I'm digging that you put some effort into shading and that you blew it up to retain the pixel look. Although I must draw attention to the awkward placement of the blade as well as the lack of interest in making proper ground. Then there is the insistence on a red background that seems to clash with clouds that don't appear to fit the style. Place the horizon line just above the waist, use solid shapes for the clouds instead of the spray paint tool and try to go for some perspective with that sword for the extra cool factor. And wider shoulders could make the character more masculine, but the overall character design I can't really complain about other than the odd leggings joining with the shirt. Unless those are armored overalls, something I can dig if that is the intent.
I'm digging that you put some effort into shading and that you blew it up to retain the pixel look. Although I must draw attention to the awkward placement of the blade as well as the lack of interest in making proper ground. Then there is the insistence on a red background that seems to clash with clouds that don't appear to fit the style. Place the horizon line just above the waist, use solid shapes for the clouds instead of the spray paint tool and try to go for some perspective with that sword for the extra cool factor. And wider shoulders could make the character more masculine, but the overall character design I can't really complain about other than the odd leggings joining with the shirt. Unless those are armored overalls, something I can dig if that is the intent.
I see now.....i drew the background quickly before I uploaded it because it wouldnt look a bit bad if it where just a plain white background.Your constructive criticism has shown me that i should make this more better.
And what do you mean some perspective with the sword? like making it 3Dish?
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Unrelated to your rating. I always like female protagonists to be portrayed as somewhat tough about things, so +1 to that and keeping her away from the titilation stick.
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Retired StaffI see now.....i drew the background quickly before I uploaded it because it wouldnt look a bit bad if it where just a plain white background.Your constructive criticism has shown me that i should make this more better.
And what do you mean some perspective with the sword? like making it 3Dish?
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No, my artwork is nowhere near as good.
8/10 for RPC
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Retired StaffUnrelated to your rating. I always like female protagonists to be portrayed as somewhat tough about things, so +1 to that and keeping her away from the titilation stick.
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Curse PremiumOh did I mention how annoying and tiresome that loop is as well?
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I there was a better pic of it, i would have used that, believe me.
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8/10 for RPC
Nice artwork!