice, he spread his hands open wide and held his arms at the side of his body and slowly moved them up, the earth rumbling beneath him and raising, until they were level with his shoulders. He pulled back his arms and pushed out, the earth rocketing him and Dan forward.
He clenched his fists and earth clutched onto their feet, halfway to their ankles. "This should be fun" Durnus said with a smirk as they ripped through the town.
Woop. Unimportant stuff here.
"Let's do this woop woop" Dan while they were breaking.. I mean cruising through the town he was blocking the back making more carnage... I mean 'fixing' the back to block the fire nation guards that are chasing us
((why are the others not joining in? others why you no join????))
((I dunno.... Maybe one day they will. Hopefully.))
They got out, it was amazing to Destro, they had broken free. Sure the town looked like it had a small war fought it in it, with the streets looking like they had been uprooted and every building a blaze.
They weren't alone though. The Fire Nation advanced, and Destro and Dan were surrounded by about 100 escapees of the village. Some with children.
There was no way in hell they could run away, but Destro muttered to himself, there was no way in hell he would leave these people. "Dan, were fighting." He turned to the village folk and yelled out "Benders! Come forth! Save your people! Or hid behind them and show that you deserve to die as cowards!"
About 10 Earth benders pushed through the crowd and joined them, Destro and the earth benders quickly raised a 7 foot tall plateau circling the villages, protecting them from harm and giving a perch from where they could rain earthy death on their enemies.
((Theres about 30 Fire Nation guards. Feel free to get captured or defeated, you don't always have to win.))
Woop. Unimportant stuff here.
all of the benders form a wall like stance "earth benders do the most devastating earth bend you can. push your limits fight the fire with earth!!!" he shouted "fire is nothing its like the weakest bend ever am I right" he whispered to Destro "NOW WE FIGHT ARE YOU READY!!!!"
the benders said"AYE!!!!" all of the benders perform all kinds of stances some synced some random as all of us finish the stances we wait.
the fire nation guards laughed. as the earth quakes some strong but a few weak but as the quakes finish a huge earth hale comes in but there is no big ones but there are golems,arms,boulders all forming from the earth the fire nation guards run away some fell and got encased in earth but you think they would go back to they're bases. but no they came back with a large weapon you can see it over the mountain 3 large blimps of metal fly over the mountain and 1 large looking cannon.... it fire's after a few shots the atmosphere changes I make an opening for the village it will lead out but we benders know were gonna get captured a few benders escaped but me,Destro and 6 others hold them back for as long as we can a few more shots were captured I say to Destro" when we get captured we HAVE to escape immediately 3 days no more than that we have to warn the others the friendly fire if there are and earth,water, and even air if there are some still around see you in jail I guess" the fire nation busts through the defense they knock us out
now we me and Destro wake up in a cell 4 got killed 2 wounded in jail 3 days to escape no more than that good luck to us
((sorry if there is wrong spelling or grammar i'm only 11))
((I'm still waiting for the OP to accept/decline my app.))